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フランだとぉおおおおおおおおおおおおおおおおおおおおおおおおおおおおおお
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曲はかっこいいいいです～
えと、僕は太鼓マプを製する良いですか？＞ ＜
☆三
えと、僕は太鼓マプを製する良いですか？＞ ＜
☆三
ぐ・・・はっ・・・綺麗すぎる・・・！
Topic Starter
stra thx all!
I'm very poor English...orz
I'm sorry,Please some other time!OnosakiHito wrote:
曲はかっこいいいいです～
えと、僕は太鼓マプを製する良いですか？＞ ＜
☆三
I'm very poor English...orz
おお・・・分かった、でも受け答えをありがとうございます！
ま、ま、英語は良いです。僕の日本語は良いません。ｗｗ
またね！
ま、ま、英語は良いです。僕の日本語は良いません。ｗｗ
またね！
何度聴いてもフランで逝ける末期な自分
star~ >w</
SPOILER
hmm just advice, change lead-in in all diffs to 2~3 seconds? 1 second seems still a little fast too >< and...
[Easy]
eh... this kiai time seems a little...long? lol
stop and start the kiai time like [Lunatic] maybe better? xD
[Holo]
please change offset to 175 and change other red lines to green lines lol
(this maybe because of editor error...lol please turn them back xD)
and final don't forgot to resnap all notes xD
[Easy]
eh... this kiai time seems a little...long? lol
stop and start the kiai time like [Lunatic] maybe better? xD
[Holo]
please change offset to 175 and change other red lines to green lines lol
(this maybe because of editor error...lol please turn them back xD)
and final don't forgot to resnap all notes xD
おＫ！
Mod start!
ah,first
Seem like it have not use SB.
So, del the osb in the map file~
[Easy]
00:20:894 - Maybe finish change to whiste? XDDD It's just my suggestion.
If you don't change, it's fine too.
00:47:657 (2) - Whiste here, 00:48:088 not need XD.
00:51:110 - Clap?
00:52:836 (4) - ^?
Good Easy diff dayo!
[Holo]
00:21:757 (3) - New combo?
00:58:016 (x) - add a note here? XD
My suggestion~: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/56532
01:21:326 (3) - New combo da~~
02:16:146 (2) - ^
^ If you do this, then
02:17:872 (3) - new combo
The New combo is follow in white line XD
02:25:210 (4) - New combo too~
02:32:117 (4) - ^
02:35:570 (5) - ^
02:59:743 (5) - ^
03:03:196 (4) - ^
03:06:649 (5) - new combo
03:13:556 (5) - ^
03:17:009 (5) - ^
03:20:462 (1) - ^
PS. The new combo mod is some suggestion , some need.
Feel free to ignore the newcombo mod.
BTW, nice map です～～～
[Lunatic]
すごい！！！！！！！！
Nice map here>w<
Star!>w<
Mod start!
ah,first
Seem like it have not use SB.
So, del the osb in the map file~
[Easy]
00:20:894 - Maybe finish change to whiste? XDDD It's just my suggestion.
If you don't change, it's fine too.
00:47:657 (2) - Whiste here, 00:48:088 not need XD.
00:51:110 - Clap?
00:52:836 (4) - ^?
Good Easy diff dayo!
[Holo]
00:21:757 (3) - New combo?
00:58:016 (x) - add a note here? XD
My suggestion~: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/56532
01:21:326 (3) - New combo da~~
02:16:146 (2) - ^
^ If you do this, then
02:17:872 (3) - new combo
The New combo is follow in white line XD
02:25:210 (4) - New combo too~
02:32:117 (4) - ^
02:35:570 (5) - ^
02:59:743 (5) - ^
03:03:196 (4) - ^
03:06:649 (5) - new combo
03:13:556 (5) - ^
03:17:009 (5) - ^
03:20:462 (1) - ^
PS. The new combo mod is some suggestion , some need.
Feel free to ignore the newcombo mod.
BTW, nice map です～～～
[Lunatic]
すごい！！！！！！！！
Nice map here>w<
Star!>w<
Topic Starter
OK!All Fixed!quintitem wrote:
star~ >w</SPOILERhmm just advice, change lead-in in all diffs to 2~3 seconds? 1 second seems still a little fast too >< and...
[Easy]
eh... this kiai time seems a little...long? lol
stop and start the kiai time like [Lunatic] maybe better? xD
[Holo]
please change offset to 175 and change other red lines to green lines lol
(this maybe because of editor error...lol please turn them back xD)
and final don't forgot to resnap all notes xD
thank you for advice!XD
Easy&Holo diff All fixed!KanaRin wrote:
おＫ！
Mod start!
ah,first
Seem like it have not use SB.
So, del the osb in the map file~
[Easy]
00:20:894 - Maybe finish change to whiste? XDDD It's just my suggestion.
If you don't change, it's fine too.
00:47:657 (2) - Whiste here, 00:48:088 not need XD.
00:51:110 - Clap?
00:52:836 (4) - ^?
Good Easy diff dayo!
[Holo]
00:21:757 (3) - New combo?
00:58:016 (x) - add a note here? XD
My suggestion~: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/56532
01:21:326 (3) - New combo da~~
02:16:146 (2) - ^
^ If you do this, then
02:17:872 (3) - new combo
The New combo is follow in white line XD
02:25:210 (4) - New combo too~
02:32:117 (4) - ^
02:35:570 (5) - ^
02:59:743 (5) - ^
03:03:196 (4) - ^
03:06:649 (5) - new combo
03:13:556 (5) - ^
03:17:009 (5) - ^
03:20:462 (1) - ^
PS. The new combo mod is some suggestion , some need.
Feel free to ignore the newcombo mod.
BTW, nice map です～～～
[Lunatic]
すごい！！！！！！！！
Nice map here>w<
Star!>w<
thank you very much~<3 XDD
Nice map, i love the Lunatic :33
General
Resize all BG pics to 1024x768
Lunatic
00:45:282 (1,2,3) - replace claps with whistles
00:50:246 (1) - a normal finish here
00:50:894 (2) - remove clap in begin
01:07:081 (8) - hauu... don't like stack under stream.
02:43:340 (1,2,3,4) - replace claps with whistles
02:51:110 (7) - add finish?
03:04:059 (1,2,3,4) - replace claps with soft whitsles
03:09:455 (6,7,1) - 1 grid right :3
03:11:182 (1,2,3) - whitsles
03:17:872 (1,2,3,4) - ^
03:50:678 (5) - replace with a no-repeat slider?
03:54:988 - add note + NC + soft finish?
Holo
No Kiai? Eh.. it's ok though, Kiai dosn't really fit the song
00:26:074 (7) - curve this slider better around (6) or 1 grid up
(hitsound suggestions)
00:57:369 (2) - clap to end
00:58:232 (4) - ^
00:59:311 (2) - ^
01:00:175 (5) - clap
or in other words, replace those whitsles with claps for this part. sounds better IMO... goes for the other 2 diffs too if ya don't mind ;3
01:01:469 - add note
03:34:275 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 1 grid down :3
03:43:340 (7) - add repeat
03:43:987 (8) - remove this slider
Easy
00:05:786 (4) - start at 00:05:570 , end at current position
00:12:692 (4) - ^
01:09:239 (1,1,1,1) - jumps? no way, this is an easy
01:12:045 (1) - start at 01:11:829
01:24:779 (1,1,1,1,1) - no go for easy.
01:36:433 (2,3) - replace with a single repeat slider
01:40:750 (4,5) - ^
01:58:016 (2,3,4) - hmm... better don't stack this under the slider.
02:02:764 (1) - bad spacing
03:25:642 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - owww this is too hard for an Easy IMO.
well... yeah. nice map and stuff :O
star'd
Resize all BG pics to 1024x768
Lunatic
00:45:282 (1,2,3) - replace claps with whistles
00:50:246 (1) - a normal finish here
00:50:894 (2) - remove clap in begin
01:07:081 (8) - hauu... don't like stack under stream.
02:43:340 (1,2,3,4) - replace claps with whistles
02:51:110 (7) - add finish?
03:04:059 (1,2,3,4) - replace claps with soft whitsles
03:09:455 (6,7,1) - 1 grid right :3
03:11:182 (1,2,3) - whitsles
03:17:872 (1,2,3,4) - ^
03:50:678 (5) - replace with a no-repeat slider?
03:54:988 - add note + NC + soft finish?
Holo
No Kiai? Eh.. it's ok though, Kiai dosn't really fit the song
00:26:074 (7) - curve this slider better around (6) or 1 grid up
(hitsound suggestions)
00:57:369 (2) - clap to end
00:58:232 (4) - ^
00:59:311 (2) - ^
01:00:175 (5) - clap
or in other words, replace those whitsles with claps for this part. sounds better IMO... goes for the other 2 diffs too if ya don't mind ;3
01:01:469 - add note
03:34:275 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 1 grid down :3
03:43:340 (7) - add repeat
03:43:987 (8) - remove this slider
Easy
00:05:786 (4) - start at 00:05:570 , end at current position
00:12:692 (4) - ^
01:09:239 (1,1,1,1) - jumps? no way, this is an easy
01:12:045 (1) - start at 01:11:829
01:24:779 (1,1,1,1,1) - no go for easy.
01:36:433 (2,3) - replace with a single repeat slider
01:40:750 (4,5) - ^
01:58:016 (2,3,4) - hmm... better don't stack this under the slider.
02:02:764 (1) - bad spacing
03:25:642 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - owww this is too hard for an Easy IMO.
well... yeah. nice map and stuff :O
star'd
Topic Starter
thank you very much! XDTenshi-nyan wrote:
General
Resize all BG pics to 1024x768Fixed!
Lunatic
00:45:282 (1,2,3) - replace claps with whistles done
00:50:246 (1) - a normal finish here done
00:50:894 (2) - remove clap in begin done
01:07:081 (8) - hauu... don't like stack under stream.Fixed
02:43:340 (1,2,3,4) - replace claps with whistles done
02:51:110 (7) - add finish? ok~
03:04:059 (1,2,3,4) - replace claps with soft whitsles done
03:09:455 (6,7,1) - 1 grid right :3 Fixed
03:11:182 (1,2,3) - whitsles done
03:17:872 (1,2,3,4) - ^ done
03:50:678 (5) - replace with a no-repeat slider? No
03:54:988 - add note + NC + soft finish? ok~
Holo
No Kiai? Eh.. it's ok though, Kiai dosn't really fit the song
00:26:074 (7) - curve this slider better around (6) or 1 grid up
(hitsound suggestions)
00:57:369 (2) - clap to end
00:58:232 (4) - ^
00:59:311 (2) - ^
01:00:175 (5) - clap
or in other words, replace those whitsles with claps for this part. sounds better IMO... goes for the other 2 diffs too if ya don't mind ;3
01:01:469 - add note
03:34:275 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 1 grid down :3
03:43:340 (7) - add repeat
03:43:987 (8) - remove this slider
Easy
00:05:786 (4) - start at 00:05:570 , end at current position ok
00:12:692 (4) - ^ ok
01:09:239 (1,1,1,1) - jumps? no way, this is an easyNo
01:12:045 (1) - start at 01:11:829 ok
01:24:779 (1,1,1,1,1) - no go for easy. No
01:36:433 (2,3) - replace with a single repeat slider fixed
01:40:750 (4,5) - ^ fixed
01:58:016 (2,3,4) - hmm... better don't stack this under the slider. fixed
02:02:764 (1) - bad spacing fixed
03:25:642 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - owww this is too hard for an Easy IMO.fixed
well... yeah. nice map and stuff :O
star'd
修正中
Easy and Holo are guest diffs, that's why you didn't change them? Or do you think the suggestions are bad? D;
Topic Starter
I like this arrangement so I don't want to change it.
But if I would be pointed same thing by the other's mod, I will change it.
Holo's diffs' modification is in Skype. I received osu file so I update it.:>
But if I would be pointed same thing by the other's mod, I will change it.
Holo's diffs' modification is in Skype. I received osu file so I update it.:>
star~!!
modding
基本的に細かいスぺーシングなので
必要なさそうだと判断されたものは無視してください
[Easy]
01:36:433 (2) - 1grid 上
[Holo]
00:59:959 (4) - 1grid 左
01:01:469 (2) - これはspacing危ないかも
01:06:433 (3,4,5) - 1grid 右
01:40:750 (5) - ^
01:46:793 (2) - ^
＞(↑ のあと)01:47:009 (3) - 2grid 右
02:20:678 (2) - 1grid 右
02:22:621 (7) - 1 or 2 grid右
02:57:153 (1,2) - 1grid 上
＞02:57:153 (1,2,3,4) - を1grid 上
03:42:908 (5,6,7) - 1grid 上
＞03:43:124 (6,7) - 1grid 右
＞03:43:340 (7) - 2grid 右
03:48:736 (2) - 1grid 上
03:49:815 (5,6,7) - 1grid 右
＞03:50:678 (7) - 2grid 下
03:51:541 (1) - ^
[Lunatic]
00:23:484 (4) - 1grid 右
00:49:815 (3) - 1grid 下
01:08:808 (5) - ２つ目の□を1grid down
01:09:455 (2) - 1grid 左
01:09:887 (4) - ^
01:52:405 (1,2) - 1grid 右
02:06:218 (3,4) - 1grid 左
02:22:189 (3) - 1grid 左
02:40:534 (4) - 1grid 下
02:58:664 (3) - 1grid 右
以降ヒットサウンドです
あくまで提案なので全部無視でも構いません
変えたほうがいいかなぁと思ったものには[ * ]を付けておきます
MOD時間の最長記録更新！
基本的に細かいスぺーシングなので
必要なさそうだと判断されたものは無視してください
[Easy]
01:36:433 (2) - 1grid 上
[Holo]
00:59:959 (4) - 1grid 左
01:01:469 (2) - これはspacing危ないかも
01:06:433 (3,4,5) - 1grid 右
01:40:750 (5) - ^
01:46:793 (2) - ^
＞(↑ のあと)01:47:009 (3) - 2grid 右
02:20:678 (2) - 1grid 右
02:22:621 (7) - 1 or 2 grid右
02:57:153 (1,2) - 1grid 上
＞02:57:153 (1,2,3,4) - を1grid 上
03:42:908 (5,6,7) - 1grid 上
＞03:43:124 (6,7) - 1grid 右
＞03:43:340 (7) - 2grid 右
03:48:736 (2) - 1grid 上
03:49:815 (5,6,7) - 1grid 右
＞03:50:678 (7) - 2grid 下
03:51:541 (1) - ^
[Lunatic]
00:23:484 (4) - 1grid 右
00:49:815 (3) - 1grid 下
01:08:808 (5) - ２つ目の□を1grid down
01:09:455 (2) - 1grid 左
01:09:887 (4) - ^
01:52:405 (1,2) - 1grid 右
02:06:218 (3,4) - 1grid 左
02:22:189 (3) - 1grid 左
02:40:534 (4) - 1grid 下
02:58:664 (3) - 1grid 右
以降ヒットサウンドです
あくまで提案なので全部無視でも構いません
変えたほうがいいかなぁと思ったものには[ * ]を付けておきます
SPOILER
00:05:570 (1) - *remove whistle
00:05:678 (x) - * ^
00:06:002 (2) - * ^
00:06:110 (x) - * ^
00:06:433 (3) - * ^
00:06:541 (x) - * ^
00:12:477 (1) - * ^
00:12:585 (x) - * ^
00:12:908 (2) - * ^
00:13:016 (3) - * ^
00:13:340 (5) - * ^
00:13:448 (6) - * ^
00:20:786 (6) - remove clap
00:20:894 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3) -
前の同じメロディではclapは最後の方にしか付いていなかったのに
ここでは全体的についているので統一したほうがいいと思います
00:54:779 (4) - remove whistle
00:55:642 (2,3) - ^
00:56:505 (6) - add whistle
00:56:721 (x) - remove clap
00:56:937 (x) - add whistle
01:50:462 (x) - remove clap
01:54:779 (x) - ^
01:59:095 (x) - ^
02:13:556 (2) - add whistle
02:14:419 (4) - ^
02:14:851 (5) - これについてるwhistleを全部外してから
02:14:851 と 02:15:282 と 02:15:714にadd whistle
02:50:894 (5) - remove whistle
02:51:002 (6) - ^
02:51:002 (6) - * ^
03:33:304 (3) - * ^
03:33:736 (6) - * ^
03:33:951 (x) - * ^
03:39:779 (2) - * ^
03:40:210 (x) - * ^
03:40:642 (6) - * ^
03:46:685 (x) - * ^
03:47:117 (x) - * ^
03:47:549 (x) - * ^
03:53:592 (2) - * ^
03:54:023 (5) - * ^
03:54:455 (8) - * ^
00:05:678 (x) - * ^
00:06:002 (2) - * ^
00:06:110 (x) - * ^
00:06:433 (3) - * ^
00:06:541 (x) - * ^
00:12:477 (1) - * ^
00:12:585 (x) - * ^
00:12:908 (2) - * ^
00:13:016 (3) - * ^
00:13:340 (5) - * ^
00:13:448 (6) - * ^
00:20:786 (6) - remove clap
00:20:894 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3) -
前の同じメロディではclapは最後の方にしか付いていなかったのに
ここでは全体的についているので統一したほうがいいと思います
00:54:779 (4) - remove whistle
00:55:642 (2,3) - ^
00:56:505 (6) - add whistle
00:56:721 (x) - remove clap
00:56:937 (x) - add whistle
01:50:462 (x) - remove clap
01:54:779 (x) - ^
01:59:095 (x) - ^
02:13:556 (2) - add whistle
02:14:419 (4) - ^
02:14:851 (5) - これについてるwhistleを全部外してから
02:14:851 と 02:15:282 と 02:15:714にadd whistle
02:50:894 (5) - remove whistle
02:51:002 (6) - ^
02:51:002 (6) - * ^
03:33:304 (3) - * ^
03:33:736 (6) - * ^
03:33:951 (x) - * ^
03:39:779 (2) - * ^
03:40:210 (x) - * ^
03:40:642 (6) - * ^
03:46:685 (x) - * ^
03:47:117 (x) - * ^
03:47:549 (x) - * ^
03:53:592 (2) - * ^
03:54:023 (5) - * ^
03:54:455 (8) - * ^
MOD時間の最長記録更新！
Topic Starter
KSHR thanks!KSHR wrote:
modding
基本的に細かいスぺーシングなので
必要なさそうだと判断されたものは無視してください
[Easy]
01:36:433 (2) - 1grid 上 Fixed
[Lunatic]
00:23:484 (4) - 1grid 右 Fixed
00:49:815 (3) - 1grid 下 Fixed
01:08:808 (5) - ２つ目の□を1grid down Fixed
01:09:455 (2) - 1grid 左 Fixed
01:09:887 (4) - ^ Fixed
01:52:405 (1,2) - 1grid 右 Fixed
02:06:218 (3,4) - 1grid 左 Fixed
02:22:189 (3) - 1grid 左 Fixed
02:40:534 (4) - 1grid 下 Fixed
02:58:664 (3) - 1grid 右 Fixed
以降ヒットサウンドです
あくまで提案なので全部無視でも構いません
変えたほうがいいかなぁと思ったものには[ * ]を付けておきますSPOILER00:05:570 (1) - *remove whistle Fixed
00:05:678 (x) - * ^ Fixed
00:06:002 (2) - * ^ Fixed
00:06:110 (x) - * ^ Fixed
00:06:433 (3) - * ^ Fixed
00:06:541 (x) - * ^ Fixed
00:12:477 (1) - * ^ Fixed
00:12:585 (x) - * ^ Fixed
00:12:908 (2) - * ^ Fixed
00:13:016 (3) - * ^ Fixed
00:13:340 (5) - * ^ Fixed
00:13:448 (6) - * ^ Fixed
00:20:786 (6) - remove clap Fixed
00:20:894 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3) -
前の同じメロディではclapは最後の方にしか付いていなかったのに
ここでは全体的についているので統一したほうがいいと思います
No change
00:54:779 (4) - remove whistle Fixed
00:55:642 (2,3) - ^ Fixed
00:56:505 (6) - add whistle Fixed
00:56:721 (x) - remove clap Fixed
00:56:937 (x) - add whistle Fixed
01:50:462 (x) - remove clapNo change
01:54:779 (x) - ^No change
01:59:095 (x) - ^No change
02:13:556 (2) - add whistle Fixed
02:14:419 (4) - ^ Fixed
02:14:851 (5) - これについてるwhistleを全部外してから
02:14:851 と 02:15:282 と 02:15:714にadd whistle Fixed
02:50:894 (5) - remove whistle Fixed
02:51:002 (6) - ^ Fixed
02:51:002 (6) - * ^ Fixed
03:33:304 (3) - * ^ Fixed
03:33:736 (6) - * ^ Fixed
03:33:951 (x) - * ^ Fixed
03:39:779 (2) - * ^ Fixed
03:40:210 (x) - * ^ Fixed
03:40:642 (6) - * ^ Fixed
03:46:685 (x) - * ^ Fixed
03:47:117 (x) - * ^ Fixed
03:47:549 (x) - * ^ Fixed
03:53:592 (2) - * ^ Fixed
03:54:023 (5) - * ^ Fixed
03:54:455 (8) - * ^ Fixed
MOD時間の最長記録更新！
EDIT:Holo Diff Update!
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