Halozy - Masshiro na Yuki · forum

Doj

Joined March 2014

Topic Starter

Doj 2016-03-17T16:32:11+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Tuesday, April 24, 2018 at 11:00:06 PM

Artist: Halozy
Title: Masshiro na Yuki
Source: 東方Project
Tags: とらのあな toranoana 水瀬ましろ amorevole sumijun すみじゅん touhou kaeidzuka Phantasmagoria of Flower View 東方幻奏響 UROBOROS 弐 fAIRYtAILoVERdRIVE Gensoukyou bayside beat comiket87 comiket89 higan retour kikou riverside view komachi onozuka drum and bass victorica crowie
BPM: 170
Filesize: 6522kb
Play Time: 01:53
Difficulties Available:

Crowie's Normal (2.13 stars, 214 notes)
Hard (3.28 stars, 301 notes)
Lunatic (4.67 stars, 552 notes)

Download: Halozy - Masshiro na Yuki
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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I enjoy this song. Hope yall do too.

orz

Crowie's Normal - Done.
Hard - Done.
Lunatic - Done.

Storyboard - Done.

Check out the full version here.

Last edited by Doj 2018-04-25T04:01:21+00:00, edited 229 times in total.

Cheesecake

729 posts

Joined December 2013

Cheesecake 2016-03-18T17:35:35+00:00

Storyboard mod? What's that?

00:23:401 (1) - This ripple coming out here would probably be better placed on the stronger downbeat 00:23:578 (2) - here

e: The examples I use are from the top diff and oh my god I just realised while editing this that you use ripples from the top diff in every diff where the objects aren't in the same place, so you need to make a new .osb for every diff and move the ripples

Also, to me it looks like you've just gone and placed it on top of where the circle is in the editor, but this doesn't correspond to where it'll actually appear in-game since they aren't lined up properly for whatever reason. To fix this you need to go into the .osb file and find the right "sb/ring" part, then change the line with M (move) so that the position co-ordinates are the circle's co-ordinates with +64 to x and +56 to y. For example, the position co-ordinate of 00:23:578 (2) - is X:266, Y:168, so the co-ordinate of your sprite should be X:330 Y:224. The line in your .osb will look like M,0,23313,,330,224

01:31:166 (6) - Oops wrong colour
01:33:989 (2) - ^
01:36:813 (9) - ^
01:38:225 (7) - Yeah you get it by now

Maybe start your fade out at 01:53:931 - so it's not so sudden

When I look in the .osb you have all random numbers like this for girlbright.png, you should probably change all these to the same value for consistency - I can see they're all hovering around 0.5 and 0 so maybe change to those? (This is the benefit of making storyboards using SGL rather than the in-game design tab hehe)

Doj

232 posts

Joined March 2014

Topic Starter

Doj 2016-03-19T20:41:38+00:00

Cheesecake wrote:
Storyboard mod? What's that?

00:23:401 (1) - This ripple coming out here would probably be better placed on the stronger downbeat 00:23:578 (2) - here yup, sounds good

e: The examples I use are from the top diff and oh my god I just realised while editing this that you use ripples from the top diff in every diff where the objects aren't in the same place, so you need to make a new .osb for every diff and move the ripples Yea haha I made the ripples for the top diff only. I guess I will have to make different ones.

Also, to me it looks like you've just gone and placed it on top of where the circle is in the editor, but this doesn't correspond to where it'll actually appear in-game since they aren't lined up properly for whatever reason. To fix this you need to go into the .osb file and find the right "sb/ring" part, then change the line with M (move) so that the position co-ordinates are the circle's co-ordinates with +64 to x and +56 to y. For example, the position co-ordinate of 00:23:578 (2) - is X:266, Y:168, so the co-ordinate of your sprite should be X:330 Y:224. The line in your .osb will look like M,0,23313,,330,224 This helped a lot actually. I tried what you said but the ripples didn't quite line up, so did some math and found it to be around +64 and +72. Now I know!

01:31:166 (6) - Oops wrong colour fixed
01:33:989 (2) - ^ ^
01:36:813 (9) - ^ ^
01:38:225 (7) - Yeah you get it by now

Maybe start your fade out at 01:53:931 - so it's not so sudden fixed

When I look in the .osb you have all random numbers like this for girlbright.png, you should probably change all these to the same value for consistency - I can see they're all hovering around 0.5 and 0 so maybe change to those? (This is the benefit of making storyboards using SGL rather than the in-game design tab hehe) This is gonna take a while lol. I've tried using sql, but I don't have the time to figure everything out sadly. I would love to get into though, because I've seen many sb's with great animations out of it.

Mmm nice I've never gotten a sb mod before. Thanks for the mod!

Vespirit

350 posts

Joined December 2014

Vespirit 2016-03-20T00:47:19+00:00

Hey dude, here's the m4m

[

Easy]

00:20:754 (3) - I would put spinner instead of reverse slider
00:33:460 (3,1) - really weird overlap here, make it look nicer
00:54:637 (1) - have this start at 00:54:637, I know it currently starts at the beginning of the vocal thing, but the beat at 00:54:637 seems to be stronger. an example of how well this works is the spinner at 01:05:931 (1)
01:02:401 (3) - this slider ends on a strong beat which I think should be clickable
01:10:166 (2) - would play much nicer if this were to point down towards the next slider imo
01:13:519 (3) - odd overlap with the next slider
01:18:460 (1,1) - why not distance snap this? the rest is snapped to 1.5x, and it would also get rid of weird overlap as well
01:35:578 - think you should fill this area instead of leaving nothing, there are some beats here that should be mapped

[

Normal]

00:23:225 (1) - end should be clicked tbh
01:05:754 (1) - same spinner thing from easy diff mod (3rd bullet)
I think AR 4 - 5 suits this diff more

[

Hard]

first inherited point is off from the tick a little bit, makes the first slider follow a different sv
00:23:401 (3,4) - instead of slider first then circle, think you should do circle first and then fix the positions on the grid
00:41:578 (5) - if this will have 2 reverses, then (6) should be placed closer to it
00:44:401 (8) - last reverse should be a circle or something to emphasize the white tick there
00:54:460 (1) - spinner thing again
01:05:754 (1) - ^
01:04:519 - should be something here, feels odd without
AR 7 - 7.5 maybe, as well as something like HP 6 and OD 6 fits Hard diff more

[

Colors]

00:13:166 (7) - don't think it has to be a 1/4 slider, could just be a circle
00:14:578 (7) - ^
00:32:401 (2,3,4) - could possibly make these closer together instead of really spaced
00:44:754 (1,2,3) - ^
00:33:989 (4) - this is just 1/4, not 1/8

Very nice mapset, love song and nice storyboard as well

Doj

232 posts

Joined March 2014

Topic Starter

Doj 2016-03-20T03:40:33+00:00

HydroCannon13 wrote:
Hey dude, here's the m4m
[ Easy]
00:20:754 (3) - I would put spinner instead of reverse sliderfixed
00:33:460 (3,1) - really weird overlap here, make it look nicer fixed
00:54:637 (1) - have this start at 00:54:637, I know it currently starts at the beginning of the vocal thing, but the beat at 00:54:637 seems to be stronger. an example of how well this works is the spinner at 01:05:931 (1) fixed
01:02:401 (3) - this slider ends on a strong beat which I think should be clickable fixed
01:10:166 (2) - would play much nicer if this were to point down towards the next slider imo fixed
01:13:519 (3) - odd overlap with the next slider fixed
01:18:460 (1,1) - why not distance snap this? the rest is snapped to 1.5x, and it would also get rid of weird overlap as well This is actually was distance snapped lol But yea the overlap is weird. fixed
01:35:578 - think you should fill this area instead of leaving nothing, there are some beats here that should be mappedfixed
[ Normal]
00:23:225 (1) - end should be clicked tbh fixed
01:05:754 (1) - same spinner thing from easy diff mod (3rd bullet) fixed
I think AR 4 - 5 suits this diff more
[ Hard]
first inherited point is off from the tick a little bit, makes the first slider follow a different svI would have never noticed lol
00:23:401 (3,4) - instead of slider first then circle, think you should do circle first and then fix the positions on the grid fixed
00:41:578 (5) - if this will have 2 reverses, then (6) should be placed closer to it fixed
00:44:401 (8) - last reverse should be a circle or something to emphasize the white tick there fixed
00:54:460 (1) - spinner thing again fixed
01:05:754 (1) - ^ fixed
01:04:519 - should be something here, feels odd without fixed
AR 7 - 7.5 maybe, as well as something like HP 6 and OD 6 fits Hard diff morefixed
[ Colors]
00:13:166 (7) - don't think it has to be a 1/4 slider, could just be a circle I see what you mean, but I like how it adds a little impact to the snare at the end.
00:14:578 (7) - ^ ^
00:32:401 (2,3,4) - could possibly make these closer together instead of really spaced I made them spaced because of the high distortion in the singers voice, it kinda fits together. I think I'll put them a little closer though like you said.
00:44:754 (1,2,3) - ^ fixed
00:33:989 (4) - this is just 1/4, not 1/8 fixed
Very nice mapset, love song and nice storyboard as well

I really suck at putting in metadata to fit the diffs like ar and hp and suck, so thanks for that. Appreciate the mod!

Doj

232 posts

Joined March 2014

Topic Starter

Doj 2016-03-20T20:58:45+00:00

Also just to point out, I know some of the colors of this rings in the bg dont match with the hit circles. Stuff is always changing so I'll fix that specifically when everything is done and a bn is ready to qualify.

TenkaiPalm

165 posts

Joined February 2014

TenkaiPalm 2016-03-21T01:50:09+00:00

Hi, here are my opinions

Colors (Insane)
00:13:342 (8) - The distance snap for this kinda seems off :< Consider putting near the stream/slider before it?
This happens several different times so I won't repeat it.
00:17:754 (1,2,3) - I'm not sure why, but it feels like this feels like an out-liar to the rest, I'm not saying you have to change it but look at it again, and if you think you should change it, do so

00:22:695 (4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - Un-even streams

You don't have to change it, but I'm not a huge fan of them :<
00:42:284 (1) - (These are nice, just a comment

)
01:21:901 (4) - Round the edge of this stream?
01:26:225 (5) - Not saying that you have to, but maybe making this slider bend the opposite direction would fit better.
01:53:578 (2) - I feel like this last part should be 3 separate notes, and should be larger jumps. A small slider and small distance seems like such an underwhelming ending.

Hard
00:24:284 (6) - Um, the storyboard elements don't fit for this difficulty

00:29:225 (1) - 00:34:519 (5) - 00:43:342 (4) - 01:31:342 (1) - 01:32:754 - etc. You get the point^^^^
00:36:989 (3) - Maybe make the beat snap divider smaller and make this repeat faster? I liked it in the colors difficulty and technically it doesn't make the map any harder.
00:42:284 (7) - Maybe make a repeat slider to fit with the song?
00:44:401 (8,9) - I'm not too sure why, but this part sounds odd.
01:53:578 (2) - Maybe this should be 3 separate notes like I said in the colors difficulty at the end^

Overall this map is pretty cool

Good luck with getting it ranked!!

LigerZero

2,429 posts

Joined August 2013

LigerZero 2016-03-21T07:25:15+00:00

No Kudosu

Tags added "とらのあな toranoana 水瀬ましろ amorevole sumijun すみじゅん touhou kaeidzuka Phantasmagoria of Flower View 東方幻奏響 UROBOROS 弐
fAIRYtAILoVERdRIVE Gensoukyou bayside beat comiket87 comiket89 higan retour kikou riverside view komachi onozuka

Doj

232 posts

Joined March 2014

Topic Starter

Doj 2016-03-21T13:10:39+00:00

LigerZero wrote:
No Kudosu
Tags added "とらのあな toranoana 水瀬ましろ amorevole sumijun すみじゅん touhou kaeidzuka Phantasmagoria of Flower View 東方幻奏響 UROBOROS 弐
fAIRYtAILoVERdRIVE Gensoukyou bayside beat comiket87 comiket89 higan retour kikou riverside view komachi onozuka

Thanks!

TenkaiPalm wrote:
Hi, here are my opinions

Colors (Insane)
00:13:342 (8) - The distance snap for this kinda seems off :< Consider putting near the stream/slider before it?
This happens several different times so I won't repeat it.ehh iI'll put em a little closer
00:17:754 (1,2,3) - I'm not sure why, but it feels like this feels like an out-liar to the rest, I'm not saying you have to change it but look at it again, and if you think you should change it, do so I added a slider to make it fit better
00:22:695 (4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - Un-even streams You don't have to change it, but I'm not a huge fan of them :< I spaced the 2nd stream more to add to the buildup of the spacing of the kiai time.
00:42:284 (1) - (These are nice, just a comment ) thanks
01:21:901 (4) - Round the edge of this stream? nahhh i like the way i have it
01:26:225 (5) - Not saying that you have to, but maybe making this slider bend the opposite direction would fit better. good idea
01:53:578 (2) - I feel like this last part should be 3 separate notes, and should be larger jumps. A small slider and small distance seems like such an underwhelming ending. Ya know, I actually had a bigger distance at first but i changed it because someone said it was weird. I agree with you! And I'm keeping it this time ! lol

Hard
00:24:284 (6) - Um, the storyboard elements don't fit for this difficulty Yea I'm still working on trying to make different sb's tfor each diff :/
00:29:225 (1) - 00:34:519 (5) - 00:43:342 (4) - 01:31:342 (1) - 01:32:754 - etc. You get the point^^^^ ^^
00:36:989 (3) - Maybe make the beat snap divider smaller and make this repeat faster? I liked it in the colors difficulty and technically it doesn't make the map any harder. fixed
00:42:284 (7) - Maybe make a repeat slider to fit with the song? fixed
00:44:401 (8,9) - I'm not too sure why, but this part sounds odd. sounds fine to me, it goes perfectly with the singers voice
01:53:578 (2) - Maybe this should be 3 separate notes like I said in the colors difficulty at the end^ fixed

Overall this map is pretty cool
Good luck with getting it ranked!!

Thanks for the mod, I appreciate it!

Spork Lover

727 posts

Joined October 2013

Spork Lover 2016-03-21T18:56:19+00:00

M4M hype

BEFORE YOU READ THE MOD:
I'm normally a very picky modder, and I normally give my honest opinions about the map.
Also, reading the colour coding explains the importance of said suggestion or necessity.

COLOURS:

Color coding

Importance:
Red = Unrankable if unchanged
Black = Normal Suggestion
Blue = Strong Suggestion
Pink = Comment

General

I don't know if the storyboard is bright enough to force an epilepsy warning (Talk to a BN about it)

Easy

00:16:519 (2,1) - I think you should make this blanket a bit more noticeable

00:32:048 (1) - Remove this NC, you should NC every 4th big white beat instead imo for consistent NC'ing :3
00:39:107 (1) - Remove NC
00:40:519 (3) - NC
00:43:342 (1) - Remove NC
00:54:637 (1) - Maybe make the spinner end on 00:56:754? It's a little short I think :3
01:03:107 (4) - NC
01:03:813 (1) - Remove NC
01:10:166 (2) - Shorten this slider a bit, it's ending on a blue tick

01:20:048 - Feels awkward for new players to play a slider that ends on the start of a new section of the chorus. consider shortening the slider and adding a single tap

01:21:460 (1) - Blanket this slider with the end of the previous slider (Or newly made single tap)
01:29:931 (1) - Remove NC
01:31:342 (2) - NC, this is a new section!
01:39:813 (1) - Remove NC, since the previous was 6, and this one was a mere 2.
01:45:460 (1) - Same thing.

Final thoughts on Easy diff:
Overall I think you should create more blankety patterns to make the map prettier. The map isn't bad in any way, but there's definitely some stuff that could be fixed

Normal

00:19:342 (1) - Remove NC (This one isn't too important, but beware of inconsistent NC'ing)
00:20:754 (1) - You could make the spinner longer like I suggested in the easy diff

00:33:460 - Sliderend on a big white beat is a no-no, especially if a stream is coming up!
00:39:637 (1) - Remove NC

00:40:519 (3) - NC

00:43:342 (1,2,3) - You could do some with blankets here, doesn't look aestheticly good.
01:02:401 (1,2) - I'd say switch NC, but both work I think.
01:19:695 - Add a single tap here, feels very empty!
01:21:107 (3,4) - This part doesn't follow the vocals too well. Consider making the slider a single tap, and copying 01:20:048 (1,2,3) - (With 3 as singletap) and adding it later.

01:23:931 (3,4) - Same problem.
01:26:754 (3,4) - Again, it doesn't flow imo
01:42:107 (1,2) - Switch NC, 2nd slider is on the main beat, so this could be prioritized :3
01:53:931 - I'd add another beat here I think

I'd feel better if there was a note on the big white beat :3

Final thoughts on normal:
A few rhythm issues, and some patterns that could be prettier

But the overall experience is positive

Hard

00:01:519 (3) - Move this slider down a bit ^^
00:16:519 (4) - NC, since you NC'ed on this (00:13:695 (1) - ) spot.
00:20:754 (1,2,3,4) - To spice things up, you could add two 1/8 sliders instead of those 4 kicksliders to follow the fast beat here!
00:44:753 (9) - NC
00:44:931 (1) - Remove NC
00:51:813 (1,3) - The sliderend on 3 should blanket the first slider a bit better :3
00:57:459 (2) - Shorten this slider, ending isn't snapped probably.
00:57:459 (2) - Also, it has a fairly weird shape. The "Zig-zaggy" thing is alright, but it could look a bit more appealing.

Generally you should re-NC the chorus, there's some inconsistency there

NC'ing every second big white beat would be recommended

01:09:813 - I'd add a note here.
01:11:225 - Same here. (The beats should honestly be there

)
01:12:989 (4,5) - This blanket's a little undone

01:25:695 - Do something with a singletap here, and NC that singletap.

Final thoughts on Hard:
Some NC issues and aesthetic issues with blankets and such, could be fixed.

Colors

00:04:166 (1) - I donno if you should NC this because it's a mirror.

00:56:401 (2) - Make the slider into two single taps, that are further spaced. (The second singletap should be the start of the stream.)
01:05:048 (6,7) - You should extend the slider instead and delete the singletap imo

01:26:754 (6,1,2,3,4,5) - Place slider 6 in a way that makes the stream prettier, 'cause the contrast between 6 and 1 isn't too great atm.
01:31:342 - From here, another NC re-do would be optimal. Every second big white beat! (It's fine to NC the "Ding" sound!)
01:53:401 (1,2) - You could spice this part up by copy-pasting the previous 3 jumps instead and Ctrl+H'ing it.

Final thoughts on Insane:
Imo this is the best diff of the set, 'cause you play around with star jumps and such, which makes the map very nice

FINAL final thoughts:
Overall I think this mapset needs some tweaking and changes to be ranked in the future, since the approval standard is really high (Like, insanely high >.<). But I think that with enough mods and enough patience, you'll get there

Good luck in the future with the mapset man

!

Doj

232 posts

Joined March 2014

Topic Starter

Doj 2016-03-21T20:47:11+00:00

Spork Lover wrote:
M4M hype

BEFORE YOU READ THE MOD:
I'm normally a very picky modder, and I normally give my honest opinions about the map.
Also, reading the colour coding explains the importance of said suggestion or necessity.

COLOURS:
Color coding
Importance:
Red = Unrankable if unchanged
Black = Normal Suggestion
Blue = Strong Suggestion
Pink = Comment

General
I don't know if the storyboard is bright enough to force an epilepsy warning (Talk to a BN about it)

Easy
00:16:519 (2,1) - I think you should make this blanket a bit more noticeable fixed
00:32:048 (1) - Remove this NC, you should NC every 4th big white beat instead imo for consistent NC'ing :3I'll remember that
00:39:107 (1) - Remove NC fixed
00:40:519 (3) - NC fixed
00:43:342 (1) - Remove NC fixed
00:54:637 (1) - Maybe make the spinner end on 00:56:754? It's a little short I think :3 Well I was told that for easy diffs, there should be a full measure for recovery after spinners.
01:03:107 (4) - NC fixed
01:03:813 (1) - Remove NC fixed
01:10:166 (2) - Shorten this slider a bit, it's ending on a blue tick (fixed)
01:20:048 - Feels awkward for new players to play a slider that ends on the start of a new section of the chorus. consider shortening the slider and adding a single tap (fixed)
01:21:460 (1) - Blanket this slider with the end of the previous slider (Or newly made single tap) fixed
01:29:931 (1) - Remove NC fixed
01:31:342 (2) - NC, this is a new section! (fixed)
01:39:813 (1) - Remove NC, since the previous was 6, and this one was a mere 2. fixed
01:45:460 (1) - Same thing. fixed

Final thoughts on Easy diff:
Overall I think you should create more blankety patterns to make the map prettier. The map isn't bad in any way, but there's definitely some stuff that could be fixed Thanks! I'll go back and make some tweaks.

Normal
00:19:342 (1) - Remove NC (This one isn't too important, but beware of inconsistent NC'ing) fixed
00:20:754 (1) - You could make the spinner longer like I suggested in the easy diff fixed
00:33:460 - Sliderend on a big white beat is a no-no, especially if a stream is coming up! (fixed)
00:39:637 (1) - Remove NC fixed
00:40:519 (3) - NC fixed
00:43:342 (1,2,3) - You could do some with blankets here, doesn't look aestheticly good. I tried to make blankets where i could lol
01:02:401 (1,2) - I'd say switch NC, but both work I think. I'll just leave it as is
01:19:695 - Add a single tap here, feels very empty! fixed
01:21:107 (3,4) - This part doesn't follow the vocals too well. Consider making the slider a single tap, and copying 01:20:048 (1,2,3) - (With 3 as singletap) and adding it later. fixed
01:23:931 (3,4) - Same problem. fixed
01:26:754 (3,4) - Again, it doesn't flow imo fixed
01:42:107 (1,2) - Switch NC, 2nd slider is on the main beat, so this could be prioritized :3 fixed
01:53:931 - I'd add another beat here I think I'd feel better if there was a note on the big white beat :3 I think it'd feel weird to add it there and then that's it, you know what i mean? I'll just keep it as is

Final thoughts on normal:
A few rhythm issues, and some patterns that could be prettier But the overall experience is positive thanks!

Hard
00:01:519 (3) - Move this slider down a bit ^^ The first note wasn't snapped and messed everything up lol. fixed
00:16:519 (4) - NC, since you NC'ed on this (00:13:695 (1) - ) spot. good point actually
00:20:754 (1,2,3,4) - To spice things up, you could add two 1/8 sliders instead of those 4 kicksliders to follow the fast beat here! good idea
00:44:753 (9) - NC fixed
00:44:931 (1) - Remove NC fixed
00:51:813 (1,3) - The sliderend on 3 should blanket the first slider a bit better :3 fixed
00:57:459 (2) - Shorten this slider, ending isn't snapped probably. fixed
00:57:459 (2) - Also, it has a fairly weird shape. The "Zig-zaggy" thing is alright, but it could look a bit more appealing. I think i fixed what you were talking about lol

Generally you should re-NC the chorus, there's some inconsistency there NC'ing every second big white beat would be recommended Will fix this!
01:09:813 - I'd add a note here. (fixed)
01:11:225 - Same here. (The beats should honestly be there ) (fixed)
01:12:989 (4,5) - This blanket's a little undone fixed
01:25:695 - Do something with a singletap here, and NC that singletap. fixed

Final thoughts on Hard:
Some NC issues and aesthetic issues with blankets and such, could be fixed. I'll try my best to add blankets where i can!

Colors
00:04:166 (1) - I donno if you should NC this because it's a mirror. I will, thanks for pointing it out
00:56:401 (2) - Make the slider into two single taps, that are further spaced. (The second singletap should be the start of the stream.) fixed
01:05:048 (6,7) - You should extend the slider instead and delete the singletap imo great idea actually lol
01:26:754 (6,1,2,3,4,5) - Place slider 6 in a way that makes the stream prettier, 'cause the contrast between 6 and 1 isn't too great atm. fixed
01:31:342 - From here, another NC re-do would be optimal. Every second big white beat! (It's fine to NC the "Ding" sound!) (fixed)
01:53:401 (1,2) - You could spice this part up by copy-pasting the previous 3 jumps instead and Ctrl+H'ing it. GENIUS

Final thoughts on Insane:
Imo this is the best diff of the set, 'cause you play around with star jumps and such, which makes the map very nice Tbh my the only diffs im confident in making are insanes. Any other diff I have trouble with haha

FINAL final thoughts:
Overall I think this mapset needs some tweaking and changes to be ranked in the future, since the approval standard is really high (Like, insanely high >.<). But I think that with enough mods and enough patience, you'll get there Good luck in the future with the mapset man !

Thanks! I appreciate the mod!

_handholding

3,109 posts

Joined April 2014

_handholding 2016-04-02T14:55:36+00:00

hi m4m, ok so I'm a day late, dont hate me pls ;w;

Easy

00:15:107 - This is one of the most dominant beats in the entire song, I really recommend putting a circle on it.
00:17:931 (1,2) - When the border touches slightly it looks kinda un-appealing to me
00:27:813 (4) - This would flow better if it was on top of slider (3) going across. It flows nicely into slider (1) aswell. http://puu.sh/o3jfK/ec7181237b.jpg . if you like these kind of overlaps --> http://puu.sh/o3jgD/67158a8c0a.jpg
01:20:048 (1) - I think you should make this into a slider, it does feel pretty empty here
01:21:460 (1) - Delete NC
01:22:872 - Map this beat, same as 00:15:107 it feels especially empty having nothing here
01:24:284 (4,5) - Maybe consider having these 2 circles as one slider as on is on a white tick and the other is on a red tick
01:27:107 (2) - Can you move this up to around 84x, 140y? It loses its appeal when it slightly touches (1)
01:32:754 (2) - I think this pattern would look really pretty if you curved this, it also has good flow too. http://puu.sh/o3jWO/7304686c9e.jpg
01:39:813 (3) - Do you not want to curve this slider the other way http://puu.sh/o3k1m/e51845fa16.jpg ? The sliders in the pattern 01:31:342 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - all change direction according to the music but this one is an odd one out

Normal

00:10:342 (2,3) - I think you should create a bit a space, visually. What do you think?
00:17:931 (1,3) - Because these are similar sounds I think you should have them both straight or both curved instead of one or the other
00:20:754 (1) - I would end this spinner at 00:22:166 , like you did for your easy.
00:25:519 (6) - I think its fine to have changes in direction generally but since you did one earlier at 00:24:460 (4,5) I think you should put this under http://puu.sh/o3kud/5802b7cb9c.jpg
00:30:637 (2) - - This appears quite some time before 00:29:225 (8) actually finishes so I would avoid the underlap
00:34:166 (6,7,8) - Consider changing to a reverse slider. the note density is so sort of pushing it towards a hard diff and I imagine normal players would already be ovewhelmed by 00:32:048 (1,2,3,4,5) -
00:39:637 (5,6) - In all your previous patterns you stack the circle under the slider, how come you didnt do it here?
00:58:872 (3) - what do you think about this rhythm? http://puu.sh/o3kM7/929b75a8ac.jpg
01:04:519 (1,2,3,4) - 4 1/2 single taps is quite harsh dont you think?
01:03:637 (3) - Change to a 1/1 slider with a circle after it? http://puu.sh/o3kXY/e5246e46f6.jpg I think that first the music better imo. It gives a nice clickable object on 01:04:166 as well
01:13:872 - Since this is a normal try added a 1/2 slider here to fill some space, see if you like it http://puu.sh/o3l2Y/95964bf456.jpg (1) and (4) are 01:12:989 (4,1)
01:27:107 (5) - Make into 1/1 slider for consistency
01:53:401 (1,2,3) - The spacing just doesnt look right, also since its the end of the song I think it plays better as a reverse slider as multiple clickable makes it feel like it has the same intensity as the music before it.

Hard

00:20:754 (1,2,3,4) - The use of rverse sliders doesnt match the music imho, maybe try using 1/2 sliders?
00:35:048 (1) - Consider deleting this note, it suits the music and also creates a nice pause since there hasnt been a pause from the start of the kiai time.
00:36:637 (2,3) - Why are these sliders 1/6? All the other sliders are 1/4
00:46:166 (1,2,3) - For the parts where you have slider -> circle -> slider I think it would be better to have it as slider -> slider -> circle http://puu.sh/o3lFc/4de2316278.jpg that way you get a nice clickable object on the end 00:47:225 . If you use this apply to the areas where you've used this rhythm.
01:15:460 (4,8) - missing clap or is this intentional?
01:53:401 (1,2) - Because all these notes are the same intensity I think it would be better to have this as either 3 circles or a reverse slider. that way the intensity of the 3 notes is the same

Insane

00:13:166 (7) - I have the feeling people are going to misread this as 2 circles, as you can see the number. It works at 00:17:048 (1,2,3,4,5) as the spacing here is higher
00:31:519 (1) - I think sliders like these are suppose to be 1/8
00:36:989 (1) - ^ Also ending it on 00:37:298 by making it 1/8 gives a more comfortable hit window when moving on the the nest slider
00:20:754 (1) to 00:23:401 (1) - This pattern is really nice, n1
00:42:284 (1) - I think its appropiate to make this into 2 sliders
01:50:225 (1) - I think the SV feels out of place imho

Most of these are just my thoughts and I tried to keep my suggestions as close to your own mapping style and current rhythm used though feel free to reject everyone if you like

GL!

Doj

232 posts

Joined March 2014

Topic Starter

Doj 2016-04-03T17:49:13+00:00

Red = unchanged
Blue = changed
Green = comment / changed

Kisses wrote:
hi m4m, ok so I'm a day late, dont hate me pls ;w;

Easy
00:15:107 - This is one of the most dominant beats in the entire song, I really recommend putting a circle on it. fixed
00:17:931 (1,2) - When the border touches slightly it looks kinda un-appealing to me fixed nazi
00:27:813 (4) - This would flow better if it was on top of slider (3) going across. It flows nicely into slider (1) aswell. http://puu.sh/o3jfK/ec7181237b.jpg . if you like these kind of overlaps --> http://puu.sh/o3jgD/67158a8c0a.jpg delicious
01:20:048 (1) - I think you should make this into a slider, it does feel pretty empty here fixed
01:21:460 (1) - Delete NC fixed
01:22:872 - Map this beat, same as 00:15:107 it feels especially empty having nothing here fixed
01:24:284 (4,5) - Maybe consider having these 2 circles as one slider as on is on a white tick and the other is on a red tick fixed
01:27:107 (2) - Can you move this up to around 84x, 140y? It loses its appeal when it slightly touches (1) fixed
01:32:754 (2) - I think this pattern would look really pretty if you curved this, it also has good flow too. http://puu.sh/o3jWO/7304686c9e.jpg
01:39:813 (3) - Do you not want to curve this slider the other way http://puu.sh/o3k1m/e51845fa16.jpg ? The sliders in the pattern 01:31:342 fixed(1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - all change direction according to the music but this one is an odd one out

Normal
00:10:342 (2,3) - I think you should create a bit a space, visually. What do you think?I think I understand what you mean. I increased the spacing a little but I'm kinda limited since it's only a normal diff
00:17:931 (1,3) - Because these are similar sounds I think you should have them both straight or both curved instead of one or the other fixed
00:20:754 (1) - I would end this spinner at 00:22:166 , like you did for your easy. fixed
00:25:519 (6) - I think its fine to have changes in direction generally but since you did one earlier at 00:24:460 (4,5) I think you should put this under http://puu.sh/o3kud/5802b7cb9c.jpg fixed
00:30:637 (2) - - This appears quite some time before 00:29:225 (8) actually finishes so I would avoid the underlap fixed
00:34:166 (6,7,8) - Consider changing to a reverse slider. the note density is so sort of pushing it towards a hard diff and I imagine normal players would already be ovewhelmed by 00:32:048 (1,2,3,4,5) - good point
00:39:637 (5,6) - In all your previous patterns you stack the circle under the slider, how come you didnt do it here? I actually don't know lol. I guess I was tired or somethin
00:58:872 (3) - what do you think about this rhythm? http://puu.sh/o3kM7/929b75a8ac.jpg great idea
01:04:519 (1,2,3,4) - 4 1/2 single taps is quite harsh dont you think? lol
01:03:637 (3) - Change to a 1/1 slider with a circle after it? http://puu.sh/o3kXY/e5246e46f6.jpg I think that first the music better imo. It gives a nice clickable object on 01:04:166 as well fixed
01:13:872 - Since this is a normal try added a 1/2 slider here to fill some space, see if you like it http://puu.sh/o3l2Y/95964bf456.jpg (1) and (4) are 01:12:989 (4,1)
01:27:107 (5) - Make into 1/1 slider for consistency fixed
01:53:401 (1,2,3) - The spacing just doesnt look right, also since its the end of the song I think it plays better as a reverse slider as multiple clickable makes it feel like it has the same intensity as the music before it. fixed

Hard
00:20:754 (1,2,3,4) - The use of rverse sliders doesnt match the music imho, maybe try using 1/2 sliders? I honestly can't figure out what to put here to go with the buildup without making it to difficult tbh. I'll just put the sliders until I can figure out something.
00:35:048 (1) - Consider deleting this note, it suits the music and also creates a nice pause since there hasnt been a pause from the start of the kiai time. fixed
00:36:637 (2,3) - Why are these sliders 1/6? All the other sliders are 1/4 I think someone told me in a previous mod, but now that I look at it I think 1/4 is better.
00:46:166 (1,2,3) - For the parts where you have slider -> circle -> slider I think it would be better to have it as slider -> slider -> circle http://puu.sh/o3lFc/4de2316278.jpg that way you get a nice clickable object on the end 00:47:225 . If you use this apply to the areas where you've used this rhythm. I see what you mean. It goes really well with the beat there, I never noticed it really before.
01:15:460 (4,8) - missing clap or is this intentional? probably a mistake
01:53:401 (1,2) - Because all these notes are the same intensity I think it would be better to have this as either 3 circles or a reverse slider. that way the intensity of the 3 notes is the same fixed

Insane
00:13:166 (7) - I have the feeling people are going to misread this as 2 circles, as you can see the number. It works at 00:17:048 (1,2,3,4,5) as the spacing here is higher I increased the spacing on the lower spaced streams
00:31:519 (1) - I think sliders like these are suppose to be 1/8 good point
00:36:989 (1) - ^ Also ending it on 00:37:298 by making it 1/8 gives a more comfortable hit window when moving on the the nest slider fixed
00:20:754 (1) to 00:23:401 (1) - This pattern is really nice, n1 aye
00:42:284 (1) - I think its appropiate to make this into 2 sliders Damn I thought I was gonna get through this with no rejections lol. I'm actually gonna keep this because it fits perfectly with her voice fading out while distorted.
01:50:225 (1) - I think the SV feels out of place imho I think for the sake or consistency I'm just gonna leave it as is.
Most of these are just my thoughts and I tried to keep my suggestions as close to your own mapping style and current rhythm used though feel free to reject everyone if you like

GL!

Thanks for the mod xoxo

_handholding

3,109 posts

Joined April 2014

_handholding 2016-04-03T19:27:47+00:00

damn, if only I skipped the last 2 points I would have made the perfect mod xD I just looked over your hard diff again

00:36:637 (2) - I think the position of this is a mistake
01:04:166 (1,1) - delete one of these NC?
01:53:401 (5) - needs to be snapped to red and white ticks

no kds ofc

Doj

232 posts

Joined March 2014

Topic Starter

Doj 2016-04-03T21:32:21+00:00

Kisses wrote:
damn, if only I skipped the last 2 points I would have made the perfect mod xD I just looked over your hard diff again

00:36:637 (2) - I think the position of this is a mistake LOL WTF
01:04:166 (1,1) - delete one of these NC? fixed
01:53:401 (5) - needs to be snapped to red and white ticks fixed

no kds ofc

Dunno what happened to my kiais, even the normal was messed up for some reason lol. Thanks!

hyouri

390 posts

Joined June 2012

hyouri 2016-04-03T22:10:51+00:00

General

Epilepsy warning is kind of useless (idk I don't have epilepsy)
I believe PNG is superior to JPG so http://puu.sh/o51MG/2336af5f8f.png

Colors
00:13:342 (8) - NC here pls and not 00:13:519 (1) -
00:14:048 (4) - ^
00:14:754 (10) - ^
00:16:166 (10) - ^
00:19:519 (2,3) - plays better with CTRL + G
00:22:872 (6) - NC should be on this white tick or 00:22:519 (3) - , and when you try to make a stream like that, make sure that it's divided evenly on object count where they split, right now you have 00:22:695 (4,5,6) - and 00:22:960 (1,2,3,4) - 3:4, you could alternatively move 00:23:225 (4) - away a little bit. Also I see no reason for the stream to bend like it does, make it straight all the way up
00:23:401 (1,2,3) - make these form a triangle with even spacing instead, right now 00:23:578 (2,3) - are a little more spaced than 1,2
00:25:519 (4) - this could be moved down here http://puu.sh/o52I9/cd1142bee9.png for the sake of flow
00:26:401 (1) - CTRL + G
00:28:342 (4) - move this to like x:192|y:172
00:28:342 (4,5) - awkward spacing if you approved the mod above ^ so you should move 00:28:695 (5,6,7) - little to the right
00:29:048 (7) - NC here instead
00:31:166 (3,1) - too close, move 00:31:519 (1) - so you dont have weird spacing
00:34:342 (1) - no need for NC here, 00:34:519 (2) - here is perfect for NC to fit with storyboard and also timing point
00:34:342 - move this timing point 00:34:519 - here
00:37:342 (2) - NC here because you already did on the other 3 before this
00:37:872 (2,3) - CTRL + G?
00:38:578 (5,7) - ^
00:39:460 (2) - ^
00:41:048 (3,4,5,6) - Bad spacing, since 00:40:519 (1,2) - are a bit further apart
00:45:813 (4) - NC

Only had the energy to mod first min, good luck

Doj

232 posts

Joined March 2014

Topic Starter

Doj 2016-04-04T00:33:31+00:00

hyouri wrote:

General
Epilepsy warning is kind of useless (idk I don't have epilepsy) Better safe than sorry ya know
I believe PNG is superior to JPG so http://puu.sh/o51MG/2336af5f8f.png ok lol

Colors
00:13:342 (8) - NC here pls and not 00:13:519 (1) - fixed
00:14:048 (4) - ^ ^
00:14:754 (10) - ^ ^
00:16:166 (10) - ^ ^
00:19:519 (2,3) - plays better with CTRL + G mmmmmmmmm ok
00:22:872 (6) - NC should be on this white tick or 00:22:519 (3) - , and when you try to make a stream like that, make sure that it's divided evenly on object count where they split, right now you have 00:22:695 (4,5,6) - and 00:22:960 (1,2,3,4) - 3:4, you could alternatively move 00:23:225 (4) - away a little bit. Also I see no reason for the stream to bend like it does, make it straight all the way up Hmm I see what you mean. I'm keeping my curve tho
00:23:401 (1,2,3) - make these form a triangle with even spacing instead, right now 00:23:578 (2,3) - are a little more spaced than 1,2 lol I ended up changing 00:23:401 (1) - to a slider since I made the above change lol
00:25:519 (4) - this could be moved down here http://puu.sh/o52I9/cd1142bee9.png for the sake of flow good idea
00:26:401 (1) - CTRL + G fixed
00:28:342 (4) - move this to like x:192|y:172 fixed
00:28:342 (4,5) - awkward spacing if you approved the mod above ^ so you should move 00:28:695 (5,6,7) - little to the right fixed
00:29:048 (7) - NC here instead fixed
00:31:166 (3,1) - too close, move 00:31:519 (1) - so you dont have weird spacing fixed
00:34:342 (1) - no need for NC here, 00:34:519 (2) - here is perfect for NC to fit with storyboard and also timing point fixed
00:34:342 - move this timing point 00:34:519 - here fixed
00:37:342 (2) - NC here because you already did on the other 3 before this fixed
00:37:872 (2,3) - CTRL + G? you smart
00:38:578 (5,7) - ^ you
00:39:460 (2) - ^ smart
00:41:048 (3,4,5,6) - Bad spacing, since 00:40:519 (1,2) - are a bit further apart fixed
00:45:813 (4) - NC fixed

Only had the energy to mod first min, good luck

It's all good, seeing how some of the notes your told me to flip play is pretty cool actually. I might change a few more things like that. Thanks son

AmigoDoChroome

228 posts

Joined September 2014

AmigoDoChroome 2016-04-22T18:47:12+00:00

hi
simple mod

normal
00:03:813 (4) - note here
normal difficulties need a fixed ds 00:23:225 (1,2,3,4) - (1.50ds)
Remap?

hard
cs 4 ar 7
00:23:048 (1,2,3,4) - forced distance
kiais overmaped
use more straight sliders

colors
00:13:166 (7) - continue the stream with circles
00:34:519 (1) - forced sv
00:37:342 (1) - ^^
00:41:931 (1) - forced distance
00:50:225 (1) - wrong tick

good luck with the map

Doj

232 posts

Joined March 2014

Topic Starter

Doj 2016-04-25T15:13:43+00:00

AmigoDoChroome wrote:
hi
simple mod

normal
00:03:813 (4) - note here
normal difficulties need a fixed ds 00:23:225 (1,2,3,4) - (1.50ds)
Remap? lowered the ds to 1.2x in the kiai

hard
cs 4 ar 7 fixed
00:23:048 (1,2,3,4) - forced distance i put them a little closer
kiais overmaped I disagree
use more straight sliders good idea actually

colors
00:13:166 (7) - continue the stream with circles I think it's fine as is
00:34:519 (1) - forced sv it highlights the high distortion in her voice, keeping as is
00:37:342 (1) - ^^ ^
00:41:931 (1) - forced distance i shortened it a little
00:50:225 (1) - wrong tick this is fine

good luck with the map

Thanks for the mod

Ataraxia

673 posts

Joined February 2014

Ataraxia 2016-04-25T20:52:25+00:00

Hii

Easy

First, i wanna to talk about This , in the logic, its aceitable, but see weird, i recommendo you to Charge the SV to 0.50, and charge all Points to 1.0x, Like This

For a easy, i think the Ds is much "close" try a buff, and CS 2 only if be a reaaal "beginner" , btw i don't like after all...

01:41:225 (4) - ds incoerent, fix to be coerent all the map

Some geral, the sliders are so random, like the 00:23:578 (1,2,3,4) - , 3 curves and 1 normal? try 2 curves and 2 normal for a example( this is to all same thing on the map)

Normal

this is brutal and Unrankeable

00:26:048 (7) - This double is random, try some like This This is to all doubles like this

00:29:225 (1) - NC

Hard

00:05:225 (1) - NC

00:20:754 (1,2,3,4) - I Not realy like this, is a stream moment, not 1/2 sliders :s

00:29:225 (1) - Random NC, its accidental?

Colors

00:52:519 (5,1) - This overlap is weird

Rest is fine

I Like the map c:

Good luck !

Doj

232 posts

Joined March 2014

Topic Starter

Doj 2016-04-26T19:14:28+00:00

Ataraxia wrote:
Hii

Easy

First, i wanna to talk about This , in the logic, its aceitable, but see weird, i recommendo you to Charge the SV to 0.50, and charge all Points to 1.0x, Like This

For a easy, i think the Ds is much "close" try a buff, and CS 2 only if be a reaaal "beginner" , btw i don't like after all... Well, I made it especially for those people so..

01:41:225 (4) - ds incoerent, fix to be coerent all the map fixed

Some geral, the sliders are so random, like the 00:23:578 (1,2,3,4) - , 3 curves and 1 normal? try 2 curves and 2 normal for a example( this is to all same thing on the map) I don't think it's a problem, keeping as is.

Normal

this is brutal and Unrankeable There's nothing even after this timing section, I dunno why it's there. fixed

00:26:048 (7) - This double is random, try some like This This is to all doubles like this fixed

00:29:225 (1) - NC fixed

Hard

00:05:225 (1) - NC fixed

00:20:754 (1,2,3,4) - I Not realy like this, is a stream moment, not 1/2 sliders :s Yea I know. I don't want to put a stream because it's a normal diff. Still trying to figure what to put. Edit: Holy shit I was drunk I guess, this isn't the normal diff. fixed from next mod.

00:29:225 (1) - Random NC, its accidental? yes lol

Colors

00:52:519 (5,1) - This overlap is weird fixed

Rest is fine

I Like the map c: Thanks!

Good luck !

Thanks for the mod

Last edited by Doj 2016-04-27T22:57:32+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Promathia

22 posts

Joined May 2015

Promathia 2016-04-27T18:48:35+00:00

Hi! I'm very new to modding and mapping, but here goes...
M4M appreciated https://osu.ppy.sh/s/441064

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[Colors]

00:20:225 (8,9,10) - move those a bit to make the stream flow
00:26:048 (2) - 00:26:048 (2) - 00:37:342 (1) - 00:40:166 (1) - slow down the sliders a bit to make it more readable

------------------------------------------------------------------------

[Hard]

00:20:754 (1,2,3,4) - maybe make those fast repeators to fit the beat?

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Nothing to say about easier Difficulties, don't really know how they usually even play.

I'd like to attempt a guest mapping for it myself, if that's ok? I don't know how it works or how much it affects things.

Doj

232 posts

Joined March 2014

Topic Starter

Doj 2016-04-27T22:56:41+00:00

Promathia wrote:
Hi! I'm very new to modding and mapping, but here goes...
M4M appreciated https://osu.ppy.sh/s/441064

------------------------------------------------------------------------

[Colors]

00:20:225 (8,9,10) - move those a bit to make the stream flow I changed the pattern up a bit
00:26:048 (2) - 00:26:048 (2) - 00:37:342 (1) - 00:40:166 (1) - slow down the sliders a bit to make it more readable Nah I think I'm gonna keep this. I don't think reading this is a problem since the note after is right next to it, and you're able to see it appear.

------------------------------------------------------------------------

[Hard]

00:20:754 (1,2,3,4) - maybe make those fast repeators to fit the beat? fixed

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Nothing to say about easier Difficulties, don't really know how they usually even play.

I'd like to attempt a guest mapping for it myself, if that's ok? I don't know how it works or how much it affects things.

Thanks for mod. Also, I'm not accepting guest difficulties for this map, because i plan to make this my first ranked, and i want it to be done completely by me.

MokouSmoke

495 posts

Joined May 2013

MokouSmoke 2016-04-28T09:00:12+00:00

from my queue~
[Colors]

Why not just call this diff Lunatic since it's a touhou song?
00:00:989 (1,2,3,4) -so the angle between (3,4) is sharper than the angle between (1,2,3) which gives more emphasis to (4). Ok that's fine since it matches well with song. But the identical sounding part at 00:02:401 (1,2,3,4) - has basically the same angle between all notes, so even though it kinda looks the same it actually plays quite different to the player. You should just copy/paste/rotate 00:00:989 (1,2,3,4) - which will improve playability and structure in your map.
00:05:225 (1,2,3,4) - another thing that bothers me are these flow breaks that lead to incorrect emphasis of the song. Looking at your flow (http://puu.sh/oyzg7/1ad60d48a5.jpg), we see that a change in flow happens at 00:05:577 (3) - even though the slider and song suggest that the change in flow should happen on the strong beat at 00:05:754 (4) - to fix this, move the slider so it's like this: http://puu.sh/oyzm3/4936a5ac7f.jpg - actually, you already do this in places like 00:00:989 (1,2,3,4) - or 00:04:166 (3,4,5) - just need to be more consistent about it
1. Same thing with 00:06:637 (1,2,3,4) -
2. 00:24:284 (4,5) - another place with bad flow. just copy/paste 00:23:754 (2,3) - and rotate 180 degrees
3. 00:29:401 (1,2) - ok, since I'm bad at explanations, here's a picture describing smooth flow into sliderbodies http://puu.sh/oyAgy/119ae855aa.jpg
00:17:754 (1,2,3) - if you're going to use manual stacks, pls be consistent and do it here as well
00:22:960 (1) - unnecessary NC on blue tick. rhythm is in groups of two, no reason to divide it into groups of 3
00:24:989 (1,2,3) - just make this 0.9x spacing. no reason why this should be different than your other triplet spacings
00:27:813 (1,2,3,4) - just make this a perfect square pattern
00:29:048 (1,1) - remove one of these NCs. nothing in song indicates it should be special even if you spice it up with a new hitsound
00:34:519 (1,1) - 00:36:637 (1,1,1) - etc...I really wish you would reconsider your NC use. Too many NC gives unnecessary HP boost and loses its effect when you do it constantly.
00:43:166 (1) - strong beat is here, so distance between 00:42:989 (3,1) - should be larger than at 00:42:813 (2,3) - to reflect that
00:54:460 -misses strong vocal beat here, but at 00:50:225 (1) - you map vocal and skip downbeat/synth sound. Just prioritize which one you want to follow and stay consistent.
01:05:754 (1) - Shape can be improved. Look at t/37194 for a guide on how to makes these loop shapes.
01:30:107 (2) - uhh, this should be 1/6, not 1/8. Also I would recommend removing a repeat and adding a circle at 01:30:284 - so the vocal has a clickable object
01:30:637 (5) - you have 1 too many repeats (actually I would prefer you remove two repeats and add a note at 01:30:813 - for same reason above)
01:31:872 (3,4) - has a spacing of 0.2x while 01:31:960 (4,5) - has spacing 0.25x. they're small things, but they do detract from quality of map
01:33:813 (2) - there are times when extended sliders work, but this one doesn't since there's a strong vocal sound at 01:33:989 - just make this 1/2. same thing at 01:39:460 (2) - 01:45:107 (2) - etc...
01:35:931 (2,3,4,5,6) - pattern can be improved. 01:36:284 (4) - should be equidistant from 01:35:931 (2,3) - and overall shape could be symmetric. Easy way to do this is copy/paste 01:35:931 (2,4,6) - and use ctrl+h to flip pattern horizontally and reposition
01:37:519 (3,4,5) - 01:40:342 (5,6,7) - spacing shrunk to 0.2x >.<
01:43:165 (3,4,5) - and now 0.15x lol. is this on purpose? doesn't seem like it
would add more structure to your pattern if 01:47:578 (4) - was perfectly between 01:47:931 (6,7) - and 01:48:107 (7) - was perfectly between 01:47:225 (2,4) -
01:53:401 (4,5,6) - well, I don't want to ruin your symmetry thing, but this part of the music sounds much calmer to me than 01:52:695 (1,2,3) - so consider using smaller spacing here.

[Hard]

00:00:989 (1,2,3) - 1.5x spacing pls
00:09:460 (1,2) - you can avoid this overlap, looks bad
00:16:519 (1,3) - ^
00:23:049 (1,3) - 00:29:225 (6,1) - NC's aren't consistent. just stick to NC on downbeat
00:36:989 (3,4) - fix spacing
00:40:166 (4,1) - ^ if anything, this should use a bigger DS than 00:39:813 (3,4) -
00:44:401 (1) - remove one repeat and add note at 00:44:754 - so downbeat is clickable
01:01:518 (5) - 01:03:107 (4) - 01:04:166 (1) - some strange NC stuff here
01:08:754 (1,2,3) - small thing, but for this pattern to work well, these should visually have identical spacing. You can check this by ctrl+g (1) http://puu.sh/oyBxZ/87a6bf31cd.jpg
01:10:166 (5,6,7) - this one is particularly noticeable
01:14:401 (1,2,3,4) - this sounds identical to 01:08:754 (1,2,3,4) - but pattern is completely different here and uses DS between 01:14:401 (1,2) - . If you're going to stick to your previous patterns, you should make it a theme in this section and use the same idea of slider leniency for a 2.0x jump with different variations. Otherwise, the jumps you used in your first two patterns will feel random and not nice to play.
01:21:460 (6) - 01:28:519 (6) - missing NC
01:29:754 (1,2) -Since you've mostly been using downbeat NC, just do that here as well. Just take a look at your NCs from here on out and fix any inconsistencies

[Normal]

00:08:931 (3,1) - looks bad, just blanket
00:13:695 (3,4) - should make this by copy/paste/rotate from 00:12:284 (1,2) -
00:17:048 - don't skip this beat since this part is more intense than 00:05:754 -
00:32:048 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - break up this slidertrain. recommend you make 00:33:107 (3) - a note
00:34:166 (6,1) - avoid overlap. looks bad and could get confused as 1/2 rhythm
01:03:637 (3,4) - ctrl+g rhythm. the strong beat is at 01:03:989 - not 01:03:813 -
01:11:225 - don't skip the synth sound here since you mapped out 01:09:989 (5) -
01:12:107 - 01:16:872 - 01:23:401 - 01:25:166 - ^ add notes here
01:12:989 (4,5) - make this symmetric. will make it look much more polished http://puu.sh/oyCpX/3474d49442.jpg
01:18:460 (4) - such a strong vocal, but the way is mapped, it gives same emphasis as 01:18:284 (3) -
01:28:519 (1) - break into 1/1 slider +note to capture strong beat at 01:28:872 -
01:29:754 (3) - 01:30:460 (4) - ^ I would argue that this is one of the most intense parts of the song, so try to reflect that with a higher note density. 3/2 slliders are too easy.
01:31:342 (1,2,3,4) - I don't agree with this rhythm choice. You've been mostly ignoring that string instrument, so don't start following it now. It's confusing to new players when you suddenly switch what you are mapping. You seem to be following the synth most often, so at least there should be a note at 01:32:225 - with the strong synth and vocal sounds

[Easy]

I'm really concerned about the difficulty gap between easy and normal. normal uses a good mix of 1/2 and 1/1 rhythms, but easy has barely any 1/1 rhythms at all. Sorry to say this, but you should consider remapping this diff so it's mostly 1/1 with the occasional 2/1 rhythm, and choose a DS/SV so that 1/1 rhythms don't cause overlaps

Good luck~

Doj

232 posts

Joined March 2014

Topic Starter

Doj 2016-04-28T16:06:17+00:00

Holy that's a long mod, I'll reply soon.

Zexous

713 posts

Joined July 2012

Zexous 2016-05-16T22:11:45+00:00

do you still want a GD cause I'm 39 seconds in but you have a lot of mods

Doj

232 posts

Joined March 2014

Topic Starter

Doj 2016-05-17T00:43:44+00:00

Zexous wrote:
do you still want a GD cause I'm 39 seconds in but you have a lot of mods

Yea man go for it

Since you're making a gd guess I'll get this show back on the road

Doj

232 posts

Joined March 2014

Topic Starter

Doj 2016-05-17T17:04:31+00:00

It only took half month for me to wanna map again lol

MokouSmoke wrote:
from my queue~
[Colors]
Why not just call this diff Lunatic since it's a touhou song? I've been trying to think of a better name tbh, I'll go with this.
00:00:989 (1,2,3,4) -so the angle between (3,4) is sharper than the angle between (1,2,3) which gives more emphasis to (4). Ok that's fine since it matches well with song. But the identical sounding part at 00:02:401 (1,2,3,4) - has basically the same angle between all notes, so even though it kinda looks the same it actually plays quite different to the player. You should just copy/paste/rotate 00:00:989 (1,2,3,4) - which will improve playability and structure in your map. Alright, I'll remember this in the future.
00:05:225 (1,2,3,4) - another thing that bothers me are these flow breaks that lead to incorrect emphasis of the song. Looking at your flow (http://puu.sh/oyzg7/1ad60d48a5.jpg), we see that a change in flow happens at 00:05:577 (3) - even though the slider and song suggest that the change in flow should happen on the strong beat at 00:05:754 (4) - to fix this, move the slider so it's like this: http://puu.sh/oyzm3/4936a5ac7f.jpg - actually, you already do this in places like 00:00:989 (1,2,3,4) - or 00:04:166 (3,4,5) - just need to be more consistent about it Ok, thanks for pointing that out.
Same thing with 00:06:637 (1,2,3,4) - fixed
00:24:284 (4,5) - another place with bad flow. just copy/paste 00:23:754 (2,3) - and rotate 180 degrees fixed
00:29:401 (1,2) - ok, since I'm bad at explanations, here's a picture describing smooth flow into sliderbodies http://puu.sh/oyAgy/119ae855aa.jpg
fixed
00:17:754 (1,2,3) - if you're going to use manual stacks, pls be consistent and do it here as well fixed
00:22:960 (1) - unnecessary NC on blue tick. rhythm is in groups of two, no reason to divide it into groups of 3 fixed
00:24:989 (1,2,3) - just make this 0.9x spacing. no reason why this should be different than your other triplet spacings
00:27:813 (1,2,3,4) - just make this a perfect square pattern fixed
00:29:048 (1,1) - remove one of these NCs. nothing in song indicates it should be special even if you spice it up with a new hitsound This is an accident lol
00:34:519 (1,1) - 00:36:637 (1,1,1) - etc...I really wish you would reconsider your NC use. Too many NC gives unnecessary HP boost and loses its effect when you do it constantly. I used an NC here because of the change in slider velocity. Should it not be NC'd because of that? Because that's mostly why I have a lot of NC's in this kiai
00:43:166 (1) - strong beat is here, so distance between 00:42:989 (3,1) - should be larger than at 00:42:813 (2,3) - to reflect that fixed
00:54:460 -misses strong vocal beat here, but at 00:50:225 (1) - you map vocal and skip downbeat/synth sound. Just prioritize which one you want to follow and stay consistent. I fixed up the section a bit to be more conistent.
01:05:754 (1) - Shape can be improved. Look at t/37194 for a guide on how to makes these loop shapes. fixed. I tried to make a tear drop.
01:30:107 (2) - uhh, this should be 1/6, not 1/8. Also I would recommend removing a repeat and adding a circle at 01:30:284 - so the vocal has a clickable object fixed
01:30:637 (5) - you have 1 too many repeats (actually I would prefer you remove two repeats and add a note at 01:30:813 - for same reason above) THAT'S A GREAT IDEA
01:31:872 (3,4) - has a spacing of 0.2x while 01:31:960 (4,5) - has spacing 0.25x. they're small things, but they do detract from quality of map fixed
01:33:813 (2) - there are times when extended sliders work, but this one doesn't since there's a strong vocal sound at 01:33:989 - just make this 1/2. same thing at 01:39:460 (2) - 01:45:107 (2) - etc... Alright, you have a valid point.
01:35:931 (2,3,4,5,6) - pattern can be improved. 01:36:284 (4) - should be equidistant from 01:35:931 (2,3) - and overall shape could be symmetric. Easy way to do this is copy/paste 01:35:931 (2,4,6) - and use ctrl+h to flip pattern horizontally and reposition fixed, tried my best to make it perfect lol
01:37:519 (3,4,5) - 01:40:342 (5,6,7) - spacing shrunk to 0.2x >.< this is definitely....
01:43:165 (3,4,5) - and now 0.15x lol. is this on purpose? doesn't seem like it not on purpose lol. I actually manually stacked most of them.
would add more structure to your pattern if 01:47:578 (4) - was perfectly between 01:47:931 (6,7) - and 01:48:107 (7) - was perfectly between 01:47:225 (2,4) - not sure if you meant literally in a line next to each other, but i placed then all the same distance apart (or tried to)
01:53:401 (4,5,6) - well, I don't want to ruin your symmetry thing, but this part of the music sounds much calmer to me than 01:52:695 (1,2,3) - so consider using smaller spacing here. I lowered the spacing for the last 3 notes to kinda mellow it out, but I like the spacing of the first 3 notes.
[Hard]
00:00:989 (1,2,3) - 1.5x spacing pls fixed
00:09:460 (1,2) - you can avoid this overlap, looks bad fixed
00:16:519 (1,3) - ^ fixed
00:23:049 (1,3) - 00:29:225 (6,1) - NC's aren't consistent. just stick to NC on downbeat fixed
00:36:989 (3,4) - fix spacing fixed
00:40:166 (4,1) - ^ if anything, this should use a bigger DS than 00:39:813 (3,4) - fixed
00:44:401 (1) - remove one repeat and add note at 00:44:754 - so downbeat is clickable fixed
01:01:518 (5) - 01:03:107 (4) - 01:04:166 (1) - some strange NC stuff here I was trying to NC to vocals, and beat at the same time so it looks weird. I fixed them to make them all go with the beat.
01:08:754 (1,2,3) - small thing, but for this pattern to work well, these should visually have identical spacing. You can check this by ctrl+g (1) http://puu.sh/oyBxZ/87a6bf31cd.jpg fixed
01:10:166 (5,6,7) - this one is particularly noticeable fixed
01:14:401 (1,2,3,4) - this sounds identical to 01:08:754 (1,2,3,4) - but pattern is completely different here and uses DS between 01:14:401 (1,2) - . If you're going to stick to your previous patterns, you should make it a theme in this section and use the same idea of slider leniency for a 2.0x jump with different variations. Otherwise, the jumps you used in your first two patterns will feel random and not nice to play. So from what I'm understanding, you pretty much want me to stay consistent with those two patterns in this section. If that's the case I've applied it to other parts.
01:21:460 (6) - 01:28:519 (6) - missing NC fixed
01:29:754 (1,2) -Since you've mostly been using downbeat NC, just do that here as well. Just take a look at your NCs from here on out and fix any inconsistencies fixed
[Normal]
00:08:931 (3,1) - looks bad, just blanket fixed
00:13:695 (3,4) - should make this by copy/paste/rotate from 00:12:284 (1,2) - fixed
00:17:048 - don't skip this beat since this part is more intense than 00:05:754 - fixed
00:32:048 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - break up this slidertrain. recommend you make 00:33:107 (3) - a note slider train lool
00:34:166 (6,1) - avoid overlap. looks bad and could get confused as 1/2 rhythm fixed
01:03:637 (3,4) - ctrl+g rhythm. the strong beat is at 01:03:989 - not 01:03:813 - fixed
01:11:225 - don't skip the synth sound here since you mapped out 01:09:989 (5) - fixed
01:12:107 - 01:16:872 - 01:23:401 - 01:25:166 - ^ add notes here fixed
01:12:989 (4,5) - make this symmetric. will make it look much more polished http://puu.sh/oyCpX/3474d49442.jpg fixed
01:18:460 (4) - such a strong vocal, but the way is mapped, it gives same emphasis as 01:18:284 (3) - fixed
01:28:519 (1) - break into 1/1 slider +note to capture strong beat at 01:28:872 - fixed
01:29:754 (3) - 01:30:460 (4) - ^ I would argue that this is one of the most intense parts of the song, so try to reflect that with a higher note density. 3/2 slliders are too easy. fixed
01:31:342 (1,2,3,4) - I don't agree with this rhythm choice. You've been mostly ignoring that string instrument, so don't start following it now. It's confusing to new players when you suddenly switch what you are mapping. You seem to be following the synth most often, so at least there should be a note at 01:32:225 - with the strong synth and vocal sounds I see what you mean. I made this rhythm at first because the one i had in mind was too hard tbh. I've thought of a better one and it seems to work.
[Easy]
I'm really concerned about the difficulty gap between easy and normal. normal uses a good mix of 1/2 and 1/1 rhythms, but easy has barely any 1/1 rhythms at all. Sorry to say this, but you should consider remapping this diff so it's mostly 1/1 with the occasional 2/1 rhythm, and choose a DS/SV so that 1/1 rhythms don't cause overlaps After saying everything you did I can't help but agree with you now xP I will remap this soon.
Good luck~ Thanks for the mod! This really showed me many things I never thought about before.

Chalwa

1,105 posts

Joined August 2014

Chalwa 2016-05-21T15:38:37+00:00

Hello from my queue

Easy

00:29:931 (2) - I think ctrl + >looks better
00:59:931 (4) - It's too hard to read.
01:02:754 (4) - The begginer, who watches Cookiezi, Rafis etc. think that you have to click quickly
01:05:578 (4) - The same like 00:59:931 (4)
01:46:872 (3) - ctrl + H, ctrl + J and ctrl + G looks better

Normal

00:01:519 (2,3) - In my opinion slider is better
00:02:931 (2,3) - ^
00:07:166 (2,3) - ^
00:08:578 (2,3) - ^
00:17:401 (5) - If you want, you can leave it, but it's too unreadable
00:29:754 (2) - ^
00:31:695 (6) - ^
00:33:107 (3) - ^
00:37:342 (6) - ^
00:40:166 (6) - ^
01:34:695 (2,3,4,5) - Too hard for Normal
01:42:107 (9) - NC

Hard

00:22:166 (5) - NC
01:19:166 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think, it's too hard pattern to Hard diff or do ctrl +G 01:20:048 (1)
01:28:519 (6) - NC

Really nice mapset and nice song!
GL in further mapping

Doj

232 posts

Joined March 2014

Topic Starter

Doj 2016-05-21T22:58:07+00:00

Chalwa wrote:
Hello from my queue

Easy
00:29:931 (2) - I think ctrl + >looks better fixed
00:59:931 (4) - It's too hard to read. fixed
01:02:754 (4) - The begginer, who watches Cookiezi, Rafis etc. think that you have to click quickly fixed
01:05:578 (4) - The same like 00:59:931 (4)
01:46:872 (3) - ctrl + H, ctrl + J and ctrl + G looks better fixed

Normal
00:01:519 (2,3) - In my opinion slider is better fixed
00:02:931 (2,3) - ^ fixed
00:07:166 (2,3) - ^ fixed
00:08:578 (2,3) - ^ fixed
00:17:401 (5) - If you want, you can leave it, but it's too unreadable fixed
00:29:754 (2) - ^ fixed
00:31:695 (6) - ^ fixed
00:33:107 (3) - ^ fixed
00:37:342 (6) - ^ fixed
00:40:166 (6) - ^ fixed
01:34:695 (2,3,4,5) - Too hard for Normal I spaced out the notes so they are clearly seen, but I'm keeping the pattern.
01:42:107 (9) - NC It's right before the new measure starts, so I think it's fine.

Hard
00:22:166 (5) - NC fixed
01:19:166 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think, it's too hard pattern to Hard diff or do ctrl +G 01:20:048 (1) I just went with the ctrl + g
01:28:519 (6) - NC fixed

Really nice mapset and nice song!
GL in further mapping Thanks for the mod!

Flowey

101 posts

Joined August 2012

Flowey 2016-05-24T02:28:30+00:00

Hi, NM from my queue!

[Victorica's Snow~]

00:01:519 (2,1) - Silence slider slide during soft sections.
Not much else I can say. I think the map plays fine.

[Lunatic]

00:01:519 (4) - Silence slider slide during soft sections.
00:21:460 (1,2,3,4,5) - Copy 00:20:754 (1,2,3,4,5) and Ctrl+H. (It has better shape.)
01:29:931 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - The rhythm here is hard to read. The taps are on drum beats, which are triplets, but these are arranged in strange groups.
01:53:401 (4) - NC.

[Hard]

00:00:989 (1) - Silence slider slide during soft sections.
00:31:166 (2) - Ctrl+G this to flow better with the previous slider.
00:50:401 (1) - From the previous few notes, players will think you are following the melody, so this will throw them off. (They're likely to click it on the early on the red tick with vocals.)
00:54:636 (1) - You can start this on the previous red tick to match the vocals.
00:59:931 (5) - I don't think it's necessary to end on the blue tick right here.
01:05:930 (1) - You can start this on the previous red tick to match the vocals.
01:08:225 (1) - It's really hard to tell when this beat is, so most people will think it's on a downbeat. Adding a circle on the downbeat at 01:08:048 would eliminate this confusion.
01:08:754 (1) - Ctrl+G for better flow.
01:10:166 (5) - Ctrl+G for better flow. Also NC.
01:14:401 (1) - and so on - Ctrl+G.
01:15:813 (5) - NC
01:21:460 (5) - ^
01:27:107 (5,6) - I would move 5 up and 6 down for better flow.
01:27:107 (5) - NC
01:38:401 (5) - You have a NC at 01:32:754 (1) but not here.
01:48:284 (5) - NC
01:47:754 (3) - I would move this closer to the next slider for flow:
01:53:401 (6) - NC

[]
Good Luck!

Miriko

201 posts

Joined July 2014

Miriko 2016-05-26T23:23:03+00:00

Nephroid wrote:
Hi, NM from my queue!

[Victorica's Snow~]
00:01:519 (2,1) - Silence slider slide during soft sections. I'm not sure what you meant there, but I decided to lower the volume for the part. x3
Not much else I can say. I think the map plays fine. Thank you!

Thank you for the mod! I also made a few extra changes to the difficulty.

Kira-ra Kira-ri~

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DeletedUser_6181859

DeletedUser_6181859 2016-05-28T16:40:00+00:00

Hey from my queue, my name is Max 100bit, and this is my mod!
Well, opinion of modder is opinion of modder.
Do not judge strictly, I could be wrong.
And yep, I am just learning. My english is bad, so sorry for googletranslate.

Song and beatmaps

None here!

Easy

I think Distance Spacing=2.0x is very big for Slider Velosity=1.0... Change to ~1.8x.
00:33:460 (3,1,2) - try to fix this overlap
01:17:931 (4,1) - ^

Normal

Fix all mistakes with Distance Spacing: Ctrl+Shift+A -> Check distance snap
00:17:401 (5) - x=256 y=292 for good blanket
also try to avoid overlap in 00:16:519 (4,1)
01:03:989 (4,5) - i think stack here isn't good idea because you don't have stacks before this moment
01:11:048 (7,8) - ^, also this stack looks weird
01:16:695 (6,7) - ^
01:22:342 (6,7) - ^
01:25:166 (5,6) - ^
01:12:284 (3,4,6) - try to avoid overlap
01:24:284 (4,1,2) - ^
01:50:931 (1,3) - ^

Hard

00:05:754 (4,3) - try to avoid overlap or stack (for more challenge)
00:22:342 (2,3) - change to triples by circles
00:40:166 (4,2,3) - try to avoid overlap
00:57:107 (1) - remove this note, also you can extend 00:54:636 (1) to 00:54:636 (1)
01:24:813 (8,1) - make away to each other
01:38:931 (7) - end of slider in x=72 y=128 for good blanket
01:47:225 (1) - remove nc here and set nc in 01:47:578 (2)

Good luck!
{end of mod}

Doj

232 posts

Joined March 2014

Topic Starter

Doj 2016-05-29T02:32:08+00:00

Nephroid wrote:
Hi, NM from my queue!

[Lunatic]
00:01:519 (4) - Silence slider slide during soft sections. I don't even hear a slider slide tbh lol. I'll try and take a closer listen.
00:21:460 (1,2,3,4,5) - Copy 00:20:754 (1,2,3,4,5) and Ctrl+H. (It has better shape.) fixed
01:29:931 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - The rhythm here is hard to read. The taps are on drum beats, which are triplets, but these are arranged in strange groups. I can read it fine, and a few others have tested it.
01:53:401 (4) - NC. Nah. I do think a NC would look nice, but I'll keep it as is.

[Hard]
00:00:989 (1) - Silence slider slide during soft sections. I'll take a look. Still can't hear the slider slider lol.
00:31:166 (2) - Ctrl+G this to flow better with the previous slider. I think it's fine the way it is. Because the vocal at the part repeats twice, the first time being longer than the second. So it's fitting to have the same slider with the second being shorter.
00:50:401 (1) - From the previous few notes, players will think you are following the melody, so this will throw them off. (They're likely to click it on the early on the red tick with vocals.) I changed it to a slider to flow better with the vocal.
00:54:636 (1) - You can start this on the previous red tick to match the vocals. Yea, but I'm mainly going with the beat in this part and not the vocals. So suddenly starting the spinner on the vocal might feel weird to play.
00:59:931 (5) - I don't think it's necessary to end on the blue tick right here. I just wanted to do something cool fixed
01:05:930 (1) - You can start this on the previous red tick to match the vocals. Again, I think starting spinner on vocals might feel weird after playing to beat.
01:08:225 (1) - It's really hard to tell when this beat is, so most people will think it's on a downbeat. Adding a circle on the downbeat at 01:08:048 would eliminate this confusion. Maybe, but if they read the approach circle correctly there will be no problem.
01:08:754 (1) - Ctrl+G for better flow. I did this on purpose to make it a little difficult.
01:10:166 (5) - Ctrl+G for better flow. Also NC. ^ , The combo is specifically for the "Yurara Yurari"
01:14:401 (1) - and so on - Ctrl+G. ^
01:15:813 (5) - NC ^
01:21:460 (5) - ^ ^
01:27:107 (5,6) - I would move 5 up and 6 down for better flow. Good idea. fixed
01:27:107 (5) - NC Still making combo to vocals
01:38:401 (5) - You have a NC at 01:32:754 (1) but not here. fixed
01:48:284 (5) - NC fixed
01:47:754 (3) - I would move this closer to the next slider for flow: fixed
01:53:401 (6) - NC fixed
[]
Good Luck! Thanks for the mod!

100bit wrote:
Hey from my queue, my name is Max 100bit, and this is my mod!
Well, opinion of modder is opinion of modder.
Do not judge strictly, I could be wrong.
And yep, I am just learning. My english is bad, so sorry for googletranslate.
Song and beatmaps
None here!
Easy
I think Distance Spacing=2.0x is very big for Slider Velosity=1.0... Change to ~1.8x. I do agree the ds is big, but I think it doesn't make the map harder really. The reason I made the ds so big is because I didn't want the notes to overlap.
00:33:460 (3,1,2) - try to fix this overlap fixed
01:17:931 (4,1) - ^ Ehhhh it's close, but I think it's alright.
Normal
Fix all mistakes with Distance Spacing: Ctrl+Shift+A -> Check distance snapfixed
00:17:401 (5) - x=256 y=292 for good blanket I changed the slider a little to fix the blanket instead.
also try to avoid overlap in 00:16:519 (4,1) fixed
01:03:989 (4,5) - i think stack here isn't good idea because you don't have stacks before this moment fixed
01:11:048 (7,8) - ^, also this stack looks weird fixed
01:16:695 (6,7) - ^ color=#4000FF]fixed[/color]
01:22:342 (6,7) - ^ color=#4000FF]fixed[/color]
01:25:166 (5,6) - ^ color=#4000FF]fixed[/color]
01:12:284 (3,4,6) - try to avoid overlap This one is really close, but I think it's fine
01:24:284 (4,1,2) - ^ this one is fine
01:50:931 (1,3) - ^ ^
Hard
00:05:754 (4,3) - try to avoid overlap or stack (for more challenge) fixed
00:22:342 (2,3) - change to triples by circles I made it into a triple with a reverse slider
00:40:166 (4,2,3) - try to avoid overlap this is fine
00:57:107 (1) - remove this note, also you can extend 00:54:636 (1) to 00:54:636 (1) I think it's fine as is.
01:24:813 (8,1) - make away to each other ^
01:38:931 (7) - end of slider in x=72 y=128 for good blanket fixed
01:47:225 (1) - remove nc here and set nc in 01:47:578 (2)I removed the NC, but kept the rest the same.
Good luck! Thanks for the mod!
{end of mod}

Updated.

Arphimigon

1,651 posts

Joined December 2014

Arphimigon 2016-05-29T16:48:57+00:00

QUICKIE

[General]
01:08:754 - Idk id have made this a part of kiai or the only kiai either works, cus this is the chorus
idk
u can leave it makes no difference anyway

[Easy]
Now I know you are trying to make thiss easy, but since there are only 3 circles, that completely negatess the "timing/rhythm" aspect of the game, so idk how, but I HEAVILY recommend you slap some circles -somewhere- more
00:58:872 (3,2) - These visibly touch, at least i noticed on 100% speed, and looks weird yo!

I like dis ez

[Normal]
00:10:695 (3,4) - Ayy how about putting that 4 more to the right so it followss the curve neatly <3?
01:24:284 (4,1) - Visibly touch is weird
01:27:107 (5) - Isnt this meant to be 1/1 long?
01:38:048 (3,1) - Idk why but this is so dodgy LOL ssince they touch it feelss like the slider is 1/2 apart and u need to hit the other end of it GG
01:53:931 - Note to end this music off? Would add a good "finish tap" effect to a strong ssound \o/

noice

[Hard (lewd)]
00:22:519 (4,5,6) - I feel as tho it would be cooler with slider + 3 note cus it gets more sounds in tapping
01:53:931 - Same as normal having a final tap feels SO GOOD

[Lunacy]
00:13:166 (7) - all dese tiny 1/4 ssliders are trigerrr xd just a comment tho no change
01:11:578 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I like u following the vocal here so 01:23:754 (1,2,3,4,5) - DO IT HERE idk WHY
01:50:225 (1) - Lonely nc ;-;
01:53:931 - PLSS jussst add a LAST TAP it feels SO GOOD

[Snowy]
yknow imma tell u the beggining has ssounds mapped to nothing or super inaudible but w/e you wont change but U SHOULD
01:30:813 (4,1) - Mighty spaced 1/8 note yknow
01:53:931 - xd add final tap here too thankss m9

feed me kdss and reject everything here pl thank

Doj

232 posts

Joined March 2014

Topic Starter

Doj 2016-05-29T20:40:40+00:00

Arphimigon wrote:
QUICKIE l-lewd

[General]
01:08:754 - Idk id have made this a part of kiai or the only kiai either works, cus this is the chorus You have a point.
idk
u can leave it makes no difference anyway

[Easy]
Now I know you are trying to make thiss easy, but since there are only 3 circles, that completely negatess the "timing/rhythm" aspect of the game, so idk how, but I HEAVILY recommend you slap some circles -somewhere- more now there's 20
00:58:872 (3,2) - These visibly touch, at least i noticed on 100% speed, and looks weird yo! fixed

I like dis ez thanks !

[Normal]
00:10:695 (3,4) - Ayy how about putting that 4 more to the right so it followss the curve neatly <3? fixed
01:24:284 (4,1) - Visibly touch is weird fixed
01:27:107 (5) - Isnt this meant to be 1/1 long? fixed
01:38:048 (3,1) - Idk why but this is so dodgy LOL ssince they touch it feelss like the slider is 1/2 apart and u need to hit the other end of it GG I changed it up a bit.
01:53:931 - Note to end this music off? Would add a good "finish tap" effect to a strong ssound \o/ Man I've been debating this for so long. I guess I'll add it lol

noice !

[Hard (lewd)]
00:22:519 (4,5,6) - I feel as tho it would be cooler with slider + 3 note cus it gets more sounds in tapping fixed (i think)
01:53:931 - Same as normal having a final tap feels SO GOOD done.

[Lunacy]
00:13:166 (7) - all dese tiny 1/4 ssliders are trigerrr xd just a comment tho no change lel
01:11:578 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I like u following the vocal here so 01:23:754 (1,2,3,4,5) - DO IT HERE idk WHY If you turn down the effects volume and listen to the song there's a little melody that plays there
01:50:225 (1) - Lonely nc ;-; fixed
01:53:931 - PLSS jussst add a LAST TAP it feels SO GOOD fiksd

feed me kdss and reject everything here pl thank no i will accept everything and give kds yw

Thanks for mod! <3

Sakurauchi Riko

1,632 posts

Joined January 2015

Sakurauchi Riko 2016-05-30T16:10:19+00:00

Hello, since I really like the song I decided to mod this map. I'm still new to modding so dont change anything if you dont agree!

Vicky's Snow~

00:11:225 (2,3) - fix blanket (slightly adjust)
00:12:989 (4,5) - ^
01:25:695 (1,2) - ^
00:33:460 (1,2) - blanket?
01:44:931 (1,1) - ^
00:26:842 (2,3) - move it a bit higher for better look?
00:39:637 (1,2,1,2) - no matter how often i try i dont fc them while testplaying, but dont change
00:50:578 (2,4) - overlap
01:11:225 (1,1) - ^
01:06:107 (2,1) - ^ (maybe intended? but looks not nice imo even if)
01:14:225 (4,1) - ^ (same)
01:25:519 (3,1) - almost an overlap, but maybe make the gap bigger
00:56:225 (1,2,3,1,2) - damn, looks pretty nice !!
01:05:048 (3) - i would make that slider curved more harder for better flow (since the sliderend flows into nothing)
01:21:107 (1,2) - would make same distance between these objects to the longher slider

Lunatic

00:26:401 (1,2) - blanket maybe?
01:32:401 (6,8) - ^
01:38:225 (7,8,9) - ^
00:47:578 (1,4) - fix blanket
01:13:519 (7,8) - ^
01:11:931 (2,3,4,5) - looks really untidy imo
01:21:901 (4,5) - would make slider a bit up
maybe a spinner somewhere?
wish i could point more things out but i cant, dunno....

Well, thats it for me. I hope my mod was useful (its low quality mod imo). If it wasnt that useful dont give me kudo, I wont die without it

GL with your map and happy mapping! (:

EphemeralFetish

472 posts

Joined May 2014

EphemeralFetish 2016-05-31T13:10:16+00:00

NM From Queue.

Super late. Sorry for that, work is killing me.

Vicky's Snow~

00:17:578 (5) - Pretty drastic SV change, you may wanna NC here because of that.
00:20:578 (7) - This is a huge issue for me, why does this 1/4 have to be so much faster than all the others? I hear nothing in the music to justify doing so, along with it not having an NC to signal this. The large spacing afterwards is very misleading, it looks like a 1/2 slider with a one tick gap after before the stream, or something similar. In short, the 7 needs to be the same speed as the previous ones.
00:39:637 (1,2,1,2) - Why are these different? Couldnt you just copy the first one.
00:50:578 (2,4) - This overlap is hurting me m8.
00:54:460 (1) - Yeah, you're following vocals, but I cant ignore how strange this looks because of the beat you're missing on the large white tick, you can easily have a circle on the red instead then follow that into a slider on the white to have both.
01:27:813 (3,4) - I really dont see a need for these SV changes other than trying to force some sort or creativity. Sadly it doesnt work.
01:30:107 (2) - Okay, you may need some clarification on this, but Im sure this is 1/6th here. 01:30:813 (4) - This is in totally the wrong place 01:30:637 (2) - Should be here and again Im pretty sure these are 1/6th.

Lunatic

00:42:813 (2) - 99% sure you wont be able to get away with this, especially on a lower difficulty. Its very difficult to read this sort of thing.
00:45:284 (1) - Dont see a need for this, why noot just keep it as an ordinary stream.
00:56:578 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - You may want to consider using the slider conversion tool for circular streams like this. Right now it sticks out and is noticeably off.
01:12:460 (5) - Pull this down a bit so it isnt overlapping slightly with the 3.
01:19:342 (1,2,3,4) - You can easily re-position this so 01:19:695 (3,1) - Blanket together nicely.
01:24:284 (5) - NC here instead of the next note.

GL

Miriko

201 posts

Joined July 2014

Miriko 2016-06-03T00:00:22+00:00

Arphimigon wrote:
[Snowy]
yknow imma tell u the beggining has ssounds mapped to nothing or super inaudible but w/e you wont change but U SHOULD
01:30:813 (4,1) - Mighty spaced 1/8 note yknow But it's the same with 00:25:695 (5,6) - 00:31:519 (6,1) - 00:36:989 (4,1) - :s How is this any different?
01:53:931 - xd add final tap here too thankss m9 Added~

Phyloukz wrote:
Vicky's Snow~
00:11:225 (2,3) - fix blanket (slightly adjust) Fixed~
00:12:989 (4,5) - ^ I'm keeping it the way it is.
01:25:695 (1,2) - ^ Fixed~
00:33:460 (1,2) - blanket? They're too far apart to actually be worrying.
01:44:931 (1,1) - ^ Fixed~
00:26:842 (2,3) - move it a bit higher for better look? Unchanged. It is fine where it is. :s
00:39:637 (1,2,1,2) - no matter how often i try i dont fc them while testplaying, but dont change I'll keep this in mind and see if others makes the same complaint.
00:50:578 (2,4) - overlap Unchanged, it's fixed to a star pattern.
01:11:225 (1,1) - ^ Unchanged, it won't really flow as well.
01:06:107 (2,1) - ^ (maybe intended? but looks not nice imo even if) Yes, it's intentional.
01:14:225 (4,1) - ^ (same) Intentional.
01:25:519 (3,1) - almost an overlap, but maybe make the gap bigger Intentional.
00:56:225 (1,2,3,1,2) - damn, looks pretty nice !! Thank you~ >////<
01:05:048 (3) - i would make that slider curved more harder for better flow (since the sliderend flows into nothing) It's a blanket and it's meant to end with a sharp back-jump to the fourth slider.
01:21:107 (1,2) - would make same distance between these objects to the longher slider I think I fixed it....Idk. x3

The Fetish wrote:
NM From Queue.

Vicky's Snow~

00:17:578 (5) - Pretty drastic SV change, you may wanna NC here because of that. Done~
00:20:578 (7) - This is a huge issue for me, why does this 1/4 have to be so much faster than all the others? I hear nothing in the music to justify doing so, along with it not having an NC to signal this. The large spacing afterwards is very misleading, it looks like a 1/2 slider with a one tick gap after before the stream, or something similar. In short, the 7 needs to be the same speed as the previous ones. Fixed. ><
00:39:637 (1,2,1,2) - Why are these different? Couldnt you just copy the first one. Is it so wrong to have them slightly different? ><
00:50:578 (2,4) - This overlap is hurting me m8. It's a star jump pattern.
00:54:460 (1) - Yeah, you're following vocals, but I cant ignore how strange this looks because of the beat you're missing on the large white tick, you can easily have a circle on the red instead then follow that into a slider on the white to have both. Changed~
01:27:813 (3,4) - I really dont see a need for these SV changes other than trying to force some sort or creativity. Sadly it doesnt work.
01:30:107 (2) - Okay, you may need some clarification on this, but Im sure this is 1/6th here. 01:30:813 (4) - This is in totally the wrong place 01:30:637 (2) - Should be here and again Im pretty sure these are 1/6th. Decided to change it all to 1/4. ><

Thank you for the mods~ <3

Rawr~

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Doj

232 posts

Joined March 2014

Topic Starter

Doj 2016-06-13T17:50:06+00:00

The Fetish wrote:
NM From Queue.

Super late. Sorry for that, work is killing me. Don't worry about it, we don't all live on this game after all.

Lunatic

00:42:813 (2) - 99% sure you wont be able to get away with this, especially on a lower difficulty. Its very difficult to read this sort of thing I originally had the single sticking out a little, so I'll change it back to that.
00:45:284 (1) - Dont see a need for this, why noot just keep it as an ordinary stream. Because it fits and I like it lol
00:56:578 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - You may want to consider using the slider conversion tool for circular streams like this. Right now it sticks out and is noticeably off. fixed
01:12:460 (5) - Pull this down a bit so it isnt overlapping slightly with the 3. fixed
01:19:342 (1,2,3,4) - You can easily re-position this so 01:19:695 (3,1) - Blanket together nicely. fixed
01:24:284 (5) - NC here instead of the next note. fixed

GL

Thanks for mod!

Phyloukz wrote:
Hello, since I really like the song I decided to mod this map. I'm still new to modding so dont change anything if you dont agree!

Lunatic
00:26:401 (1,2) - blanket maybe? fixed
01:32:401 (6,8) - ^ fixed
01:38:225 (7,8,9) - ^ fixed
00:47:578 (1,4) - fix blanket fixed
01:13:519 (7,8) - ^ fixed
01:11:931 (2,3,4,5) - looks really untidy imo fixed
01:21:901 (4,5) - would make slider a bit up fixed
maybe a spinner somewhere? I'll think about it.
wish i could point more things out but i cant, dunno....

Well, thats it for me. I hope my mod was useful (its low quality mod imo). If it wasnt that useful dont give me kudo, I wont die without it it was good
GL with your map and happy mapping! (: Thanks!

Thanks for mod!

KappaPraise

316 posts

Joined November 2015

KappaPraise 2016-06-14T15:45:47+00:00

Hi \o, mod is here ༼ つ ◕_◕ ༽つ

Sorry I am late, I was very busy in university

General

Your dif and Vicky's Snow have different kiai times suggest you make same.

Easy

00:54:637 (1) - this spinner shoud starts here 00:54:460 - ?
01:28:519 (3) - this slider contradicts prev parts, what about make here 2 1/1 sliders too?
01:08:754 (1,2) - make 1 slider please, like in next parts 01:14:401 (1) - etc
01:31:342 (1,2,3) - why 1st two sliders follow instruments, but the 2nd vocal? I dont agree with rhythm in this kiai, you suddenly jump from instumental to vocal, I think you should make here something different

Normal

why different SV in begin x0.75 and x0.85 in normal dif like in easy must be same SV everywhere, I dont see differences here, but I dont know)
00:03:813 - strong beat, I suggest you add here circle
00:32:048 (1,2) - drum hitsounds, may be there should be auto?
00:54:637 (1) - this spinner shoud starts here 00:54:460 - ?
01:24:284 (4,5) - may be slider 4 should be reverse with hit-clap on the end?
01:47:754 (1,2) - idk both slider follow different goals (vocal and instrumental) they incommensurable here imo

Hard

00:20:754 (1,2,3,4) - I hear this sliders like 1
00:34:519 (9,1) - wow suddenly this big spacing
00:37:695 (1,1) - stack?
00:46:695 (2) - I hear this slider like 1/2 + circle, 00:48:107 (5) - here too, and etc
00:53:225 (4,5) - bad blanket X_X
01:09:813 (4,8) - why this and other same circles have strong beat also with hit-clap and they hidden?
01:14:754 (2,5) - dont like this mirror overlap, 01:15:813 (5,8) - here too :V
01:24:813 (8,9,1) - about this, unbalanced space between sliders looks weird and messy imo, may be you should make other pattren?
01:37:872 (3,3) - stack?
01:40:872 (5,2) - ^
eh, I dont like to say this, but in this dif kiai specifically sometimes made not carefully, suggest you do something here please

Lunatic

00:09:989 (2,3) - this and 00:10:695 (3,4) - this spacing looks unbalanced
00:34:872 (1,2,3) - i think higher spacing must be between 2 3 not between 1 2
00:38:225 (4) - this is sounds like 1/4 reverse slider
00:52:519 (5,6) - higher spacing? like in prev parts
00:56:225 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - notes with Normal samplesets must be 1 2 3 5 7 9, isnt it?
01:11:931 (2,3,4,5,6) - hmm, this pattern looks weird, may you should place 3 in center of 2 4 5 triangle? btw between 3 4 imo should be higher spacing
01:29:931 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this pattern looks better imo https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5388352
01:36:460 (5) - NC?
01:47:048 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - what? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5388372
01:52:342 (8) - end of slider strong beat, should be clickable imo
01:52:695 (9,10,11) - unbalanced spacing

Vicky's Snow~

00:25:695 (5,6) - may be end lisder on white tick? because with this spacing 1/8 jump looks pretty hard, same here 00:31:519 (6,1) - and other parts
01:08:225 - what about end slide here and add circle on white tick?
01:36:637 (5,1) - may be make here jump?
01:42:460 (1) - may be place end of slider between 01:42:107 (4,5) - this two circles?
Other things looks nice, good job o.o

Thats it from me, good luck o/

P.S. 99 \:D/

Doj

232 posts

Joined March 2014

Topic Starter

Doj 2016-06-18T02:27:32+00:00

WISPG_G wrote:
Hi \o, mod is here ༼ つ ◕_◕ ༽つ

Sorry I am late, I was very busy in university Don't worry about it.

General

Your dif and Vicky's Snow have different kiai times suggest you make same.

Easy

00:54:637 (1) - this spinner shoud starts here 00:54:460 - ? oh yea, you're right
01:28:519 (3) - this slider contradicts prev parts, what about make here 2 1/1 sliders too? good point
01:08:754 (1,2) - make 1 slider please, like in next parts 01:14:401 (1) - etc lol yea I was wondering if someone would notice
01:31:342 (1,2,3) - why 1st two sliders follow instruments, but the 2nd vocal? I dont agree with rhythm in this kiai, you suddenly jump from instumental to vocal, I think you should make here something different This part actually isn't meant to follow the vocal. The (3) slider follows the same instrument that the 4 notes at the beginning of the song follow. The rhythm in this kiai is actually 00:12:284 (1,2,3,4) - this rhythm except i split the sliders up with a single at the end lol.

Normal

why different SV in begin x0.75 and x0.85 in normal dif like in easy must be same SV everywhere, I dont see differences here, but I dont know) fixed
00:03:813 - strong beat, I suggest you add here circle fixed
00:32:048 (1,2) - drum hitsounds, may be there should be auto? that was a mistake, fixed
00:54:637 (1) - this spinner shoud starts here 00:54:460 - ? fixed
01:24:284 (4,5) - may be slider 4 should be reverse with hit-clap on the end? This is a good idea, but I wanna keep the rhythm consistent here I dont feel like adjusting everything XD
01:47:754 (1,2) - idk both slider follow different goals (vocal and instrumental) they incommensurable here imo ehhhh I it fits so I'll keep it

Hard

00:20:754 (1,2,3,4) - I hear this sliders like 1 Srry, I'm not sure what you mean here.
00:34:519 (9,1) - wow suddenly this big spacing fixed
00:37:695 (1,1) - stack? fixed
00:46:695 (2) - I hear this slider like 1/2 + circle, 00:48:107 (5) - here too, and etc Hmm I do agree it does fit, but I'll keep what I have for now.
00:53:225 (4,5) - bad blanket X_X i tried to fix it X_X
01:09:813 (4,8) - why this and other same circles have strong beat also with hit-clap and they hidden? I moved them all from beneath the sliders, fixed
01:14:754 (2,5) - dont like this mirror overlap, 01:15:813 (5,8) - here too :V fixed
01:24:813 (8,9,1) - about this, unbalanced space between sliders looks weird and messy imo, may be you should make other pattren? I moved them around a bit to fix it.
01:37:872 (3,3) - stack? fixed
01:40:872 (5,2) - ^ fixed
eh, I dont like to say this, but in this dif kiai specifically sometimes made not carefully, suggest you do something here please I'll look over it more

Lunatic

00:09:989 (2,3) - this and 00:10:695 (3,4) - this spacing looks unbalanced fixed
00:34:872 (1,2,3) - i think higher spacing must be between 2 3 not between 1 2 fixed
00:38:225 (4) - this is sounds like 1/4 reverse slider Good idea, but I'll keep it as is.
00:52:519 (5,6) - higher spacing? like in prev parts This is the same spacing as the previous notes.
00:56:225 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - notes with Normal samplesets must be 1 2 3 5 7 9, isnt it? I tried what you suggested, but I like what I have.
01:11:931 (2,3,4,5,6) - hmm, this pattern looks weird, may you should place 3 in center of 2 4 5 triangle? btw between 3 4 imo should be higher spacing great idea !!1
01:29:931 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this pattern looks better imo https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5388352 another ljasndflkjsndgjlkds great idea !!!1
01:36:460 (5) - NC? This is fine as is.
01:47:048 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - what? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5388372 I'll fix it up
01:52:342 (8) - end of slider strong beat, should be clickable imo fixed
01:52:695 (9,10,11) - unbalanced spacing fixed

Thats it from me, good luck o/ Thanks for the mod!!!!!!

P.S. 99 \:D/

hyouri

390 posts

Joined June 2012

hyouri 2016-06-18T19:50:59+00:00

quick 1 min modding

[General]

There's no storyboard, so check all diffs with Widescreen support and epilepsy warning and remove them.
Set all diffs with overlapping timing points to same volume

[Lunatic]

00:45:460 (2) - weird stream here, could be made into something like:

[Vicky's Snow]

01:52:607 (1) - spinner is waaay too short. unrankable
00:30:637 (1) - should be whistle on sliderhead
00:31:166 (4) - same as above
00:36:107 (3) - whistle on this sliderend
00:41:931 (2) - whistle on this sliderhead
NC should be 00:41:931 (2) - here as opposed to 00:41:754 (1) -
00:43:342 (1) - whistle on sliderhead
00:47:578 (1) - finish on sliderhead
00:51:813 (1) - same as above
00:53:225 (1) - same as above

check these for all similar-sounding parts

Doj

232 posts

Joined March 2014

Topic Starter

Doj 2016-06-18T20:13:27+00:00

Alveryn wrote:
quick 1 min modding

[General]
There's no storyboard, so check all diffs with Widescreen support and epilepsy warning and remove them. ok
Set all diffs with overlapping timing points to same volume !!
[Lunatic]
00:45:460 (2) - weird stream here, could be made into something like: mmmmm delish

thank

Miriko

201 posts

Joined July 2014

Miriko 2016-06-19T21:03:44+00:00

WISPG_G wrote:
Vicky's Snow~

00:25:695 (5,6) - may be end lisder on white tick? because with this spacing 1/8 jump looks pretty hard, same here 00:31:519 (6,1) - and other parts But it's an extra difficulty, it's meant to be hard. :s
01:08:225 - what about end slide here and add circle on white tick? I think I'm keeping the spinner.
01:36:637 (5,1) - may be make here jump? Why? >< It looks fine the way it is and I have no idea what jump you want it to be. :s
01:42:460 (1) - may be place end of slider between 01:42:107 (4,5) - this two circles? Sorry, I'm not sure what you mean here. ><
Other things looks nice, good job o.o Thank you!

Alveryn wrote:
[Vicky's Snow]
01:52:607 (1) - spinner is waaay too short. unrankable Auto test resulted that it's able to get 1000 points from it which means it met the ranking criteria.
00:30:637 (1) - should be whistle on sliderhead Okay~
00:31:166 (4) - same as above Hai hai~
00:36:107 (3) - whistle on this sliderend Done~
00:41:931 (2) - whistle on this sliderhead Okay desu~
NC should be 00:41:931 (2) - here as opposed to 00:41:754 (1) - Fixed~
00:43:342 (1) - whistle on sliderhead Okay~
00:47:578 (1) - finish on sliderhead Added a whistle instead~
00:51:813 (1) - same as above Okay~
00:53:225 (1) - same as above Added a whistle instead~

check these for all similar-sounding parts Yessu! *Salutes*

Thank you for the mods~!
~Added a few of my own edits to the map. x3 Including Slider colors~ And fixed 00:17:578 (1,2) - part to make it look better~

Rawr~!

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Erza

84 posts

Joined January 2015

Erza 2016-06-25T21:21:32+00:00

HUHU NICE

Vicky's Snow

01:45:813 (2) - please make this more symmetrical uhuh tilt it more top right

Sry for lazy modding x-x but it looks good

MrJoghurt

85 posts

Joined December 2015

MrJoghurt 2016-06-25T23:29:00+00:00

Mod from #modreqs

Easy:
01:41:225 (3) - I think this slider breaks the typical flow of the map while it would flow good if used more frequently
when I was a newbie I often clicked on the wrong end of a slider.

Normal:
00:19:342 (3) - NC Combo consitency
01:19:695 (6) - I would not stack this note there you do nowhere else in the map so it could be confusing
01:36:460 (6) - NC After a long pause the vocals start with a different tune
01:42:107 (9) - same
01:53:931 (5) - NC there maybe The song continues and you set an accent at the first note of that so maybe NC

Hard:
01:19:519 (3) - Breaks the flow of 01:18:989 (6,1,2) -
I would swap 01:19:166 (1) - with 01:19:519 (3) - and 01:19:695 (4) - with 01:19:872 (5) -
OR
Move the star pattern to 01:18:989 (6) - make 01:18:989 (6) - NC and fix 01:20:048 (1) - this way the player has more time to read and the flow gets better
01:29:931 (1) - IF you do NC here 01:19:166 (1) - the NC needs to be moved to 01:30:107 (2) -
01:53:401 (6) - NC After a long pause the vocals start with a different tune
01:53:931 (2) - like the ending in Normal diff

Lunatic:
00:23:225 (1) - no NC here if you want NC together with Vocals make 00:23:048 (5) - NC instead
00:36:989 (1,1) - I think those belong to one sound so no need for NC 00:37:342 (1) - here
00:39:989 (4,1) - same
00:46:166 (1) - bad flow maby Ctrl. + G
00:56:225 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - The part is louder but i think the hitsounds there are a bit too loud
01:03:460 (1) - NC earlyer The Vocals are holding the iiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiih no rythm changes at all. better move it to the beginning of the rythm and iiiih 01:03:107 (5) -
01:04:519 (4) - New combo here because changes in the music and vocal tune and vocal rythm (iiiiiiiiih

)
01:20:578 (5) - a bit akward feel because these two 01:20:578 (5) - and 01:16:342 (7) - change the direction in which the cursor is moving
01:21:989 (5) - Its ok here because this one moves at least ~90 degrees
If NC'ing follows vocals:
01:47:754 (5) - NC here instead of 01:48:284 (1) - at 01:47:754 (5) - a new phrase begins
01:48:989 (5) - NC here too because upbeat to new phrase and new phrase
01:50:578 (2) - NC new phrase move NC to here from 01:50:225 (1) -
If NC'ing follows rythm:
01:49:695 (8) - if there 01:48:284 (1) - is a NC at 01:49:695 (8) - has to be one too
01:53:931 (4) - like ending in Normal & Hard

Vicky's Snow:
00:26:048 (6) - NC here or no NC here 00:31:695 (1) -
00:31:695 (1) - NC here because of consistency (01:22:519 (1) - )
01:22:519 (1) - same
either here 01:31:166 (1) - no NC or here 01:32:578 (3) - NC
either here 01:31:695 (2) - NC or here 01:33:107 (1) - no NC
01:49:519 (3) - NC here because of consistency

Hope I was helpful

good luck with your mapset I like it

Miriko

201 posts

Joined July 2014

Miriko 2016-06-26T00:36:52+00:00

Erza wrote:
HUHU NICE

Vicky's Snow
01:45:813 (2) - please make this more symmetrical uhuh tilt it more top right Done~
Sry for lazy modding x-x but it looks good Thank you~ >////<

st_stefan wrote:
Vicky's Snow:
00:26:048 (6) - NC here or no NC here 00:31:695 (1) - Done~
00:31:695 (1) - NC here because of consistency (01:22:519 (1) - )
01:22:519 (1) - same
either here 01:31:166 (1) - no NC or here 01:32:578 (3) - NC Done~
either here 01:31:695 (2) - NC or here 01:33:107 (1) - no NC
01:49:519 (3) - NC here because of consistency

I was slightly confused by what you meant but I figured most of the NC errors~ Ty~

Thank you for the mods~

Kira~ra~ra Kira~ra~

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Doj 2016-06-26T18:08:04+00:00

st_stefan wrote:
Mod from #modreqs
Easy:
01:41:225 (3) - I think this slider breaks the typical flow of the map while it would flow good if used more frequently
when I was a newbie I often clicked on the wrong end of a slider.I think it fits perfectly. I use it at the beginning of this kiai to lead into the chorus, and then here I use to transition into the repeat of the chorus.

Normal:
00:19:342 (3) - NC Combo consitency fixed
01:19:695 (6) - I would not stack this note there you do nowhere else in the map so it could be confusing fixed
01:36:460 (6) - NC After a long pause the vocals start with a different tune fixed
01:42:107 (9) - same fixed
01:53:931 (5) - NC there maybe The song continues and you set an accent at the first note of that so maybe NC fixed

Hard:
01:19:519 (3) - Breaks the flow of 01:18:989 (6,1,2) - It's a star pattern ?
I would swap 01:19:166 (1) - with 01:19:519 (3) - and 01:19:695 (4) - with 01:19:872 (5) -
OR
Move the star pattern to 01:18:989 (6) - make 01:18:989 (6) - NC and fix 01:20:048 (1) - this way the player has more time to read and the flow gets better fixed
01:29:931 (1) - IF you do NC here 01:19:166 (1) - the NC needs to be moved to 01:30:107 (2) - Why would I need to move it? The place I have it now is on a really strong beat, and it's on a large white tick.
01:53:401 (6) - NC After a long pause the vocals start with a different tune fixed
01:53:931 (2) - like the ending in Normal diff fixed

Lunatic:
00:23:225 (1) - no NC here if you want NC together with Vocals make 00:23:048 (5) - NC instead fixed
00:36:989 (1,1) - I think those belong to one sound so no need for NC 00:37:342 (1) - here fixed
00:39:989 (4,1) - same I'll keep this as is to make it more readable.
00:46:166 (1) - bad flow maby Ctrl. + G fixed
00:56:225 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - The part is louder but i think the hitsounds there are a bit too loud fixed
01:03:460 (1) - NC earlyer The Vocals are holding the iiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiih no rythm changes at all. better move it to the beginning of the rythm and iiiih 01:03:107 (5) - I ended up changing this part completely
01:04:519 (4) - New combo here because changes in the music and vocal tune and vocal rythm (iiiiiiiiih ) fixed
01:20:578 (5) - a bit akward feel because these two 01:20:578 (5) - and 01:16:342 (7) - change the direction in which the cursor is moving I made them like that on purpose. The first part is like you said with changing directions after the stream, and it leads into the more smooth transitions.
01:21:989 (5) - Its ok here because this one moves at least ~90 degrees
If NC'ing follows vocals: I'm NC'ing to the beat not vocals.
01:47:754 (5) - NC here instead of 01:48:284 (1) - at 01:47:754 (5) - a new phrase begins ^
01:48:989 (5) - NC here too because upbeat to new phrase and new phrase ^
01:50:578 (2) - NC new phrase move NC to here from 01:50:225 (1) - ^
If NC'ing follows rythm:
01:49:695 (8) - if there 01:48:284 (1) - is a NC at 01:49:695 (8) - has to be one too fixed
01:53:931 (4) - like ending in Normal & Hard fixed

Hope I was helpful
good luck with your mapset I like it Thanks for the mod!!

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