1. Easy (1,39 stars, 87 notes)
2. Hard (2,91 stars, 212 notes)
3. Insane (3,81 stars, 285 notes)
4. Normal (1,73 stars, 122 notes)
5. Shad0w1and's Phantom (4,68 stars, 406 notes)

Siiilver wrote:

RMSOrion wrote:

The approach on Hard is faster than most 4 or 4.5 star maps...

I really do not think so , I seen many Hard maps with AR 7-8, but I will go down to 7.5

Sorry if you do not understand me, I'm not speak english - Traductor google -

RMSOrion wrote:

It feels great now! With the large jumps the previous approach rate just felt generally bad imo. It feels much more in line now. Thanks!

1. The bitrate for .mp3 is 229 kb/s, which is above the maximum of 192 kb/s. Generally this is an unrankable issue so you must convert it somehow.

1. 00:47:026 (1,2) - 01:11:330 (1,2) - 01:23:862 (3,4) .
2. 00:12:849 (2,1,2,3,4,1) - Why did you use 1.0 DS on this part? You should keep a constant DS in Easy so I strongly recommend you to use 1.1 DS here.
3. 00:15:887 (4,1) - Try blanket this, like what you did here 00:12:849 (2,1) .
4. 00:17:406 (2,3) - 00:18:925 (4,1) - I won't spam any more, hope you get what I'm trying to get across. Blanket in a nice place and time will make your map much more appealing.
5. Try to mainly stick on white/red ticks when you're mapping Easy/Normal. Also sometimes it's easier to stick on instruments than vocals, like this part for example 00:50:444 (1,2,3,4) . You can just simply put that reverse on the white tick here 00:51:203 to match the drums. You will notice that drums will land on most white ticks, drum is the one of the most easiest instruments to follow for beginners so make sure you keep on track with that. (If you can't here the drum, try listen to the song with 25% speed, that will help a lot)
6. 01:23:862 (3) - Try avoid putting objects near the life bar please.
7. Downbeats should be clickable so it'll become easier to follow the rhythm.

1. Please make your spacing consistent with DS. The spacing in this diff are pretty messed up, try to recheck and fix them all. After you fixed all that you can call me for a remod.

octaforce wrote:

Hello Siiilver
I want to make another extra difficulty for your map.
Can I??

Siiilver wrote:

octaforce

octaforce wrote:

Thank you!!
I'll upload it within a week.

Okay >u<

Kazuki

-Kazuki- wrote:

00:17:216 - you skipped a circle here

00:17:311 - same here

00:25:191 - 00:28:798 - 00:37:343 - 00:49:495 - you're missing circles there

00:51:298 - remove this circle

;w;

Difficulty? xD

Siiilver wrote:

Thanks, Updated :3

EDIT: New MP3 and diff, Re-download please

Wou wrote:

Siiilver wrote:

Thanks, Updated :3

EDIT: New MP3 and diff, Re-download please

Are you need a video ?

1. You have many wrong end snapped in Easy,Normal,Hard,Insane,World and a little in octaforce's diff, check it in AiMod or press ( Ctrl + Shift + A )
   
   
   
   [Easy]
   
   
   1. 00:12:180 (1) - change this note to this
   2. 00:12:940 (2,1) - Please fix the blanket like this
   3. 00:19:016 (4,1) - Try to blanket this note Image
   4. 00:38:003 (1,2) - Like i say, fix the blanket
   5. 00:52:434 (4,5) - ^
      Just that, but please fix the wrong end snapped note

1. 00:15:598 (1,2,3) - Overlap look less good
2. 00:16:168 (3) - Try end snap to 00:16:359 - then add some note here 00:16:549 -
3. 00:18:446 (2) - Wrong end snapped, try to change end here 00:18:637 -
4. 00:19:301 (4) - Wrong snapped object, move to 00:19:397 - fix the wrongly snapped end at the same then
5. 00:42:560 (4) - Too out of the grid
   
   
6. 00:59:650 (1) - Try begin spin to 00:59:460 - fix the end snapped at the same then
7. 01:05:535 (1) - Miss some note of the vocal here 01:05:726 -

1. Replay : Link
2. SS : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4418899
3. 00:22:813 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1) - Actually note like this is very exhausting, So that's makes me a little edgy..
   00:59:269 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - would be more relaxed if like this

Wou wrote:

[General]

1. You have many wrong end snapped in Easy,Normal,Hard,Insane,World and a little in octaforce's diff, check it in AiMod or press ( Ctrl + Shift + A ) Fixed Easy, Normal, Hard, Insane and World.
   
   
   
   [Easy]
   
   
   1. 00:12:180 (1) - change this note to this Fixed.
   2. 00:12:940 (2,1) - Please fix the blanket like this Fixed.
   3. 00:19:016 (4,1) - Try to blanket this note Image Fixed.
   4. 00:38:003 (1,2) - Like i say, fix the blanket Fixed.
   5. 00:52:434 (4,5) - ^ Fixed.
      Just that, but please fix the wrong end snapped note

[Normal]

1. 00:15:598 (1,2,3) - Overlap look less good Fixed.
2. 00:16:168 (3) - Try end snap to 00:16:359 - then add some note here 00:16:549 - Fixed.
3. 00:18:446 (2) - Wrong end snapped, try to change end here 00:18:637 - Fixed.
4. 00:19:301 (4) - Wrong snapped object, move to 00:19:397 - fix the wrongly snapped end at the same then Fixed.
5. 00:42:560 (4) - Too out of the grid Fixed.
   
   
6. 00:59:650 (1) - Try begin spin to 00:59:460 - fix the end snapped at the same then Fixed.
7. 01:05:535 (1) - Miss some note of the vocal here 01:05:726 -

Fixed.

[Insane]

1. Replay : Link
2. SS : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4418899
3. 00:22:813 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1) - Actually note like this is very exhausting, So that's makes me a little edgy..
   00:59:269 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - would be more relaxed if like this

Fixed.

Just that,
Don't forget to fix wrongly snapped

Bukkake Blast wrote:

From #modreqs
1st mod ever so sorry if its not that helpful Don't worry c:

Overall

01:18:827 (1,2) - I'd check your sliders, when they are placed like this http://puu.sh/mNHvQ/802893c6ea.jpg they end up looking kinda sloppy. If you use rotate or flip you can just make perfect mirrors that look nice pretty easily, slider blankets are another way to make sliders look neat especially in lower difficulties. Also try not to switch from mapping vocals to instruments too abruptly. Okay, Fixed Hard and Insane.

World

00:17:307 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - It sounds like this is a seven note stream rather than 1 space 5 . Fixed.
00:18:921 (2,3,4,5) - #2 Sounds off, I'd use two triples here, I think it sounds more accurate Ex. http://puu.sh/mNGsi/50d8217cc2.jpg Fixed.
00:25:283 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Sounds off, to get it to match the engine sound I think you have to double the bpm. I don't think so.
00:27:751 (4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - You go from mapping the vocals to instruments pretty abruptly, sounds kinda awkward. I think it's okay xD
01:12:940 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Not sure what you are mapping to here. It is what I hear, Fixed.

Insane

00:17:307 (6,1,2,3) - Same as World Fixed.
00:19:207 (1,2,3) - Same as World Fixed.
00:51:580 (4,1) - Why not just expand the repeater Fixed.
00:52:244 (2,3,4,5) - Sounds like its missing stuff, maybe fill it in Fixed.

Hard

00:28:415 (6) - I can't tell what this is mapped to Fixed.
00:31:643 (6) - Same as above Fixed.
00:50:535 (2,3) - I'd add a note here Fixed.
01:09:902 (2,3) - Consider placing these differently, plays kinda awkward as is. Fixed.

Normal+Easy

Ive never mapped Normal/Easy so I'll leave this to people who are better at it Don't worry

Maybe its just me but the offset seems kinda off.
Sorry if its not that helpful

Dyl-Byl wrote:

Hi! From My Queue!

[General]
Timing:

Delete the second timing point as those two are on the same offset.
Delete in Hard, Insane and World (Easy and Normal is for slider's speed)

[Easy]
00:27:181 (2) - Please don't use 1/4 in easy diffs. Fixed.
00:29:649 (4) - ^ Fixed.
00:32:118 (1) - This slider doesn't look right. Fixed.
00:48:637 (3) - Please don't use 1/4 in easy diffs. Fixed.
01:25:094 (4) - Add spinner or whatever after this. No, I think it's okay

Good luck with the map. Thanks!

DesuNuts wrote:

First mod so I hope this was helpful >.<
From #modreqs

Normal

00:36:485 (3) - Add a note on the white tick/line after this, would make the map fit the music more IMO Fixed.
00:28:130 (5,6) - Move the notes to 27:941 and 28:131 respectively? Again, fits the music better Okay, Fixed~

Hard

Mostly of these are just making it fit the music better
00:17:307 (2) - Remove this note Fixed.
and 00:17:498 (3) - Move this slider's start point to where it was but keep the end point the same, something like this : No.
00:21:959 (2) - Move this note to 21:856 and add one more note at 22:055 Fixed.
00:51:580 (4) - Move this slider to 51:485 Fixed.

Insane

I didn't see much problems with this, well done but I think you could make the spacing between the streams smaller? Would make it less frustrating for people playing Insanes but just my opinion Thanks! :3

World

00:12:181 (1) - shouldn't be a new combo Fixed.
00:12:940 (2) - new combo here Fixed.
00:26:991 (4) and 00:27:560 (3) - should be removed, it's overmapped Fixed.
00:34:396 (4) - remove this, overmapped Fixed.
00:35:536 (1) - remove Fixed.
00:36:105 (4) - remove Fixed.

That's all I could do, like I said, first time modding so I hope this was helpful
I had fun playing this mapset, good luck with it! Thanks!!

Acnos wrote:

Cuando lo aprobaran?? lo espero con ansias

__Ag wrote:

hi，sorry,Im late

Hard

00:09:332 (1,2) - its in hard diff I think too difficult,change to slider? Fixed.
00:25:377 (4) - unsnap,try it,http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4563755 Fixed.
00:28:321 (5) - its too bad temp Fixed.
00:51:485 (4) - its too bad temp,like thishttp://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4563788 Fixed.
00:59:934 (5) - unsnap,like thishttp://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4563797 Nop.

insane

00:09:428 - you missed drumbeat on here Fixed.
00:19:207 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - too bad temp,nothing on 00:19:302 - and00:19:681 - ,then you missed voice on the00:19:492 - Fixed.
00:22:814 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1) - why are you made this stream style in insane diff???? Fixed?
00:25:377 (4) - unsnap Fixed.
00:40:472 (7) - so bad Fixed.
00:51:485 (1) - ..... You. Didn't. See. Anything. (Fixed.)

I think you should make maps be more efforts

AIBat v3.1 wrote:

[General]

Background
naked dive.jpg is 1302x738, which differs from the recommended size of 1024x768.
world bg.png is 1366x768, which differs from the recommended size of 1024x768.

[Insane]

Snapping
00:22:623 (5) - Unsnapped circle.
01:09:332 (6) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
01:09:332 (6) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:13:699 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:20:915 (5) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
01:20:915 (5) - Unsnapped slider (end).

Kyle Y wrote:

SPOILER

21:21 Kyle Y: hi(?
21:21 Siiilver: Hi :3
21:22 *Kyle Y is playing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/878217 SCREEN mode - Naked Dive [Insane]]
21:22 Kyle Y: I am keep trying playing on it..
21:23 Kyle Y: seems not suitable for me to play..
21:24 Siiilver: oh
21:24 Kyle Y: maybe it is becasue of my ability
21:25 Kyle Y: could you mind to play it once?
21:25 Kyle Y: Insane diff
21:27 Kyle Y: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4585573
21:27 Kyle Y: are you free to have a in-game modding?
21:28 Siiilver: yes
21:28 Kyle Y: which diff you think it is the worst, except World diff
21:29 Kyle Y: I cannot mod expert diff
21:30 Siiilver: Insane
21:30 Kyle Y: could you mind I only mod one diff?
21:31 Siiilver: No problem ^^
21:31 Kyle Y: okay let start
21:31 *Kyle Y is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/878217 SCREEN mode - Naked Dive [Insane]]
21:32 Siiilver: Okay~
21:32 Kyle Y: you want me to say something harsh or kind words?
21:33 Siiilver: harsh
21:33 Kyle Y: then don;t cry
21:34 Siiilver: okay
21:35 Kyle Y: becasue some mapper said I am only comment on their map and then bit me
21:35 Kyle Y: slap me
21:36 Kyle Y: I think offset -15ms sth like that
21:37 Siiilver: okay
21:37 Kyle Y: then I use new timing (-15 ms one )
21:38 Kyle Y: when I play this map once, I just feel I am clicking circle and sliding, but seems not like playing the song
21:38 Kyle Y: I think the most seriours problem is about the pattern you use
21:39 Kyle Y: rhythm seems not a big deal
21:39 Kyle Y: btw SV you use is higher than normal
21:40 Kyle Y: you used 1.4 x1.5 =2.1 SV but normally 1.6~1.8, it is not unrankable, but only for convention
21:40 Kyle Y: if you planned to remap you map, just consider to lower a little bit
21:40 Kyle Y: fast is not equal to difficult
21:40 Kyle Y: I don't know if you agree to it or not
21:43 Kyle Y: 00:10:173 - you missed this sound seems weird feeling
21:43 Kyle Y: 00:08:654 - this also
21:44 Siiilver: fixed
21:45 Kyle Y: if you listen to the music very carefully, it is full of 1/4 sound
21:45 Kyle Y: http://puu.sh/nhhk6/8c45945cb9.jpg
21:46 Kyle Y: 00:07:609 (1) - also, 3/4 extented suggested
21:48 Siiilver: Fixed
21:48 Kyle Y: btw, you can reject my modding, just provide your reason is okay
21:48 Kyle Y: 00:12:166 - you suddently spaced out this circle, not quite common in Insane diff but Expert
21:48 Kyle Y: at least I never read a map like you, or maybe seldom?
21:49 Kyle Y: I mean, like this note
21:50 Kyle Y: 00:10:646 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I also worry about this pattern, becasue stream jump is not that common also, but slider jump is okay
21:51 Kyle Y: you use a high ds for the stream (1.0) and I think it is not quite suitable here, becasue if you use that high ds stream, unless you want to emphasis it a lot, or expert diff, otherwise I think better avoid using it imo
21:54 Kyle Y: 00:15:204 - slider end like this I will avoid using slider end, unless you intend to use it, becasue slider end usually contain a strong beat, which suitable for clickable objects
21:54 Kyle Y: 00:15:204 - for this, I suggested you can ctrl+g 00:14:444 (4,5,6) - this rhythm, it is totally the same in term of sound, but different feeling
21:54 Kyle Y: you can try it later on
21:56 Kyle Y: 00:15:394 - for this circle, I think a little bit extra, of course you can keep it, but imo, removing it and use a 1/1 slider on 00:15:204 - is more suitable for the song
21:57 Kyle Y: 00:16:722 (1,2,3,4,5) - still ds too high
21:57 Kyle Y: I think here also nothing special to emphasis a lot
21:58 Kyle Y: I just leave a question for you, do you like using extented slider (3/4 beat slider)
22:00 Kyle Y: 00:19:761 - if you like, you can use this rhythm: http://puu.sh/nhi0a/d22819a930.jpg
22:01 Kyle Y: btw, if you like to use extented slider, you need to have lots improve on patterns also, and extented slider is not liked by every player
22:02 Kyle Y: am I go too fast?
22:04 Kyle Y: btw, you are fixing while I am talking?
22:04 Siiilver: i'm too slow xD
22:04 Kyle Y: um... in-game modding not assume for you to fix it now
22:05 Kyle Y: intended to see if you agree to the modding and giving responses
22:05 Kyle Y: it is aimed to know if you agree or not and raise question if you not sure about that modding
22:07 Siiilver: it's my bad english more than anything
22:09 Kyle Y: Language just for communiate, if I understand, then it is enough
22:11 Siiilver: i understand
22:11 Kyle Y: from 00:19:761 - to 00:36:470 - It is only pattern problem, I am not point it out here
22:11 Kyle Y: just find another modder, I cannot point all the modding to you, just leave some kudosu to next modder
22:12 Kyle Y: 00:36:470 - again, slider end problem
22:12 Kyle Y: 00:37:230 - also, check if you missed any sound
22:14 Kyle Y: you just have a lot of slider end problem, I think you can check it on your won?
22:14 Kyle Y: own*
22:15 Siiilver: yes
22:16 Kyle Y: 00:59:920 (8,1) - stream jump, also avoid in Insane but you can use in expert
22:16 Kyle Y: 01:01:628 - check missing sound? stream sound here if my ear is fine
22:18 Kyle Y: pattern here is like this http://puu.sh/nhiKj/ae6b65aea6.jpg
22:19 Kyle Y: 01:02:293 - 01:08:369 - this 2 rhythm is similar
22:19 Kyle Y: if you are not sure about it, you can try to use same rhythm
22:19 Kyle Y: 01:13:684 (3) - unsnapped end
22:20 Kyle Y: 01:14:445 (1) - 1/1 slider is more suitable for feeling, I cannot further explain this for you, casue it is all about experience
22:20 Kyle Y: like http://puu.sh/nhiRQ/cd3f83e7c0.jpg
22:21 Kyle Y: 01:24:128 (3) - this slider off-screen, this one really unrankable
22:21 Kyle Y: check ailmod (ctrl+shift+a)
22:23 Kyle Y: any question?
22:23 Siiilver: no
22:24 Siiilver: all fixed
22:26 Kyle Y: anymore want to ask?
22:26 Kyle Y: maybe I can only tell you just as stated above, casue even if those problem, you need to fix a lot
22:27 Kyle Y: usually this problem not only appear in one single diff, just check the other diff also
22:28 Siiilver: okay, i'll check
22:29 Kyle Y: if you all okay about it, then I will pose it on forum for kudos

WazZzaA123 wrote:

[World]
00:13:700 (1) - Add finish to the start (maybe at the end ? you check for yourself)
00:19:776 (1) - Add finish to the start
00:22:814 (1) - Finish
00:24:333 (5) - ^
00:31:927 (8) - ^
00:36:484 (1,2,3) - ^
00:44:079 (1) - ^
00:48:636 (1,2,3) - ^
00:56:042 (1) - Finish at the end
00:59:269 (1) - Finish
01:00:789 (1) - Finish at the start
01:01:169 (2,3) - Finish
01:08:383 (1) - ^
01:12:941 (1) - 01:13:321 (4) - 01:13:511 (6) - ^
01:14:460 (1) - Finish at the start
01:20:536 (1) - Finish
01:23:574 (1) - Finish at the start
01:25:093 (3,4,5) - Finish

I was about to mod it like a normal mod but I saw that you needed Hitsounds so I did that for you \:D/

AIBat v3.1 wrote:

[General]

Background
naked dive.jpg is 1302x738, which differs from the recommended size of 1024x768.
world bg.png is 1366x768, which differs from the recommended size of 1024x768.

[Insane]

Snapping
00:22:623 (5) - Unsnapped circle.
01:09:332 (6) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
01:09:332 (6) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:13:699 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:20:915 (5) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
01:20:915 (5) - Unsnapped slider (end).

If you want I can do the rest of the Hitsounds just pm

Kroytz wrote:

~

World

General: Don't replace soft-hitnormal with a custom because personally, I don't think it sounds any good to do that lol. People rarely rarely replace soft-hitnormals (the only exception I see is within DnB tbh). This song doesn't need a soft-hitnormal replacement. Just let it be how it is -w- Okay~
Why change BG for this diff? I don't think this BG fits well with this song. The other BG is a little better I suppose but even then I don't think it's all that great. But definitely not the one for this diff >< You uncomfortable? If so I can change.

00:08:559 (5) - This slider goes over two very strong beats over 00:08:654 - and 00:08:749 - that should be clickable instead, not ignored. You do it with 00:09:887 (5) - Fixed.

00:09:128 - Strong missing downbeat click. Fixed.

00:09:413 - Another drum clickable beat. I'd probably use kick sliders instead of flat doubles and place the loose-end circles (the ones on blue ticks) on top of the sliders so it's not awkward. Fixed.

00:10:173 - There's also this beat that's very strong that should also be clickable (make like a double with the slider). Fixed.

00:10:647 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - These stream jumps are completely unnecessary because nowhere in the song does it accentuate these two notes 00:11:217 (1,1) - and if what you're trying to do is make a sort of buildup, just start off with low DS and slowly increase or use an equal DS because it's more comfortable for the player. But definitely not stream jumping especially this large.. Fixed.

00:14:635 (6,7) - red tick sliders are very uncomfortable to the player/rhythm. (7)'s slider-end shouldn't end on the downbeat of the new measure either because it makes those next beats underwhelming to the song. Also the clap at the end of (6) doesn't sound good to begin with. You could turn (6) into a triple + slider at white tick and remove (7) and that'll fit the rhythm okay. Then you can have a clickable circle/slider at the downbeat. Fixed.

00:15:583 (1) - I'd personally make this into a slider just because the music treats this sound differently. It also just 'sounds' like it'd be associated with a slider ;p Fixed.

00:15:869 - strong beat over here. The triple should start on the (2) not the (3). Lol, Fixed xD

00:18:621 (7) - Don't think this needs NC since the other streams didn't NC their stream ending circles. Then you could NC this 00:18:812 (1) - but that's also weird too because it's red-tick in the middle of the measure so I'm not exactly sure but I'd just remove NC on the stream end circle to keep with the same pattern as you've done before. Fixed (00:18:812)

00:21:280 (9) - NC because new measure. 00:21:660 (1) - remove NC Fixed.

00:21:945 (2) - Synth beat is strong here that should be clicked. Fixed.

00:22:799 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - Same as before with the huge problematic stream jumping for no apparent reason. You stream jump to accentuate technical shifts in the song but again, 00:23:369 (1,1) - those beats have nothing to emphasize so it feels very random and a difficulty spike that shouldn't exist. Fixed.

00:24:318 (5) - NC for readability and also because on downbeat. Fixed.

00:25:268 (1,2,3) - This isn't in 1/4 but in 1/6. Double-repeating slider works best to capture it. Then 00:25:552 - is overmapped to no existing beat. Fixed.

00:25:837 (5) - NC and remove 00:26:027 (1) - that NC. Fixed.

00:26:027 (1) - Better to create as a triple + slider to hit the blue-tick beat and also because red-tick sliders are the devil. then you can remove 00:26:407 (2) - and turn it into a circle or slider on the white tick 00:26:597 - Fixed.

00:26:977 (4) - Strong clickable beat here that gets ignored shouldn't be ignored. Fixed.

00:27:356 (2) - NC Fixed.

00:27:641 - Another click-able beat. Make like a double with the following slider and it's all g Fixed.

00:28:021 - Another one. Fixed.

00:28:401 (4,1) - Stream jump doesn't need to exist here either. The music is quite weak here also, so if you wanted streams or whatever (which I don't think is the right way to go on quiet verses) make them short DS'd. You could also make triple+kicks to get all the beats in too and if they're not so spaced out from each other, it gives a good feel for the song in terms of intensity. Fixed.

00:28:874 (5) - NC on the fookin' downbeatsssss. I won't mention these again because they're all over the place but yeah just, NC on all your downbeats and your life will be that much easier. xDDDD Fixed.

00:29:065 (1) - Also contains a beat inside the blue tick so if you followed my other suggestion, then do it with this one and every other similar rhythm that the song offers with this particular beat. Fixed.

00:34:382 - try to hit this beat because there is an instrument and there is a vocal here. it's weird to ignore it like you did. Fixed.

00:35:900 (2) - I'd rather this be a kick slider so that it hits the next blue ticked beat as well. Fixed.

00:36:091 - from this beat, there HAS to be a stream of 5 notes because the music demands it so much so don't ignore that!! Fixed.

00:42:356 (1,2) - red tick sliders noooooo the claps were sounding good on clickable white beats but then the clap occurs at the slider-end so pls no ;; Fixed.

00:44:635 (5) - red tick sliders maaan. I won't mention these either because there's just WAY too much lol. I know for this one you're trying to follow the vocal but if you wanted to follow the vocal, make it a triple so the slider can start on the red tick. Personally, I find it very hard to utilize red-tick sliders properly unless the song has a continual shift in regard to rhythm where you can use the red tick and place the weak white tick on the slider-end but music like that rarely comes up. It's just almost always better to start the sliders on white ticks. And following vocals > drums or other instruments is pretty weak unless the instruments are completely drowned out. Fixed.

00:55:458 (4) - I'm pretty sure there's a stream thingy going on within these beats. Fixed.

00:56:027 (1) - See like this NEEDS to have a clickable downbeat. Fixed.

00:59:254 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1) - Same deal as I've mentioned before. Fixed.

01:01:154 (2) - This should be on the former blue tick. Otherwise, it's snapped to nothing in the music. Fixed.

01:01:628 - Beat here should be part of the stream. Long streams starting on red ticks is awkward tbh. Fixed.

01:23:559 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - This whole measure is asking for streams man. Triples+kicks and ending with a long stream is what I'd do to increase intensity for the climaxing end of the song. Fixed?

01:25:837 - I wouldn't end the song just yet. I know you're trying to create an effect by ending on the vocals but the last strong beats start on this beat and end on the next measure and then finishing the song there would create a better effect than ending on the vocals that don't complete the measure. It's awkward to end on half a stride, just finish the rest of the stride (in this case the new measure) and you're good to go. Fixed.

I didn't really go much about patterning (99% of this mod was in regards to rhythm) because rhythm I feel is the most important thing to grasp when making a beatmap (because this is a rhythm game). To offer suggestions for the actual mapping wouldn't be so helpful when the rhythm itself needs to be fixed. And to fix this would mean to replace some sliders/circle stuff without even having me to mention some stuff really.

Good luck~

smsh150 wrote:

Hello!
M4M

General

1. Video is bit late to the music. Fix it by putting Video-offset to -185ms. Fixed.
2. I didn't focus so much on Insane and Extra diff cause I saw more errors in lower diffs. Okay~

Easy

1. 00:13:685 - I think you missed a finish sound here? Fixed.
2. 00:14:444 (2) - You could improve flow by rotating this note bit right. Fixed.
3. 00:15:584 (3) - missing clap sound Fixed.
4. 00:19:761 - Add finish hitsound Fixed.
5. 00:20:141 (1) - remove finish hitsound, since this isn't a right hit on the stroke Fixed.
6. From 00:25:837 - to 00:37:989 - : I would recommend to use some kind of hitsounds in second and fourth hits, for example clap since it's meant for that. Fixed.
7. 00:26:027 (1,2) - Hmmm, I wouldn't recommend to start mapping from red tick, when white ticks are okay here. Replace them so, that they start from 00:25:837 (1,2) - and make (2) longer to fix rhythm. Fixed.
8. 00:32:103 (1) - Same goes here as above. Replace this note so, that it starts at 00:31:913 (1) - and end at 00:33:053 - Fixed.
9. 00:42:926 (4) - blanket would be improved a bit Fixed.
10. 00:50:141 - Missing finish hitsound Fixed.
11. 00:50:901 (2) - Replace this with a cope of 00:51:660 (3) - , and make it CTRL + G and CTRL + H. Then it could look like Fixed.this. To my mind it look better than the current one. Fixed.
12. From 01:02:293 - to 01:25:647 - : I would recommend to use clap hitsound instead of whiles, since it makes the play more rhythmical and whistles in that part are bit lame, tbh. Fixed.
13. 01:12:546 (2,3) - To improve rhythm, you could swap the order of objects: first circle, then slider. It's not really recommended (usually) to end slider at downbeat. Fixed.
14. 01:20:521 - add finish hitsound Fixed.
15. 01:20:901 - delete finish hitsound Fixed.
16. 01:25:078 - add finish hitsound Fixed.

Normal

1. 00:15:584 (1) - Rotate the slider bit right so it would look bit better with (2) and flow would be improved a bit too. Fixed.
2. 00:18:052 (1,2,3,4,5) - Rhythm feels bit off from the music, try this one. Fixed.
3. 00:19:761 - add finish hitsound and delete it from 00:20:141 (1) - Fixed.
4. 00:21:660 - Tbh, you could add finish hitsound here. It fit really nicely here. Try it out! Fixed.
5. 00:26:027 - Using finish hitsound in this play sounds really off the beat! Finish should belong to 00:25:837 - but since you follow vocal, there should not be a finish hitsound. Fixed.
6. From 00:25:837 - to 00:37:989 - : Same about claps here as in Easy diff. Fixed.
7. 00:31:913 - Add finish hitsound and delete it from 00:32:103 - Fixed.
8. 00:59:445 (1) - You could add here finish hitsound. Fixed.
9. 01:01:913 (1) - Delete finish hitsound and if you wanted to, you could add imo clap hitsound here. Fixed.
10. 01:02:293 (1) - Add finish hitsound Fixed.
11. 01:08:558 (3) - Delete finish hitsound and add it to 01:08:369 - Fixed.
12. 01:24:888 (4,5) - This rhythm feels bit unwieldy. I'd improve it by replacing 01:24:888 (4) - with circle and then start slider from 01:25:078 - and reverse it back at 01:25:363 -. Fixed.

Hard

1. 00:07:609 (1) - Missing finish hitsound Fixed.
2. 00:10:647 (6) - I think here should be NC. Don't really see reason why to make combo longer than one stroke. Fixed.
3. 00:12:165 (1) - You could put finish hitsound here, if you want to. Fixed.
4. 00:15:583 (1) - You could put finish hitsound here to improve rhythm. Fixed.
5. 00:17:293 - Somehow it feels so odd to not have a note here. You could put circle here to improve rhythm. Fixed.
6. 00:16:723 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - You are missing all the claps, which there should be. Fixed.
7. 00:21:659 (1) - You could put finish hitsound here to improve rhythm.
8. 00:22:799 (1,2,3) - Rhythm is fine here, but that how you cut those 1/4 slider isn't. In general, people are assume that those are cut to 4 packs, not to 5. This photo is giving you better explanation: http://puu.sh/nl10w/eb96a0e495.jpg . (On Green colour number 1 means that there should be start of the 1/4 reversing slider, 2 and 3 have reverses, and 4 is the end of slider. Things on red colour tells how you have done it now.) Fixed.
9. 00:32:102 (1) - Delete finish and add it to 00:31:913 - Fixed.
10. 00:46:723 - Missing clap hitsound Fixed.
11. 00:49:761 (4,1) - This is bit overmapped. To fix it, you need to shorten slider 00:49:761 (4) - with one reverse, and replace 00:50:235 (1) - to 00:50:141 - . Fixed.
12. 00:55:078 (2) - missing clap here and 00:55:837 - . Fixed.
13. 00:56:597 - missing clap Fixed.
14. 00:57:356 (3) - missing clap Fixed.
15. 00:57:926 (5) - Remove NC. Fixed.
16. 00:59:255 (4) - You need NC here. Fixed.
17. 00:59:255 (4,5) - You have here pretty same problem as at 00:22:799 (1,2,3) -. In general people are assuming that 00:59:255 (4) - slider ends at 00:59:920 - , but you are now ending it at 00:59:825 - which is bit wrong in music theory. To fix this, you need to make 00:59:255 (4) - longer with one reverse, and replace 00:59:920 (5) - to 01:00:015 - and shorten it with one reverse. Fixed, but differently.
18. 01:02:293 - missing finish hitsound Fixed.
19. From 01:02:293 - to 01:25:647 - : Try to use claps always when possible. This music has climax on chorus, and now it sounds bit lame when there isn't almost any claps. Fixed.

Insane

1. I recommend to check your hitsound as I have mentioned in previous diffs'. Fixed.
2. 00:13:116 (2) - You are now mapping some melody that doesn't exist there. Replace this slider with one circle to 00:13:116 - , because there is no melody beats at 00:13:211 - . Fixed.
3. 00:37:419 (6,1) - I expected these objects to have 1/4 intermediate, but it had 1/2. Overlapping them isn't best option here, so I recommend to replace 00:37:988 (1) - or 00:37:420 (6) - to somewhere else. Fixed.
4. 00:49:666 (4) - Start slider at 00:49:761 - . Usually starting sliders from blue tick isn't recommend, especially when there is no melody in blue tick. Fixed.

World

1. I recommend to check your hitsound as I have mentioned in previous diffs'. Fixed.
2. 00:11:406 (9) - you could put NC here, to make stream better to be read. Fixed.
3. 00:13:116 (2) - Same thing as I said in previous diff about melody. ^ Fixed.
4. 00:27:165 (9) - I Highly recommend to replace this circle somewhere than just overlapping it with (8) Fixed.
5. 00:51:755 (4,5) - Delete 00:51:755 (4) - since it's overmapping and you could replace 00:51:850 (5) - bit futher from (3) to make it flow better. Fixed.
6. 01:26:597 - Missing important note here. Put here a circle. Fixed.

Good Luck!!

1. You skipped all the downbeats in the intro in the whole map, modders gonna get mad lol. I don't think it sounds bad though
2. 00:22:798 (1) - Make that spinner finish on 00:24:318 - Would sound way more natural
3. 00:25:837 (1) - Stck on 1/1, that reverse on red tick sounds really off
4. 01:00:774 (1) - The reverse should be on blue tick right? I agree that I'm not sure how's it percieve on easy diff, but it sounds off right now :c

1. 00:34:192 (6) - Object isn't snapped
2. 00:59:445 (1) - Mind the gap http://puu.sh/nmWrd/8191b4e403.jpg

1. 00:13:684 (4) - NC should be here instead of 00:14:064 (1) - for the new rhythm
2. 00:19:760 (4) - ^
3. 00:49:761 (4) - You missed the timing :O http://puu.sh/nmWAY/bae8133d96.jpg
4. 00:50:900 (3) - Rhythm inconstancity with 00:56:977 (2) - I prefer the second one tbh, but well
5. 01:01:154 (2) - Overmapped, just add a reverse on 01:00:774 (1) -
6. 01:05:141 (1) - Overmapped and it makes hide the stronger beat+ vocal
7. 01:06:850 (6,7) - Could improve blanket

1. 00:07:894 - add note, would also fix ds with 00:07:989 (2) -
2. 00:18:528 (6,7) - spacing error
3. 00:21:945 - You map the streams but not the funny burst 00:22:325 - I personally think burst are 100% funnier than streams

1. 01:01:154 (2) - totally off timed, starts on nothing and finish on nothing. The point on the music is here 01:01:344 -

Yales wrote:

[Easy]

1. You skipped all the downbeats in the intro in the whole map, modders gonna get mad lol. I don't think it sounds bad though
2. 00:22:798 (1) - Make that spinner finish on 00:24:318 - Would sound way more natural Fixed.
3. 00:25:837 (1) - Stck on 1/1, that reverse on red tick sounds really off Fixed.
4. 01:00:774 (1) - The reverse should be on blue tick right? I agree that I'm not sure how's it percieve on easy diff, but it sounds off right now :c Mmm... Nop.

[Normal]

1. 00:34:192 (6) - Object isn't snapped Fixed.
2. 00:59:445 (1) - Mind the gap http://puu.sh/nmWrd/8191b4e403.jpg Fixed.

[Hard]

1. 00:13:684 (4) - NC should be here instead of 00:14:064 (1) - for the new rhythm Fixed.
2. 00:19:760 (4) - ^ Fixed.
3. 00:49:761 (4) - You missed the timing :O http://puu.sh/nmWAY/bae8133d96.jpg Looool xDD You didn't see anything
4. 00:50:900 (3) - Rhythm inconstancity with 00:56:977 (2) - I prefer the second one tbh, but well Fixed.
5. 01:01:154 (2) - Overmapped, just add a reverse on 01:00:774 (1) - Fixed.
6. 01:05:141 (1) - Overmapped and it makes hide the stronger beat+ vocal Fixed.
7. 01:06:850 (6,7) - Could improve blanket Fixed.

[Insane]

1. 00:07:894 - add note, would also fix ds with 00:07:989 (2) - Fixed.
2. 00:18:528 (6,7) - spacing error Fixed.
3. 00:21:945 - You map the streams but not the funny burst 00:22:325 - I personally think burst are 100% funnier than streams

[World]

1. 01:01:154 (2) - totally off timed, starts on nothing and finish on nothing. The point on the music is here 01:01:344 - Fixed.

Not checking "World" more in detail though, not my style.

Good luck!
If you have any question feel free to PM me.

uuuget wrote:

Hi,from my modding queue
[World]
00:40:647 (6,7,8) - distance snap? Fixed.
00:52:230 (2,3) - ctrl+g flow better Fixed.
[Hard]
00:16:723 (1,3,4) - can make one more backtracking Nop.
[Normal]
00:10:078 it would be better if there has an object Nop.

Staiken wrote:

I'm not pro modder

Easy :

00:28:496 (4) - You could put a new combo, it could look better for beginner who count 1-2-3-4 1-2-3-4 Fixed.
01:05:331 (5) - " " " " " " Fixed.

That's all D: I did normal and hard too but i didn't find anything else D/

Shyotamaze wrote:

Hi, from my modding queue

General

1. Nothing to say

Insane

1. 00:07:609 (1,2,3) - Looks a bit weird, maybe try to move the slider like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4655879
2. 00:27:165 (1,2) - Fix blanket (nazi)
3. 00:29:255 (2,3) - I don't really understand why 3 is so close to the slider
4. 00:35:140 (1,2,3,4,5) - Maybe make a star
5. 00:38:748 (4,1) - Fix blanket
6. Maybe you could try to have less stacks

World

1. 00:09:888 (3,4) - Make them closer
2. 00:13:116 (2,1) - Collides
3. 00:28:401 (4,1,2) - This direction change might be too brutal, maybe try to make a little curve
4. 00:34:002 (3,5) - This overlap makes it hard to read
5. 00:39:698 (2,3) - Collides
6. 00:57:546 (2,3,4) - Stack 2 with 00:56:976 (4) -
7. 01:05:140 (1,2,3,4,5) - Too much spaced imo decrease the spacing a bit
8. 01:15:773 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
9. 01:19:950 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ rip
10. 01:21:849 (1,2,3) - This one may be fine because it's only a triple but it's still a bit too much spaced imo
11. 01:24:887 (1,2,3) - ^ but after the previous jump (7) it's almost impossible to hit them correclty lol, try to make it flow better

Nice map, some jumps feel a bit random though, try to make some shapes like squares triangles and stuff
Good luck! damn so much baguettes here

Deadmadeon wrote:

Hello, i wish this mod helps
Easy
I think it's fine
Normal
00:10:268 (1) - i think that this slider should be here: 00:10:173 - because you are following the melody No creo, tick azul en normal.
00:52:040 - in this time would be a circle i think Fixed.
00:58:116 - the same Fixed.
Hard
i think is good
Insane
00:10:268 (7) - move this slider to 00:10:173 - Reemplazado por un slider de 00:09:888 (6) - hasta 00:10:173 -
World diificulty it's great :3
an amazing work here xD
PS: Sorry for my bad english :c

[ Koneko-Chan ] wrote:

Just a suggestion, it's completely up to you but the majority of 3 star beat maps have a HP Drain of 5, so I would recommend lowering the 3 star version down one level of HP Drain. Fixed.