Golden City Factory - Twilight Chronicle ~ I am Sister · forum

Patchouli

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Patchouli 2011-01-28T05:20:53+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2011年2月26日 at 0:40:45

Artist: Golden City Factory
Title: Twilight Chronicle ~ I am Sister
Source: Touhou
Tags: Frandle The Embodiment Of Scarlet Devil Mayuu U. N. Owen Was Her? Koumakyou Holoaz
BPM: 139
Filesize: 8555kb
Play Time: 03:55
Difficulties Available:

Easy (2.83 stars, 280 notes)
Holo (4.6 stars, 395 notes)
Lunatic (4.99 stars, 661 notes)

Download: Golden City Factory - Twilight Chronicle ~ I am Sister
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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22,Feb,2011
Title changed! Please,ReDL!

-GUEST-
Holoaz (Hard Diff)

enjoy

-MOD&HELP-
quintitem
KanaRin
Tenshi-nyan
KSHR
Leorda
Sakura Hana
orioncomet

thank a lot!XD

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Suzully

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Orgol

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1st.... 3rd

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Holoaz

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Holoaz 2011-01-28T05:23:28+00:00

good luck

Edit : Hard upload

Download: Golden City Factory - Twilight Chronicle ~ I am Sisterht (Patchouli) [Holo].osu

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Patchouli

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star thx all!XD

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曲はかっこいいいいです～
えと、僕は太鼓マプを製する良いですか？＞　＜

☆三

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Patchouli

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Patchouli 2011-02-01T18:35:57+00:00

stra thx all!

OnosakiHito wrote:
曲はかっこいいいいです～
えと、僕は太鼓マプを製する良いですか？＞　＜

☆三

I'm sorry,Please some other time!

I'm very poor English...orz

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おお・・・分かった、でも受け答えをありがとうございます！
ま、ま、英語は良いです。僕の日本語は良いません。ｗｗ
またね！

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PEPOTTI 2011-02-05T15:19:00+00:00

nice map~

DeadAlready

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star~ >w</

SPOILER

hmm just advice, change lead-in in all diffs to 2~3 seconds? 1 second seems still a little fast too >< and...

[Easy]
eh... this kiai time seems a little...long? lol
stop and start the kiai time like [Lunatic] maybe better? xD

[Holo]
please change offset to 175 and change other red lines to green lines lol
(this maybe because of editor error...lol please turn them back xD)
and final don't forgot to resnap all notes xD

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nice~~ :3

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KanaRin

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KanaRin 2011-02-11T10:11:48+00:00

おＫ！
Mod start!
ah,first
Seem like it have not use SB.
So, del the osb in the map file~

[Easy]
00:20:894 - Maybe finish change to whiste? XDDD It's just my suggestion.
If you don't change, it's fine too.
00:47:657 (2) - Whiste here, 00:48:088 not need XD.
00:51:110 - Clap?
00:52:836 (4) - ^?
Good Easy diff dayo!

[Holo]
00:21:757 (3) - New combo?
00:58:016 (x) - add a note here? XD
My suggestion~: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/56532
01:21:326 (3) - New combo da~~
02:16:146 (2) - ^
^ If you do this, then
02:17:872 (3) - new combo
The New combo is follow in white line XD
02:25:210 (4) - New combo too~
02:32:117 (4) - ^
02:35:570 (5) - ^
02:59:743 (5) - ^
03:03:196 (4) - ^
03:06:649 (5) - new combo
03:13:556 (5) - ^
03:17:009 (5) - ^
03:20:462 (1) - ^

PS. The new combo mod is some suggestion , some need.
Feel free to ignore the newcombo mod.
BTW, nice map です～～～

[Lunatic]
すごい！！！！！！！！
Nice map here>w<

Star!>w<

Patchouli

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Patchouli 2011-02-12T06:53:07+00:00

quintitem wrote:
star~ >w</

SPOILER
hmm just advice, change lead-in in all diffs to 2~3 seconds? 1 second seems still a little fast too >< and...

[Easy]
eh... this kiai time seems a little...long? lol
stop and start the kiai time like [Lunatic] maybe better? xD

[Holo]
please change offset to 175 and change other red lines to green lines lol
(this maybe because of editor error...lol please turn them back xD)
and final don't forgot to resnap all notes xD

OK!All Fixed!
thank you for advice!XD

KanaRin wrote:
おＫ！
Mod start!
ah,first
Seem like it have not use SB.
So, del the osb in the map file~

[Easy]
00:20:894 - Maybe finish change to whiste? XDDD It's just my suggestion.
If you don't change, it's fine too.
00:47:657 (2) - Whiste here, 00:48:088 not need XD.
00:51:110 - Clap?
00:52:836 (4) - ^?
Good Easy diff dayo!

[Holo]
00:21:757 (3) - New combo?
00:58:016 (x) - add a note here? XD
My suggestion~: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/56532
01:21:326 (3) - New combo da~~
02:16:146 (2) - ^
^ If you do this, then
02:17:872 (3) - new combo
The New combo is follow in white line XD
02:25:210 (4) - New combo too~
02:32:117 (4) - ^
02:35:570 (5) - ^
02:59:743 (5) - ^
03:03:196 (4) - ^
03:06:649 (5) - new combo
03:13:556 (5) - ^
03:17:009 (5) - ^
03:20:462 (1) - ^

PS. The new combo mod is some suggestion , some need.
Feel free to ignore the newcombo mod.
BTW, nice map です～～～

[Lunatic]
すごい！！！！！！！！
Nice map here>w<

Star!>w<

Easy&Holo diff All fixed!
thank you very much~<3 XDD

dNextGen

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dNextGen 2011-02-12T06:57:31+00:00

woo GCF

Hamuko

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Hamuko 2011-02-14T18:04:31+00:00

Nice map, i love the Lunatic :33

Patchouli

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Patchouli 2011-02-14T19:12:06+00:00

star thx all!

Tenshi-nyan

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Tenshi-nyan 2011-02-15T18:31:16+00:00

General
Resize all BG pics to 1024x768

Lunatic
00:45:282 (1,2,3) - replace claps with whistles
00:50:246 (1) - a normal finish here
00:50:894 (2) - remove clap in begin
01:07:081 (8) - hauu... don't like stack under stream.
02:43:340 (1,2,3,4) - replace claps with whistles
02:51:110 (7) - add finish?
03:04:059 (1,2,3,4) - replace claps with soft whitsles
03:09:455 (6,7,1) - 1 grid right :3
03:11:182 (1,2,3) - whitsles
03:17:872 (1,2,3,4) - ^
03:50:678 (5) - replace with a no-repeat slider?
03:54:988 - add note + NC + soft finish?

Holo
No Kiai? Eh.. it's ok though, Kiai dosn't really fit the song
00:26:074 (7) - curve this slider better around (6) or 1 grid up
(hitsound suggestions)
00:57:369 (2) - clap to end
00:58:232 (4) - ^
00:59:311 (2) - ^
01:00:175 (5) - clap
or in other words, replace those whitsles with claps for this part. sounds better IMO... goes for the other 2 diffs too if ya don't mind ;3
01:01:469 - add note
03:34:275 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 1 grid down :3
03:43:340 (7) - add repeat
03:43:987 (8) - remove this slider

Easy
00:05:786 (4) - start at 00:05:570 , end at current position
00:12:692 (4) - ^
01:09:239 (1,1,1,1) - jumps? no way, this is an easy
01:12:045 (1) - start at 01:11:829
01:24:779 (1,1,1,1,1) - no go for easy.
01:36:433 (2,3) - replace with a single repeat slider
01:40:750 (4,5) - ^
01:58:016 (2,3,4) - hmm... better don't stack this under the slider.
02:02:764 (1) - bad spacing
03:25:642 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - owww this is too hard for an Easy IMO.

well... yeah. nice map and stuff :O

star'd

Patchouli

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Patchouli 2011-02-15T19:13:52+00:00

Tenshi-nyan wrote:
General
Resize all BG pics to 1024x768Fixed!

Lunatic
00:45:282 (1,2,3) - replace claps with whistles done
00:50:246 (1) - a normal finish here done
00:50:894 (2) - remove clap in begin done
01:07:081 (8) - hauu... don't like stack under stream.Fixed
02:43:340 (1,2,3,4) - replace claps with whistles done
02:51:110 (7) - add finish? ok~
03:04:059 (1,2,3,4) - replace claps with soft whitsles done
03:09:455 (6,7,1) - 1 grid right :3 Fixed
03:11:182 (1,2,3) - whitsles done
03:17:872 (1,2,3,4) - ^ done
03:50:678 (5) - replace with a no-repeat slider? No
03:54:988 - add note + NC + soft finish? ok~

Holo
No Kiai? Eh.. it's ok though, Kiai dosn't really fit the song
00:26:074 (7) - curve this slider better around (6) or 1 grid up
(hitsound suggestions)
00:57:369 (2) - clap to end
00:58:232 (4) - ^
00:59:311 (2) - ^
01:00:175 (5) - clap
or in other words, replace those whitsles with claps for this part. sounds better IMO... goes for the other 2 diffs too if ya don't mind ;3
01:01:469 - add note
03:34:275 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 1 grid down :3
03:43:340 (7) - add repeat
03:43:987 (8) - remove this slider

Easy
00:05:786 (4) - start at 00:05:570 , end at current position ok
00:12:692 (4) - ^ ok
01:09:239 (1,1,1,1) - jumps? no way, this is an easyNo
01:12:045 (1) - start at 01:11:829 ok
01:24:779 (1,1,1,1,1) - no go for easy. No
01:36:433 (2,3) - replace with a single repeat slider fixed
01:40:750 (4,5) - ^ fixed
01:58:016 (2,3,4) - hmm... better don't stack this under the slider. fixed
02:02:764 (1) - bad spacing fixed
03:25:642 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - owww this is too hard for an Easy IMO.fixed

well... yeah. nice map and stuff :O

star'd

thank you very much! XD

修正中

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Tenshi-nyan

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Tenshi-nyan 2011-02-15T22:34:07+00:00

Easy and Holo are guest diffs, that's why you didn't change them? Or do you think the suggestions are bad? D;

Patchouli

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Patchouli 2011-02-17T06:36:32+00:00

I like this arrangement so I don't want to change it.
But if I would be pointed same thing by the other's mod, I will change it.
Holo's diffs' modification is in Skype. I received osu file so I update it.:>

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Hinacle 2011-02-18T11:42:31+00:00

star~!!

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star~

KSHR

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KSHR 2011-02-19T01:28:28+00:00

modding

基本的に細かいスぺーシングなので
必要なさそうだと判断されたものは無視してください

[Easy]
01:36:433 (2) - 1grid 上

[Holo]
00:59:959 (4) - 1grid 左
01:01:469 (2) - これはspacing危ないかも
01:06:433 (3,4,5) - 1grid 右
01:40:750 (5) - ^
01:46:793 (2) - ^
＞(↑ のあと)01:47:009 (3) - 2grid 右
02:20:678 (2) - 1grid 右
02:22:621 (7) - 1 or 2 grid右
02:57:153 (1,2) - 1grid 上
＞02:57:153 (1,2,3,4) - を1grid 上
03:42:908 (5,6,7) - 1grid 上
＞03:43:124 (6,7) - 1grid 右
＞03:43:340 (7) - 2grid 右
03:48:736 (2) - 1grid 上
03:49:815 (5,6,7) - 1grid 右
＞03:50:678 (7) - 2grid 下
03:51:541 (1) - ^

[Lunatic]
00:23:484 (4) - 1grid 右
00:49:815 (3) - 1grid 下
01:08:808 (5) - ２つ目の□を1grid down
01:09:455 (2) - 1grid 左
01:09:887 (4) - ^
01:52:405 (1,2) - 1grid 右
02:06:218 (3,4) - 1grid 左
02:22:189 (3) - 1grid 左
02:40:534 (4) - 1grid 下
02:58:664 (3) - 1grid 右

以降ヒットサウンドです
あくまで提案なので全部無視でも構いません
変えたほうがいいかなぁと思ったものには[ * ]を付けておきます

SPOILER

00:05:570 (1) - *remove whistle
00:05:678 (x) - * ^
00:06:002 (2) - * ^
00:06:110 (x) - * ^
00:06:433 (3) - * ^
00:06:541 (x) - * ^
00:12:477 (1) - * ^
00:12:585 (x) - * ^
00:12:908 (2) - * ^
00:13:016 (3) - * ^
00:13:340 (5) - * ^
00:13:448 (6) - * ^
00:20:786 (6) - remove clap
00:20:894 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3) -
前の同じメロディではclapは最後の方にしか付いていなかったのに
ここでは全体的についているので統一したほうがいいと思います

00:54:779 (4) - remove whistle
00:55:642 (2,3) - ^
00:56:505 (6) - add whistle
00:56:721 (x) - remove clap
00:56:937 (x) - add whistle
01:50:462 (x) - remove clap
01:54:779 (x) - ^
01:59:095 (x) - ^
02:13:556 (2) - add whistle
02:14:419 (4) - ^
02:14:851 (5) - これについてるwhistleを全部外してから
02:14:851 と 02:15:282 と 02:15:714にadd whistle
02:50:894 (5) - remove whistle
02:51:002 (6) - ^
02:51:002 (6) - * ^
03:33:304 (3) - * ^
03:33:736 (6) - * ^
03:33:951 (x) - * ^
03:39:779 (2) - * ^
03:40:210 (x) - * ^
03:40:642 (6) - * ^
03:46:685 (x) - * ^
03:47:117 (x) - * ^
03:47:549 (x) - * ^
03:53:592 (2) - * ^
03:54:023 (5) - * ^
03:54:455 (8) - * ^

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Patchouli

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Patchouli 2011-02-19T03:50:46+00:00

KSHR wrote:
modding

基本的に細かいスぺーシングなので
必要なさそうだと判断されたものは無視してください

[Easy]
01:36:433 (2) - 1grid 上 Fixed

[Lunatic]
00:23:484 (4) - 1grid 右 Fixed
00:49:815 (3) - 1grid 下 Fixed
01:08:808 (5) - ２つ目の□を1grid down Fixed
01:09:455 (2) - 1grid 左 Fixed
01:09:887 (4) - ^ Fixed
01:52:405 (1,2) - 1grid 右 Fixed
02:06:218 (3,4) - 1grid 左 Fixed
02:22:189 (3) - 1grid 左 Fixed
02:40:534 (4) - 1grid 下 Fixed
02:58:664 (3) - 1grid 右 Fixed

以降ヒットサウンドです
あくまで提案なので全部無視でも構いません
変えたほうがいいかなぁと思ったものには[ * ]を付けておきます

SPOILER
00:05:570 (1) - *remove whistle Fixed
00:05:678 (x) - * ^ Fixed
00:06:002 (2) - * ^ Fixed
00:06:110 (x) - * ^ Fixed
00:06:433 (3) - * ^ Fixed
00:06:541 (x) - * ^ Fixed
00:12:477 (1) - * ^ Fixed
00:12:585 (x) - * ^ Fixed
00:12:908 (2) - * ^ Fixed
00:13:016 (3) - * ^ Fixed
00:13:340 (5) - * ^ Fixed
00:13:448 (6) - * ^ Fixed
00:20:786 (6) - remove clap Fixed
00:20:894 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3) -
前の同じメロディではclapは最後の方にしか付いていなかったのに
ここでは全体的についているので統一したほうがいいと思います
No change

00:54:779 (4) - remove whistle Fixed
00:55:642 (2,3) - ^ Fixed
00:56:505 (6) - add whistle Fixed
00:56:721 (x) - remove clap Fixed
00:56:937 (x) - add whistle Fixed
01:50:462 (x) - remove clapNo change
01:54:779 (x) - ^No change
01:59:095 (x) - ^No change
02:13:556 (2) - add whistle Fixed
02:14:419 (4) - ^ Fixed
02:14:851 (5) - これについてるwhistleを全部外してから
02:14:851 と 02:15:282 と 02:15:714にadd whistle Fixed
02:50:894 (5) - remove whistle Fixed
02:51:002 (6) - ^ Fixed
02:51:002 (6) - * ^ Fixed
03:33:304 (3) - * ^ Fixed
03:33:736 (6) - * ^ Fixed
03:33:951 (x) - * ^ Fixed
03:39:779 (2) - * ^ Fixed
03:40:210 (x) - * ^ Fixed
03:40:642 (6) - * ^ Fixed
03:46:685 (x) - * ^ Fixed
03:47:117 (x) - * ^ Fixed
03:47:549 (x) - * ^ Fixed
03:53:592 (2) - * ^ Fixed
03:54:023 (5) - * ^ Fixed
03:54:455 (8) - * ^ Fixed

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