Yura Hatsuki - Yuki no Hana · forum

Lan wings

790 posts

Joined August 2010

Topic Starter

Lan wings 2016-11-27T10:06:15+00:00

Dark and Hard wrote:
100% 372pp 又是一张神图_(:3 」∠)_

这还没rank,怎么看到pp多少的...？

yanlu

749 posts

Joined November 2010

yanlu 2016-11-27T10:36:02+00:00

tuhaha 說的我全都改囉謝謝吐哈哈~

ps藍翅膀找我就寫站內信吧...我的QQ號實在是忘記號碼啦(真的qq了

SPOILER

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TitleUnicode:雪の華
Artist:Hatsuki Yura
ArtistUnicode:葉月ゆら
Creator:Lan wings
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Tags:竜と炎の物語 ryuu to honou no monogatari Dragon and Flame 清風明月 seifuu meigetsu c85 Sharlo yanlu spboxer3
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yf_bmp

Elite Storyboarder II / Elite Mapper

1,631 posts

Joined December 2011

yf_bmp 2016-11-27T10:53:50+00:00

Dark and Hard wrote:
100% 372pp 又是一张神图_(:3 」∠)_

您很会评价图 : )

Lan wings

790 posts

Joined August 2010

Topic Starter

Lan wings 2016-11-27T13:38:22+00:00

yf_bmp wrote:
Dark and Hard wrote:
100% 372pp 又是一张神图_(:3 」∠)_
您很会评价图 : )

别这样啦人家意思只是神PP图

Low

2,006 posts

Joined July 2011

Low 2016-11-28T04:03:53+00:00

hello! from the Christmas☆Queue 2016

[General]
- is it acceptable to avoid placing the programmed epilepsy warning by storyboarding your own in? you may want to ask some BNs or QATs
- why is "Hard" not named "sp3's Hard", or something along the likes of that?
00:06:552 - this timing section should be deleted. the entire song is 3/4 from what it looks like since the piano is following 3/4 more so than 6/4
- you need to get rid of excess skinning files in the map's folder. there are many, like the images for "Mode", "Auto", and all of the letter rankings. there are more, so be sure to go through the folder and delete them. according to modding software, these are the unused filed:

SPOILER

button-left.png
button-middle.png
button-right.png
hit0.png
hit100.png
hit100k.png
hit300.png
hit300g.png
hit300k.png
hit50.png
inputoverlay-key.png
menu-back.png
menu-button-background.png
play-unranked.png
ranking-A.png
ranking-accuracy.png
ranking-B.png
ranking-C.png
ranking-D.png
ranking-graph.png
ranking-maxcombo.png
ranking-panel.png
ranking-perfect.png
ranking-S.png
ranking-SH.png
ranking-title.png
ranking-X.png
ranking-XH.png
selection-mod-autoplay.png
selection-mod-cinema.png
selection-mod-doubletime.png
selection-mod-easy.png
selection-mod-flashlight.png
selection-mod-halftime.png
selection-mod-hardrock.png
selection-mod-hidden.png
selection-mod-nightcore.png
selection-mod-nofail.png
selection-mod-perfect.png
selection-mod-relax.png
selection-mod-relax2.png
selection-mod-spunout.png
selection-mod-suddendeath.png
selection-mode-over.png
selection-mode.png
selection-mods-over.png
selection-mods.png
selection-options-over.png
selection-options.png
selection-random-over.png
selection-random.png
star.png

- since you are using a custom skin, i think you need to manually add a custom slider border in the .osu to avoid certain complications with the skin.
- drum-hitfinish3.wav has a lot of extra static noise at the end of the file. i strongly recommend you find a way to remove the static since it makes the file larger than it has to be and sounds bad

[Easy]
00:14:157 (1) - there is not enough time between the end of this spinner and the next object for lower level players to recover from spinning. to fix this, i would shorten this spinner by 1/1 so it ends at 00:15:425. this is crucial because because new and inexperienced players usually have a very hard time transitioning from spinner to circle/slider.
00:26:833 (1,2,3) - space these objects out a bit farther so they don't overlap. the overlap looks rather ugly, and is also inconsistent with the spacing you have at 00:29:368 (1,2,3), a very similar pattern.

[yanlu's Normal]
00:02:326 (1) - remove the whistle sound from the body of this slider. it doesn't sound right, and there is nothing in the music to support adding that whistle sound there.
00:11:622 (1) - adding one more node at the center of this slider, like this, would make it look much better. it gives the curves of the slider more definition and shape

SPOILER

00:15:002 (3,4) - why is the spacing between these notes larger? please make it consistent and symmetrical; there's no reason to have such an odd spacing change, and especially not in a normal difficulty.
00:34:439 (4) - seems as if you're missing a NC here. placing one would make your NC pattern here consistent with the rest of the map.
00:36:974 (2,3,4) - why are these all slanted in different directions? it would make more sense for you to make them all parallel to each other for neatness
01:14:580 (3) - perhaps you should move this up a bit. the border of this circle almost goes off the screen

[Hard]
- OD +0.5. the OD is pretty low for a hard difficulty
- HP drain +1. why is it so low?
00:07:819 (4,5) - the large spacing here really caught me off guard. so soon into a hard difficulty and you already have a pretty large jump. i would move (5) upwards a bit so the jump isn't too big and out of place. example: 00:17:960 (3,4)
00:10:777 (2,3) - space these out a bit more so they don't overlap.
00:29:368 (4) - NC here for consistency
00:44:685 (1) - the HP drain is lenient enough here so you can remove the break after this spinner
00:51:763 (5) - same as previously mentioned for consistency
00:53:876 (2,3) - same as previously mentioned for consistency

[Sharlo's Insane]
- OD +0.5. OD 7 works best for most insane difficulties
- HP drain +1 or +1.5. it's so low..
00:06:129 (1) - make the end of this slider silent or softer. it fits the music much better
00:40:777 (1) - removing the first node from this slider makes it look more aesthetically pleasing:

SPOILER

00:59:791 (1,2) - this arrangement doesn't flow all too well to me. try something like this that flows better, where the end of 01:00:214 (2) overlaps with the start of 01:01:059 (1)

SPOILER

[Snow]
- OD +0.5 or even +1. i think it would be best for the highest difficulty in a set to be at least OD 7.5
- HP drain +2 or +2.5. it doesn't need to be that low; the map is not too challenging and the song is not very long.

really fun circle jump set. good luck, and happy holidays

Lan wings

790 posts

Joined August 2010

Topic Starter

Lan wings 2016-11-28T07:38:32+00:00

Low wrote:
hello! from the Christmas☆Queue 2016

[General]
- is it acceptable to avoid placing the programmed epilepsy warning by storyboarding your own in? you may want to ask some BNs or QATs
- why is "Hard" not named "sp3's Hard", or something along the likes of that? because sp3 don't like "xxx's xxxx", she felt so ugly.
00:06:552 - this timing section should be deleted. the entire song is 3/4 from what it looks like since the piano is following 3/4 more so than 6/4 Fixed
- you need to get rid of excess skinning files in the map's folder. there are many, like the images for "Mode", "Auto", and all of the letter rankings. there are more, so be sure to go through the folder and delete them. according to modding software, these are the unused filed:Fixed
SPOILER
button-left.png
button-middle.png
button-right.png
hit0.png
hit100.png
hit100k.png
hit300.png
hit300g.png
hit300k.png
hit50.png
inputoverlay-key.png
menu-back.png
menu-button-background.png
play-unranked.png
ranking-A.png
ranking-accuracy.png
ranking-B.png
ranking-C.png
ranking-D.png
ranking-graph.png
ranking-maxcombo.png
ranking-panel.png
ranking-perfect.png
ranking-S.png
ranking-SH.png
ranking-title.png
ranking-X.png
ranking-XH.png
selection-mod-autoplay.png
selection-mod-cinema.png
selection-mod-doubletime.png
selection-mod-easy.png
selection-mod-flashlight.png
selection-mod-halftime.png
selection-mod-hardrock.png
selection-mod-hidden.png
selection-mod-nightcore.png
selection-mod-nofail.png
selection-mod-perfect.png
selection-mod-relax.png
selection-mod-relax2.png
selection-mod-spunout.png
selection-mod-suddendeath.png
selection-mode-over.png
selection-mode.png
selection-mods-over.png
selection-mods.png
selection-options-over.png
selection-options.png
selection-random-over.png
selection-random.png
star.png
- since you are using a custom skin, i think you need to manually add a custom slider border in the .osu to avoid certain complications with the skin. eh my english is bad,i can't understand D:
- drum-hitfinish3.wav has a lot of extra static noise at the end of the file. i strongly recommend you find a way to remove the static since it makes the file larger than it has to be and sounds badI will try it

[Easy]
00:14:157 (1) - there is not enough time between the end of this spinner and the next object for lower level players to recover from spinning. to fix this, i would shorten this spinner by 1/1 so it ends at 00:15:425. this is crucial because because new and inexperienced players usually have a very hard time transitioning from spinner to circle/slider. i think have 2/1 is sufficient https://osu.ppy.sh/s/72767 <--like this. but this is a good idea , Fixed
00:26:833 (1,2,3) - space these objects out a bit farther so they don't overlap. the overlap looks rather ugly, and is also inconsistent with the spacing you have at 00:29:368 (1,2,3), a very similar pattern.Fixed

[yanlu's Normal]
00:02:326 (1) - remove the whistle sound from the body of this slider. it doesn't sound right, and there is nothing in the music to support adding that whistle sound there.
00:11:622 (1) - adding one more node at the center of this slider, like this, would make it look much better. it gives the curves of the slider more definition and shape
SPOILER
00:15:002 (3,4) - why is the spacing between these notes larger? please make it consistent and symmetrical; there's no reason to have such an odd spacing change, and especially not in a normal difficulty.
00:34:439 (4) - seems as if you're missing a NC here. placing one would make your NC pattern here consistent with the rest of the map.
00:36:974 (2,3,4) - why are these all slanted in different directions? it would make more sense for you to make them all parallel to each other for neatness
01:14:580 (3) - perhaps you should move this up a bit. the border of this circle almost goes off the screen

[Hard]
- OD +0.5. the OD is pretty low for a hard difficulty
- HP drain +1. why is it so low?
00:07:819 (4,5) - the large spacing here really caught me off guard. so soon into a hard difficulty and you already have a pretty large jump. i would move (5) upwards a bit so the jump isn't too big and out of place. example: 00:17:960 (3,4)
00:10:777 (2,3) - space these out a bit more so they don't overlap.
00:29:368 (4) - NC here for consistency
00:44:685 (1) - the HP drain is lenient enough here so you can remove the break after this spinner
00:51:763 (5) - same as previously mentioned for consistency
00:53:876 (2,3) - same as previously mentioned for consistency

[Sharlo's Insane]
- OD +0.5. OD 7 works best for most insane difficulties
- HP drain +1 or +1.5. it's so low..
00:06:129 (1) - make the end of this slider silent or softer. it fits the music much better
00:40:777 (1) - removing the first node from this slider makes it look more aesthetically pleasing:
SPOILER
00:59:791 (1,2) - this arrangement doesn't flow all too well to me. try something like this that flows better, where the end of 01:00:214 (2) overlaps with the start of 01:01:059 (1)
SPOILER

[Snow]
- OD +0.5 or even +1. i think it would be best for the highest difficulty in a set to be at least OD 7.5 +1
- HP drain +2 or +2.5. it doesn't need to be that low; the map is not too challenging and the song is not very long. +2

really fun circle jump set. good luck, and happy holidays

happy holidays~

Sharlo

667 posts

Joined May 2012

Sharlo 2016-11-28T17:10:45+00:00

Lan wings wrote:
为什么要把某句话特别凸显出来

手滑选错了而已。。。

Low

2,006 posts

Joined July 2011

Low 2016-11-28T17:20:26+00:00

Lan wings wrote:
Low wrote:
- since you are using a custom skin, i think you need to manually add a custom slider border in the .osu to avoid certain complications with the skin. eh my english is bad,i can't understand D:

in the .osu file, under the section "[Colours]", add this in (this is the code for a white sliderborder)

SliderBorder : 255,255,255

example of what it should look like in the .osu file:

Lan wings

790 posts

Joined August 2010

Topic Starter

Lan wings 2016-12-02T04:39:53+00:00

Low wrote:
in the .osu file, under the section "[Colours]", add this in (this is the code for a white sliderborder)
SliderBorder : 255,255,255
example of what it should look like in the .osu file:

sry for late _(:з」∠)_

Turned out to be such, i know thx

z

yanlu

749 posts

Joined November 2010

yanlu 2016-12-02T12:27:58+00:00

All you said is fixed. Thank u Low

update plz

SPOILER

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: 5.V. Yuki no Hana.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2500
PreviewTime: 214
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 214,6552,14157,16692,36974,47115,49650,57256,59791,67397
DistanceSpacing: 1.4
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2.2

[Metadata]
Title:Yuki no Hana
TitleUnicode:雪の華
Artist:Hatsuki Yura
ArtistUnicode:葉月ゆら
Creator:Lan wings
Version:yanlu's Normal
Source:
Tags:竜と炎の物語 ryuu to honou no monogatari Dragon and Flame 清風明月 seifuu meigetsu c85 Sharlo yanlu spboxer3
BeatmapID:981364
BeatmapSetID:437097

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:3
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"bg.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[TimingPoints]
214,422.535211267606,3,2,1,50,1,0
44791,-100,3,2,1,30,0,0
45002,-100,3,2,1,50,0,0
46059,-100,3,2,1,30,0,0
46270,-100,3,2,1,50,0,0
49650,-100,3,2,1,50,0,0
80073,-100,3,2,1,20,0,0
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85143,-100,3,2,1,20,0,0
86833,-100,3,2,1,10,0,0
87678,-100,3,2,1,5,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,128,128
Combo2 : 255,255,255
Combo3 : 134,194,255

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Loneight

osu! Alumni

1,332 posts

Joined January 2011

Loneight 2016-12-03T05:21:49+00:00

IRC mod

－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－Easy－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－
12:30 Loneight: 先從Easy開始吧
12:30 Lan wings: 嗯嗯
12:31 Lan wings: GD的你照样说
12:33 Loneight: 00:07:819 (2,1) - 這裡的kick音, 讓我有點違和, 原因是會感覺00:09:087 (1) - 尾巴按照前面配置, 這邊應該也會跟著一個kick, 然而並沒有, 所以產生了違和感, 看要不要00:06:552 (1,2) - 這兩個音效設置交換一下, 我主觀的想法, 只是提提xD
12:34 Lan wings: kick音是啥来着
12:34 Loneight: 好像是你的clap？
12:35 Loneight: 就是有個don的聲音
12:35 Loneight: 00:49:650 (1) - 這跟上面那個差不多的想法
12:36 Lan wings: 我这里跟的钢琴诶
12:38 Loneight: 你有目的就可以了, 提提而已, 因為畢竟我沒看出目的, 需要理解xD
12:38 Lan wings: 这里前面第一个跟后面2个的力度都不同的
12:38 Lan wings: 所以第一个用了drum的hitnormal
12:38 Lan wings: 后面用了clap
12:38 Loneight: 哪乳吼都！
12:39 Lan wings: 你可以仔细听听后面两个力度重很多
12:39 Loneight: 嗯
12:40 Loneight: 01:04:861 (1) - 強迫症, 這好像沒對稱, 不要理我 xD
12:40 Lan wings: 纳尼
12:41 Lan wings: 我再对一下
12:41 Loneight: 長度的問題
12:41 Loneight: 中間點可能要再往上拉一點點
12:41 Loneight: Easy真的看不出甚麼問題 ;w;
－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－LuLu's Normal－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－
12:42 Loneight: 換來講講lulu的難度
12:43 Loneight: 00:02:326 (1) - 這個開頭, 有對上甚麼嗎, 若是自創節奏的話我覺得還是別加上音效, 違和感挺大的, 畢竟這裡的whistle聲音很突出, 一聽就知道不是歌的source
12:43 Lan wings: 好了我强行用shift把红点拉上去一点对齐了
12:44 Loneight: 我們都有強迫症
12:44 Loneight: (逃
12:44 Lan wings: 没强迫症怎么做图！
12:44 Loneight: 對阿！
12:45 Lan wings: 00:43:312 (2,1) - 你说我这里要不要把红色的尾巴跟白色的轨迹重叠
12:46 Loneight: 00:27:678 (2) - 感覺這部分對上鋼琴音會比較讓人有節奏感, 就像00:35:284 (2,3,4) - 打得很舒服, 後面同樣的地方就不多指出了
12:46 Loneight: 等等噢, 我看看
12:46 Lan wings: 嘛想了想还是算了不然要被人说Easy里面搞这样挡着看不了了
12:47 Loneight: 我覺得可以呀, 我也常常這樣做說
12:47 Loneight: 不擋著怎麼訓練新人讀圖呢！
12:48 Lan wings: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6714359
12:48 Lan wings: 那就这样惹._.
12:48 Loneight: 反正顏色不一樣, 不容易被誤導
12:49 Loneight: 後面鋼琴獨湊, ~~lulu偷懶我看到囉~~
－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－薯片你個Baka－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－
12:49 Loneight: 來換Hard
12:52 Loneight: ~~藍翼連你也偷懶~~
12:53 Lan wings: 这是薯片
12:53 Loneight: 00:27:678 (2,5) - 這個我想, 原因跟lulu的那一樣, 少了打擊感, 感覺換circles跟著鋼琴會很舒適, 就像00:32:749 (2,3,2,3) -
12:53 Loneight: 這是薯片的難度！？
12:53 Loneight: 真的耶！
12:53 Loneight: 那, 難度名稱記得統一 xD
12:54 Loneight: 難怪我覺得怎麼沒有橫軸移動感覺
12:54 Loneight: 00:38:875 (4,5) - DS可能要修正一下
－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－sharlo's Insane－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－
12:54 Loneight: 好, 換sharlo的
12:55 Lan wings: 薯片不喜欢那样的难度吗
12:55 Lan wings: 难度名
12:55 Loneight: 00:01:270 (6,1) - Distance？
12:56 Loneight: 其實我剛沒看到譜面上的介紹, 以為是你做的www
12:58 Loneight: 00:30:425 (6,1) - 感覺這部分的circles會有點誤導, 看要不要統一顏色, 把NC移到00:30:847 (2) - , 雖然會讓NC規律亂掉就是了
12:59 Loneight: 前面不提原因是因為slider旁邊突出的身體還能免被誤導, 而這裡因為是circles, 是整塊stack再一起
13:01 Loneight: 01:21:340 (1) - 感覺可以再增加些距離, 比較能符合鋼琴的音調, 也不會讓移動產生不舒適的感覺, 原因是前面鋼琴獨奏部分都是一堆跳, 然而到這邊突然縮減距離
－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－藍翼重頭戲－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－－
13:02 Loneight: 好, 換我們藍翼show time的難度了！
13:03 Lan wings: ;w;
13:03 Loneight: ~~藍翼跟sharlo一樣開頭都是用六角耶~~
13:03 Lan wings: 嗯
13:03 Lan wings: 有一点点区别
13:04 Lan wings: 不过明显我的善良多了
13:05 Loneight: 藍翼, 00:28:101 (1,2,1) - 要不要試著把NC對著這裡最突出的鋼琴音？[https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6714423 就像這樣]
13:05 Lan wings: 曾经试过
13:06 Loneight: 好, 當我沒說
13:06 Lan wings: 我看看你的图
13:06 Lan wings: 哦这样
13:06 Lan wings: 最后还是跟整体不太搭
13:06 Lan wings: 最后没改
13:07 Loneight: 嗯, 理解了
13:07 Lan wings: 所以用距离凸显了
13:07 Lan wings: 距离和音效
13:07 Loneight: 00:44:157 (1) - 感覺這個NC是為了避免stack而導致讀圖困難, 不過我想應該不會有事, 看要不要刪掉？
13:08 Loneight: 還是為了對vocal呀xD
13:08 Loneight: 嘛, 當我沒說好了
13:08 Lan wings: 00:42:890 (4,1) -
13:08 Lan wings: 其实是跟前面一样
13:08 Lan wings: 做到这里发现后面变了
13:08 Lan wings: 后面节奏变了
13:08 Lan wings: 然后就这样了
13:09 Lan wings: 反正正好可以做stack提示
13:09 Loneight: 根本沒什麼好說的呀, 神麻婆;w;
13:09 Lan wings: 啊
13:09 Lan wings: 我错了
13:09 Lan wings: 我刚看错了
13:09 Lan wings: 听你的把NC去掉吧233
13:11 Loneight: 我剛試打了一下, 我的手腕卡到滑鼠, 然後就死掉了233
13:11 Lan wings: _(:з」∠)_
13:11 Lan wings: 这都是手腕的锅
13:11 Lan wings: 为什么手腕要卡到滑鼠
13:11 Loneight: 然後打的時候發現有兩個地方能提提
13:12 Lan wings: 嗯嗯
13:12 Loneight: 00:52:608 (2) - 這個雖說我想DS應該是跟前面的部分一樣, 但感覺這邊可以做點修改, 增加一下DS, 效果好像步錯
13:12 Loneight: *不錯
13:12 Loneight: 00:59:368 (3) - 強迫症, 感覺能加點緩速
13:13 Loneight: 好, 沒了~
13:13 Lan wings: 00:52:608 (2) - 有效果图吗
13:13 Lan wings: 感觉没位置拉了！
13:13 Loneight: [https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6714457 差不多這種感覺]
13:14 Lan wings: 唔
13:14 Lan wings: 这样的话弯度要弄大一点了
13:14 Loneight: 嗯, 提提而已, 別在意
13:15 Lan wings: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6714466
13:15 Lan wings: 这样啦
13:15 Loneight: 不錯！
13:15 Lan wings: 00:59:368 (3) - 已经这么短了就不减速拉
13:15 Loneight: 那我去貼囉

就這些了！藍翼加油！
star~

Edit:
~~突然發現這是我第1000post, 來紀念一下~~

Last edited by Loneight 2016-12-05T08:07:49+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Flower

1,723 posts

Joined August 2011

Flower 2016-12-03T07:00:03+00:00

局的没什么好摸的，随便说点了
截图用的puush，可能要用代理才能看到

[SB]
01:07:397 - 这边突然加快很突兀，建议算一下在01:06:974 - 01:07:819 - 做一个渐进加速。雪是一张图的话这样弄也不是很麻烦，所以请务必拜托了

[Snow]
00:12:678 (2) - 往左上平移2格，这样00:11:833 (2,2,2) - 的距离保持一致，并且flow不致过于呆板
00:16:270 (3) - 这个地方没有音，打起来有点惨，建议这样子：http://puu.sh/sCxlz/e3b4310cbd.jpg
00:59:368 (3) - ^
00:17:960 (1,2,3) - 建议这里距离保持一致，比如说1放到248,272左右，打起来比较舒服
00:23:875 (1,2,3) - 丑死
怀疑jubeat玩家

[Sharlo's]
00:16:270 (3) - 这里据我看是没有音的，所以建议删掉
00:59:368 (3) - ^

[Hard]
00:10:354 (1,2,3) - 间距看起来有点不一样，把3往上移一点。你懒也可以不改
00:43:946 (8) - 这里在这个AR下非常难读，而且又跳，主要是丑，不如放在00:43:523 (6) - 下面
00:49:228 (1,2) - 可以blanket更好些
01:13:735 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - 不太hard啊

主要是感觉01:14:157 (3,1) - 之类的的间距有点吓人。可以把01:14:368 (1,2) - 交换位置。

[Normal]
00:02:326 (1) - 个人感觉删掉比较舒服。滑条头都不在音上
00:44:580 (1) - 这个绝对是不好看。建议修改

没了，祝好运

Lan wings

790 posts

Joined August 2010

Topic Starter

Lan wings 2016-12-03T07:43:54+00:00

Flower wrote:
局的没什么好摸的，随便说点了
截图用的puush，可能要用代理才能看到

[SB]
01:07:397 - 这边突然加快很突兀，建议算一下在01:06:974 - 01:07:819 - 做一个渐进加速。雪是一张图的话这样弄也不是很麻烦，所以请务必拜托了

[Snow]
00:12:678 (2) - 往左上平移2格，这样00:11:833 (2,2,2) - 的距离保持一致，并且flow不致过于呆板 Fixed
00:16:270 (3) - 这个地方没有音，打起来有点惨，建议这样子：http://puu.sh/sCxlz/e3b4310cbd.jpg 改成音量50 40 30
00:59:368 (3) - ^ ^
00:17:960 (1,2,3) - 建议这里距离保持一致，比如说1放到248,272左右，打起来比较舒服 Fixed
00:23:875 (1,2,3) - 丑死扔在3的sliderhead了
怀疑jubeat玩家俺不玩jubeat._.

没了，祝好运

Lan wings

790 posts

Joined August 2010

Topic Starter

Lan wings 2016-12-07T04:11:03+00:00

spboxer3: ~~fixed some~~

Jukkii

596 posts

Joined October 2015

Jukkii 2016-12-07T20:06:04+00:00

quick mod from the christmas modding queue

i suck at low diffs so im going to only mod the highest one (sorry)

00:21:657 (2,3) - why are these stacked like this when all the other slider doubles are stacked differently?
00:56:411 (2) - looks a bit weird imo
01:01:059 (1,2,3) - why is this reversed compared to the other 2 similar patterns before? its a bit weird to play and i cant really hear anything in the song to justify it

cant actually find anything else, its a really good map and im really digging the christmas skin elements

Lan wings

790 posts

Joined August 2010

Topic Starter

Lan wings 2016-12-08T01:52:26+00:00

-Jukke- wrote:
quick mod from the christmas modding queue

i suck at low diffs so im going to only mod the highest one (sorry)

00:21:657 (2,3) - why are these stacked like this when all the other slider doubles are stacked differently?because another slider's pattern not suitable this style
00:56:411 (2) - looks a bit weird imo me too, but i don't have another good idea ;w;
01:01:059 (1,2,3) - why is this reversed compared to the other 2 similar patterns before? its a bit weird to play and i cant really hear anything in the song to justify it ehhh sry, i can't explain in english(because my english is bad),00:59:791 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 6circle a group
cant actually find anything else, its a really good map and im really digging the christmas skin elements

thx for mod~

Iolite

219 posts

Joined February 2014

Iolite 2016-12-08T15:10:42+00:00

叶月大法好！这图我是第一个点fav的
想送个摸，不知dalao需要吗？

Jukkii

596 posts

Joined October 2015

Jukkii 2016-12-08T17:19:57+00:00

i decided to come up with a couple solutions to 00:56:411 (2) -

ofc a normal curved slider would work, but might be a bit boring, you can make them go into a different direction too

this would otherwise be a good choice but it overlaps with the followpoints in the jumps (https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6757248)

maybe something like this to blanket the slider before? (sorry for bad blanket)

these are my ideas for fixing it

yanlu

749 posts

Joined November 2010

yanlu 2016-12-10T11:08:59+00:00

sorry I'm late a bit >_<;

I deled 00:02:326 (1) - and re'do the slider00:44:580 (1) -
蟹蟹花花和肥翔:3/

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raririn

1,002 posts

Joined October 2011

raririn 2016-12-10T17:37:43+00:00

都挺好的只能随便扯扯

我总感觉00:00:214 - 和00:02:749 - 上面不该有finish啊

[Snow]

00:21:340 (1,2,3) - 我局的这样好看一点
1的头放在前面13中间 2的尾巴放在142线上这样
SPOILER
00:51:763 (4) - 是不是可以拉到x:256 y:284附近 2->3和4->5都是2.3* 但是3->4是3.0* 当然其实没什么差

[Hard]

00:12:890 (1) - 和前面1脑袋差了一格没有叠上强迫症玩家看着不太舒服
00:14:791 (4,1,2) - 有点难啊能不能换成个折返啥的
我本来还想说00:43:946 (8,1,2,3) - 难然后看到 01:12:467 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 这也太不hard了....

[Normal]
也好久不见啦

00:02:326 (1) - 这个诡异的whistle是啥...
00:26:833 (1) - DS好像突然变小了？好像也不是幻觉啊
00:58:523 (4) - 这个drum whistle也有点怪怪的...我个人觉得可能soft还好一点吧

/☆

Lan wings

790 posts

Joined August 2010

Topic Starter

Lan wings 2016-12-11T05:39:36+00:00

LunaSaika wrote:
叶月大法好！这图我是第一个点fav的
想送个摸，不知dalao需要吗？

可以啊~

Lan wings

790 posts

Joined August 2010

Topic Starter

Lan wings 2016-12-11T06:09:46+00:00

raririn wrote:
都挺好的只能随便扯扯

我总感觉00:00:214 - 和00:02:749 - 上面不该有finish啊我觉得没问题;w;

[Snow]
00:21:340 (1,2,3) - 我局的这样好看一点
1的头放在前面13中间 2的尾巴放在142线上这样这样的话也许会好看点，但是flow就不好了拒绝
SPOILER
00:51:763 (4) - 是不是可以拉到x:256 y:284附近 2->3和4->5都是2.3* 但是3->4是3.0* 当然其实没什么差可以

/☆

@-Jukke-
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6779894
try this

Iolite

219 posts

Joined February 2014

Iolite 2016-12-12T11:17:50+00:00

主要想说说音效，都是些主观建议，不想改也行w
觉得没用的话就no kds

Snow

00:05:073 (1,2) - 我倾向于把这俩的whistle去了，要不有些刺耳
00:06:552 (1) - 用drum略违和，soft+whistle就很好，00:49:650 (1) -同理
00:15:214 (3) - 略吵，只放一个sample-drum就好
00:18:594 (4) - 这个就别加音效了
00:23:664 (5) - 同上
00:27:256 (1) - 放个sample-drum吧，前面音效都比较密集，00:29:791 (1) - 00:32:326 (1) - 00:34:861 (1) - 同理
00:33:805 (2) - 00:34:228 (2) - 这俩音效去了吧，和00:28:523 (1,2,1,2) - 保持一致
00:36:552 (5) - 还是soft+whistle合适点
00:36:974 (1) - 放finish吧
00:37:397 (1) - 和00:37:819 (1) - 的音效交换下
如果00:38:875 (1) - 放softwhistle，00:38:664 (3) - 放sample-drum，00:39:087 (2) - 放drum-whistle，会不会感觉更好?
00:39:932 (1,2,1,2) - 这里几乎听不到1/2，改成两滑条吧
00:41:199 - drum去了吧，没必要加
00:42:044 (1) - whistle去了
00:44:157 (4) - 把whistle改成soft-whistle
00:44:580 (1) - 滑条头的whistle改成finish
00:55:988 (1) - 音效要和00:12:890 (1) - 一致
00:55:988 (1,2) - flow有点难受
这样会不会好玩些
00:57:890 (2) - 加个soft+whistle
00:57:890 (2,1,2,1,2,3) - 音效要和00:14:791 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 一致
00:59:791 ~ 01:04:861音效还是和00:16:692 ~ 00:21:763的尽量一致吧，有点随手
01:17:537 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - 根据音乐，这里的跳改成距离逐渐变小会比较合理
01:20:495 (1,2,3) - 这三个音量降些?
01:21:340 (3) - 还是放finish好，体现和前两个的区别

祝早rank~

UndeadCapulet

1,100 posts

Joined April 2013

UndeadCapulet 2016-12-16T02:06:00+00:00

general

it can be pretty hard to read the circle numbers font against the white combocolour. also, the white colour can blend into the background quite a bit, i think you should change/remove it

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how2mod lan

i think you should separate 00:27:678 (1,2) - from the previous jump pattern in some way, to further express the new high-pitched piano beats

01:18:805 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - these notes are quieter and lower pitch than before, i think using larger jumps here is really weird, i think you should make 01:17:537 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - the big jumps and 01:18:805 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - the small jumps

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sharlo

00:30:002 (4) - think you should move this somewhere else so the repeated 00:30:214 (5,6,1) - jump pattern is more obvious

01:06:129 (1) - maybe add one more grey point to smooth out this slider: http://puu.sh/sR2R3/daa4cdc854.png, your current one has a weird kick toward the end

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other diffs are fine, and hard is really pretty o:

Lan wings

790 posts

Joined August 2010

Topic Starter

Lan wings 2016-12-20T05:17:16+00:00

LunaSaika wrote:
主要想说说音效，都是些主观建议，不想改也行w
觉得没用的话就no kds
Snow
00:05:073 (1,2) - 我倾向于把这俩的whistle去了，要不有些刺耳只去掉2
00:06:552 (1) - 用drum略违和，soft+whistle就很好，00:49:650 (1) -同理这个音效跟的是钢琴不适合whistle的音色整曲大部分同样节奏都是采用同样的音效而且drum hitnormal不算很重我并不觉得违和啊？
00:15:214 (3) - 略吵，只放一个sample-drum就好同上和00:14:791 (1) -
00:18:594 (4) - 这个就别加音效了^
00:23:664 (5) - 同上^
00:27:256 (1) - 放个sample-drum吧，前面音效都比较密集，00:29:791 (1) - 00:32:326 (1) - 00:34:861 (1) - 同理 Fixed
00:33:805 (2) - 00:34:228 (2) - 这俩音效去了吧，和00:28:523 (1,2,1,2) - 保持一致同00:06:552 (1) - 至于为什么跟前面不一致,如果你看过我的一些图会发现同样的两段节奏排列跟节奏甚至音效都会有一定的区别
00:36:552 (5) - 还是soft+whistle合适点同00:06:552 (1) -
00:36:974 (1) - 放finish吧这里音色不适合finish
00:37:397 (1) - 和00:37:819 (1) - 的音效交换下 00:37:819 (1) - 改为drum hitnormal
如果00:38:875 (1) - 放softwhistle，00:38:664 (3) - 放sample-drum，00:39:087 (2) - 放drum-whistle，会不会感觉更好?00:38:664 (3) - 00:39:932 (1) - 仔细听你会发现这两个只适合下soft whistle
00:39:932 (1,2,1,2) - 这里几乎听不到1/2，改成两滑条吧自己脑补有就是了>.<
00:41:199 - drum去了吧，没必要加同理00:06:552 (1) - 不过音量的确有点高我调低点
00:42:044 (1) - whistle去了Fixed
00:44:157 (4) - 把whistle改成soft-whistle 同上面的很多时候drum的音色会比soft更适合钢琴
00:44:580 (1) - 滑条头的whistle改成finish 这里不太适合finish
00:55:988 (1) - 音效要和00:12:890 (1) - 一致同00:33:805 (2) -
00:55:988 (1,2) - flow有点难受唔之前改过形状忘了ctrl+g回来了 ps:图坠毁看不了
这样会不会好玩些
00:57:890 (2) - 加个soft+whistle 这里不适合softwhistle啦
00:57:890 (2,1,2,1,2,3) - 音效要和00:14:791 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 一致同00:33:805 (2) -
00:59:791 ~ 01:04:861音效还是和00:16:692 ~ 00:21:763的尽量一致吧，有点随手同00:33:805 (2) - 我再说一下吧,对于我来说同样的节奏在不同的时间段会带给我不同的感觉,所以梗是会有变化的,所以这是我不喜欢复制的理由
01:17:537 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - 根据音乐，这里的跳改成距离逐渐变小会比较合理根据我的感觉这里应该从小变大而且对于后面的节奏排列等等会更适合
01:20:495 (1,2,3) - 这三个音量降些? 调整了一下音量
01:21:340 (3) - 还是放finish好，体现和前两个的区别考虑过但是这里实在不适合finish

祝早rank~

UndeadCapulet wrote:

general
it can be pretty hard to read the circle numbers font against the white combocolour. also, the white colour can blend into the background quite a bit, i think you should change/remove it
actually,have more beatmap same this
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how2mod lan
i think you should separate 00:27:678 (1,2) - from the previous jump pattern in some way, to further express the new high-pitched piano beats sry, i can't understand?(my english is bad)

01:18:805 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - these notes are quieter and lower pitch than before, i think using larger jumps here is really weird, i think you should make 01:17:537 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - the big jumps and 01:18:805 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - the small jumps These music give me the feeling should be like this _(:з」∠)_

---

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other diffs are fine, and hard is really pretty o:

Chaoslitz

Elite Mapper / Elite Storyboarder

2,325 posts

Joined November 2013

Chaoslitz 2016-12-22T16:15:21+00:00

我來幫偶像改摸了
Helping Sharlo to fix her mod

Low wrote:
[Sharlo's Insane]
- OD +0.5. OD 7 works best for most insane difficulties sure
- HP drain +1 or +1.5. it's so low.. ok
00:06:129 (1) - make the end of this slider silent or softer. it fits the music much better fixed
00:40:777 (1) - removing the first node from this slider makes it look more aesthetically pleasing: hmm i slightly adjusted it
SPOILER
00:59:791 (1,2) - this arrangement doesn't flow all too well to me. try something like this that flows better, where the end of 01:00:214 (2) overlaps with the start of 01:01:059 (1) The flow seems fine for me, flow of 01:00:636 (3) is in the opposite direction which is good for emphasize
SPOILER

Flower wrote:
[Sharlo's]
00:16:270 (3) - 这里据我看是没有音的，所以建议删掉我聽到有個鋼琴A音啊...
00:59:368 (3) - ^

UndeadCapulet wrote:
sharlo
00:30:002 (4) - think you should move this somewhere else so the repeated 00:30:214 (5,6,1) - jump pattern is more obvious yup

01:06:129 (1) - maybe add one more grey point to smooth out this slider: http://puu.sh/sR2R3/daa4cdc854.png, your current one has a weird kick toward the end ok

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Thanks!

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Zero__wind

osu! Alumni

3,314 posts

Joined August 2012

Zero__wind 2016-12-31T03:59:10+00:00

~~先占个坑~~ 我是鸽王

General
所有diff开 Epilepsy warning
Hard结尾的spinner最好和Easy Normal在同一个地方结束比较合理并且逐渐降低音量不要最后还突然冒出个drum hitnormal

Skin
添加配套的pause-overlay.png 和fail-background.png ？现在暂停界面只有那几个按键变了没有配背景感觉有点奇怪
Slider组的皮肤元件缺少sliderpoint10.png 和sliderpoint30.png ，虽然我不是100%确定但是这个应该是必需的

Easy
很好

yanlu's Normal
01:06:974 (3) - 这里感觉就用个circle 和01:04:861 (1,2,3) - 形成呼应就挺好本身也并不是个很需要用短滑条的地方
01:16:692 (2,3,1) - 保持1.4x间距
01:20:073 (1) - 这里头上drum finish听着真的很奇怪整张图就这一个地方加了似的而且音乐里又没有鼓最好换成soft finish或者drum clap也行
音效总感觉听起来没什么规律可言不太搞得懂是怎么加的最好自己再仔细过一遍

Hard
00:44:750 - 或许和00:43:735 (7) - stack？没必要非要到中间去感觉Hard里面这种连续单点还是摆得顺一些
然后结尾部分吧感觉还是问题很大……
01:12:467 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这种梗当然是可以的但是你立马又跳到辣么老远一个新的梗01:13:735 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - = = 01:13:523 (6,1) - spacing 5.31? 这种间距在Hard里无论如何也是不可能接受的 01:16:059 (6,1) - 这里也是同样太远而且是连续这么多单点。
我建议你把最后这一段整体重新布置一下从01:07:397 (1) - 开始比如3个滑条6个圈 3个滑条6个圈这样反正一定不要连着12个圈不然我真的会很困扰……

Sharlo's Insane
没什么特别的

Snow
00:21:657 (2,3) - 为什么这里没有stack但是后面00:22:925 (2,3) - 00:24:192 (2,3) - 00:25:460 (2,3) - 都stack了呢就是觉得有点奇怪虽然也不是真的什么问题
01:01:059 (1) - 这里感觉跳得有点太大了和全图其他地方比起来都显得特别大音乐本身并没有给人这种感觉考虑调整一下梗
也没啥别的了

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Beren

962 posts

Joined September 2009

Beren 2016-12-31T05:29:10+00:00

Flower wrote:
[SB]
01:07:397 - 这边突然加快很突兀，建议算一下在01:06:974 - 01:07:819 - 做一个渐进加速。雪是一张图的话这样弄也不是很麻烦，所以请务必拜托了

我按照你的建议做了一遍，但是感觉速度的变化就不明显了，我觉得现在这样挺好的就不改了谢谢

yanlu

749 posts

Joined November 2010

yanlu 2017-01-20T13:02:26+00:00

raririn wrote:
[Normal]
也好久不见啦好久不見
00:02:326 (1) - 这个诡异的whistle是啥... 好像上次修刪掉了
00:26:833 (1) - DS好像突然变小了？好像也不是幻觉啊是的..我沒注意到請藍翅膀幫我調一下DS..
00:58:523 (4) - 这个drum whistle也有点怪怪的...我个人觉得可能soft还好一点吧 OK

謝謝Mod&原諒我Q_Q

Battle

2,865 posts

Joined February 2014

Battle 2017-02-04T17:54:22+00:00

[General]
inputoverlay-key.png is unused apparently?
Are you able to get a different sound for the drum finish? It sounds heavily distorted lol

[Easy]
00:04:016 (2,3) - Better not to stack these, people can click this early because beginners aren't exactly too good at reading approach circles, given how this is really slow it's easy to click early for them lol
00:24:298 (3) - NC to keep in line with your NCing every two downbeats
01:04:861 (1,2,1) - It'd be nice if these didn't touch each other lol

[Normal]
00:09:087 (1,2,3) - If you make things close like this, it's easier for beginners to get confused, move 3 farther away from 1 so they aren't touching
00:12:890 (3,4,1) - similar to above
00:21:763 (1,2) - Beginners tend to click the closest things, so it isn't good to have 2 where it is rn because people will click the tail instead of the head
00:40:777 (2,3,1) - Could be clearer where it flowed
01:17:537 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - You might want to simplify this somewhere, this is a pretty long string of notes and it's hard for beginners to do things consecutively

Overall some parts of the diff can be made clearer, mostly with things similar to the first and second points, but the diff isn't bad so yeah

[Hard]
00:14:580 (3,4,1,2,3) - You can improve visuals here a bit since stacking usually messes up things, it's fine to just slightly have bigger ds to make things not overlap and keep the pattern that you want
00:18:805 (4,1) - I feel this could potentially confuse people since it's very similar in spacing to 00:17:537 (2,3) - except this is a jump and not a pause
00:57:678 (3,4,1,2,3) - Same as the first point, but this one should really improve visuals if you choose to keep the previous one
01:12:467 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - This seems a little bit too difficult, if you choose to pull something like this I feel like you should at least make the combo numbers for 01:13:101 (1,2,3) - visible, since this is only a hard difficulty
01:15:002 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - ^

[Insane]
00:08:030 (1,2,3,4) - Emphasis should probably be most prominent on 4 not 3 since there's a piano and strong vocal there
00:15:425 (3) - mm I feel like this should at least have some emphasis since u chose to emphasize 00:16:270 (3) - even tho it's a weak piano beat

[Snow]
00:21:657 (2,3) - why not stack like 00:22:925 (2,3) - did
00:35:706 (1) - mm why not make it like 00:30:636 (3) - since there isn't vocals in this part while the other ones with NC-ing like 00:32:749 (1,2,1) - has vocals (easier way of phrasing it, make it a 1/2 slider because it's more similar to the 1st timestamp than the second timestamp)
00:59:791 - You have to timing lines here, delete one
01:22:714 - Why not a spinner like all the other diffs lol

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Lan wings

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Lan wings 2017-02-05T06:32:18+00:00

Battle wrote:
[General]
inputoverlay-key.png is unused apparently? it's useful~
Are you able to get a different sound for the drum finish? It sounds heavily distorted lol
Low wrote:
- drum-hitfinish3.wav has a lot of extra static noise at the end of the file. i strongly recommend you find a way to remove the static since it makes the file larger than it has to be and sounds bad
yes! i know this, but idk how to fix this static noise! and this is to do Granat honour, so i don't want to change this hitsound!_(:з」∠)_
[Easy]
00:04:016 (2,3) - Better not to stack these, people can click this early because beginners aren't exactly too good at reading approach circles, given how this is really slow it's easy to click early for them lol
1.I think 4 beats is already fully prepared lol
2.If i don't use stack, that 1.5x DS i can't put another place
3.If you worry " it's easy to click early for them ", look at this video! https://puu.sh/tOZDo/0d18724294.flv
00:24:298 (3) - NC to keep in line with your NCing every two downbeats sry, my NC style is pattern>rhythm, so no change
01:04:861 (1,2,1) - It'd be nice if these didn't touch each other lol Fixed

[Snow]
00:21:657 (2,3) - why not stack like 00:22:925 (2,3) - did because the same rhythm, I like to use different pattern to interpret
00:35:706 (1) - mm why not make it like 00:30:636 (3) - since there isn't vocals in this part while the other ones with NC-ing like 00:32:749 (1,2,1) - has vocals (easier way of phrasing it, make it a 1/2 slider because it's more similar to the 1st timestamp than the second timestamp) try this?
00:59:791 - You have to timing lines here, delete one Fixed
01:22:714 - Why not a spinner like all the other diffs lol because the same rhythm, I like to use different pattern to interpret, Even that is not my diff

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thx wwww

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Lan wings

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Lan wings 2017-02-05T06:57:56+00:00

Battle wrote:
[Normal]
00:09:087 (1,2,3) - If you make things close like this, it's easier for beginners to get confused, move 3 farther away from 1 so they aren't touching Fixed
00:12:890 (3,4,1) - similar to above Fixed
00:21:763 (1,2) - Beginners tend to click the closest things, so it isn't good to have 2 where it is rn because people will click the tail instead of the headFixed
00:40:777 (2,3,1) - Could be clearer where it flowedFixed
01:17:537 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - You might want to simplify this somewhere, this is a pretty long string of notes and it's hard for beginners to do things consecutively Fixed

Overall some parts of the diff can be made clearer, mostly with things similar to the first and second points, but the diff isn't bad so yeah

[Hard]
00:14:580 (3,4,1,2,3) - You can improve visuals here a bit since stacking usually messes up things, it's fine to just slightly have bigger ds to make things not overlap and keep the pattern that you want about 1.5x ok?
00:18:805 (4,1) - I feel this could potentially confuse people since it's very similar in spacing to 00:17:537 (2,3) - except this is a jump and not a pause 00:16:692 (1,2) - 00:19:228 (1,2) - i will give this more big jump to balance ._.
00:57:678 (3,4,1,2,3) - Same as the first point, but this one should really improve visuals if you choose to keep the previous one ^
01:12:467 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - This seems a little bit too difficult, if you choose to pull something like this I feel like you should at least make the combo numbers for 01:13:101 (1,2,3) - visible, since this is only a hard difficulty try this
01:15:002 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - ^^

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Battle wrote:
[General]
Are you able to get a different sound for the drum finish? It sounds heavily distorted lol

plz redl that new drum-hitfinish

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Lan wings

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Lan wings 2017-02-08T17:05:32+00:00

Zero__wind wrote:
~~先占个坑~~ 我是鸽王

General
所有diff开 Epilepsy warning 已经有SB提示,不过我会考虑换个回默认的
Hard结尾的spinner最好和Easy Normal在同一个地方结束比较合理并且逐渐降低音量不要最后还突然冒出个drum hitnormal Fixed

Skin
添加配套的pause-overlay.png 和fail-background.png ？现在暂停界面只有那几个按键变了没有配背景感觉有点奇怪晚点加上去
Slider组的皮肤元件缺少sliderpoint10.png 和sliderpoint30.png ，虽然我不是100%确定但是这个应该是必需的看了下默认皮肤也没这个原件呢

Easy
很好

yanlu's Normal
01:06:974 (3) - 这里感觉就用个circle 和01:04:861 (1,2,3) - 形成呼应就挺好本身也并不是个很需要用短滑条的地方 Fixed
01:16:692 (2,3,1) - 保持1.4x间距Fixed
01:20:073 (1) - 这里头上drum finish听着真的很奇怪整张图就这一个地方加了似的而且音乐里又没有鼓最好换成soft finish或者drum clap也行换了drum whistle+clap
音效总感觉听起来没什么规律可言不太搞得懂是怎么加的最好自己再仔细过一遍最好自己再仔细过一遍

Hard
00:44:750 - 或许和00:43:735 (7) - stack？没必要非要到中间去感觉Hard里面这种连续单点还是摆得顺一些我觉得这样太难读了不改
然后结尾部分吧感觉还是问题很大……
01:12:467 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这种梗当然是可以的但是你立马又跳到辣么老远一个新的梗01:13:735 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - = = 01:13:523 (6,1) - spacing 5.31? 这种间距在Hard里无论如何也是不可能接受的 01:16:059 (6,1) - 这里也是同样太远而且是连续这么多单点。
我建议你把最后这一段整体重新布置一下从01:07:397 (1) - 开始比如3个滑条6个圈 3个滑条6个圈这样反正一定不要连着12个圈不然我真的会很困扰……我又改了一大波

Sharlo's Insane
没什么特别的

Snow
00:21:657 (2,3) - 为什么这里没有stack但是后面00:22:925 (2,3) - 00:24:192 (2,3) - 00:25:460 (2,3) - 都stack了呢就是觉得有点奇怪虽然也不是真的什么问题怎么你们都喜欢吐槽这个_(:з」∠)_ 我喜欢不一样的行不行啊
01:01:059 (1) - 这里感觉跳得有点太大了和全图其他地方比起来都显得特别大音乐本身并没有给人这种感觉考虑调整一下梗
也没啥别的了越改越不合适,没梗惹

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Chaoslitz 2017-02-08T18:27:49+00:00

Battle wrote:
[Insane]
00:08:030 (1,2,3,4) - Emphasis should probably be most prominent on 4 not 3 since there's a piano and strong vocal there ok
00:15:425 (3) - mm I feel like this should at least have some emphasis since u chose to emphasize 00:16:270 (3) - even tho it's a weak piano beat uhh I guess i will move 00:16:270 (3) closer to previous note lol

Thanks!

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162,263,53453,5,2,0:3:0:0:
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228,212,53875,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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136,128,56622,1,0,0:0:0:0:
28,196,56833,2,0,L|48:356,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
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328,52,60847,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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292,308,61904,1,2,0:0:0:0:
248,152,62115,1,0,0:0:0:0:
113,61,62326,6,0,P|109:101|120:140,1,80,14|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,244,62749,1,0,0:0:0:0:
364,204,62960,1,2,0:0:0:0:
462,342,63171,2,0,P|422:343|384:332,1,80,2|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,244,63594,5,2,3:3:0:0:
260,368,63805,1,0,0:0:0:0:
276,160,64016,2,0,P|176:156|132:212,1,160,2|2,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,340,64650,1,0,0:0:0:0:
348,276,64861,5,14,0:0:0:0:
224,244,65073,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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260,368,65495,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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Mafumafu

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Mafumafu 2017-02-10T13:19:55+00:00

As requested~
[Easy]
00:31:904 (1) - The sharp curve does not match up with the music well.
01:04:861 (1,1) - This slight overlap looks not good.

[yanlu's Normal]
I suggest enhancing the overall spacing a bit to avoid the slight overlap between notes.
00:03:594 (2) - Split this into a 1/2 slider and a note would be better, in order to keep consistent with 00:01:059 (2) - .
00:05:073 (3) - 1/4 slider may not be appropriate here.
00:10:354 (3,4) - Spacing issue?
00:35:706 (4) - It's pointless to use such slider-shape. Just use simple three-anchor sliders.
00:42:044 (1,2) - Blanket needs an improvement.

[Hard]
00:07:819 (4,1,2) - Weird spacing arrangement here, 00:07:819 (4,1) - seems too large for a Hard diff while 00:08:664 (1,2) - is quite small. It needs to be kept consistent with 00:17:960 (3,4,1) - .
00:26:833 (1,2) - There needs to be some sort of consistency, since 00:26:833 (1,2) - and 00:31:904 (1,2) - own the same melody yet they are different in spacing.
00:34:439 (1,2) - Same here
00:43:312 (5,6,7,8,1,2,3) - This is extremely hard with so many singletap quares.
01:12:467 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I doubt the eligibility of such pattern in Hard. Due to the relatively low AR, players may be confused by the stack and misread the sequence of the notes. Briefly, this is too challenging to appear in Hard.
01:22:608 (4) - NC?

[Sharlo's Insane]
00:11:199 (1,1) - This extended slider seems abrupt, there are scarcely similar rhythms in other sections.

The top diff seems too jumpy for me xD

Lan wings

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Lan wings 2017-02-11T09:55:42+00:00

Regraz wrote:
As requested~
[Easy]
00:31:904 (1) - The sharp curve does not match up with the music well. Fixed
01:04:861 (1,1) - This slight overlap looks not good.Fixed

[yanlu's Normal]
I suggest enhancing the overall spacing a bit to avoid the slight overlap between notes.Fixed
00:03:594 (2) - Split this into a 1/2 slider and a note would be better, in order to keep consistent with 00:01:059 (2) - . 我觉得不一定要复制才是好的
00:05:073 (3) - 1/4 slider may not be appropriate here. 我觉得没啥问题;w; 要说照顾新手,新手是看圈点的,不管节奏咋样都没关系,再说这是个slider点快或点慢都不会影响判定;w;
00:10:354 (3,4) - Spacing issue?Fixed
00:35:706 (4) - It's pointless to use such slider-shape. Just use simple three-anchor sliders.Fixed
00:42:044 (1,2) - Blanket needs an improvement.Fixed

[Hard]
00:07:819 (4,1,2) - Weird spacing arrangement here, 00:07:819 (4,1) - seems too large for a Hard diff while 00:08:664 (1,2) - is quite small. It needs to be kept consistent with 00:17:960 (3,4,1) - .Fixed
00:26:833 (1,2) - There needs to be some sort of consistency, since 00:26:833 (1,2) - and 00:31:904 (1,2) - own the same melody yet they are different in spacing.Fixed
00:34:439 (1,2) - Same hereFixed
00:43:312 (5,6,7,8,1,2,3) - This is extremely hard with so many singletap quares.
01:12:467 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I doubt the eligibility of such pattern in Hard. Due to the relatively low AR, players may be confused by the stack and misread the sequence of the notes. Briefly, this is too challenging to appear in Hard. 事实上我觉得这个并没有什么问题,而且像这种就算再怎么坑顶多就坑一次,并没觉得有超出hard的范围=w=
01:22:608 (4) - NC?Fixed

[Sharlo's Insane]
00:11:199 (1,1) - This extended slider seems abrupt, there are scarcely similar rhythms in other sections.00:05:284 (1,1,1) - 我认为前面这里已经做了足够的提示;w;

The top diff seems too jumpy for me xD

Sharlo

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Sharlo 2017-02-24T03:37:13+00:00

@Chaoz Thanks!

Zero__wind

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Zero__wind 2017-02-26T14:37:34+00:00

走起来

Lan wings

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Lan wings 2017-02-26T15:57:02+00:00

Zero__wind wrote:
走起来

么么哒

spboxer3

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spboxer3 2017-04-03T01:40:23+00:00

媽的翅膀這張怎麼還沒飛阿

Lan wings

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Lan wings 2017-04-03T13:28:39+00:00

spboxer3 wrote:
媽的翅膀這張怎麼還沒飛阿

BN没戏

Kibbleru

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Kibbleru 2017-04-22T06:26:24+00:00

easy > normal spread a bit big?

Lan wings

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Lan wings 2017-04-22T10:21:46+00:00

Kibbleru wrote:
easy > normal spread a bit big?

Easy (1.13 stars, 66 notes)
Normal (2.11 stars, 146 notes)

ehh, is this big????

Battle

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Battle 2017-04-23T08:38:10+00:00

I'm more sure he's referring to how the easy and normal is mapped, easy is really light in rhythmic density, using a lot of long sliders while normal is fairly dense in comparison

Lan wings

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Lan wings 2017-04-23T12:20:55+00:00

Battle wrote:
I'm more sure he's referring to how the easy and normal is mapped, easy is really light in rhythmic density, using a lot of long sliders while normal is fairly dense in comparison

ok, how do you think Normal > Hard, Hard > Insane?
in my opinion, spread should look at the whole, not just look at it only
and, this is a guest diff, according to the different songs, there are some artificial differences I think no problem

sry for my english, because this is google translate_(:з」∠)_ may be different from what I would like to describe

Lan wings

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Lan wings 2017-04-23T12:36:04+00:00

PS: Normal it's not Easy's Normal, she is this song's Normal.

Battle

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Battle 2017-04-23T19:20:48+00:00

uhh personally it feels like the easy could be buffed a little or the normal could be toned down; since the easy is fairly simplistic, there is not exactly much of a "lead-in" on to the next diff cuz it uses a lot of 1/2 rhythms while there's huge gaps and long sliders on the previous diff

keep in mind that it only needs to be slightly adjusted since normal uses enough simple rhythms, just needs to be toned down to transition better from easy but not too toned down that it doesn't lead in to hard lol

Kibbleru

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Kibbleru 2017-04-25T01:32:37+00:00

easy has mainly 2/1 rhythms while normal has quite alot of 1/2, imo easy should have more or mostly 1/1 rhythms

but its mainly because this normal has alot of 1/2s

also that SV jump is quite big as well

Lan wings

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Lan wings 2017-04-25T09:40:10+00:00

i'm so sorry,I never thought that there was a problem with the use of 1/2 rhythm in Normal
in my opinion, Easy use 1/1, Normal use 1/2, Hard use 1/4, it's normal.
use 1.6x SV because overlap

Last edited by Lan wings 2017-04-25T10:31:44+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Lan wings

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Lan wings 2017-04-25T10:27:07+00:00

Here I can provide some examples (Easy 1/1 Normal 1/2)
this is my ranked map:
Hatsune Miku - Kyokou no Tsukiyo
Hatsune Miku - Monochroact 12BARRY21's GD
Bilibili Douga - Night of Feifan Brother _Kiva's GD
96 - Shining Wizard
MiddleIsland - Vision
TryHardNinja - Minecraft Style No_Gu's GD

this is my pending? map:
flumpool - Yoru Wa Nemureru Kai?
MiddleIsland - Time for Crown No_Gu's GD

another mapper's map:
Reol - No title
Panda Eyes & Teminite - Highscore this map not have easy
HoneyWorks - Akatsuki Zukuyo
Wotamin - Gigantic O.T.N
07th Expansion - lixAxil
Gentle Stick X M2U - Hades in the Heaven

if you want, i can find more
and don't forget this song only have 142BPM

alacat

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alacat 2017-04-25T13:55:38+00:00

Hey Lan, I think the romanised artist should be "Yura Hatsuki" according the official websites.

https://soundcloud.com/yura_hatsuki
http://hatukiyura.sakura.ne.jp/

Then, checked in on same case of other her song : https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/p/5356054

Please change it before qualify, Good luck!

Lan wings

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Lan wings 2017-04-26T06:46:13+00:00

alacat wrote:
Hey Lan, I think the romanised artist should be "Yura Hatsuki" according the official websites.

https://soundcloud.com/yura_hatsuki
http://hatukiyura.sakura.ne.jp/

Then, checked in on same case of other her song : https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/p/5356054

Please change it before qualify, Good luck!

thx and fixed ;w;

but....http://~~hatukiyura~~.sakura.ne.jp/

Kibbleru wrote:
easy has mainly 2/1 rhythms while normal has quite alot of 1/2, imo easy should have more or mostly 1/1 rhythms

maybe our idea is different
my easy all are 1/1 rhythms

plz look at that red line

Zero__wind

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Zero__wind 2017-04-26T06:58:24+00:00

Rebubble for meta change

Lan wings

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Lan wings 2017-04-26T07:06:19+00:00

Zero__wind wrote:
Rebubble for meta change

谢谢了

Pentori

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Pentori 2017-05-10T02:04:37+00:00

checking bubbles
[General]
add ur storyboarder to tags?

[Snow]
00:25:566 (3) - could be emphasised a bit better imo, since the piano here is a lot stronger than 00:21:763 (3) - 00:23:030 (3) - but you have less spacing
00:27:678 (1,2,1) - 00:32:749 (1,2,1) - you could do a better job at making these stand out more, the spacing before these patterns is quite high making it hard for the player to tell between spacings. stuff like 00:34:439 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - works well cos you start with less spacing 00:34:439 (1,2,1,2)
00:59:791 - i dont think this section deserves to be this intense. this part isn't much different from 00:16:692 - so u should try introduce some more sliders to make the sections consistent
01:08:664 (7) - 01:11:199 (7) - would be worthwhile to nc these, since you dont really have anything else that sets these beats apart from everything else

[Sharlo's Insane]
00:30:214 (5,6) - spacing seems really weak here. its really similar to 00:29:580 (2,3) - whereas in other patterns you emphasised these beats much more 00:27:678 (3,4)
00:40:143 (4) - skips over too many sounds tbh, and doesnt represent any specific sound. i'd break this into a circle + 1/2 slider
00:53:453 (1,2,3,4,5) - y so much spacing. patterns like 00:50:918 (1,2,3,4,5) - 00:54:721 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - vary in spacing but this is just pure high spaced jumps :/
01:05:284 (3,4,5) - spacing change also seems really random here, should probably move 01:05:706 (5) - closer

[Hard]
why dont you give this diff the appropriate name, including the user that made it
00:01:059 (3,4) - 00:03:594 (5,6) - ctrl g rhythm? i dont think passively mapping the strongest sound is nice at all :c
00:12:890 (1) - skipping over 00:13:312 - is pretty disappointing tbh, could try something similar to what u did in snow
00:31:904 (1,2) - 00:34:439 (1,2) - the jumps seem unnecessary, since with similar sounds 00:26:833 (1,2) - 00:29:368 (1,2) - you had no spacing changes
00:36:552 (1,2) - swap ncs for downbeat
00:39:509 (6,1) - ^ etc. downbeats seem misaligned here. see if u can keep them consistently on every 2nd measure
00:55:988 (1) - same thing about rhythm
01:20:073 (4) - should be attached to this pattern 01:20:495 (1,2,3)

[yanlu's Normal]
00:05:073 (3) - dont use 1/4 in normal pls
01:17:537 (4,5) - pattern is probably too complicated, since you're switching between white ticks and red ticks while mapping the 1/2s and can get really confusing. probably better to stick to white ticks

spread between easy > normal seems a bit worrying, since easy plays really slow in comparison and has much simpler rhythms. will get some more opinions tho

Lan wings

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Lan wings 2017-05-10T05:22:08+00:00

Pentori wrote:
checking bubbles
[General]
add ur storyboarder to tags?Fixed

[Snow]
00:25:566 (3) - could be emphasised a bit better imo, since the piano here is a lot stronger than 00:21:763 (3) - 00:23:030 (3) - but you have less spacing Fixed
00:27:678 (1,2,1) - 00:32:749 (1,2,1) - you could do a better job at making these stand out more, the spacing before these patterns is quite high making it hard for the player to tell between spacings. stuff like 00:34:439 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - works well cos you start with less spacing 00:34:439 (1,2,1,2) I don't think there is a need for gradual progress, because my rhythm is always 1/2
00:59:791 - i dont think this section deserves to be this intense. this part isn't much different from 00:16:692 - so u should try introduce some more sliders to make the sections consistent Context is different
01:08:664 (7) - 01:11:199 (7) - would be worthwhile to nc these, since you dont really have anything else that sets these beats apart from everything else Fixed

[yanlu's Normal]
00:05:073 (3) - dont use 1/4 in normal pls i think this is a 1/2 slider
01:17:537 (4,5) - pattern is probably too complicated, since you're switching between white ticks and red ticks while mapping the 1/2s and can get really confusing. probably better to stick to white ticks I think this rhythm is in line with music

spread between easy > normal seems a bit worrying, since easy plays really slow in comparison and has much simpler rhythms. will get some more opinions tho plz, Normal is a GD, Easy and Normal are not made by the same person, Human error is allowed! do you know?

I said, Normal it's not Easy's Normal, she is this song's Normal.
Easy and Normal is different people completed at the same time, It is impossible to have reference.
We only need to know this diff belongs to the range of Normal on it.

Izzywing

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Izzywing 2017-05-12T05:38:31+00:00

00:05:073 (3) -

this is a 1/4 slider for sure (in the normal), should just use 1/2 instead

Lan wings

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Lan wings 2017-05-12T07:08:19+00:00

Hobbes2 wrote:
00:05:073 (3) -

this is a 1/4 slider for sure (in the normal), should just use 1/2 instead

so, is this 1/8?
plz! don't do this, lmao
in my opinion, this is a 3/4 slider

Izzywing

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Izzywing 2017-05-12T07:20:43+00:00

Using 1/4 in a normal is not recommended because normal level players will try to play out the slider instead of just holding down like a more experienced player would. This movement is too complex for them, and they generally don't have the reaction time to deal with a 1/4 slider like this regardless.

Your justification doesn't fit because by your logic, you could use 1/4 repeat sliders in an easy diff and say it's okay because the total duration of the sliders is still 1/1 or whatever. It doesn't work like that.

Nao Tomori

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Nao Tomori 2017-05-12T07:46:08+00:00

hi! i have some concerns about your low diffs!

[normal]
00:05:073 (3) - this is unrankable.

Note density should consist of mostly 1/1, occasional 1/2, or slower rhythms.

regardless of what you say to the contrary, this is 1/4 snap and is therefore breaking a ranking criteria guideline.

00:09:721 (2) - the rhythm here is poor, you could do something like http://puu.sh/vNvfT/f102d7d2a0.jpg to put clicks on all the vocals.

01:08:664 (1,2,3) - this kind of back and forth movement is very difficult for a beginner and should be avoided. please change it to something more comfortable.

[easy]
the spread gap between easy and normal is too big. normal uses extended 1/2 rhythms, occasionally with multiple circles in a row. most gaps in rhythm are 1/2 long.
easy uses mostly 2/1 rhythms and has exclusively 1/1 gaps. the easy is therefore too easy compared to the normal, and you should adjust it as such.

Human error is allowed! do you know?

the point of the modding process is to fix the errors that you clearly made, not to acknowledge and then ignore them.

let me know when you've responded and fixed the easy - normal spread issue so i can remove this pop.

Regou

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Regou 2017-05-12T09:54:42+00:00

Putting my point of view here. Hope it helps.

Hobbes2 wrote:
Using 1/4 in a normal is not recommended because normal level players will try to play out the slider instead of just holding down like a more experienced player would. This movement is too complex for them, and they generally don't have the reaction time to deal with a 1/4 slider like this regardless.

yes, that's right they don't even have the reaction time to make the whole movement so turn out it would work similar to simply holding the slider there. - like moving to the middle of the sliders and the slider end already since is duration is very, very short as long as it does not contain too many reverses. It might be slightly more effortful for the players to play it but it should still be playable and passable for normal level players. So what's the problem for putting the 1/4 slider? Especially in this case, the time spacing between 00:05:073 (3,1) - is very large so even the player panicked after playing the 1/4 sliders they should still have time to recover and reach (1). Therefore I think it should be fine.

And what's more important is that

Note density should consist of mostly 1/1, occasional 1/2, or slower rhythms.

is just a guideline, which means you don't have to 100% follow it.

guidelines may be violated under exceptional circumstances.

In addition, imo note density is about time between two notes but not the snapping of the notes. If you snap a circle instead of a circle instead of a slider with 1/4 snap while it has at least time of a 1/2 beat before next note, would you call that the note intensity is too dense right there? With this criteria, the note intensity at that place should be completely fine.

Of course, I am not a bn/qat so I'm not an expert of ranking criteria, therefore what I said might not be very accurate. Please correct me if I made any wrong claim.

Putting https://osu.ppy.sh/b/65951 as an example (I know, it's a very old map), in saymun's normal, 1/4 reverse sliders are also being applied to the map. (e.g. 00:23:445 (1) - )
Or how about looking into some more recent maps?
https://osu.ppy.sh/b/458210 like this one, 1/2 250bpm sliders are being used in normal difficulty, which are equal to 1/4 125bpm sliders, is also being allowed.

Lan wings

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Lan wings 2017-05-12T10:57:41+00:00

Naotoshi wrote:
hi! i have some concerns about your low diffs!
[normal]
00:05:073 (3) - this is unrankable. guideline≠rule
Note density should consist of mostly 1/1, occasional 1/2, or slower rhythms.

Rhythm related guidelines apply to approximately 180 BPM maps.
If your song is drastically faster or slower, some variables might be different. Apply reasonable judgment in these cases.
this song is 142BPM

regardless of what you say to the contrary, this is 1/4 snap and is therefore breaking a ranking criteria guideline.

00:09:721 (2) - the rhythm here is poor, you could do something like http://puu.sh/vNvfT/f102d7d2a0.jpg to put clicks on all the vocals.Fixed

01:08:664 (1,2,3) - this kind of back and forth movement is very difficult for a beginner and should be avoided. please change it to something more comfortable.Fixed

[easy]
the spread gap between easy and normal is too big. normal uses extended 1/2 rhythms, occasionally with multiple circles in a row. most gaps in rhythm are 1/2 long.
easy uses mostly 2/1 rhythms and has exclusively 1/1 gaps. the easy is therefore too easy compared to the normal, and you should adjust it as such.

Human error is allowed! do you know?
the point of the modding process is to fix the errors that you clearly made, not to acknowledge and then ignore them.

let me know when you've responded and fixed the easy - normal spread issue so i can remove this pop.

spboxer3

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spboxer3 2017-05-12T11:32:23+00:00

Pentori wrote:
[Hard]
why dont you give this diff the appropriate name, including the user that made it cuz I don't want it
00:01:059 (3,4) - 00:03:594 (5,6) - ctrl g rhythm? i dont think passively mapping the strongest sound is nice at all :c changed (3,4) but keep the (5,6), I don't think 00:04:016 - is a nice click point. I deny it.
00:12:890 (1) - skipping over 00:13:312 - is pretty disappointing tbh, could try something similar to what u did in snow I don’t think so. u didn't catch up my view of the song. Basicly I follow the vocal at here part, it's surely match for the song.
00:31:904 (1,2) - 00:34:439 (1,2) - the jumps seem unnecessary, since with similar sounds 00:26:833 (1,2) - 00:29:368 (1,2) - you had no spacing changes uhh... it's really important to player? come on, it doesn't hard to play and I want to stress the sound of piano. also I want to distinguish here from previous part.
00:36:552 (1,2) - swap ncs for downbeat k
00:39:509 (6,1) - ^ etc. downbeats seem misaligned here. see if u can keep them consistently on every 2nd measure I get your opinion but this rhythm is express what I want to click.
00:55:988 (1) - same thing about rhythm same as previous
01:20:073 (4) - should be attached to this pattern 01:20:495 (1,2,3) umm... I separate 01:20:073 (4) - from 01:20:495 (1,2,3) - cuz there is material difference of pitch, so I don't wanna change it

thanks for modding

http://puu.sh/vNCU4.osu

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Nao Tomori 2017-05-12T14:03:59+00:00

Lan wings wrote:
[normal]
00:05:073 (3) - this is unrankable. guideline≠rule
Note density should consist of mostly 1/1, occasional 1/2, or slower rhythms.

Rhythm related guidelines apply to approximately 180 BPM maps.
If your song is drastically faster or slower, some variables might be different. Apply reasonable judgment in these cases.
this song is 142BPM

in my opinion, and lots of other people's opinions, 142 bpm is NOT drastically slower than 180 bpm. therefore, i say that this guideline should not be violated. please change it.

regardless of what you say to the contrary, this is 1/4 snap and is therefore breaking a ranking criteria guideline.

[easy]
the spread gap between easy and normal is too big. normal uses extended 1/2 rhythms, occasionally with multiple circles in a row. most gaps in rhythm are 1/2 long.
easy uses mostly 2/1 rhythms and has exclusively 1/1 gaps. the easy is therefore too easy compared to the normal, and you should adjust it as such.

this does not address the issue i'm bringing up, which is that your easy has very simple rhythm while your normal is significantly more complex. yes, your easy uses a lot of 1/1 gaps. your normal regularly uses multiple 1/2 gaps in a row, which makes it much harder than the easy in terms of note density. i recommend you raise the difficulty of the easy by use of occasional 1/2 gaps in the most intense parts of the song, or lower the difficulty of the normal in a similar way.

let me know when you've responded and fixed the easy - normal spread issue so i can remove this pop.[/quote]

Izzywing

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Izzywing 2017-05-12T14:14:15+00:00

I'd be willing to buy the BPM excuse to an extent along with the fact that since it's the only 1/4 in the song (aside from 00:05:073 (3) - ), so the 1/4 slider does make it stand out. I still personally think that the slider is too short, but I won't let my personal opinion stop you from pushing this forward.

For what it's worth, guidelines are there for a reason; you can't just break them willy-nilly. I wouldn't consider what you provided as an "exceptional circumstance," but who am I to judge if others would see it as such.

@Regou, snapping of notes does come into play when referring to note density. You wouldn't put something like this in a hard, even though the space between notes is all 1/4, right? The example doesn't apply to this situation but I wanted to respond to that point.

So yeah, good luck in ranking!

Lan wings

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Lan wings 2017-05-12T16:52:28+00:00

Naotoshi wrote:
[normal]
00:05:073 (3) - this is unrankable. guideline≠rule
Note density should consist of mostly 1/1, occasional 1/2, or slower rhythms.

Rhythm related guidelines apply to approximately 180 BPM maps.
If your song is drastically faster or slower, some variables might be different. Apply reasonable judgment in these cases.
this song is 142BPM

in my opinion, and lots of other people's opinions, 142 bpm is NOT drastically slower than 180 bpm. therefore, i say that this guideline should not be violated. please change it.

1.in my opinion, note intensity is not about the snapping of the note but the time between two notes. one slider one note
2."Rhythm related guidelines apply to approximately 180 BPM maps.
If your song is drastically faster or slower, some variables might be different. Apply reasonable judgment in these cases."
whatever, 142BPM is slower then 180BPM,I didn't even violate any guideline
3.guideline≠rule. so, this is not unrankable
4.in my opinion, only 1/4 rhythm can match this part,so 1/4 repair slider is the best choice.
5.this slider is at 00:05:073 - is this song's beginning, not at the end,players have enough time to know this rhythm.
6.this slider is starting at 00:05:073 - and ending at 00:05:284 - , just only stay 155ms(OD4 accuracy range is 56ms) ,is this hard????????,players can even put this note as a circle.and plz don't think that beginner players are so noob

regardless of what you say to the contrary, this is 1/4 snap and is therefore breaking a ranking criteria guideline.

[easy]
the spread gap between easy and normal is too big. normal uses extended 1/2 rhythms, occasionally with multiple circles in a row. most gaps in rhythm are 1/2 long.
easy uses mostly 2/1 rhythms and has exclusively 1/1 gaps. the easy is therefore too easy compared to the normal, and you should adjust it as such.

this does not address the issue i'm bringing up, which is that your easy has very simple rhythm while your normal is significantly more complex. yes, your easy uses a lot of 1/1 gaps. your normal regularly uses multiple 1/2 gaps in a row, which makes it much harder than the easy in terms of note density. i recommend you raise the difficulty of the easy by use of occasional 1/2 gaps in the most intense parts of the song, or lower the difficulty of the normal in a similar way.

about this, i simplified Normal,so the above did not say anything, just waiting for sharlo fix the mod and update it.

let me know when you've responded and fixed the easy - normal spread issue so i can remove this pop.[/quote]

Regou

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Regou 2017-05-12T17:26:08+00:00

@Hobbes See what you mean, originally I am thinking about something like this which have a larger time gap, just saying xD

~~for no reason I think I'd put what you shown in hard difficulty if bn actually allows it~~

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Sharlo 2017-05-12T18:18:01+00:00

all fixed~~
thanks

Lan wings

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Lan wings 2017-05-12T18:22:01+00:00

update

Nao Tomori

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Nao Tomori 2017-05-13T20:25:38+00:00

there is still this ~~stupid~~ unfitting for this difficulty leve 1/4 note...

anyway, as i advised earlier, patterns like 01:08:664 (1,2,3) - or 01:11:199 (1,2,3) - are pretty confusing, so i advise changing them

also, sections like 00:36:974 (2,3,4,1,2,1) - still seem a bit dense - replacing 00:36:974 (2,3,4) - with circles would fit much better imo.
same at 00:25:566 (3,4,5) - ofc

in any case, after you do that, zero wind can rebubble

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Lan wings

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Lan wings 2017-05-13T21:35:46+00:00

Naotoshi wrote:
there is still this stupid 1/4 note...
4.in my opinion, only 1/4 rhythm can match this part,so 1/4 repair slider is the best choice.
stupid?are you insulting me?
anyway, as i advised earlier, patterns like 01:08:664 (1,2,3) - or 01:11:199 (1,2,3) - are pretty confusing, so i advise changing themFixed

also, sections like 00:36:974 (2,3,4,1,2,1) - still seem a bit dense - replacing 00:36:974 (2,3,4) - with circles would fit much better imo. Fixed
same at 00:25:566 (3,4,5) - ofc i think this is ok

in any case, after you do that, zero wind can rebubble

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Lan wings

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Lan wings 2017-05-13T21:46:44+00:00

在我已经说明了这是我认为的最佳选择的时候,您仍能说出stupid这样的话来,请问您这是在侮辱我吗?
身位一个BN,麻烦您检讨一下自己的言行, 谢谢
很抱歉这句话我懒得去谷歌翻译了这实在是太令人生气了

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Izzywing

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Izzywing 2017-05-14T00:08:37+00:00

Edit 2 - Lan Wings, don't take what Nao said personally; just because he called the object stupid doesn't mean he's calling you stupid. Seems to be a language barrier issue I guess lol

Lan wings

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Lan wings 2017-05-14T04:07:14+00:00

Hobbes2 wrote:
Edit 2 - Lan Wings, don't take what Nao said personally; just because he called the object stupid doesn't mean he's calling you stupid. Seems to be a language barrier issue I guess lol

i said this note is my best choice,he said this note is stupid
this is an insult to me

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Battle 2017-05-14T04:17:51+00:00

lol I don't really get why you're making such a big deal over a 1/4 repeat slider in the normal diff, it is by no means at all unrankable, it's a guideline like stated before. The only issue that would arise from it is that players maybe misread it as a two circle, but this is more or less forgiving due to it being at the beginning of the map. In any case, you shouldn't really be saying something is outright unrankable when it's just in the guidelines section

Lan wings

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Lan wings 2017-05-14T05:29:56+00:00

Battle wrote:
lol I don't really get why you're making such a big deal over a 1/4 repeat slider in the normal diff, it is by no means at all unrankable, it's a guideline like stated before. The only issue that would arise from it is that players maybe misread it as a two circle, but this is more or less forgiving due to it being at the beginning of the map. In any case, you shouldn't really be saying something is outright unrankable when it's just in the guidelines section

this slider is made by yanlu, but i think this is good, it's not stupid

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[Mahua] 2017-05-14T06:18:59+00:00

Lan wings wrote:
在我已经说明了这是我认为的最佳选择的时候,您仍能说出stupid这样的话来,请问您这是在侮辱我吗?
身位一个BN,麻烦您检讨一下自己的言行, 谢谢
很抱歉这句话我懒得去谷歌翻译了这实在是太令人生气了

心疼

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Battle 2017-05-14T06:34:16+00:00

naw I'm agreeing with you that it's fitting, I'm disagreeing with the word choice of nao lol

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Nao Tomori 2017-05-14T07:56:43+00:00

很抱歉，不好意思上一次的言辞有些激烈和不恰当。我当时有些气愤因为我试着去逼你按照我的想法修改但是并没有用。我并没有冒犯的意思，如果有的话还望见谅。

对于1/4折返滑条，我仍然认为对于Normal是不适合的。因为新手玩家在打这个滑条的时候光标移动速度会很快，这对于他们来说是非常难的。这也是为什么我建议用其他的东西代替。即使1/4滑条和音乐很配，对于这个难度来说，我认为是不恰当的。对于00:25:566 （3,4,5）我建议把他们都改成单点，因为在 00:36:974 (2,3,4) 的pattern是一样的。我感觉这样就会解决问题。

anyway, I guess the 1/4 is fine, so you can just go ahead and rebubble it then.

Lan wings

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Lan wings 2017-05-14T09:21:31+00:00

In fact, I am not a unreasonable person
If there is enough reason I will change
All Fixed

Zero__wind

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Zero__wind 2017-05-14T09:46:32+00:00

rechecked and I'm fine with the changes
rebubbled.

Pentori

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Pentori 2017-05-16T01:00:49+00:00

just a few things

yanlu
i think you should remove nc off beats such as 00:20:495 (1) - 00:33:171 (1) - 00:38:242 (1) - 00:55:988 (1) - to keep it consistent
also should swap this nc 00:36:552 (1,2)

sharlo
00:40:143 (4,5) - rhythm is still quite awkward here, since 00:40:566 - gets clicked with no sound to support it. i reckon u should ctrl g this to achieve a rhythm like 00:38:875 (3,4)

poke me when ready

Lan wings

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Lan wings 2017-05-16T11:40:29+00:00

Pentori wrote:
just a few things

yanlu
i think you should remove nc off beats such as 00:20:495 (1) - 00:33:171 (1) - 00:38:242 (1) - 00:55:988 (1) - to keep it consistent
also should swap this nc 00:36:552 (1,2) Fixed

sharlo
00:40:143 (4,5) - rhythm is still quite awkward here, since 00:40:566 - gets clicked with no sound to support it. i reckon u should ctrl g this to achieve a rhythm like 00:38:875 (3,4) Sharlo:Fixed

poke me when ready