Aloha Kazaze, m4m time
All in all it's great mapset and I hope I helped improving it further. Good luck and all that
[General]
I'm not sure if it's just me, but the offset sounds a bit off. I tried setting it to 330 instead of 309 and it seems more fitting, but I might also just be silly. However, if you find yourself adjusting the offset, keep in mind you will need to resnap the timing zones aswell.
[Kantan]
Actually looks fine to me, but
02:57:398 (136) - Are you sure you want to go for the faint vocal over the stronger drum at 02:57:622? Of course the mapping the vocals at this part works fine, but it might be a bit too cutesy for a Kantan and might throw off beginners. Nothing too serious imo, but it's worth giving it a thought (applies to the stuff further on in this section aswell).
Another thing is the consistency that seems to vary compared to the other diffs.00:00:309 (1,3) - for example is a d in all diffs except for the Kantan, in which it is a k. Of course there are more notes with the same 'problem'. Just p utting that one out.
[Futsuu]
01:10:180 (54,55) - feels a bit naked to me. You could fill it with something like
However, the exact notes would completely be up to you. k and d both seem to fit quite nicely in almost any combination.
One thing I kinda see problematic are these gaps beginning after the first kiai, for example 01:28:090 (79) - . While it's a good thing to leave some space, it feels a bit naked. That gap in particular you could fill up with something along the lines of
but you would somehow need to reduce the other gaps without the map in general getting too dense, atleast that's my view on things.
On the existing things there isn't really anything to change, I guess.
[Muzukashii]
Seems fine to me, except for 02:45:031 (99,100) - . I really recommend removing the 02:45:010 (99) - as the 1/6 seems too out of place to be possible in a Muzukashii.
[Oni]
And the Oni actually seems well done to me aswell. The only part that threw me off a bit was 03:02:771 (172,173,174,175,176,177,178,179) - , especially with the stuff on the blue ticks. The notes there really deserve the spot, but it still feels kinda weird. I assume that's just me though.
I'm not sure if it's just me, but the offset sounds a bit off. I tried setting it to 330 instead of 309 and it seems more fitting, but I might also just be silly. However, if you find yourself adjusting the offset, keep in mind you will need to resnap the timing zones aswell.
[Kantan]
Actually looks fine to me, but
02:57:398 (136) - Are you sure you want to go for the faint vocal over the stronger drum at 02:57:622? Of course the mapping the vocals at this part works fine, but it might be a bit too cutesy for a Kantan and might throw off beginners. Nothing too serious imo, but it's worth giving it a thought (applies to the stuff further on in this section aswell).
Another thing is the consistency that seems to vary compared to the other diffs.00:00:309 (1,3) - for example is a d in all diffs except for the Kantan, in which it is a k. Of course there are more notes with the same 'problem'. Just p utting that one out.
[Futsuu]
01:10:180 (54,55) - feels a bit naked to me. You could fill it with something like
However, the exact notes would completely be up to you. k and d both seem to fit quite nicely in almost any combination.
One thing I kinda see problematic are these gaps beginning after the first kiai, for example 01:28:090 (79) - . While it's a good thing to leave some space, it feels a bit naked. That gap in particular you could fill up with something along the lines of
but you would somehow need to reduce the other gaps without the map in general getting too dense, atleast that's my view on things.
On the existing things there isn't really anything to change, I guess.
[Muzukashii]
Seems fine to me, except for 02:45:031 (99,100) - . I really recommend removing the 02:45:010 (99) - as the 1/6 seems too out of place to be possible in a Muzukashii.
[Oni]
And the Oni actually seems well done to me aswell. The only part that threw me off a bit was 03:02:771 (172,173,174,175,176,177,178,179) - , especially with the stuff on the blue ticks. The notes there really deserve the spot, but it still feels kinda weird. I assume that's just me though.
All in all it's great mapset and I hope I helped improving it further. Good luck and all that