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SCREEN mode - Naked Dive (TV Ver.)

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Hazu-
3,881 posts
Joined July 2014
Topic Starter
Hazu-
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on lunes, 30 de enero de 2017 at 13:51:44

Artist: SCREEN mode
Title: Naked Dive (TV Ver.)
Source: 無彩限のファントム・ワールド
Tags: myriad colors musaigen no phantom world opening size shad0w1and
BPM: 158
Filesize: 17562kb
Play Time: 01:25
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1,39 stars, 87 notes)
  2. Hard (2,91 stars, 212 notes)
  3. Insane (3,81 stars, 285 notes)
  4. Normal (1,73 stars, 122 notes)
  5. Shad0w1and's Phantom (4,68 stars, 406 notes)
Download: SCREEN mode - Naked Dive (TV Ver.)
Download: SCREEN mode - Naked Dive (TV Ver.) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Easy - Hazu-
Normal - Hazu-
Hard - Hazu-
Insane - Hazu-
Phantom - Shad0w1and
Video - Shad0w1and
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RMSOrion
2 posts
Joined February 2015
RMSOrion
The approach on Hard is faster than most 4 or 4.5 star maps...
Hazu-
3,881 posts
Joined July 2014
Topic Starter
Hazu-
SPOILER

RMSOrion wrote:

The approach on Hard is faster than most 4 or 4.5 star maps...

I really do not think so , I seen many Hard maps with AR 7-8, but I will go down to 7.5
Sorry if you do not understand me, I'm not speak english :( - Traductor google -

Thanks, Updated :)
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RMSOrion
2 posts
Joined February 2015
RMSOrion

Siiilver wrote:

RMSOrion wrote:

The approach on Hard is faster than most 4 or 4.5 star maps...

I really do not think so , I seen many Hard maps with AR 7-8, but I will go down to 7.5

Sorry if you do not understand me, I'm not speak english :( - Traductor google -
It feels great now! With the large jumps the previous approach rate just felt generally bad imo. It feels much more in line now. Thanks!
Hazu-
3,881 posts
Joined July 2014
Topic Starter
Hazu-

RMSOrion wrote:

It feels great now! With the large jumps the previous approach rate just felt generally bad imo. It feels much more in line now. Thanks!
Thanks for the suggestion :)
Electoz
1,886 posts
Joined May 2015
Electoz
Hi, from my modding queue~ If you have any questions you can ask me in game.

[General]

  1. The bitrate for .mp3 is 229 kb/s, which is above the maximum of 192 kb/s. Generally this is an unrankable issue so you must convert it somehow.
[Easy]

  1. 00:47:026 (1,2) - 01:11:330 (1,2) - 01:23:862 (3,4) .
  2. 00:12:849 (2,1,2,3,4,1) - Why did you use 1.0 DS on this part? You should keep a constant DS in Easy so I strongly recommend you to use 1.1 DS here.
  3. 00:15:887 (4,1) - Try blanket this, like what you did here 00:12:849 (2,1) .
  4. 00:17:406 (2,3) - 00:18:925 (4,1) - I won't spam any more, hope you get what I'm trying to get across. Blanket in a nice place and time will make your map much more appealing.
  5. Try to mainly stick on white/red ticks when you're mapping Easy/Normal. Also sometimes it's easier to stick on instruments than vocals, like this part for example 00:50:444 (1,2,3,4) . You can just simply put that reverse on the white tick here 00:51:203 to match the drums. You will notice that drums will land on most white ticks, drum is the one of the most easiest instruments to follow for beginners so make sure you keep on track with that. (If you can't here the drum, try listen to the song with 25% speed, that will help a lot)
  6. 01:23:862 (3) - Try avoid putting objects near the life bar please.
  7. Downbeats should be clickable so it'll become easier to follow the rhythm.
[Normal]

  1. Please make your spacing consistent with DS. The spacing in this diff are pretty messed up, try to recheck and fix them all. After you fixed all that you can call me for a remod.
Sorry for modding just Easy, cuz I feel like my modding quality has been sub-par lately so I'm not confident with things I pointed out. Good luck~
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Hazu-
3,881 posts
Joined July 2014
Topic Starter
Hazu-
SPOILER

Electoz wrote:

Hi, from my modding queue~ If you have any questions you can ask me in game.

[General]

  1. The bitrate for .mp3 is 229 kb/s, which is above the maximum of 192 kb/s. Generally this is an unrankable issue so you must convert it somehow. Fixed.
[Easy]

  1. 00:47:026 (1,2) - 01:11:330 (1,2) - 01:23:862 (3,4) . ¿?
  2. 00:12:849 (2,1,2,3,4,1) - Why did you use 1.0 DS on this part? You should keep a constant DS in Easy so I strongly recommend you to use 1.1 DS here. Fixed.
  3. 00:15:887 (4,1) - Try blanket this, like what you did here 00:12:849 (2,1) . Fixed.
  4. 00:17:406 (2,3) - 00:18:925 (4,1) - I won't spam any more, hope you get what I'm trying to get across. Blanket in a nice place and time will make your map much more appealing.
  5. Try to mainly stick on white/red ticks when you're mapping Easy/Normal. Also sometimes it's easier to stick on instruments than vocals, like this part for example 00:50:444 (1,2,3,4) . You can just simply put that reverse on the white tick here 00:51:203 to match the drums. You will notice that drums will land on most white ticks, drum is the one of the most easiest instruments to follow for beginners so make sure you keep on track with that. (If you can't here the drum, try listen to the song with 25% speed, that will help a lot) Fixed.
  6. 01:23:862 (3) - Try avoid putting objects near the life bar please. Fixed.
  7. Downbeats should be clickable so it'll become easier to follow the rhythm.
[Normal]

  1. Please make your spacing consistent with DS. The spacing in this diff are pretty messed up, try to recheck and fix them all. After you fixed all that you can call me for a remod. Fixed.
Sorry for modding just Easy, cuz I feel like my modding quality has been sub-par lately so I'm not confident with things I pointed out. Good luck~ Oh, don't worry :)

Thanks~ Updated!
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Electoz
1,886 posts
Joined May 2015
Electoz
00:47:026 (1,2) - 01:11:330 (1,2) - 01:23:862 (3,4) - Spacing errors, sry. I was too tired and I missed this one for some reason.
Hazu-
3,881 posts
Joined July 2014
Topic Starter
Hazu-
SPOILER

Electoz wrote:

00:47:026 (1,2) - 01:11:330 (1,2) - 01:23:862 (3,4) - Spacing errors, sry. I was too tired and I missed this one for some reason. Fixed, no problem :3

Updated!
octaforce
8 posts
Joined February 2012
octaforce
Hello Siiilver
I want to make another extra difficulty for your map.
Can I??
Hazu-
3,881 posts
Joined July 2014
Topic Starter
Hazu-

octaforce wrote:

Hello Siiilver
I want to make another extra difficulty for your map.
Can I??
Of course ฅ•ω•ฅ
octaforce
8 posts
Joined February 2012
octaforce
Thank you!!
I'll upload it within a week.

SPOILER

Siiilver wrote:

octaforce wrote:

Hello Siiilver
I want to make another extra difficulty for your map.
Can I??
Of course ฅ•ω•ฅ
-Kazuki-
13 posts
Joined November 2013
-Kazuki-
00:17:216 - you skipped a circle here

00:17:311 - same here

00:25:191 - 00:28:798 - 00:37:343 - 00:49:495 - you're missing circles there

00:51:298 - remove this circle

;w;
Hazu-
3,881 posts
Joined July 2014
Topic Starter
Hazu-
octaforce

octaforce wrote:

Thank you!!
I'll upload it within a week.

Okay >u<

Kazuki

-Kazuki- wrote:

00:17:216 - you skipped a circle here

00:17:311 - same here

00:25:191 - 00:28:798 - 00:37:343 - 00:49:495 - you're missing circles there

00:51:298 - remove this circle

;w;

Difficulty? xD
-Kazuki-
13 posts
Joined November 2013
-Kazuki-

Siiilver wrote:

octaforce

octaforce wrote:

Thank you!!
I'll upload it within a week.

Okay >u<

Kazuki

-Kazuki- wrote:

00:17:216 - you skipped a circle here

00:17:311 - same here

00:25:191 - 00:28:798 - 00:37:343 - 00:49:495 - you're missing circles there

00:51:298 - remove this circle

;w;

Difficulty? xD
World 3:
Hazu-
3,881 posts
Joined July 2014
Topic Starter
Hazu-
SPOILER

-Kazuki- wrote:

00:17:216 - you skipped a circle here Fixed.

00:17:311 - same here Fixed.

00:25:191 - 00:28:798 - 00:37:343 - 00:49:495 - you're missing circles there Fixed.

00:51:298 - remove this circle Fixed.

;w;

Thanks, Updated :3

EDIT: New MP3 and diff, Re-download please
Wou_old_1
114 posts
Joined September 2015
Wou_old_1

Siiilver wrote:

Thanks, Updated :3

EDIT: New MP3 and diff, Re-download please
Are you need a video ?
Hazu-
3,881 posts
Joined July 2014
Topic Starter
Hazu-

Wou wrote:

Siiilver wrote:

Thanks, Updated :3

EDIT: New MP3 and diff, Re-download please
Are you need a video ?
Yes, I had one (720) but it was heavy.
I'm sorry for my English xD
Wou_old_1
114 posts
Joined September 2015
Wou_old_1
Here the video if you need
Size : 17.9 mb ( 18 mb )
If you have any questions please chat with me or pm ...
If you reject the video please say
Wou_old_1
114 posts
Joined September 2015
Wou_old_1
[General]

  1. You have many wrong end snapped in Easy,Normal,Hard,Insane,World and a little in octaforce's diff, check it in AiMod or press ( Ctrl + Shift + A )

    [Easy]

    1. 00:12:180 (1) - change this note to this
    2. 00:12:940 (2,1) - Please fix the blanket like this
    3. 00:19:016 (4,1) - Try to blanket this note Image
    4. 00:38:003 (1,2) - Like i say, fix the blanket
    5. 00:52:434 (4,5) - ^
      Just that, but please fix the wrong end snapped note
[Normal]

  1. 00:15:598 (1,2,3) - Overlap look less good
  2. 00:16:168 (3) - Try end snap to 00:16:359 - then add some note here 00:16:549 -
  3. 00:18:446 (2) - Wrong end snapped, try to change end here 00:18:637 -
  4. 00:19:301 (4) - Wrong snapped object, move to 00:19:397 - fix the wrongly snapped end at the same then
  5. 00:42:560 (4) - Too out of the grid
  6. 00:59:650 (1) - Try begin spin to 00:59:460 - fix the end snapped at the same then
  7. 01:05:535 (1) - Miss some note of the vocal here 01:05:726 -
[Insane]

  1. Replay : Link
  2. SS : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4418899
  3. 00:22:813 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1) - Actually note like this is very exhausting, So that's makes me a little edgy..
    00:59:269 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - would be more relaxed if like this
Just that,
Don't forget to fix wrongly snapped
Hazu-
3,881 posts
Joined July 2014
Topic Starter
Hazu-

Wou wrote:

[General]

  1. You have many wrong end snapped in Easy,Normal,Hard,Insane,World and a little in octaforce's diff, check it in AiMod or press ( Ctrl + Shift + A ) Fixed Easy, Normal, Hard, Insane and World.

    [Easy]

    1. 00:12:180 (1) - change this note to this Fixed.
    2. 00:12:940 (2,1) - Please fix the blanket like this Fixed.
    3. 00:19:016 (4,1) - Try to blanket this note Image Fixed.
    4. 00:38:003 (1,2) - Like i say, fix the blanket Fixed.
    5. 00:52:434 (4,5) - ^ Fixed.
      Just that, but please fix the wrong end snapped note
[Normal]

  1. 00:15:598 (1,2,3) - Overlap look less good Fixed.
  2. 00:16:168 (3) - Try end snap to 00:16:359 - then add some note here 00:16:549 - Fixed.
  3. 00:18:446 (2) - Wrong end snapped, try to change end here 00:18:637 - Fixed.
  4. 00:19:301 (4) - Wrong snapped object, move to 00:19:397 - fix the wrongly snapped end at the same then Fixed.
  5. 00:42:560 (4) - Too out of the grid Fixed.
  6. 00:59:650 (1) - Try begin spin to 00:59:460 - fix the end snapped at the same then Fixed.
  7. 01:05:535 (1) - Miss some note of the vocal here 01:05:726 -
Fixed.

[Insane]

  1. Replay : Link
  2. SS : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4418899
  3. 00:22:813 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1) - Actually note like this is very exhausting, So that's makes me a little edgy..
    00:59:269 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - would be more relaxed if like this
Fixed.

Just that,
Don't forget to fix wrongly snapped
Thanks! Updated :)
KiririnIchiban
76 posts
Joined June 2013
KiririnIchiban
From #modreqs
1st mod ever so sorry if its not that helpful
Overall
01:18:827 (1,2) - I'd check your sliders, when they are placed like this http://puu.sh/mNHvQ/802893c6ea.jpg they end up looking kinda sloppy. If you use rotate or flip you can just make perfect mirrors that look nice pretty easily, slider blankets are another way to make sliders look neat especially in lower difficulties. Also try not to switch from mapping vocals to instruments too abruptly.
World
00:17:307 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - It sounds like this is a seven note stream rather than 1 space 5 .
00:18:921 (2,3,4,5) - #2 Sounds off, I'd use two triples here, I think it sounds more accurate Ex. http://puu.sh/mNGsi/50d8217cc2.jpg
00:25:283 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Sounds off, to get it to match the engine sound I think you have to double the bpm.
00:27:751 (4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - You go from mapping the vocals to instruments pretty abruptly, sounds kinda awkward.
01:12:940 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Not sure what you are mapping to here.
Insane
00:17:307 (6,1,2,3) - Same as World
00:19:207 (1,2,3) - Same as World
00:51:580 (4,1) - Why not just expand the repeater
00:52:244 (2,3,4,5) - Sounds like its missing stuff, maybe fill it in
Hard
00:28:415 (6) - I can't tell what this is mapped to
00:31:643 (6) - Same as above
00:50:535 (2,3) - I'd add a note here
01:09:902 (2,3) - Consider placing these differently, plays kinda awkward as is.
Normal+Easy
Ive never mapped Normal/Easy so I'll leave this to people who are better at it

Maybe its just me but the offset seems kinda off.
Sorry if its not that helpful
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