hmm.... xD hi
I want a kudo for this, seriously haha :3
[SB/Skin]
Let's start for the easy things.
-Cut unnecessary transparency in a1, a2 ... , a easy way of do it, open the img in photoshop go to Image -> Cut... -> Transparent pixels after that save check the SB for fix the position and size of the img and it's done.
-Delete white.png and resize white.jpg to 640x480, is not necessary a 800x600 white.
-comboburst-0 resize it to 1x1 pixels and rename it to comboburst.
-scorebar-bg, scorebar-ki,scorebar-kidanger and scorebar-kidanger2 resize them to 1x1 pixels.
-change the colour of this spinner-approachcircle, maybe gray? or black?
Now the hard part <.<
-Never uses your bg img in your sb, so what to do now is:
+Create a black img (640x480) in your sb folder and use it or use your white img and add this to the code of the Sprite "_C,0,initialtime,,0,0,0", you are gonna need fix your sb but nothing so hard of do.
+Now look in internet for a new bg, not a black img xD, and if you don't want show it when you are playing/editing (a black background) add this in your .osb file
SPOILER[Events]
//Background and Video events
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
Sprite,Background,Centre,"bg.jpg",320,240
_F,0,0,,0
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
Now you have a bg to show in the page of the song, a black bg in your song and plus don't over load the sb so <3
Also some suggestions to your sb.
-00:07:248 I think than that fade, when disappear, looks bad, so my suggestion is not show the img until 00:10:157 aprox. when you do that black img move up.
-00:08:702 that black img moving up is a good idea but not with that img, try to make a black img but with the lower part transparent, I mean a img than fades from black to transparent, is gonna look much better xD.
-add a flash in 00:12:157 than starts 1/4 before and finish 1/4 later and and fade starts in 0%, go to 50% (in 00:12:157) aprox and finish in 0%, do the same thing 00:12:520. I think looks better but is only my opinion.
-add a flash in 00:13:066 now with 100% of fade (start it 1/4 before and finish it in 00:14:520), also add something more but that is up to you =P.
[General]
-Set the same preview point in all diff?
-Use same lead-in in all diff.
-Kimi no Shiranai Monogatari (TV Size), add a space and "Size" not "size".
[Easy] and [Normal]
-I think that they need a better set of hitsounds
[vivicat]
-CS +1, if you are afraid for the star rating I don't think than is going to be a problem, the diff. feels like a normal/hard.
[Insane]
-1.2 slider velocity ._.? I mean your normal is mapped with 1.3 ... xD spacing between circles looks fine but slider feels strange when you are playing.
[PolKmix]
-00:17:611 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - looks bad ... try another thing.
-01:04:508 delete this circle.
-00:42:689 (2) - move it to 00:42:508 and add a circle in 00:42:871, sounds better and is more easy of follow/play.
/me tired
Any problem with my bad english tell me please xD
Also no star (for now), ask for a recheck if you want.
加油~期待早日rank