1. Easy (2,71 stars, 99 notes)
2. Hard (4,84 stars, 210 notes)
3. Magica (5 stars, 305 notes)
4. Normal (4,15 stars, 132 notes)
5. Pheon's Taiko (4,83 stars, 484 notes)

aston wrote:

Magica :
- +1 on Circle Size, skin makes it difficult to see circles, especially with that bg.

aston wrote:

- No kiai moments.

aston wrote:

- 00:05:760 (1) - 00:07:920 (2); differences in spacing.

aston wrote:

- 01:09:120 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - i'd say spacing too, but it seems like last minute jump kind of thing. Up to middle isn't the same spacing as side to side.

aston wrote:

- 01:15:240 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6) - these had me going "wut", since you were following vocal lines till this part, it was odd. Could've been better mapped here.

aston wrote:

Normal :
- No Kiai moments, but nothing other than that.

Easy :
- ^

aston wrote:

Normal and Easy were well mapped. Also like the song and good work~
Star~ 3:

1. hit50, hit100, etc. A lot of players hate this because it's too big and will delete it. How about making something like this http://puu.sh/Yk1 ? (but don't take this one, bad quality )
2. You should remove the audio from the video.
3. There's two .osb files in the folder. Remove both of them.

1. 00:10:560 (3) - The end of the slider is wrong, it should be at the red tick before.
2. 00:12:000 (2) - Same here, should be at the red tick before.
3. 00:40:800 - You should remove this break.
4. The end of 01:07:200 (3) should be at the same place than the start of 01:09:120 (1) ( something like this http://puu.sh/Yl7)

1. Overall difficulty is the same as in the Easy... how about +1?
2. 00:03:840 (4) - New combo here?
3. 00:06:240 (3) - This slider is under the note before, it's not very nice, how about 1 grid down?
4. 00:07:680 (4) - New combo here?
5. 00:10:560 (2,3,4) - That's not really nice How about this? http://puu.sh/Ylp And as you can see (4) is wrong, should be on the red tick before, again. Also you should add 1 or 2 whistle on this slider.
6. 00:24:960 (1) - Add a finish at the start and a whistle at the end?
7. 00:26:400 (2) - A whistle at the end?
8. 00:32:640 (1) - ^
9. 00:34:080 (2) - ^
10. 00:36:480 (5) - 1 grid down? (to stack under 00:34:080 (2) )
11. 00:40:800 - You should remove this break.
12. 00:42:240 (1) - Add a finish at the start?
13. 00:49:920 (1) - ^

1. What the hell are those difficulty settings?
   Approach rate 9 is obviously too much on a 125bpm map. -2 or -1 at least
   Hp Drain is big too I think, should be -1 at least
   Overall difficulty... I'm not a pro, but having 80% of acc with a FC while I have more than 95% usually on other maps... should be -1 or -2.
2. 00:03:360 (7) - Move the last point of this slider 1 grid to the left to stack it over 00:04:320 (4)
3. 00:09:360 (6) - Spacing is wrong here, you should stack it over 00:10:320 (5) -
4. 00:40:800 - You should remove this break.
5. 00:50:880 (5) - Reshape the slider a little, the end should be stacked under 00:51:600 (7) or stack this note under the slider (disable the grid snap if you want to do this)
6. 01:12:960 (1) - Maybe end at 01:14:400 ? Sounds better to me.
7. 01:14:400 - You must remove this break.
8. 01:21:000 (2) - Move it 1 grid down
9. 01:22:320 (3,1,2) - Move them 1 grid up

footix31 wrote:

[General]

1. hit50, hit100, etc. A lot of players hate this because it's too big and will delete it. How about making something like this http://puu.sh/Yk1 ? (but don't take this one, bad quality ) Will make them a bit smaller.
2. You should remove the audio from the video. Audio is separated from the video, but some players play the audio file with the video if they have the same name.
3. There's two .osb files in the folder. Remove both of them. Fixed.

[Easy]

1. 00:10:560 (3) - The end of the slider is wrong, it should be at the red tick before. This is intended, so the slider finishes as the phrase she sings finishes. I suppose I might reconsider at some point but at the moment I think this is better.
2. 00:12:000 (2) - Same here, should be at the red tick before. Same thing as the above.
3. 00:40:800 - You should remove this break. Fixed.
4. The end of 01:07:200 (3) should be at the same place than the start of 01:09:120 (1) ( something like this http://puu.sh/Yl7) Fixed.

[Normal]

1. Overall difficulty is the same as in the Easy... how about +1? Fixed.
2. 00:03:840 (4) - New combo here? I don't feel that this would fit, the entire combo kinda returns back, so I will leave it as it is now.
3. 00:06:240 (3) - This slider is under the note before, it's not very nice, how about 1 grid down? Fixed, repositioned a bit.
4. 00:07:680 (4) - New combo here? Same as the above.
5. 00:10:560 (2,3,4) - That's not really nice How about this? http://puu.sh/Ylp And as you can see (4) is wrong, should be on the red tick before, again. Also you should add 1 or 2 whistle on this slider. Same situation as easy. Added a whistle to (2) instead, since this would make it go nice with the rhythm.
6. 00:24:960 (1) - Add a finish at the start and a whistle at the end? Done.
7. 00:26:400 (2) - A whistle at the end? Done.
8. 00:32:640 (1) - ^ Done.
9. 00:34:080 (2) - ^ Done.
10. 00:36:480 (5) - 1 grid down? (to stack under 00:34:080 (2) ) Repositioned a bit, 1 grid down was impossible due to distance snapping, but they are stacked now.
11. 00:40:800 - You should remove this break. Fixed.
12. 00:42:240 (1) - Add a finish at the start? Done.
13. 00:49:920 (1) - ^ Done.

[Magica]

1. What the hell are those difficulty settings?
   Approach rate 9 is obviously too much on a 125bpm map. -2 or -1 at least
   Hp Drain is big too I think, should be -1 at least
   Overall difficulty... I'm not a pro, but having 80% of acc with a FC while I have more than 95% usually on other maps... should be -1 or -2. Reduced AR and OD by 1. Reducing it further makes this a bit too easy for an insane IMO, but getting near 100% shouldn't be as hard now.
   Also, I think that HP drain is fine, it allows 3 misses in a row without getting fully drained and you're able to keep and slowly replenish HP while you continue.
2. 00:03:360 (7) - Move the last point of this slider 1 grid to the left to stack it over 00:04:320 (4) Fixed.
3. 00:09:360 (6) - Spacing is wrong here, you should stack it over 00:10:320 (5) This is hard to do, the spacing follows the combo, moving (6) would result in inconsistent spacing in the combo, and moving (5) would make the pattern look really weird. Will think of something maybe, leaving it as it is now.
4. 00:40:800 - You should remove this break. Fixed.
5. 00:50:880 (5) - Reshape the slider a little, the end should be stacked under 00:51:600 (7) or stack this note under the slider (disable the grid snap if you want to do this) Fixed, didn't need to disable snap.
6. 01:12:960 (1) - Maybe end at 01:14:400 ? Sounds better to me. Making this would feel much too different from the easy and normal maps, also making this map really short IMO.
7. 01:14:400 - You must remove this break. Fixed.
8. 01:21:000 (2) - Move it 1 grid down. Why? They make a perfect triangle, and the rest of the notes are spaced perfectly (look here)
9. 01:22:320 (3,1,2) - Move them 1 grid up. Same as above.

It's good for a first map but you need to improve your skills if you want to rank it :>
Thanks. Being my first map it's obvious I need improvements .

lolcubes wrote:

footix31 wrote:

00:10:560 (3) - The end of the slider is wrong, it should be at the red tick before. This is intended, so the slider finishes as the phrase she sings finishes. I suppose I might reconsider at some point but at the moment I think this is better.

lolcubes wrote:

footix31 wrote:

[*]01:12:960 (1) - Maybe end at 01:14:400 ? Sounds better to me. Making this would feel much too different from the easy and normal maps, also making this map really short IMO.

lolcubes wrote:

footix31 wrote:

[*]01:21:000 (2) - Move it 1 grid down. Why? They make a perfect triangle, and the rest of the notes are spaced perfectly (look here)

footix31 wrote:

...What? It doesn't sounds better at all to me. I'll ask to a MAT to be sure and tell you after if it's right or not.

I suppose that our opinions are a bit different on this matter, which is not bad. As I said, might change it if too many people think it's weird.

footix31 wrote:

How could it make the map short since there's nothing to remove? It just make the spinner longer. By the way the break after the spinner is still here.

footix31 wrote:

Uh... the (2) was not on the same line as the (1) when I looked at it. Seems like you fixed it.

Revengexsoyah wrote:

~General~
- I recommend that you use the kiai times in this points : start : 00:42:240 , finish : 01:14:880
in all diffies
I don't think kiai is necessary on this map. However since more people suggest that I use it, I have placed it on 01:12:960 - 01:24:480, since this feels like the culmination of the song. On easy and normal this might feel like wasted kiai time a little, so I might change this in the future.


~Easy~
- the spacing is not the best, you should fix it and put it with more symmetry Don't really know what do you mean by that, if you mean that the sliders and circles follow "ugly" patterns, then I have changed this. Thanks.
00:10:560 (3) : sounds better when it ends in 00:11:520 This would mean it doesn't follow the highest focus (voice), however I did tweak it a bit using footix31's advice, but snapping it on a 1/8, need a MAT to confirm this.
00:12:000 (2) : ^ 00:13:440 , about having more symmetry in sliders Fixed, sliders should be more pretty now.


~Normal~
00:11:040 (4) : sounds better when it ends in 00:11:520 and fix it the spacing This would mean it doesn't follow the highest focus (voice), however I did tweak it a bit using footix31's advice, but snapping it on a 1/8, need a MAT to confirm this.
00:32:160 : whistle ? Fixed.

~Magica~
-wow xD , the distance spacing is very high , but should lower the "Circle Size" place it in 2
D:
Fixed.

star and good luck
thanks

James2250 wrote:

-This song doesn't really need a break, but if you want to have a small one it would make more sense to have it near the middle of the map not at the end Well, while the player doesn't need the break, the nature of the song suggests to stop there a little, I don't see how to do the last part without removing it completely and then I would feel like the song is too short.
-Include a hitcircle overlay and a hitcircle approach circle in your folder as you have a custom hitcircle used there Fixed.
-Tick rate 2 doesn't seem to work too badly for these difficulties if you want to try it out Used tickrate 2 for all maps now.
-Make sure to include a hit0 with your set in the folder (even if it is just the default one) Fixed.
-Try and only keep 1 osb file in your folder, it seems to have 2 atm (no big deal) I already did remove it before, no idea how it got there again, should be fixed again. Thanks for checking.
-The middle of your hp bar seem odd..(try looking at it when testing) Wow, what a major oversight, thanks, fixed now (although a bit lazy fix but it looks good enough )
-Don't have kiai during a break, it doesn't work well when playing Kiai removed.

Easy:
-Slightly hard for an Easy at the moment, might be a good idea to decrease the slider velocity to make it more beginner friendly Fixed. This also resulted in major changes in the map since I had to remap half of it cause it contained sliders mostly.
-Try and add some more hitsounds at places, it sounds too empty in places Fixed. I think.
00:34:080 (3,5) - avoid too many overlaps to make the map look neater Due to the changes in the map this no longer applies, but I did follow the advice, no more silly overlaps.
00:42:240 (1,2,3,5) - this pattern seems kind of close together Should be okay now after the changes.
00:46:080 (1,5) - stack things like this if possible Same as the above.

Normal:
Could look slightly more organized but not too bad in general Currently no plans to change it, unless something mindshattering pops up

Magica:
-I would just name this Hard or Insane as the other difficulty names are standard I would prefer to keep it as it is, atleast for now, maybe easy and normal might receive a rename once I figure out a clever name.
-HP Drain is slightly high, it isn't terrible but I still suggest -1 Since you're not the only one who thinks this, decreased the HP drain by 1.
00:04:800 (6) - add a whistle here to follow your pattern Actually the pattern is kind of 1+1, this means that the first part has more "key sounds" than the other one, and then repeats in the next pattern, so I will leave it as it is (listen to it closely a couple of times, it's easy to catch)
00:08:640 (4) - add whistle to the start Same as the above.
00:42:720 (4,5) - space out more Fixed.
Those gaps at the end are pretty harsh considering the hp drain HP drain got reduced, should be less harsh (although harsh sounds fine to me! )

For your 1st map the maps are actually nicely done, however too many general errors for me to star atm
Call me back after main fixes and I should be able to star~
Thanks, will do.

aquabluu wrote:

[Easy]
Still a bit too hard for Easy though. I won't ask you to lower the SV any further, but I might suggest you turn the distance spacing down a notch to, say, 0.9-1.0? If you feel it might make the notes overlap too much then ignore this Hmm, I don't think easy is too hard, sure it may be challenging for a new player, but that doesn't mean that it should just be handed over to him. I might reduce the slider speed further, but I will keep it as it is for now. Spacing shouldn't be changed I think, stuff already looks cramped as it is already.
00.15.360 (1,2) Suggestion- Remove whistle, add the whistle at the beginning of both sliders instead of the whole thing. Fixed.
00.23.040 (1,2) ^ Fixed.
00.27.840 (7) Make this a symmetrical curve (i.e. move the points around so it doesn't look misshapen) Fixed.
00.29.760 (2) ^ Fixed.
00.31.440 (4,5) Replace with either two notes or a single slider Fixed.

[Normal]
00.05.760 (1) Nazi- One grid up Fixed.
00.51.360 (3) Suggestion- Make this another S slider directly to the right of (2)? Don't think this would be (much) better, it would feel like the bottom right area would be "unused". Might change it, not at the moment though.
01.00.240 (6) Nazi- One grid up Fixed.
01.02.880 (3) Suggestion- Make this another S slider directly to the right of (2)? ^
01.05.280 (5) New combo Fixed.
01.07.200 (1) Remove new combo Fixed.

[Magica]
OD+1 For now, leaving it as it is, I have a plan though which includes harder OD.
00.09.600 (1,2,3) Feels weird to have 3 notes here when the song doesn't really call for it. Replaced with a slider.
01.17.280 Suggestion- Add spinner here? Can't do, it wouldn't be a long one and it would ruin the symmetry of the previous pattern. (as I would have to remove a last few notes to start a spinner at the right time)

Star
Thanks

1. Try 1,918 for an offset. I think this is the perfect timing, in my opinion! Don't forget to resnap all the notes afterwards. And don't forget to apply the new timing to all the difficulties, too.
2. Add some tags in?

1. 00:01:920 (1)-It would sound better if you remove that whistle from the beginning and replace it with a finish.
2. 00:09:600 (1)-Remove that whistle and replace it with a finish instead. And fix the spacing on this by using the distance snap.
3. 00:10:560 (3)-Was this left out intentionally or by mistake? If it was a mistake, I would suggest placing the end of that slider on 00:11:280. It doesn't look pretty on the playing field.
4. 00:19:680 (5)-Add whistles on both the beginning and the end?
5. 00:21:600 (7)-^?
6. 00:24:960 (1)-Remove that whistle and replace it with a finish. Sounds better that way.
7. 00:29:760 (2)-Fix the spacing on this by using the distance snap.
8. 00:43:680 (3)-Try putting a whistle on the end. Let me know if you agree on that one.
9. 00:47:520 (4)-Add a whistle on the end.
10. 00:51:360 (3)-^
11. 00:54:720 (2)-Fix the spacing on this by using the distance snap?
12. 00:55:200 (3)-Add a whistle on the end.
13. 00:59:040 (3)-^
14. 01:01:440 (1)-Fix the spacing on this by using the distance snap. Besides, it looks well displayed on the vertical line. Like this. o:
15. 01:02:880 (4)-Add a whistle on the end.

1. 00:03:840 (4)-Use the distance snap and move one grid down? It would look like its lining up with the previous slider.
2. 00:09:600 (1)-Remove that whistle from the beginning and replace it with a finish.
3. 00:13:680 (1)-Put a new combo here?
4. 00:18:720 (4)-Add a whistle on the end?
5. 00:20:640 (5)-^?
6. 00:24:960 (1)-^?
7. 00:26:440 (2)-Add a whistle on the second reverse arrow?
8. 00:32:640 (1)-Add a whistle on the end?
9. 00:34:080 (2)-Add a whistle on the second reverse arrow?
10. 01:07:680 (2)-Add a whistle on the end.

1. Increase the Overall Difficulty by one. This difficulty would play much better if you do that.
2. 00:09:600 (1)-Remove that whistle and replace it with a finish.
3. 00:24:958 (1)-^
4. 00:33:598 (5)-Add a whistle?
5. 00:42:238 (1)-Remove that whistle and replace it with a finish.
6. 00:57:598 (1)-Remove that whistle from the beginning and replace it with a finish.
7. 01:17:278 to 01:19:198-Try and map something here. Or at least add a break. ._.

Roddie wrote:

Hi

General:

1. Try 1,918 for an offset. I think this is the perfect timing, in my opinion! Don't forget to resnap all the notes afterwards. And don't forget to apply the new timing to all the difficulties, too. I think the timing is alright as it is, 2ms is a very very dodgy timing correction and before I change it I would love to hear a MAT/BAT opinion on this first.
2. Add some tags in? Tags aren't really needed because everything you need to know about the map is already there.

Easy:

1. 00:01:920 (1)-It would sound better if you remove that whistle from the beginning and replace it with a finish. Hmm, it sounds too loud for a subtle beginning like the song has. I will leave it as it is for now.
2. 00:09:600 (1)-Remove that whistle and replace it with a finish instead. And fix the spacing on this by using the distance snap. Fixed.
3. 00:10:560 (3)-Was this left out intentionally or by mistake? If it was a mistake, I would suggest placing the end of that slider on 00:11:280. It doesn't look pretty on the playing field. It was intentional, it follows the voice, it looks a bit better now due to the above changes.
4. 00:19:680 (5)-Add whistles on both the beginning and the end? Done.
5. 00:21:600 (7)-^? Done.
6. 00:24:960 (1)-Remove that whistle and replace it with a finish. Sounds better that way. Done.
7. 00:29:760 (2)-Fix the spacing on this by using the distance snap. I already fixed this, I just didn't upload the latest changes cause I'm working on something
8. 00:43:680 (3)-Try putting a whistle on the end. Let me know if you agree on that one. Indeed, done.
9. 00:47:520 (4)-Add a whistle on the end. ^
10. 00:51:360 (3)-^ ^
11. 00:54:720 (2)-Fix the spacing on this by using the distance snap? Same stuff as the above.
12. 00:55:200 (3)-Add a whistle on the end.
13. 00:59:040 (3)-^
14. 01:01:440 (1)-Fix the spacing on this by using the distance snap. Besides, it looks well displayed on the vertical line. Like this. o: Also fixed this, the pattern changed a bit so your change cannot be done, it makes a nice square now instead.
15. 01:02:880 (4)-Add a whistle on the end. Done.

Normal:

1. 00:03:840 (4)-Use the distance snap and move one grid down? It would look like its lining up with the previous slider. Done.
2. 00:09:600 (1)-Remove that whistle from the beginning and replace it with a finish. Done.
3. 00:13:680 (1)-Put a new combo here? Done.
4. 00:18:720 (4)-Add a whistle on the end? Done.
5. 00:20:640 (5)-^? Added a whistle on both start and end.
6. 00:24:960 (1)-^? Done.
7. 00:26:440 (2)-Add a whistle on the second reverse arrow? Done.
8. 00:32:640 (1)-Add a whistle on the end? Done.
9. 00:34:080 (2)-Add a whistle on the second reverse arrow? Done.
10. 01:07:680 (2)-Add a whistle on the end. Done.

Magica

1. Increase the Overall Difficulty by one. This difficulty would play much better if you do that. Discarding this, read at the end why.
2. 00:09:600 (1)-Remove that whistle and replace it with a finish. Done.
3. 00:24:958 (1)-^ Done.
4. 00:33:598 (5)-Add a whistle? Added it on the slider after that instead, sounds better.
5. 00:42:238 (1)-Remove that whistle and replace it with a finish. Done.
6. 00:57:598 (1)-Remove that whistle from the beginning and replace it with a finish. Done.
7. 01:17:278 to 01:19:198-Try and map something here. Or at least add a break. ._. Break added.

I enjoyed playing the Magica difficulty. Nicely done~

Good luck getting this ranked!

Star!
Thanks. :3

Zelos wrote:

Folder:

Delete unused OSB

Easy:

00:04:800 (4) - move this to the right 1 and down 2. im kind of an alignment nazi. Easy was already modified just I didn't upload it in time. This pattern looks a bit better now.

00:17:760 (2) - move up and to the left 1 grid point. it forms a pretty triangle now. Already done that.

Normal:

00:55:200 (3) - turn off distance snap and move it down 1 grid point. turn distance snap back on after. Instead, I've placed (4) by 1 grid up, this should make the same change but it won't affect distance consistency.

Hard:

00:40:320: Inseert a break time here to prevent to much of a loss of HP. Fixed.

01:17:160: ^^^ Fixed.

01:22:560 (1,2) - the closeness of these notes would throw people off (considering the timing measure) The pattern changed a little, should be alot easier for a "hard" difficulty, however I feel this doesn't need changing, it's a new combo so the distance can be pretty much whatever.

Star.
Thanks.

heatwave95 wrote:

[General]
00:42:240 - 01:12:960 Kiai time ~ Nah, I already tried kiai on this map I really think it doesn't fit. Kiai should be for longer maps as well.

[Easy]
00:15:360 (1,2) - spacing Hmm spacing looks fine to me.
01:00:000 (4) - can you make it longer or change to 1 spinner , no return ? because for easy it's hard to read. Fixed, it has a preceding circle now.

[Normal]
00:19:440 (1,2,3) - spacing ? Spacing is fine, it does look a tad stretched cause I don't want it to look cramped. The map is already heavily focused around the center anyway.
00:21:360 (1,2,3) - ^ ^
00:40:320 (N) use the drum rhythm to put circles or slider ~ Used a break instead (the one I removed before). This break saves the HP if a player doesn't play too well. Also following the drums wouldn't be fitting since the whole song follows either melody or voice.

[Hard]
00:03:840 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - so many circle return ? so hard to read , if you use it in insane okay , hard it should be easier .
Well, the idea of hard is to be ... hard. Not gonna change it, it's a simple pattern, after a retry or two you can't miss it (unless you really aren't ready for hard diffs) :3
00:16:320 (1,2,3) - make the jump bigger ? why make it smaller ? xD I made this jump smaller because it would be too hard to read if I stacked it. The jump is ... a jump, and the bigger jump would be a tad too hard for such a difficulty level.
00:19:440 (1) - spacing D: ? Fixed.
00:24:000 (1,2,3) - same at 00:16:320 ^
00:40:320 (N) use the drum rhythm to put circles or slider ~ Same reason as in normal diff.
01:04:080 (1) - spacing too D: ? While this note is 1(or maybe 2, depends how you look) grid too close, it's easy to read and it's a start of a new combo so it should be okay. Also, moving this note would require to move the whole combo which I don't want to do.

[Magica]
00:40:320 (N) use the drum rhythm to put circles or slider ~ Same as in normal.
01:15:180 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Doesn't hit the rhythm ? try hear the " violin or whatever instrument is that " try to fixed it. Yeah, unfortunately the nature of the song doesn't allow me to place the first note into a 100% correct spot, because the stream would be impossible/too weird. It sounds okay though.
Seems okay :3

Good luck Lolcubes
thanks for the first queue sender :3
Thanks to you. :3

Sander-Don wrote:

Pheon's Taiko:

Change the SV to 1.40, 1.50 is never used in taiko.

Proper Taiko BG

[attachment=0:8d2e8]Taiko BG.png[/attachment:8d2e8]

Star~ good luck on getting it ranked ヾ(・∀・)ノ

Louis Cyphre wrote:

Use Taiko BG 1024 x 768 like other BG's Done.
Who is taiko maker? Put his username to tags, in ALL difficulties Done.
Taiko settings should be like this http://puu.sh/11yO Done.
00:42:240 ~ 00:57:120, 00:57:600~01:12:960 - Add Kiai section? Nah, I am against kiai for this map.
Remove ED from Source Done.

Good map, have my star
Thanks. :3

ziin wrote:

[general]
can you trim the edge off of hitcircle.png so that it doesn't show through the hitcircleoverlay.png? Hmm, I don't see it showing through. There is a spot on the sides where it's close but there are details to show. Might try to modify the hitcircleoverlay.png instead.
video is pretty crappy. I can make a new one for you, but it probably won't have subs, or I can tell you how to make a better one if you've got a good quality source. Sure, would love to hear you about this. I used a [gg] subbed 720p source and converted it to .flv with premiere pro, but I don't know how to make it better quality without increasing it's filesize. I know the limit is 20MB for a map with a video but I don't think it needs to fill up all the space (I have a 13MB .flv backup, might try using that).
[easy]
00:40:320 - there is no break here, but there is one in the rest of the maps. Fixed.
01:12:960 - I suppose this is my opinion, but I think all the maps should probably end here or have a spinner here. I like to have a bit of a tag on the end of my maps unless it just suddenly ends. I couldn't decide between a spinner or a note, the note kinda gives a player some time to rest, but I guess spinner couldn't be TOO hard on a new player, I think. Gonna leave a spinner here for now.

[hard]
01:15:240 (1,2,3,4,5) - since you can't map this perfectly, (repeating) sliders? magia is easier because you're hitting more notes, so it's fine, though I don't agree with the placement on magia. I tried to tweak this a bit, I used 2 sliders as you suggested and timed them correctly (on a 1/8th beat). I think this might look better than before.

[magia]
I had high expectations for this map, and they all came crashing down. It's overmapped (putting notes where nothing is in the background) like mad:
00:03:960 (2) - Good idea, deleted this note.
00:10:440 (4) - Yeah, this is the part of a stream though, can't really delete this without impacting all of my patterns.
00:12:360 (5) -
00:14:280 (5) -
00:15:480 (2,2) -
00:18:120 (4) -
the pattern actually repeats pretty well so I won't check any more, since you're probably not going to bother deleting them. With that in mind, lets get to fully mapping everything. Indeed, wrote an answer only once.
00:09:600 - everything before this was boring. Map the guitar. I don't think mapping guitar here would be a good idea, simply because it would feel weird later on as after this time it doesn't really follow the guitar. It may seem boring to you, but having a same-paced map from start to finish sounds more boring to me than this alternative I made.
00:11:520 - add a circle, possibly finish. I wouldn't skip the downbeat for anything in this map. It's not fast enough to use that technique to create suspense. Done. Gives a better flow as well, thanks.
00:24:960 (1) - less streams more jumps. Well, it's a streamy map with some jumps around, I don't feel like breaking this stream would make an improvement, quite the contrary.
00:28:320 (3) - 1/4th slider I would prefer to keep this as it is, it was a slider before but I think this is better.
00:31:200 - may as well try adding a note Done, same thing as the above, thanks. :3 (also hit sounds changed a little around this spot)
00:32:280 - add 4 notes here. Hmm I am not sure what do you mean exactly, since between the slider and the first note of the next combo is only 3 ticks. But I don't think I will add notes here as this "section" let's call it ended and a new begins with the new combo. I probably did overmap this a little bit, but that is only because of the streamy nature of the map, this would kinda feel like adding the fuel on the fire. :3
00:36:000 (3) - repeating slider Chnaged to incrementing jumps.
00:39:840 (3) - move this note to 00:39:960 (3) - but keep it in the same space on the map. This idea was actually quite appealing to me, but unfortunately I doubt I will change this. Used your advice but changed placement a little.I feel like higher skilled players may do this map with double time, and this would completely destroy that idea.I will think about this, maybe I will just go with your idea but change the note placement a little.
00:40:320 - map the break. http://puu.sh/11Wc Didn't use your template, but I tried to think of something, check it out and tell me what do you think.
00:42:360 (2) - you have to delete this note, and the ones similar to it later. It sounds so much better without it. Here's the rhythm I came up with: http://puu.sh/11Wl It pretty much repeats as well, but I wouldn't change 00:52:560 (12,13,14,15) - except make that part jumpy.
the rest is up to you. All you have to do is listen, and the rhythm will come. You don't have to make it up or anything.
Used your advice and added some of my own stuff with it. Thanks, I feel it looks much better now (although I am not 100% sure about the incrementing jumps spacing, it's a bit more than 2.0 scale so I couldn't be 100% precise, but it feels okay I guess)

doomed151 wrote:

Nice map, though I have some suggestions.

[Easy]
Set slider tick rate to 1. It was 1 before, it works better with 2 I think. Will leave it at 2.
00:25:920 (3) - Finish here. I don't think this would fit since the pattern is a bit longer than 3+3. Sorry. :3
00:26:880 (5) - ^^ ^

[Normal
Set slider tick rate to 1. Same as easy. :3

[Hard]
Too much streams, save it for Magica and seems too hard, try to make it a little easier. These triplets are mostly stacked, and those spread ones are still close enough for a player to just tap quickly 3 times while not moving your mouse much, or at all. Don't think that's too hard (this is also coming from someone who is TERRIBLE at streams )
00:40:230 - Add a silent spinner ending at 00:41:280. Done. Nice idea, this made it feel much more "alive". Thanks.

[Magica]
The mapping style seems really close to mine when mapping an Insane diff.
Nothing to say here.

Other than that, it's really nice.
Good luck to you too.
Thanks. :3

narakucrimson wrote:

err.... full-submit the map again, when I download I just don't get a file that osu! recognizes o.o.....

lolcubes wrote:

00:32:280 - add 43 notes here. Hmm I am not sure what do you mean exactly, since between the slider and the first note of the next combo is only 3 ticks. But I don't think I will add notes here as this "section" let's call it ended and a new begins with the new combo. I probably did overmap this a little bit, but that is only because of the streamy nature of the map, this would kinda feel like adding the fuel on the fire. :3

1. No kiai? Try using one starting at 42:360 and ending at 01:12:960.
2. Well, check this hitcircleoverlay and see if you like it! And remember to use it only if you like it.
3. If you use that hitcircleoverlay, you might want to add this line to all your .osu files:
   SliderBorder : 250,224,254
   ,on [Colours], after the custom combo colours:
   
   SPOILER

   
4. Can't mod taiko sorry :C

1. 38:160 (1) - This distance is sort of confusing. Remember this is a normal, and this kind of things might get a new player in trouble. I'd suggest that you use the correct distance snapping (which is greater than the actual)
2. 01:20:640~ - Holy s*it nice pattern :3

1. 15:360~17:031 - Just saying, maybe the smaller triangle could go first, and then the bigger one. You'd have a niiice jump between them, too.
2. 23:040~24:720 - (^)

1. 29:760 (3) - As far as I know, fully stacked sliders are unrankable. Consider moving this :/

narakucrimson wrote:

Hi there!

[General]

1. No kiai? Try using one starting at 42:360 and ending at 01:12:960. Nah, not gonna use kiai on this map.
2. Well, check this hitcircleoverlay and see if you like it! And remember to use it only if you like it. It's nice, but I'm not gonna use it, it's too pink, makes the eyes bleed. Instead I added a new one which looks a bit prettier (and fits better). Thanks for the effort though.
3. If you use that hitcircleoverlay, you might want to add this line to all your .osu files:
   SliderBorder : 250,224,254 I actually didn't know about this, this was of great help, finally could find a matching color for my new overlay.
   ,on [Colours], after the custom combo colours:
   
   SPOILER

   
4. Can't mod taiko sorry :C It's alright. :3

[Easy]

Nothing worth mentioning, I just found some things of personal preference, like some alignments and stuff. Just remember to always have your map as tidy as possible, even if the patterns seem disordered. Took this advice and repositioned stuff in easy and normal diff to make it more tidy.


[Normal]

1. 38:160 (1) - This distance is sort of confusing. Remember this is a normal, and this kind of things might get a new player in trouble. I'd suggest that you use the correct distance snapping (which is greater than the actual) I think this was my error, cause I uploaded the map with 1.6x distance scale, when it's set to default (0.8x) then that note is correctly snapped.
2. 01:20:640~ - Holy s*it nice pattern :3

[Hard]

1. 15:360~17:031 - Just saying, maybe the smaller triangle could go first, and then the bigger one. You'd have a niiice jump between them, too. Done. Also changed the order a bit to make it more fun, and added a jump. Hopefully this doesn't seem too hard for a 'hard' difficulty.
2. 23:040~24:720 - (^)

Ah, don't know. Not much to say u_u


[Insane]

1. 29:760 (3) - As far as I know, fully stacked sliders are unrankable. Consider moving this :/ Hmm I know, but they aren't going one after another, they have a note in between. I am not sure about this, but I would love a MAT to confirm this.

Ah, what can I say. Here's your star
Thanks. :3

1. I have to complain about the combo color. sorry but they are too dark for this BG
2. disable letterbox during breaks
3. tags: Yuki Kajiura

1. 01:15:180 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - no, 1/4 snap only here. it's the same rhythm like what you've done with 01:20:640 (1,2,3,1,2,3) in Hard if you really want to follow the violin, new bpm/offset is needed imo

1. 01:15:900 (2) - 01:15:840~01:16:200 1/4 snap plz, same reason ^

1. 00:40:440 (T) - cancel the break

Colin Hou wrote:

[General]:

1. I have to complain about the combo color. sorry but they are too dark for this BG Fixed. The colors have changed to a brighter tone, should be easily visible now.
2. disable letterbox during breaks Done.
3. tags: Yuki Kajiura Done.

[Magica]:

1. 01:15:180 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - no, 1/4 snap only here. it's the same rhythm like what you've done with 01:20:640 (1,2,3,1,2,3) in Hard if you really want to follow the violin, new bpm/offset is needed imo Similar problem to hard. :3

[Hard]:

1. 01:15:900 (2) - 01:15:840~01:16:200 1/4 snap plz, same reason ^ Alright, I can try this, but I need some help. I don't understand how to implement this. Because, with the 1/8 snap it sounds perfect, so does this mean that I should adjust the offset for the 2nd slider and then put it back after the slider ends or?

[Easy]:

1. 00:40:440 (T) - cancel the break Done.

star~ oops 2000th post
Thanks. :3

Xeno32 wrote:

Sorry it took so long. Here is my mod

[Normal]
00:11:040 (4) - Sounds weird, I'd end it on the next whitetick. It follows the voice, ending it on a white tick wouldn't fit the mapping style I used for this diff. I will keep it like it is.

[Insane]
00:15:360 (1) - Finish? Done.
00:16:320 (1) - ^ Done.
00:23:040 (1) - ^ Done.
00:24:000 (1) - ^ Done.
00:24:960 (1) - ^ I guess you see what I'm trying to do now. Indeed, done.

00:40:320 (x) - Hitcircle + Finish Hitsounds? Changed the sounds to match the pattern you described above, making this one a bit different.
01:05:280 (1) - Finish? Done.
01:22:560 (1) - See SS Repositioned (4) back like it used to be, just like in your pic, sounds better, although I would prefer to keep the pattern like it is now, it forms something interesting once you select the both triangles and the last 4 notes.

SPOILER

Thanks a bunch. :3

Weezy wrote:

Sorry for the long wait >.< No probs.

General
- Add "Mahou" and "Shoujo" to hte tags as it's the other name this anime goes by. For all the diffs! Done.
- Make the Audio Lead-in to 1 Done.

Easy
00:16:320 (2) Ugly overlap here. Try this I guess it's a difference in opinions. I don't find it ugly, or atleast THAT ugly. The reason it's shaped like this is because of the distance spacing, other solutions would look weirder, trust me.

Pheon's Taiko
- Add "Yuki Kajiura" to the tags Done.

Hard
Fine here

Magica
- Add "Yuki Kajiura" to the tags Done.
00:29:760 (3) Try flipping this like this (fix any spacing issues after that) Changed this a bit (not like in your picture), but took your idea. Thanks.

Nice map
good luck getting this ranked ^^
Thanks. :3