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>General* Increasing the OD of Futsuu +0.5
* It seems spread of Muzukashii should be more adding notes, bcus some close with Futsuu and some far with Oni density
>Oni* 00:48:464 - kat to give emphasis for this pitch?
* 00:48:688 - forget fill finisher here? the vocal are strong too, right?
* 00:50:479 - ^ the finisher its just on Muzukashii ( applied this on Futsuu and Kantan )
* 00:57:419 - it should be kat bcus is similar with 00:57:195 - this beat, like you 01:04:359 (23,24) - did here
* 01:11:300 - that high beat should be emphasized with kat, 01:10:628 - bcus here is not had that sound
* 01:11:971 - kat finisher would good to more emphasized that high flow and its to follow the similar 01:12:419 - flow sound
* 01:14:210 - too bad for ignore this snare drum, 01:14:098 - make dk 1/4 is good idea to follow the vocal and the drum imo
* 01:16:897 (75,76) - ctrl g, imo the music arrange is priority to followed and vocal its just for layering. but 01:18:016 - you can keep here as kat and 01:17:792 - keep as don. yeah that vocal are strong to follow ( 01:22:494 - same too )
* 01:25:404 (1,2,3,4) - K KdD? its make sense with the beat imo
* 01:28:538 - add kat and 01:28:762 - change to don, same 01:14:210 - reason
* 01:36:598 - change to kat, 01:36:598 (43,44) - are vocal have same power
* 01:34:807 - I think this finisher is to emphasized the vocal? if yes you should fill 01:35:031 (39,40) - these finisher too bcus its have same power
* 02:00:105 (26,27) - ctrl g, 02:00:105 (26) - this should be kat for pitch and its similar like 00:47:344 (85,86,87,88,89,90,91) - (if you 00:48:464 (90,91) - applied these on previous point)
* 02:09:061 - same reason 00:57:419 -
* 02:24:956 - kat? this good to emphasized, like you 02:27:083 (78,79,80,81) - did these but its mirror colors
* 02:28:538 - ^
* 02:31:897 - why not kat? 02:35:479 - like this
* 02:37:382 - add notes? I hear theres had a beat
* 03:07:046 (185,186,187) - dkd? 03:07:270 - I think is important to emphasized as kat
* 03:22:494 - same reason 00:57:419 -
* 03:50:703 - should be don, the sound is become drop
though I want points more but it seems your mapping based vocal, just feel too bad to ignore some beats like snare drum. its fine to ignoring some beats like kick or bass for priority the vocal, but at least you could follow the snare drum bcus its high beat on this song right? and your kiai parts are have big different structure, it looks random if you comparing with each other. try to applied neat strucuture with adding variation for one of them
>Muzukashii* 00:00:330 - ~ 00:41:524 - add few notes? Oni diff had pattern are layering on vocal
* 00:47:344 - make ddd 1/2? on Oni had 7notes
* 00:50:703 - delete? it close with Oni density and vocal is start from 00:50:927 - here
* 00:57:419 - like on Oni
* 01:12:419 (80,81,82,83,84,85) - it looks boring. 01:13:091 - add don and 01:17:121 - add kat, density with Oni is far
* 01:19:583 - kat for snare drum
* 01:20:255 (103,109) - delete, its close with density Oni
* 01:25:404 - kat, similar 01:25:852 -
* 01:26:747 (119,120,121,122,123,124) - try to adding few notes like before
* 01:34:583 - delete and 01:35:031 (143,144) - like on Oni
* 02:09:061 - like on Oni
* 1st kiai seems good
* 03:19:135 - how about like
http://puu.sh/rjBN8/435187352b.jpg since Oni had long stream, I think its supposed be applied for spread density.
like I said on General, I rarely to see 5plet 1/2. mostly of them is 3plet 1/2 though the Oni had 1/2 long pattern + 3plet stream, considering to adding more 5plet 1/2 bcus Oni had long pattern.
>Futsuujust point some thats needed for Spread
* 00:51:822 - ddd 1/2, check muzukashii density
* 00:52:718 - kat ^
* 01:00:777 - kat, 01:02:121 - don
* 01:07:941 - don?
* 01:12:867 - ~ 01:19:135 - do something if you applied muzukashii suggestion
* 01:21:374 - 01:22:270 - kat, 01:23:165 - change to don if you like to emphasize low vocal and avoid monotone colors
* 01:27:195 - ~ 01:33:912 - if you applied muzukashii suggestion
* 03:19:135 - slider, nice!
check again on Muzukashii spread for Futsuu. if you had long pattern on Muzu, try to adding more notes on Futsuu if the density is far. thats example
>Kantan* 03:19:135 (162) - change this slider into spinner? slider are good if its introduction on Futsuu. I just feels the spinner will fits for newplayers
nothing to say more, I think is fine but keep try to checking with Futsuu spread.
mapped long duration bcus love the song <3
beautiful, Good Luck!