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Lady Gaga - Gypsy [Taiko]

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Kazaze
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on dimanche 28 mai 2017 at 18:50:16

Artist: Lady Gaga
Title: Gypsy
Tags: Stefani Germanotta Travelling Journey Piano Guitar Art Pop Artpop Electropop Europop Redone Madeon DJ White Shadow
BPM: 134
Filesize: 6781kb
Play Time: 04:05
Difficulties Available:
  1. Futsuu (1,9 stars, 366 notes)
  2. Kantan (1,31 stars, 275 notes)
  3. Muzukashii (2,62 stars, 538 notes)
  4. Oni (3,48 stars, 737 notes)
Download: Lady Gaga - Gypsy
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Thank you all so much!
-Tenshi-
Les W.C sont bouchées.
Remus
Hello from my queue o/

Muzukashii
  1. 01:01:619 (47,48) - no need in gap like these, imo.
  2. 01:34:529 (139,140,141,142,143,144) - try to mix vocal and music, maybe something like these
  3. 01:39:231 (154) - even if that was for making a little break - this sound is really loud, looks like need to be mapped.
  4. 02:00:052 (200) - won't be good kat here?
  5. 02:44:977 (99) - that sound is 1/6, no?
  6. 03:59:604 (143) - don?


Oni
  1. 02:24:455 (61) - looks lilke don will be good here.
  2. 02:27:141 (71) - ^ here kat, for example
  3. 02:28:037 (75) - ^
  4. 02:31:619 (90) - ^don.
  5. 02:35:201 (103) - ^
  6. 02:58:037 (146,147,148,149,150) - what do you think about this ?
  7. 03:20:089 (216) - to make stream more smoother.
  8. 03:32:067 (41,42,43) - what about k kd?
  9. 03:37:887 (67) - so about these parts. It will be sound really good if you insert notes in gaps like these, imo.
Good luck :)
Topic Starter
Kazaze

Remus wrote:

Hello from my queue o/

Muzukashii
  1. 01:01:619 (47,48) - no need in gap like these, imo. It is a way to differenciate this chorus from the others
  2. 01:34:529 (139,140,141,142,143,144) - try to mix vocal and music, maybe something like these Very nice
  3. 01:39:231 (154) - even if that was for making a little break - this sound is really loud, looks like need to be mapped. Totally! Added a d
  4. 02:00:052 (200) - won't be good kat here? Yep
  5. 02:44:977 (99) - that sound is 1/6, no? It is, I was worried about putting 1/6 in a Muzu : Added a d like in the Oni
  6. 03:59:604 (143) - don? It adds a good flow yes

Oni
  1. 02:24:455 (61) - looks lilke don will be good here. Added!
  2. 02:27:141 (71) - ^ here kat, for example ^
  3. 02:28:037 (75) - ^ ^
  4. 02:31:619 (90) - ^don. ^
  5. 02:35:201 (103) - ^ ^
  6. 02:58:037 (146,147,148,149,150) - what do you think about this ? Nice, added + a d 02:58:484 (147)
  7. 03:20:089 (216) - to make stream more smoother. Changed to k
  8. 03:32:067 (41,42,43) - what about k kd? No, focusing on the vocals here
  9. 03:37:887 (67) - so about these parts. It will be sound really good if you insert notes in gaps like these, imo. Yes it does, added too
Good luck :) Thanks! ♥
Now on to your Mod on Stan SB - Let This Go Done ✓
-Tenshi-
Yo! Quick check as requested.

[Lots of things are meh]
  1. Tags: Remove "Lady Gaga" "Gypsy" "Artpop" as they are already in the source, artist, ect..
  2. Song folder: Your mp3 must be at 192kbps, this one is too low (128kbps).
  3. Background size must be 1366x768, find a better one.
  4. Song setup: Uncheck "Widescreen support" and "Enable countdown" on every diffs.
  5. On taiko, hp must be really high on lower diffs because there are very few notes.
  6. A good spread would look like: Kantan: Hp: 8, OD: 3
    Futsuu: Hp: 7, OD: 4
    Muzu: Hp: 6 OD: 4
    Oni: Hp: 6 OD: 5
[Things i forgot]

  1. Slider velocity should be 1.40 or 1.60. As it's a slow paced map, you can go for 1.60 for muzu and oni, and 1.40 for Futsuu and Kantan.
  2. On Kantan 03:19:081 (134) - The end of your silder is unsnapped. (Aka doesn't end on a tick).
  3. On Muzukashii 03:32:514 (57) - You have 2 notes on the same tick.

blahblahblah GL

AiMod is your friend.
Topic Starter
Kazaze

-Tenshi- wrote:

Yo! Quick check as requested.

[Lots of things are meh]
  1. Tags: Remove "Lady Gaga" "Gypsy" "Artpop" as they are already in the source, artist, ect..
  2. Song folder: Your mp3 must be at 192kbps, this one is too low (128kbps).
  3. Background size must be 1366x768, find a better one.
  4. Song setup: Uncheck "Widescreen support" and "Enable countdown" on every diffs.
  5. On taiko, hp must be really high on lower diffs because there are very few notes.
  6. A good spread would look like: Kantan: Hp: 8, OD: 3
    Futsuu: Hp: 7, OD: 4
    Muzu: Hp: 6 OD: 4
    Oni: Hp: 6 OD: 5
[Things i forgot]

  1. Slider velocity should be 1.40 or 1.60. As it's a slow paced map, you can go for 1.60 for muzu and oni, and 1.40 for Futsuu and Kantan.
  2. On Kantan 03:19:081 (134) - The end of your silder is unsnapped. (Aka doesn't end on a tick).
  3. On Muzukashii 03:32:514 (57) - You have 2 notes on the same tick.

blahblahblah GL

AiMod is your friend.
Thanks a lot bro ♥
katacheh
Hi~ from M4M

Reject it if you dont like :D
Oni
00:45:052 (69) - maybe add finish same as 00:44:604 (68) -
↑if you accepted this,
00:46:395 (72), 00:46:843 (73) - add finisher too.

00:45:723 () - add d

00:57:589 (4) - add finish

01:23:111 () - maybe add a kat

01:26:246 (4) - cymbal crash here, add finish?

01:31:619 (25,26) - k k

01:36:544 (40) - change to d and add k at 01:36:768 () -

01:41:693 (58,59) - k d (to follow vocal)

01:48:858 () - add k

01:56:022 (11,12) - k d

02:00:275 (27) - k

02:27:365 (78) - k

02:30:052 (90) - k

02:32:738 () - add d
02:33:186 () - add d

03:02:962 (169) - k

03:07:887 (185,186,187) - k k d

03:09:231 (189) - k

03:14:604 () - add k to follow the sound
03:16:395 () - ^

03:39:007 () - add d to follow vocal
03:39:455 () - ^

03:41:358 (85) - change to d and add k at 03:41:470 () -

Muzu
00:43:708 (7) - k

00:45:947 (11) - k

01:01:619 - maybe add d?
01:08:783 - ^
01:19:529 - ^

03:08:783 - add d

03:46:395 (103) - move to 03:46:283 - and add d at 03:46:619 -

Futsuu
Maybe add k at 00:45:947 , 00:46:395 - and 00:46:843 (26) - change to d

02:35:649 - add d same as 02:28:484 (154) -

03:19:081 (214) - extand to 03:20:873 ?

Kantan
00:47:738 - maybe add d
00:49:977 (26) - ^
00:51:768 - add k
02:35:649 - add d
02:39:231 - add k and 02:39:678 - add d
02:43:037 - add d
02:46:395 - add k and 02:46:843 - add d
02:50:201 - add k
02:57:365 - add k
good luck~
Topic Starter
Kazaze

katacheh wrote:

Hi~ from M4M

Reject it if you dont like :D
Oni
00:45:052 (69) - maybe add finish same as 00:44:604 (68) - Very nice yes
↑if you accepted this,
00:46:395 (72), 00:46:843 (73) - add finisher too. ^

00:45:723 () - add d Added!

00:57:589 (4) - add finish Added a finisher on 00:57:589 (4) I think it sounds better

01:23:111 () - maybe add a kat Added + Added a d 01:23:783

01:26:246 (4) - cymbal crash here, add finish? Yes!

01:31:619 (25,26) - k k ^

01:36:544 (40) - change to d and add k at 01:36:768 () - ^

01:41:693 (58,59) - k d (to follow vocal) ^

01:48:858 () - add k ^

01:56:022 (11,12) - k d ^

02:00:275 (27) - k ^

02:27:365 (78) - k ^

02:30:052 (90) - k ^

02:32:738 () - add d ^
02:33:186 () - add d ^

03:02:962 (169) - k ^

03:07:887 (185,186,187) - k k d ^

03:09:231 (189) - k ^

03:14:604 () - add k to follow the sound Great added both
03:16:395 () - ^

03:39:007 () - add d to follow vocal Added both too
03:39:455 () - ^

03:41:358 (85) - change to d and add k at 03:41:470 () - Not sure about this one, to me it doesn't fit the different twist in her voice she has in this one but since it was requested before I think I'll add it

Muzu
00:43:708 (7) - k sounds great

00:45:947 (11) - k ^

01:01:619 - maybe add d? Yes!
01:08:783 - ^ ^
01:19:529 - ^ ^

03:08:783 - add d Added

03:46:395 (103) - move to 03:46:283 - and add d at 03:46:619 - Sounds really great

Futsuu
Maybe add k at 00:45:947 , 00:46:395 - and 00:46:843 (26) - change to d Yes added

02:35:649 - add d same as 02:28:484 (154) - fixed

03:19:081 (214) - extand to 03:20:873 ? Totally, I changed the SV so it changed it, it's now fixed

Kantan
00:47:738 - maybe add d Nice, added
00:49:977 (26) - ^ ^
00:51:768 - add k ^
02:35:649 - add d ^
02:39:231 - add k and 02:39:678 - add d ^
02:43:037 - add d ^
02:46:395 - add k and 02:46:843 - add d ^
02:50:201 - add k ^
02:57:365 - add k Added a d
good luck~ Thanks ♥
Lots of green here, your mod was really helpful.
Thank you so much for all these great suggestions!
rew0825
Hi from my Modding Queue

[ General]
  • About kiai time 00:57:174 move to 00:57:622, 02:08:816 move to 02:09:264, 03:22:249 move to 03:22:697.
    About OD Kantan 4>2 Futsuu 4>3.

[ Kantan]
  1. 01:34:786 (58) - remove finish sound of this note i think it's low
  2. 02:07:473 (84,85) - Delete it for consistency with first kiai
  3. 02:52:249 (133) - How about change it to k?

[ Futsuu]
  1. 01:25:383 (72,73,74) - How about change to k k D
  2. 01:34:786 (83) - remove finish
  3. 02:08:816 (123) - Change to k?
  4. 03:00:756 (190,191) - Change to k all? i heard it in high sound
  5. 03:22:249 (217) - Change to k?

[ Muzukashii]
  1. 01:11:279 (77) - Change to k? I heard it high sound
  2. 01:21:801 (108) - move to 01:22:025
  3. 01:25:383 (116,117) - How about change it to k all
  4. 01:34:786 (142) - remove finish
  5. 02:45:010 (99,100) - What??? 02:44:973 (99) - delete it
  6. 03:41:279 - Why not add note d?

[ Oni]
  1. 00:53:144 (2) - change to k
  2. 00:54:040 (1) - I think D is looks better
  3. 01:11:279 (50) - change to k
  4. 01:34:786 (35) - remove finish
  5. 02:25:607 and 02:26:055 - you can add notes
  6. 02:45:010 (127) - Delete it's not ok for me

Good luck <3
Topic Starter
Kazaze

rew0825 wrote:

Hi from my Modding Queue

[ General]
  • About kiai time 00:57:174 move to 00:57:622, 02:08:816 move to 02:09:264, 03:22:249 move to 03:22:697. Not changing it, I think it works best starting from "Tonight!"
    About OD Kantan 4>2 Futsuu 4>3. Changed to Kantan & Futsuu OD 3 (Both easy diffs)

[ Kantan]
  1. 01:34:786 (58) - remove finish sound of this note i think it's low The vocals are very loud on this note, I'm keeping the finish
  2. 02:07:473 (84,85) - Delete it for consistency with first kiai Deleted
  3. 02:52:249 (133) - How about change it to k? Yes

[ Futsuu]
  1. 01:25:383 (72,73,74) - How about change to k k D Sounds really great
  2. 01:34:786 (83) - remove finish The vocals are very loud on this note, I'm keeping the finish
  3. 02:08:816 (123) - Change to k? Changed, as well as all the Kiai times' first notes
  4. 03:00:756 (190,191) - Change to k all? i heard it in high sound Changed
  5. 03:22:249 (217) - Change to k? ^
[ Muzukashii]
  1. 01:11:279 (77) - Change to k? I heard it high sound Changed
  2. 01:21:801 (108) - move to 01:22:025 Deleting it works best
  3. 01:25:383 (116,117) - How about change it to k all Changed
  4. 01:34:786 (142) - remove finish The vocals are very loud on this note, I'm keeping the finish
  5. 02:45:010 (99,100) - What??? 02:44:973 (99) - delete it Removing it doesn't work, this sound is 1/6
  6. 03:41:279 - Why not add note d? I don't think it works
[ Oni]
  1. 00:53:144 (2) - change to k Works great
  2. 00:54:040 (1) - I think D is looks better ^
  3. 01:11:279 (50) - change to k Yes!
  4. 01:34:786 (35) - remove finish The vocals are very loud on this note, I'm keeping the finish
  5. 02:25:607 and 02:26:055 - you can add notes I didn't put notes here to differenciate from 02:29:189 (86,88)
  6. 02:45:010 (127) - Delete it's not ok for me Still 1/6, still keeping it

Good luck <3 Thank you so much ♥

Thanks a lot for the mod!
Smallwu
Hi, mod from my queue
[General]
OD3 or OD3.5 for Kantan is better
---
Open .osu file with txt
Ctrl+F "SliderMultiplier"
You can see "1.59583972976686" or "1.39583972976686"
Change them to 1.6 or 1.4 (AiMod says)
---
I think Kiai Time start at 00:57:622 - 02:09:264 - 03:22:697 are better than before
[Muzukashii]
01:04:114 (54,55,56,57) - d k k D
"k-k" Because lyric "To-night" (Their sound pitch same) | At here Singer sounds > drum sound | k can highlight D

01:34:338 (139,140,141,142,143) - d d k k d
"k-k" Because lyric "I-left" (Pitch same I think) | I don't think there need to use K

01:36:801 - Add k? Because lyric

02:15:756 (23,24,25,26) - d k k D Reason same as 01:04:114

03:29:189 (46,47,48,49) - ^ ^
[Oni]
01:04:114 (54,55,56,57) - d k k D (or d k k d) Reason same as Muzukashii

01:14:077 (62) - Move to 01:14:189 - I think follow drums here is more fit (just suggest)

01:34:786 (35) - I don't think there need to use K, try k

02:15:756 (31,32,33,34) - d k k D (or d k k d) Reason same as Muzukashii

02:23:480 - Add d? Because lyric

03:29:189 (32,33,34,35) - d k k D (or d k k d) Reason same as Muzukashii

=====
GL with Rank! >w<
Topic Starter
Kazaze

Smallwu wrote:

Hi, mod from my queue
[General]
OD3 or OD3.5 for Kantan is better OD3 already set on Kantan
---
Open .osu file with txt
Ctrl+F "SliderMultiplier"
You can see "1.59583972976686" or "1.39583972976686"
Change them to 1.6 or 1.4 (AiMod says) Fixed
---
I think Kiai Time start at 00:57:622 - 02:09:264 - 03:22:697 are better than before I still think it's better the way it is, but since it already was requested I think I'll change it
[Muzukashii]
01:04:114 (54,55,56,57) - d k k D Really nice
"k-k" Because lyric "To-night" (Their sound pitch same) | At here Singer sounds > drum sound | k can highlight D

01:34:338 (139,140,141,142,143) - d d k k d Changed to d d K k d I think the finish is a great highlight of the screamed lyrics
"k-k" Because lyric "I-left" (Pitch same I think) | I don't think there need to use K

01:36:801 - Add k? Because lyric Added

02:15:756 (23,24,25,26) - d k k D Reason same as 01:04:114 ^

03:29:189 (46,47,48,49) - ^ ^ ^
[Oni]
01:04:114 (54,55,56,57) - d k k D (or d k k d) Reason same as Muzukashii Changed to d k k D

01:14:077 (62) - Move to 01:14:189 - I think follow drums here is more fit (just suggest) I don't think it works that well

01:34:786 (35) - I don't think there need to use K, try k I'm keeping it

02:15:756 (31,32,33,34) - d k k D (or d k k d) Reason same as Muzukashii ^

02:23:480 - Add d? Because lyric Nice!

03:29:189 (32,33,34,35) - d k k D (or d k k d) Reason same as Muzukashii ^

=====
GL with Rank! >w< Thank you! ♥
Thanks for the mod! Great suggestions.
Raediaufar
hello, I'm not opening mod for taiko yet but I decided to look at this map a bit

and no kudosu

- The source should be empty. Source field must only filled with games or show that the song is associated with. If there's none, you should left it empty

- The tags should be "artpop" and not "art pop"

Others are fine, good luck!!
Topic Starter
Kazaze

Raediaufar wrote:

hello, I'm not opening mod for taiko yet but I decided to look at this map a bit Oh I'm really sorry I thought it was. That's so nice of you I really appreciate it. Looking forward for your queue to be open then!

and no kudosu

- The source should be empty. Source field must only filled with games or show that the song is associated with. If there's none, you should left it empty Fixed

- The tags should be "artpop" and not "art pop" Since Artpop is not in the source now, I will add it to the tags but won't remove "art" and "pop", it really is different

Others are fine, good luck!! Thank you ♥, hope to have the chance to obtain a mod once your queue is open
Thanks again!
iloveyou4ever
Hi M4M :)
I don't mod futsuu and kantan for most of the time...because I'm not good at modding easy difficulty
And also I glance at futsuu and kantan and they are fine!

[General]
I suggest futsuu change to od4
muzukashii to od5
oni to od6
Other things are fine :)

[Muzukashii]
00:44:637 - change to k to emphasis 00:45:085 -
01:15:309 - change to d to be consistent with 01:18:891 -
01:33:443 - low pitch,change to D
01:43:070 - If ur mapping channel is mainly vocal here,I suggest change to k because of higher pitch here
01:50:234 - ^
01:54:488 - move the green line to here,the volume starts to be lounder here but not at 01:54:040 -
01:56:055 - add k
02:03:219 - ^
02:45:010 - not good to put 1/6 at muzu,I suggest remove this
02:54:040 - 02:57:622 quite confused here...There should be vocal or the sound effect,I feel so empty here...Try to add some notes :)
03:01:204 - 03:04:786 - ^
03:11:614 - move the note on 03:11:726 - to here,the vocal sings here.
However it's quite weird to place note on off main beat in muzu...Just up to you
03:20:794 - no drum sound here,remove this
03:47:100 - 03:47:323 - reverse these two notes because of the vocal pitch
04:01:204 - change to k
04:05:234 - change to D

[Oni]
00:08:816 - I don't know what is your mapping channel here
If you map vocal,then it's fine
If you're mapping the piano,then delete this
But from this point,00:12:398 - I think you are mapping the piano
In order to make the mapping channel is clear and won't let players get confused
I suggest to delete this note in fact.

00:30:085 - add a note here
00:37:249 - ^
01:02:435 - remove this
01:11:279 - low pitch change to d
01:16:876 - This point shouldn't be empty I think,add d here would be better
01:43:070 - change to k like muzukashii
01:50:234 - ^
01:54:040 - green line again
02:18:891 - remove this note to be consistent with 02:11:726 -
02:25:607 - I think oni should be higher note density than muzu
so add notes on 02:25:607 - 02:26:055 -
02:43:070 - move the next note to here
03:19:114 - why not just simple it and change to ddddkkkkddddkkkkd? seems better :)
03:44:525 - lower pitch,change to d
03:56:055 - Reverse this and the next note

Nice song :D
But I think consistent could be improved
Wish you all the luck of ranking :D
Topic Starter
Kazaze

iloveyou4ever wrote:

Hi M4M :)
I don't mod futsuu and kantan for most of the time...because I'm not good at modding easy difficulty
And also I glance at futsuu and kantan and they are fine!

[General]
I suggest futsuu change to od4 I think ODs are fine that way, OD6 for Oni seems too high to me
muzukashii to od5
oni to od6
Other things are fine :) :3

[Muzukashii]
00:44:637 - change to k to emphasis 00:45:085 - It is the same sound as 00:43:294 (6) - so I think it works better as a d
01:15:309 - change to d to be consistent with 01:18:891 - Definitely
01:33:443 - low pitch,change to D Agreed
01:43:070 - If ur mapping channel is mainly vocal here,I suggest change to k because of higher pitch here Works very well
01:50:234 - ^ ^
01:54:488 - move the green line to here,the volume starts to be lounder here but not at 01:54:040 - Didn't even noticed that problem thank you
01:56:055 - add k Added
02:03:219 - ^ ^
02:45:010 - not good to put 1/6 at muzu,I suggest remove this 1/6 in muzu are fine if not overused and with slow bpm, so I think I'll keep it for the moment
02:54:040 - 02:57:622 quite confused here...There should be vocal or the sound effect,I feel so empty here...Try to add some notes :)
03:01:204 - 03:04:786 - ^ You're so right that part was sh*t, added somee notes and it looks nice
03:11:614 - move the note on 03:11:726 - to here,the vocal sings here. Following the same beat as 03:04:562 (135) so I won't change it
However it's quite weird to place note on off main beat in muzu...Just up to you meh
03:20:794 - no drum sound here,remove this Ok
03:47:100 - 03:47:323 - reverse these two notes because of the vocal pitch Nice
04:01:204 - change to k ^
04:05:234 - change to D Not sure about how to hitsound this one, so ok

[Oni]
00:08:816 - I don't know what is your mapping channel here
If you map vocal,then it's fine
If you're mapping the piano,then delete this
But from this point,00:12:398 - I think you are mapping the piano
In order to make the mapping channel is clear and won't let players get confused
I suggest to delete this note in fact. You're right, it was so weird out of nowhere, from 00:20:010 (20) I added notes to follow vocals

00:30:085 - add a note here Not adding a note to differenciate from 00:44:413 (76)
00:37:249 - ^ ^
01:02:435 - remove this Yep, this sound was overmapped
01:11:279 - low pitch change to d Agreed
01:16:876 - This point shouldn't be empty I think,add d here would be better Oh yeah, thanks for that, added a d
01:43:070 - change to k like muzukashii Yes
01:50:234 - ^ ^
01:54:040 - green line again Fixed
02:18:891 - remove this note to be consistent with 02:11:726 - Good
02:25:607 - I think oni should be higher note density than muzu
so add notes on 02:25:607 - 02:26:055 - I don't know why it wasn't fixed before, it was supposed to be just like the following "Gypsy Gypsy Gypsy I'm" parts so yeah
02:43:070 - move the next note to here Yeah
03:19:114 - why not just simple it and change to ddddkkkkddddkkkkd? seems better :) That's great too, changed -
03:44:525 - lower pitch,change to d yus
03:56:055 - Reverse this and the next note Works well - swapped

Nice song :D I know right! :3
But I think consistent could be improved This is what mods are for ;3
Wish you all the luck of ranking :D Thank you ♥
Thank you so much for the mod! Really helpful!
guro
Aloha Kazaze, m4m time :!:
[General]

I'm not sure if it's just me, but the offset sounds a bit off. I tried setting it to 330 instead of 309 and it seems more fitting, but I might also just be silly. However, if you find yourself adjusting the offset, keep in mind you will need to resnap the timing zones aswell.

[Kantan]

Actually looks fine to me, but
02:57:398 (136) - Are you sure you want to go for the faint vocal over the stronger drum at 02:57:622? Of course the mapping the vocals at this part works fine, but it might be a bit too cutesy for a Kantan and might throw off beginners. Nothing too serious imo, but it's worth giving it a thought (applies to the stuff further on in this section aswell).

Another thing is the consistency that seems to vary compared to the other diffs.00:00:309 (1,3) - for example is a d in all diffs except for the Kantan, in which it is a k. Of course there are more notes with the same 'problem'. Just p utting that one out.

[Futsuu]

01:10:180 (54,55) - feels a bit naked to me. You could fill it with something like

However, the exact notes would completely be up to you. k and d both seem to fit quite nicely in almost any combination.

One thing I kinda see problematic are these gaps beginning after the first kiai, for example 01:28:090 (79) - . While it's a good thing to leave some space, it feels a bit naked. That gap in particular you could fill up with something along the lines of

but you would somehow need to reduce the other gaps without the map in general getting too dense, atleast that's my view on things.

On the existing things there isn't really anything to change, I guess.

[Muzukashii]

Seems fine to me, except for 02:45:031 (99,100) - . I really recommend removing the 02:45:010 (99) - as the 1/6 seems too out of place to be possible in a Muzukashii.

[Oni]

And the Oni actually seems well done to me aswell. The only part that threw me off a bit was 03:02:771 (172,173,174,175,176,177,178,179) - , especially with the stuff on the blue ticks. The notes there really deserve the spot, but it still feels kinda weird. I assume that's just me though.

All in all it's great mapset and I hope I helped improving it further. Good luck and all that :)
Topic Starter
Kazaze

guro wrote:

Aloha Kazaze, m4m time :!:
[General]

I'm not sure if it's just me, but the offset sounds a bit off. I tried setting it to 330 instead of 309 and it seems more fitting, but I might also just be silly. However, if you find yourself adjusting the offset, keep in mind you will need to resnap the timing zones aswell. Offset changed to 330 and timing zones resnapped, sounds really better, thanks for the check

[Kantan]

Actually looks fine to me, but
02:57:398 (136) - Are you sure you want to go for the faint vocal over the stronger drum at 02:57:622? Of course the mapping the vocals at this part works fine, but it might be a bit too cutesy for a Kantan and might throw off beginners. Nothing too serious imo, but it's worth giving it a thought (applies to the stuff further on in this section aswell). You're right, this part might be tricky on lower difficulties - Fixed

Another thing is the consistency that seems to vary compared to the other diffs.00:00:309 (1,3) - for example is a d in all diffs except for the Kantan, in which it is a k. Of course there are more notes with the same 'problem'. Just p utting that one out. I'll make sure to fix this problem as much as I can

[Futsuu]

01:10:180 (54,55) - feels a bit naked to me. You could fill it with something like

However, the exact notes would completely be up to you. k and d both seem to fit quite nicely in almost any combination. Added as ks, because it is the same sound for these notes and k works just great

One thing I kinda see problematic are these gaps beginning after the first kiai, for example 01:28:090 (79) - . While it's a good thing to leave some space, it feels a bit naked. That gap in particular you could fill up with something along the lines of

but you would somehow need to reduce the other gaps without the map in general getting too dense, atleast that's my view on things.
Added this pattern, and filled slightly some gaps

On the existing things there isn't really anything to change, I guess.

[Muzukashii]

Seems fine to me, except for 02:45:031 (99,100) - . I really recommend removing the 02:45:010 (99) - as the 1/6 seems too out of place to be possible in a Muzukashii. Requested many times so yeah I don't think it has it's place in the Muzu

[Oni]

And the Oni actually seems well done to me aswell. The only part that threw me off a bit was 03:02:771 (172,173,174,175,176,177,178,179) - , especially with the stuff on the blue ticks. The notes there really deserve the spot, but it still feels kinda weird. I assume that's just me though. Feels weird to me too, even if it's fine. But I don't really see how to map this part without following the vocals

All in all it's great mapset and I hope I helped improving it further. Good luck and all that :) Yes you did help! Thank you so much! ♥
Thanks again for the mod!
Ladies Night
Hello, In response to M4M queue.
General
  • Add Electropop and Europop for genre in tags, add Hugo Leclerq or Madeon and Paul Blair or DJ White Shadow for writers in tags.

    Change Kantan's HP to 3 and Futsuu's HP to 4 and change Muzukashii's HP to 5, as Kantan and Futsuu's HP both are higher than Oni and change Muzukashii's to keep consistency.

Kantan
  • 00:12:419 (5) - change to k, so it's consistent with 00:11:076 (4) -
    00:26:747 - ^
    00:36:150 (11) - change to k, so it emphasizes the sound.
    00:37:494 - maybe add a k here to match for 00:36:150 (11) -
    00:58:538 (29) - maybe make this a d, to match 00:59:434 (30) -
    01:19:135 (43) - change to a k, to emphasizes the sound.
    01:22:270 - add a k, like the pattern at 01:20:479 (44,45) -
    01:37:494 (57) - add a k, same reason and pattern at 01:34:807 (54,55) -
    01:40:628 (60) - change to K, to emphasize sound.
    02:23:613 (99) - change to D, as it can be a big sound.
    02:34:359 (112) - change to k, for vocals.
    02:37:941 (118) - change to k, to emphasize kiai ending.
    03:11:076 (148) - change to k, like how you did for the sounds at 03:10:180 (147,149) -

Futsuu
  • 00:03:912 (2) - change to k, to emphasize lighter sound.
    00:30:330 (14) - add a k, for piano here.
    01:20:703 (70) - change to a k, for vocals here.
    01:20:927 (71) - switch to a d, for a (d,k,d) pattern.
    01:24:285 (74) - move this k, back to 01:24:061 - for the drums here.
    01:33:912 - add a d, here for the drums.
    01:38:613 (96) - move this d, back to 01:38:837 - for the drums.
    02:20:927 (151) - change d to k, for vocals.
    02:25:852 (159) - change to k, like you did here 02:28:986 (164,165) -
    02:34:359 (172) - change to k, to emphasize vocals.
    02:45:106 (184) - change to k, like you did for 02:41:524 (181,187) -
    03:01:225 (199) - change d to k, to emphasize one sound over another.
    04:02:121 (291) - change to k, for the sound here.

Muzukashii
  • 00:38:837 (1) - change k, to d to be consistent like 00:39:732 (1,2) -
    00:59:210 - add a d, like you did with 01:00:777 (45,46,47) -
    01:06:374 - ^
    01:21:822 - add a d, for drums here.
    01:30:777 (129) - change d to k, for the vocals.
    01:51:822 - add a d, for the vocals here.
    02:46:449 (100) - change to k, to emphasize sound here.
    02:52:718 (107) - change to k, to emphasize the d at 02:52:941 (108) -
    03:55:404 (130) - add a k, to continue the 1/2 beat going on.

Oni
  • 00:18:688 (19) - add a d, to keep consistent with 00:18:240 (18) - and 00:19:135 (20) -
    00:23:613 (28) - change to k, to emphasize vocals here.
    01:40:628 (54) - change to k, to emphasize sound here.
    01:46:449 - add k for the sounds here.
    01:46:897 - add k, ^
    03:54:956 (142) - change d to k, to emphasize the sound here.
Best endeavors in ranking this map set.
nyanmi-1828
Hi! sorry for delay... :o

Timing
330,461.538461538462,4,1,0,40,1,0
3906,461.538461538462,4,1,0,40,1,0
7482,454.545454545455,4,1,0,40,1,0
11004,447.761194029851,4,1,0,40,1,0

Kantan
It looks good.but
01:34:736 - Delete? I feel this finish is don't fit.
Futsuu
03:50:854 - move to 03:50:406?
03:57:123 - add d?

I think Muzu and Oni is perfect :) That's great.

Good luck~
Topic Starter
Kazaze

Voyage wrote:

Hello, In response to M4M queue.
General
  • Add Electropop and Europop for genre in tags, add Hugo Leclerq or Madeon and Paul Blair or DJ White Shadow for writers in tags.
    Added Electropop, Europop, Madeon and DJ White Shadow in tags

    Change Kantan's HP to 3 and Futsuu's HP to 4 and change Muzukashii's HP to 5, as Kantan and Futsuu's HP both are higher than Oni and change Muzukashii's to keep consistency. Aren't HP supposed to be higher on easier difficulties than harder ones?

Kantan
  • 00:12:419 (5) - change to k, so it's consistent with 00:11:076 (4) - No I think a d works better here
    00:26:747 - ^ ^
    00:36:150 (11) - change to k, so it emphasizes the sound. Done
    00:37:494 - maybe add a k here to match for 00:36:150 (11) - Nice, added
    00:58:538 (29) - maybe make this a d, to match 00:59:434 (30) - No I don't think it works that well
    01:19:135 (43) - change to a k, to emphasizes the sound. Definitely
    01:22:270 - add a k, like the pattern at 01:20:479 (44,45) - Added
    01:37:494 (57) - add a k, same reason and pattern at 01:34:807 (54,55) - ^
    01:40:628 (60) - change to K, to emphasize sound. String sound so yeah
    02:23:613 (99) - change to D, as it can be a big sound. Works fine
    02:34:359 (112) - change to k, for vocals. Done
    02:37:941 (118) - change to k, to emphasize kiai ending. ^
    03:11:076 (148) - change to k, like how you did for the sounds at 03:10:180 (147,149) - Changed 03:11:076 (155,156) - to k d

Futsuu
  • 00:03:912 (2) - change to k, to emphasize lighter sound. Changed on all diffs.
    00:30:330 (14) - add a k, for piano here. Added
    01:20:703 (70) - change to a k, for vocals here. "Took a road" (Took - a) : are at the same pitch so d and (road) : is higher so k
    01:20:927 (71) - switch to a d, for a (d,k,d) pattern. ^
    01:24:285 (74) - move this k, back to 01:24:061 - for the drums here. Added a d 01:24:509
    01:33:912 - add a d, here for the drums. Added
    01:38:613 (96) - move this d, back to 01:38:837 - for the drums. Fixed
    02:20:927 (151) - change d to k, for vocals. For the vocals? No
    02:25:852 (159) - change to k, like you did here 02:28:986 (164,165) - Fixed this part with k d k like in kantan
    02:34:359 (172) - change to k, to emphasize vocals. Ok
    02:45:106 (184) - change to k, like you did for 02:41:524 (181,187) - huh fixed
    03:01:225 (199) - change d to k, to emphasize one sound over another. Totally
    04:02:121 (291) - change to k, for the sound here. ^

Muzukashii
  • 00:38:837 (1) - change k, to d to be consistent like 00:39:732 (1,2) - Done
    00:59:210 - add a d, like you did with 01:00:777 (45,46,47) - No, it is a way to differenciate this part with the 2nd Kiai time
    01:06:374 - ^ ^
    01:21:822 - add a d, for drums here. Added
    01:30:777 (129) - change d to k, for the vocals. Done and added a d
    01:51:822 - add a d, for the vocals here. Added a k
    02:46:449 (100) - change to k, to emphasize sound here. Done
    02:52:718 (107) - change to k, to emphasize the d at 02:52:941 (108) - ^
    03:55:404 (130) - add a k, to continue the 1/2 beat going on. Added

Oni
  • 00:18:688 (19) - add a d, to keep consistent with 00:18:240 (18) - and 00:19:135 (20) - Added a k
    00:23:613 (28) - change to k, to emphasize vocals here. Done
    01:40:628 (54) - change to k, to emphasize sound here. ^
    01:46:449 - add k for the sounds here. Added
    01:46:897 - add k, ^ ^
    03:54:956 (142) - change d to k, to emphasize the sound here. Hum. I don't see it
Best endeavors in ranking this map set. Thank you ♥
Thank you for the mod!

nyanmi-1828 wrote:

Hi! sorry for delay... :o

Timing
330,461.538461538462,4,1,0,40,1,0
3906,461.538461538462,4,1,0,40,1,0
7482,454.545454545455,4,1,0,40,1,0
11004,447.761194029851,4,1,0,40,1,0
I don't get it, it seems to work for the first 3 notes, and then the offset is terrible

Kantan
It looks good.but
01:34:736 - Delete? I feel this finish is don't fit. The vocals are very loud here she's basically screaming, so I'm keeping the finish
Futsuu
03:50:854 - move to 03:50:406? No it doesn't work
03:57:123 - add d? Nope but added a d here : 03:58:091

I think Muzu and Oni is perfect :) That's great. Thank you! :3

Good luck~
Thank you for the mod!
Surono
Teh journey.....
Im gypsy gypsy gypsy gypsy gypsy Im
"I don’t speak German, but I try
Someday in Jakarta" wut, ayy lol :^)

>General
* Increasing the OD of Futsuu +0.5
* It seems spread of Muzukashii should be more adding notes, bcus some close with Futsuu and some far with Oni density

>Oni
* 00:48:464 - kat to give emphasis for this pitch?
* 00:48:688 - forget fill finisher here? the vocal are strong too, right?
* 00:50:479 - ^ the finisher its just on Muzukashii ( applied this on Futsuu and Kantan )
* 00:57:419 - it should be kat bcus is similar with 00:57:195 - this beat, like you 01:04:359 (23,24) - did here
* 01:11:300 - that high beat should be emphasized with kat, 01:10:628 - bcus here is not had that sound
* 01:11:971 - kat finisher would good to more emphasized that high flow and its to follow the similar 01:12:419 - flow sound
* 01:14:210 - too bad for ignore this snare drum, 01:14:098 - make dk 1/4 is good idea to follow the vocal and the drum imo
* 01:16:897 (75,76) - ctrl g, imo the music arrange is priority to followed and vocal its just for layering. but 01:18:016 - you can keep here as kat and 01:17:792 - keep as don. yeah that vocal are strong to follow ( 01:22:494 - same too )
* 01:25:404 (1,2,3,4) - K KdD? its make sense with the beat imo
* 01:28:538 - add kat and 01:28:762 - change to don, same 01:14:210 - reason
* 01:36:598 - change to kat, 01:36:598 (43,44) - are vocal have same power
* 01:34:807 - I think this finisher is to emphasized the vocal? if yes you should fill 01:35:031 (39,40) - these finisher too bcus its have same power
* 02:00:105 (26,27) - ctrl g, 02:00:105 (26) - this should be kat for pitch and its similar like 00:47:344 (85,86,87,88,89,90,91) - (if you 00:48:464 (90,91) - applied these on previous point)
* 02:09:061 - same reason 00:57:419 -
* 02:24:956 - kat? this good to emphasized, like you 02:27:083 (78,79,80,81) - did these but its mirror colors
* 02:28:538 - ^
* 02:31:897 - why not kat? 02:35:479 - like this
* 02:37:382 - add notes? I hear theres had a beat
* 03:07:046 (185,186,187) - dkd? 03:07:270 - I think is important to emphasized as kat
* 03:22:494 - same reason 00:57:419 -
* 03:50:703 - should be don, the sound is become drop
though I want points more but it seems your mapping based vocal, just feel too bad to ignore some beats like snare drum. its fine to ignoring some beats like kick or bass for priority the vocal, but at least you could follow the snare drum bcus its high beat on this song right? and your kiai parts are have big different structure, it looks random if you comparing with each other. try to applied neat strucuture with adding variation for one of them

>Muzukashii
* 00:00:330 - ~ 00:41:524 - add few notes? Oni diff had pattern are layering on vocal
* 00:47:344 - make ddd 1/2? on Oni had 7notes
* 00:50:703 - delete? it close with Oni density and vocal is start from 00:50:927 - here
* 00:57:419 - like on Oni
* 01:12:419 (80,81,82,83,84,85) - it looks boring. 01:13:091 - add don and 01:17:121 - add kat, density with Oni is far
* 01:19:583 - kat for snare drum
* 01:20:255 (103,109) - delete, its close with density Oni
* 01:25:404 - kat, similar 01:25:852 -
* 01:26:747 (119,120,121,122,123,124) - try to adding few notes like before
* 01:34:583 - delete and 01:35:031 (143,144) - like on Oni
* 02:09:061 - like on Oni
* 1st kiai seems good
* 03:19:135 - how about like http://puu.sh/rjBN8/435187352b.jpg since Oni had long stream, I think its supposed be applied for spread density.
like I said on General, I rarely to see 5plet 1/2. mostly of them is 3plet 1/2 though the Oni had 1/2 long pattern + 3plet stream, considering to adding more 5plet 1/2 bcus Oni had long pattern.

>Futsuu
just point some thats needed for Spread
* 00:51:822 - ddd 1/2, check muzukashii density
* 00:52:718 - kat ^
* 01:00:777 - kat, 01:02:121 - don
* 01:07:941 - don?
* 01:12:867 - ~ 01:19:135 - do something if you applied muzukashii suggestion
* 01:21:374 - 01:22:270 - kat, 01:23:165 - change to don if you like to emphasize low vocal and avoid monotone colors
* 01:27:195 - ~ 01:33:912 - if you applied muzukashii suggestion
* 03:19:135 - slider, nice!
check again on Muzukashii spread for Futsuu. if you had long pattern on Muzu, try to adding more notes on Futsuu if the density is far. thats example

>Kantan
* 03:19:135 (162) - change this slider into spinner? slider are good if its introduction on Futsuu. I just feels the spinner will fits for newplayers
nothing to say more, I think is fine but keep try to checking with Futsuu spread.

mapped long duration bcus love the song <3
beautiful, Good Luck!
Topic Starter
Kazaze
Ayy thank you for your mod, it looks really helpful and I'm sure it will be. I can't apply it right now, but it will be applied very soon, just putting your kudosu there for your fantastic contribition. (Don't want you to wait too long huh :3) Finally had time to apply it
Mod

Surono wrote:

Teh journey.....
Im gypsy gypsy gypsy gypsy gypsy Im
"I don’t speak German, but I try
Someday in Jakarta" wut, ayy lol :^) Glad you enjoyed the journey!

>General
* Increasing the OD of Futsuu +0.5 Fixed
* It seems spread of Muzukashii should be more adding notes, bcus some close with Futsuu and some far with Oni density I will take a look at this and try to harmonize it

>Oni
* 00:48:464 - kat to give emphasis for this pitch? Totally
* 00:48:688 - forget fill finisher here? the vocal are strong too, right? Fixed
* 00:50:479 - ^ the finisher its just on Muzukashii ( applied this on Futsuu and Kantan ) Added on Oni, Futsuu and Kantan
* 00:57:419 - it should be kat bcus is similar with 00:57:195 - this beat, like you 01:04:359 (23,24) - did here Changed 01:04:583 (24) - these parts to d on all diffs
* 01:11:300 - that high beat should be emphasized with kat, 01:10:628 - bcus here is not had that sound Added
* 01:11:971 - kat finisher would good to more emphasized that high flow and its to follow the similar 01:12:419 - flow sound Sounds great, added on all diffs
* 01:14:210 - too bad for ignore this snare drum, 01:14:098 - make dk 1/4 is good idea to follow the vocal and the drum imo Done
* 01:16:897 (75,76) - ctrl g, imo the music arrange is priority to followed and vocal its just for layering. but 01:18:016 - you can keep here as kat and 01:17:792 - keep as don. yeah that vocal are strong to follow ( 01:22:494 - same too ) Changed 01:16:897 (75,76) to k
* 01:25:404 (1,2,3,4) - K KdD? its make sense with the beat imo Works so well
* 01:28:538 - add kat and 01:28:762 - change to don, same 01:14:210 - reason Added
* 01:36:598 - change to kat, 01:36:598 (43,44) - are vocal have same power Fixed
* 01:34:807 - I think this finisher is to emphasized the vocal? if yes you should fill 01:35:031 (39,40) - these finisher too bcus its have same power Changed 01:35:031 (39) - to K
* 02:00:105 (26,27) - ctrl g, 02:00:105 (26) - this should be kat for pitch and its similar like 00:47:344 (85,86,87,88,89,90,91) - (if you 00:48:464 (90,91) - applied these on previous point) Changed to k d
* 02:09:061 - same reason 00:57:419 - ^
* 02:24:956 - kat? this good to emphasized, like you 02:27:083 (78,79,80,81) - did these but its mirror colors Added
* 02:28:538 - ^ ^
* 02:31:897 - why not kat? 02:35:479 - like this I'm not sure about this one
* 02:37:382 - add notes? I hear theres had a beat I don't think it fits
* 03:07:046 (185,186,187) - dkd? 03:07:270 - I think is important to emphasized as kat You're right - Changed
* 03:22:494 - same reason 00:57:419 - ^
* 03:50:703 - should be don, the sound is become drop I think it's best to keep it that way
though I want points more but it seems your mapping based vocal, just feel too bad to ignore some beats like snare drum. its fine to ignoring some beats like kick or bass for priority the vocal, but at least you could follow the snare drum bcus its high beat on this song right? and your kiai parts are have big different structure, it looks random if you comparing with each other. try to applied neat strucuture with adding variation for one of them I completly remade the first kiai time so it's more identical to the second one, it looks way better to me

>Muzukashii
* 00:00:330 - ~ 00:41:524 - add few notes? Oni diff had pattern are layering on vocal Lacked so many notes indeed
* 00:47:344 - make ddd 1/2? on Oni had 7notes Added
* 00:50:703 - delete? it close with Oni density and vocal is start from 00:50:927 - here It's a nice change
* 00:57:419 - like on Oni Like on Oni yeah yeah yeah :3
* 01:12:419 (80,81,82,83,84,85) - it looks boring. 01:13:091 - add don and 01:17:121 - add kat, density with Oni is far Totally, that pary was sh*t, so I added your suggestion and added some stuff
* 01:19:583 - kat for snare drum Changed
* 01:20:255 (103,109) - delete, its close with density Oni Ok
* 01:25:404 - kat, similar 01:25:852 - yeah
* 01:26:747 (119,120,121,122,123,124) - try to adding few notes like before Yes, added notes
* 01:34:583 - delete and 01:35:031 (143,144) - like on Oni both added
* 02:09:061 - like on Oni huhu
* 1st kiai seems good ok
* 03:19:135 - how about like http://puu.sh/rjBN8/435187352b.jpg since Oni had long stream, I think its supposed be applied for spread density. Very great suggestion, added
like I said on General, I rarely to see 5plet 1/2. mostly of them is 3plet 1/2 though the Oni had 1/2 long pattern + 3plet stream, considering to adding more 5plet 1/2 bcus Oni had long pattern
I have changed lots of little things so it's real better now
>Futsuu
just point some thats needed for Spread
* 00:51:822 - ddd 1/2, check muzukashii density Added
* 00:52:718 - kat ^ ^
* 01:00:777 - kat, 01:02:121 - don ^
* 01:07:941 - don? ^
* 01:12:867 - ~ 01:19:135 - do something if you applied muzukashii suggestion ^ Added notes
* 01:21:374 - 01:22:270 - kat, 01:23:165 - change to don if you like to emphasize low vocal and avoid monotone colors Done!
* 01:27:195 - ~ 01:33:912 - if you applied muzukashii suggestion ^
* 03:19:135 - slider, nice! ;)
check again on Muzukashii spread for Futsuu. if you had long pattern on Muzu, try to adding more notes on Futsuu if the density is far. thats example Changed, tweaked and added many things

>Kantan
* 03:19:135 (162) - change this slider into spinner? slider are good if its introduction on Futsuu. I just feels the spinner will fits for newplayers Ok, looks good to me
nothing to say more, I think is fine but keep try to checking with Futsuu spread. Then I'll add notes

mapped long duration bcus love the song <3 Yeah it's such a great song! And it's so nice of you ♥
beautiful, Good Luck! Thank you so much, it was so helpful!
Thank you so much for the Kudosu! Your support means the world to me. ♥
Your mod helped so much! Thanks again!
JessiChan
Hi! M4M request~

d Little Don
k Little Kat
D Big Don
K Big Kat

Kantan
Drop the HP drain to 2 - 4

01:14:658 (58) - k 01:15:553 (59,60) - Move this to: 01:15:106 - Here and dd Because I think it sounds better that way
01:18:240 (63,64) - Same here kdd
01:21:374 (67) - Move this to: 01:21:822 - Here and 01:22:270 (68) - Move to: 01:23:165 - Here. :3 I think it does best game there.
01:39:285 (90) - Change to d Because it is easy to get confused Kantan colors, remember that it is best to place three colors in a row, it is recommended.
01:40:628 (92) - Change to k To sound best with what I stated above you. ^
01:44:210 (95,96,97) - ctrl + g i think sound better so
01:51:374 (102,103,104) - Same ^
01:58:538 (108,109,110) - ^ and 02:00:330 (110) - Quit the finish, no loud sound is heard in this part.
02:08:389 (117) - Delete this. You will not hear anything there and it sounds better that way.
02:27:643 (143) - Move to: 02:28:091 - Here. For consistency with: 02:21:822 (134,135,136,137,138) - This part I marked you. And 02:28:538 (144) - Move to: 02:29:434 - Here. 02:30:330 (147) - Delete this. All this part well look good, do not confuse a lot to the poor who are starting to play taiko. ;)
02:34:807 (154) - Move to: 02:35:255 - Here. 02:35:703 (155) - Move to: 02:36:598 - Here and 02:37:494 (158) - Delete This, for the same. ^
02:41:524 (162) - It better be d Not to confuse.
02:48:688 (168) - ^ Same
02:55:852 (175) - ^
03:03:016 (181) - ^
03:09:285 (187) - k For the same ^
03:17:792 (197,198) - Ctrl + g is better so because not to confuse. :oops:
03:33:464 (16) - Change to d Consistency with: 03:25:404 (4,5,6) - This part.
03:41:076 (27) - Move to: 03:41:524 - Here. 03:41:971 (28) - Move to: 03:42:867 - Here. 03:43:763 (31) - Delete. Keep consistency, remember it is a low difficulty.

Futsuu
HP Drain 4-5

00:14:658 (7) - It might sound better as k
00:25:404 (15) - d
00:37:718 - Add note 00:39:509 - Too here. Consistency with: 00:28:538 (17,18,19,20) - This part.
01:07:941 (66) - k Consistency with: 01:00:330 (52,53,54) - This.
01:41:076 (131) - Delete, not is necessary
02:19:583 (190) - k
02:59:434 (244) - Quit the finish. You will not hear anything loud here.

Muzukashii
HD Drain 5

00:24:956 (31,32) - ctrl + g sound better.
01:22:718 (119) - k
01:41:971 (169,170) - ctrl + g
01:43:986 (174,175) - Same ^
I love this diff. :)

Oni
00:15:777 (18) - d
00:33:912 (62,63) - ctrl + g
01:22:941 (63) - k
02:45:031 (125) - Delete :?
03:11:412 (195) - Move to 03:11:524 - Here please...

Good Luck!
Nyan
[Futsuu]

00:37:494 - add a don
03:36:598 (301) - kat

[Oni]

01:43:762 - add a kat
01:50:927 - add a kat

★★★★★
Topic Starter
Kazaze

Nyan wrote:

[Futsuu]

00:37:494 - add a don Added
03:36:598 (301) - kat Done

[Oni]

01:43:762 - add a kat Totally
01:50:927 - add a kat ^

★★★★★ I love you ♥
Thank you so much I'm speechless I can't thank you enough for that.

JessiChan wrote:

Hi! M4M request~

d Little Don
k Little Kat
D Big Don
K Big Kat

Kantan
Drop the HP drain to 2 - 4 Hum... That's not how it works.

01:14:658 (58) - k No 01:15:553 (59,60) - Move this to: 01:15:106 - Here and dd Because I think it sounds better that way Moved the notes but didn't change the sounds
01:18:240 (63,64) - Same here kdd Added
01:21:374 (67) - Move this to: 01:21:822 - Here and 01:22:270 (68) - Move to: 01:23:165 - Here. :3 I think it does best game there. Great suggestion
01:39:285 (90) - Change to d Because it is easy to get confused Kantan colors, remember that it is best to place three colors in a row, it is recommended. Ok
01:40:628 (92) - Change to k To sound best with what I stated above you. ^ Done
01:44:210 (95,96,97) - ctrl + g i think sound better so No change here
01:51:374 (102,103,104) - Same ^ ^
01:58:538 (108,109,110) - ^ ^ and 02:00:330 (110) - Quit the finish, no loud sound is heard in this part. Fixed
02:08:389 (117) - Delete this. You will not hear anything there and it sounds better that way. There is clap sounds
02:27:643 (143) - Move to: 02:28:091 - Here. For consistency with: 02:21:822 (134,135,136,137,138) - This part I marked you. And 02:28:538 (144) - Move to: 02:29:434 - Here. 02:30:330 (147) - Delete this. All this part well look good, do not confuse a lot to the poor who are starting to play taiko. ;) No I think it's great the way it is
02:34:807 (154) - Move to: 02:35:255 - Here. 02:35:703 (155) - Move to: 02:36:598 - Here and 02:37:494 (158) - Delete This, for the same. ^ ^
02:41:524 (162) - It better be d Not to confuse. It's not in my opinion
02:48:688 (168) - ^ Same ^
02:55:852 (175) - ^ ^
03:03:016 (181) - ^ ^
03:09:285 (187) - k For the same ^ ^
03:17:792 (197,198) - Ctrl + g is better so because not to confuse. :oops: You're right
03:33:464 (16) - Change to d Consistency with: 03:25:404 (4,5,6) - This part. The vocals are very different here, so nope
03:41:076 (27) - Move to: 03:41:524 - Here. 03:41:971 (28) - Move to: 03:42:867 - Here. 03:43:763 (31) - Delete. Keep consistency, remember it is a low difficulty. No changes here neither

Futsuu
HP Drain 4-5 This is not how it works again...

00:14:658 (7) - It might sound better as k No I don't think it does
00:25:404 (15) - d Nope the piano sound is higher than 00:26:747 (16)
00:37:718 - Add note 00:39:509 - Too here. Consistency with: 00:28:538 (17,18,19,20) - This part. Hum I don't think this part needs changes
01:07:941 (66) - k Consistency with: 01:00:330 (52,53,54) - This. Nope >> 02:19:136 (190,191,192)
01:41:076 (131) - Delete, not is necessary I think it is just as necessary as 01:48:240 (141)
02:19:583 (190) - k ^ Not changing it
02:59:434 (244) - Quit the finish. You will not hear anything loud here. No

Muzukashii
HD Drain 5 Huh
00:24:956 (31,32) - ctrl + g sound better. Yeah
01:22:718 (119) - k Nope but changed 01:22:494 (118) - to k so, thanks for pointing that out
01:41:971 (169,170) - ctrl + g Nice
01:43:986 (174,175) - Same ^ Not this one
I love this diff. :) Thank you ♥

Oni
00:15:777 (18) - d Works better as a k to me
00:33:912 (62,63) - ctrl + g Totally
01:22:941 (63) - k Changed 01:22:718 (62) - to k
02:45:031 (125) - Delete :? I'm seriously considering it but I'll keep it for the moment
03:11:412 (195) - Move to 03:11:524 - Here please... Wut

Good Luck! Thanks!
Thank you so much for the mod and sorry if you waited on your kudosu.
Jonarwhal
M4M
I'll start by modding one of your difficulties, and I will continue depending on how many of my difficulties you mod.
[Oni]
  1. 00:16:673 (22,23) - map these the same, they have the same pitch,
  2. 00:20:031 (33,34) - ^
  3. 00:29:434 (50,51,52,53) - ^
  4. 00:36:598 (66,67,68,69) - ^, etc.
  5. 00:52:270 (116,117,118,119,120) - why stop the 1/4 patterns there? I would continue them until 00:54:061 - here, because this is Oni, where you can get away with that sort of thing.
  6. 01:13:315 (24,25) - same pitch (assuming you're following the vocals), map it the same
  7. 01:27:643 (10,11) - ^
  8. 01:44:210 (70,71,72) - ^
good luck~

Cont.
[Kantan]
  1. 00:00:330 (1,2,3,4,5) - Imo, it's strange that you have changed from d-k-d, in these first objects, and changed to using d twice 00:12:419 (5,6) - here. This is because the difference in the piano pitch, which is what you seem to be going by, is very strong here. In this first section, if you want to differentiate any two piano notes, I think 00:12:419 (5,6) - these would be perfect. I recommend using something like 00:00:330 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - dddkkd or dkdkkd here because it covers the pitch changes and makes this section match the next section, but a variety of things will work as long as you differentiate the crucial pitch changes:
  2. 00:07:494 (3,4) - here and 00:12:419 (5,6) - here.
  3. 00:37:494 (18,19) - / 00:30:330 (12,13) - / 00:44:658 (24,25) - Try to stay consistent with this pattern. Preferably, use the same pattern you use 01:41:971 (94,95) - here, so it can be even more consistent.
  4. 01:13:762 (57,58) - Since these two are the same in pitch, you should either make them both k or both d.
  5. 01:28:090 (76,77) - ^
  6. 01:03:016 (44,45) - / 02:14:658 (126,127,128) - / 03:26:300 (6,7,8,9,10) - Be a little more consistent with your kiai. In your second kiai, you add 02:15:106 (127) - this object, and in your third kiai, you add 03:27:195 (7) - this object. Increasing the difficulty a little is fine, but I think your 3rd kiai is significantly harder than your first. My recommendation is removing 02:15:106 (127) - this object from your 2nd and 3rd kiais. This would mean: 02:15:106 (127) - 02:22:270 (136) - 03:28:538 (9) - 03:35:703 (19) -, and maybe a few more if you want.
[Futsuu]
  1. 00:19:135 (10,11) - Switch both of these to k to differentiate from the surrounding dons.
  2. 00:30:330 (19,20) - / 00:37:494 (25,26) - same as kantan, work on your consistency.
  3. 00:51:822 (40) - switch this to k to differentiate from the surrounding dons.
  4. 01:07:494 (66,67) - / 01:00:330 (53,54) - be consistent there.
  5. 01:13:762 (79,80) - same as kantan, same pitch=same color
  6. 01:16:449 (84,85) - ^
  7. 01:20:927 (91,92) - Since you're following the vocals here, it would be a good idea to differentiate this, since the change in the vocal pitch is pretty strong. Specifically I recommend 01:20:927 (91,92,93,94,95,96) - kdkddd or kdkdkk there to differentiate all of the major pitch changes. Also, this would make it match more closely to the similar pattern 01:35:255 (121,122,123,124,125,126) - here.
  8. 01:32:344 - add something for the vocals there.
  9. 01:44:658 (136) - Switch to k because it's the same pitch as the k before it and a different pitch than the d after it.
  10. ...
Good Luck Again! :D
Topic Starter
Kazaze

Jonawaga wrote:

M4M
I'll start by modding one of your difficulties, and I will continue depending on how many of my difficulties you mod.
[Oni]
  1. 00:16:673 (22,23) - map these the same, they have the same pitch, "-Ture" is way more stressed than "Plan"
  2. 00:20:031 (33,34) - ^ 00:20:025 - Ctrl+g
  3. 00:29:434 (50,51,52,53) - ^ No, I think it works better with a k
  4. 00:36:598 (66,67,68,69) - ^, etc. ^
  5. 00:52:270 (116,117,118,119,120) - why stop the 1/4 patterns there? I would continue them until 00:54:061 - here, because this is Oni, where you can get away with that sort of thing. It's a possibility, but it would create a huge gap from the Muzu diff, so it would have it's place in an Inner Oni diff
  6. 01:13:315 (24,25) - same pitch (assuming you're following the vocals), map it the same Yes they are the same pitch but there's a loud drum sound on 01:13:315 (24) so the k is here to emphasize it
  7. 01:27:643 (10,11) - ^ Same thing here
  8. 01:44:210 (70,71,72) - ^ 01:44:210 (70) - High guitar sound = k, 01:45:106 (72) - Low guitar sound = d
good luck~

Cont.
[Kantan]
  1. 00:00:330 (1,2,3,4,5) - Imo, it's strange that you have changed from d-k-d, in these first objects, and changed to using d twice 00:12:419 (5,6) - here. This is because the difference in the piano pitch, which is what you seem to be going by, is very strong here. In this first section, if you want to differentiate any two piano notes, I think 00:12:419 (5,6) - these would be perfect. I recommend using something like 00:00:330 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - dddkkd or dkdkkd here because it covers the pitch changes and makes this section match the next section, but a variety of things will work as long as you differentiate the crucial pitch changes:
  2. 00:07:494 (3,4) - here and 00:12:419 (5,6) - here. Great suggestion but I think the way it is mapped is great for multiple reasons, so I'll keep it that way
  3. 00:37:494 (18,19) - / 00:30:330 (12,13) - / 00:44:658 (24,25) - Try to stay consistent with this pattern. Preferably, use the same pattern you use 01:41:971 (94,95) - here, so it can be even more consistent. Changed these to kd except for 00:44:658 (24,25) That is a loud drum sound, so dd
  4. 01:13:762 (57,58) - Since these two are the same in pitch, you should either make them both k or both d. You're right 01:13:762 (57) - changed to d
  5. 01:28:090 (76,77) - ^ ^
  6. 01:03:016 (44,45) - / 02:14:658 (126,127,128) - / 03:26:300 (6,7,8,9,10) - Be a little more consistent with your kiai. In your second kiai, you add 02:15:106 (127) - this object, and in your third kiai, you add 03:27:195 (7) - this object. Increasing the difficulty a little is fine, but I think your 3rd kiai is significantly harder than your first. My recommendation is removing 02:15:106 (127) - this object from your 2nd and 3rd kiais. This would mean: 02:15:106 (127) - 02:22:270 (136) - 03:28:538 (9) - 03:35:703 (19) -, and maybe a few more if you want. 02:22:270 (135,19) - Removed these from the second kiai
[Futsuu]
  1. 00:19:135 (10,11) - Switch both of these to k to differentiate from the surrounding dons. Fixed, it is that way in the Muzu so thanks for pointing that out
  2. 00:30:330 (19,20) - / 00:37:494 (25,26) - same as kantan, work on your consistency. Fixed
  3. 00:51:822 (40) - switch this to k to differentiate from the surrounding dons. Ok
  4. 01:07:494 (66,67) - / 01:00:330 (53,54) - be consistent there. Fixed
  5. 01:13:762 (79,80) - same as kantan, same pitch=same color Changed 01:13:762 (82) - to a d
  6. 01:16:449 (84,85) - ^ ^
  7. 01:20:927 (91,92) - Since you're following the vocals here, it would be a good idea to differentiate this, since the change in the vocal pitch is pretty strong. Specifically I recommend 01:20:927 (91,92,93,94,95,96) - kdkddd or kdkdkk there to differentiate all of the major pitch changes. Also, this would make it match more closely to the similar pattern 01:35:255 (121,122,123,124,125,126) - here. Great suggestion, changed to kdkddd
  8. 01:32:344 - add something for the vocals there. Added a d
  9. 01:44:658 (136) - Switch to k because it's the same pitch as the k before it and a different pitch than the d after it. Fixed all these
  10. ...
Good Luck Again! :D Thank you very much ♥
Thanks for the mod, very helpful!
Ayyri
random mod zz

[Oni]
  1. 00:09:509 - Did you skip the vocal here, since it isn't particularly prominent? I'm curious about this.
  2. 00:34:807 - Instead of leaving this awkwardly empty, like you filled up the vocal sections, you could be following the fading in background sounds here. Possibly something like this might work for you.
  3. 00:37:270 - Same thing as 00:09:509 - .
  4. 00:37:941 - Harder piano sound here, consider having less dons here by making this a kat.
  5. 00:46:897 - Would be nice to differentiate this from the over finisher, by emphasizing the harder piano note here.
  6. 00:51:374 - Personal suggestion, might be nice to have a kat here to emphasize the build up here, since you would be going between the two colors moreso.
  7. 01:10:628 - Change to k. Would be more consistent with the pattern right after it, at 01:11:300 - , and the fact that the last note does sound higher than the dons right before it.
  8. 01:16:337 - Change to k. The vocal rises here.
  9. 01:22:046 - Intentionally skipping the guitar here?
  10. 01:24:509 - / 01:24:956 - / 01:36:374 - Same as the above.
  11. 01:40:180 - Change to k. The sound here, is higher than the finisher you had at 01:39:732 - . Would be nice to differentiate between these two sounds.
  12. 01:55:852 - Change to k. The vocal rises towards the end of this phrase.
  13. 01:58:538 - Change to k. Pretty much the same as the above point, just the guitar this time.
  14. 02:24:397 - The current rhythm sounds like it's skipping some of the vocals here. Try something more like this.
  15. 02:40:180 - Would be nice to at least have a note at the start of the vocals here, since you've been following them pretty consistently throughout the entire song so far.
  16. 02:45:031 - What sound is this mapped to? It might just be me, but I don't think there's even a sound here. lol
  17. 03:09:956 - to 03:10:180 - ddk would fit nicely with the guitar strum here.
  18. 03:11:635 - Change to k. Vocal is noticeably higher than the don before it.
  19. 03:12:307 - Move to 03:12:195 - . Currently sounds like it's falling a beat too late.
  20. 03:17:568 - / 03:18:016 - / 03:18:464 - / 03:18:912 - Would suggest adding some notes in these spots, since it sounds kinda weird going from just 1/1 to a 1/4 stream at 03:19:135 - , when there is an audible buildup during the 1/1 part before it.
  21. 03:27:195 - Change to k. Vocal rises at the end here.
  22. 03:28:091 - and 03:28:538 - Intentionally skipping the guitar?
  23. 03:34:359 - Same as 03:27:195 -.
  24. 03:35:255 - and 03:35:703 - Same as 03:28:091 -.
  25. 03:46:225 - Add a k and change 03:46:337 - to d. You're currently skipping the vocal note at 03:46:225 - , which is just like the one you mapped to at 03:46:001 - .
  26. 03:58:986 - Change to k. Same reason as 03:27:195 -.
Topic Starter
Kazaze

Ayyri wrote:

random mod zz

[Oni]
  1. 00:09:509 - Did you skip the vocal here, since it isn't particularly prominent? I'm curious about this. You can see this as a note for the beginning of each words of the vocals, there's a gap here because the sound of "Wandering" begins on 00:09:285 (7) with "Wan-" and is held until 00:09:732 (8) "-dering"
  2. 00:34:807 - Instead of leaving this awkwardly empty, like you filled up the vocal sections, you could be following the fading in background sounds here. Possibly something like this might work for you. I guess your suggestion works but I don't see the problem of leaving this part empty since the song is pretty much silent here, I'm leaving it empty
  3. 00:37:270 - Same thing as 00:09:509 - Here there's a gap to differentiate from 00:43:762 (86,87,88,89,90) because it's the same vocals but lower and with lighter instrumentals, a k could be added but it would remove that contrast in my opinion
  4. 00:37:941 - Harder piano sound here, consider having less dons here by making this a kat. Agreed, this note is a k later on with 00:45:553 (92) so that would make no sense to keep it as a d
  5. 00:46:897 - Would be nice to differentiate this from the over finisher, by emphasizing the harder piano note here. Removing the finisher on 00:46:449 (95) works great in my opinion so I removed it, that way it is accentuated
  6. 00:51:374 - Personal suggestion, might be nice to have a kat here to emphasize the build up here, since you would be going between the two colors moreso. I think it works great, it emphasize the vocals as well, so I added it
  7. 01:10:628 - Change to k. Would be more consistent with the pattern right after it, at 01:11:300 - , and the fact that the last note does sound higher than the dons right before it. You're right, I'm not sure why these two patterns where different in the first place to be honest
  8. 01:16:337 - Change to k. The vocal rises here. Great suggestion, added
  9. 01:22:046 - Intentionally skipping the guitar here? Yes, I thought it would be confusing because this little part is really focused on the vocals, but you're right the guitar should be mapped here. By looking at this part closely, I realized that 01:21:822 is a very heavy drum sound and that it is not mapped too, so I added a d for the drum and a k on 01:22:046 to highlight the guitar. I think it works really great that way.
  10. 01:24:509 - / 01:24:956 - / 01:36:374 - Same as the above.
    • For 01:24:509 , I only hear a guitar sound on 01:24:285 (69) ; But there's definitely a loud drum sound on 01:24:509 so I added a d
    • You're right, 01:24:956 I added a k because the sound is pretty high and to differentiate from the previously added drum sound
    • 01:36:374 Added a k for the guitar and a d on 01:36:150 for the drum sound, pretty much like I did with 01:22:046
  11. 01:40:180 - Change to k. The sound here, is higher than the finisher you had at 01:39:732 - . Would be nice to differentiate between these two sounds. This sounds and works so well, added
  12. 01:55:852 - Change to k. The vocal rises towards the end of this phrase. Added, and 01:48:688 (5) ; 02:03:015 (36) changed to a k too following this
  13. 01:58:538 - Change to k. Pretty much the same as the above point, just the guitar this time. I wasn't really conviced by this change at first, but by playing it I think it works great so I decided to change it
  14. 02:24:397 - The current rhythm sounds like it's skipping some of the vocals here. Try something more like this. I tried my best to question that part, but in my opinion it works really great the way it is and I don't see any problems with it, I tried your suggestion but I don't think it works better so I think I'll keep it unchanged
  15. 02:40:180 - Would be nice to at least have a note at the start of the vocals here, since you've been following them pretty consistently throughout the entire song so far. I added a k here, it highlights the vocals just right
  16. 02:45:031 - What sound is this mapped to? It might just be me, but I don't think there's even a sound here. lol There's definitely a sound here, but since it was requested many times before, and because it is a bit confusing, I think I'll remove it so it's consistent with all the other difficulties
  17. 03:09:956 - to 03:10:180 - ddk would fit nicely with the guitar strum here. I added a d on 03:10:180 but I feel like adding a note on 03:10:404 is out of place, I don't know if that's just me but heh
  18. 03:11:635 - Change to k. Vocal is noticeably higher than the don before it. Fixed, it is that way with the following 03:12:643 (201,202) so yeah
  19. 03:12:307 - Move to 03:12:195 - . Currently sounds like it's falling a beat too late. You're right, that's definitely an error. Fixed
  20. 03:17:568 - / 03:18:016 - / 03:18:464 - / 03:18:912 - Would suggest adding some notes in these spots, since it sounds kinda weird going from just 1/1 to a 1/4 stream at 03:19:135 - , when there is an audible buildup during the 1/1 part before it. I added notes on each spots you mentioned, the build up was really inconsistent
  21. 03:27:195 - Change to k. Vocal rises at the end here. Nice addition
  22. 03:28:091 - and 03:28:538 - Intentionally skipping the guitar? The guitar is louder than the previous 02:21:598 (51,52,53) parts in that kiai, so I added two d notes.
  23. 03:34:359 - Same as 03:27:195 -. Changed because I applied the previous suggestion
  24. 03:35:255 - and 03:35:703 - Same as 03:28:091 -. ^
  25. 03:46:225 - Add a k and change 03:46:337 - to d. You're currently skipping the vocal note at 03:46:225 - , which is just like the one you mapped to at 03:46:001 - . That's a great suggestions, it really fits the vocals better
  26. 03:58:986 - Change to k. Same reason as 03:27:195 -. Ok
Thank you so much for your random mod, it was really helpful.
And thank you so much for the Kudosus, your support means the world to me
I hope I will have the chance of obtaining your help again some time in the future.
frukoyurdakul
Kantan
03:14:658 (192,194) - kk will sound better i think.
03:40:628 (26) - k

That's all for kantan, otherwise the map is good enough :)
Futsuu
00:57:643 (52) - maybe at this time one d note will be good.
01:19:135 (91) - d with finish.
01:43:762 - because of the slight sound d will be good.
01:59:882 (162,163) - maybe putting this notes 1/2 back will be good because of the rythm.
03:15:106 - add k.
03:16:897 - add d.

Remember these are my opinions only :) the map is good as well as Kantan.

Hope this helps ^-^
-Tenshi-
At least go for 64 star priority
Topic Starter
Kazaze

-Tenshi- wrote:

At least go for 64 star priority
Maybe I could if you gave me a hand by shooting some kudosus ❤
Topic Starter
Kazaze

frukoyurdakul wrote:

Kantan
03:14:658 (192,194) - kk will sound better i think. I don't think so, the drums sounds are very loud on these notes
03:40:628 (26) - k No, I'll keep this one identical as 02:27:195 (141,142)

That's all for kantan, otherwise the map is good enough :) Thank you!
Futsuu
00:57:643 (52) - maybe at this time one d note will be good. I don't see why the finisher should be removed here?
01:19:135 (91) - d with finish. Same loud string sound as 01:33:464 (122) so I won't change it
01:43:762 - because of the slight sound d will be good. Great suggestion, I added this in the Muzu as well
01:59:882 (162,163) - maybe putting this notes 1/2 back will be good because of the rythm. It does sound great but I don't want it to be over charged with notes
03:15:106 - add k. Great, added
03:16:897 - add d. Added too

Remember these are my opinions only :) the map is good as well as Kantan.

Hope this helps ^-^
Thanks for the mod!
IControl
iControl's M4M from Que


Futsuu



03:21:150 - add spinner till 03:22:270 - and remove the note at 03:22:270 (293) - You could also change the audio at this part to 25%. This is to follow the drum snare at 03:20:927 - also it I felt like something was needed here to fill the empty space.

04:03:688 - add d to follow vocal and piano

Oni


03:03:688 (173,174,175,176,177,178) - This vocal part sounds a bit weird to me cuz of the offset is not matched up with drum or piano at 03:04:024 (174) - and here 03:04:695 (176) - So I would suggest mapping to the piano and drums a bit more.

Here's what I would do:


03:03:352 (172) - remove
03:03:464 - add d
03:03:688 (173) - change to k
03:04:024 (174) - move to here 03:03:912 -
03:04:695 (176) - move to here 03:04:583 -
03:04:807 - add k

03:11:635 (201) - similar issue as above


03:11:635 (201) - move to here 03:11:747 -
03:12:195 (203) - move to here 03:12:307 -


Most of the difficulties were excellent! Good Luck :)
Topic Starter
Kazaze

IControl wrote:

iControl's M4M from Que


Futsuu



03:21:150 - add spinner till 03:22:270 - and remove the note at 03:22:270 (293) - You could also change the audio at this part to 25%. This is to follow the drum snare at 03:20:927 - also it I felt like something was needed here to fill the empty space. I left this part unchanged in the futsuu but I added notes in Muzu and Oni difficulties

04:03:688 - add d to follow vocal and piano Added

Oni


03:03:688 (173,174,175,176,177,178) - This vocal part sounds a bit weird to me cuz of the offset is not matched up with drum or piano at 03:04:024 (174) - and here 03:04:695 (176) - So I would suggest mapping to the piano and drums a bit more.

Here's what I would do:


03:03:352 (172) - remove
03:03:464 - add d
03:03:688 (173) - change to k
03:04:024 (174) - move to here 03:03:912 -
03:04:695 (176) - move to here 03:04:583 -
03:04:807 - add k
Great suggestion, Added all! This part really was problematic to me, and it works great now

03:11:635 (201) - similar issue as above

03:11:635 (201) - move to here 03:11:747 -
03:12:195 (203) - move to here 03:12:307 -
Man that works so well, thanks for the suggestion!

Most of the difficulties were excellent! Good Luck :) Thank you!
Thank you so much for the mod!
-Tenshi-
Gloubibourse
Shadowa Pinkman
[Muzukashii]
00:10:852 - you can add k
00:31:449 (52) - k
00:38:613 (1) - ^
00:53:837 (40,41,42) - this triplet can be kkd
01:16:897 (106) - d
01:18:912 (112,113,114) - kkd
01:35:703 (164,165,166) - kdk
02:12:643 (15,16,17) - kkd
02:23:613 (51,52) - ctrl g


[Oni]
00:31:225 (55,56) - dk
00:38:389 (71,72) - ^
00:40:180 (76,77) - ctrl g
01:04:135 (27) - d
01:14:882 (31,32) - ctrl g
01:50:703 (11,12,13,14) - kddk
02:24:061 (63) - k or finisher


i can't find too many mistakes on your map.looking good :) .you requested for kantan and futsuu,but i can't mod kantan or futsuu diffs.Good Luck :)
Topic Starter
Kazaze

zigizigiefe wrote:

[Muzukashii]
00:10:852 - you can add k No, I'm following the piano here
00:31:449 (52) - k Changed on both Muzu and Oni + changed the following note to a d
00:38:613 (1) - ^ ^
00:53:837 (40,41,42) - this triplet can be kkd It's better to keep simple patterns in Muzu such as ddd & kkk
01:16:897 (106) - d No it is a k to follow the same guitar sound as 01:16:673 (105) so I won't change it, but I changed 01:17:121 (107) to a d to highlight that
01:18:912 (112,113,114) - kkd I don't want to add complicated triplets in the Muzu
01:35:703 (164,165,166) - kdk It clearly works better as dkd because 01:35:703 (164) & 01:36:150 (166) are heavy drum sounds
02:12:643 (15,16,17) - kkd ~
02:23:613 (51,52) - ctrl g ~


[Oni]
00:31:225 (55,56) - dk Changed
00:38:389 (71,72) - ^ ^
00:40:180 (76,77) - ctrl g I don't think it's necessary to differenciate this part from the others
01:04:135 (27) - d No because I'm mapping on the exact same sound as 01:02:792 (24,25,26)
01:14:882 (31,32) - ctrl g Very great suggestion, changed!
01:50:703 (11,12,13,14) - kddk Hum I don't see why there would need a change here, please explain your suggestions
02:24:061 (63) - k or finisher I think I'll leave it this way to correspond with 02:31:225 (94)


i can't find too many mistakes on your map.looking good :) .you requested for kantan and futsuu,but i can't mod kantan or futsuu diffs.Good Luck :)
Thanks for the mod! Sorry for all the rejected points, your mod still helped a lot!
Renka
sorry late,from my quoue.

[ about]
  1. d is don note
  2. k is kat note
  3. D is Finish don note
  4. K is Finish kat note

  5. Purple is UnRankable , Please change
  6. Green is I would strongly recommend
  7. black is Pointed out that

[ General]
  1. Okay.
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[ Kantan]
  1. 00:14:210 (8) - I don't think that it is necessary for Kantan
  2. 00:19:135 (13,14) - ctrl+G? - Unify the color scheme to Futsuu
  3. 00:45:106 (35) - you forget finisher?
  4. 00:46:001 (56,57,58) - kdd? - accordance with other diff
  5. 00:58:538 (51,52) - ctrl+G? - I think that it sounds good.
  6. 01:20:479 (80,81) - ctrl+G?
  7. 01:33:464 (99) - add finisher?
  8. 01:41:971 (164,165) - It is better to align the color scheme to either.I think dk is good.(Kantan,Muzukashii - kd, Futsuu,Oni - dk)
  9. 02:10:180 (143,144) - ctrl+G?
  10. 02:39:285 (183) - d
  11. 02:53:613 (196,197) - ctrl+G?
  12. 02:59:434 (287) - D and add finisher?
  13. 03:19:135 (1) - Please unify either slider or spinner.
  14. 03:23:613 (2,3) - ctrl+G?
  15. 03:30:777 (12,13) - ^
  16. 03:47:344 (36) - move to 03:47:344 - and kdk? - same as Futsuu.
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[ Futsuu]
  1. OD = 4?
  2. 00:19:807 (18) - delete? - I think that it is better to delete it because it is a gentle part
  3. 00:20:031 (18,19) - ctrl+G? - If you adopt the above
  4. 00:28:091 (28) - same as above.
  5. 00:36:150 (40) - you forget finisher?
  6. 00:43:091 (50) - same as above.
  7. 00:54:061 (74) - K? - accordance with other diff
  8. 01:03:464 (87) - delete? - I don't think that it is necessary
  9. 01:11:300 (102) - delete? - 01:10:180 (100) - ,01:10:852 (101) - ,01:11:524 (102) - Delete to show them better.
  10. 01:18:240 (116,117,118) - kdk?
  11. 01:20:479 (80,81) - ctrl+G? - I think that this one fits the sound.
  12. 01:34:807 (150,151,152) - Kkd?
  13. 01:40:628 (162) - K? - Sound clearly higher than 01:39:732 (160) - .
  14. 01:41:971 (164,165) - It is better to align the color scheme to either.
  15. 02:04:807 (201,202,203) - ddk?
  16. 02:06:598 (204) - remove or added to Muzukashii.
  17. 02:35:255 (259) - move to 02:35:703 - and 02:33:912 (257) - add k,02:34:359 (258) - change k - To match the way of sound with Kantan.
  18. 02:46:449 (272) - k.
  19. 03:41:076 - In the same way as above
  20. 03:50:927 (382) - D?
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sorry for the delay...good luck.
Topic Starter
Kazaze

chaica wrote:

sorry late,from my quoue.

[ about]
  1. d is don note
  2. k is kat note
  3. D is Finish don note
  4. K is Finish kat note

  5. Purple is UnRankable , Please change
  6. Green is I would strongly recommend
  7. black is Pointed out that

[ General]
  1. Okay.
- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -


[ Kantan]
  1. 00:14:210 (8) - I don't think that it is necessary for Kantan I agree, removed
  2. 00:19:135 (13,14) - ctrl+G? - Unify the color scheme to Futsuu Fixed
  3. 00:45:106 (35) - you forget finisher? There's less Finisher in the Kantan difficulty, but yes I think this one is necessary, Added
  4. 00:46:001 (56,57,58) - kdd? - accordance with other diff You're right, fixed
  5. 00:58:538 (51,52) - ctrl+G? - I think that it sounds good. It sounds really great actually, changed!
  6. 01:20:479 (80,81) - ctrl+G? Fixed
  7. 01:33:464 (99) - add finisher? Added
  8. 01:41:971 (164,165) - It is better to align the color scheme to either.I think dk is good.(Kantan,Muzukashii - kd, Futsuu,Oni - dk) Unified as dk
  9. 02:10:180 (143,144) - ctrl+G? Yeah
  10. 02:39:285 (183) - d Fixed
  11. 02:53:613 (196,197) - ctrl+G? ^
  12. 02:59:434 (287) - D and add finisher? ^
  13. 03:19:135 (1) - Please unify either slider or spinner. It was suggested to me to put a Spinner in the Kantan, but I guess I'll change it back to unify with the rest of the diffs
  14. 03:23:613 (2,3) - ctrl+G? Yeah
  15. 03:30:777 (12,13) - ^ ^
  16. 03:47:344 (36) - move to 03:47:344 - and kdk? - same as Futsuu. Fixed
- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -


[ Futsuu]
  1. OD = 4? OD 3.5 looks fine to me
  2. 00:19:807 (18) - delete? - I think that it is better to delete it because it is a gentle part Yeah you're right, it came out of nowhere, removed
  3. 00:20:031 (18,19) - ctrl+G? - If you adopt the above Done
  4. 00:28:091 (28) - same as above. I think that this note is really important, I won't remove it
  5. 00:36:150 (40) - you forget finisher? Fixed
  6. 00:43:091 (50) - same as above. I don't think it fits
  7. 00:54:061 (74) - K? - accordance with other diff Fixed
  8. 01:03:464 (87) - delete? - I don't think that it is necessary I'll keep it
  9. 01:11:300 (102) - delete? - 01:10:180 (100) - ,01:10:852 (101) - ,01:11:524 (102) - Delete to show them better. No changes on that part
  10. 01:18:240 (116,117,118) - kdk? Works really great, changed
  11. 01:20:479 (80,81) - ctrl+G? - I think that this one fits the sound. Changed to kkd
  12. 01:34:807 (150,151,152) - Kkd? Fixed
  13. 01:40:628 (162) - K? - Sound clearly higher than 01:39:732 (160) - . Great addition
  14. 01:41:971 (164,165) - It is better to align the color scheme to either. I don't think so
  15. 02:04:807 (201,202,203) - ddk? Works great as it is
  16. 02:06:598 (204) - remove or added to Muzukashii. Removed in Futsuu / Added in Muzu
  17. 02:35:255 (259) - move to 02:35:703 - and 02:33:912 (257) - add k,02:34:359 (258) - change k - To match the way of sound with Kantan. I don't get it but I changed it a bit
  18. 02:46:449 (272) - k. Done
  19. 03:41:076 - In the same way as above I did some change on these parts
  20. 03:50:927 (382) - D? I'll keep it as a K
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sorry for the delay...good luck. Thanks
Thank you very much for modding, and don't worry for the delay, you helped a lot!
Topic Starter
Kazaze
I want to die
Shadowa Pinkman

Kazaze wrote:

I want to die
no pls :(
Shadowa Pinkman
Sup from my queue o/

[General]
  1. 00:00:330 - Here is the slow part,so 0,75 SV multiplier will be better :D keep increasing SV multiplier gradually 'till kiai.
[Kantan]
  1. 00:45:106 (34) - That's Kantan,so you may ignore some strong sounds.Like this: 01:25:404 (86,87) -
  2. 01:39:732 (107,108) - Did you really hear any strong sound? :oops:
    Review strong sounds and finishers,some finishers are unnecessary.Looks good.
[Futsuu]
  1. 00:42:867 (48,49,50) - Oops..1/2 triplet and finisher at the end.That's Muzukashii density.So 00:43:091 (49) - delete c:
  2. 00:57:195 (74,75,76) - Same above
  3. 01:04:359 (88,89,90) - ^
  4. 01:11:747 (103) - Beginner players will die xD If you delete it,that will be better emphasis imo
  5. 01:25:852 (129,130,131) - You got it
  6. 01:54:509 (180,181,182) - ditto
  7. 02:08:837 (206,207,208) - Let me explain them..These suggestions about finishers are just suggestion.I think it makes harder :/ But you may keep them.Otherwise,Futsuu looks good.
[Muzukashii]
  1. 01:11:300 (88,89) - This two sounds are same,why don kat? :/
  2. 01:43:762 (187) - That's just suggestion.Delete it and listen,then decide :D
  3. 01:50:927 (204) - ^
  4. 02:07:494 - Move this inherited point to 02:07:270 -.Because if you keep that,02:07:494 - That won't be 25% volume.
  5. 02:24:397 - Add a note for better vocal emphasis :3
  6. 02:31:561 - ^
  7. 02:37:941 (101) - Move inherited point to 02:37:718 -,I told the reason :D
  8. 03:19:135 (17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27) - Using 1/4 triplets seems awkward and overmapped because I couldn't hear any 1/4 sound.
[Oni]
  1. 00:11:076 (11,12) - I think these sounds are same but first note is don,second is kat,is that for variety or following vocal? c:
  2. 00:43:315 - Don't emphasis all strong sounds with finisher(except 00:43:315 - 00:46:897 (96) - 00:50:479 (108) - 00:54:061 (1) - ),seems overmapped.
  3. 01:01:113 (18) - I don't want to interfere your style because its so good :3 but you should move it to 01:00:665 - for consistency and better emphasis.
       02:12:755 (20) - ^
  4. 01:04:807 (30) - I couldn't hear any strong sound (except regular 1/1 sound)...oh wait.Actually here is measure start and second part of chorus.So keep that my bad
  5. 01:10:852 - It's not good flow I guess,when I am testing with DT,I was confused.Isn't it better:
    :arrow:
  6. 01:39:732 (55) - Oh,what the...There isn't any strong sound.Why is there a finisher? o:
  7. 02:25:404 - This section looks like muzukashii density,also there is kiai.So you should make here harder and emphasize vocal.What do you think about this:
    :arrow:
  8. 02:28:986 - Same above,follow same flow but make here different for variety(like "k kkd kkd k d").
  9. 02:30:777 - 02:37:494 - Copy previous "gypsy part" and paste here for consistency :D
  10. 03:22:718 - You shouldn't make all choruses different,unless they're not same.
  11. 03:56:635 (151,152) - This is 1/3,not 1/4.So 1/3 dk pattern is better.
Well,this map looks better.Map is fun,song is beautiful.I am waiting for rank :D
Topic Starter
Kazaze

zigizigiefe wrote:

Sup from my queue o/

[General]
  1. 00:00:330 - Here is the slow part,so 0,75 SV multiplayer will be better :D keep increasing SV multiplier gradually 'till kiai.
    I added SV changes from 00:00:330 - to the kiai time on the Oni, and it looks great! I'm not sure about adding SV changes to the other difficulties though.
[Kantan]
  1. 00:45:106 (34) - That's Kantan,so you may ignore some strong sounds.Like this: 01:25:404 (86,87) - You're totally right, removed.
  2. 01:39:732 (107,108) - Did you really hear any strong sound? :oops: Removed 01:39:732 (107) - but I think that 01:40:628 (108) - is an important one so I kept it.
    Review strong sounds and finishers,some finishers are unnecessary.Looks good.
    Removed several unnecessary finisher, thanks for the suggestion.
[Futsuu]
  1. 00:42:867 (48,49,50) - Oops..1/2 triplet and finisher at the end.That's Muzukashii density.So 00:43:091 (49) - delete c: Oops indeed, I think that the Futsuu difficulty is the most flawed - I removed all of them except for those in the Kiai times, I think they are really important to keep ; I kept this one aswell 01:26:300 (130) - because the drums are very heavy on that part.
  2. 00:57:195 (74,75,76) - Same above ^
  3. 01:04:359 (88,89,90) - ^ ^
  4. 01:11:747 (103) - Beginner players will die xD If you delete it,that will be better emphasis imo Great suggestion, that was dumb of me to put that in a Futsuu. :o
  5. 01:25:852 (129,130,131) - You got it ~
  6. 01:54:509 (180,181,182) - ditto ~
  7. 02:08:837 (206,207,208) - Let me explain them..These suggestions about finishers are just suggestion.I think it makes harder :/ But you may keep them.Otherwise,Futsuu looks good.
[Muzukashii]
  1. 01:11:300 (88,89) - This two sounds are same,why don kat? :/ There's a echoey sound, I think that the k is great for highlighting it - It also works great that way.
  2. 01:43:762 (187) - That's just suggestion.Delete it and listen,then decide :D Definitely better! Removed :3
  3. 01:50:927 (204) - ^ ^
  4. 02:07:494 - Move this inherited point to 02:07:270 -.Because if you keep that,02:07:494 - That won't be 25% volume. Wow I never noticed that error, thanks for pointing that out!
  5. 02:24:397 - Add a note for better vocal emphasis :3 Added
  6. 02:31:561 - ^ ^
  7. 02:37:941 (101) - Move inherited point to 02:37:718 -,I told the reason :D I actually had to add one in order to keep the kiai time going, but that's fixed!
  8. 03:19:135 (17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27) - Using 1/4 triplets seems awkward and overmapped because I couldn't hear any 1/4 sound. I agree it seems a bit off but removing them would create a big difference in difficulty from the Muzu to the Oni on that part - I modified that part a bit though
[Oni]
  1. 00:11:076 (11,12) - I think these sounds are same but first note is don,second is kat,is that for variety or following vocal? c: I'm following the piano tone here.
  2. 00:43:315 - Don't emphasis all strong sounds with finisher(except 00:43:315 - 00:46:897 (96) - 00:50:479 (108) - 00:54:061 (1) - ),seems overmapped. I never actually minded it but yeah that's too much finisher, I followed your suggestion!
  3. 01:01:113 (18) - I don't want to interfere your style because its so good :3 Lol Thanks :3 but you should move it to 01:00:665 - for consistency and better emphasis. DUDE that's a million times better that way! THANKS
       02:12:755 (20) - ^ ^
  4. 01:04:807 (30) - I couldn't hear any strong sound (except regular 1/1 sound)...oh wait.Actually here is measure start and second part of chorus.So keep that my bad Yes it is c:
  5. 01:10:852 - It's not good flow I guess,when I am testing with DT,I was confused.Isn't it better:
    :arrow:
    I guess I don't mind, changed.
  6. 01:39:732 (55) - Oh,what the...There isn't any strong sound.Why is there a finisher? o: [I.D.K.] Fixed
  7. 02:25:404 - This section looks like muzukashii density,also there is kiai.So you should make here harder and emphasize vocal.What do you think about this:
    :arrow:
  8. 02:28:986 - Same above,follow same flow but make here different for variety(like "k kkd kkd k d"). ^^ Applied! ^^
  9. 02:30:777 - 02:37:494 - Copy previous "gypsy part" and paste here for consistency :D Yup
  10. 03:22:718 - You shouldn't make all choruses different,unless they're not same. Only the last chorus is different in every difficulties - The last chorus as to be different but I changed it a bit in order to match the other one more.
  11. 03:56:635 (151,152) - This is 1/3,not 1/4.So 1/3 dk pattern is better. I agree, but isn't it a bit confusing? Meh it works great
Well,this map looks better.Map is fun,song is beautiful.I am waiting for rank :D Thank you so much again for the support!
Thank you for modding!
Your mod was really really helpful!
Emonal
hi from m4m o/

Mod
[Kantan]
00:00:330 (1) - this sounds higher than 00:03:912 (2) - so I suggest u chaange 00:00:330 (1) - to k and change 00:03:912 (2) - to d

00:08:837 (4,5) - u follow the piano in this part so removing the two notes which reflect the vocals is better

00:15:553 (9,10) - ^

00:19:135 (12,13) - ^

00:23:165 (15,16) - ^

00:17:792 - add note cuz piano

00:33:464 (24,25) - 25 sounds heavier than 24, so u can change 24 to k and change 25 to d or only change 25 to d

00:40:628 (30,31) - ^

00:46:001 (35) - remove this to make 00:46:449 (36,37) - and 00:44:658 (33,34) - more consistent

00:47:792 (38,39) - change 38 to k and change 39 to d cuz there's a big white on 39 cuz sounds on big white are usually bigger than sounds on small white

00:54:061 (47) - change to d

01:34:807 (99,100) - suddenly follow the vocal?:s

02:57:419 (200) - ^ and move to big white

03:04:583 (207) - ^

03:40:628 (26,27,28,29,30,31,32) - rhythem here is the same with 03:37:046 (21,22,23,24,25) - I think the second pattern is better for newbie player

[Futsu]
00:28:538 (28,29) - change 29 to d

00:29:882 - add a note cuz u follow the vocal and piano in this part

00:35:703 (38,39) - change 38 to k and change 39 to d

00:54:061 (73) - d

01:19:135 (116) - d


00:32:568 (35,36,37) - these three piano sounds gradually become heavier, so at least the 37 should be d

01:51:822 (175) - remove cuz u follow the instrument here

02:51:822 (275,276) - the two notes are instrument sounds. u follow instrument before the two notes and then u change to follow vocal after the two notes, so I suggest u to remove the two


02:59:434 (285) - ^

03:04:583 (293) - move to big white in order to following the vocal

that's all

gl :)
-Tenshi-
Star priority looks like a fair system and works real good.
Topic Starter
Kazaze

Emonal wrote:

hi from m4m o/

Mod
[Kantan]
00:00:330 (1) - this sounds higher than 00:03:912 (2) - so I suggest u chaange 00:00:330 (1) - to k and change 00:03:912 (2) - to d I guess you're right but I really do prefer the way it is, I think it works fine

00:08:837 (4,5) - u follow the piano in this part so removing the two notes which reflect the vocals is better I like to mix the two and I don't think that's a problem - I modified this part a bit but kept the same mapping scheme

00:15:553 (9,10) - ^

00:19:135 (12,13) - ^

00:23:165 (15,16) - ^

00:17:792 - add note cuz piano The piano already is mapped with 00:17:568 (12) - I think that would be too dense for a Kantan

00:33:464 (24,25) - 25 sounds heavier than 24, so u can change 24 to k and change 25 to d or only change 25 to d I agree but here I'm following the pitch so I don't think a change is necessary

00:40:628 (30,31) - ^

00:46:001 (35) - remove this to make 00:46:449 (36,37) - and 00:44:658 (33,34) - more consistent Good suggestion but I think I'll keep that note to avoid being too repetitive

00:47:792 (38,39) - change 38 to k and change 39 to d cuz there's a big white on 39 cuz sounds on big white are usually bigger than sounds on small white Following the pitch here

00:54:061 (47) - change to d Changed to D

01:34:807 (99,100) - suddenly follow the vocal?:s Doesn't it work fine to you? :3

02:57:419 (200) - ^ and move to big white It's an option yes, it can throw new players off, but here I think it's important to the beat

03:04:583 (207) - ^

03:40:628 (26,27,28,29,30,31,32) - rhythem here is the same with 03:37:046 (21,22,23,24,25) - I think the second pattern is better for newbie player I might consider unifying these parts, I actually like these variations

[Futsu]
00:28:538 (28,29) - change 29 to d The guitar strum is way too high pitched and proeminent to be ignored in my opinion

00:29:882 - add a note cuz u follow the vocal and piano in this part I'm not sure about this actually, 00:29:434 (30) - is already here to highlight the vocals and I don't want to overcharge that part

00:35:703 (38,39) - change 38 to k and change 39 to d Guitar strum again

00:54:061 (73) - d changed to a D

01:19:135 (116) - d This note changed multiple times but I think I'm now confident that it should follow the guitar / be k


00:32:568 (35,36,37) - these three piano sounds gradually become heavier, so at least the 37 should be d It actually goes "High - Low - High" (At least that's what my poorly trained ear hears)

01:51:822 (175) - remove cuz u follow the instrument here Hm?

02:51:822 (275,276) - the two notes are instrument sounds. u follow instrument before the two notes and then u change to follow vocal after the two notes, so I suggest u to remove the two I don't see why I should change that part actually


02:59:434 (285) - ^ This drum sound is really important in my opinion

03:04:583 (293) - move to big white in order to following the vocal Great suggestion, conflicting as well because that's something that changed many time - I'll leave it as so for the moment but heh.

that's all

gl :)
Thanks a lot for modding!
Sorry for all the rejected suggestions.

-Tenshi- wrote:

Star priority looks like a fair system and works real good.
"Priority" - The only priority is circle-jerking with your BN friends.
snowball112
Heya, random mod, only looking at oni for now.

General

One of the main things that bothers me is the vocal mapping in the beginning, mainly that before 00:28:986 - . This makes the note density too high, even though the part before 00:28:986 - is calmer, I'd suggest you just stick to the instruments before this point because I feel like this would be more beneficial for the intro. For example:
  1. in the Kantan: 00:15:553 (9,10) - remove, and remove 00:08:837 (4,5) - as well. What's the point of following vocals only when you combine vocal+instrument really nicely later like after 00:30:330 - ?
  2. Oni especially the density contrast feels strange to me with patterns like at 00:15:330 - , why is this mapped more intensely than 00:45:553 - for example?
I'd suggest you just use 00:28:986 - as a marker from where to increase the density.

Oni
  1. Any specific reason why 00:46:897 - is a finish and stuff like 00:44:658 (90,91) - isn't? I'd suggest you also change 00:47:792 (99,103) - to D and maybe also remove the notes from both 00:48:016 - and 00:49:807, I think this looks neater.
  2. You can also add a k on 00:46:225 - , would be neat to have 2 5-note patterns followed by 2 3-note patterns if you applied the above suggestion.
  3. The part from 00:52:270 - to 00:53:837 - feels strange to me because it is mapped opposite to what the music suggests. The intensity goes up, so either move 00:52:382 - to 00:53:277 - or add a k on 00:53:277 - to represent this, a 5-note towards the end of this section would make more sense imo.
  4. You can remove the note from 00:59:434 - , or move it to 00:59:658, makes more sense to follow the vocal like this because the instrument sound on 00:59:434 - is nowhere near as strong as on 01:01:225. Personally, I find you could also remove 01:00:330 - and fill out 01:01:897 - like this], cursor on 01:00:777 - . I feel like this would fit the tempo of the song nicely. Similarly applies to other kiai sections.
  5. I think you can add a k on 01:09:509 - and change 01:09:956 - to d, I think it would be better if you emphasise the stronger piano on 01:09:509 - with a k and then leave 01:09:956 - as d for contrast to the high sound on 01:10:180 - .
  6. Pretty optional, but I think 01:10:628 - could be d as the pitch in that pattern goes from high to low.
  7. K on 01:26:300 - would be nice to differentiate in cymbal pitch to the 2 finishers before this one.
  8. It would be nice if you move 01:13:762 - to 01:13:986 - and perhaps delete 01:14:098 - , the 1/1 break fitting to the strong piano would sound much better imo.
  9. I think you can change 01:36:822 - to d and remove 01:37:046 - , the continuous pattern doesn't really emphasize anything.
  10. 01:29:882 - I think this should not be a finish when you emphasize this kind of piano using a triple before. Same with 01:33:464 - .
  11. 02:00:776 (28,29,30,31) - shouldn't this be kd dk? Better combination of vocal+instrument that way imo.
  12. Similar to the intro, I feel like the calm part from 01:40:628 - could lose a few notes.
  13. I'm not convinced that 01:55:404 - d ddk d k d k is the best option here, I think you can try this, cursor on 01:55:852 - . Otherwise you use too much k that messes up the emphasis, eg. if you space 01:57:195 - as 1/1 for the clap, 01:56:747 - should be d to actually contrast the sound. Similar with the pattern at 02:02:568 - .
  14. I think using 1/4 in the calm part at 02:52:941 - and 03:00:106 - is not good, the song is relatively calm. The buildup would be much better if you save the 1/4 for after 03:06:598 - when the 1/4 guitar starts from 03:06:598 - .
The other thing you may want to look over again is the part from 01:12:419 - until 01:40:628 - especially, the way you switch to and from vocals feels kind of sudden at times in my opinion..

Good luck
Shadowa Pinkman
Little suggestions for Oni,no kd

01:27:979 - Try to add don for emphasizing vocal,why not? :3
01:44:882 - 1/2 triplet would be better emphasis for here,try it and make your choice :D
01:52:046 - Same above
02:06:150 (46,47) - Delete these notes imo because there isn't music sound,no need to follow vocal for here
03:03:352 - A doublet is better according to vocal,you may follow "dk-d-k" flow
03:11:747 (209) - Vocal sound is here:03:11:635 -.Also 03:12:307 (211) - 03:12:195 -
03:21:374 (250,251) - Following vocal might be unnecessary for here,but you may keep it if you want :3

Welp,looks good.Just wait for BNs ^^
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