[General]
There are two unsnapped slider-ends in Normal 01:42:447 (2) - and 03:57:550 (3) -
[Special]
00:03:352 (5,1) - A bit weird to play with the sudden jump. Why not keep consistent with spacings among 00:05:107 (2,3,4) - ?
00:04:788 (1) - Better to place 1 like this:
http://puu.sh/o3njr/7ca3c72cbf.jpg So that the flow will be as comfortable as 00:03:830 (2,3) -.
00:23:139 (2,1) - Better adding a note at 00:23:777. Since you are mostly following the vocals in this part as well as the spacing between 00:23:139 (2,1) - now is too close to be read as 1/1, adding a note really matters.
00:35:266 (3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Personally not a fan of this pattern because those plain pentagon jumps are outstandingly abrupt, compared with the former smooth part. Following pianos are fine since there's no vocal yet in my opinion plain single-taps are way more exaggeratedly overdone. A pattern consists of sliders AND notes will be much better here.
00:39:575 (1) - Ctrl+G would work better for this pattern. Same for 00:40:852 (1) -
00:45:320 (3,4,1) - I am worried about the notes here. Background ornaments are not snapped to 1/4.
00:56:011 (2) - I dont think there should be a note, the music hardly supports it. Just leave it empty, and stack 00:56:171 (3) - onto 00:55:852 (1) - (Form up an anti-jump pattern with 00:55:852 (1,2) - ), with some adjustments to following notes, it would be much better.
00:59:203 (5,6) - Too close, plays a bit weird.
01:16:277 (1,2,3) - This overlap makes the map not neat as it could be. Also the flow angle here is too sharp. Better re-arrange the placement here. Same flow issue at 02:30:320 (1,2,3) -
01:35:426 (1,2,3) - Why not use 120-degree pattern here either? (Something like this
http://puu.sh/o3oTg/7fbd33d66b.jpg )
01:38:777 (3,4) - Straight-line anti-flow is quite annoying. Creating an angle between 3 and 4 would be better for cursor movement of players.
http://puu.sh/o3oZ9/b2677f0340.jpg 01:45:160 (3) - This plays quite weird because the strong beat with finish falls onto the end of a slider whereas a quite soft sound with less opportunities to be noticed (01:45:639 (1) - ) falls onto a single hit-circle. Really weird.
01:56:809 (5) - You left the vocal at 01:56:969 in the middle of the slider yet for another identical one at 01:55:213 (5,6,7,1) - , you even used over-maps to emphasize. The contrast is quite inappropriate.
02:05:266 (2,3) - Simply, it's excessively large.
02:40:532 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - The jumps among these notes should be re-arranged for consistency. For some 3-note patterns, jumps are between 1 and 2 while for others, jumps are between 2 and 3.
02:48:192 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - 02:55:372 (1,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - ;w;
03:22:819 (4,5,1) - Flow angle is too sharp.
03:37:021 (6,7,1) - 1 Should be on the left of 7 for better flow.
03:42:447 (1,2) - Sounds quite over-mapped.
That's all
Good luck!
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