UNDEAD CORPORATION - Karakurenai feat. Ranko [Taiko|Osu] · forum

Zyl

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Zyl 2016-03-05T01:42:08+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on sábado, 16 de abril de 2016 at 01:05:49 p.m.

Artist: UNDEAD CORPORATION
Title: Karakurenai feat. Ranko
Source: 東方Project
Tags: Touhou toho complete box Comiket85 特 SPECIAL Yuugi Hoshiguma subterranean animism buta-otome 豚乙女パインツリー Pinetree chireiden Crimson zun team shanghai alice パイン MokouSmoke [HiiroSakaki] Daniel Nanners [-Matt-] taiko
BPM: 170
Filesize: 10540kb
Play Time: 03:07
Difficulties Available:

[-Matt-] & Nanners Collab (3,75 stars, 949 notes)
Beginner (1,14 stars, 112 notes)
Daniel's Extra (5,51 stars, 847 notes)
Easy (1,46 stars, 194 notes)
Hard Collab (2,59 stars, 98 notes)
Hiiro's Insane (4,6 stars, 778 notes)
Insane (4,47 stars, 507 notes)
MokouSmoke's Normal (2,11 stars, 294 notes)
Nanners' Oni (3,43 stars, 869 notes)
Normal (1,88 stars, 190 notes)

Download: UNDEAD CORPORATION - Karakurenai feat. Ranko
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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#1 Map for Approval

♪ Undead Corporation - Karakurenai ♪

Source of the Song & Backround Image
Thanks to Katsubaki PL SUBS for Upload this Song!

Storyboard made by Trent83

Diffs

Difficulties

Beginner by Trent83

Easy by Trent83

Normal by Trent83

MokouSmoke's Normal by MokouSmoke

Collab by CookieKivi & Trent83

Hiiro's Insane by Hiiro Sakaki

Insane by Trent83

Daniel's Extra by Daniel

Ezreal's Crimson by ProEzreal

Nanners' Oni by Nanners

-Matt- & Nanners' Collab by [-Matt-] & Nanners

Collab Info

From 00:12:981 to 00:46:686 Trent83
From 01:22:157 to 01:32:039 CookieKivi
From 02:31:333 to 02:32:745 CookieKivi

♥

Last edited by Zyl 2016-04-16T19:07:05+00:00, edited 76 times in total.

Mazziv

998 posts

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Mazziv 2016-03-05T02:44:17+00:00

hi m4m from modreqs i guess

[Easy]

i told you bout that mp3 thingy
the audio quality is p poor,i suggest you taking the .mp3 from maps like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/s/76196
fix aimod pls
actuall map related stuff:
00:13:222 (1) - why ignore such a strong beat?
if you applied the suggestion above,you should change 00:25:927 (3) - this slider also into a reversed slider,to keep the rhythm
00:23:104 (3) - make this a good looking slider by making it symmetric?

looks p good,its a regular easy clustfuck map not much you can do wrong hue

Zyl

520 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

Zyl 2016-03-05T03:00:44+00:00

hi m4m from modreqs i guess

[Easy]
i told you bout that mp3 thingy
the audio quality is p poor,i suggest you taking the .mp3 from maps like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/s/76196 Well i prefer the version with the singer :/
fix aimod pls the kiai thing is something i like so...
actuall map related stuff:
00:13:222 (1) - why ignore such a strong beat?Eh?
if you applied the suggestion above,you should change 00:25:927 (3) - this slider also into a reversed slider,to keep the rhythmNo thanks
00:23:104 (3) - make this a good looking slider by making it symmetric?Fixed
looks p good,its a regular easy clustfuck map not much you can do wrong hue clustfuck? my map is pretty clean

(i think...)

Mazziv

998 posts

Joined July 2013

Mazziv 2016-03-05T03:21:39+00:00

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Last edited by Mazziv 2016-03-05T03:24:03+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Mazziv

998 posts

Joined July 2013

Mazziv 2016-03-05T03:21:58+00:00

Trent83 wrote:
hi m4m from modreqs i guess

[Easy]
i told you bout that mp3 thingy
the audio quality is p poor,i suggest you taking the .mp3 from maps like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/s/76196 Well i prefer the version with the singer :/ didnt know that this is a instrumental version,still i suggest you to get a better .mp3
fix aimod pls the kiai thing is something i like so...werent there ds issue's too?
actuall map related stuff:
00:13:222 (1) - why ignore such a strong beat?Eh?you can use a 1/1 reverse slider too,like you did in teh second part
if you applied the suggestion above,you should change 00:25:927 (3) - this slider also into a reversed slider,to keep the rhythmNo thanks ^
00:23:104 (3) - make this a good looking slider by making it symmetric?Fixed
looks p good,its a regular easy clustfuck map not much you can do wrong hue clustfuck? my map is pretty clean (i think...)

clusterfuck in terms of distance snap,i know that your map is clean xD

Renumi

907 posts

Joined July 2012

Renumi 2016-03-05T03:40:40+00:00

Hola, hola :3
Mod de #modreqs
En español porque es mas facil para mi y para ti (me imagino) c:

[

General]

Mmm, nada mal hasta ahora c:
Buena~

Dejando un mod simple para el Easy.

[

Easy]

00:18:869 (1) - De lo que he visto en el mapa, estos colores (rojo, rojo oscuro, blah, blah) se verian mejor en el Kiai Time o mejor dicho, cuando el Storyboard se activa. Mi recomendacion es cambiando estos colores con los colores que usabas antes (emmm... purpura oscuro y negro?) pero si harias estos, los colores se convertirian muy... aburridos... rapidamente... Asi que super resumido: Cambia los colores rojos despues del Kiai a los negros y no tan brillantes, y si lo haces, mi recomendacion seria, como sea, añadir mas colores. Eeee recomendacion larga yo se no me odies ;~;
00:15:339 (3) - Mueve esta nota un poco hacia arriba, o para que se vea así.
00:37:221 (3) - Mueve esta nota a x:120y:100 y pues se veria así. Honestamente creo que se ve mejor así @w@
00:46:398 (1) - Pues si, lo que recomende antes, reserva los colores rojos y/o oscuros para los Kiai's solamente y considera añadiendo unos pocos colores mas -w-
01:01:221 (5) - Nuevo Combo :v
01:04:045 (8) - Igual, Nuevo Combo aqui ;v
01:11:104 - Añade una nota aqui :V
01:33:692 (4) - Nuevo Combo ;^;
01:39:339 (4) - Nuevo Combo ;;;
02:08:986 - Otra vez, añade otra nota, si quiiiieeereeesss.
02:41:457 (1) - Mueve la nota a x:228y:212, ya que seria mas facil que jugadores nuevos le den (click?) a las notas/sliders que vienen mas adelante, y ok aqui empieza el Kiai y con el Storyboard atras, da mas razon porque cambiar todos los colores a rojo/rojo oscuro. ;~;
02:48:163 (1) - Mueve a x:56y:172.
03:04:045 (3) - Mueve esta nota a x:384y:100.
03:06:869 (6) - No te quiero decir que hacer, pero yo creo que algo como así quedaria mejor :v

Eso es todo~

Okok eso es todo~ Si quieres un recheck o algo parecido algun otro tiempo, enviame un mensaje c: ll Perdón si el mod no ayudo tanto :c

Renumi

907 posts

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Renumi 2016-03-05T03:46:16+00:00

Mazziv wrote:
i told you bout that mp3 thingy
the audio quality is p poor,i suggest you taking the .mp3 from maps like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/s/76196

^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^mp3^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

Kuki

722 posts

Joined October 2013

Kuki 2016-03-05T05:08:37+00:00

small irc for easy aaaa

2016-03-05 17:50 Kuki: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/919377 UNDEAD CORPORATION - Karakurenai feat. Ranco [Easy]]
2016-03-05 17:51 Kuki: 00:15:339 (3) - blanket seems a little oof
2016-03-05 17:51 Kuki: off**
2016-03-05 17:51 Trent83: Fixed
2016-03-05 17:51 Kuki: cool beans
2016-03-05 17:52 Trent83: beans? xDD
2016-03-05 17:53 Kuki: 00:38:633 (1,2,3) - this seems a bit too straight
2016-03-05 17:53 Kuki: haha yeah
2016-03-05 17:54 Kuki: i'm not sure how i'd fix
2016-03-05 17:54 Trent83: fixed
2016-03-05 17:54 Kuki: oh cool
2016-03-05 17:54 Kuki: haha
2016-03-05 17:54 Trent83: xDD
2016-03-05 17:55 Trent83: i only follow the flow of this circle and this slider
2016-03-05 17:55 Trent83: 00:38:633 (1,2,3) -
2016-03-05 17:55 Trent83: and thats it xD
2016-03-05 17:55 Kuki: ooh
2016-03-05 17:55 Trent83: (i think...)
2016-03-05 17:55 Kuki: you need lots of ncs
2016-03-05 17:55 Kuki: that's alright yeah
2016-03-05 17:55 Trent83: ncs?
2016-03-05 17:56 Kuki: new combo
2016-03-05 17:56 Kuki: sorry
2016-03-05 17:56 Trent83: ohh xD
2016-03-05 17:56 Trent83: relax xDD
2016-03-05 17:56 Kuki: i think you need to use them a bit more
2016-03-05 17:56 Kuki: since it's a normal
2016-03-05 17:56 Kuki: ideally you want to nc on a big white tick
2016-03-05 17:56 Trent83: (well and easy if you see the page of the map xDD)
2016-03-05 17:57 Trent83: yeah
2016-03-05 17:57 Kuki: sorry i meant easyt
2016-03-05 17:57 Kuki: yeah
2016-03-05 17:57 Kuki: lol
2016-03-05 17:57 Trent83: xDD
2016-03-05 17:57 Kuki: new combos give the player a small hp boost aswell
2016-03-05 17:57 Kuki: so use it when you think it would prove useful there too
2016-03-05 17:58 Trent83: hmm i see
2016-03-05 17:58 Kuki: oh also i'd like to give you some tips that i usually give beginners to help them out with some basics
2016-03-05 17:59 Kuki: http://pastebin.com/2E4akQm2
2016-03-05 17:59 Trent83: thanks
2016-03-05 17:59 Kuki: just read through those whenever, they'll help a bunch (i hope)
2016-03-05 17:59 Trent83: ok thanks :3
2016-03-05 17:59 Kuki: coolio
2016-03-05 17:59 Kuki: also generally
2016-03-05 18:00 Kuki: ur mp3
2016-03-05 18:00 Kuki: sounds really bad
2016-03-05 18:00 Kuki: haha
2016-03-05 18:00 Kuki: sounds like
2016-03-05 18:00 Kuki: 64kbps
2016-03-05 18:00 Trent83: yes... every map of karakurenai with voice have an mp3 of a shit xD
2016-03-05 18:00 Kuki: oh bummer
2016-03-05 18:00 Trent83: hmm i will edit that later
2016-03-05 18:00 Kuki: is there not a better one
2016-03-05 18:00 Kuki: try if you can
2016-03-05 18:00 Kuki: but if you can't you can't so no big deal there
2016-03-05 18:00 Trent83: there are a lot of song i think i will find one xD
2016-03-05 18:01 Trent83: oh ok
2016-03-05 18:02 Kuki: lol hopefully yeah
2016-03-05 18:02 Trent83: Actually i am editing some combos
2016-03-05 18:04 Kuki: alright
2016-03-05 18:05 Kuki: i feel like also you might use too many sliders
2016-03-05 18:05 Trent83: To your map
2016-03-05 18:05 Kuki: you want it to be sorta even
2016-03-05 18:05 Trent83: Well i think is better
2016-03-05 18:05 Kuki: but you have 40 circles > 140 sliders lol
2016-03-05 18:05 Kuki: mhm
2016-03-05 18:05 Trent83: for begginers are easier
2016-03-05 18:05 Trent83: so they will gonna love that
2016-03-05 18:06 Trent83: when i star to play i hated circles xDD
2016-03-05 18:06 Kuki: lol well idk, it depends
2016-03-05 18:06 Trent83: 1 diff x 1 diff ok?
2016-03-05 18:06 Kuki: it may not be rankable to have so many sliders
2016-03-05 18:06 Kuki: but idk
2016-03-05 18:06 Kuki: alright
2016-03-05 18:07 Trent83: I think i it
2016-03-05 18:07 Kuki: could you mod the extravaganza diff
2016-03-05 18:07 Kuki: if poss
2016-03-05 18:07 Trent83: Ok
2016-03-05 18:07 Kuki: thank ya
2016-03-05 18:07 Kuki: i'll post in on your page

Zyl

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Topic Starter

Zyl 2016-03-05T05:38:42+00:00

Mazziv wrote:
Trent83 wrote:
hi m4m from modreqs i guess

[Easy]
i told you bout that mp3 thingy
the audio quality is p poor,i suggest you taking the .mp3 from maps like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/s/76196 Well i prefer the version with the singer :/ didnt know that this is a instrumental version,still i suggest you to get a better .mp3 yeah i know xDD around this days i will search a better Mp3
fix aimod pls the kiai thing is something i like so...werent there ds issue's too?i am so dumb xDD sorry i will check it xDD
actuall map related stuff:
00:13:222 (1) - why ignore such a strong beat?Eh?you can use a 1/1 reverse slider too,like you did in teh second partNo thanks again xDD
if you applied the suggestion above,you should change 00:25:927 (3) - this slider also into a reversed slider,to keep the rhythmNo thanks ^No thanks again xDD
00:23:104 (3) - make this a good looking slider by making it symmetric?Fixed
looks p good,its a regular easy clustfuck map not much you can do wrong hue clustfuck? my map is pretty clean (i think...)
clusterfuck in terms of distance snap,i know that your map is clean xD

Oh i see xDD thanks for help

Zyl

520 posts

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Topic Starter

Zyl 2016-03-05T05:49:24+00:00

Renigar wrote:
Hola, hola :3
Mod de #modreqs
En español porque es mas facil para mi y para ti (me imagino) c:

[ General]
Mmm, nada mal hasta ahora c:
Buena~

Dejando un mod simple para el Easy.

[ Easy]
00:18:869 (1) - De lo que he visto en el mapa, estos colores (rojo, rojo oscuro, blah, blah) se verian mejor en el Kiai Time o mejor dicho, cuando el Storyboard se activa. Mi recomendacion es cambiando estos colores con los colores que usabas antes (emmm... purpura oscuro y negro?) pero si harias estos, los colores se convertirian muy... aburridos... rapidamente... Asi que super resumido: Cambia los colores rojos despues del Kiai a los negros y no tan brillantes, y si lo haces, mi recomendacion seria, como sea, añadir mas colores. Eeee recomendacion larga yo se no me odies ;~; Jaja tranquilo ya lo hice xDD
00:15:339 (3) - Mueve esta nota un poco hacia arriba, o para que se vea así.Listo
00:37:221 (3) - Mueve esta nota a x:120y:100 y pues se veria así. Honestamente creo que se ve mejor así @w@Es cierto xDD
00:46:398 (1) - Pues si, lo que recomende antes, reserva los colores rojos y/o oscuros para los Kiai's solamente y considera añadiendo unos pocos colores mas -w-Y eso como se hace uwu?
01:01:221 (5) - Nuevo Combo :vYa lo habia hecho antes que me dijeras xDD
01:04:045 (8) - Igual, Nuevo Combo aqui ;vYa lo habia hecho antes que me dijeras xDD
01:11:104 - Añade una nota aqui :V
01:33:692 (4) - Nuevo Combo ;^;Ya lo habia hecho antes que me dijeras xDD
01:39:339 (4) - Nuevo Combo ;;;Buen punto
02:08:986 - Otra vez, añade otra nota, si quiiiieeereeesss.Beat fuerte en que estaba pensando
02:41:457 (1) - Mueve la nota a x:228y:212, ya que seria mas facil que jugadores nuevos le den (click?) a las notas/sliders que vienen mas adelante, y ok aqui empieza el Kiai y con el Storyboard atras, da mas razon porque cambiar todos los colores a rojo/rojo oscuro. ;~;Hmm buen punto
02:48:163 (1) - Mueve a x:56y:172 Lo haria si pudiera xDD
03:04:045 (3) - Mueve esta nota a x:384y:100.Listo
03:06:869 (6) - No te quiero decir que hacer, pero yo creo que algo como así quedaria mejor :v
Eso es todo~
Si esta genial

Okok eso es todo~ Si quieres un recheck o algo parecido algun otro tiempo, enviame un mensaje c: ll Perdón si el mod no ayudo tanto :c

no digas eso hiciste un muy buen trabajo xDD

LigerZero

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Joined August 2013

LigerZero 2016-03-05T06:08:54+00:00

Mazziv wrote:
hi m4m from modreqs i guess

[Easy]
[list]i told you bout that mp3 thingy
the audio quality is p poor,i suggest you taking the .mp3 from maps like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/s/76196

What.....? Your check mp3 from album the scythe oni howls and this map from toho complete box (you search karakureinai in kanji, search in ranko version)

No Kds (No KuDoSu)

Metadata

Source remove "Touhou/" added no space "Project"
Tags remove "UNDEADCORPORATION Karakurenai" and added "toho complete box Comiket85 特 SPECIAL Yuugi Hoshiguma subterranean animism buta-otome 豚乙女パインツリー Pinetree chireiden Crimson zun team shanghai alice パイン"
title change "ranco" to "ranko" because i'm search with "c" only map you meanwhile use "k" i'm found all (you check in touhouwiki "buta-otome")

Source: Touhouwiki and My computer

Daniel

54 posts

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Daniel 2016-03-05T11:01:27+00:00

Hey can I GD the Expert diff (if mp3 is fixed) ?

Here is an mp3 but it's not in sync: http://puu.sh/nvwEG/80ff20f7cb.mp3

Mazziv

998 posts

Joined July 2013

Mazziv 2016-03-05T15:58:18+00:00

LigerZero wrote:
Mazziv wrote:
hi m4m from modreqs i guess

[Easy]
[list]i told you bout that mp3 thingy
the audio quality is p poor,i suggest you taking the .mp3 from maps like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/s/76196
What.....? Your check mp3 from album the scythe oni howls and this map from toho complete box (you search karakureinai in kanji, search in ranko version)

No Kds (No KuDoSu)

Metadata
Source remove "Touhou/" added no space "Project"
Tags remove "UNDEADCORPORATION Karakurenai" and added "toho complete box Comiket85 特 SPECIAL Yuugi Hoshiguma subterranean animism buta-otome 豚乙女パインツリー Pinetree chireiden Crimson zun team shanghai alice パイン"
title change "ranco" to "ranko" because i'm search with "c" only map you meanwhile use "k" i'm found all (you check in touhouwiki "buta-otome")

Source: Touhouwiki and My computer

i suggest you taking the .mp3 from maps like this? i suggest you taking the .mp3 from maps like this? i suggest you taking the .mp3 from maps like this? i suggest you taking the .mp3 from maps like this? i just linked him the first one i found and said LIKE THIS so he maybe looks for other people who maybe mapped it and take the mp3 from them

Zyl

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Topic Starter

Zyl 2016-03-05T20:12:56+00:00

i suggest you taking the .mp3 from maps like this? i suggest you taking the .mp3 from maps like this? i suggest you taking the .mp3 from maps like this? i suggest you taking the .mp3 from maps like this? i just linked him the first one i found and said LIKE THIS so he maybe looks for other people who maybe mapped it and take the mp3 from them

Hmm yeah, the MP3 is pretty bad... i will search a better audio

[Hiiro Sakaki]

278 posts

Joined January 2013

[Hiiro Sakaki] 2016-03-05T21:03:39+00:00

Hello from #modreq

[Easy]

00:47:104 (2) - NC
00:49:574 (1) - No NC
00:49:927 (2) - NC
00:56:986 (7) - NC
00:57:692 (1) - No NC
00:58:398 (2) - NC
01:04:045 (8) - NC
01:39:339 (4) - NC
Second Kiai part : See first kiai for NC/No NC
Third Kiai part : Same + The SB is too flashy, it hurts, even tho my eyes are okay >.>

Download link Offset : 12981

Last edited by [Hiiro Sakaki] 2016-03-05T21:11:14+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Mazziv

998 posts

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Mazziv 2016-03-05T21:08:16+00:00

[Hiiro Sakaki] wrote:
Hello from #modreq

[Easy]
00:47:104 (2) - NC
00:49:574 (1) - No NC
00:49:927 (2) - NC
00:56:986 (7) - NC
00:57:692 (1) - No NC
00:58:398 (2) - NC
01:04:045 (8) - NC
01:39:339 (4) - NC
Second Kiai part : See first kiai for NC/No NC
Third Kiai part : Same + The SB is too flashy, it hurts, even tho my eyes are okay >.>

high quality mod why arent you a bn yet?

LigerZero

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LigerZero 2016-03-05T22:10:30+00:00

Mazziv: i'm have album and know version ranko from buta otome and original vocal

Original from album 紅染の鬼が哭く and ranko from album toho complete box

[Hiiro Sakaki]

278 posts

Joined January 2013

[Hiiro Sakaki] 2016-03-05T22:57:15+00:00

Mazziv wrote:
[Hiiro Sakaki] wrote:
Hello from #modreq

[Easy]
00:47:104 (2) - NC
00:49:574 (1) - No NC
00:49:927 (2) - NC
00:56:986 (7) - NC
00:57:692 (1) - No NC
00:58:398 (2) - NC
01:04:045 (8) - NC
01:39:339 (4) - NC
Second Kiai part : See first kiai for NC/No NC
Third Kiai part : Same + The SB is too flashy, it hurts, even tho my eyes are okay >.>
high quality mod why arent you a bn yet?

Bro, if that's only what I could see, what should I add? Random useless stuff?
And I mean, your mod wasn't so complete, so why are you taunting me?

Mazziv

998 posts

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Mazziv 2016-03-05T23:20:09+00:00

[Hiiro Sakaki] wrote:
Bro, if that's only what I could see, what should I add? Random useless stuff?
And I mean, your mod wasn't so complete, so why are you taunting me?

calling out nc doesnt require a forum post imo.

Zyl

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Topic Starter

Zyl 2016-03-05T23:44:51+00:00

Dont fight :3 its only a map :333333333333333333333

[Hiiro Sakaki]

278 posts

Joined January 2013

[Hiiro Sakaki] 2016-03-05T23:53:06+00:00

Mazziv wrote:
hi m4m from modreqs i guess

[Easy]
i told you bout that mp3 thingy
the audio quality is p poor,i suggest you taking the .mp3 from maps like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/s/76196
fix aimod pls
actuall map related stuff:
00:13:222 (1) - why ignore such a strong beat?
if you applied the suggestion above,you should change 00:25:927 (3) - this slider also into a reversed slider,to keep the rhythm
00:23:104 (3) - make this a good looking slider by making it symmetric?
looks p good,its a regular easy clustfuck map not much you can do wrong hue

That needed a forum post?

Zyl

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Topic Starter

Zyl 2016-03-06T00:48:30+00:00

omg... :3

TenkaiPalm

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TenkaiPalm 2016-03-12T04:21:21+00:00

Hi :> Here are my opinions

Normal
00:31:863 - The drums kinda sound odd. Although that's just my opinion. Not really a changed needed.
00:47:745 - Consider adding a beat here? I feel like it'd fit in since this is the chorus^^
There are also portions like the one above that you may consider doing the same. Or not. Either way keep it uniform whether or not you want to change it.
01:20:745 - The song kinda ends in an odd place..?

Hard
00:44:039 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Uh. This might be a little too hard for hard? Maybe. At least compared to the rest of this map.
If anything make your chorus more hard than the rest of the map.
01:10:863 (1,2,3) - If this has 3 close beats, maybe 01:13:686 (3) this should follow the same pattern? Consistency is nice.
01:32:569 - Really awk empty space here, try filling it in^ also maybe a stream like this is kinda hard at this level?
01:44:745 (1) - Maybe try ending the spinner here instead of a note? I'd think it'd sound better.
01:50:128 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This whole stream kinda seems too long. I think you should end it when the singer's next syllable starts.
02:00:275 (8) - I know you probably used distance snapping, but you might want to fill that gap right there instead.
02:05:039 (3) - Maybe make this the end of a slider, or just add it onto the stream. I'd think someone playing a hard difficulty might have a hard time doing this.
02:05:039 (3) - I'd think that since this is the main part of the song you'd have some hard parts (streams probably). Try making the main chorus the hard part of the song?

Overall it's okay :> Hard seems pretty fun

Good luck!

Zyl

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Topic Starter

Zyl 2016-03-12T21:41:51+00:00

TenkaiPalm wrote:
Hi :> Here are my opinions

Normal
00:31:863 - The drums kinda sound odd. Although that's just my opinion. Not really a changed needed. mah i love the bams of the drums, its according with the SB
00:47:745 - Consider adding a beat here? I feel like it'd fit in since this is the chorus^^ sounds weird
There are also portions like the one above that you may consider doing the same. Or not. Either way keep it uniform whether or not you want to change it.
01:20:745 - The song kinda ends in an odd place..? what?

Hard
00:44:039 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Uh. This might be a little too hard for hard? Maybe. At least compared to the rest of this map.
If anything make your chorus more hard than the rest of the map. hmm... yeah that looks horrible i will change it xDD
01:10:863 (1,2,3) - If this has 3 close beats, maybe 01:13:686 (3) this should follow the same pattern? Consistency is nice. yeah i will do, its a difficult jump for a hard
01:32:569 - Really awk empty space here, try filling it in^ also maybe a stream like this is kinda hard at this level? i will think it but the stream is short and easy, so i think is useful
01:44:745 (1) - Maybe try ending the spinner here instead of a note? I'd think it'd sound better. yeah it does sounds better, and i put a ninja spinner xDD so i MUST correct it xDD
01:50:128 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This whole stream kinda seems too long. I think you should end it when the singer's next syllable starts.Good eye, i was thinking why that part looked so weird
02:00:275 (8) - I know you probably used distance snapping, but you might want to fill that gap right there instead. what?
02:05:039 (3) - Maybe make this the end of a slider, or just add it onto the stream. I'd think someone playing a hard difficulty might have a hard time doing this. Everytime remember: "Hard. short streams More complex/difficult patterns also appear in this difficulty such as short streams and jumps." link: https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Hard
02:05:039 (3) - I'd think that since this is the main part of the song you'd have some hard parts (streams probably). Try making the main chorus the hard part of the song? hmm maybe i will remap that part, look ugly, and i will add some jumps there

Overall it's okay :> Hard seems pretty fun yeah its really fun, my favorite part is the jumps of the end part
Good luck!Thanks good luck too

Yoratama

424 posts

Joined February 2016

Yoratama 2016-03-15T01:25:29+00:00

Here's my promise, but not to much mod from me

SPOILER

EASY
02:22:863 (5) - NC
00:55:333 (6) - NC
02:07:333 (4,5) - Make a spinner
HARD
00:22:863 (3) - Change to spinner? or long slider, it weird with repeat slider.
00:52:333 - Add circle or make like 01:03:451 (1,2) -
01:53:039 - Same ^
02:01:510 - ^
02:45:275 - ^
02:48:098 - ^ but make it stacked i think.
02:59:392 - ^
03:02:216 - ^
01:45:980 - Miss 1 note here.

Hope it helped, im not good at this XD

Also, do u still working GD on my map? how many % have u finished? Sorry I do not mean to force you to finish quickly. i just want to know the progress XD

MokouSmoke

495 posts

Joined May 2013

MokouSmoke 2016-03-15T07:25:12+00:00

finished, help me fix storyboard/metadata stuff.
also, it's common courtesy to not change anything in the GDs w/o the mapper's permission, so pls let me address any future comments for my diff

PM me once the set is finished and I'll throw out a mod.

TenkaiPalm wrote:
Normal
00:31:863 - The drums kinda sound odd. Although that's just my opinion. Not really a changed needed. fits with drum sound in music imo
00:47:745 - Consider adding a beat here? I feel like it'd fit in since this is the chorus^^ prefer not to add two notes in 1/2 rhythm unless it's for really strong beats, so no change
There are also portions like the one above that you may consider doing the same. Or not. Either way keep it uniform whether or not you want to change it. Save that for an advanced/hard diff. Can't map everything in normal.
01:20:745 - The song kinda ends in an odd place..? it wasn't finished ^.^

needs_moar_custom_hitsounds_rawr

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TitleUnicode:からくれない feat. ランコ
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ArtistUnicode:UNDEAD CORPORATION
Creator:Trent83
Version:MokouSmoke's Normal
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squirrelpascals

984 posts

Joined March 2015

squirrelpascals 2016-03-16T02:30:26+00:00

mods

daniel extra

• HP is waay too strict and gives little to no leeway (this is visible in the intro, how much it fluctuates even when hitting notes perfect). Try hp 6 rather than 7

• 00:29:922 (6) - nc here?

• 00:32:745 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23) - Maybe split up this stream with an nc or two? One at 00:34:157 (15) - works

• 00:42:628 (5) - nc here? From here just be aware of where you can add ncs that provide hp boosts

• 01:25:686 (1) - remove nc

• 01:31:863 (7,8,9,10,11,12) - Overlap of 7 and 12 is strange

• 01:38:569 (2,1) - blanket

• 01:41:922 (1,4) - stack?

• 02:10:863 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - use smaller ds?

• 02:13:333 (3,5) - overlap looks strange

• 02:31:333 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34,35,36,37,38,39) - I know, I said that I wouldn't talk about ncs anymore, but this has to be shortened

• 02:40:157 (4,5) - make this a slider?

• 02:42:628 - Finish map

i went ahead and modded lunatic. I understand you might not be finished with the map but I just pointed out what you sound change anyways

lunatic

• 00:15:804 (8,9,1,2,3,4,5) - Make this all one combo and continue that same combo pattern throughout the intro. The combo is offset from up/down beats

• 00:35:569 (11,12,13,14) - This is a lunatic diff, please try to refrain from mapping to 1/1 unless you absolutely have to. Change into half sliders or make these 1/2 jumps please. Here the 1/1 rhythm would be more suitable: 00:41:216 (23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30) -

• 00:46:157 (40,41,42,43,44) - Why do you keep using star jumps? You can get more creative than this.

• 00:56:039 (76,77,78,79,80,81,82,83,84) - make one continuous stream?

• 00:58:510 (90,91,92,93,94,95,96,97,98,99,100) - ^

• 01:16:157 (179) - Just remember to nc

• 01:33:451 (11,12,13,14,15,16) - This rhythm is choppy

• 01:35:569 (21,22,23,24,25) - flow is strange

• 01:43:333 (42) - remember to nc also

Good luck!

Zyl

520 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

Zyl 2016-03-16T03:34:02+00:00

Yoratama wrote:
Here's my promise, but not to much mod from me
SPOILER
EASY
02:22:863 (5) - NC Fixed
00:55:333 (6) - NCFixed
02:07:333 (4,5) - Make a spinner Meh
HARD
00:22:863 (3) - Change to spinner? or long slider, it weird with repeat slider. I think it will be a sudden change so, nope
00:52:333 - Add circle or make like 01:03:451 (1,2) - Fixed
01:53:039 - Same ^Fixed
02:01:510 - ^Fixed
02:45:275 - ^Fixed
02:48:098 - ^ but make it stacked i think.Fixed
02:59:392 - ^Fixed
03:02:216 - ^Fixed
01:45:980 - Miss 1 note here.Fixed
Hope it helped, im not good at this XD

Also, do u still working GD on my map? how many % have u finished? Sorry I do not mean to force you to finish quickly. i just want to know the progress XD

Daniel

54 posts

Joined November 2012

Daniel 2016-03-16T10:36:58+00:00

squirrelpascals wrote:
mods

daniel extra
• HP is waay too strict and gives little to no leeway (this is visible in the intro, how much it fluctuates even when hitting notes perfect). Try hp 6 rather than 7 Done

• 00:29:922 (6) - nc here? Map needs updating*

• 00:32:745 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23) - Maybe split up this stream with an nc or two? One at 00:34:157 (15) - works done at (15)

• 00:42:628 (5) - nc here? From here just be aware of where you can add ncs that provide hp boosts done

• 01:25:686 (1) - remove nc oops done

• 01:31:863 (7,8,9,10,11,12) - Overlap of 7 and 12 is strange Map needs updating*

• 01:38:569 (2,1) - blanket Map needs updating*

• 01:41:922 (1,4) - stack? Map needs updating*

• 02:10:863 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - use smaller ds? hmmm I will think about this, probably will later

• 02:13:333 (3,5) - overlap looks strange moved it slightly

• 02:31:333 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34,35,36,37,38,39) - I know, I said that I wouldn't talk about ncs anymore, but this has to be shortened yeah not finished

• 02:40:157 (4,5) - make this a slider? will think about it

• 02:42:628 - Finish map :D

Yeah this was still very unfinished

*Isn't on my latest version of the map

Thanks for modding!

A d r i a n

92 posts

Joined May 2013

A d r i a n 2016-03-16T19:16:33+00:00

yo! M4M From #modreq
Lets do this xD
[Hiiro's Insane]

00:19:333 (1) - leave same combo
00:20:039 (2) - NC
00:22:863 (4) - NC
00:25:686 (3) - NC
00:27:804 (1) - leave same combo
00:28:510 (2) - NC
00:31:333 (3) - NC
00:36:980 (6) - NC
00:41:216 (9) - NC
00:41:392 (1) - NC on red tick? wat 00:42:628 (5) - better NC here
00:43:157 (1) - ^ same 00:44:039 (4) - NC
00:44:569 (1) - NC on red tick again xD
00:45:451 (6) - NC and i think you cant start the stream here if you want to give emphasis after nc
00:55:333 (3) - NC
00:56:569 (1) - NC on red tick not again...
01:01:157 (1) - ^
01:00:980 (6) - NC
from 01:07:510 (1) - to 01:22:157 (1) - ^ there are a lot or similar cases check it
01:23:569 (3) - NC
01:26:392 (3) - NC
01:32:569 (1,2) - i think these notes are not necessary, delete, and dont change the combo
01:43:333 (7) - NC
01:48:980 (7) - okay no more "NC" just try to put NCs on big white ticks this makes the strongest parts more noticeable
03:03:275 (7,1,2,3,5) - stack
Thats all... i think xD this map is nice! good luck!

Mekki

Mekki 2016-03-19T01:02:54+00:00

Cutie IRC ♥

20:58 Trent83: Hi can you help me with a GD
20:58 Trent83: ?
21:30 MkGuh: hey
21:30 MkGuh: yeah sure whats up
21:32 Trent83: ok thanks let me a second xDD
21:33 MkGuh: XD
21:33 *Trent83 is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/927400 UNDEAD CORPORATION - Karakurenai feat. Ranko]
21:33 Trent83: there you go :3
21:34 MkGuh: which diff you need help and on what? XD
21:34 Trent83: anything you want
21:34 Trent83: fell free to do anything you want
21:34 MkGuh: ?
21:35 MkGuh: you don't want a help in a especific thing then
21:35 MkGuh: you want a mod
21:35 MkGuh: X
21:35 MkGuh: XD
21:36 Trent83: yes
21:36 Trent83: DiffxMod? xDD
21:40 Trent83: What i will mod?
21:41 MkGuh: Overall the main problem on your easy is the low readability in a lot of parts
21:41 Trent83: hmm i see
21:42 MkGuh: i can do a irc mod if you want
21:42 MkGuh: telling what you can improve
21:42 MkGuh: do you mind it?
21:44 Trent83: yes
21:44 Trent83: it will be great
21:44 MkGuh: normal is pretty well done
21:44 MkGuh: let's go to easy first
21:46 Trent83: yeah i loved the normal
21:46 Trent83: k
21:48 MkGuh: the main problem on your diff is the double reversed sliders ;S
21:48 Trent83: here
21:48 MkGuh: they will for sure make beginners confused
21:48 Trent83: 00:49:686 (1) - This?
21:48 MkGuh: they don't have such as fast hability to read reverses that fast especially on this bpm
21:48 MkGuh: exactly
21:48 MkGuh: first: they don't fit song at all
21:48 Trent83: hmm i see
21:49 MkGuh: second: they are completely confusing for beginners
21:49 MkGuh: i'd recommend you change all of them tbh ;l
21:49 MkGuh: 00:41:216 (1,2,3) - tbh, this part is pretty questionable
21:49 MkGuh: like, it fits song well
21:49 MkGuh: and since you used it constant
21:49 MkGuh: i guess it won't be a problem
21:49 MkGuh: but well
21:50 MkGuh: there are so many more interest rhythm that you could create behind those sliders

21:50 Trent83: ok
21:50 MkGuh: 00:46:157 (1) - remove nc here
21:50 MkGuh: 00:46:863 (2) - add it here XD and remove here 00:47:569 (1) -
21:50 Trent83: some guy say me ther NC xDD
21:51 MkGuh: 00:53:216 (2,3,4) - pretty bad flow here, the way that you make players direct the mouse to go to (4) is very bad
21:51 Trent83: ok
21:51 MkGuh: http://puu.sh/nLBFD/3b7408e363.jpg
21:51 MkGuh: something like that should be fine
21:53 MkGuh: 0ther problem is the way that you placed curved sliders through your map
21:53 MkGuh: it doesn't seems fine
21:53 Trent83: k let me change it
21:53 Trent83: hmm i see
21:53 MkGuh: in my view it seems that you just placed them randomly in some parts
21:53 MkGuh: look
21:53 MkGuh: 01:22:157 (1,2,3) -
21:53 MkGuh: this one is pretty much same thing about flow
21:53 MkGuh: and the placement of the sliders and it's direction
21:54 MkGuh: makes a veyr bad flow :L
21:54 Trent83: oh ok i see it
21:54 MkGuh: improving your blankets in a lot of parts would solve a bit of those visual problems that are bad too
21:54 MkGuh: 01:24:980 (1,2) - like here XD
21:55 Trent83: yeah i only copy and pasted xDD
21:55 MkGuh: moving a bit the anchors
21:55 Trent83: http://puu.sh/nLBRP/4dcf047b1d.jpg like this?
21:55 MkGuh: you could create a very good blanket
21:55 MkGuh: look
21:55 MkGuh: [http://puu.sh/nLBU2/8a995ae9c5.jpg tchadam! pretty new blanket here :3]
21:55 MkGuh: yeah
21:55 MkGuh: the way you suggested is way better
21:56 Trent83: oh i see yeah its pretty good
21:56 MkGuh: lemme give you a tip too
21:56 MkGuh: that's not a real problem
21:56 MkGuh: but there aren't just curved shapes XD
21:56 MkGuh: you could make a mix with a lot of sliders and notes
21:57 MkGuh: it'd create a better flow than just curved sliders through map
21:57 Trent83: i dont understand it xDD
21:57 MkGuh: 01:22:157 (1,2,3,4,5) - for this whole part
21:57 Trent83: nevermind i understand right now xDD
21:57 MkGuh: look at what you could have did
21:58 MkGuh: http://puu.sh/nLC3h/12b3ec1d86.jpg
21:58 MkGuh: rhythm
21:58 MkGuh: http://puu.sh/nLC52/3a8384fd7f.jpg
21:58 MkGuh: patterning
21:58 MkGuh: btw
21:58 MkGuh: (5) is a slider
21:58 MkGuh: XD
21:58 Trent83: xDD
21:58 MkGuh: something like that looks fine for a easy
21:58 MkGuh: and brings variation to the player
21:58 MkGuh: not really variation
21:58 MkGuh: idk how to say
21:58 Trent83: hmm i see
21:59 MkGuh: uhm...
21:59 MkGuh: idk
21:59 MkGuh: it just seems better
21:59 Trent83: xDD
21:59 MkGuh: XD
21:59 Trent83: jaja xDD
21:59 MkGuh: well
21:59 MkGuh: it's not a bad diff
21:59 MkGuh: just improve what I've said
22:00 MkGuh: about reversed sliders
22:00 MkGuh: patterning
22:00 MkGuh: etc
22:00 MkGuh: rhythm except those reversed sliders is pretty fine

22:00 MkGuh: after you fix things
22:00 MkGuh: you can call me for a recheck
22:01 MkGuh: since there isn't much i could point right now since idk how you fix things XD
22:01 Trent83: oh thanks
22:01 Trent83: xDD
22:01 MkGuh: lemme post log, you can kudosu me and then we continue to next mods
22:01 MkGuh: diffs*
2016-03-18 22:03 Trent83: done
2016-03-18 22:04 MkGuh: already fixed things on easy??????
2016-03-18 22:05 Trent83: fixing xDD
2016-03-18 22:10 Trent83: 01:39:098 (1,2,3,4) - this part is good?
2016-03-18 22:11 MkGuh: lemm se
2016-03-18 22:11 Trent83: k thanks
2016-03-18 22:11 MkGuh: yes
2016-03-18 22:11 MkGuh: it seems fine in song
2016-03-18 22:11 Trent83: k
2016-03-18 22:11 Trent83: i will fix more xDD
2016-03-18 22:11 MkGuh: otherwise of those parts
2016-03-18 22:11 MkGuh: all other doubled reverses
2016-03-18 22:11 MkGuh: seems bad
2016-03-18 22:11 MkGuh: XD
2016-03-18 22:11 MkGuh: ACTION runs*
2016-03-18 22:12 Trent83: jaja xDD
2016-03-18 22:12 Trent83: yes i will fix it
2016-03-18 22:12 MkGuh: 00:41:216 (1,2,3,4) - except here too
2016-03-18 22:12 MkGuh: here is nice
2016-03-18 22:12 Trent83: when the vocal repeats 4 times
2016-03-18 22:12 Trent83: that is the perfect time, right? xDD
2016-03-18 22:12 MkGuh: where?

2016-03-18 22:13 Trent83: i am saying xDD
2016-03-18 22:13 Trent83: 00:35:569 (1) - hmm here?
2016-03-18 22:15 MkGuh: wait
2016-03-18 22:16 Trent83: K
2016-03-18 22:16 MkGuh: this reverse is fine XD
2016-03-18 22:16 Trent83: i only wanna be sure xDD
2016-03-18 22:16 MkGuh: i'm saying about double ones
2016-03-18 22:16 Trent83: ok
2016-03-18 22:16 Trent83: thanks
2016-03-18 22:29 MkGuh: i'll have to go
2016-03-18 22:29 MkGuh: bye
2016-03-18 22:29 MkGuh: :>
2016-03-18 22:29 Trent83: K see ya
2016-03-18 22:29 Trent83: thanks for help

AudioBC

26 posts

Joined April 2011

AudioBC 2016-03-20T22:31:21+00:00

Hai o/ Small mod
Nanners' Oni / [-Matt-] & Nanners Collab
General

- Check AirMod stuff (Letterboxing/Slider Spd)

- Try to avoid using different hitsounds on the timing points since this will cause conflict on the map itself such as "soundless" notes during some parts of the map for ex: 01:44:745 or 02:42:628 ( I would personally stick to the same sample set like Normal or Soft throught the entire map, also i think the drum sampleset tends to glitch sometimes in the taiko maps )

Nanners' Oni

00:46:863: finish perphaps?
01:27:451 to 01:28:863: dkdkd
01:30:275 to 01:31:333: dkdk
02:36:363: d
02:36:451: k
02:36:804: d
02:36:892: d
02:55:686: k
02:56:039: d
03:01:686: k
The map feels good overall c:

Thats it for now gl!

wajinshu

1,579 posts

Joined April 2015

wajinshu 2016-03-21T16:59:59+00:00

[Beginner]
00:16:510 (2,1) - blanket
00:21:451 (3) - stack with the slider end 00:18:628 (2) - ?
01:02:392 (4,1) - blanket
01:08:039 (4) - maybe slider?
01:23:569 (2) - clap
01:26:392 (2) - ^^
01:29:216 (2) -
02:05:922 (5) - touch hp bar
02:51:098 (1) - ^^
02:18:628 (1) - why whistle here you use clap 02:20:039 (2) -
02:25:686 (1) - and this too
02:42:628 (3) - NC strong
[Easy]
00:41:216 (1,2,3) - 01:39:098 (1,2,3) - not sure about this reverse in easy
01:19:333 (5) - NC
01:43:333 (4) - finish
01:45:451 (3,4) - 1,0 ds please
02:28:510 (5) - NC
gl

Zyl

520 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

Zyl 2016-03-22T01:13:58+00:00

wajinshu wrote:
[Beginner]
00:16:510 (2,1) - blanket Fixed
00:21:451 (3) - stack with the slider end 00:18:628 (2) - ? nope i evrerytime evade stacks in easy or beginner diffs
01:02:392 (4,1) - blanket Fixed
01:08:039 (4) - maybe slider? nope i wanna evade that kind of things in begginer diffs
01:23:569 (2) - clap Fixed
01:26:392 (2) - ^^ Fixed
01:29:216 (2) - Fixed
02:05:922 (5) - touch hp bar Fixed
02:51:098 (1) - ^^ Fixed
02:18:628 (1) - why whistle here you use clap 02:20:039 (2) - Fixed
02:25:686 (1) - and this too Fixed
02:42:628 (3) - NC strong Fixed
[Easy]
00:41:216 (1,2,3) - 01:39:098 (1,2,3) - not sure about this reverse in easy Accords with the song so... xDD
01:19:333 (5) - NC Fixed
01:43:333 (4) - finish meh
01:45:451 (3,4) - 1,0 ds pleaseFixed, i think xDD
02:28:510 (5) - NC Fixed
gl

thanks for mod!

Nanners

117 posts

Joined August 2010

Nanners 2016-03-22T03:34:39+00:00

Zaid wrote:
Hai o/ Small mod
Nanners' Oni / [-Matt-] & Nanners Collab
General

- Check AirMod stuff (Letterboxing/Slider Spd)

- Try to avoid using different hitsounds on the timing points since this will cause conflict on the map itself such as "soundless" notes during some parts of the map for ex: 01:44:745 or 02:42:628 ( I would personally stick to the same sample set like Normal or Soft throught the entire map, also i think the drum sampleset tends to glitch sometimes in the taiko maps ) Yeah I forgot to change it to default after making my oni. Changed it to match the oni~

Nanners' Oni

00:46:863: finish perphaps? - I tried putting a finisher but it doesnt seem to match the part of the song and its beat, so I put a d, originally I shouldve had it there before, but forgot to add it when I did the collab.
01:27:451 to 01:28:863: dkdkd - To me the way I had it sounded better with the beat of the song, however I did change it to your suggestion due to it sounding slightly better in a way.
01:30:275 to 01:31:333: dkdk - I didnt entirely use what you suggested, I did change the ending your suggestion, however, I changed the beginning to K k since it sounded better with the upbeat part
02:36:363: d - Didn't add because if you listen to the beat at the suggested time the d wouldnt fit with the beat.
02:36:451: k - d fits better IMO
02:36:804: d - ^ same reason
02:36:892: d - Same reason as the first d at 02:36:451, adding a d here wouldnt fit with the beat and make it awkward to play, I've tested it to and doesn't fit with the song.
02:55:686: k - Again doesn't with the beat, since the beat isnt higher pitched, sounds better as a d
02:56:039: d - Changed to your suggestion, does fit better with d
03:01:686: k - ^ again changed it for the same reason, fits better
The map feels good overall c: - Glad to hear it feels good~ Sorry for not using ALL suggestions, just the certain ones you posted dont fit IMO, however if anyone else who mods complains and asks to change then I will.

Thats it for now gl! - Thanks for the mod though! And for reminding me to change a few things xD

Assassin

59 posts

Joined August 2015

Assassin 2016-03-22T03:50:16+00:00

On the insane diff

00:44:039 (9) - NO

2014 map unrankable \:D/

[Hiiro Sakaki]

278 posts

Joined January 2013

[Hiiro Sakaki] 2016-03-22T17:33:52+00:00

A d r i a n wrote:
yo! M4M From #modreq
Lets do this xD
[Hiiro's Insane]
00:19:333 (1) - leave same combo
00:20:039 (2) - NC
00:22:863 (4) - NC
00:25:686 (3) - NC
00:27:804 (1) - leave same combo
00:28:510 (2) - NC
00:31:333 (3) - NC
00:36:980 (6) - NC
00:41:216 (9) - NC
00:41:392 (1) - NC on red tick? wat 00:42:628 (5) - better NC here
00:43:157 (1) - ^ same 00:44:039 (4) - NC
00:44:569 (1) - NC on red tick again xD
00:45:451 (6) - NC and i think you cant start the stream here if you want to give emphasis after nc
00:55:333 (3) - NC
00:56:569 (1) - NC on red tick not again...
01:01:157 (1) - ^
01:00:980 (6) - NC
from 01:07:510 (1) - to 01:22:157 (1) - ^ there are a lot or similar cases check it
01:23:569 (3) - NC
01:26:392 (3) - NC
01:32:569 (1,2) - i think these notes are not necessary, delete, and dont change the combo Applied
01:43:333 (7) - NC
01:48:980 (7) - okay no more "NC" just try to put NCs on big white ticks this makes the strongest parts more noticeable
03:03:275 (7,1,2,3,5) - stack Fixed
Thats all... i think xD this map is nice! good luck!

I fixed all the NC!

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TitleUnicode:からくれない feat. ランコ
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ArtistUnicode:UNDEAD CORPORATION
Creator:Trent83
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344,348,174275,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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56,232,175686,2,0,P|120:272|172:272,1,93.0000007095337
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Last edited by [Hiiro Sakaki] 2016-03-22T21:26:15+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Renumi

907 posts

Joined July 2012

Renumi 2016-03-22T21:10:45+00:00

4 kd for you bby

Zyl

520 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

Zyl 2016-03-22T21:29:44+00:00

Renigar wrote:
4 kd for you bby

\(;u;)/ thank you so fucking much babe!

Renumi

907 posts

Joined July 2012

Renumi 2016-03-22T21:35:48+00:00

npnpnpnpnp welcomeeeeeeeee babe :3

~~i was gonna make a gd but meh~~

ill leave a mod when everythings done and officially ready for modding =w=/ gl

Last edited by Renumi 2016-03-23T10:12:41+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Zyl

520 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

Zyl 2016-03-22T21:38:11+00:00

Renigar wrote:
npnpnpnpnp welcomeeeeeeeee babe :3

ill leave a mod when everythings done and officially ready for modding =w=/ gl

Yay! and again thank you so fucking much!!

Spork Lover

727 posts

Joined October 2013

Spork Lover 2016-03-22T23:00:43+00:00

Yo, you told me to mod Insane, Hiiros insane and Beginner, so here we go <3

BEFORE YOU READ THE MOD:
Reading the colour coding explains the importance of said suggestion or necessity.

COLOURS:

Color coding

Importance:
Red = Unrankable if unchanged
Black = Normal Suggestion
Blue = Strong Suggestion
Pink = Comment

Beginner

00:21:451 (3) - Why is this not a perfect overlap with 00:18:628 (2) - 's slider end?
00:44:039 (4) - NC
00:46:157 (1) - Remove NC
01:40:510 (3,4,5,6) - There should be an NC somewhere here, preferably 3.

01:44:039 (1) - Remove NC
01:44:745 (2) - Start of chorus, needs NC.
01:55:333 (1) - Remove NC
01:56:039 (2) - NC (Main beat)
02:00:275 (1) - Remove NC
02:01:686 (2) - NC

Hiiro's Insane

00:33:186 (2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - I know that you want a diff spike, but it feels overmapped. You should highly consider doing something else here. There isn't really anything in the song that allows a stream.
00:35:216 (5) - Make this into two single taps. Being able to actually click on the big white beat feels better.

00:35:745 - From here to 00:44:039 - you should rework the slider timing placements (On the timeline). 1) Place sliders on white beats. 2) Consider not ending a section with a slider like here: 00:35:745 (1,2,3). Generally, you should just rework this section. Experiment, try new things, and you'll improve over time! I know it :3
00:52:510 (3) - NC
00:52:157 (1) - Remove NC (This isn't the main beat, 00:52:510 (3) - is)
01:10:863 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5) - This needs slider reworking as well. You feel better at mapping peaks in songs. Especially the 3-combo sliders don't feel emphasized in any way, and that's a problem for playability. :3
01:28:510 (3,4,5,6,7) - This is an example of GOOD slider placement, good job

.
01:32:569 - Add a note here, feels empty

01:32:392 (1) - Remove NC
01:32:745 (2) - NC
01:36:275 (1,2) - Start this pattern with a slider instead.
02:25:863 (2,3,4,5,6) - Alternating sliders like this only works on 3/4 maps, but this is 4/4, so 1 slider + 2 notes or 4 notes or 2 sliders is the best way to go.
02:47:922 (1) - Remove NC
02:48:275 (3) - NC, it's the main beat

02:50:745 (4,5,1) - Space this waaaay more.
03:02:039 (3) - Make a clickable note on the big white beat instead.

Insane

00:32:745 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Just like on Hiiro's map, I'm a biiiit scared that this stream will not work out if this is going for rank. >.<
00:38:392 (1,2,3,4,5) - The pace slowed down way too much, you should make some 1/2 beats!
00:45:451 (10) - NC
00:46:157 (1) - Remove NC
00:46:863 (3) - NC, start of chorus, waaay too important.
00:49:333 (1) - Remove NC
00:49:686 (3) - NC
00:52:157 (1) - Remove NC
00:52:510 (2) - NC
(There are a lot more of these, NC the big white beat, and not the pattern placement. It gets more confusing like that. ^^)
00:58:157 - From here to 01:08:039 you shouldn't switch hitsound samples. Instead you should just increase the volume.

01:16:157 (1) - Remove NC
01:16:510 (2) - NC
^ More main beat issues
I won't comment more on NC's, you should find the rest, 'cause it'll help you with improving your consistency with them

01:30:628 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Another stream that I don't think is rankable, nothing emphasizes this.
02:04:510 (3) - All the finishes in this chorus are not really present in the previous choruses. There shouldn't be a difference tbh :3

Aight, I think I'll stop the mod here for now. Now I'll give some more general advice for future maps:

Distance Snap:
A feature that gets overlooked in insane and higher diffs. It is a tool that makes you able to create consistent patterns, which I tend to feel is lacking a bit.

Use DS on "normal" sections, and turn it off for jumps and/or other emphasized beats!

Blankets, and other aesthetics:
A thing that I think you should add more of is blankets and other aesthetics. They are very important in order to give your map a nice touch and more flowy pattern. An example of a good blanket could be to create a slider, that then has a jump, and then ANOTHER jump that jumps into a blanket with the slider. Those patterns are sometimes overlooked, but do a whole lot for the mapset!

Final words:
I didn't check all the diffs, but the diffs I DID check could use some work imo. I hope that the small tips I gave throughout the mod will be helpful for you, and that you will use them for future maps and mapsets. Try to apply them to a decent extent, and try to just generally make the map pretty ^^. Good luck in the future with the mapset!

If you found my mod helpful, please consider dropping a kudosu my way and giving me some feedback so I can improve! Thanks in advance

Spork~

Zyl

520 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

Zyl 2016-03-22T23:24:58+00:00

Spork Lover wrote:
Yo, you told me to mod Insane, Hiiros insane and Beginner, so here we go <3

BEFORE YOU READ THE MOD:
Reading the colour coding explains the importance of said suggestion or necessity.

COLOURS:
Color coding
Importance:
Red = Unrankable if unchanged
Black = Normal Suggestion
Blue = Strong Suggestion
Pink = Comment

Beginner
00:21:451 (3) - Why is this not a perfect overlap with 00:18:628 (2) - 's slider end? Cause Ds in 1,1 and i can't overlap there and i haaaaate overlap xDD
00:44:039 (4) - NC Fixed
00:46:157 (1) - Remove NC Fixed
01:40:510 (3,4,5,6) - There should be an NC somewhere here, preferably 3. Fixed
01:44:039 (1) - Remove NC Fixed
01:44:745 (2) - Start of chorus, needs NC. Fixed, i don't know why that combo is there xDD
01:55:333 (1) - Remove NC Fixed
01:56:039 (2) - NC (Main beat) Fixed
02:00:275 (1) - Remove NC Fixed
02:01:686 (2) - NC Fixed

Insane
00:32:745 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Just like on Hiiro's map, I'm a biiiit scared that this stream will not work out if this is going for rank. >.< Fixed
00:38:392 (1,2,3,4,5) - The pace slowed down way too much, you should make some 1/2 beats! Don't comfortable with this
00:45:451 (10) - NC Fixed
00:46:157 (1) - Remove NC Fixed
00:46:863 (3) - NC, start of chorus, waaay too important. Fixed
00:49:333 (1) - Remove NC
00:49:686 (3) - NC Fixed
00:52:157 (1) - Remove NC Fixed
00:52:510 (2) - NC[/color]
(There are a lot more of these, NC the big white beat, and not the pattern placement. It gets more confusing like that. ^^)
00:58:157 - From here to 01:08:039 you shouldn't switch hitsound samples. Instead you should just increase the volume.
Fixed
01:16:157 (1) - Remove NC Fixed
01:16:510 (2) - NC Fixed
^ More main beat issues
I won't comment more on NC's, you should find the rest, 'cause it'll help you with improving your consistency with them
01:30:628 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Another stream that I don't think is rankable, nothing emphasizes this Fixed
02:04:510 (3) - All the finishes in this chorus are not really present in the previous choruses. There shouldn't be a difference tbh :3 Fixed

Aight, I think I'll stop the mod here for now. Now I'll give some more general advice for future maps:

Distance Snap:
A feature that gets overlooked in insane and higher diffs. It is a tool that makes you able to create consistent patterns, which I tend to feel is lacking a bit.
Use DS on "normal" sections, and turn it off for jumps and/or other emphasized beats!

Blankets, and other aesthetics:
A thing that I think you should add more of is blankets and other aesthetics. They are very important in order to give your map a nice touch and more flowy pattern. An example of a good blanket could be to create a slider, that then has a jump, and then ANOTHER jump that jumps into a blanket with the slider. Those patterns are sometimes overlooked, but do a whole lot for the mapset!

Final words:
I didn't check all the diffs, but the diffs I DID check could use some work imo. I hope that the small tips I gave throughout the mod will be helpful for you, and that you will use them for future maps and mapsets. Try to apply them to a decent extent, and try to just generally make the map pretty ^^. Good luck in the future with the mapset!

If you found my mod helpful, please consider dropping a kudosu my way and giving me some feedback so I can improve! Thanks in advance

Spork~

thanks for all the feedbakc and the mod thank you so much!!

[Hiiro Sakaki]

278 posts

Joined January 2013

[Hiiro Sakaki] 2016-03-23T22:41:58+00:00

Mod Answer Color Code :
Applied
Applied but...
Need discussion, not applied, but not Refused (PM me for those please)
Refused

Spork Lover wrote:
Yo, you told me to mod Insane, Hiiros insane and Beginner, so here we go <3

BEFORE YOU READ THE MOD:
Reading the colour coding explains the importance of said suggestion or necessity.

COLOURS:
Color coding
Importance:
Red = Unrankable if unchanged
Black = Normal Suggestion
Blue = Strong Suggestion
Pink = Comment

Hiiro's Insane
00:33:186 (2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - I know that you want a diff spike, but it feels overmapped. You should highly consider doing something else here. There isn't really anything in the song that allows a stream. I can tell for sure something's wrong with that stream, but I keep hearing a 1/4 drums there, so I can't really know what to do
00:35:216 (5) - Make this into two single taps. Being able to actually click on the big white beat feels better. Applied, and fixed the NC on the red tick
00:35:745 - From here to 00:44:039 - you should rework the slider timing placements (On the timeline). 1) Place sliders on white beats. 2) Consider not ending a section with a slider like here: 00:35:745 (1,2,3). Generally, you should just rework this section. Experiment, try new things, and you'll improve over time! I know it :3 Aaaaaah, every sliders are on red ticks ;w; Applied
00:52:510 (3) - NC Applied
00:52:157 (1) - Remove NC (This isn't the main beat, 00:52:510 (3) - is) Applied
01:10:863 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5) - This needs slider reworking as well. You feel better at mapping peaks in songs. Especially the 3-combo sliders don't feel emphasized in any way, and that's a problem for playability. :3 That's the whole point ! You just finished the kiai, so I'm giving the player a "not as hard as kiai" part to recover stamina and HP. The alternance slider/circle is to allow the player to rest, and I don't feel like anything need to emphasized in this part
01:28:510 (3,4,5,6,7) - This is an example of GOOD slider placement, good job . Thanks !
01:32:569 - Add a note here, feels empty Ghosty note tho...
01:32:392 (1) - Remove NC Fixed with NC below
01:32:745 (2) - NC
01:36:275 (1,2) - Start this pattern with a slider instead. Applied
02:25:863 (2,3,4,5,6) - Alternating sliders like this only works on 3/4 maps, but this is 4/4, so 1 slider + 2 notes or 4 notes or 2 sliders is the best way to go. I don't get why it's wrong, it sounds pretty nice to me. Do you mind explaining a bit please? ^w^
02:47:922 (1) - Remove NC Fixed + Below
02:48:275 (3) - NC, it's the main beat
02:50:745 (4,5,1) - Space this waaaay more. Applied
03:02:039 (3) - Make a clickable note on the big white beat instead. Applied

Spork~

Thanks for the mod !!

New .osu

osu file format v14

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 46157
Countdown: 0
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Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
StoryFireInFront: 0
EpilepsyWarning: 1
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[Metadata]
Title:Karakurenai feat. Ranko
TitleUnicode:からくれない feat. ランコ
Artist:UNDEAD CORPORATION
ArtistUnicode:UNDEAD CORPORATION
Creator:Trent83
Version:Hiiro's Insane
Source:東方Project
Tags:Touhou toho complete box Comiket85 特 SPECIAL Yuugi Hoshiguma subterranean animism buta-otome 豚乙女 パインツリー Pinetree chireiden Crimson zun team shanghai alice パイン Dannine Dann9 MokouSmoke [HiiroSakaki] HiiroSakaki Daniel Nanners [-Matt-] -Matt- Matt Ppus Trent83 trent83 taiko Storyboard Firstmap 1stmap
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BeatmapSetID:425723

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:1.2
SliderTickRate:1

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[Hiiro Sakaki]

278 posts

Joined January 2013

[Hiiro Sakaki] 2016-03-23T23:10:03+00:00

EDIT : After some IRC with Spork, we fixed some stuff !

Thanks Spork !

osu file format v14

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Hibari_Yagyu

397 posts

Joined August 2013

Hibari_Yagyu 2016-03-24T15:18:46+00:00

MOD
(No es un gran moddeo, solo estoy resaltando los problemas basicos)

Beginner

¡El final del objeto no está ajustado! 02:47:567
El Kiai está activado por menos de 15 segundos. 00:58:157
El Kiai está activado por menos de 15 segundos. 01:56:039
El Kiai está activado por menos de 15 segundos. 02:53:922
El letterboxing hace conflicto con la dificultad Daniel's Extra.
El letterboxing hace conflicto con la dificultad Dann's Normal.
Las etiquetas están causando un conflicto en la dificultad Daniel's Extra.
Las etiquetas están causando un conflicto en la dificultad Dann's Normal.

Easy

El Kiai está activado por menos de 15 segundos. 00:58:157
El Kiai está activado por menos de 15 segundos. 01:56:039
El Kiai está activado por menos de 15 segundos. 02:53:922
Las etiquetas están causando un conflicto en la dificultad Daniel's Extra.
El letterboxing hace conflicto con la dificultad Daniel's Extra.
Las etiquetas están causando un conflicto en la dificultad Dann's Normal.
El letterboxing hace conflicto con la dificultad Dann's Normal.

Dann's Normal

Hard

Insane

El Kiai está activado por menos de 15 segundos. 00:58:157
El Kiai está activado por menos de 15 segundos. 01:56:039
El Kiai está activado por menos de 15 segundos. 02:53:922
Las etiquetas están causando un conflicto en la dificultad [-Matt-] & Nanners Collab.
El letterboxing hace conflicto con la dificultad [-Matt-] & Nanners Collab.
Las etiquetas están causando un conflicto en la dificultad Beginner.
El letterboxing hace conflicto con la dificultad Beginner.
Las etiquetas están causando un conflicto en la dificultad Collab.
El letterboxing hace conflicto con la dificultad Collab.
Las etiquetas están causando un conflicto en la dificultad Easy.
El letterboxing hace conflicto con la dificultad Easy.
Las etiquetas están causando un conflicto en la dificultad Hard.
El letterboxing hace conflicto con la dificultad Hard.
Las etiquetas están causando un conflicto en la dificultad Hiiro's Insane.
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Las etiquetas están causando un conflicto en la dificultad Insane.
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Las etiquetas están causando un conflicto en la dificultad MokouSmoke's Normal.
El letterboxing hace conflicto con la dificultad MokouSmoke's Normal.
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Zyl

520 posts

Joined October 2013

Topic Starter

Zyl 2016-03-24T19:53:41+00:00

[ K a e d e ] wrote:
MOD
(No es un gran moddeo, solo estoy resaltando los problemas basicos) Tranquilo aun asi sirve, si no fuera por este mod paso del aimod y no corrijo eso xDDD

Beginner
¡El final del objeto no está ajustado! 02:47:567 Fixed
El Kiai está activado por menos de 15 segundos. 00:58:157 Esto ya es intencional ya que en una parte del kiai se calma la cancion
El Kiai está activado por menos de 15 segundos. 01:56:039 Esto ya es intencional ya que en una parte del kiai se calma la cancion
El Kiai está activado por menos de 15 segundos. 02:53:922 Esto ya es intencional ya que en una parte del kiai se calma la cancion
El letterboxing hace conflicto con la dificultad Daniel's Extra. Fixed
El letterboxing hace conflicto con la dificultad Dann's Normal. Fixed
Las etiquetas están causando un conflicto en la dificultad Daniel's Extra. Fixed
Las etiquetas están causando un conflicto en la dificultad Dann's Normal. Fixed
Easy
El Kiai está activado por menos de 15 segundos. 00:58:157 intencional
El Kiai está activado por menos de 15 segundos. 01:56:039intencional
El Kiai está activado por menos de 15 segundos. 02:53:922intencional
Las etiquetas están causando un conflicto en la dificultad Daniel's Extra. Fixed
El letterboxing hace conflicto con la dificultad Daniel's Extra. Fixed
Las etiquetas están causando un conflicto en la dificultad Dann's Normal. Fixed
El letterboxing hace conflicto con la dificultad Dann's Normal. Fixed
Hard

ya la cuestion de tanto problema de DS es por jump y eso xDD

Insane
El Kiai está activado por menos de 15 segundos. 00:58:157 Asi ta guapo
El Kiai está activado por menos de 15 segundos. 01:56:039Asi ta guapo
El Kiai está activado por menos de 15 segundos. 02:53:922Asi ta guapo
Las etiquetas están causando un conflicto en la dificultad [-Matt-] & Nanners Collab.
El letterboxing hace conflicto con la dificultad [-Matt-] & Nanners Collab.
Las etiquetas están causando un conflicto en la dificultad Beginner.
El letterboxing hace conflicto con la dificultad Beginner.
Las etiquetas están causando un conflicto en la dificultad Collab.
El letterboxing hace conflicto con la dificultad Collab.
Las etiquetas están causando un conflicto en la dificultad Easy.
El letterboxing hace conflicto con la dificultad Easy.
Las etiquetas están causando un conflicto en la dificultad Hard.
El letterboxing hace conflicto con la dificultad Hard.
Las etiquetas están causando un conflicto en la dificultad Hiiro's Insane.
El letterboxing hace conflicto con la dificultad Hiiro's Insane.
Las etiquetas están causando un conflicto en la dificultad Insane.
El letterboxing hace conflicto con la dificultad Insane.
Las etiquetas están causando un conflicto en la dificultad MokouSmoke's Normal.
El letterboxing hace conflicto con la dificultad MokouSmoke's Normal.
Las etiquetas están causando un conflicto en la dificultad Nanners' Oni.
El letterboxing hace conflicto con la dificultad Nanners' Oni.
A todo esto fixed, aun que no me sale nada en el aimod sobre eso pero ya me fije gracias

gracias por el mod basico, si no me dices literal esto no lo veo ni de narices xDD asi que gracias por fijarte en eso y comunicarmelo

Hibari_Yagyu

397 posts

Joined August 2013

Hibari_Yagyu 2016-03-24T21:23:48+00:00

Trent83 wrote:
[ K a e d e ] wrote:
MOD
(No es un gran moddeo, solo estoy resaltando los problemas basicos) Tranquilo aun asi sirve, si no fuera por este mod paso del aimod y no corrijo eso xDDD

Beginner
¡El final del objeto no está ajustado! 02:47:567 Fixed
El Kiai está activado por menos de 15 segundos. 00:58:157 Esto ya es intencional ya que en una parte del kiai se calma la cancion
El Kiai está activado por menos de 15 segundos. 01:56:039 Esto ya es intencional ya que en una parte del kiai se calma la cancion
El Kiai está activado por menos de 15 segundos. 02:53:922 Esto ya es intencional ya que en una parte del kiai se calma la cancion
El letterboxing hace conflicto con la dificultad Daniel's Extra. Fixed
El letterboxing hace conflicto con la dificultad Dann's Normal. Fixed
Las etiquetas están causando un conflicto en la dificultad Daniel's Extra. Fixed
Las etiquetas están causando un conflicto en la dificultad Dann's Normal. Fixed
Easy
El Kiai está activado por menos de 15 segundos. 00:58:157 intencional
El Kiai está activado por menos de 15 segundos. 01:56:039intencional
El Kiai está activado por menos de 15 segundos. 02:53:922intencional
Las etiquetas están causando un conflicto en la dificultad Daniel's Extra. Fixed
El letterboxing hace conflicto con la dificultad Daniel's Extra. Fixed
Las etiquetas están causando un conflicto en la dificultad Dann's Normal. Fixed
El letterboxing hace conflicto con la dificultad Dann's Normal. Fixed
Hard

ya la cuestion de tanto problema de DS es por jump y eso xDD

Insane
El Kiai está activado por menos de 15 segundos. 00:58:157 Asi ta guapo
El Kiai está activado por menos de 15 segundos. 01:56:039Asi ta guapo
El Kiai está activado por menos de 15 segundos. 02:53:922Asi ta guapo
Las etiquetas están causando un conflicto en la dificultad [-Matt-] & Nanners Collab.
El letterboxing hace conflicto con la dificultad [-Matt-] & Nanners Collab.
Las etiquetas están causando un conflicto en la dificultad Beginner.
El letterboxing hace conflicto con la dificultad Beginner.
Las etiquetas están causando un conflicto en la dificultad Collab.
El letterboxing hace conflicto con la dificultad Collab.
Las etiquetas están causando un conflicto en la dificultad Easy.
El letterboxing hace conflicto con la dificultad Easy.
Las etiquetas están causando un conflicto en la dificultad Hard.
El letterboxing hace conflicto con la dificultad Hard.
Las etiquetas están causando un conflicto en la dificultad Hiiro's Insane.
El letterboxing hace conflicto con la dificultad Hiiro's Insane.
Las etiquetas están causando un conflicto en la dificultad Insane.
El letterboxing hace conflicto con la dificultad Insane.
Las etiquetas están causando un conflicto en la dificultad MokouSmoke's Normal.
El letterboxing hace conflicto con la dificultad MokouSmoke's Normal.
Las etiquetas están causando un conflicto en la dificultad Nanners' Oni.
El letterboxing hace conflicto con la dificultad Nanners' Oni.
A todo esto fixed, aun que no me sale nada en el aimod sobre eso pero ya me fije gracias
gracias por el mod basico, si no me dices literal esto no lo veo ni de narices xDD asi que gracias por fijarte en eso y comunicarmelo

Jaja, de nada bro

Vespirit

350 posts

Joined December 2014

Vespirit 2016-03-25T00:27:11+00:00

hello, here is the m4m mod, sorry it took so long

didn't mod insane or hiiro's insane because you told me not to, and I see collab is not finished so I didn't mod it either
and also I cant mod taiko because of lack of experience :/

[General]

there are some differentiating tags in the diffs. for rankability, tags must be consistent throughout all diffs

[

Beginner]

00:24:275 (2) - anchor point not well centered, try to focus on the middle slider tick
00:28:510 (2) - ^
01:06:628 (3,4) - just because a spinner is next does not mean to abandon flow completely. you shouldn't point this up into the corner like you did
01:08:745 - should map for another 2/1 beat, then start the spinner at the large white tick, should still be a long enough spinner
02:06:628 (1) - ^
03:04:510 (1) - ^
01:16:157 (1) - I think you would benefit from taking out this spinner altogether. as it is the break is really short and without the spinner would make it 7 seconds, which is alright
02:14:039 (1) - ^
01:41:922 (2,3,4,5) - 4 circles in a row in a beginner diff? it may be a bit hard for unexperienced players to follow, because you need to be more accurate on a circle
02:18:628 (1) - this slider is unneeded, its not part of the section after the break. if you decided to take out the spinner before it then this would need to go as well
02:46:863 (2) - why all of a sudden make this slider different?

[

Easy]

00:41:216 (1,2,3) - this isn't too bad, but you should always avoid double reverse sliders because of how hard they are to see coming. happens often throughout the diff, so if you decide to fix, be aware of that
01:08:745 (1) - take off the finish, it doesn't sound very good imo
01:16:157 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - like I said in beginner diff, this doesn't have to be mapped because longer breaks are always better in lower diffs
02:14:039 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^

[

MokouSmoke's Normal]

01:16:510 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - normals as well, should have longer breaks, so same thing I said in the previous 2 diffs
02:14:392 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - ^
02:25:686 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 12 circles in a row, probably not fit for a normal diff. might want to make it a bit easier

[

Dann's Normal]

lots of parts of this diff don't fit the music well at all imo, what I mean is 1/2 notes in weird places and such. think you should go through your map and fix which red ticks you decided to map
some slider ends are not snapped, check aimod
00:18:628 (6,7) - why not make these the same slider?
00:27:098 (5) - same double reverse thing from easy diff
01:02:392 (1) - ^
02:00:275 (3) - ^
00:44:039 (1,1) - too little spinner recovery time, if you are gonna do a spinner it should end at the large white tick before anyways
01:32:039 (1) - another recovery time problem, but this time I think you can just get rid of the spinner and map the gap
02:52:510 (1) - ^
01:39:098 (2,3) - weird overlap
02:46:863 (4,5) - ^ (not as bad tho)
01:49:686 (5) - should click on the end of this imo
02:11:569 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - able to take this section out, because you didn't map on the other break either. plus as I said in the other diffs I think it works better without

[

Hard]

first of all, the thing I notice most is that its mapped like a normal. the only thing that makes it 3 stars is a few streams that are more for insane diffs. I think you should remap and this time focus on mainly 1/2 mapping and the occasional triple. sorry but I don't think this is rankable as a hard.

[

Daniel's Extra]

01:20:216 (6) - why is the end not clickable? I think instead of doing the circle before this, you should do it after, so that (6) starts on 01:20:039 and (5) starts on 01:20:392.
01:44:039 (6,7,8,9) - don't think these should be touching, space them out more
02:10:863 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - stream should only be 1/4 not 1/6

That's all, good luck with rank and thanks for m4m

Crowie

osu!artist

328 posts

Joined August 2015

Crowie 2016-03-25T02:55:17+00:00

I can tell none of my mods are going to get accepted but mod for the kudosu I guess :/

[Insane]

General:
1) some combos are a bit long, don't be afraid to use shorter combos (<5)
2) emphasis is lacking on STRONG beats and music, like beginning of a line of lyrics, drums, places where you have a clap-finish, etc. you can space these notes out or make a NC
example for strong music:

00:15:804 (8)
00:34:157 (8)
00:40:863 (6)
00:48:275 (7)
00:55:333 (3)
00:58:157 (5) etc...you get it right? guess not.

00:33:451 (6,7) - this part could use a stream
00:34:157 (8) - strong music here, could use some emphasis like larger spacing
00:35:216 (1) - starting here until kiai, I won't argue with your intentions or whatever, but this part is a bit undermapped :/
00:44:039 (1) - this spinner doesn't fit here very well but oh well do what you want. I suggest to replace with 1/2 jumps
00:46:863 (1,2) - this spacing is extremely misleading. people will assume that 00:47:216 (2,3,4) ect are also 1/1 spaced. make it larger
00:56:039 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - this stream does not fit with the music, instead change to a triple and jump like so:
also put a NC somewhere in there
01:10:157 (12) - NC
01:12:628 (8) - make a separate note on that big white tick. I though you said yourself to not end sliders on white ticks? :/
01:13:333 (2,3,4) - bad overlap, something good would be to stack 4 under the end of 2
01:15:098 (8,9,10) - spacing too small and misleading
01:16:510 (1) - meh slider, the shape is fine, but delete the red points
01:19:157 (5,6,7) - a triple does not fit here, change to 2 notes. also NC on 7
01:30:628 (1) - spinner doesn't really fit here, but that's up to you :/
01:33:451 (2) - 1. what is this slider? 2. separate it to several sliders like the next section:
01:35:922 (5,6,7,8) - spacing too large for this part of music, a stacked or more concentrated stream would work better
01:51:098 (4,5,6,7) - spacing too small
01:56:745 (8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - stream does not fit, change to a triple and a series of jumps and put an NC in the beginning or somewhere
01:59:569 (7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - ^
02:05:039 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - make bigger jumps
02:08:039 (9) - NC
02:14:392 (2) - this slider...meh :/
02:22:863 (9) - NC
02:25:422 (2,3,4) - DS is off, you shouldn't do that for a mini stream like that
02:29:745 (1,2) - bad spacing, make it equal
02:36:980 (1) - it's possible to put a spinner here
02:44:039 (10) - NC
03:03:628 (10,11,1) - larger spacing, preferrably same as previous jumps

[Hiiro's Insane]
General: not aesthetically pleasing, but I do enjoy playing maps like these

00:23:746 (3,4,5) - I hear nothing that should sound like a triple here
00:34:863 (9) - NC
00:44:039 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1) - d-decelerating? kinda hard to get to the stream here
00:52:510 (1,2) - reverse it: 1 into a slider and 2 a single note, like 00:55:157 (2,3)
01:00:980 (1,2) - slider
01:03:804 (1,2) - ^
01:21:010 (2,1) -
make like this?
01:38:392 (3) - either stack it under the sliderhead or bring it out from under the slider, it's really hard to read
01:55:333 (1,2,1) - that's messed up...make the triple separate
02:56:745 (1,2) - slider

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