M4M hype
BEFORE YOU READ THE MOD:I'm normally a very picky modder, and I normally give my honest opinions about the map.
Also, reading the
colour coding explains the importance of said suggestion or necessity.
COLOURS:
Color codingImportance:
Red = Unrankable if unchanged
Black = Normal Suggestion
Blue = Strong Suggestion
Pink = Comment
General
I don't know if the storyboard is bright enough to force an epilepsy warning (Talk to a BN about it)
Easy
00:16:519 (2,1) - I think you should make this blanket a bit more noticeable
00:32:048 (1) - Remove this NC, you should NC every 4th big white beat instead imo for consistent NC'ing :3
00:39:107 (1) - Remove NC
00:40:519 (3) - NC
00:43:342 (1) - Remove NC
00:54:637 (1) - Maybe make the spinner end on 00:56:754? It's a little short I think :3
01:03:107 (4) - NC
01:03:813 (1) - Remove NC
01:10:166 (2) -
Shorten this slider a bit, it's ending on a blue tick 01:20:048 -
Feels awkward for new players to play a slider that ends on the start of a new section of the chorus. consider shortening the slider and adding a single tap 01:21:460 (1) - Blanket this slider with the end of the previous slider (Or newly made single tap)
01:29:931 (1) - Remove NC
01:31:342 (2) -
NC, this is a new section!01:39:813 (1) - Remove NC, since the previous was 6, and this one was a mere 2.
01:45:460 (1) - Same thing.
Final thoughts on Easy diff:
Overall I think you should create more blankety patterns to make the map prettier. The map isn't bad in any way, but there's definitely some stuff that could be fixed
Normal
00:19:342 (1) - Remove NC (This one isn't too important, but beware of inconsistent NC'ing)
00:20:754 (1) - You could make the spinner longer like I suggested in the easy diff
00:33:460 -
Sliderend on a big white beat is a no-no, especially if a stream is coming up!00:39:637 (1) - Remove NC
00:40:519 (3) - NC
00:43:342 (1,2,3) - You could do some with blankets here, doesn't look aestheticly good.
01:02:401 (1,2) - I'd say switch NC, but both work I think.
01:19:695 - Add a single tap here, feels very empty!
01:21:107 (3,4) - This part doesn't follow the vocals too well. Consider making the slider a single tap, and copying 01:20:048 (1,2,3) - (With 3 as singletap) and adding it later.
01:23:931 (3,4) - Same problem.
01:26:754 (3,4) - Again, it doesn't flow imo
01:42:107 (1,2) - Switch NC, 2nd slider is on the main beat, so this could be prioritized :3
01:53:931 - I'd add another beat here I think
I'd feel better if there was a note on the big white beat :3
Final thoughts on normal:
A few rhythm issues, and some patterns that could be prettier
But the overall experience is positive
Hard
00:01:519 (3) - Move this slider down a bit ^^
00:16:519 (4) - NC, since you NC'ed on this (00:13:695 (1) - ) spot.
00:20:754 (1,2,3,4) - To spice things up, you could add two 1/8 sliders instead of those 4 kicksliders to follow the fast beat here!
00:44:753 (9) - NC
00:44:931 (1) - Remove NC
00:51:813 (1,3) - The sliderend on 3 should blanket the first slider a bit better :3
00:57:459 (2) - Shorten this slider, ending isn't snapped probably.
00:57:459 (2) - Also, it has a fairly weird shape. The "Zig-zaggy" thing is alright, but it could look a bit more appealing.
Generally you should re-NC the chorus, there's some inconsistency there NC'ing every second big white beat would be recommended 01:09:813 -
I'd add a note here.01:11:225 -
Same here. (The beats should honestly be there )01:12:989 (4,5) - This blanket's a little undone
01:25:695 - Do something with a singletap here, and NC that singletap.
Final thoughts on Hard:
Some NC issues and aesthetic issues with blankets and such, could be fixed.
Colors
00:04:166 (1) - I donno if you should NC this because it's a mirror.
00:56:401 (2) - Make the slider into two single taps, that are further spaced. (The second singletap should be the start of the stream.)
01:05:048 (6,7) - You should extend the slider instead and delete the singletap imo
01:26:754 (6,1,2,3,4,5) - Place slider 6 in a way that makes the stream prettier, 'cause the contrast between 6 and 1 isn't too great atm.
01:31:342 -
From here, another NC re-do would be optimal. Every second big white beat! (It's fine to NC the "Ding" sound!)01:53:401 (1,2) - You could spice this part up by copy-pasting the previous 3 jumps instead and Ctrl+H'ing it.
Final thoughts on Insane:
Imo this is the best diff of the set, 'cause you play around with star jumps and such, which makes the map very nice
FINAL final thoughts:
Overall I think this mapset needs some tweaking and changes to be ranked in the future, since the approval standard is really high (Like, insanely high >.<). But I think that with enough mods and enough patience, you'll get there
Good luck in the future with the mapset man
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