OnosakiHito wrote:

曲はかっこいいいいです～
えと、僕は太鼓マプを製する良いですか？＞　＜

☆三

quintitem wrote:

star~ >w</

SPOILER

hmm just advice, change lead-in in all diffs to 2~3 seconds? 1 second seems still a little fast too >< and...

[Easy]
eh... this kiai time seems a little...long? lol
stop and start the kiai time like [Lunatic] maybe better? xD

[Holo]
please change offset to 175 and change other red lines to green lines lol
(this maybe because of editor error...lol please turn them back xD)
and final don't forgot to resnap all notes xD

KanaRin wrote:

おＫ！
Mod start!
ah,first
Seem like it have not use SB.
So, del the osb in the map file~

[Easy]
00:20:894 - Maybe finish change to whiste? XDDD It's just my suggestion.
If you don't change, it's fine too.
00:47:657 (2) - Whiste here, 00:48:088 not need XD.
00:51:110 - Clap?
00:52:836 (4) - ^?
Good Easy diff dayo!

[Holo]
00:21:757 (3) - New combo?
00:58:016 (x) - add a note here? XD
My suggestion~: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/56532
01:21:326 (3) - New combo da~~
02:16:146 (2) - ^
^ If you do this, then
02:17:872 (3) - new combo
The New combo is follow in white line XD
02:25:210 (4) - New combo too~
02:32:117 (4) - ^
02:35:570 (5) - ^
02:59:743 (5) - ^
03:03:196 (4) - ^
03:06:649 (5) - new combo
03:13:556 (5) - ^
03:17:009 (5) - ^
03:20:462 (1) - ^

PS. The new combo mod is some suggestion , some need.
Feel free to ignore the newcombo mod.
BTW, nice map です～～～

[Lunatic]
すごい！！！！！！！！
Nice map here>w<

Star!>w<

Tenshi-nyan wrote:

General
Resize all BG pics to 1024x768Fixed!

Lunatic
00:45:282 (1,2,3) - replace claps with whistles done
00:50:246 (1) - a normal finish here done
00:50:894 (2) - remove clap in begin done
01:07:081 (8) - hauu... don't like stack under stream.Fixed
02:43:340 (1,2,3,4) - replace claps with whistles done
02:51:110 (7) - add finish? ok~
03:04:059 (1,2,3,4) - replace claps with soft whitsles done
03:09:455 (6,7,1) - 1 grid right :3 Fixed
03:11:182 (1,2,3) - whitsles done
03:17:872 (1,2,3,4) - ^ done
03:50:678 (5) - replace with a no-repeat slider? No
03:54:988 - add note + NC + soft finish? ok~

Holo
No Kiai? Eh.. it's ok though, Kiai dosn't really fit the song
00:26:074 (7) - curve this slider better around (6) or 1 grid up
(hitsound suggestions)
00:57:369 (2) - clap to end
00:58:232 (4) - ^
00:59:311 (2) - ^
01:00:175 (5) - clap
or in other words, replace those whitsles with claps for this part. sounds better IMO... goes for the other 2 diffs too if ya don't mind ;3
01:01:469 - add note
03:34:275 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 1 grid down :3
03:43:340 (7) - add repeat
03:43:987 (8) - remove this slider

Easy
00:05:786 (4) - start at 00:05:570 , end at current position ok
00:12:692 (4) - ^ ok
01:09:239 (1,1,1,1) - jumps? no way, this is an easyNo
01:12:045 (1) - start at 01:11:829 ok
01:24:779 (1,1,1,1,1) - no go for easy. No
01:36:433 (2,3) - replace with a single repeat slider fixed
01:40:750 (4,5) - ^ fixed
01:58:016 (2,3,4) - hmm... better don't stack this under the slider. fixed
02:02:764 (1) - bad spacing fixed
03:25:642 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - owww this is too hard for an Easy IMO.fixed

well... yeah. nice map and stuff :O

star'd

KSHR wrote:

modding

基本的に細かいスぺーシングなので
必要なさそうだと判断されたものは無視してください


[Easy]
01:36:433 (2) - 1grid 上 Fixed

[Lunatic]
00:23:484 (4) - 1grid 右 Fixed
00:49:815 (3) - 1grid 下 Fixed
01:08:808 (5) - ２つ目の□を1grid down Fixed
01:09:455 (2) - 1grid 左 Fixed
01:09:887 (4) - ^ Fixed
01:52:405 (1,2) - 1grid 右 Fixed
02:06:218 (3,4) - 1grid 左 Fixed
02:22:189 (3) - 1grid 左 Fixed
02:40:534 (4) - 1grid 下 Fixed
02:58:664 (3) - 1grid 右 Fixed


以降ヒットサウンドです
あくまで提案なので全部無視でも構いません
変えたほうがいいかなぁと思ったものには[ * ]を付けておきます

SPOILER

00:05:570 (1) - *remove whistle Fixed
00:05:678 (x) - * ^ Fixed
00:06:002 (2) - * ^ Fixed
00:06:110 (x) - * ^ Fixed
00:06:433 (3) - * ^ Fixed
00:06:541 (x) - * ^ Fixed
00:12:477 (1) - * ^ Fixed
00:12:585 (x) - * ^ Fixed
00:12:908 (2) - * ^ Fixed
00:13:016 (3) - * ^ Fixed
00:13:340 (5) - * ^ Fixed
00:13:448 (6) - * ^ Fixed
00:20:786 (6) - remove clap Fixed
00:20:894 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3) -
前の同じメロディではclapは最後の方にしか付いていなかったのに
ここでは全体的についているので統一したほうがいいと思います
No change

00:54:779 (4) - remove whistle Fixed
00:55:642 (2,3) - ^ Fixed
00:56:505 (6) - add whistle Fixed
00:56:721 (x) - remove clap Fixed
00:56:937 (x) - add whistle Fixed
01:50:462 (x) - remove clapNo change
01:54:779 (x) - ^No change
01:59:095 (x) - ^No change
02:13:556 (2) - add whistle Fixed
02:14:419 (4) - ^ Fixed
02:14:851 (5) - これについてるwhistleを全部外してから
02:14:851 と 02:15:282 と 02:15:714にadd whistle Fixed
02:50:894 (5) - remove whistle Fixed
02:51:002 (6) - ^ Fixed
02:51:002 (6) - * ^ Fixed
03:33:304 (3) - * ^ Fixed
03:33:736 (6) - * ^ Fixed
03:33:951 (x) - * ^ Fixed
03:39:779 (2) - * ^ Fixed
03:40:210 (x) - * ^ Fixed
03:40:642 (6) - * ^ Fixed
03:46:685 (x) - * ^ Fixed
03:47:117 (x) - * ^ Fixed
03:47:549 (x) - * ^ Fixed
03:53:592 (2) - * ^ Fixed
03:54:023 (5) - * ^ Fixed
03:54:455 (8) - * ^ Fixed

MOD時間の最長記録更新！

1. BPM : 139 Offset : 175 Time Signature : 4/4
2. BPM : 139 Offset : 57.167 Time Signature : 4/4
3. BPM : 139 Offset : 86.524 Time Signature : 5/4
4. BPM : 139 Offset : 122.799 Time Signature : 4/4

Leorda wrote:

Konnichiha

General
Wasn't the title should be "Twilight Chronicle ~ I am Sister"? Fixed!

Timing
The timing are bit late and there some different metronome. Try this timing from me. You must fix the offset and time signature that I bolded. Also, you should double-check the timing by set the 0,25% playback rate, because my timing sometimes wrong

1. BPM : 139 Offset : 175 Time Signature : 4/4
2. BPM : 139 Offset : 57.167 Time Signature : 4/4
3. BPM : 139 Offset : 86.524 Time Signature : 5/4
4. BPM : 139 Offset : 122.799 Time Signature : 4/4

　ok!thank you timing check!

Easy
00:10:103 (5) - Looks odd, if this stack with 00:08:808 (3) on head slider. Change something better? Fixed!
00:12:477 (4,5,1,2) - This pattern are pretty strange, since 00:13:987 (1,2) are stack pattern. Try stack with 00:13:772 (5), that's looks neat if you change this Fixed!(5)Remove and little Remap
00:19:167 (4) - I think stack with 00:17:441 (1) would be better Fixed!
00:57:153 (5) - Nazi, move 1 grid down? Fixed!
01:09:671 (1,1,1,1) - Remove new combo to prevent "combo spammer!!"
01:25:210 (1,1,1,1) - ^ Fixed!
01:49:815 (3) - Move further away from 01:48:088 (1). It's ugly to place near tail slider[/color] Fixed!
02:09:239 (7) - Nazi again, Move to X:416 and Y:136, look upper-right to know what I mean Fixed!
02:14:851 (6,7,8,9,1) - Youuuuuu, better change this ASAP, because has a ugly stack on test/solo mode http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/59488 (sorry for bad quality of this picture) Fixed!
03:25:642 (1,2,3,4,5) - This pattern are very not beginner-friendly. Change something better please[/color] Fixed!


Lunatic
Awesome

Good job

Sakura Hana wrote:

[Timing]
I'm not sure, first red line is such a small offset change, that makes me wonder if it isnt a wrong BPM instead, the time signature change appears to be correct, but i'd like to let Lybydose double check these to be certain check thank you~~~>.<

[Holo]
This diff has a different preview point than the others. Fixed!

[Easy]
Notes stacked at the end of sliders are kinda invisible for newbies i recommend you change them. Fixed!
Could you map the last few seconds too? okey~ Add notes!

Pretty nice map i must say, good job! call me for a recheck after

orioncomet wrote:

why is this map in WIP :<
oops,sorry It's a my mistake. Fixed!

[Easy]
- fix your 4th offset to 121,056. don't forget to resnapp all notes and green lines.Fixed!
- make sure your preview point is the same as other diffs.Fixed!

[Holo]
03:53:933 (8,9,10) - make them a little cleaner when playing a bit? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/59851. move them down 1grid lvl3 Fixed!
03:54:365 (11,12,13,14) - ^ move them down 3grid lvl3, and move to right 1grid lvl3.Fixed!

[Lunatic]
- fix your 4th offset to 121,056. don't forget to resnapp all notes and green lines.Fixed!

look nice ^_^

Sakura Hana wrote:

Recheck:
[Easy]
There's an extra red line at the beginning of the map which is making the first slider be unsnapped, this red line isnt present in any of the other difficulties, what's it doing there?

Edit: Ok that got fixed so Bubbled~

KanaRin wrote:

Bubble おめでとう！ｗｗｗ