The song is mostly mistimed, try to get someone to help you with that
i had a taiko bn helping me with timing. Whenever i change sth in timing, always someone has a problem with it. So i'm just gonna leave it as it is.01:15:420 (1) - The second "bump" isn't looking that good, try something like this
http://puu.sh/qB6Su/a37e9c643e.jpg fixed01:16:277 (1) - Same here but now it's the first bump
i didn't want them to be the same but i guess it's better to make them symmetrical01:17:992 (5) - NC here, looks better
fixed01:21:992 (8) - Try x184|y376 for better flow
fixed01:22:563 (2,3,4) - It feels bit awkward to have small jumps like this after stuff like this 01:19:992 (2,3,4,5) -
it does, but it's the best i come up to. It was way worse :v i made it more structured, and it's the best i could do. btw look: 01:22:563 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,4) - don't know if you noticed01:38:327 (6) - Copy and mirror this 01:38:042 (5) - to there instead of the current slider
no, there are two notes. Also i want those parts to be different01:45:041 (2,3) - Really weird flow imo
imo not01:51:469 (1,2,3,4) - Try to use somewhat fixed DS for stuff like this as you really cant rely on AR. The spacing is pretty much the same between 1|2 and 3|4 but timeline wise 3|4 is twice as close as 1|2
i will work this out in the future02:00:898 (4) - You can break the combo here as you start to use different kind of sliders (this and 2 after it) so it's technically a new pattern
ill use nc02:18:276 (5) - NC
yep02:35:419 (2) - Ctrl G and move downwards
fixed02:37:991 (3) - Ctrl J for better flow
i want it to be pointed as it is02:44:562 (1) - As mentioned before, awkward "bump"
fixed02:41:134 - to 02:51:419 - . Listen in 25% speed and you will notice that you have missed a ton of notes
i was not following this rhytm instrument but i followed the melody02:53:134 (3) - NC These as they are major beats and NCs make the streams easier to see overall
02:54:848 (2) - ^
02:56:562 (2) - ^
02:58:276 (3) - ^
02:59:991 (3) - ^
03:01:705 (2) - ^
03:03:419 (2) - ^
03:05:134 (3) - ^
03:06:848 (2) - ^
fixed ^03:14:134 (2,3) - Awkward flow
fixed, i moved the reverse sliderFor patterns like this 03:15:419 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - you can NC these 03:15:991 (3,5) - (2 notes/sliders and then NC)
noo, it's a one continues set of sliders, nc's would break my vision03:22:562 (5) - x432|y164
fixed03:29:991 (4) - Ctrl G
03:30:562 (6) - ^
nah ^03:36:419 (4,7) - NC
fixed03:43:705 (1) - Mirror this to here 03:43:991 -
fixed, but i mirrored the second one03:49:705 (1,2,3,4) - Enhance this stream
no03:49:991 (5) - Mirror to 03:50:276 -
fixed03:50:848 (2) - NC
fixed03:58:276 (1) - Ctrl J
fixedNC 04:03:634 (4) - instead of 04:03:705 (1) -
fixed04:08:181 (6,7,8) - This is weird as anyone playing would think that the roundish shape continues but they are slapped with a sharp turn
fixed04:20:276 (1) - NC not needed
it is needed cuz the sv changes04:28:562 (1,2) - Really unfair DS as youy havent used anything like this earlier in the map
fixed04:40:848 (5) - NC
fixedTry to get the flow to work in these 1/3 streams, 04:43:134 (4,5,6,1) - this isn't good flow imo
fixed05:05:134 - Way too high SV for a slow part like this, the sliders should be something like this 05:08:562 (1) - (speed)
i disaggree05:18:848 (1,2) - Keep these in a line
fixedSame as before from 06:01:705 - to 06:11:991 - you seem to be missing quite alot of notes
same response, i want it to be nice relaxed part with following melody06:03:419 (1) - Too long slider
fixed06:05:134 (1) - Awkward shape
fixed06:13:705 (3) - NC These as they are major beats and NCs make the streams easier to see overall
06:14:848 (5) - ^
06:15:991 (3) - ^
06:17:134 (2) - ^
06:19:419 (4) - ^
06:20:562 (3) - ^
06:21:705 (5) - ^
06:22:848 (4) - ^
06:23:991 (2) - ^
06:26:276 (4) - ^
fixed ^^06:34:705 (2,3) - Weird flow
come on, it's not that weird06:36:562 (3,5) - NC
no06:42:848 (1,2,3,4,5) - Enhance the flow
fixed somewhat06:50:562 (4) - Ctrl G
fixed07:03:991 (3,5) - NC
07:17:705 (3,5) - ^
no