A 2 measure NC system for this difficulty seems rather unfitting. I would suggest changing it to every downbeat here to prevent large combos like 00:29:330 (14,15) -
- Oui00:01:580 (4,6) - Minor aesthetic things. Space 6 and 4 further out so it matches visually to 00:01:280 (3,4) - and 00:01:580 (4,5) -
I find it would just increase the visual part of your map a lot more without hurting gameplay
- Tbh that's not even an issue, and don't make much sense to space them like that, it won't affect the aesthetic or gameplay.00:05:630 (2) - Is there a reason this is stacked compared to previous sounds like this 00:03:230 (2) -
Imo for consistency sake it would be nice to see a small jump to this note since it deserves quite some empathise like you did for the rest of them.
- Ye00:08:030 (2) - I suggest you move this slightly to the right so it lines up visually with 00:06:830 (6,8) - Similar sort of deal with other sliders like 00:13:130 (3) -
- One again, wrong timestamp so can't do it.I'm not going to point them all out to safe us both time, however I really do recommend implementing visual spacing into your patterns more
- Visual spacing is not real spacing, and due to that speed and the nature of the diff, you're supposed to know how to read that without any issue.00:09:830 (6) - A slider here doesn't really make sense. You mapped the snare on the end of this everywhere else like 00:12:380 (10) -
However here you mapped it passively? I would recommend that you use two circles instead to empathise this
- Was the best compromise to fit also vocal and guitar here.00:16:730 (8) - This is the first time that you have used a wide angle jump for this which seems rather unorthodox since the rest of this map up to this part has been sharp angles.
Its not a very prominent sound in the map so I dont see a justified reason for the change, Especially since you have used wide angles for the exact same sounds before
- Does that mean I can't do it just because I should always use the same kind of pattern structure ? The song itself don't offer that much variation, so doing it with patterns is a way to make it more appealing.00:36:080 (9,10,11) - Slightly awkward entry angle to the stream here. I would suggest moving 00:34:880 (3,4,5,8) - down so it blankets 00:34:880 (3,4,5,6,8) -
and change the angle of 00:36:080 (9,10,11) - to something like
http://sotarks.is.my-waifu.pw/xhA2qyD The angle is fine, would also ruin next pattern to change that and that's definitly not worth it. I just changed a bit 00:35:630 (8) - to make it more like it's blanket with 00:35:180 (6) - .Cute diff and cute song none the less though! :3