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Doj

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Doj 2016-04-03T17:49:13+00:00

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Kisses wrote:
hi m4m, ok so I'm a day late, dont hate me pls ;w;

Easy
00:15:107 - This is one of the most dominant beats in the entire song, I really recommend putting a circle on it. fixed
00:17:931 (1,2) - When the border touches slightly it looks kinda un-appealing to me fixed nazi
00:27:813 (4) - This would flow better if it was on top of slider (3) going across. It flows nicely into slider (1) aswell. http://puu.sh/o3jfK/ec7181237b.jpg . if you like these kind of overlaps --> http://puu.sh/o3jgD/67158a8c0a.jpg delicious
01:20:048 (1) - I think you should make this into a slider, it does feel pretty empty here fixed
01:21:460 (1) - Delete NC fixed
01:22:872 - Map this beat, same as 00:15:107 it feels especially empty having nothing here fixed
01:24:284 (4,5) - Maybe consider having these 2 circles as one slider as on is on a white tick and the other is on a red tick fixed
01:27:107 (2) - Can you move this up to around 84x, 140y? It loses its appeal when it slightly touches (1) fixed
01:32:754 (2) - I think this pattern would look really pretty if you curved this, it also has good flow too. http://puu.sh/o3jWO/7304686c9e.jpg
01:39:813 (3) - Do you not want to curve this slider the other way http://puu.sh/o3k1m/e51845fa16.jpg ? The sliders in the pattern 01:31:342 fixed(1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - all change direction according to the music but this one is an odd one out

Normal
00:10:342 (2,3) - I think you should create a bit a space, visually. What do you think?I think I understand what you mean. I increased the spacing a little but I'm kinda limited since it's only a normal diff
00:17:931 (1,3) - Because these are similar sounds I think you should have them both straight or both curved instead of one or the other fixed
00:20:754 (1) - I would end this spinner at 00:22:166 , like you did for your easy. fixed
00:25:519 (6) - I think its fine to have changes in direction generally but since you did one earlier at 00:24:460 (4,5) I think you should put this under http://puu.sh/o3kud/5802b7cb9c.jpg fixed
00:30:637 (2) - - This appears quite some time before 00:29:225 (8) actually finishes so I would avoid the underlap fixed
00:34:166 (6,7,8) - Consider changing to a reverse slider. the note density is so sort of pushing it towards a hard diff and I imagine normal players would already be ovewhelmed by 00:32:048 (1,2,3,4,5) - good point
00:39:637 (5,6) - In all your previous patterns you stack the circle under the slider, how come you didnt do it here? I actually don't know lol. I guess I was tired or somethin
00:58:872 (3) - what do you think about this rhythm? http://puu.sh/o3kM7/929b75a8ac.jpg great idea
01:04:519 (1,2,3,4) - 4 1/2 single taps is quite harsh dont you think? lol
01:03:637 (3) - Change to a 1/1 slider with a circle after it? http://puu.sh/o3kXY/e5246e46f6.jpg I think that first the music better imo. It gives a nice clickable object on 01:04:166 as well fixed
01:13:872 - Since this is a normal try added a 1/2 slider here to fill some space, see if you like it http://puu.sh/o3l2Y/95964bf456.jpg (1) and (4) are 01:12:989 (4,1)
01:27:107 (5) - Make into 1/1 slider for consistency fixed
01:53:401 (1,2,3) - The spacing just doesnt look right, also since its the end of the song I think it plays better as a reverse slider as multiple clickable makes it feel like it has the same intensity as the music before it. fixed

Hard
00:20:754 (1,2,3,4) - The use of rverse sliders doesnt match the music imho, maybe try using 1/2 sliders? I honestly can't figure out what to put here to go with the buildup without making it to difficult tbh. I'll just put the sliders until I can figure out something.
00:35:048 (1) - Consider deleting this note, it suits the music and also creates a nice pause since there hasnt been a pause from the start of the kiai time. fixed
00:36:637 (2,3) - Why are these sliders 1/6? All the other sliders are 1/4 I think someone told me in a previous mod, but now that I look at it I think 1/4 is better.
00:46:166 (1,2,3) - For the parts where you have slider -> circle -> slider I think it would be better to have it as slider -> slider -> circle http://puu.sh/o3lFc/4de2316278.jpg that way you get a nice clickable object on the end 00:47:225 . If you use this apply to the areas where you've used this rhythm. I see what you mean. It goes really well with the beat there, I never noticed it really before.
01:15:460 (4,8) - missing clap or is this intentional? probably a mistake
01:53:401 (1,2) - Because all these notes are the same intensity I think it would be better to have this as either 3 circles or a reverse slider. that way the intensity of the 3 notes is the same fixed

Insane
00:13:166 (7) - I have the feeling people are going to misread this as 2 circles, as you can see the number. It works at 00:17:048 (1,2,3,4,5) as the spacing here is higher I increased the spacing on the lower spaced streams
00:31:519 (1) - I think sliders like these are suppose to be 1/8 good point
00:36:989 (1) - ^ Also ending it on 00:37:298 by making it 1/8 gives a more comfortable hit window when moving on the the nest slider fixed
00:20:754 (1) to 00:23:401 (1) - This pattern is really nice, n1 aye
00:42:284 (1) - I think its appropiate to make this into 2 sliders Damn I thought I was gonna get through this with no rejections lol. I'm actually gonna keep this because it fits perfectly with her voice fading out while distorted.
01:50:225 (1) - I think the SV feels out of place imho I think for the sake or consistency I'm just gonna leave it as is.
Most of these are just my thoughts and I tried to keep my suggestions as close to your own mapping style and current rhythm used though feel free to reject everyone if you like

GL!

Thanks for the mod xoxo

_handholding

3,109 posts

Joined April 2014

_handholding 2016-04-03T19:27:47+00:00

damn, if only I skipped the last 2 points I would have made the perfect mod xD I just looked over your hard diff again

00:36:637 (2) - I think the position of this is a mistake
01:04:166 (1,1) - delete one of these NC?
01:53:401 (5) - needs to be snapped to red and white ticks

no kds ofc

Doj

232 posts

Joined March 2014

Topic Starter

Doj 2016-04-03T21:32:21+00:00

Kisses wrote:
damn, if only I skipped the last 2 points I would have made the perfect mod xD I just looked over your hard diff again

00:36:637 (2) - I think the position of this is a mistake LOL WTF
01:04:166 (1,1) - delete one of these NC? fixed
01:53:401 (5) - needs to be snapped to red and white ticks fixed

no kds ofc

Dunno what happened to my kiais, even the normal was messed up for some reason lol. Thanks!

hyouri

390 posts

Joined June 2012

hyouri 2016-04-03T22:10:51+00:00

General

Epilepsy warning is kind of useless (idk I don't have epilepsy)
I believe PNG is superior to JPG so http://puu.sh/o51MG/2336af5f8f.png

Colors
00:13:342 (8) - NC here pls and not 00:13:519 (1) -
00:14:048 (4) - ^
00:14:754 (10) - ^
00:16:166 (10) - ^
00:19:519 (2,3) - plays better with CTRL + G
00:22:872 (6) - NC should be on this white tick or 00:22:519 (3) - , and when you try to make a stream like that, make sure that it's divided evenly on object count where they split, right now you have 00:22:695 (4,5,6) - and 00:22:960 (1,2,3,4) - 3:4, you could alternatively move 00:23:225 (4) - away a little bit. Also I see no reason for the stream to bend like it does, make it straight all the way up
00:23:401 (1,2,3) - make these form a triangle with even spacing instead, right now 00:23:578 (2,3) - are a little more spaced than 1,2
00:25:519 (4) - this could be moved down here http://puu.sh/o52I9/cd1142bee9.png for the sake of flow
00:26:401 (1) - CTRL + G
00:28:342 (4) - move this to like x:192|y:172
00:28:342 (4,5) - awkward spacing if you approved the mod above ^ so you should move 00:28:695 (5,6,7) - little to the right
00:29:048 (7) - NC here instead
00:31:166 (3,1) - too close, move 00:31:519 (1) - so you dont have weird spacing
00:34:342 (1) - no need for NC here, 00:34:519 (2) - here is perfect for NC to fit with storyboard and also timing point
00:34:342 - move this timing point 00:34:519 - here
00:37:342 (2) - NC here because you already did on the other 3 before this
00:37:872 (2,3) - CTRL + G?
00:38:578 (5,7) - ^
00:39:460 (2) - ^
00:41:048 (3,4,5,6) - Bad spacing, since 00:40:519 (1,2) - are a bit further apart
00:45:813 (4) - NC

Only had the energy to mod first min, good luck

Doj

232 posts

Joined March 2014

Topic Starter

Doj 2016-04-04T00:33:31+00:00

hyouri wrote:

General
Epilepsy warning is kind of useless (idk I don't have epilepsy) Better safe than sorry ya know
I believe PNG is superior to JPG so http://puu.sh/o51MG/2336af5f8f.png ok lol

Colors
00:13:342 (8) - NC here pls and not 00:13:519 (1) - fixed
00:14:048 (4) - ^ ^
00:14:754 (10) - ^ ^
00:16:166 (10) - ^ ^
00:19:519 (2,3) - plays better with CTRL + G mmmmmmmmm ok
00:22:872 (6) - NC should be on this white tick or 00:22:519 (3) - , and when you try to make a stream like that, make sure that it's divided evenly on object count where they split, right now you have 00:22:695 (4,5,6) - and 00:22:960 (1,2,3,4) - 3:4, you could alternatively move 00:23:225 (4) - away a little bit. Also I see no reason for the stream to bend like it does, make it straight all the way up Hmm I see what you mean. I'm keeping my curve tho
00:23:401 (1,2,3) - make these form a triangle with even spacing instead, right now 00:23:578 (2,3) - are a little more spaced than 1,2 lol I ended up changing 00:23:401 (1) - to a slider since I made the above change lol
00:25:519 (4) - this could be moved down here http://puu.sh/o52I9/cd1142bee9.png for the sake of flow good idea
00:26:401 (1) - CTRL + G fixed
00:28:342 (4) - move this to like x:192|y:172 fixed
00:28:342 (4,5) - awkward spacing if you approved the mod above ^ so you should move 00:28:695 (5,6,7) - little to the right fixed
00:29:048 (7) - NC here instead fixed
00:31:166 (3,1) - too close, move 00:31:519 (1) - so you dont have weird spacing fixed
00:34:342 (1) - no need for NC here, 00:34:519 (2) - here is perfect for NC to fit with storyboard and also timing point fixed
00:34:342 - move this timing point 00:34:519 - here fixed
00:37:342 (2) - NC here because you already did on the other 3 before this fixed
00:37:872 (2,3) - CTRL + G? you smart
00:38:578 (5,7) - ^ you
00:39:460 (2) - ^ smart
00:41:048 (3,4,5,6) - Bad spacing, since 00:40:519 (1,2) - are a bit further apart fixed
00:45:813 (4) - NC fixed

Only had the energy to mod first min, good luck

It's all good, seeing how some of the notes your told me to flip play is pretty cool actually. I might change a few more things like that. Thanks son

AmigoDoChroome

228 posts

Joined September 2014

AmigoDoChroome 2016-04-22T18:47:12+00:00

hi
simple mod

normal
00:03:813 (4) - note here
normal difficulties need a fixed ds 00:23:225 (1,2,3,4) - (1.50ds)
Remap?

hard
cs 4 ar 7
00:23:048 (1,2,3,4) - forced distance
kiais overmaped
use more straight sliders

colors
00:13:166 (7) - continue the stream with circles
00:34:519 (1) - forced sv
00:37:342 (1) - ^^
00:41:931 (1) - forced distance
00:50:225 (1) - wrong tick

good luck with the map

Doj

232 posts

Joined March 2014

Topic Starter

Doj 2016-04-25T15:13:43+00:00

AmigoDoChroome wrote:
hi
simple mod

normal
00:03:813 (4) - note here
normal difficulties need a fixed ds 00:23:225 (1,2,3,4) - (1.50ds)
Remap? lowered the ds to 1.2x in the kiai

hard
cs 4 ar 7 fixed
00:23:048 (1,2,3,4) - forced distance i put them a little closer
kiais overmaped I disagree
use more straight sliders good idea actually

colors
00:13:166 (7) - continue the stream with circles I think it's fine as is
00:34:519 (1) - forced sv it highlights the high distortion in her voice, keeping as is
00:37:342 (1) - ^^ ^
00:41:931 (1) - forced distance i shortened it a little
00:50:225 (1) - wrong tick this is fine

good luck with the map

Thanks for the mod

Ataraxia

673 posts

Joined February 2014

Ataraxia 2016-04-25T20:52:25+00:00

Hii

Easy

First, i wanna to talk about This , in the logic, its aceitable, but see weird, i recommendo you to Charge the SV to 0.50, and charge all Points to 1.0x, Like This

For a easy, i think the Ds is much "close" try a buff, and CS 2 only if be a reaaal "beginner" , btw i don't like after all...

01:41:225 (4) - ds incoerent, fix to be coerent all the map

Some geral, the sliders are so random, like the 00:23:578 (1,2,3,4) - , 3 curves and 1 normal? try 2 curves and 2 normal for a example( this is to all same thing on the map)

Normal

this is brutal and Unrankeable

00:26:048 (7) - This double is random, try some like This This is to all doubles like this

00:29:225 (1) - NC

Hard

00:05:225 (1) - NC

00:20:754 (1,2,3,4) - I Not realy like this, is a stream moment, not 1/2 sliders :s

00:29:225 (1) - Random NC, its accidental?

Colors

00:52:519 (5,1) - This overlap is weird

Rest is fine

I Like the map c:

Good luck !

Doj

232 posts

Joined March 2014

Topic Starter

Doj 2016-04-26T19:14:28+00:00

Ataraxia wrote:
Hii

Easy

First, i wanna to talk about This , in the logic, its aceitable, but see weird, i recommendo you to Charge the SV to 0.50, and charge all Points to 1.0x, Like This

For a easy, i think the Ds is much "close" try a buff, and CS 2 only if be a reaaal "beginner" , btw i don't like after all... Well, I made it especially for those people so..

01:41:225 (4) - ds incoerent, fix to be coerent all the map fixed

Some geral, the sliders are so random, like the 00:23:578 (1,2,3,4) - , 3 curves and 1 normal? try 2 curves and 2 normal for a example( this is to all same thing on the map) I don't think it's a problem, keeping as is.

Normal

this is brutal and Unrankeable There's nothing even after this timing section, I dunno why it's there. fixed

00:26:048 (7) - This double is random, try some like This This is to all doubles like this fixed

00:29:225 (1) - NC fixed

Hard

00:05:225 (1) - NC fixed

00:20:754 (1,2,3,4) - I Not realy like this, is a stream moment, not 1/2 sliders :s Yea I know. I don't want to put a stream because it's a normal diff. Still trying to figure what to put. Edit: Holy shit I was drunk I guess, this isn't the normal diff. fixed from next mod.

00:29:225 (1) - Random NC, its accidental? yes lol

Colors

00:52:519 (5,1) - This overlap is weird fixed

Rest is fine

I Like the map c: Thanks!

Good luck !

Thanks for the mod

Last edited by Doj 2016-04-27T22:57:32+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Promathia

22 posts

Joined May 2015

Promathia 2016-04-27T18:48:35+00:00

Hi! I'm very new to modding and mapping, but here goes...
M4M appreciated https://osu.ppy.sh/s/441064

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[Colors]

00:20:225 (8,9,10) - move those a bit to make the stream flow
00:26:048 (2) - 00:26:048 (2) - 00:37:342 (1) - 00:40:166 (1) - slow down the sliders a bit to make it more readable

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[Hard]

00:20:754 (1,2,3,4) - maybe make those fast repeators to fit the beat?

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Nothing to say about easier Difficulties, don't really know how they usually even play.

I'd like to attempt a guest mapping for it myself, if that's ok? I don't know how it works or how much it affects things.

Doj

232 posts

Joined March 2014

Topic Starter

Doj 2016-04-27T22:56:41+00:00

Promathia wrote:
Hi! I'm very new to modding and mapping, but here goes...
M4M appreciated https://osu.ppy.sh/s/441064

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[Colors]

00:20:225 (8,9,10) - move those a bit to make the stream flow I changed the pattern up a bit
00:26:048 (2) - 00:26:048 (2) - 00:37:342 (1) - 00:40:166 (1) - slow down the sliders a bit to make it more readable Nah I think I'm gonna keep this. I don't think reading this is a problem since the note after is right next to it, and you're able to see it appear.

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[Hard]

00:20:754 (1,2,3,4) - maybe make those fast repeators to fit the beat? fixed

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Nothing to say about easier Difficulties, don't really know how they usually even play.

I'd like to attempt a guest mapping for it myself, if that's ok? I don't know how it works or how much it affects things.

Thanks for mod. Also, I'm not accepting guest difficulties for this map, because i plan to make this my first ranked, and i want it to be done completely by me.

MokouSmoke

495 posts

Joined May 2013

MokouSmoke 2016-04-28T09:00:12+00:00

from my queue~
[Colors]

Why not just call this diff Lunatic since it's a touhou song?
00:00:989 (1,2,3,4) -so the angle between (3,4) is sharper than the angle between (1,2,3) which gives more emphasis to (4). Ok that's fine since it matches well with song. But the identical sounding part at 00:02:401 (1,2,3,4) - has basically the same angle between all notes, so even though it kinda looks the same it actually plays quite different to the player. You should just copy/paste/rotate 00:00:989 (1,2,3,4) - which will improve playability and structure in your map.
00:05:225 (1,2,3,4) - another thing that bothers me are these flow breaks that lead to incorrect emphasis of the song. Looking at your flow (http://puu.sh/oyzg7/1ad60d48a5.jpg), we see that a change in flow happens at 00:05:577 (3) - even though the slider and song suggest that the change in flow should happen on the strong beat at 00:05:754 (4) - to fix this, move the slider so it's like this: http://puu.sh/oyzm3/4936a5ac7f.jpg - actually, you already do this in places like 00:00:989 (1,2,3,4) - or 00:04:166 (3,4,5) - just need to be more consistent about it
1. Same thing with 00:06:637 (1,2,3,4) -
2. 00:24:284 (4,5) - another place with bad flow. just copy/paste 00:23:754 (2,3) - and rotate 180 degrees
3. 00:29:401 (1,2) - ok, since I'm bad at explanations, here's a picture describing smooth flow into sliderbodies http://puu.sh/oyAgy/119ae855aa.jpg
00:17:754 (1,2,3) - if you're going to use manual stacks, pls be consistent and do it here as well
00:22:960 (1) - unnecessary NC on blue tick. rhythm is in groups of two, no reason to divide it into groups of 3
00:24:989 (1,2,3) - just make this 0.9x spacing. no reason why this should be different than your other triplet spacings
00:27:813 (1,2,3,4) - just make this a perfect square pattern
00:29:048 (1,1) - remove one of these NCs. nothing in song indicates it should be special even if you spice it up with a new hitsound
00:34:519 (1,1) - 00:36:637 (1,1,1) - etc...I really wish you would reconsider your NC use. Too many NC gives unnecessary HP boost and loses its effect when you do it constantly.
00:43:166 (1) - strong beat is here, so distance between 00:42:989 (3,1) - should be larger than at 00:42:813 (2,3) - to reflect that
00:54:460 -misses strong vocal beat here, but at 00:50:225 (1) - you map vocal and skip downbeat/synth sound. Just prioritize which one you want to follow and stay consistent.
01:05:754 (1) - Shape can be improved. Look at t/37194 for a guide on how to makes these loop shapes.
01:30:107 (2) - uhh, this should be 1/6, not 1/8. Also I would recommend removing a repeat and adding a circle at 01:30:284 - so the vocal has a clickable object
01:30:637 (5) - you have 1 too many repeats (actually I would prefer you remove two repeats and add a note at 01:30:813 - for same reason above)
01:31:872 (3,4) - has a spacing of 0.2x while 01:31:960 (4,5) - has spacing 0.25x. they're small things, but they do detract from quality of map
01:33:813 (2) - there are times when extended sliders work, but this one doesn't since there's a strong vocal sound at 01:33:989 - just make this 1/2. same thing at 01:39:460 (2) - 01:45:107 (2) - etc...
01:35:931 (2,3,4,5,6) - pattern can be improved. 01:36:284 (4) - should be equidistant from 01:35:931 (2,3) - and overall shape could be symmetric. Easy way to do this is copy/paste 01:35:931 (2,4,6) - and use ctrl+h to flip pattern horizontally and reposition
01:37:519 (3,4,5) - 01:40:342 (5,6,7) - spacing shrunk to 0.2x >.<
01:43:165 (3,4,5) - and now 0.15x lol. is this on purpose? doesn't seem like it
would add more structure to your pattern if 01:47:578 (4) - was perfectly between 01:47:931 (6,7) - and 01:48:107 (7) - was perfectly between 01:47:225 (2,4) -
01:53:401 (4,5,6) - well, I don't want to ruin your symmetry thing, but this part of the music sounds much calmer to me than 01:52:695 (1,2,3) - so consider using smaller spacing here.

[Hard]

00:00:989 (1,2,3) - 1.5x spacing pls
00:09:460 (1,2) - you can avoid this overlap, looks bad
00:16:519 (1,3) - ^
00:23:049 (1,3) - 00:29:225 (6,1) - NC's aren't consistent. just stick to NC on downbeat
00:36:989 (3,4) - fix spacing
00:40:166 (4,1) - ^ if anything, this should use a bigger DS than 00:39:813 (3,4) -
00:44:401 (1) - remove one repeat and add note at 00:44:754 - so downbeat is clickable
01:01:518 (5) - 01:03:107 (4) - 01:04:166 (1) - some strange NC stuff here
01:08:754 (1,2,3) - small thing, but for this pattern to work well, these should visually have identical spacing. You can check this by ctrl+g (1) http://puu.sh/oyBxZ/87a6bf31cd.jpg
01:10:166 (5,6,7) - this one is particularly noticeable
01:14:401 (1,2,3,4) - this sounds identical to 01:08:754 (1,2,3,4) - but pattern is completely different here and uses DS between 01:14:401 (1,2) - . If you're going to stick to your previous patterns, you should make it a theme in this section and use the same idea of slider leniency for a 2.0x jump with different variations. Otherwise, the jumps you used in your first two patterns will feel random and not nice to play.
01:21:460 (6) - 01:28:519 (6) - missing NC
01:29:754 (1,2) -Since you've mostly been using downbeat NC, just do that here as well. Just take a look at your NCs from here on out and fix any inconsistencies

[Normal]

00:08:931 (3,1) - looks bad, just blanket
00:13:695 (3,4) - should make this by copy/paste/rotate from 00:12:284 (1,2) -
00:17:048 - don't skip this beat since this part is more intense than 00:05:754 -
00:32:048 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - break up this slidertrain. recommend you make 00:33:107 (3) - a note
00:34:166 (6,1) - avoid overlap. looks bad and could get confused as 1/2 rhythm
01:03:637 (3,4) - ctrl+g rhythm. the strong beat is at 01:03:989 - not 01:03:813 -
01:11:225 - don't skip the synth sound here since you mapped out 01:09:989 (5) -
01:12:107 - 01:16:872 - 01:23:401 - 01:25:166 - ^ add notes here
01:12:989 (4,5) - make this symmetric. will make it look much more polished http://puu.sh/oyCpX/3474d49442.jpg
01:18:460 (4) - such a strong vocal, but the way is mapped, it gives same emphasis as 01:18:284 (3) -
01:28:519 (1) - break into 1/1 slider +note to capture strong beat at 01:28:872 -
01:29:754 (3) - 01:30:460 (4) - ^ I would argue that this is one of the most intense parts of the song, so try to reflect that with a higher note density. 3/2 slliders are too easy.
01:31:342 (1,2,3,4) - I don't agree with this rhythm choice. You've been mostly ignoring that string instrument, so don't start following it now. It's confusing to new players when you suddenly switch what you are mapping. You seem to be following the synth most often, so at least there should be a note at 01:32:225 - with the strong synth and vocal sounds

[Easy]

I'm really concerned about the difficulty gap between easy and normal. normal uses a good mix of 1/2 and 1/1 rhythms, but easy has barely any 1/1 rhythms at all. Sorry to say this, but you should consider remapping this diff so it's mostly 1/1 with the occasional 2/1 rhythm, and choose a DS/SV so that 1/1 rhythms don't cause overlaps

Good luck~

Doj

232 posts

Joined March 2014

Topic Starter

Doj 2016-04-28T16:06:17+00:00

Holy that's a long mod, I'll reply soon.

Zexous

713 posts

Joined July 2012

Zexous 2016-05-16T22:11:45+00:00

do you still want a GD cause I'm 39 seconds in but you have a lot of mods

Doj

232 posts

Joined March 2014

Topic Starter

Doj 2016-05-17T00:43:44+00:00

Zexous wrote:
do you still want a GD cause I'm 39 seconds in but you have a lot of mods

Yea man go for it

Since you're making a gd guess I'll get this show back on the road

Doj

232 posts

Joined March 2014

Topic Starter

Doj 2016-05-17T17:04:31+00:00

It only took half month for me to wanna map again lol

MokouSmoke wrote:
from my queue~
[Colors]
Why not just call this diff Lunatic since it's a touhou song? I've been trying to think of a better name tbh, I'll go with this.
00:00:989 (1,2,3,4) -so the angle between (3,4) is sharper than the angle between (1,2,3) which gives more emphasis to (4). Ok that's fine since it matches well with song. But the identical sounding part at 00:02:401 (1,2,3,4) - has basically the same angle between all notes, so even though it kinda looks the same it actually plays quite different to the player. You should just copy/paste/rotate 00:00:989 (1,2,3,4) - which will improve playability and structure in your map. Alright, I'll remember this in the future.
00:05:225 (1,2,3,4) - another thing that bothers me are these flow breaks that lead to incorrect emphasis of the song. Looking at your flow (http://puu.sh/oyzg7/1ad60d48a5.jpg), we see that a change in flow happens at 00:05:577 (3) - even though the slider and song suggest that the change in flow should happen on the strong beat at 00:05:754 (4) - to fix this, move the slider so it's like this: http://puu.sh/oyzm3/4936a5ac7f.jpg - actually, you already do this in places like 00:00:989 (1,2,3,4) - or 00:04:166 (3,4,5) - just need to be more consistent about it Ok, thanks for pointing that out.
Same thing with 00:06:637 (1,2,3,4) - fixed
00:24:284 (4,5) - another place with bad flow. just copy/paste 00:23:754 (2,3) - and rotate 180 degrees fixed
00:29:401 (1,2) - ok, since I'm bad at explanations, here's a picture describing smooth flow into sliderbodies http://puu.sh/oyAgy/119ae855aa.jpg
fixed
00:17:754 (1,2,3) - if you're going to use manual stacks, pls be consistent and do it here as well fixed
00:22:960 (1) - unnecessary NC on blue tick. rhythm is in groups of two, no reason to divide it into groups of 3 fixed
00:24:989 (1,2,3) - just make this 0.9x spacing. no reason why this should be different than your other triplet spacings
00:27:813 (1,2,3,4) - just make this a perfect square pattern fixed
00:29:048 (1,1) - remove one of these NCs. nothing in song indicates it should be special even if you spice it up with a new hitsound This is an accident lol
00:34:519 (1,1) - 00:36:637 (1,1,1) - etc...I really wish you would reconsider your NC use. Too many NC gives unnecessary HP boost and loses its effect when you do it constantly. I used an NC here because of the change in slider velocity. Should it not be NC'd because of that? Because that's mostly why I have a lot of NC's in this kiai
00:43:166 (1) - strong beat is here, so distance between 00:42:989 (3,1) - should be larger than at 00:42:813 (2,3) - to reflect that fixed
00:54:460 -misses strong vocal beat here, but at 00:50:225 (1) - you map vocal and skip downbeat/synth sound. Just prioritize which one you want to follow and stay consistent. I fixed up the section a bit to be more conistent.
01:05:754 (1) - Shape can be improved. Look at t/37194 for a guide on how to makes these loop shapes. fixed. I tried to make a tear drop.
01:30:107 (2) - uhh, this should be 1/6, not 1/8. Also I would recommend removing a repeat and adding a circle at 01:30:284 - so the vocal has a clickable object fixed
01:30:637 (5) - you have 1 too many repeats (actually I would prefer you remove two repeats and add a note at 01:30:813 - for same reason above) THAT'S A GREAT IDEA
01:31:872 (3,4) - has a spacing of 0.2x while 01:31:960 (4,5) - has spacing 0.25x. they're small things, but they do detract from quality of map fixed
01:33:813 (2) - there are times when extended sliders work, but this one doesn't since there's a strong vocal sound at 01:33:989 - just make this 1/2. same thing at 01:39:460 (2) - 01:45:107 (2) - etc... Alright, you have a valid point.
01:35:931 (2,3,4,5,6) - pattern can be improved. 01:36:284 (4) - should be equidistant from 01:35:931 (2,3) - and overall shape could be symmetric. Easy way to do this is copy/paste 01:35:931 (2,4,6) - and use ctrl+h to flip pattern horizontally and reposition fixed, tried my best to make it perfect lol
01:37:519 (3,4,5) - 01:40:342 (5,6,7) - spacing shrunk to 0.2x >.< this is definitely....
01:43:165 (3,4,5) - and now 0.15x lol. is this on purpose? doesn't seem like it not on purpose lol. I actually manually stacked most of them.
would add more structure to your pattern if 01:47:578 (4) - was perfectly between 01:47:931 (6,7) - and 01:48:107 (7) - was perfectly between 01:47:225 (2,4) - not sure if you meant literally in a line next to each other, but i placed then all the same distance apart (or tried to)
01:53:401 (4,5,6) - well, I don't want to ruin your symmetry thing, but this part of the music sounds much calmer to me than 01:52:695 (1,2,3) - so consider using smaller spacing here. I lowered the spacing for the last 3 notes to kinda mellow it out, but I like the spacing of the first 3 notes.
[Hard]
00:00:989 (1,2,3) - 1.5x spacing pls fixed
00:09:460 (1,2) - you can avoid this overlap, looks bad fixed
00:16:519 (1,3) - ^ fixed
00:23:049 (1,3) - 00:29:225 (6,1) - NC's aren't consistent. just stick to NC on downbeat fixed
00:36:989 (3,4) - fix spacing fixed
00:40:166 (4,1) - ^ if anything, this should use a bigger DS than 00:39:813 (3,4) - fixed
00:44:401 (1) - remove one repeat and add note at 00:44:754 - so downbeat is clickable fixed
01:01:518 (5) - 01:03:107 (4) - 01:04:166 (1) - some strange NC stuff here I was trying to NC to vocals, and beat at the same time so it looks weird. I fixed them to make them all go with the beat.
01:08:754 (1,2,3) - small thing, but for this pattern to work well, these should visually have identical spacing. You can check this by ctrl+g (1) http://puu.sh/oyBxZ/87a6bf31cd.jpg fixed
01:10:166 (5,6,7) - this one is particularly noticeable fixed
01:14:401 (1,2,3,4) - this sounds identical to 01:08:754 (1,2,3,4) - but pattern is completely different here and uses DS between 01:14:401 (1,2) - . If you're going to stick to your previous patterns, you should make it a theme in this section and use the same idea of slider leniency for a 2.0x jump with different variations. Otherwise, the jumps you used in your first two patterns will feel random and not nice to play. So from what I'm understanding, you pretty much want me to stay consistent with those two patterns in this section. If that's the case I've applied it to other parts.
01:21:460 (6) - 01:28:519 (6) - missing NC fixed
01:29:754 (1,2) -Since you've mostly been using downbeat NC, just do that here as well. Just take a look at your NCs from here on out and fix any inconsistencies fixed
[Normal]
00:08:931 (3,1) - looks bad, just blanket fixed
00:13:695 (3,4) - should make this by copy/paste/rotate from 00:12:284 (1,2) - fixed
00:17:048 - don't skip this beat since this part is more intense than 00:05:754 - fixed
00:32:048 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - break up this slidertrain. recommend you make 00:33:107 (3) - a note slider train lool
00:34:166 (6,1) - avoid overlap. looks bad and could get confused as 1/2 rhythm fixed
01:03:637 (3,4) - ctrl+g rhythm. the strong beat is at 01:03:989 - not 01:03:813 - fixed
01:11:225 - don't skip the synth sound here since you mapped out 01:09:989 (5) - fixed
01:12:107 - 01:16:872 - 01:23:401 - 01:25:166 - ^ add notes here fixed
01:12:989 (4,5) - make this symmetric. will make it look much more polished http://puu.sh/oyCpX/3474d49442.jpg fixed
01:18:460 (4) - such a strong vocal, but the way is mapped, it gives same emphasis as 01:18:284 (3) - fixed
01:28:519 (1) - break into 1/1 slider +note to capture strong beat at 01:28:872 - fixed
01:29:754 (3) - 01:30:460 (4) - ^ I would argue that this is one of the most intense parts of the song, so try to reflect that with a higher note density. 3/2 slliders are too easy. fixed
01:31:342 (1,2,3,4) - I don't agree with this rhythm choice. You've been mostly ignoring that string instrument, so don't start following it now. It's confusing to new players when you suddenly switch what you are mapping. You seem to be following the synth most often, so at least there should be a note at 01:32:225 - with the strong synth and vocal sounds I see what you mean. I made this rhythm at first because the one i had in mind was too hard tbh. I've thought of a better one and it seems to work.
[Easy]
I'm really concerned about the difficulty gap between easy and normal. normal uses a good mix of 1/2 and 1/1 rhythms, but easy has barely any 1/1 rhythms at all. Sorry to say this, but you should consider remapping this diff so it's mostly 1/1 with the occasional 2/1 rhythm, and choose a DS/SV so that 1/1 rhythms don't cause overlaps After saying everything you did I can't help but agree with you now xP I will remap this soon.
Good luck~ Thanks for the mod! This really showed me many things I never thought about before.

Chalwa

1,105 posts

Joined August 2014

Chalwa 2016-05-21T15:38:37+00:00

Hello from my queue

Easy

00:29:931 (2) - I think ctrl + >looks better
00:59:931 (4) - It's too hard to read.
01:02:754 (4) - The begginer, who watches Cookiezi, Rafis etc. think that you have to click quickly
01:05:578 (4) - The same like 00:59:931 (4)
01:46:872 (3) - ctrl + H, ctrl + J and ctrl + G looks better

Normal

00:01:519 (2,3) - In my opinion slider is better
00:02:931 (2,3) - ^
00:07:166 (2,3) - ^
00:08:578 (2,3) - ^
00:17:401 (5) - If you want, you can leave it, but it's too unreadable
00:29:754 (2) - ^
00:31:695 (6) - ^
00:33:107 (3) - ^
00:37:342 (6) - ^
00:40:166 (6) - ^
01:34:695 (2,3,4,5) - Too hard for Normal
01:42:107 (9) - NC

Hard

00:22:166 (5) - NC
01:19:166 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think, it's too hard pattern to Hard diff or do ctrl +G 01:20:048 (1)
01:28:519 (6) - NC

Really nice mapset and nice song!
GL in further mapping

Doj

232 posts

Joined March 2014

Topic Starter

Doj 2016-05-21T22:58:07+00:00

Chalwa wrote:
Hello from my queue

Easy
00:29:931 (2) - I think ctrl + >looks better fixed
00:59:931 (4) - It's too hard to read. fixed
01:02:754 (4) - The begginer, who watches Cookiezi, Rafis etc. think that you have to click quickly fixed
01:05:578 (4) - The same like 00:59:931 (4)
01:46:872 (3) - ctrl + H, ctrl + J and ctrl + G looks better fixed

Normal
00:01:519 (2,3) - In my opinion slider is better fixed
00:02:931 (2,3) - ^ fixed
00:07:166 (2,3) - ^ fixed
00:08:578 (2,3) - ^ fixed
00:17:401 (5) - If you want, you can leave it, but it's too unreadable fixed
00:29:754 (2) - ^ fixed
00:31:695 (6) - ^ fixed
00:33:107 (3) - ^ fixed
00:37:342 (6) - ^ fixed
00:40:166 (6) - ^ fixed
01:34:695 (2,3,4,5) - Too hard for Normal I spaced out the notes so they are clearly seen, but I'm keeping the pattern.
01:42:107 (9) - NC It's right before the new measure starts, so I think it's fine.

Hard
00:22:166 (5) - NC fixed
01:19:166 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think, it's too hard pattern to Hard diff or do ctrl +G 01:20:048 (1) I just went with the ctrl + g
01:28:519 (6) - NC fixed

Really nice mapset and nice song!
GL in further mapping Thanks for the mod!

Flowey

101 posts

Joined August 2012

Flowey 2016-05-24T02:28:30+00:00

Hi, NM from my queue!

[Victorica's Snow~]

00:01:519 (2,1) - Silence slider slide during soft sections.
Not much else I can say. I think the map plays fine.

[Lunatic]

00:01:519 (4) - Silence slider slide during soft sections.
00:21:460 (1,2,3,4,5) - Copy 00:20:754 (1,2,3,4,5) and Ctrl+H. (It has better shape.)
01:29:931 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - The rhythm here is hard to read. The taps are on drum beats, which are triplets, but these are arranged in strange groups.
01:53:401 (4) - NC.

[Hard]

00:00:989 (1) - Silence slider slide during soft sections.
00:31:166 (2) - Ctrl+G this to flow better with the previous slider.
00:50:401 (1) - From the previous few notes, players will think you are following the melody, so this will throw them off. (They're likely to click it on the early on the red tick with vocals.)
00:54:636 (1) - You can start this on the previous red tick to match the vocals.
00:59:931 (5) - I don't think it's necessary to end on the blue tick right here.
01:05:930 (1) - You can start this on the previous red tick to match the vocals.
01:08:225 (1) - It's really hard to tell when this beat is, so most people will think it's on a downbeat. Adding a circle on the downbeat at 01:08:048 would eliminate this confusion.
01:08:754 (1) - Ctrl+G for better flow.
01:10:166 (5) - Ctrl+G for better flow. Also NC.
01:14:401 (1) - and so on - Ctrl+G.
01:15:813 (5) - NC
01:21:460 (5) - ^
01:27:107 (5,6) - I would move 5 up and 6 down for better flow.
01:27:107 (5) - NC
01:38:401 (5) - You have a NC at 01:32:754 (1) but not here.
01:48:284 (5) - NC
01:47:754 (3) - I would move this closer to the next slider for flow:
01:53:401 (6) - NC

[]
Good Luck!

Miriko

201 posts

Joined July 2014

Miriko 2016-05-26T23:23:03+00:00

Nephroid wrote:
Hi, NM from my queue!

[Victorica's Snow~]
00:01:519 (2,1) - Silence slider slide during soft sections. I'm not sure what you meant there, but I decided to lower the volume for the part. x3
Not much else I can say. I think the map plays fine. Thank you!

Thank you for the mod! I also made a few extra changes to the difficulty.

Kira-ra Kira-ri~

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DeletedUser_6181859

DeletedUser_6181859 2016-05-28T16:40:00+00:00

Hey from my queue, my name is Max 100bit, and this is my mod!
Well, opinion of modder is opinion of modder.
Do not judge strictly, I could be wrong.
And yep, I am just learning. My english is bad, so sorry for googletranslate.

Song and beatmaps

None here!

Easy

I think Distance Spacing=2.0x is very big for Slider Velosity=1.0... Change to ~1.8x.
00:33:460 (3,1,2) - try to fix this overlap
01:17:931 (4,1) - ^

Normal

Fix all mistakes with Distance Spacing: Ctrl+Shift+A -> Check distance snap
00:17:401 (5) - x=256 y=292 for good blanket
also try to avoid overlap in 00:16:519 (4,1)
01:03:989 (4,5) - i think stack here isn't good idea because you don't have stacks before this moment
01:11:048 (7,8) - ^, also this stack looks weird
01:16:695 (6,7) - ^
01:22:342 (6,7) - ^
01:25:166 (5,6) - ^
01:12:284 (3,4,6) - try to avoid overlap
01:24:284 (4,1,2) - ^
01:50:931 (1,3) - ^

Hard

00:05:754 (4,3) - try to avoid overlap or stack (for more challenge)
00:22:342 (2,3) - change to triples by circles
00:40:166 (4,2,3) - try to avoid overlap
00:57:107 (1) - remove this note, also you can extend 00:54:636 (1) to 00:54:636 (1)
01:24:813 (8,1) - make away to each other
01:38:931 (7) - end of slider in x=72 y=128 for good blanket
01:47:225 (1) - remove nc here and set nc in 01:47:578 (2)

Good luck!
{end of mod}

Doj

232 posts

Joined March 2014

Topic Starter

Doj 2016-05-29T02:32:08+00:00

Nephroid wrote:
Hi, NM from my queue!

[Lunatic]
00:01:519 (4) - Silence slider slide during soft sections. I don't even hear a slider slide tbh lol. I'll try and take a closer listen.
00:21:460 (1,2,3,4,5) - Copy 00:20:754 (1,2,3,4,5) and Ctrl+H. (It has better shape.) fixed
01:29:931 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - The rhythm here is hard to read. The taps are on drum beats, which are triplets, but these are arranged in strange groups. I can read it fine, and a few others have tested it.
01:53:401 (4) - NC. Nah. I do think a NC would look nice, but I'll keep it as is.

[Hard]
00:00:989 (1) - Silence slider slide during soft sections. I'll take a look. Still can't hear the slider slider lol.
00:31:166 (2) - Ctrl+G this to flow better with the previous slider. I think it's fine the way it is. Because the vocal at the part repeats twice, the first time being longer than the second. So it's fitting to have the same slider with the second being shorter.
00:50:401 (1) - From the previous few notes, players will think you are following the melody, so this will throw them off. (They're likely to click it on the early on the red tick with vocals.) I changed it to a slider to flow better with the vocal.
00:54:636 (1) - You can start this on the previous red tick to match the vocals. Yea, but I'm mainly going with the beat in this part and not the vocals. So suddenly starting the spinner on the vocal might feel weird to play.
00:59:931 (5) - I don't think it's necessary to end on the blue tick right here. I just wanted to do something cool fixed
01:05:930 (1) - You can start this on the previous red tick to match the vocals. Again, I think starting spinner on vocals might feel weird after playing to beat.
01:08:225 (1) - It's really hard to tell when this beat is, so most people will think it's on a downbeat. Adding a circle on the downbeat at 01:08:048 would eliminate this confusion. Maybe, but if they read the approach circle correctly there will be no problem.
01:08:754 (1) - Ctrl+G for better flow. I did this on purpose to make it a little difficult.
01:10:166 (5) - Ctrl+G for better flow. Also NC. ^ , The combo is specifically for the "Yurara Yurari"
01:14:401 (1) - and so on - Ctrl+G. ^
01:15:813 (5) - NC ^
01:21:460 (5) - ^ ^
01:27:107 (5,6) - I would move 5 up and 6 down for better flow. Good idea. fixed
01:27:107 (5) - NC Still making combo to vocals
01:38:401 (5) - You have a NC at 01:32:754 (1) but not here. fixed
01:48:284 (5) - NC fixed
01:47:754 (3) - I would move this closer to the next slider for flow: fixed
01:53:401 (6) - NC fixed
[]
Good Luck! Thanks for the mod!

100bit wrote:
Hey from my queue, my name is Max 100bit, and this is my mod!
Well, opinion of modder is opinion of modder.
Do not judge strictly, I could be wrong.
And yep, I am just learning. My english is bad, so sorry for googletranslate.
Song and beatmaps
None here!
Easy
I think Distance Spacing=2.0x is very big for Slider Velosity=1.0... Change to ~1.8x. I do agree the ds is big, but I think it doesn't make the map harder really. The reason I made the ds so big is because I didn't want the notes to overlap.
00:33:460 (3,1,2) - try to fix this overlap fixed
01:17:931 (4,1) - ^ Ehhhh it's close, but I think it's alright.
Normal
Fix all mistakes with Distance Spacing: Ctrl+Shift+A -> Check distance snapfixed
00:17:401 (5) - x=256 y=292 for good blanket I changed the slider a little to fix the blanket instead.
also try to avoid overlap in 00:16:519 (4,1) fixed
01:03:989 (4,5) - i think stack here isn't good idea because you don't have stacks before this moment fixed
01:11:048 (7,8) - ^, also this stack looks weird fixed
01:16:695 (6,7) - ^ color=#4000FF]fixed[/color]
01:22:342 (6,7) - ^ color=#4000FF]fixed[/color]
01:25:166 (5,6) - ^ color=#4000FF]fixed[/color]
01:12:284 (3,4,6) - try to avoid overlap This one is really close, but I think it's fine
01:24:284 (4,1,2) - ^ this one is fine
01:50:931 (1,3) - ^ ^
Hard
00:05:754 (4,3) - try to avoid overlap or stack (for more challenge) fixed
00:22:342 (2,3) - change to triples by circles I made it into a triple with a reverse slider
00:40:166 (4,2,3) - try to avoid overlap this is fine
00:57:107 (1) - remove this note, also you can extend 00:54:636 (1) to 00:54:636 (1) I think it's fine as is.
01:24:813 (8,1) - make away to each other ^
01:38:931 (7) - end of slider in x=72 y=128 for good blanket fixed
01:47:225 (1) - remove nc here and set nc in 01:47:578 (2)I removed the NC, but kept the rest the same.
Good luck! Thanks for the mod!
{end of mod}

Updated.

Arphimigon

1,651 posts

Joined December 2014

Arphimigon 2016-05-29T16:48:57+00:00

QUICKIE

[General]
01:08:754 - Idk id have made this a part of kiai or the only kiai either works, cus this is the chorus
idk
u can leave it makes no difference anyway

[Easy]
Now I know you are trying to make thiss easy, but since there are only 3 circles, that completely negatess the "timing/rhythm" aspect of the game, so idk how, but I HEAVILY recommend you slap some circles -somewhere- more
00:58:872 (3,2) - These visibly touch, at least i noticed on 100% speed, and looks weird yo!

I like dis ez

[Normal]
00:10:695 (3,4) - Ayy how about putting that 4 more to the right so it followss the curve neatly <3?
01:24:284 (4,1) - Visibly touch is weird
01:27:107 (5) - Isnt this meant to be 1/1 long?
01:38:048 (3,1) - Idk why but this is so dodgy LOL ssince they touch it feelss like the slider is 1/2 apart and u need to hit the other end of it GG
01:53:931 - Note to end this music off? Would add a good "finish tap" effect to a strong ssound \o/

noice

[Hard (lewd)]
00:22:519 (4,5,6) - I feel as tho it would be cooler with slider + 3 note cus it gets more sounds in tapping
01:53:931 - Same as normal having a final tap feels SO GOOD

[Lunacy]
00:13:166 (7) - all dese tiny 1/4 ssliders are trigerrr xd just a comment tho no change
01:11:578 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I like u following the vocal here so 01:23:754 (1,2,3,4,5) - DO IT HERE idk WHY
01:50:225 (1) - Lonely nc ;-;
01:53:931 - PLSS jussst add a LAST TAP it feels SO GOOD

[Snowy]
yknow imma tell u the beggining has ssounds mapped to nothing or super inaudible but w/e you wont change but U SHOULD
01:30:813 (4,1) - Mighty spaced 1/8 note yknow
01:53:931 - xd add final tap here too thankss m9

feed me kdss and reject everything here pl thank

Doj

232 posts

Joined March 2014

Topic Starter

Doj 2016-05-29T20:40:40+00:00

Arphimigon wrote:
QUICKIE l-lewd

[General]
01:08:754 - Idk id have made this a part of kiai or the only kiai either works, cus this is the chorus You have a point.
idk
u can leave it makes no difference anyway

[Easy]
Now I know you are trying to make thiss easy, but since there are only 3 circles, that completely negatess the "timing/rhythm" aspect of the game, so idk how, but I HEAVILY recommend you slap some circles -somewhere- more now there's 20
00:58:872 (3,2) - These visibly touch, at least i noticed on 100% speed, and looks weird yo! fixed

I like dis ez thanks !

[Normal]
00:10:695 (3,4) - Ayy how about putting that 4 more to the right so it followss the curve neatly <3? fixed
01:24:284 (4,1) - Visibly touch is weird fixed
01:27:107 (5) - Isnt this meant to be 1/1 long? fixed
01:38:048 (3,1) - Idk why but this is so dodgy LOL ssince they touch it feelss like the slider is 1/2 apart and u need to hit the other end of it GG I changed it up a bit.
01:53:931 - Note to end this music off? Would add a good "finish tap" effect to a strong ssound \o/ Man I've been debating this for so long. I guess I'll add it lol

noice !

[Hard (lewd)]
00:22:519 (4,5,6) - I feel as tho it would be cooler with slider + 3 note cus it gets more sounds in tapping fixed (i think)
01:53:931 - Same as normal having a final tap feels SO GOOD done.

[Lunacy]
00:13:166 (7) - all dese tiny 1/4 ssliders are trigerrr xd just a comment tho no change lel
01:11:578 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I like u following the vocal here so 01:23:754 (1,2,3,4,5) - DO IT HERE idk WHY If you turn down the effects volume and listen to the song there's a little melody that plays there
01:50:225 (1) - Lonely nc ;-; fixed
01:53:931 - PLSS jussst add a LAST TAP it feels SO GOOD fiksd

feed me kdss and reject everything here pl thank no i will accept everything and give kds yw

Thanks for mod! <3

Sakurauchi Riko

1,632 posts

Joined January 2015

Sakurauchi Riko 2016-05-30T16:10:19+00:00

Hello, since I really like the song I decided to mod this map. I'm still new to modding so dont change anything if you dont agree!

Vicky's Snow~

00:11:225 (2,3) - fix blanket (slightly adjust)
00:12:989 (4,5) - ^
01:25:695 (1,2) - ^
00:33:460 (1,2) - blanket?
01:44:931 (1,1) - ^
00:26:842 (2,3) - move it a bit higher for better look?
00:39:637 (1,2,1,2) - no matter how often i try i dont fc them while testplaying, but dont change
00:50:578 (2,4) - overlap
01:11:225 (1,1) - ^
01:06:107 (2,1) - ^ (maybe intended? but looks not nice imo even if)
01:14:225 (4,1) - ^ (same)
01:25:519 (3,1) - almost an overlap, but maybe make the gap bigger
00:56:225 (1,2,3,1,2) - damn, looks pretty nice !!
01:05:048 (3) - i would make that slider curved more harder for better flow (since the sliderend flows into nothing)
01:21:107 (1,2) - would make same distance between these objects to the longher slider

Lunatic

00:26:401 (1,2) - blanket maybe?
01:32:401 (6,8) - ^
01:38:225 (7,8,9) - ^
00:47:578 (1,4) - fix blanket
01:13:519 (7,8) - ^
01:11:931 (2,3,4,5) - looks really untidy imo
01:21:901 (4,5) - would make slider a bit up
maybe a spinner somewhere?
wish i could point more things out but i cant, dunno....

Well, thats it for me. I hope my mod was useful (its low quality mod imo). If it wasnt that useful dont give me kudo, I wont die without it

GL with your map and happy mapping! (:

EphemeralFetish

472 posts

Joined May 2014

EphemeralFetish 2016-05-31T13:10:16+00:00

NM From Queue.

Super late. Sorry for that, work is killing me.

Vicky's Snow~

00:17:578 (5) - Pretty drastic SV change, you may wanna NC here because of that.
00:20:578 (7) - This is a huge issue for me, why does this 1/4 have to be so much faster than all the others? I hear nothing in the music to justify doing so, along with it not having an NC to signal this. The large spacing afterwards is very misleading, it looks like a 1/2 slider with a one tick gap after before the stream, or something similar. In short, the 7 needs to be the same speed as the previous ones.
00:39:637 (1,2,1,2) - Why are these different? Couldnt you just copy the first one.
00:50:578 (2,4) - This overlap is hurting me m8.
00:54:460 (1) - Yeah, you're following vocals, but I cant ignore how strange this looks because of the beat you're missing on the large white tick, you can easily have a circle on the red instead then follow that into a slider on the white to have both.
01:27:813 (3,4) - I really dont see a need for these SV changes other than trying to force some sort or creativity. Sadly it doesnt work.
01:30:107 (2) - Okay, you may need some clarification on this, but Im sure this is 1/6th here. 01:30:813 (4) - This is in totally the wrong place 01:30:637 (2) - Should be here and again Im pretty sure these are 1/6th.

Lunatic

00:42:813 (2) - 99% sure you wont be able to get away with this, especially on a lower difficulty. Its very difficult to read this sort of thing.
00:45:284 (1) - Dont see a need for this, why noot just keep it as an ordinary stream.
00:56:578 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - You may want to consider using the slider conversion tool for circular streams like this. Right now it sticks out and is noticeably off.
01:12:460 (5) - Pull this down a bit so it isnt overlapping slightly with the 3.
01:19:342 (1,2,3,4) - You can easily re-position this so 01:19:695 (3,1) - Blanket together nicely.
01:24:284 (5) - NC here instead of the next note.

GL

Miriko

201 posts

Joined July 2014

Miriko 2016-06-03T00:00:22+00:00

Arphimigon wrote:
[Snowy]
yknow imma tell u the beggining has ssounds mapped to nothing or super inaudible but w/e you wont change but U SHOULD
01:30:813 (4,1) - Mighty spaced 1/8 note yknow But it's the same with 00:25:695 (5,6) - 00:31:519 (6,1) - 00:36:989 (4,1) - :s How is this any different?
01:53:931 - xd add final tap here too thankss m9 Added~

Phyloukz wrote:
Vicky's Snow~
00:11:225 (2,3) - fix blanket (slightly adjust) Fixed~
00:12:989 (4,5) - ^ I'm keeping it the way it is.
01:25:695 (1,2) - ^ Fixed~
00:33:460 (1,2) - blanket? They're too far apart to actually be worrying.
01:44:931 (1,1) - ^ Fixed~
00:26:842 (2,3) - move it a bit higher for better look? Unchanged. It is fine where it is. :s
00:39:637 (1,2,1,2) - no matter how often i try i dont fc them while testplaying, but dont change I'll keep this in mind and see if others makes the same complaint.
00:50:578 (2,4) - overlap Unchanged, it's fixed to a star pattern.
01:11:225 (1,1) - ^ Unchanged, it won't really flow as well.
01:06:107 (2,1) - ^ (maybe intended? but looks not nice imo even if) Yes, it's intentional.
01:14:225 (4,1) - ^ (same) Intentional.
01:25:519 (3,1) - almost an overlap, but maybe make the gap bigger Intentional.
00:56:225 (1,2,3,1,2) - damn, looks pretty nice !! Thank you~ >////<
01:05:048 (3) - i would make that slider curved more harder for better flow (since the sliderend flows into nothing) It's a blanket and it's meant to end with a sharp back-jump to the fourth slider.
01:21:107 (1,2) - would make same distance between these objects to the longher slider I think I fixed it....Idk. x3

The Fetish wrote:
NM From Queue.

Vicky's Snow~

00:17:578 (5) - Pretty drastic SV change, you may wanna NC here because of that. Done~
00:20:578 (7) - This is a huge issue for me, why does this 1/4 have to be so much faster than all the others? I hear nothing in the music to justify doing so, along with it not having an NC to signal this. The large spacing afterwards is very misleading, it looks like a 1/2 slider with a one tick gap after before the stream, or something similar. In short, the 7 needs to be the same speed as the previous ones. Fixed. ><
00:39:637 (1,2,1,2) - Why are these different? Couldnt you just copy the first one. Is it so wrong to have them slightly different? ><
00:50:578 (2,4) - This overlap is hurting me m8. It's a star jump pattern.
00:54:460 (1) - Yeah, you're following vocals, but I cant ignore how strange this looks because of the beat you're missing on the large white tick, you can easily have a circle on the red instead then follow that into a slider on the white to have both. Changed~
01:27:813 (3,4) - I really dont see a need for these SV changes other than trying to force some sort or creativity. Sadly it doesnt work.
01:30:107 (2) - Okay, you may need some clarification on this, but Im sure this is 1/6th here. 01:30:813 (4) - This is in totally the wrong place 01:30:637 (2) - Should be here and again Im pretty sure these are 1/6th. Decided to change it all to 1/4. ><

Thank you for the mods~ <3

Rawr~

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Doj

232 posts

Joined March 2014

Topic Starter

Doj 2016-06-13T17:50:06+00:00

The Fetish wrote:
NM From Queue.

Super late. Sorry for that, work is killing me. Don't worry about it, we don't all live on this game after all.

Lunatic

00:42:813 (2) - 99% sure you wont be able to get away with this, especially on a lower difficulty. Its very difficult to read this sort of thing I originally had the single sticking out a little, so I'll change it back to that.
00:45:284 (1) - Dont see a need for this, why noot just keep it as an ordinary stream. Because it fits and I like it lol
00:56:578 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - You may want to consider using the slider conversion tool for circular streams like this. Right now it sticks out and is noticeably off. fixed
01:12:460 (5) - Pull this down a bit so it isnt overlapping slightly with the 3. fixed
01:19:342 (1,2,3,4) - You can easily re-position this so 01:19:695 (3,1) - Blanket together nicely. fixed
01:24:284 (5) - NC here instead of the next note. fixed

GL

Thanks for mod!

Phyloukz wrote:
Hello, since I really like the song I decided to mod this map. I'm still new to modding so dont change anything if you dont agree!

Lunatic
00:26:401 (1,2) - blanket maybe? fixed
01:32:401 (6,8) - ^ fixed
01:38:225 (7,8,9) - ^ fixed
00:47:578 (1,4) - fix blanket fixed
01:13:519 (7,8) - ^ fixed
01:11:931 (2,3,4,5) - looks really untidy imo fixed
01:21:901 (4,5) - would make slider a bit up fixed
maybe a spinner somewhere? I'll think about it.
wish i could point more things out but i cant, dunno....

Well, thats it for me. I hope my mod was useful (its low quality mod imo). If it wasnt that useful dont give me kudo, I wont die without it it was good
GL with your map and happy mapping! (: Thanks!

Thanks for mod!

KappaPraise

316 posts

Joined November 2015

KappaPraise 2016-06-14T15:45:47+00:00

Hi \o, mod is here ༼ つ ◕_◕ ༽つ

Sorry I am late, I was very busy in university

General

Your dif and Vicky's Snow have different kiai times suggest you make same.

Easy

00:54:637 (1) - this spinner shoud starts here 00:54:460 - ?
01:28:519 (3) - this slider contradicts prev parts, what about make here 2 1/1 sliders too?
01:08:754 (1,2) - make 1 slider please, like in next parts 01:14:401 (1) - etc
01:31:342 (1,2,3) - why 1st two sliders follow instruments, but the 2nd vocal? I dont agree with rhythm in this kiai, you suddenly jump from instumental to vocal, I think you should make here something different

Normal

why different SV in begin x0.75 and x0.85 in normal dif like in easy must be same SV everywhere, I dont see differences here, but I dont know)
00:03:813 - strong beat, I suggest you add here circle
00:32:048 (1,2) - drum hitsounds, may be there should be auto?
00:54:637 (1) - this spinner shoud starts here 00:54:460 - ?
01:24:284 (4,5) - may be slider 4 should be reverse with hit-clap on the end?
01:47:754 (1,2) - idk both slider follow different goals (vocal and instrumental) they incommensurable here imo

Hard

00:20:754 (1,2,3,4) - I hear this sliders like 1
00:34:519 (9,1) - wow suddenly this big spacing
00:37:695 (1,1) - stack?
00:46:695 (2) - I hear this slider like 1/2 + circle, 00:48:107 (5) - here too, and etc
00:53:225 (4,5) - bad blanket X_X
01:09:813 (4,8) - why this and other same circles have strong beat also with hit-clap and they hidden?
01:14:754 (2,5) - dont like this mirror overlap, 01:15:813 (5,8) - here too :V
01:24:813 (8,9,1) - about this, unbalanced space between sliders looks weird and messy imo, may be you should make other pattren?
01:37:872 (3,3) - stack?
01:40:872 (5,2) - ^
eh, I dont like to say this, but in this dif kiai specifically sometimes made not carefully, suggest you do something here please

Lunatic

00:09:989 (2,3) - this and 00:10:695 (3,4) - this spacing looks unbalanced
00:34:872 (1,2,3) - i think higher spacing must be between 2 3 not between 1 2
00:38:225 (4) - this is sounds like 1/4 reverse slider
00:52:519 (5,6) - higher spacing? like in prev parts
00:56:225 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - notes with Normal samplesets must be 1 2 3 5 7 9, isnt it?
01:11:931 (2,3,4,5,6) - hmm, this pattern looks weird, may you should place 3 in center of 2 4 5 triangle? btw between 3 4 imo should be higher spacing
01:29:931 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this pattern looks better imo https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5388352
01:36:460 (5) - NC?
01:47:048 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - what? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5388372
01:52:342 (8) - end of slider strong beat, should be clickable imo
01:52:695 (9,10,11) - unbalanced spacing

Vicky's Snow~

00:25:695 (5,6) - may be end lisder on white tick? because with this spacing 1/8 jump looks pretty hard, same here 00:31:519 (6,1) - and other parts
01:08:225 - what about end slide here and add circle on white tick?
01:36:637 (5,1) - may be make here jump?
01:42:460 (1) - may be place end of slider between 01:42:107 (4,5) - this two circles?
Other things looks nice, good job o.o

Thats it from me, good luck o/

P.S. 99 \:D/

Doj

232 posts

Joined March 2014

Topic Starter

Doj 2016-06-18T02:27:32+00:00

WISPG_G wrote:
Hi \o, mod is here ༼ つ ◕_◕ ༽つ

Sorry I am late, I was very busy in university Don't worry about it.

General

Your dif and Vicky's Snow have different kiai times suggest you make same.

Easy

00:54:637 (1) - this spinner shoud starts here 00:54:460 - ? oh yea, you're right
01:28:519 (3) - this slider contradicts prev parts, what about make here 2 1/1 sliders too? good point
01:08:754 (1,2) - make 1 slider please, like in next parts 01:14:401 (1) - etc lol yea I was wondering if someone would notice
01:31:342 (1,2,3) - why 1st two sliders follow instruments, but the 2nd vocal? I dont agree with rhythm in this kiai, you suddenly jump from instumental to vocal, I think you should make here something different This part actually isn't meant to follow the vocal. The (3) slider follows the same instrument that the 4 notes at the beginning of the song follow. The rhythm in this kiai is actually 00:12:284 (1,2,3,4) - this rhythm except i split the sliders up with a single at the end lol.

Normal

why different SV in begin x0.75 and x0.85 in normal dif like in easy must be same SV everywhere, I dont see differences here, but I dont know) fixed
00:03:813 - strong beat, I suggest you add here circle fixed
00:32:048 (1,2) - drum hitsounds, may be there should be auto? that was a mistake, fixed
00:54:637 (1) - this spinner shoud starts here 00:54:460 - ? fixed
01:24:284 (4,5) - may be slider 4 should be reverse with hit-clap on the end? This is a good idea, but I wanna keep the rhythm consistent here I dont feel like adjusting everything XD
01:47:754 (1,2) - idk both slider follow different goals (vocal and instrumental) they incommensurable here imo ehhhh I it fits so I'll keep it

Hard

00:20:754 (1,2,3,4) - I hear this sliders like 1 Srry, I'm not sure what you mean here.
00:34:519 (9,1) - wow suddenly this big spacing fixed
00:37:695 (1,1) - stack? fixed
00:46:695 (2) - I hear this slider like 1/2 + circle, 00:48:107 (5) - here too, and etc Hmm I do agree it does fit, but I'll keep what I have for now.
00:53:225 (4,5) - bad blanket X_X i tried to fix it X_X
01:09:813 (4,8) - why this and other same circles have strong beat also with hit-clap and they hidden? I moved them all from beneath the sliders, fixed
01:14:754 (2,5) - dont like this mirror overlap, 01:15:813 (5,8) - here too :V fixed
01:24:813 (8,9,1) - about this, unbalanced space between sliders looks weird and messy imo, may be you should make other pattren? I moved them around a bit to fix it.
01:37:872 (3,3) - stack? fixed
01:40:872 (5,2) - ^ fixed
eh, I dont like to say this, but in this dif kiai specifically sometimes made not carefully, suggest you do something here please I'll look over it more

Lunatic

00:09:989 (2,3) - this and 00:10:695 (3,4) - this spacing looks unbalanced fixed
00:34:872 (1,2,3) - i think higher spacing must be between 2 3 not between 1 2 fixed
00:38:225 (4) - this is sounds like 1/4 reverse slider Good idea, but I'll keep it as is.
00:52:519 (5,6) - higher spacing? like in prev parts This is the same spacing as the previous notes.
00:56:225 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - notes with Normal samplesets must be 1 2 3 5 7 9, isnt it? I tried what you suggested, but I like what I have.
01:11:931 (2,3,4,5,6) - hmm, this pattern looks weird, may you should place 3 in center of 2 4 5 triangle? btw between 3 4 imo should be higher spacing great idea !!1
01:29:931 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this pattern looks better imo https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5388352 another ljasndflkjsndgjlkds great idea !!!1
01:36:460 (5) - NC? This is fine as is.
01:47:048 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - what? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5388372 I'll fix it up
01:52:342 (8) - end of slider strong beat, should be clickable imo fixed
01:52:695 (9,10,11) - unbalanced spacing fixed

Thats it from me, good luck o/ Thanks for the mod!!!!!!

P.S. 99 \:D/

hyouri

390 posts

Joined June 2012

hyouri 2016-06-18T19:50:59+00:00

quick 1 min modding

[General]

There's no storyboard, so check all diffs with Widescreen support and epilepsy warning and remove them.
Set all diffs with overlapping timing points to same volume

[Lunatic]

00:45:460 (2) - weird stream here, could be made into something like:

[Vicky's Snow]

01:52:607 (1) - spinner is waaay too short. unrankable
00:30:637 (1) - should be whistle on sliderhead
00:31:166 (4) - same as above
00:36:107 (3) - whistle on this sliderend
00:41:931 (2) - whistle on this sliderhead
NC should be 00:41:931 (2) - here as opposed to 00:41:754 (1) -
00:43:342 (1) - whistle on sliderhead
00:47:578 (1) - finish on sliderhead
00:51:813 (1) - same as above
00:53:225 (1) - same as above

check these for all similar-sounding parts

Doj

232 posts

Joined March 2014

Topic Starter

Doj 2016-06-18T20:13:27+00:00

Alveryn wrote:
quick 1 min modding

[General]
There's no storyboard, so check all diffs with Widescreen support and epilepsy warning and remove them. ok
Set all diffs with overlapping timing points to same volume !!
[Lunatic]
00:45:460 (2) - weird stream here, could be made into something like: mmmmm delish

thank

Miriko

201 posts

Joined July 2014

Miriko 2016-06-19T21:03:44+00:00

WISPG_G wrote:
Vicky's Snow~

00:25:695 (5,6) - may be end lisder on white tick? because with this spacing 1/8 jump looks pretty hard, same here 00:31:519 (6,1) - and other parts But it's an extra difficulty, it's meant to be hard. :s
01:08:225 - what about end slide here and add circle on white tick? I think I'm keeping the spinner.
01:36:637 (5,1) - may be make here jump? Why? >< It looks fine the way it is and I have no idea what jump you want it to be. :s
01:42:460 (1) - may be place end of slider between 01:42:107 (4,5) - this two circles? Sorry, I'm not sure what you mean here. ><
Other things looks nice, good job o.o Thank you!

Alveryn wrote:
[Vicky's Snow]
01:52:607 (1) - spinner is waaay too short. unrankable Auto test resulted that it's able to get 1000 points from it which means it met the ranking criteria.
00:30:637 (1) - should be whistle on sliderhead Okay~
00:31:166 (4) - same as above Hai hai~
00:36:107 (3) - whistle on this sliderend Done~
00:41:931 (2) - whistle on this sliderhead Okay desu~
NC should be 00:41:931 (2) - here as opposed to 00:41:754 (1) - Fixed~
00:43:342 (1) - whistle on sliderhead Okay~
00:47:578 (1) - finish on sliderhead Added a whistle instead~
00:51:813 (1) - same as above Okay~
00:53:225 (1) - same as above Added a whistle instead~

check these for all similar-sounding parts Yessu! *Salutes*

Thank you for the mods~!
~Added a few of my own edits to the map. x3 Including Slider colors~ And fixed 00:17:578 (1,2) - part to make it look better~

Rawr~!

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 85695
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: None
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
EpilepsyWarning: 1
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[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 1.1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 2.999999

[Metadata]
Title:Masshiro na Yuki
TitleUnicode:まっしろな雪
Artist:Halozy
ArtistUnicode:Halozy
Creator:Doj
Version:Vicky's Snow~
Source:東方Project
Tags:とらのあな toranoana 水瀬ましろ amorevole sumijun すみじゅん touhou kaeidzuka Phantasmagoria of Flower View 東方幻奏響  UROBOROS 弐 fAIRYtAILoVERdRIVE Gensoukyou bayside beat comiket87 comiket89 higan retour kikou riverside view komachi onozuka drum and bass victorica
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Erza

84 posts

Joined January 2015

Erza 2016-06-25T21:21:32+00:00

HUHU NICE

Vicky's Snow

01:45:813 (2) - please make this more symmetrical uhuh tilt it more top right

Sry for lazy modding x-x but it looks good

MrJoghurt

85 posts

Joined December 2015

MrJoghurt 2016-06-25T23:29:00+00:00

Mod from #modreqs

Easy:
01:41:225 (3) - I think this slider breaks the typical flow of the map while it would flow good if used more frequently
when I was a newbie I often clicked on the wrong end of a slider.

Normal:
00:19:342 (3) - NC Combo consitency
01:19:695 (6) - I would not stack this note there you do nowhere else in the map so it could be confusing
01:36:460 (6) - NC After a long pause the vocals start with a different tune
01:42:107 (9) - same
01:53:931 (5) - NC there maybe The song continues and you set an accent at the first note of that so maybe NC

Hard:
01:19:519 (3) - Breaks the flow of 01:18:989 (6,1,2) -
I would swap 01:19:166 (1) - with 01:19:519 (3) - and 01:19:695 (4) - with 01:19:872 (5) -
OR
Move the star pattern to 01:18:989 (6) - make 01:18:989 (6) - NC and fix 01:20:048 (1) - this way the player has more time to read and the flow gets better
01:29:931 (1) - IF you do NC here 01:19:166 (1) - the NC needs to be moved to 01:30:107 (2) -
01:53:401 (6) - NC After a long pause the vocals start with a different tune
01:53:931 (2) - like the ending in Normal diff

Lunatic:
00:23:225 (1) - no NC here if you want NC together with Vocals make 00:23:048 (5) - NC instead
00:36:989 (1,1) - I think those belong to one sound so no need for NC 00:37:342 (1) - here
00:39:989 (4,1) - same
00:46:166 (1) - bad flow maby Ctrl. + G
00:56:225 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - The part is louder but i think the hitsounds there are a bit too loud
01:03:460 (1) - NC earlyer The Vocals are holding the iiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiih no rythm changes at all. better move it to the beginning of the rythm and iiiih 01:03:107 (5) -
01:04:519 (4) - New combo here because changes in the music and vocal tune and vocal rythm (iiiiiiiiih

)
01:20:578 (5) - a bit akward feel because these two 01:20:578 (5) - and 01:16:342 (7) - change the direction in which the cursor is moving
01:21:989 (5) - Its ok here because this one moves at least ~90 degrees
If NC'ing follows vocals:
01:47:754 (5) - NC here instead of 01:48:284 (1) - at 01:47:754 (5) - a new phrase begins
01:48:989 (5) - NC here too because upbeat to new phrase and new phrase
01:50:578 (2) - NC new phrase move NC to here from 01:50:225 (1) -
If NC'ing follows rythm:
01:49:695 (8) - if there 01:48:284 (1) - is a NC at 01:49:695 (8) - has to be one too
01:53:931 (4) - like ending in Normal & Hard

Vicky's Snow:
00:26:048 (6) - NC here or no NC here 00:31:695 (1) -
00:31:695 (1) - NC here because of consistency (01:22:519 (1) - )
01:22:519 (1) - same
either here 01:31:166 (1) - no NC or here 01:32:578 (3) - NC
either here 01:31:695 (2) - NC or here 01:33:107 (1) - no NC
01:49:519 (3) - NC here because of consistency

Hope I was helpful

good luck with your mapset I like it

Miriko

201 posts

Joined July 2014

Miriko 2016-06-26T00:36:52+00:00

Erza wrote:
HUHU NICE

Vicky's Snow
01:45:813 (2) - please make this more symmetrical uhuh tilt it more top right Done~
Sry for lazy modding x-x but it looks good Thank you~ >////<

st_stefan wrote:
Vicky's Snow:
00:26:048 (6) - NC here or no NC here 00:31:695 (1) - Done~
00:31:695 (1) - NC here because of consistency (01:22:519 (1) - )
01:22:519 (1) - same
either here 01:31:166 (1) - no NC or here 01:32:578 (3) - NC Done~
either here 01:31:695 (2) - NC or here 01:33:107 (1) - no NC
01:49:519 (3) - NC here because of consistency

I was slightly confused by what you meant but I figured most of the NC errors~ Ty~

Thank you for the mods~

Kira~ra~ra Kira~ra~

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Doj

232 posts

Joined March 2014

Topic Starter

Doj 2016-06-26T18:08:04+00:00

st_stefan wrote:
Mod from #modreqs
Easy:
01:41:225 (3) - I think this slider breaks the typical flow of the map while it would flow good if used more frequently
when I was a newbie I often clicked on the wrong end of a slider.I think it fits perfectly. I use it at the beginning of this kiai to lead into the chorus, and then here I use to transition into the repeat of the chorus.

Normal:
00:19:342 (3) - NC Combo consitency fixed
01:19:695 (6) - I would not stack this note there you do nowhere else in the map so it could be confusing fixed
01:36:460 (6) - NC After a long pause the vocals start with a different tune fixed
01:42:107 (9) - same fixed
01:53:931 (5) - NC there maybe The song continues and you set an accent at the first note of that so maybe NC fixed

Hard:
01:19:519 (3) - Breaks the flow of 01:18:989 (6,1,2) - It's a star pattern ?
I would swap 01:19:166 (1) - with 01:19:519 (3) - and 01:19:695 (4) - with 01:19:872 (5) -
OR
Move the star pattern to 01:18:989 (6) - make 01:18:989 (6) - NC and fix 01:20:048 (1) - this way the player has more time to read and the flow gets better fixed
01:29:931 (1) - IF you do NC here 01:19:166 (1) - the NC needs to be moved to 01:30:107 (2) - Why would I need to move it? The place I have it now is on a really strong beat, and it's on a large white tick.
01:53:401 (6) - NC After a long pause the vocals start with a different tune fixed
01:53:931 (2) - like the ending in Normal diff fixed

Lunatic:
00:23:225 (1) - no NC here if you want NC together with Vocals make 00:23:048 (5) - NC instead fixed
00:36:989 (1,1) - I think those belong to one sound so no need for NC 00:37:342 (1) - here fixed
00:39:989 (4,1) - same I'll keep this as is to make it more readable.
00:46:166 (1) - bad flow maby Ctrl. + G fixed
00:56:225 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - The part is louder but i think the hitsounds there are a bit too loud fixed
01:03:460 (1) - NC earlyer The Vocals are holding the iiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiih no rythm changes at all. better move it to the beginning of the rythm and iiiih 01:03:107 (5) - I ended up changing this part completely
01:04:519 (4) - New combo here because changes in the music and vocal tune and vocal rythm (iiiiiiiiih ) fixed
01:20:578 (5) - a bit akward feel because these two 01:20:578 (5) - and 01:16:342 (7) - change the direction in which the cursor is moving I made them like that on purpose. The first part is like you said with changing directions after the stream, and it leads into the more smooth transitions.
01:21:989 (5) - Its ok here because this one moves at least ~90 degrees
If NC'ing follows vocals: I'm NC'ing to the beat not vocals.
01:47:754 (5) - NC here instead of 01:48:284 (1) - at 01:47:754 (5) - a new phrase begins ^
01:48:989 (5) - NC here too because upbeat to new phrase and new phrase ^
01:50:578 (2) - NC new phrase move NC to here from 01:50:225 (1) - ^
If NC'ing follows rythm:
01:49:695 (8) - if there 01:48:284 (1) - is a NC at 01:49:695 (8) - has to be one too fixed
01:53:931 (4) - like ending in Normal & Hard fixed

Hope I was helpful
good luck with your mapset I like it Thanks for the mod!!

Updated.

hyouri

390 posts

Joined June 2012

hyouri 2016-07-01T22:40:26+00:00

yuki

Doj

232 posts

Joined March 2014

Topic Starter

Doj 2016-07-01T23:46:48+00:00

Ayumiita

132 posts

Joined November 2015

Ayumiita 2016-07-02T14:44:33+00:00

Hey the NM is here.
keep in mind that this is mainly personal preference just marked lines are necessary.

Vicky's Snow~:

00:16:695 (1) - There is missing one beat at the 2/4 tick aka red.

00:46:166 (1) - I would start the slider closer to the 7

Really couldnt find more after searching for like 2h.
Just one thing the map is rly rly hard for his difficulty so yeah, it should give a shit ton of pp xD.

Miriko

201 posts

Joined July 2014

Miriko 2016-07-04T23:49:33+00:00

Lucyyyyyyy wrote:
Hey the NM is here.
keep in mind that this is mainly personal preference just marked lines are necessary.

Vicky's Snow~:

00:16:695 (1) - There is missing one beat at the 2/4 tick aka red. Um... There's already is a not on it. o.o

00:46:166 (1) - I would start the slider closer to the 7 That would ruin the stream blanket on it, I'll be keeping it the way it is.

Really couldnt find more after searching for like 2h. ...I think that means I'm mapping okay? Maybe? I don't know. xD

Thank you for the mod~ ^^

Naxess

Nomination Assessment Team

390 posts

Joined March 2016

Naxess 2016-07-06T22:59:36+00:00

NM From Queue

rip background

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Lunatic]

SPOILER

00:24:725 - There's some sounds in between here, but there isn't a sound at 00:24:901 (7) - , so consider changing this pattern.
Using something like you did 00:25:695 (1) - would add to consistency.
^ 00:30:372 -
^ 00:31:078 -
^ 00:38:137 -
...

00:27:372 (6) - Can't hear this. You should only map where there are impacts of some kind from some instrument.
At the moment you're not reflecting the music, you're adding to it, also known as overmapping. Consider removing it.
^ 00:33:019 (6) -
^ 00:35:842 (5) -
^ 00:46:784 (3) - if anything the sound you're hearing is at 00:46:695 -
^ 00:49:960 (5) -
...

00:29:225 - Pay attention to the timeline and listen closely to which notes are stronger than others. There's a large white tick on the timeline, indicating a downbeat. Usually these are stronger than other beats, and are also good to NC. Consider making it clickable and NCing it instead of 00:29:401 (1) - .
^ 00:43:342 -
...

00:35:313 - Map this, I can hear a sound.
^ 00:36:901 -
^ 00:51:725 -
...

I'll stop pointing out some stuff, since it repeats a lot, so remember to check through your map thoroughly for similar problems.

01:02:578 - This is as strong as 01:03:107 - and should be clickable imo.
^ Try keeping consistent with how you map specific sounds. For example 01:04:166 - and 01:04:872 - are similar, yet one is clickable and the other isn't.

00:54:460 - Here's a strong vocal, but it's not mapped. Instead instruments are mapped.
But then later, at 01:05:754 - , this is mapped as a long slider starting from a strong vocal, but this time instruments are being ignored.
Consider keeping consistent with how you map sounds. Often this is done by prioritizing an instrumental layer, for example drums, melody or vocal.

01:19:342 - This beat is quite weak, I doubt mapping it as a circle will be good. Try having it be a slider end or simply ignore it. Save clickable objects for sounds that are clearly heard, prioritizing making stronger sounds clickable.
^ 01:24:989 -

01:21:107 (6) - Usually you'd want to avoid having a slider point out of the map being this close to the edge. Consider changing the flow around here to avoid that.

01:55:391 - The song is still quite strong around here. It seems like the song fades later as well, which is usually not something you'd want in a map.
If possible, edit it in a way that allows the song to end on a distinct beat instead of fading. For example by building up using a reverse cymbal crash and then cutting the song, but still allowing some cymbal crash or something to continue after impacting where the song is cut, so it still ends smoothly.
If you don't know how to do this, I would suggest asking someone with experience or looking for help in the appropriate forum.
It's not necessary, but I gave my opinion at least. (If you want me to do this, send me a pm on the forums. Just keep in mind that you'll probably have to change your offset for all difficulties after changing mp3)

Decrease OD to 7 to keep in curve with Hard's OD 6.

Try working a bit on rhythm. Strong sounds should be clickable, weaker sounds could be slider ends. If you can't actually hear a sound somewhere, don't map it. Overmapping isn't seen well upon by the community, so I'd suggest you avoid it.

[

Vicky's Snow~]

SPOILER

00:03:460 (3,4) - I can't hear these, consider removing them. They're not reflecting the music; they're adding to it, also known as overmapping.
^ 00:06:460 - repeat is unnecessary. You may be mapping the echo, but I wouldn't suggest it, and 00:01:872 - 's echo isn't mapped either, so it'd be inconsistent.
^ 00:27:725 (5) -
^ 00:58:695 (5) - could be mapped as a slider end instead, since the sound ends here.

00:25:695 (5,1) - You know, 5x spacing is probably a bit much. Consider reducing the distance.

^ 00:32:048 (1,2) - 4x is also a bit much

00:28:431 - Consider mapping this, I hear a sound here.

00:36:284 - I think you should make this clickabe, it's a strong beat. Note that it's a large white tick on the timeline, this means it's a downbeat. Downbeats are usually stronger than other beats and as such they're often clickable. Lifting your finger on a strong beat makes no sense imo. You can also NC the measure properly by making the downbeat clickable.

00:35:754 (1) - I don't see why you're NCing this. There's no distinct change in the song and it's not a new measure. If you're NCing it for the health boost, I'd recommend you'd make the pattern slightly easier instead, as doing that shouldn't be necessary (if you're actually doing that, then consider reducing HP instead).
^ 00:38:225 (1) - It makes sense here because the song has some distinct vocals here that you're mapping, and SV also changes.
^ 00:56:754 - This makes sense as well because the vocals clearly change pitch.
^ 00:38:754 (1) - this makes no sense, however.

I'll stop pointing out some stuff, so remember to check through the map thoroughly for similar problems.

01:07:342 (3) - NC this and remove NC from the spinner. This note will act as the beat and the spinner will give resolution to that beat.

01:09:284 (2,3,4,1,2) - It's extremely important that you use SV consistently. It makes no sense that these have one SV and 01:10:695 (2,3,4,1,2) - has different SV, because they're basically the same in the song.
^ There's a lot of this earlier as well, so check that.

01:30:195 - You're missing some sounds in between here.
^ 01:30:637 (2,3) - I don't think these sounds cover everything. Try using a repeat with a different beat snap divisor.

01:31:342 - Pretty powerful instrumental impact here, but 01:31:166 - is a powerful vocal impact, which you've mapped. So you're basically following vocal here, but you're not doing this consistently throughout the song. I'd suggest you prioritize which one you follow and keep to it throughout the song. (you can still map other sounds, note "prioritize")

01:37:872 (4) - I still don't like the SV changes, but if you're going to keep them, at least indicate it properly with an NC.

01:48:637 (1,2,3,1,2) - So here you're mapping it as circles. Previously you mapped it as sliders, and right after this you map it as sliders again 01:50:048 (1,2,3,1,2) - . Try keeping consistent with how you map sounds. If you're going to vary it, do so consistently.

01:51:989 - There's slider ends with strong vocals that can be mapped to increase SR instead of using SV changes like this.
^ Applies to previous parts as well.

01:52:607 (1) - This spinner is an unrankable technique; "Ninja Spinners". I know this because autopilot wasn't able to get 2000 points on it.
Consider removing it.

01:51:989 - I haven't really check hitsounds, but shouldn't this slider end have a whistle?
^ Probably applies to rest of diff as well.

You may want to balance HP and OD, because right now OD is at 8 while HP is still at 6.
I'd try something like HP 7, OD 7.5. (assuming you make some changes to the map so it's not as jumpy and has so high velocity changes)

Like I mentioned earlier, you'll want to check through your diff thoroughly for similar problems.

Try working a bit on reducing SV changes, improving your fundamentals of rhythm, and keeping consistent with how you map parallel sections of the map.
You definitely don't need such high SV and spacing in order to get a difficulty of this song to this SR.

[

General]

SPOILER

See the mod on the Lunatic difficulty about the mp3.

You may want to set the background in the other difficulties.
For me the only background in the folder is MasshiroBG-.jpg, which is the one Vicky is using.

Rest looks fine, though I recommend you recheck your hitsounds.

Good luck!

Miriko

201 posts

Joined July 2014

Miriko 2016-07-16T22:36:35+00:00

I got too frustrated from trying to post and the website not allowing me to post it and erasing all the replies I did to the mod but I did take in most of the suggestions.

Thanks for the mod~

Doj

232 posts

Joined March 2014

Topic Starter

Doj 2016-08-03T17:30:15+00:00

Naxess wrote:
NM From Queue

rip background

[ Lunatic]
SPOILER
I'll just say this now before I start. I skimmed through this mod and you seem to be pointing out things about overmapping. I do agree overmapping can be bad, but there are ways to be creative to make your own beat. Not all instances of overmapping needs to be fixed just because it's overmapped.
00:24:725 - There's some sounds in between here, but there isn't a sound at 00:24:901 (7) - , so consider changing this pattern.
Using something like you did 00:25:695 (1) - would add to consistency.
^ 00:30:372 -
^ 00:31:078 -
^ 00:38:137 -
... For the above mods I wasn't sure what sounds you were hearing. I understood what you meant about the places where there weren't sounds though. I fixed those places.

00:27:372 (6) - Can't hear this. You should only map where there are impacts of some kind from some instrument.
At the moment you're not reflecting the music, you're adding to it, also known as overmapping. Consider removing it. fixed
^ 00:33:019 (6) - fixed
^ 00:35:842 (5) - fixed
^ 00:46:784 (3) - if anything the sound you're hearing is at 00:46:695 - Yea it may be overmapped, but I see no problem. I see it as creativity.
^ 00:49:960 (5) - fixed
...

00:29:225 - Pay attention to the timeline and listen closely to which notes are stronger than others. There's a large white tick on the timeline, indicating a downbeat. Usually these are stronger than other beats, and are also good to NC. Consider making it clickable and NCing it instead of 00:29:401 (1) - . fixed
^ 00:43:342 - fixed
...

00:35:313 - Map this, I can hear a sound. Not to sounds rude, but I honestly don't hear what your talking about
^ 00:36:901 - fixed
^ 00:51:725 - fixed
...

I'll stop pointing out some stuff, since it repeats a lot, so remember to check through your map thoroughly for similar problems.

01:02:578 - This is as strong as 01:03:107 - and should be clickable imo. fixed
^ Try keeping consistent with how you map specific sounds. For example 01:04:166 - and 01:04:872 - are similar, yet one is clickable and the other isn't.

00:54:460 - Here's a strong vocal, but it's not mapped. Instead instruments are mapped. I don't think I need to map this one because it'll take away from playing the second one.
But then later, at 01:05:754 - , this is mapped as a long slider starting from a strong vocal, but this time instruments are being ignored.
Consider keeping consistent with how you map sounds. Often this is done by prioritizing an instrumental layer, for example drums, melody or vocal.

01:19:342 - This beat is quite weak, I doubt mapping it as a circle will be good. Try having it be a slider end or simply ignore it. Save clickable objects for sounds that are clearly heard, prioritizing making stronger sounds clickable.
^ 01:24:989 - keeping this

01:21:107 (6) - Usually you'd want to avoid having a slider point out of the map being this close to the edge. Consider changing the flow around here to avoid that.

01:55:391 - The song is still quite strong around here. It seems like the song fades later as well, which is usually not something you'd want in a map.
If possible, edit it in a way that allows the song to end on a distinct beat instead of fading. For example by building up using a reverse cymbal crash and then cutting the song, but still allowing some cymbal crash or something to continue after impacting where the song is cut, so it still ends smoothly.
If you don't know how to do this, I would suggest asking someone with experience or looking for help in the appropriate forum.
It's not necessary, but I gave my opinion at least. (If you want me to do this, send me a pm on the forums. Just keep in mind that you'll probably have to change your offset for all difficulties after changing mp3)

Decrease OD to 7 to keep in curve with Hard's OD 6.I changed it to 7.2

Try working a bit on rhythm. Strong sounds should be clickable, weaker sounds could be slider ends. If you can't actually hear a sound somewhere, don't map it. Overmapping isn't seen well upon by the community, so I'd suggest you avoid it.

[ General]
SPOILER
See the mod on the Lunatic difficulty about the mp3.

You may want to set the background in the other difficulties.
For me the only background in the folder is MasshiroBG-.jpg, which is the one Vicky is using.

Rest looks fine, though I recommend you recheck your hitsounds.

Hitsounds will be rechecked.

Good luck!

Thanks!

Logic Agent

483 posts

Joined April 2015

Logic Agent 2016-08-17T17:33:41+00:00

hi doj i love you

[General]

Your Easy diff doesn't have combo colors... so... ya
Not sure if this is an unrankable issue, but there are inconsistent kiais between your diffs and your gd. Just be aware that's a thing
Inside your maps folder there is a SB folder with only one thing inside of it, and I don't see that element being used in any of the maps... Unless it's a wip storyboard you can probably just take it out of there.

[Vicky's Snow]

00:08:401 (2,3) - even out the spacing here? the really tiny overlap isn't noticeable from an aesthetics standpoint imo so I'd just get rid of it
01:15:107 (2,1) - blanket
01:33:989 (1,2) - to me, stacking these seems kind of weird considering you didn't stack 01:32:578 (1,2), starting a stack here feels like you're changing what you're emphasizing
01:36:107 (4) - maybe move this to the left a tiny bit? 01:35:754 (2) could use some breathing room
01:37:872 (4) - move this to the right a bit? starting a kickslider in the trail of a fading out slider is pretty easy to misread, so just having the slider head start further to the right makes this easier to play.
01:43:872 (8,1,1) - two things here, first just refer back to what I said about stacking this changing what I think you're emphasizing, and then also 01:44:048 (1) this doesn't need nc.

[Lunatic]

00:50:225 (1,2,3) - even out spacing?
00:54:284 (5,1) - the spacing here is more than likely going to be misread. The spacing you're using is staying consistent even though there's a short pause you're mapping to, so it's best to give space to these or change this so that you can stack them which is what you did the first time (00:45:813 (7,1))
00:59:931 (5,1) - ^ although this one might be a bit better
01:04:166 (6,1) - these two could use a bit more space as well imo
01:17:578 (3) - maybe move this down a bit more? It'd better emphasize the drum kick as well as the jump to 01:17:754 (4) to make the 3/4 vocal slider feel nicer
01:43:695 (6,7,8,9,10,1) - this looks a bit cluttered to me. I reccomend making the jump from 9 to 10 more linear (maybe move 10 to x188 y273 or something like that?) and also giving a bit of space between 01:43:872 (7,1) would help this feel more spaced out
01:47:578 (4,7) - fix overlap

[Hard]

00:10:695 (3,4,5) - this could look better if you made it look more like this imo
00:29:754 (2,4) - make these two a bit farther apart?
00:31:872 - I know why you would want to put a small pause here but I think that skipping out on this vocal is kinda bad, and I'd put a note here if I were you
01:13:519 (5,1) - space these out a bit more as well imo
01:14:048 (6,2) - aesthetic mod inc

Easy and Normal look okay to me for the most part, hope these help~

Miriko

201 posts

Joined July 2014

Miriko 2016-08-18T11:53:51+00:00

Logic Agent wrote:
[Vicky's Snow]
00:08:401 (2,3) - even out the spacing here? the really tiny overlap isn't noticeable from an aesthetics standpoint imo so I'd just get rid of it Done!
01:15:107 (2,1) - blanket Not really sure what part to actually blanket but I think I fixed it...(sort of...)
01:33:989 (1,2) - to me, stacking these seems kind of weird considering you didn't stack 01:32:578 (1,2), starting a stack here feels like you're changing what you're emphasizing Changed~
01:36:107 (4) - maybe move this to the left a tiny bit? 01:35:754 (2) could use some breathing room I'll leave that alone for now. It's supposed to have a star pattern in it. xD
01:37:872 (4) - move this to the right a bit? starting a kickslider in the trail of a fading out slider is pretty easy to misread, so just having the slider head start further to the right makes this easier to play. Okay~
01:43:872 (8,1,1) - two things here, first just refer back to what I said about stacking this changing what I think you're emphasizing, and then also 01:44:048 (1) this doesn't need nc. Changed!

Thank you for the mod~

I've been away for a bit! >< Sorry for the late reply!

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Ataraxia

673 posts

Joined February 2014

Ataraxia 2016-08-26T18:40:54+00:00

ur miss a clap her 01:10:518 (5) - "Lunatic"

no kd xd

edit: drum finish her to 01:10:166 (1) -

Doj

232 posts

Joined March 2014

Topic Starter

Doj 2016-08-30T20:06:39+00:00

Ataraxia wrote:
ur miss a clap her 01:10:518 (5) - "Lunatic"

no kd xd

edit: drum finish her to 01:10:166 (1) -

thanks

Doj

232 posts

Joined March 2014

Topic Starter

Doj 2016-08-30T20:35:10+00:00

Logic Agent wrote:

hi doj i love you

[General]
Your Easy diff doesn't have combo colors... so... ya will fix
Not sure if this is an unrankable issue, but there are inconsistent kiais between your diffs and your gd. Just be aware that's a thing
Inside your maps folder there is a SB folder with only one thing inside of it, and I don't see that element being used in any of the maps... Unless it's a wip storyboard you can probably just take it out of there. Cleaned it up

[Lunatic]
00:50:225 (1,2,3) - even out spacing?
00:54:284 (5,1) - the spacing here is more than likely going to be misread. The spacing you're using is staying consistent even though there's a short pause you're mapping to, so it's best to give space to these or change this so that you can stack them which is what you did the first time (00:45:813 (7,1))
00:59:931 (5,1) - ^ although this one might be a bit better
01:04:166 (6,1) - these two could use a bit more space as well imo
01:17:578 (3) - maybe move this down a bit more? It'd better emphasize the drum kick as well as the jump to 01:17:754 (4) to make the 3/4 vocal slider feel nicer
01:43:695 (6,7,8,9,10,1) - this looks a bit cluttered to me. I reccomend making the jump from 9 to 10 more linear (maybe move 10 to x188 y273 or something like that?) and also giving a bit of space between 01:43:872 (7,1) would help this feel more spaced out
01:47:578 (4,7) - fix overlap
[Hard]
00:10:695 (3,4,5) - this could look better if you made it look more like this imo
00:29:754 (2,4) - make these two a bit farther apart?
00:31:872 - I know why you would want to put a small pause here but I think that skipping out on this vocal is kinda bad, and I'd put a note here if I were you
01:13:519 (5,1) - space these out a bit more as well imo
01:14:048 (6,2) - aesthetic mod inc
Easy and Normal look okay to me for the most part, hope these help~

I applied most of the stuff you said
Finally answer 5 years later. i luv u 2 bby

updated.

Winnie

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Winnie 2017-10-17T22:21:40+00:00

Just here to get back into the modding grind again.

[General Stuff/Unrankable Stuff]

Lunatic Difficulty has a lot of unsnapped stuff better go back and review them in AiMod
Vicky's diff also has unsnapped objects
Actually just check all the diffs for unsnapped objects pls thanks.

[Vicky's Snow~]

00:00:990 (1) - Not sure why this note isn't the same as 00:02:401 (1) - or vice versa. Not really something I'd expect to just suddenly switch up after the first use of it even though it sounds the same.
00:15:813 (1,2,3,4) - This is very sudden 15 seconds in already implemented 1/4 patterns that leave the buildup stale. Up to you though but I'd suggest keeping rhythm simple up until then.
00:23:578 (1) - I'd even extend this to the blue tick. So it feels consistent while playing for the vocal cuts.
00:26:842 (2,3) - Rhythm wise fine but the spacing is really really big to compare them with singles notes at 00:26:048 (1,2) - it'll visually look the same but played completely different. I'll work on your rhythm and just to move them a lot closer. Otherwise, you can remove the note on the blue tick and even implement something like this to be simple to play off the vocals as well. https://puu.sh/y0BOA/19a272d57b.png
00:28:342 (4,5,6) - Can also be like 00:25:695 (5) - your choice
00:29:048 (1) - Really bad slider here, skips a really strong beat at 00:29:226 - Your idea might be nice but the rhythm execution is poor and this one holds you back because this was what I'd expect you to do https://puu.sh/y0BV8/eafcd56b1c.png
00:32:489 (2,3) - Could be said the same but this one is more lenient with how the 1/4s were placed before this.
00:33:989 (3,4) - This is where your triplet you placed before I mentioned could be at.
00:41:754 (6,1) - Visually seems weird to me. If you're not paying super close attention you can barely see (1) before it comes up. Could be me but I'd ask someone about this more.
00:58:872 (1) - Feels like a really random slider because most of them are linear or slightly curved. This one, in particular, is very angled but no issue.
01:17:754 (2) - Slightly more spacing would make this play even better.
01:18:461 (1,2) - Rhythm feels nice Ctrl+G
01:21:989 (1,2,3,4,5) - Your patterning to me doesn't feel that great here. It's a rotation but 01:22:695 (5,1) - is really cutting you off. Maybe the case in which they are positioned. If it was at a different spot it'll play better
01:31:342 (2,1,2) - Could also be https://puu.sh/y0Ckh/f3fbf583a2.png keeps spacing after (2) pretty nice your choice.
01:45:284 (1) - Same as previously could be said here
01:51:107 (1) - Could add more emphasis by spacing this somewhere else but it's fine
01:51:989 (5,6,1) - Pretty cool but has a crazy affect while playing this is actually hard.
Other than that should be decent.

[Lunatic]

00:13:519 (9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - I feel like these parts are really drowning out the electronic parts of the map. It's just consecutive streams and 1/4 sliders. You definitely can have them while implementing the same rhythms you did at the start of the song. Ex: https://puu.sh/y0CTo/c512e2c6fd.png
Just a general idea of what you could've done as well. Your choice in the matter
00:16:343 (1,2) - Don't feel like they quite fit this is where what I've said above you could use. Ex: https://puu.sh/y0D1u/cba73e437c.png
00:17:401 (7) - You can hear the strong emphasis on the sliderend. You can have rhythm in 2 ways. Extend the repeat 1 more time to the blue tick or remove the repeat and add another 1/4 slider there. I'd do the triple 1/4s here if it was up to me.
00:25:695 (5,6,7) - Overlap on Lunatic could be strange. Could also be moved to https://puu.sh/y0D9i/144e27c18f.jpg but up to you here no issues
00:26:401 (1,2,3,4,5) 00:32:048 (1,2,3,4,5) - Explain to me your reasoning for mapping with different movements here for the vocal cuts I'd love to know
00:34:519 (5,1) - Can even be spaced further
00:36:284 (1,2,3,4) - Lots of stacked overlaps doesn't bring you much but should be no issue as well
00:42:284 (3) - I'd even NC this to show the change in other repeat sliders such as this one. It's quite a long hold
00:45:636 (9,10,11) - Can also be Ex:https://puu.sh/y0Dlf/93a7c080eb.png to add more emphasis to the last note
00:46:784 (3) - Phantom note doesn't provide you with anything and will confuse a lot of players who play this. I'd suggest to remove it
00:56:578 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Very bad trying to emphasize a rhythm but using a stream for it. I'd change it to something like this https://puu.sh/y0DuL/57ce162ac3.png or how you want it just not a stream.
01:01:519 (1) - Even stated on top diff skipping weird usable emphasizable beats
01:05:754 (1) - Just a random 5/3 slider out in the middle of the song hmm even though I get it's for vocals
Kiai is just normal other than that it's aight

Doj

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Doj 2017-12-09T03:14:19+00:00

Kocari wrote:
Just here to get back into the modding grind again.

[General Stuff/Unrankable Stuff]
Lunatic Difficulty has a lot of unsnapped stuff better go back and review them in AiMod
Vicky's diff also has unsnapped objects rip her diff
Actually just check all the diffs for unsnapped objects pls thanks. idk why the fuck that happened tbh

[Lunatic]
00:13:519 (9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - I feel like these parts are really drowning out the electronic parts of the map. It's just consecutive streams and 1/4 sliders. You definitely can have them while implementing the same rhythms you did at the start of the song. Ex: https://puu.sh/y0CTo/c512e2c6fd.png
Just a general idea of what you could've done as well. Your choice in the matter good idea, changed
00:16:343 (1,2) - Don't feel like they quite fit this is where what I've said above you could use. Ex: https://puu.sh/y0D1u/cba73e437c.png changed
00:17:401 (7) - You can hear the strong emphasis on the sliderend. You can have rhythm in 2 ways. Extend the repeat 1 more time to the blue tick or remove the repeat and add another 1/4 slider there. I'd do the triple 1/4s here if it was up to me. i love you
00:25:695 (5,6,7) - Overlap on Lunatic could be strange. Could also be moved to https://puu.sh/y0D9i/144e27c18f.jpg but up to you here no issues changed
00:26:401 (1,2,3,4,5) 00:32:048 (1,2,3,4,5) - Explain to me your reasoning for mapping with different movements here for the vocal cuts I'd love to know Well, i felt that mappoing them this way actually gives the player some kind of feeling of the vocals as the sliders are played, since the movement forces you to snap quickly without feeling to sharp of a movement. If that makes sense.
00:34:519 (5,1) - Can even be spaced further changed
00:36:284 (1,2,3,4) - Lots of stacked overlaps doesn't bring you much but should be no issue as well fixed the overlaps
00:42:284 (3) - I'd even NC this to show the change in other repeat sliders such as this one. It's quite a long hold changed
00:45:636 (9,10,11) - Can also be Ex:https://puu.sh/y0Dlf/93a7c080eb.png to add more emphasis to the last notechanged
00:46:784 (3) - Phantom note doesn't provide you with anything and will confuse a lot of players who play this. I'd suggest to remove it changed
00:56:578 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Very bad trying to emphasize a rhythm but using a stream for it. I'd change it to something like this https://puu.sh/y0DuL/57ce162ac3.png or how you want it just not a stream. changed
01:01:519 (1) - Even stated on top diff skipping weird usable emphasizable beats changed
01:05:754 (1) - Just a random 5/3 slider out in the middle of the song hmm even though I get it's for vocals changed
Kiai is just normal other than that it's aight

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