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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on czwartek, 13 kwietnia 2017 at 17:51:54

Artist: Whispered
Title: Tsukiakari
Tags: kosiej mrk Raiden hard rock metal death melodic eastern folk metsutan songs of the void 月明
BPM: 120
Filesize: 17455kb
Play Time: 07:29
Difficulties Available:
  1. Future Month (6,98 stars, 1883 notes)
  2. Raiden's Hell Oni (6,04 stars, 2790 notes)


Download: Whispered - Tsukiakari
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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May the future month bring something better


Map: Finished
Hitsounds: Finished
Storyboard: Finished
Raiden GD: Finished

LOVED :3


Please Redownload if you downloaded before 24.08.2016
A new guest diff has been added and the quality of the audio was reduced to 192 kb/s


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posted
Hi :pp

210 BPM tickOffset should be 71.990
05:05:132 - here the offset changes a bit, add new 210BPM with offset 305.112
01:15:327 (1) - this is off the beat xd, move to white tick
01:22:541 (2) - NC instead of 01:22:255 (1) -
01:23:112 (1,2) - same ^
02:37:704 (1) - the flow in this part is a bit confusing, maybe change these to sliders 02:37:704 (1,5,6) -
04:37:704 (1,2,3) - ohh the spacing here its like way TOO much, make them a bit closer at least
05:59:970 (1) - fix this slier lenght
and this 06:03:399 (1) -
06:07:254 - missed a beat
06:10:112 - ^, Youre not following that rhytm, but that strong beat is missed and feels like there's something is missing

really short but this map is great, gl
posted

Itasha_S13 wrote:

Hi :pp

210 BPM tickOffset should be 71.990fixed
05:05:132 - here the offset changes a bit, add new 210BPM with offset 305.112fixed
01:15:327 (1) - this is off the beat xd, move to white tick dunno but it is on white tick now, i didnt change anything XD
01:22:541 (2) - NC instead of 01:22:255 (1) - nah i think what's now is better
01:23:112 (1,2) - same ^^
02:37:704 (1) - the flow in this part is a bit confusing, maybe change these to sliders 02:37:704 (1,5,6) - k
04:37:704 (1,2,3) - ohh the spacing here its like way TOO much, make them a bit closer at least fixed
05:59:970 (1) - fix this slier lenght fixed
and this 06:03:399 (1) - done
06:07:254 - missed a beat yup
06:10:112 - ^, Youre not following that rhytm, but that strong beat is missed and feels like there's something is missing yeah, i did some corrections

really short but this map is great, gl thanks :D
posted
wubwub
m4m

i totally hate thoose streamy metal songs.. but everything for m4m.

that one diff
01:15:418 (1) - 01:16:275 (1) - i suggest u to redo thoose sliders. they doesn't look good tbh.
01:12:561 (3) - fix blanket
01:13:275 (3) - ^
01:28:418 (2) - ^
02:00:847 (4) - CTRL+G
02:01:418 (6) - ^
02:03:561 - add circle
02:04:418 - ^
02:05:275 - ^
02:15:561 - ^
02:17:275 - ^
02:18:990 - ^
02:22:418 - ^
02:25:847 - ^
02:29:275 - ^


the flow feels so messed up.. uwu
don't leave so much spaces in the fast things

03:30:561 (6) - CTRL+G



just this all stuff.
try to fix that ripflow.

~
posted

CookieKivi wrote:

wubwub
m4m

i totally hate thoose streamy metal songs.. but everything for m4m. XD

that one diff
01:15:418 (1) - 01:16:275 (1) - i suggest u to redo thoose sliders. they doesn't look good tbh. I redid them previously, that's the better ver, i don't think i'll do better, but maybe i will someday
01:12:561 (3) - fix blanket fixed
01:13:275 (3) - ^ fixed
01:28:418 (2) - ^ fixed, tbh i don't see a problem with a blanket there XD, but i took a longer look, and did it more prcisely
02:00:847 (4) - CTRL+G What i did, i did on purpose, i won't change it
02:01:418 (6) - ^ ^
02:03:561 - add circle No, i breaks my flow, and vision, and no all the way down, i left those spaces on purpose, to fit the music and my beat
02:04:418 - ^
02:05:275 - ^
02:15:561 - ^
02:17:275 - ^
02:18:990 - ^
02:22:418 - ^
02:25:847 - ^
02:29:275 - ^


the flow feels so messed up.. uwu the flow is a beaty
don't leave so much spaces in the fast things I will, you did worse on your map tbh XD very large jumps and messy

03:30:561 (6) - CTRL+G no, it was on purpose



just this all stuff.
try to fix that ripflow. i don't see any problems with a flow

~
Thanks for the mod :3
posted
Sup dude :D Well fck my pc crashed while modding so gonna try to put everything back I can remember

Hitsounding
  1. gonna need atleast some hitsounding in order to get it ranked man :D, since theres a constant loud drum I'd mainly use additions in this case
  2. addtions soft finish examples: 01:11:990 (1) - and 01:15:418 (1) - these are the louder cymbals right at the start of a new section in the song so deserve a hitsound here
  3. a form of claps: 01:16:275 (1,2) - 01:19:704 (1,3) - hear how the head of the sliders and the following note have these drum beats that stand out? You could add a clap (N/S/D whichever fits best for you) to make them even further stand out also stuff like 02:11:418 (1,2) - reaalllly need a clap/hitsound with how they are completely different then the rest of the segment
  4. for whistles it can be trickier, for this song you could add some soft whistles on the head of 04:06:847 (2) - and 04:10:275 (2) - for example or on the piano parts of the song like 04:22:561 (3,5) -


Future Month

  1. while playing I noticed mainly a lot of NC problems and emphazing problems and some snap problems so hope gonna focus on these for now and minor aesthetics stuff ofc bc why not :D
  2. 01:12:561 (3,3) - stack these used for the same blanket
  3. 01:21:132 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - (8) deseres more spacing here, its still building up to (1) in the song so I don't know why you decided to drop the sv here
  4. 01:22:275 (1,2,3,4) - this kind of patterns are really hard to read and doesn't represent the pause in the song very well imo since you make it seem like its 1-2-3-4 while you can hear its more of 1-1-2-3 in the song, why not try stacking 2 under 1 and make the jump on 3 and 4, this way you create a pause aswell and its follows the music more
  5. 01:40:275 - why not start a return slider here and delete 01:40:418 (1) - I would'nt ignore the drums here since there isnt a guitar to conceal the sound here aswell and with the return you also follow that snare sound
  6. 01:47:704 (6,1) - emphasizes is on 1 in the song so reduce the ds of 6 a bit so 1 is the biggest ds here
  7. 01:47:990 (1,2,3,4) - basicly same as 01:22:275 (1,2,3,4) the stacking of 2-3 and then the jump to 4 is kinda weird since they are 3 identical sounds so would make 01:48:275 (2,3,4) - the same ds here with 1 standing out like the song suggests
  8. 01:54:561 (7,3) - stack these since used for same blanket
  9. 01:57:990 (9) - move a bit to the left for the pathing thingy
  10. 02:08:632 (1) - end at 02:11:132 - or make that a circle there, bit weird to stop on the first of the woodwork instrument and ignore the second
  11. 02:14:275 (5) - and 02:18:275 (5) - NC for the change in DS between streams
  12. 02:19:132 (2,4,3) - might aswell stack 3 under them aswell
  13. 02:31:990 (5) - NC
  14. 02:37:704 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - what are you following here exactly? seems like a missed vocal/guitar on 02:37:847 -
  15. 02:40:561 (2) - 02:47:418 (4) - pretty sure the guitar is 1/3 here
  16. 02:42:561 (4) - and 02:45:990 (4) - felt a bit underwhelming for a 7* song, why not change these with 1/4 sliders to catch the hold guitar sound and you got the start of the guitar changes clickable aswell?
  17. 02:56:275 (1,2) - bit more ds pls, making it seem like this is 1/4 aswell
  18. 02:56:561 (2) - why not 2 returns? theres a change in guitar, vocals and drum here in the middle
  19. 03:07:704 (5) - NC here gotta try to avoid using mutlive SV in a single combo
  20. 03:23:704 (7,3) - stack these, same blanket use
  21. 03:27:132 (9) - bit to right
  22. 03:29:990 (4) - control+g for consistency with 02:00:847 (4) -
  23. 04:06:561 (1) - 3/4 slider for fits better here since theres only the hold sound nothing else
  24. 04:06:847 (2) - NC the sv change '^'
  25. 04:09:132 (1,2,3,4) - pretty weird that your emphazing 2 with the jump when 3 has the most powerful drum here, would make that the biggest ds
  26. 04:10:275 (2) - NC
  27. 04:15:418 (1) - NC
  28. 04:15:418 (1,2) - you got some unnessecary green lines here
  29. 04:16:990 (3) - NC
  30. 04:18:847 (1,2,3) - would map all the drum heres since they're really audible, you can maybe make a 6 anti-jump pattern here
  31. 04:19:704 (1,2,3,1) - NC like 1212 here for the sv change
  32. 04:21:418 (4) - N to the 04:24:847 (4) - C
  33. 04:26:275 (5,1,2) - emphasizes should be on 1 instead of 2 here basicly swap DS
  34. 04:37:775 (2) - check snapping here
  35. 04:38:561 (5) - NC yeah I guess you got it by now gonna stop with these :D
  36. 04:43:132 (5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - aren't these 1/3?
  37. 04:47:704 (3,4,5,1) - wowowowow big no with this kind of polarity switch from white to blue with even spacing is basicly unrankable try something like this to make the 1/2 gaps stand out
  38. 04:55:704 (1,2,3) - euh bit random ds, why not make the jump from 2-3 the larges one since 2 is a bit weaker here
  39. 05:05:132 - you can move the timing point to this point aswel or just delete it tbh, since it gets back to normal at 05:05:989 (1) - and you still follow that zoom thing for the 3 previous notes that is on point (granted the main instrument here is a few ms off but since tehse are 1/1 it should be fine), since it gets noticable that frm 05:05:989 (1) - its a bit off
  40. 05:13:683 (3) - change to a 1/2 slider + circle instead if you wanna change things up a bit to make the piano sound clickable
  41. 05:34:254 (1,2,3,4,1) - some more unnesserary green timing points here
  42. 05:59:397 (2,1) - try to avoid the overlap here
  43. 06:45:254 (4,4) - might aswell stack these
  44. 06:50:540 (4) - control+g for consisteny with the other similar kiai segments
  45. 06:59:683 (4,4) - stack same blanket again


Thats it for me gl with ranked man and see ya around! :D
posted

Wishkey wrote:

Sup dude :D Well fck my pc crashed while modding so gonna try to put everything back I can remember

Hitsounding
  1. gonna need atleast some hitsounding in order to get it ranked man :D, since theres a constant loud drum I'd mainly use additions in this case
  2. addtions soft finish examples: 01:11:990 (1) - and 01:15:418 (1) - these are the louder cymbals right at the start of a new section in the song so deserve a hitsound here
  3. a form of claps: 01:16:275 (1,2) - 01:19:704 (1,3) - hear how the head of the sliders and the following note have these drum beats that stand out? You could add a clap (N/S/D whichever fits best for you) to make them even further stand out also stuff like 02:11:418 (1,2) - reaalllly need a clap/hitsound with how they are completely different then the rest of the segment
  4. for whistles it can be trickier, for this song you could add some soft whistles on the head of 04:06:847 (2) - and 04:10:275 (2) - for example or on the piano parts of the song like 04:22:561 (3,5) -


Imma leave that hitsounding for later, but i'll make them :P

Future Month

  1. while playing I noticed mainly a lot of NC problems and emphazing problems and some snap problems so hope gonna focus on these for now and minor aesthetics stuff ofc bc why not :D
  2. 01:12:561 (3,3) - stack these used for the same blanket fixed
  3. 01:21:132 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - (8) deseres more spacing here, its still building up to (1) in the song so I don't know why you decided to drop the sv here yup
  4. 01:22:275 (1,2,3,4) - this kind of patterns are really hard to read and doesn't represent the pause in the song very well imo since you make it seem like its 1-2-3-4 while you can hear its more of 1-1-2-3 in the song, why not try stacking 2 under 1 and make the jump on 3 and 4, this way you create a pause aswell and its follows the music more I didn't stack those, but i moved things around, it's better now
  5. 01:40:275 - why not start a return slider here and delete 01:40:418 (1) - I would'nt ignore the drums here since there isnt a guitar to conceal the sound here aswell and with the return you also follow that snare sound that's actually not a bad idea
  6. 01:47:704 (6,1) - emphasizes is on 1 in the song so reduce the ds of 6 a bit so 1 is the biggest ds here i didn't do quite what you said, but i changed it and it looks better now, did some blankets aswell
  7. 01:47:990 (1,2,3,4) - basicly same as 01:22:275 (1,2,3,4) the stacking of 2-3 and then the jump to 4 is kinda weird since they are 3 identical sounds so would make 01:48:275 (2,3,4) - the same ds here with 1 standing out like the song suggests i kinda liked my pattern, but you're making a good point. I stacked them, i think it fits
  8. 01:54:561 (7,3) - stack these since used for same blanket fixed
  9. 01:57:990 (9) - move a bit to the left for the pathing thingy done
  10. 02:08:632 (1) - end at 02:11:132 - or make that a circle there, bit weird to stop on the first of the woodwork instrument and ignore the second i thought about that, but i intentionaly ingored this, i wanted a small break with that spinner and to build up the next part. I don't know if it's right, but it's fine for me, won't change
  11. 02:14:275 (5) - and 02:18:275 (5) - NC for the change in DS between streams fixed
  12. 02:19:132 (2,4,3) - might aswell stack 3 under them aswell very minor, good eye :P fixed
  13. 02:31:990 (5) - NC fixed
  14. 02:37:704 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - what are you following here exactly? seems like a missed vocal/guitar on 02:37:847 - i ahd problems with making this part right, but i'll do sth about it now. Well, i just added a circle
  15. 02:40:561 (2) - 02:47:418 (4) - pretty sure the guitar is 1/3 here i wasn't sure, so i left it 1/4, but if you're saying you're sure it's 1/3 ill change it
  16. 02:42:561 (4) - and 02:45:990 (4) - felt a bit underwhelming for a 7* song, why not change these with 1/4 sliders to catch the hold guitar sound and you got the start of the guitar changes clickable aswell? i'm not sure what to change here really to fit the flow, i think i'll just leave it as a relaxing part
  17. 02:56:275 (1,2) - bit more ds pls, making it seem like this is 1/4 aswell dunno, i don't know if i want to change it, but maybe i will, later.
  18. 02:56:561 (2) - why not 2 returns? theres a change in guitar, vocals and drum here in the middle fixed, i think XD
  19. 03:07:704 (5) - NC here gotta try to avoid using mutlive SV in a single combo fixed, the sv is used only for slider
  20. 03:23:704 (7,3) - stack these, same blanket use fixed
  21. 03:27:132 (9) - bit to right yep
  22. 03:29:990 (4) - control+g for consistency with 02:00:847 (4) - dunno if it's right but changed
  23. 04:06:561 (1) - 3/4 slider for fits better here since theres only the hold sound nothing else well, yes
  24. 04:06:847 (2) - NC the sv change '^' fixed, it's now like 3 NC in a row XD
  25. 04:09:132 (1,2,3,4) - pretty weird that your emphazing 2 with the jump when 3 has the most powerful drum here, would make that the biggest ds fixed
  26. 04:10:275 (2) - NC done
  27. 04:15:418 (1) - NC it was NC :v
  28. 04:15:418 (1,2) - you got some unnessecary green lines here yes, i do
  29. 04:16:990 (3) - NC fixed
  30. 04:18:847 (1,2,3) - would map all the drum heres since they're really audible, you can maybe make a 6 anti-jump pattern here done
  31. 04:19:704 (1,2,3,1) - NC like 1212 here for the sv change fixed
  32. 04:21:418 (4) - N to the 04:24:847 (4) - C fixed
  33. 04:26:275 (5,1,2) - emphasizes should be on 1 instead of 2 here basicly swap DS i made it kinda equal
  34. 04:37:775 (2) - check snapping here rechecked
  35. 04:38:561 (5) - NC yeah I guess you got it by now gonna stop with these :Dyep XD
  36. 04:43:132 (5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - aren't these 1/3? U R Right D:
  37. 04:47:704 (3,4,5,1) - wowowowow big no with this kind of polarity switch from white to blue with even spacing is basicly unrankable try something like this to make the 1/2 gaps stand out

    ^^ it should've been 1/3 drive to that slider, i was changing offset and forgot to recheck this one moment, thanks for pointing this out :P
  38. 04:55:704 (1,2,3) - euh bit random ds, why not make the jump from 2-3 the larges one since 2 is a bit weaker here it was random, you're correct, i added now some ds
  39. 05:05:132 - you can move the timing point to this point aswel or just delete it tbh, since it gets back to normal at 05:05:989 (1) - and you still follow that zoom thing for the 3 previous notes that is on point (granted the main instrument here is a few ms off but since tehse are 1/1 it should be fine), since it gets noticable that frm 05:05:989 (1) - its a bit off i'm gonna leave it for now cuz my map will once again have issues with placing those notes correctly in time, it sounds good for me, i'll think about this later :P
  40. 05:13:683 (3) - change to a 1/2 slider + circle instead if you wanna change things up a bit to make the piano sound clickable fixed, i guess XD
  41. 05:34:254 (1,2,3,4,1) - some more unnesserary green timing points here yes
  42. 05:59:397 (2,1) - try to avoid the overlap here fixed
  43. 06:45:254 (4,4) - might aswell stack these fixed
  44. 06:50:540 (4) - control+g for consisteny with the other similar kiai segments done
  45. 06:59:683 (4,4) - stack same blanket again fixed


Thats it for me gl with ranked man and see ya around! :D
I really appreciate that mod dude :D I really improved my beatmap thanks to you. Hopefully our paths will cross again :P Maybe with a collab work :D who knows.
posted
hi it's a m4m

General

  1. this song is in 3/4 time signature! (except for the intro, you can leave the first redline at 4/4)
  2. re-snap your green lines!
  3. check your blankets
  4. get some custom samples, what you've hitsounded so far sounds pretty bad with default samples. also i recommend not using the samples most metal maps use cause those are pretty bad imo
  5. i'd recommend not using drum as your main sample set even if you are using full custom samples because a few skins, including the default, use different sample types (whistle -> cymbal; finish and clap -> toms) for the drum set which makes maps that use drum samples sometimes sound terrible when not using the custom samples
  6. use soft hitsounds for the calm parts
  7. actually hitsound this thing
  8. if you wanna be extra fancy, get some more combo colors and colorhax to match the storyboard

Future Month

  1. 01:16:275 (1) - sliders like this look pretty awkward, i'd recommend making these 'wiggles' only at the start of sliders if they're this harsh
  2. 01:48:275 (2,3,4) - 01:49:132 (2,3,4) - either stack these or make them jumps like previously, using about the same spacing as streams is just going to make them awkward to read
  3. 02:41:132 (1) - 02:42:847 (1) - 02:44:561 (1) - 02:46:275 (1) - etc. - try to make sliders as long as these a bit fancier, you can use things like making parts of the slider blankets and then going off in another direction, wave sliders, multiple linear segments, etc.
  4. 02:52:847 (1,2) - 02:56:275 (1) - 02:59:704 (1,2) - 03:03:132 (1) - i'd make these all the same, either all jumps or all sliders
  5. 03:57:847 (8) - make this a wiggly slider instead of a repeat slider
  6. 04:38:561 (1) - 04:42:275 (1) - same as my first point
  7. 04:56:561 - add a circle here
  8. 06:41:112 (1,2) - make the spacing bigger here for reading
  9. add a spinner at the end maybe, the end seems a bit abrupt since there's a long strong vocal note on 07:25:683 (3) - that just feels cut off this way
solid map overall, aesthetics and hitsounding need quite a bit of work but otherwise, rhythm choices make sense and are consistent and spacing also makes sense for the most part
posted

Zhuriel wrote:

hi it's a m4m

General

  1. this song is in 3/4 time signature! (except for the intro, you can leave the first redline at 4/4)
  2. re-snap your green lines!
  3. check your blankets
  4. get some custom samples, what you've hitsounded so far sounds pretty bad with default samples. also i recommend not using the samples most metal maps use cause those are pretty bad imo
  5. i'd recommend not using drum as your main sample set even if you are using full custom samples because a few skins, including the default, use different sample types (whistle -> cymbal; finish and clap -> toms) for the drum set which makes maps that use drum samples sometimes sound terrible when not using the custom samples
  6. use soft hitsounds for the calm parts
  7. actually hitsound this thing
  8. if you wanna be extra fancy, get some more combo colors and colorhax to match the storyboard

Future Month

  1. 01:16:275 (1) - sliders like this look pretty awkward, i'd recommend making these 'wiggles' only at the start of sliders if they're this harsh alright, ill do sth about it
  2. 01:48:275 (2,3,4) - 01:49:132 (2,3,4) - either stack these or make them jumps like previously, using about the same spacing as streams is just going to make them awkward to read this was mentioned by others, it were jumps at first, then changed to stacks but decided to go with those. I might have some ideas tho.
  3. 02:41:132 (1) - 02:42:847 (1) - 02:44:561 (1) - 02:46:275 (1) - etc. - try to make sliders as long as these a bit fancier, you can use things like making parts of the slider blankets and then going off in another direction, wave sliders, multiple linear segments, etc. i might do sth about it
  4. 02:52:847 (1,2) - 02:56:275 (1) - 02:59:704 (1,2) - 03:03:132 (1) - i'd make these all the same, either all jumps or all sliders i would not, it adds some variety also when there are circles, the notes are louder than when there are sliders
  5. 03:57:847 (8) - make this a wiggly slider instead of a repeat slider changed
  6. 04:38:561 (1) - 04:42:275 (1) - same as my first point changed
  7. 04:56:561 - add a circle here no, i added circles only for that 3 same notes, the note you're suggesting is not the part of those 3 notes, it's different
  8. 06:41:112 (1,2) - make the spacing bigger here for reading fixed
  9. add a spinner at the end maybe, the end seems a bit abrupt since there's a long strong vocal note on 07:25:683 (3) - that just feels cut off this way added
solid map overall, aesthetics and hitsounding need quite a bit of work but otherwise, rhythm choices make sense and are consistent and spacing also makes sense for the most part
Thank you very much for the mod :)
posted
Hi, even if this map is dead, I was going to map it on Taiko and noticed that the timing is slightly wrong (just in case you decide to revive it)
3970,500,4,1,0,70,1,0
71970,285.714285714286,6,1,0,70,1,0
101112,285.714285714286,6,1,0,70,1,0
Just the same but with a slight offset adjustment and timing signature fix (it's 6/4 actually, 3/4 just has double the downbeats and is unnecessary)
posted

Raiden wrote:

Hi, even if this map is dead, I was going to map it on Taiko and noticed that the timing is slightly wrong (just in case you decide to revive it)
3970,500,4,1,0,70,1,0
71970,285.714285714286,6,1,0,70,1,0
101112,285.714285714286,6,1,0,70,1,0
Just the same but with a slight offset adjustment and timing signature fix (it's 6/4 actually, 3/4 just has double the downbeats and is unnecessary)
Hi :)
The map isn't dead
I just took a small break cuz holidays and stuff. I was going to work on hitsounds after my return. Thanks for noticing my map, and for comment :D. It's still my flag map and i'm going for rank. If you want to make a taiko ver of this, you can make a gd on this if you want. I'll be happy to include it.
posted
FUTURE MONTH

Amazing song, love Whispered.
Firstly, this seems kinda overmapped, so maybe nerf some jumps. However the streams are shaped perfectly (: Here are just a few suggestions, feel free to leave some things be if you don't agree with me!

01:28:420 (2,3) - Blanket these maybe?
01:48:419 (3,4) - Fix the blanket on this, the slider is way to shallow (add more curve)
01:49:276 (3,4) - ^
02:54:562 (1,1,1,1,1) - Curve these sliders to fit better with the streams
03:20:991 (2,3) - Blanket?
03:21:848 (2,4) - Bad overlap IMO
03:24:705 (4,2,4) - ^
03:23:991 (1) - Doesn't wrap around 03:24:562 (3) - as well as it could do
03:41:705 (3,1) - ^
04:23:134 (1,2) - Jump is way to big
04:41:419 (2,3,4,5) - Don't have this stream starting from the reverse arrow, move it down to the start of the slider
05:07:705 (5) - Extend this slider to fit better
05:14:562 (5) - ^
06:15:134 (1,1,1,1,1) - Curve to fit with the stream
06:39:134 (4,2) - Bad overlap

Goodluck with the map! Hope I helped
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Sliproads wrote:

FUTURE MONTH

Amazing song, love Whispered.
Firstly, this seems kinda overmapped, i dont think so :v so maybe nerf some jumps. However the streams are shaped perfectly (: Here are just a few suggestions, feel free to leave some things be if you don't agree with me!

01:28:420 (2,3) - Blanket these maybe? i thought this thru before, 01:28:420 (2,3,4) - double blanket
01:48:419 (3,4) - Fix the blanket on this, the slider is way to shallow (add more curve) yeah i guess i could add more curve :P
01:49:276 (3,4) - ^ ^
02:54:562 (1,1,1,1,1) - Curve these sliders to fit better with the streams that might be a good idea
03:20:991 (2,3) - Blanket? no, it would break the equality of the jumps 03:20:848 (1,2,3)
03:21:848 (2,4) - Bad overlap IMO imo not, it introduces the player to the system of pathing used in this songs which you can see 03:25:276 (2,3,4) - here and 03:26:276 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - here for example
03:24:705 (4,2,4) - ^ ^
03:23:991 (1) - Doesn't wrap around 03:24:562 (3) - as well as it could do you have a point, but i tested it out, and it's more pleasant when the slider is not that curved.
03:41:705 (3,1) - ^ i won't curved it but it was misplaced a little :P
04:23:134 (1,2) - Jump is way to big nope :v
04:41:419 (2,3,4,5) - Don't have this stream starting from the reverse arrow, move it down to the start of the slider the number of the reveser in slider is odd, that means it doesnt end where it starte. That's why, too keep the equal spacing, i started the stream form holf of the slider
05:07:705 (5) - Extend this slider to fit better U C, this slider has its climate, by making it longer i would have to have two notes, and it's a one note which feels like two
05:14:562 (5) - ^Here it should be one note, cuz of no "double" feeling.
06:15:134 (1,1,1,1,1) - Curve to fit with the stream i'll keep that in mind, we'll se
06:39:134 (4,2) - Bad overlap it was worse :v i'll fix this

Goodluck with the map! Hope I helped you did :3
Thank you a lot for mod :D Maybe i didn't do much what you said but i found new ways to improve my map thanks to your points :)
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I'll give away my soul for hitsounding this

Edit: Ok i found it easier now, dunno. Maybe i can handle this
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M4M from your queue
My map : https://osu.ppy.sh/s/472890


I'm not that good in modding screamo stream/jump maps, trying anyway xd. I'm sorry if i sound rude.


From AiMod
These two objects are less than 10ms apart! 06:27:419

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03:37:706 -
05:46:277 -
06:30:849 -
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Mapping
The song is mostly mistimed, try to get someone to help you with that

01:15:420 (1) - The second "bump" isn't looking that good, try something like this http://puu.sh/qB6Su/a37e9c643e.jpg

01:16:277 (1) - Same here but now it's the first bump

01:17:992 (5) - NC here, looks better

01:21:992 (8) - Try x184|y376 for better flow

01:22:563 (2,3,4) - It feels bit awkward to have small jumps like this after stuff like this 01:19:992 (2,3,4,5) -

01:38:327 (6) - Copy and mirror this 01:38:042 (5) - to there instead of the current slider

01:45:041 (2,3) - Really weird flow imo

01:51:469 (1,2,3,4) - Try to use somewhat fixed DS for stuff like this as you really cant rely on AR. The spacing is pretty much the same between 1|2 and 3|4 but timeline wise 3|4 is twice as close as 1|2

02:00:898 (4) - You can break the combo here as you start to use different kind of sliders (this and 2 after it) so it's technically a new pattern

02:18:276 (5) - NC

02:35:419 (2) - Ctrl G and move downwards

02:37:991 (3) - Ctrl J for better flow

02:44:562 (1) - As mentioned before, awkward "bump"

02:41:134 - to 02:51:419 - . Listen in 25% speed and you will notice that you have missed a ton of notes

02:53:134 (3) - NC These as they are major beats and NCs make the streams easier to see overall
02:54:848 (2) - ^
02:56:562 (2) - ^
02:58:276 (3) - ^
02:59:991 (3) - ^
03:01:705 (2) - ^
03:03:419 (2) - ^
03:05:134 (3) - ^
03:06:848 (2) - ^

03:14:134 (2,3) - Awkward flow

For patterns like this 03:15:419 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - you can NC these 03:15:991 (3,5) - (2 notes/sliders and then NC)

03:22:562 (5) - x432|y164

03:29:991 (4) - Ctrl G
03:30:562 (6) - ^

03:36:419 (4,7) - NC

03:43:705 (1) - Mirror this to here 03:43:991 -

03:49:705 (1,2,3,4) - Enhance this stream

03:49:991 (5) - Mirror to 03:50:276 -

03:50:848 (2) - NC

03:58:276 (1) - Ctrl J

NC 04:03:634 (4) - instead of 04:03:705 (1) -

04:08:181 (6,7,8) - This is weird as anyone playing would think that the roundish shape continues but they are slapped with a sharp turn

04:20:276 (1) - NC not needed

04:28:562 (1,2) - Really unfair DS as youy havent used anything like this earlier in the map

04:40:848 (5) - NC

Try to get the flow to work in these 1/3 streams, 04:43:134 (4,5,6,1) - this isn't good flow imo

05:05:134 - Way too high SV for a slow part like this, the sliders should be something like this 05:08:562 (1) - (speed)

05:18:848 (1,2) - Keep these in a line

Same as before from 06:01:705 - to 06:11:991 - you seem to be missing quite alot of notes

06:03:419 (1) - Too long slider

06:05:134 (1) - Awkward shape

06:13:705 (3) - NC These as they are major beats and NCs make the streams easier to see overall
06:14:848 (5) - ^
06:15:991 (3) - ^
06:17:134 (2) - ^
06:19:419 (4) - ^
06:20:562 (3) - ^
06:21:705 (5) - ^
06:22:848 (4) - ^
06:23:991 (2) - ^
06:26:276 (4) - ^

06:34:705 (2,3) - Weird flow

06:36:562 (3,5) - NC

06:42:848 (1,2,3,4,5) - Enhance the flow

06:50:562 (4) - Ctrl G

07:03:991 (3,5) - NC
07:17:705 (3,5) - ^


TBH the streams are awesome but the flow issues overall are holding the map back, try modding and mapping more and eventually you will understand how to use it correctly and learn to spot these issues by yourself

Good Luck!
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DTM9 Nowa wrote:

M4M from your queue
My map : https://osu.ppy.sh/s/472890


I'm not that good in modding screamo stream/jump maps, trying anyway xd. I'm sorry if i sound rude.


From AiMod
These two objects are less than 10ms apart! 06:27:419

Unsnapped kiais
03:10:277 -
03:37:706 -
05:46:277 -
06:30:849 -
07:25:706 -
Mapping
The song is mostly mistimed, try to get someone to help you with that i had a taiko bn helping me with timing. Whenever i change sth in timing, always someone has a problem with it. So i'm just gonna leave it as it is.

01:15:420 (1) - The second "bump" isn't looking that good, try something like this http://puu.sh/qB6Su/a37e9c643e.jpg fixed

01:16:277 (1) - Same here but now it's the first bump i didn't want them to be the same but i guess it's better to make them symmetrical

01:17:992 (5) - NC here, looks better fixed

01:21:992 (8) - Try x184|y376 for better flow fixed

01:22:563 (2,3,4) - It feels bit awkward to have small jumps like this after stuff like this 01:19:992 (2,3,4,5) - it does, but it's the best i come up to. It was way worse :v i made it more structured, and it's the best i could do. btw look: 01:22:563 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,4) - don't know if you noticed

01:38:327 (6) - Copy and mirror this 01:38:042 (5) - to there instead of the current slider no, there are two notes. Also i want those parts to be different

01:45:041 (2,3) - Really weird flow imo imo not

01:51:469 (1,2,3,4) - Try to use somewhat fixed DS for stuff like this as you really cant rely on AR. The spacing is pretty much the same between 1|2 and 3|4 but timeline wise 3|4 is twice as close as 1|2 i will work this out in the future

02:00:898 (4) - You can break the combo here as you start to use different kind of sliders (this and 2 after it) so it's technically a new pattern ill use nc

02:18:276 (5) - NC yep

02:35:419 (2) - Ctrl G and move downwards fixed

02:37:991 (3) - Ctrl J for better flow i want it to be pointed as it is

02:44:562 (1) - As mentioned before, awkward "bump" fixed

02:41:134 - to 02:51:419 - . Listen in 25% speed and you will notice that you have missed a ton of notes i was not following this rhytm instrument but i followed the melody

02:53:134 (3) - NC These as they are major beats and NCs make the streams easier to see overall
02:54:848 (2) - ^
02:56:562 (2) - ^
02:58:276 (3) - ^
02:59:991 (3) - ^
03:01:705 (2) - ^
03:03:419 (2) - ^
03:05:134 (3) - ^
03:06:848 (2) - ^

fixed ^

03:14:134 (2,3) - Awkward flow fixed, i moved the reverse slider

For patterns like this 03:15:419 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - you can NC these 03:15:991 (3,5) - (2 notes/sliders and then NC) noo, it's a one continues set of sliders, nc's would break my vision

03:22:562 (5) - x432|y164 fixed

03:29:991 (4) - Ctrl G
03:30:562 (6) - ^

nah ^

03:36:419 (4,7) - NC fixed

03:43:705 (1) - Mirror this to here 03:43:991 - fixed, but i mirrored the second one

03:49:705 (1,2,3,4) - Enhance this stream no

03:49:991 (5) - Mirror to 03:50:276 - fixed

03:50:848 (2) - NC fixed

03:58:276 (1) - Ctrl J fixed

NC 04:03:634 (4) - instead of 04:03:705 (1) - fixed

04:08:181 (6,7,8) - This is weird as anyone playing would think that the roundish shape continues but they are slapped with a sharp turn fixed

04:20:276 (1) - NC not needed it is needed cuz the sv changes

04:28:562 (1,2) - Really unfair DS as youy havent used anything like this earlier in the map fixed

04:40:848 (5) - NC fixed

Try to get the flow to work in these 1/3 streams, 04:43:134 (4,5,6,1) - this isn't good flow imo fixed

05:05:134 - Way too high SV for a slow part like this, the sliders should be something like this 05:08:562 (1) - (speed) i disaggree

05:18:848 (1,2) - Keep these in a line fixed

Same as before from 06:01:705 - to 06:11:991 - you seem to be missing quite alot of notes same response, i want it to be nice relaxed part with following melody

06:03:419 (1) - Too long slider fixed

06:05:134 (1) - Awkward shape fixed

06:13:705 (3) - NC These as they are major beats and NCs make the streams easier to see overall
06:14:848 (5) - ^
06:15:991 (3) - ^
06:17:134 (2) - ^
06:19:419 (4) - ^
06:20:562 (3) - ^
06:21:705 (5) - ^
06:22:848 (4) - ^
06:23:991 (2) - ^
06:26:276 (4) - ^

fixed ^^

06:34:705 (2,3) - Weird flow come on, it's not that weird

06:36:562 (3,5) - NC no

06:42:848 (1,2,3,4,5) - Enhance the flow fixed somewhat

06:50:562 (4) - Ctrl G fixed

07:03:991 (3,5) - NC
07:17:705 (3,5) - ^

no


TBH the streams are awesome but the flow issues overall are holding the map back, try modding and mapping more and eventually you will understand how to use it correctly and learn to spot these issues by yourself

Good Luck!
Wow, a nice big mod, Thank you very much, i'll mod your map when i'll have a moment :)
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Hello. Here is your Taiko GD :D

http://puu.sh/qMDoR.rar

While you're at it, remove your red line at 05:05:134 - , the signature is still 6/4.

Additional notes: please do not open AiMod in my difficulty, as it glitches base SV. Also, you need to resize the MP3 to 192/128 kbps as any higher bitrate on a non-official osu! soundtrack is unrankable.
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Raiden wrote:

Hello. Here is your Taiko GD :D:D added

http://puu.sh/qMDoR.rar

While you're at it, remove your red line at 05:05:134 - , the signature is still 6/4. fixed

Additional notes: please do not open AiMod in my difficulty, as it glitches base SV. sure Also, you need to resize the MP3 to 192/128 kbps as any higher bitrate on a non-official osu! soundtrack is unrankable.

I already resized the audio days ago. Please redownload if you still have the audio in higher bitrate than 192 :>
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hi

raiden sent me

[General]
  1. Remove "MrKOSIEJ" from tags, since it is your username, and it'd already show up in the search results if looked up.
  2. Enable epilepsy warning since your SB has some pulses.


[Future Month]
  1. 01:13:019 - and 01:13:590 - Neither of these claps really sound like they're following anything new. Rather, they sound like they're being forced in there, when there is no prominent kick on either beat. (But there are prominent kicks at 01:12:876 - and 01:13:447 - .)
  2. 01:13:304 - Add a clap. It follows the same kick that 01:13:447 - is following.
  3. 01:13:733 - and 01:14:019 - I would recommend moving these two a bit closer together, considering that at 01:13:947 - this reverse slider is facing the complete opposite direction of where you have to go, in order to hit 01:14:019 - . In addition to moving them closer together, I would also say you should Ctrl+G 01:13:733 - , for the reason I just stated above. Since quite frankly, it doesn't flow all too well, when they're in two different directions like this.
  4. 01:14:590 - and 01:14:733 - These two notes feel rather weak with just a jump here. The rhythm here is quite similar to the reverse slider you had at 01:13:733 - . So instead of a jump between 01:14:590 - and 01:14:733 - , I would recommend you make it a triplet instead. It makes your rhythmic choices here a bit more consistent.
  5. 01:15:447 - and 01:16:304 - These slider shapes could easily be improved to be a bit more curved, and aesthetically pleasing.
  6. 01:18:019 - and 01:18:161 - This jump has the same issue as 01:14:590 - and 01:14:733 -.
  7. 01:18:876 - This slider shape looks pretty cramped, but I get the kind of feeling you were going for with the zig zags. Possibly try to neaten this up a bit.
    Also on the topic of this slider, why not have a normal whistle for the slider slide here? It seems to fit quite well with the guitar.
  8. 01:19:304 - / 01:19:447 - / 01:19:590 - This jump is really uncomfortable to do. Since it goes up and to the right at such a sheer angle, then back down to the left at a similar angle. I'd recommend making this a bit more triangular so the flow isn't as weird here.
  9. 01:20:304 - Aesthetically wise, this would look a lot better overlapping 01:20:019 - .
  10. 01:20:590 - and 01:20:876 - Have the same issue as 01:13:733 - and 01:14:019 -.
  11. 01:21:447 - and 01:21:590 - Have the same issue as 01:14:590 - and 01:14:733 -.
  12. 01:21:733 - and 01:22:019 - Both of these slider head's could have claps on them to follow the kicks here.
  13. 01:22:876 - and 01:23:161 - This is a very far distance from each other, compared to the spacing you had for 01:22:590 - / 01:22:733 - / 01:22:876 - . Make this jump a bit smaller.
    Along with making the above jump smaller, I would remove the NC on 01:23:161 - since it's a part of the pattern at 01:22:590 - and have the NC at 01:23:447 - instead.
  14. 01:23:733 - Could be moved to overlap with 01:22:733 - and have 01:23:447 - stacked on top of 01:23:733 - . Since the overlaps here look really messy.
  15. 01:28:519 - A note could be added here, since the jump between 01:28:447 - and 01:28:590 - again, feels relatively weak for what the song is giving you.
  16. 01:28:876 - and 01:29:161 - I honestly read this as 1/4, rather than 1/6. The jump between these two is bigger than some of your 1/2 patterns. I honestly would change 01:28:876 - to be a 1/2 slider rather than a 1/6 slider, since it follows the more prominent kicks better.
  17. 01:36:019 - The normal whistle that you used for the slider slide here doesn't really feel like it's following anything. It sounds more so out of place than anything. I wouldn't recommend keeping that here.
  18. 01:36:876 - Same issue as above.
  19. 01:38:590 - Remove NC. This note is part of the same pattern that 01:38:304 - is, but the NC makes it look like it's own separate pattern.
    Aside from the above NC removal here, I would also move this circle a bit closer to 01:38:304 - since the current jump makes it look like 01:38:304 - and 01:38:590 - are the same rhythm as 01:38:590 - and 01:38:876 - , when they're not.


Sorry it's only up to the first kiai, but I might continue this mod at a later date. Since it is a good song.

Anyways, good luck! ;w;7
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Ayyri wrote:

hi

raiden sent me

[General]
  1. Remove "MrKOSIEJ" from tags, since it is your username, and it'd already show up in the search results if looked up. fixed
  2. Enable epilepsy warning since your SB has some pulses. fixed


[Future Month]
  1. 01:13:019 - and 01:13:590 - Neither of these claps really sound like they're following anything new. Rather, they sound like they're being forced in there, when there is no prominent kick on either beat. (But there are prominent kicks at 01:12:876 - and 01:13:447 - .) fixed
  2. 01:13:304 - Add a clap. It follows the same kick that 01:13:447 - is following. done
  3. 01:13:733 - and 01:14:019 - I would recommend moving these two a bit closer together good idea, considering that at 01:13:947 - this reverse slider is facing the complete opposite direction of where you have to go, in order to hit 01:14:019 - . In addition to moving them closer together, I would also say you should Ctrl+G 01:13:733 - , for the reason I just stated above. Since quite frankly, it doesn't flow all too well, when they're in two different directions like this. fixed
  4. 01:14:590 - and 01:14:733 - These two notes feel rather weak with just a jump here. The rhythm here is quite similar to the reverse slider you had at 01:13:733 - . So instead of a jump between 01:14:590 - and 01:14:733 - , I would recommend you make it a triplet instead. It makes your rhythmic choices here a bit more consistent. umm, i think i'm gonna have to disaggree with this one, there is no more notes i could hear there, so a triple would be overmapping. Please confirm that or, suggest sth else. I just, can't do that cuz it seems wrong to me
  5. 01:15:447 - and 01:16:304 - These slider shapes could easily be improved to be a bit more curved, and aesthetically pleasing. could be improved? yes. Easily? i don't think so lol. But i'll try to do sth with it, ill try to use bigger curve
  6. 01:18:019 - and 01:18:161 - This jump has the same issue as 01:14:590 - and 01:14:733 -. Disaggree again
  7. 01:18:876 - This slider shape looks pretty cramped, but I get the kind of feeling you were going for with the zig zags. Possibly try to neaten this up a bit. fixed
    Also on the topic of this slider, why not have a normal whistle for the slider slide here? It seems to fit quite well with the guitar. fixed
  8. 01:19:304 - / 01:19:447 - / 01:19:590 - This jump is really uncomfortable to do. Since it goes up and to the right at such a sheer angle, then back down to the left at a similar angle. I'd recommend making this a bit more triangular so the flow isn't as weird here. fixed i think, did a blanket
  9. 01:20:304 - Aesthetically wise, this would look a lot better overlapping 01:20:019 - . umm, i thought it was already overlapsing, but checked again
  10. 01:20:590 - and 01:20:876 - Have the same issue as 01:13:733 - and 01:14:019 -. disaggree
  11. 01:21:447 - and 01:21:590 - Have the same issue as 01:14:590 - and 01:14:733 -. disaggree
  12. 01:21:733 - and 01:22:019 - Both of these slider head's could have claps on them to follow the kicks here. fixed
  13. 01:22:876 - and 01:23:161 - This is a very far distance from each other, compared to the spacing you had for 01:22:590 - / 01:22:733 - / 01:22:876 - . Make this jump a bit smaller. fixed
    Along with making the above jump smaller, I would remove the NC on 01:23:161 - since it's a part of the pattern at 01:22:590 - and have the NC at 01:23:447 - instead. then it would be inconsistent with 01:22:304 (1) - i mean, it's not the part of the previous pattern.
  14. 01:23:733 - Could be moved to overlap with 01:22:733 - and have 01:23:447 - stacked on top of 01:23:733 - . Since the overlaps here look really messy. fixed
  15. 01:28:519 - A note could be added here, since the jump between 01:28:447 - and 01:28:590 - again, feels relatively weak for what the song is giving you. it feels like overmapping
  16. 01:28:876 - and 01:29:161 - I honestly read this as 1/4, rather than 1/6. The jump between these two is bigger than some of your 1/2 patterns. I honestly would change 01:28:876 - to be a 1/2 slider rather than a 1/6 slider, since it follows the more prominent kicks better. it should be 1/2, i didnt see that :D my mistake
  17. 01:36:019 - The normal whistle that you used for the slider slide here doesn't really feel like it's following anything. It sounds more so out of place than anything. I wouldn't recommend keeping that here. fixed, i removed a whistle from slider tail. Idk if its enough
  18. 01:36:876 - Same issue as above. fixed ^
  19. 01:38:590 - Remove NC. This note is part of the same pattern that 01:38:304 - is, but the NC makes it look like it's own separate pattern.
    Aside from the above NC removal here, I would also move this circle a bit closer to 01:38:304 - since the current jump makes it look like 01:38:304 - and 01:38:590 - are the same rhythm as 01:38:590 - and 01:38:876 - , when they're not. fixed


Sorry it's only up to the first kiai, but I might continue this mod at a later date. Since it is a good song.
It was a great help. Thank you very much :3. If you'd continue modding this i'd be very, very gratefull.

Anyways, good luck! ;w;7 Thanks :>
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