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Aqours - Yume Kataru yori Yume Utaou [Osu|Taiko]

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Nardoxyribonucleic
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2016年8月15日 at 23:22:38

Artist: Aqours
Title: Yume Kataru yori Yume Utaou
Source: Lovelive! Sunshine!!
Tags: ラブライブ!サンシャイン!! Ending TV Size school idol project Kawaiwkyik Rizia Takami Chika 高海千歌 Inami Anju 伊波杏樹 Sakurauchi Riko 桜内梨子 Aida Rikako 逢田梨香子 Matsuura Kanan 松浦果南 Suwa Nanaka 諏訪ななか Kurosawa Dia 黒澤ダイヤ Komiya Arisa 小宮有紗 Watanabe You 渡辺 曜 Saito Shuka 斉藤朱夏 Tsushima Yoshiko 津島善子 Kobayashi Aika 小林愛香 Kunikida Hanamaru 国木田花丸 Takatsuki Kanako 高槻かなこ Ohara Mari 小原鞠莉 Suzuki Aina 鈴木愛奈 Kurosawa Ruby 黒澤ルビィ Furihata Ai 降幡 愛
BPM: 159
Filesize: 11950kb
Play Time: 01:28
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.34 stars, 84 notes)
  2. Futsuu (2.16 stars, 226 notes)
  3. Hard (3.22 stars, 222 notes)
  4. Inner Oni (4.04 stars, 501 notes)
  5. Insane (4.6 stars, 347 notes)
  6. Kantan (1.48 stars, 127 notes)
  7. Muzukashii (2.62 stars, 321 notes)
  8. Normal (1.91 stars, 144 notes)
  9. Oni (3.28 stars, 401 notes)
Download: Aqours - Yume Kataru yori Yume Utaou
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#24 - Standard-Taiko mapset
BG, Video - 100%
- By Rizia
- By me

ユメ語るよりユメ歌おう 從訴說夢想到歌頌夢想

Opening By Rizia

Acknowledgement
Thanks Shad0w1and for the nice video.
Rizia
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4diff std
Topic Starter
Nardoxyribonucleic
Changed offset from 545 to 540 and added video.

Rizia wrote:

mark
4diff std
I'm looking forward to your diffs ;)
katacheh
Hi~ from my queue! 中文摸圖(*´∀`)~♥

k=kat d=don

Inner oni
00:06:389 (29,30,31,32,33,34) - dkk k d k

00:16:011 (80,81,82) - K _ D (加finisher在 80,82 ,刪掉 81) 如果接受的話 其他難度也改一下oAo...

00:17:898 (90,91) - 加個 finisher

00:20:917 (103) - k

00:22:049 (110,111,112) - K _ D (加Finisher在110,112 ,刪除 111)

00:22:804 (113,114,115,116,117) - d kkk d

00:23:747 (119,120,121,122,123,124,125,126,127) - k K _ K _ D 看得懂吧oAo...? 後面三個是大圓

括起來的請當作一起
┌00:30:634 (157) - delete
├00:30:728 (158) - 加fininsher
├00:32:143 (161) - delete
├00:32:238 (162) - 加fininsher
└00:32:804 (171) - K (大kat)

00:44:879 (240,241,242) - kdd

00:46:483 (250) - k

00:53:181 (300,301,302,303) - kkddk

┌01:02:426 (360) - k
└01:02:521 (361) - 刪除

01:05:256 (373,374,375) - kkd

01:07:426 (386) - 加d

Oni
00:16:389 (65) - k
00:22:426 (90) - k

00:44:407 (192) - 加個k (如果不想要5連就不要加)

00:46:766 (207,208,209) - k d k

括起來的請當作一起
┌01:02:426 (290) - k
└01:02:804 (292,293) - d k

01:04:124 (297) - 加k

Muzukashii
00:29:030 () - 加成 ddd

00:44:596 (158) - 移到 00:44:407 (157) -

00:46:389 (166) - 加個k
祝rank喔!!
Topic Starter
Nardoxyribonucleic

katacheh wrote:

Hi~ from my queue! 中文摸圖(*´∀`)~♥

k=kat d=don

Inner oni
00:06:389 (29,30,31,32,33,34) - dkk k d k I think the current pattern would follow the snares and pitch changes in a way better.

00:16:011 (80,81,82) - K _ D (加finisher在 80,82 ,刪掉 81) 如果接受的話 其他難度也改一下oAo... It's a good idea to consider, but no change for now since this session is rather calm compared to the previous one.

00:17:898 (90,91) - 加個 finisher

00:20:917 (103) - k Retained owing to the relatively low-pitched vocal.

00:22:049 (110,111,112) - K _ D (加Finisher在110,112 ,刪除 111) same as 00:16:011 (80,81,82) -

00:22:804 (113,114,115,116,117) - d kkk d Remain unchanged for consistency of snares.

00:23:747 (119,120,121,122,123,124,125,126,127) - k K _ K _ D 看得懂吧oAo...? 後面三個是大圓 This would be a bit undermapped for this level of difficulty...

括起來的請當作一起
┌00:30:634 (157) - delete
├00:30:728 (158) - 加fininsher
├00:32:143 (161) - delete
├00:32:238 (162) - 加fininsher
└00:32:804 (171) - K (大kat) First 4 suggestions: same as ^; 5th: D would fit the pitch decrease of vocal well.

00:44:879 (240,241,242) - kdd dkk could accompany the music more appropriately.

00:46:483 (250) - k ddk would be more natural imo.

00:53:181 (300,301,302,303) - kkddk fixed

┌01:02:426 (360) - k
└01:02:521 (361) - 刪除 Retained for a better impact at the end of the kiai.

01:05:256 (373,374,375) - kkd I think ddd would match the low-pitched vocal nicely.

01:07:426 (386) - 加d No change because of the slower song pace compared to the kiai.

Oni
00:16:389 (65) - k Retained to follow the relatively low-pitched vocal.
00:22:426 (90) - k same as ^

00:44:407 (192) - 加個k (如果不想要5連就不要加) fixed

00:46:766 (207,208,209) - k d k Remain unchanged to keep the pattern simple.

括起來的請當作一起
┌01:02:426 (290) - k
└01:02:804 (292,293) - d k The current pattern would reflect the pitch changes better.

01:04:124 (297) - 加k No change as there is no note in Inner Oni.

Muzukashii
00:29:030 () - 加成 ddd added a note at 00:29:030 -

00:44:596 (158) - 移到 00:44:407 (157) - fixed

00:46:389 (166) - 加個k Retained for a better spread with Oni.
祝rank喔!!
感謝mod~ :)
Binguo
[Easy]
00:53:370 (3) - 漏音效?
01:26:577 (1) - 结尾是不是应该放在红线上

[Normal]
CS3.5
00:24:313 (5) - 加个fin

[Hard]
00:39:785 (1) - 建议不折返 00:40:162 - 放个Circle
01:04:879 (3) - 去掉

[insane]
01:09:407 (1) - drum-Clap 01:09:596 (2,3) - 滑条前端drum-Fin
基本上说不出来什么 学习到了
GIDZ
Mod req from My Angel Rize

General
Audio and tag inconsistency in Taiko diffs corresponding to Std diffs~
Easy
  1. 00:25:445 - Add note? Rhythm not dense enough imo
  2. 01:03:936 (1) - http://puu.sh/qcUkN/bb57fc9a2c.jpg Flow better?
  3. 01:08:464 - Feels empty again. Follow the drum fill in? http://puu.sh/qcUql/d5f70d45fb.jpg
  4. 01:14:879 - Strong beat here not followed :<
  5. 01:20:351 (1) - Doesn't this break the 4 rhythm rule after spinner for Easy diff? o.o
  6. 01:28:087 - Spinner ends here when I hear at 25% speed o.o

Normal
  1. 00:11:483 (3) - I know it doesnt rly matter but wouldn't this look better more curved?
  2. 01:28:087 - Same

Hard
  1. Make CS smaller than 4 but greater than 3? Like 3.5-3.6 should suit this diff since Insane is CS 4?
  2. 00:16:200 (2,3,4) - The other overlaps look fine. I know u did this on purpose but wont it look better without overlaps here? :v
  3. 01:28:087 - Same

Insane
  1. 00:00:162 - Rhythm starts here, and its strong too. Add note?
  2. 00:57:143 (4) - Personally I would use notes to emphasize the 1/3 to make the map less boring :p But totally up to you
  3. 00:59:030 (4,1) - I think u can blanket better here
  4. 01:28:087 - Same

No more GEE pls :(
Rizia

Binguo wrote:

[Easy]
00:53:370 (3) - 漏音效? 我再加加全部DIFF的
01:26:577 (1) - 结尾是不是应该放在红线上

[Normal]
CS3.5
00:24:313 (5) - 加个fin

[Hard]
00:39:785 (1) - 建议不折返 00:40:162 - 放个Circle 在我看來 00:39:785 (1) - 和 00:40:351 (2,3,4) - 在map兩部份的人聲
01:04:879 (3) - 去掉

[insane]
01:09:407 (1) - drum-Clap 01:09:596 (2,3) - 滑条前端drum-Fin
基本上说不出来什么 学习到了

- G I D Z - wrote:

Mod req from My Angel Rize

General
Audio and tag inconsistency in Taiko diffs corresponding to Std diffs~
Easy
  1. 00:25:445 - Add note? Rhythm not dense enough imo
  2. 01:03:936 (1) - http://puu.sh/qcUkN/bb57fc9a2c.jpg Flow better?
  3. 01:08:464 - Feels empty again. Follow the drum fill in? http://puu.sh/qcUql/d5f70d45fb.jpg
  4. 01:14:879 - Strong beat here not followed :<
  5. 01:20:351 (1) - Doesn't this break the 4 rhythm rule after spinner for Easy diff? o.o yes, but only 1/2 i think it will be fine, also its 159bpm only
  6. 01:28:087 - Spinner ends here when I hear at 25% speed o.o

Normal
  1. 00:11:483 (3) - I know it doesnt rly matter but wouldn't this look better more curved? lazzy
  2. 01:28:087 - Same

Hard
  1. Make CS smaller than 4 but greater than 3? Like 3.5-3.6 should suit this diff since Insane is CS 4? spread
  2. 00:16:200 (2,3,4) - The other overlaps look fine. I know u did this on purpose but wont it look better without overlaps here? :v seem fine to me, also looks good
  3. 01:28:087 - Same

Insane
  1. 00:00:162 - Rhythm starts here, and its strong too. Add note? no plan to add xd
  2. 00:57:143 (4) - Personally I would use notes to emphasize the 1/3 to make the map less boring :p But totally up to you vocal on 1/4, so keep
  3. 00:59:030 (4,1) - I think u can blanket better here
  4. 01:28:087 - Same

No more GEE pls :(
thx for mod
http://puu.sh/qftd5/46b0720ac7.rar <- all diff on 1 rar
同埋幫幫手FIX一下tag
Topic Starter
Nardoxyribonucleic
Fixed and updated~
Prophecy
wa nardo's std set :3


10/10
Ayyri
Hello~

NM from Bow Queue

Keep in mind, these are my suggestions, don't change something I mentioned unless it seems good to you! :)

[Kantan]
  1. 00:59:407 - Move to 00:59:030 - this would follow the beginning of the held out vocal, rather than the second phrase at 00:59:407 -
  2. 01:03:181 - Change to d. Has the same basic pitch as 01:02:426 - and would emphasize the difference between the sounds at 01:03:181 - and 01:03:558 -
  3. 01:05:445 - Move to 01:05:256 - To follow the beginning of the next vocal phrase. (Unless you're following the background music at 01:05:445 - )
[Futsuu]
  1. 00:28:275 - Change to k. The vocal is a lower pitch than at 00:28:087 -
  2. 01:25:068 - Change to k. The guitar is a higher pitch here than at 01:24:879 -
[Muzukashii]
  1. 01:07:332 - Change to d. The vocal has a lower pitch here than at 01:07:521 -
[Oni]
  1. 00:49:502 - Move to 00:49:690 - this would follow the rising vocal better here, rather than at 00:49:502 - where it's not really impacted.
[Inner Oni]
  1. 00:22:426 - Change to k. Has the same pitch as 00:22:049 -
  2. 01:02:426 - Change to k. Has the same pitch as 01:02:615 -
Topic Starter
Nardoxyribonucleic

Ayyri wrote:

Hello~

NM from Bow Queue

Keep in mind, these are my suggestions, don't change something I mentioned unless it seems good to you! :)

[Kantan]
  1. 00:59:407 - Move to 00:59:030 - this would follow the beginning of the held out vocal, rather than the second phrase at 00:59:407 - changed in an alternative way.
  2. 01:03:181 - Change to d. Has the same basic pitch as 01:02:426 - and would emphasize the difference between the sounds at 01:03:181 - and 01:03:558 - Retained as the pitch at 01:02:426 - is a bit lower.
  3. 01:05:445 - Move to 01:05:256 - To follow the beginning of the next vocal phrase. (Unless you're following the background music at 01:05:445 - ) I would prefer a 4/1 break here right after the relatively dense kiai.
[Futsuu]
  1. 00:28:275 - Change to k. The vocal is a lower pitch than at 00:28:087 - Remain unchanged as they have the same pitch.
  2. 01:25:068 - Change to k. The guitar is a higher pitch here than at 01:24:879 - There will be too many d k if I apply this.
[Muzukashii]
  1. 01:07:332 - Change to d. The vocal has a lower pitch here than at 01:07:521 - The pitch of both notes is considerably higher than 01:06:955 (251) - , so I think k would be fine.
[Oni]
  1. 00:49:502 - Move to 00:49:690 - this would follow the rising vocal better here, rather than at 00:49:502 - where it's not really impacted. Hmm, I think the current placement could reversely highlight the similar vocals at 00:49:030 (218,219,223,224) -
[Inner Oni]
  1. 00:22:426 - Change to k. Has the same pitch as 00:22:049 - Nope, there exists a pitch decrease across the notes.
  2. 01:02:426 - Change to k. Has the same pitch as 01:02:615 - This time the pitch becomes higher across 01:02:426 (361,362,363) -
Thanks for your mod~ :)
Nofool
#1 on 3 8-)
no much to say, spread seems fine

[Kantan]
* - 00:04:879 (6) - would make this K and - 00:10:540 (14) - D, just to get easy XXX spam using only one color
* - 00:24:690 - to - 00:29:219 - try something like this instead :

fits more the vocal and easier to play/less notes
* - 00:38:087 (55,56,57) - i would probably rather use a spinner to cover this
* - 00:46:577 (69) - move to - 00:48:087 - ? the break there feels weird, better have a break after the finisher as it covers the vocal longer
* - 00:55:634 (83,84,85,86,87,88) - hmm i would do something like d kkD K instead of ddk D kK, first because the ddk feels forced to have space before the finiser, but really doesn't fit the vocal, and second remove - 00:58:275 (88) - and make the previous k a finisher instead because we are focusing on the vocal and barely hear that other sound following
- 01:16:011 (115,116) - could be a slider/finisher, cover the vocal in a better way i think

[Futsuu]
* - 00:29:785 (73) - sounds out of place lol, if you keep something here i would at least move this one to - 00:29:973 -
* - 00:30:351 (74) - also i would remove that one, consistent break with - 00:31:860 -
* - 00:39:407 (96,97,98) - hmm might be too much here ? maybe remove both k or just the second, - 00:51:672 - nothing there so yeah
* - 01:25:823 (224) - move to - 01:26:011 - ? sounds more like it, consistent break lenght with - 01:24:313 (220,221) -

[Muzukashii]
* - 00:06:011 (19) - remove ? needs more break as it only is the beginning part
* - 00:29:596 (100,101,102,103) - i see more something like k ddk/k d k here, would miss the drum beat for the melodic sound which is more noticeable
* - 00:35:256 (122) - / - 00:36:766 (125) - would make both finisher as they sounds similar to - 00:33:747 (118) -
* - 00:44:124 (156,157,158,159,160,161,162) - id rather use dkdk k 1/2 here, like at - 00:56:200 (210,211,212,213) - even tho you did it because the second part has finishers following, less notes still emphasize more the vocal

[Oni]
* - 00:06:294 - k could be added here
* - 00:09:785 (39) - and this could be removed, there clearly isn't the sound that you had at - 00:03:747 (14) -
* - 00:29:596 (121,122,123,124) - refer to muzukashii
* - 00:35:256 (148) - / - 00:36:766 (153) - ^
* - 00:38:841 - would add something like k here as we reached the Oni, that break sounds a bit weird now
* - 00:44:124 (190,191,192,193,194,195) - probably plays/sounds better as d kkddk, like at - 00:56:200 (259,260,261,262,263,264) -
* - 01:03:936 - for that part i would add so many finishers õ_o, like - 01:08:275 (317) -/ - 01:11:106 (330) - / - 01:14:124 (342) - / - 01:17:332 (356) -, but up to you

[Inner Oni]
* - 00:06:294 - refer to Oni
* - 00:12:521 - would add a k here to but you probably aren't a fan of finisher at the end of streams?
* - 00:33:464 (177) - d instead ? emphasize more the vocal pitch, probably better to not swap color too much as this pattern is a bit sudden compared to the vocal
* - 00:34:690 - / - 00:35:445 - / - 00:36:200 - d could be added at those spots, sounds like it
* - 00:38:841 - refer to Oni
* - 00:51:106 (283,284,285,286,287,288,289,290,291) - would make this ddddkkkkD or ddddkkkkd but current pattern is too complexe for the song, i mean nothing really suggest such pattern
* - 01:02:332 (360) - k ? emphasize the vocal for the following d and plays well with - 01:01:483 (354,355,356) - dkd used just before
* - 01:09:124 - better add something here, cuting it makes it a bit weird
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good luck'
Topic Starter
Nardoxyribonucleic

Nofool wrote:

#1 on 3 8-)
no much to say, spread seems fine

[Kantan]
* - 00:04:879 (6) - would make this K and - 00:10:540 (14) - D, just to get easy XXX spam using only one color Remain unchanged for pattern consistency across the set.
* - 00:24:690 - to - 00:29:219 - try something like this instead :

fits more the vocal and easier to play/less notes did something similar there.
* - 00:38:087 (55,56,57) - i would probably rather use a spinner to cover this Good idea.
* - 00:46:577 (69) - move to - 00:48:087 - ? the break there feels weird, better have a break after the finisher as it covers the vocal longer fixed
* - 00:55:634 (83,84,85,86,87,88) - hmm i would do something like d kkD K instead of ddk D kK, first because the ddk feels forced to have space before the finiser, but really doesn't fit the vocal, and second remove - 00:58:275 (88) - and make the previous k a finisher instead because we are focusing on the vocal and barely hear that other sound following changed in an alternative way.
- 01:16:011 (115,116) - could be a slider/finisher, cover the vocal in a better way i think The current pattern seems to be fine.

[Futsuu]
* - 00:29:785 (73) - sounds out of place lol, if you keep something here i would at least move this one to - 00:29:973 - Retained to cohere with 00:26:766 -
* - 00:30:351 (74) - also i would remove that one, consistent break with - 00:31:860 - same as ^
* - 00:39:407 (96,97,98) - hmm might be too much here ? maybe remove both k or just the second, - 00:51:672 - nothing there so yeah fixed
* - 01:25:823 (224) - move to - 01:26:011 - ? sounds more like it, consistent break lenght with - 01:24:313 (220,221) - I would like to keep this for the background instrument there.

[Muzukashii]
* - 00:06:011 (19) - remove ? needs more break as it only is the beginning part fixed
* - 00:29:596 (100,101,102,103) - i see more something like k ddk/k d k here, would miss the drum beat for the melodic sound which is more noticeable refer to Futsuu
* - 00:35:256 (122) - / - 00:36:766 (125) - would make both finisher as they sounds similar to - 00:33:747 (118) - They appear to be lighter imo.
* - 00:44:124 (156,157,158,159,160,161,162) - id rather use dkdk k 1/2 here, like at - 00:56:200 (210,211,212,213) - even tho you did it because the second part has finishers following, less notes still emphasize more the vocal I think both constellations work, so no change for variety.

[Oni]
* - 00:06:294 - k could be added here Retained for a better spread with Muzukashii
* - 00:09:785 (39) - and this could be removed, there clearly isn't the sound that you had at - 00:03:747 (14) - fixed
* - 00:29:596 (121,122,123,124) - refer to muzukashii refer to Futsuu
* - 00:35:256 (148) - / - 00:36:766 (153) - ^ refer to Muzukashii
* - 00:38:841 - would add something like k here as we reached the Oni, that break sounds a bit weird now
* - 00:44:124 (190,191,192,193,194,195) - probably plays/sounds better as d kkddk, like at - 00:56:200 (259,260,261,262,263,264) - same as Muzukashii
* - 01:03:936 - for that part i would add so many finishers õ_o, like - 01:08:275 (317) -/ - 01:11:106 (330) - / - 01:14:124 (342) - / - 01:17:332 (356) -, but up to you No change to emphasize 01:15:256 (345,346,347,348) -

[Inner Oni]
* - 00:06:294 - refer to Oni fixed
* - 00:12:521 - would add a k here to but you probably aren't a fan of finisher at the end of streams? Yep, retained for better playability.
* - 00:33:464 (177) - d instead ? emphasize more the vocal pitch, probably better to not swap color too much as this pattern is a bit sudden compared to the vocal I think this pattern would be a hint for the complexity in the kiai.
* - 00:34:690 - / - 00:35:445 - / - 00:36:200 - d could be added at those spots, sounds like it The rests could cohere with the vocals nicely.
* - 00:38:841 - refer to Oni I think a break here could help focus on the upcoming SV changes.
* - 00:51:106 (283,284,285,286,287,288,289,290,291) - would make this ddddkkkkD or ddddkkkkd but current pattern is too complexe for the song, i mean nothing really suggest such pattern The pitch changes could support the pattern pretty well imo.
* - 01:02:332 (360) - k ? emphasize the vocal for the following d and plays well with - 01:01:483 (354,355,356) - dkd used just before Remain unchanged for a contrast of vocal pitch compared to 00:52:426 (295,296,297,298,299) -
* - 01:09:124 - better add something here, cuting it makes it a bit weird This would result in an extraordinarily long pattern that overwhelms the kiai.
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good luck'
Thanks for your mod~ :)
Mafumafu
[Easy]
00:47:332 (2,1) - Overlap in such difficulty is ehhhh. Needs to fix
00:56:389 (3,1) - SAme

[Hard]
00:07:709 (3,4) - 跳应该在3 4之间,因为4是Finish嘛 2 3之间应该是正常的间距
00:14:879 (7) - 最好1/2,这样不会漏掉vocal
00:29:785 (3,4,1) - 跟vocal更顺一点?
00:59:219 (4) - NC

[Insane]
00:25:823 (5) - 本来是应该白线NC的,可是你这里是折返。。。。。其实我觉得折返处最好要clickable 还是用圆圈或者滑条开头代替比较好
和Insane Gap太大了 hard只有一些三连 Insane好几组8、9个note的连打 还有几组跳 肯定要加一个难度
不过图很好
再找3 4 个std摸吧
如果加个难度的话等taiko也好了就call me back
Prophecy
Too fast.
Rizia

Regraz wrote:

[Easy]
00:47:332 (2,1) - Overlap in such difficulty is ehhhh. Needs to fix
00:56:389 (3,1) - SAme

[Hard]
00:07:709 (3,4) - 跳应该在3 4之间,因为4是Finish嘛 2 3之间应该是正常的间距
00:14:879 (7) - 最好1/2,这样不会漏掉vocal
00:29:785 (3,4,1) - 跟vocal更顺一点?
00:59:219 (4) - NC

[Insane]
00:25:823 (5) - 本来是应该白线NC的,可是你这里是折返。。。。。其实我觉得折返处最好要clickable 还是用圆圈或者滑条开头代替比较好 我一直都覺得重音放reverse的處理方法在很多地方都很有趣
和Insane Gap太大了 hard只有一些三连 Insane好几组8、9个note的连打 还有几组跳 肯定要加一个难度
不过图很好
再找3 4 个std摸吧
如果加个难度的话等taiko也好了就call me back
沒提的都改了
spread方面我在hard盡量加了點三連 hard的跳也拉近gap 利用aim難度去補償 然後insane也減低了點點切指的壓力 159bpm對於這個level的player難度上也不會太極端的 所以我認為現在的spread是acceptable的
insane也不難的情況下加個light insane太勉強了 做出來也沒意義
http://puu.sh/qoGOT/c0db2a2b21.rar
Topic Starter
Nardoxyribonucleic
Updated~ :3
Mafumafu
好,那等taiko好了就叫下我吧
tasuke912
Hi.

[ General]
  1. 01:26:577 (1) - Consider adding 50% and 30% line, -20% seems bit too steep.
  2. HP+1.0 in lower diffs?
[ Kantan]
  1. 00:04:879 (6,7,8) - 00:10:162 (13,14,15) - How about making one color triplets? (KKK/DDD) I felt that each patterns are little hard for the intro part.
  2. 00:42:804 (6,7,8,9,10,11) - Just a suggestion, make reverse pattern with previous d-d-kkd-? (k-k-ddk-) It fits to the song as well, and makes interesting flow imo.
  3. 00:54:879 (25,26,27,28,29) - ^
  4. 01:22:615 (67,68,69) - one color would be good for the consistency if you applied at intro part.
[ Futsuu]
  1. 00:27:332 (66) - This difficulty lacks 3/1 breaks, how about making more 5/2s instead?
  2. 00:33:181 (81,82) - ^
  3. 00:51:294 (131,132) - ^
[ Muzukashii]
  1. OD5.0 would be better
  2. 00:44:407 (158,159) - Could be removed in the similar way as 00:56:389 (211,212) -
[ Oni]
  1. 00:03:558 (13,14,15,16) - kkdd would fit to the melody better.
  2. 01:22:238 (381) - Consider removing for the consistency with intro. (00:09:407 (36,37,38,39,40) -)
[ Inner Oni]
  1. 00:25:068 - Tbh, I don't think slow down is needed.
  2. 00:39:030 (200) - Same. 1.0x works good enough, isn't it?
  3. 01:10:540 (411,413) - Consider adding finishers, it fits to the strong sound as well as 409, and works to avoid having suddenly easy.
  4. 01:13:558 (427,429) - ^
Call me back when you are done :D
Topic Starter
Nardoxyribonucleic

tasuke912 wrote:

Hi.

[ General]
  1. 01:26:577 (1) - Consider adding 50% and 30% line, -20% seems bit too steep. fixed
  2. HP+1.0 in lower diffs? Hmm okay.
[ Kantan]
  1. 00:04:879 (6,7,8) - 00:10:162 (13,14,15) - How about making one color triplets? (KKK/DDD) I felt that each patterns are little hard for the intro part. Hmm... No change here for consistency throughout the set. 1/1 triple big notes might be a little bit hard, but I think it is still acceptable.
  2. 00:42:804 (6,7,8,9,10,11) - Just a suggestion, make reverse pattern with previous d-d-kkd-? (k-k-ddk-) It fits to the song as well, and makes interesting flow imo. Good idea.
  3. 00:54:879 (25,26,27,28,29) - ^ Remain unchanged as a variation.
  4. 01:22:615 (67,68,69) - one color would be good for the consistency if you applied at intro part. same as 00:10:162 (13,14,15) -
[ Futsuu]
  1. 00:27:332 (66) - This difficulty lacks 3/1 breaks, how about making more 5/2s instead? There are a lot of 2/1 breaks and plenty of 5/2 breaks already, so I think it would be better to keep this note for a better spread.
  2. 00:33:181 (81,82) - ^ same as ^
  3. 00:51:294 (131,132) - ^ ^
[ Muzukashii]
  1. OD5.0 would be better changed to 4.5 instead.
  2. 00:44:407 (158,159) - Could be removed in the similar way as 00:56:389 (211,212) - I don't use triplet at 00:56:389 - because of the next big notes.
[ Oni]
  1. 00:03:558 (13,14,15,16) - kkdd would fit to the melody better. I think kdkd could still follow the pitch decrease and the snare at 00:03:936 -
  2. 01:22:238 (381) - Consider removing for the consistency with intro. (00:09:407 (36,37,38,39,40) -) fixed
[ Inner Oni]
  1. 00:25:068 - Tbh, I don't think slow down is needed. Hmm alright.
  2. 00:39:030 (200) - Same. 1.0x works good enough, isn't it? I would prefer keeping the SV increases for the kiais as the pace is remarkably faster.
  3. 01:10:540 (411,413) - Consider adding finishers, it fits to the strong sound as well as 409, and works to avoid having suddenly easy. fixed
  4. 01:13:558 (427,429) - ^ ^
Call me back when you are done :D
Thanks for your mod tasuke~ :)
tasuke912
Bubbled!
z1085684963
水摸
Insane
00:01:672 (4) - 往上移一点比较好的感觉
00:27:709 (1,2,3) - 摆个三角可好
00:32:615 (2,3) - ctrl g?
00:54:502 (6) - 没叠好吗
01:17:332 (1) - 可以稍微往左下移一点好看
Hard
00:14:879 (7,8,9) - 这边还是塞满好点的感觉,稍微空一下实在是有点莫名

另外我觉得insane的3/4节奏可以适当跳一下,没必要这么收紧
good luck :)
Saki
m4m from rizia https://osu.ppy.sh/s/382544

我打开了发现没声音??去掉.osu文件里前面那个空格就好了,不知道是什么问题
[insane]
00:15:256 (3) - 建议换成2个圈来跟vocal
00:18:275 (5,6,7,1) - 感觉比较别扭,把5放下面然后后面的放上面一些可能flow好一点
00:40:728 (6,1) - 贴上了
01:28:087 - 结尾转盘是不是拉到这比较好

[hard]
00:15:445 - 加个圈
00:27:615 - 不是跟vocal的话重音貌似在这

lower diffs is fine to me

顺便关widescreen support

美丽,gl
09kami

09kami wrote:

水摸
[Insane]
01:20:351 (1) - 这里的音应该比前面白线的地方重吧 考虑01:20:162 (4,1) - 的间距比01:19:596 (3,4) - 稍微大些?

[Easy]
Check if the recovery time after this spinner is appropriate for the difficulty level:
01:16:389 (1) 3.5beats 1321ms

Make sure that there is a reasonable time delay after a spinner to the next object. This will ensure that players have enough time to recover and react to the next object. In the case of consecutive spinners, make sure that the next spinner gives adequate time to account for a lower reaction time for new players.

[Normal]
00:57:426 - Slider repeat
01:15:539 - Slider repeat
01:24:596 - Slider repeat

太鼓的难度和STD的难度结尾时间不一样 不知道有没有影响
Rizia

z1085684963 wrote:

水摸
Insane
00:01:672 (4) - 往上移一点比较好的感觉 喜歡blanket
00:27:709 (1,2,3) - 摆个三角可好 小一點的角度較好
00:32:615 (2,3) - ctrl g? 3到5連的flow太直了
00:54:502 (6) - 没叠好吗 故意的
01:17:332 (1) - 可以稍微往左下移一点好看 不了
Hard
00:14:879 (7,8,9) - 这边还是塞满好点的感觉,稍微空一下实在是有点莫名 塞了的話我覺得有點滿

另外我觉得insane的3/4节奏可以适当跳一下,没必要这么收紧
good luck :)

Vert wrote:

m4m from rizia https://osu.ppy.sh/s/382544

我打开了发现没声音??去掉.osu文件里前面那个空格就好了,不知道是什么问题
[insane]
00:15:256 (3) - 建议换成2个圈来跟vocal ok
00:18:275 (5,6,7,1) - 感觉比较别扭,把5放下面然后后面的放上面一些可能flow好一点 還好 不改
00:40:728 (6,1) - 贴上了 還好 不改
01:28:087 - 结尾转盘是不是拉到这比较好 ok

[hard]
00:15:445 - 加个圈 加了我覺得有點滿
00:27:615 - 不是跟vocal的话重音貌似在这 finish

lower diffs is fine to me

顺便关widescreen support

美丽,gl

09kami wrote:

09kami wrote:

水摸
[Insane]
01:20:351 (1) - 这里的音应该比前面白线的地方重吧 考虑01:20:162 (4,1) - 的间距比01:19:596 (3,4) - 稍微大些? 有點難改就不改了 我覺得還可以的

[Easy]
Check if the recovery time after this spinner is appropriate for the difficulty level:
01:16:389 (1) 3.5beats 1321ms

Make sure that there is a reasonable time delay after a spinner to the next object. This will ensure that players have enough time to recover and react to the next object. In the case of consecutive spinners, make sure that the next spinner gives adequate time to account for a lower reaction time for new players.

acceptable on 159bpm i think

[Normal]
00:57:426 - Slider repeat ?
01:15:539 - Slider repeat
01:24:596 - Slider repeat

太鼓的难度和STD的难度结尾时间不一样 不知道有没有影响
THX

http://puu.sh/qC175/198bb37120.rar
Topic Starter
Nardoxyribonucleic
Updated~
Mafumafu
Normal AR5如何?因为Normal属于比较难的 5更好一点
而且AR4 到 8这个gap有点大。。。

[Insane]
最后有两个绿线重叠了 需要删除一个

那个。。。taiko的难度可以有视频吗?有摸图软件提示我这个 我也不知道
Topic Starter
Nardoxyribonucleic

Regraz wrote:

那个。。。taiko的难度可以有视频吗?有摸图软件提示我这个 我也不知道
沒問題的, 而且有不少ranked taiko也帶有video, 例如

https://osu.ppy.sh/s/275907
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/322173
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/336453
Mafumafu
好 那就其他的改一下吧

顺便最好把metadata的来源写在creator's word里?避免不必要的麻烦。。。
Topic Starter
Nardoxyribonucleic

Regraz wrote:

顺便最好把metadata的来源写在creator's word里?避免不必要的麻烦。。。
Metadata是從動畫ED那裡提取的, 而且Romanisation也跟君媽確認過了

http://www.lovelive-anime.jp/uranohoshi/cd.php

Edit: updated Rizia's Normal and Insane.
Mafumafu
Let's try!
tasuke912
Qualified!
Charlotte
Gratz :)
-Sh1n1-
Gratz Nardo and Rizia :3
JUDYDANNY
lol
JUDYDANNY
Congrtatz! :)
Bara-
AQOURS <3333

Uh, is it maybe possible that you put seperate links to the different versions? (Like the Chika/You/Riko, Maru/Ruby, Yohane, Dia/Kanan/Mari, Ruby/Maru/Yohane
That way people can download their favourite version ^_^
Bara-
Gratz on Rank!
Rizia

Bara- wrote:

Gratz on Rank!
Topic Starter
Nardoxyribonucleic
Thanks everyone~ ヾ(๑>◡<)ノ"
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