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CINDERELLA PROJECT - M@GIC*

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Topic Starter
Lami
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2015년 12월 31일 목요일 at 오후 2:48:19

Artist: CINDERELLA PROJECT
Title: M@GIC*
Source: アイドルマスター シンデレラガールズ
Tags: idolmaster im@s the idolm@ster cinderella girls starlight stage gaia momochikun hvick225 tv size intoon
BPM: 178
Filesize: 3660kb
Play Time: 01:56
Difficulties Available:
  1. E@sy (1.54 stars, 156 notes)
  2. Gaia's Norm@l (2.24 stars, 266 notes)
  3. hvick225's Ins@ne (4.8 stars, 456 notes)
  4. Ins@ne (4.51 stars, 408 notes)
  5. M@gic (5.56 stars, 495 notes)
  6. Mochi's H@rd (3.32 stars, 334 notes)


Download: CINDERELLA PROJECT - M@GIC*
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hvick225
C:
scanter
흐빅 댓글 갓갓하시네
Asahiru
これは Hanabiの 呪いですw w w
Spectator
good map
Silky
Rank pls thanks xd

Edit:no kd cuz only one thing(my english is bad)

01:50:022 (1) - at Ins@ne diff, has no sound here, but you did NC here, it too unnaturally for me tbh, so I think 01:49:853 (5) - change to 1/2 slider is better, atleast 01:49:853 (5,1) - switch NC pls.
Topic Starter
Lami
yea, applied
_todestrieb
aa too late to make normal
KappaPraise
Hi \o, here not much i w@s very sleepy @nd not good modder) But i did what i c@n

imo this slider should be longer end here 01:05:022 or here 01:05:191 @nd remove this slider 01:05:191 (4)
01:16:820 (2) - try this slider st@rt here 01:16:651 @nd end here 01:17:157
01:49:179 (2) - this slider like th@t 01:43:280 (1) - m@ke it form here 01:49:011 to here 01:49:516
00:28:449 (3) - this circle excess imo, or m@ybe you should try m@ke there hitsound for this clock tick
00:29:797 (7) - ^ ... in other pl@ces too
may be try @dd here note 01:52:044 or m@ke this slider reverse 01:52:213 (3)
00:02:494 (2) - remove this note please
00:03:505 (1) - slider should be better imo
00:04:685 (4) - ^
00:22:382 (1,2,3,4,5) - may be try something like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4170424 or simple slider instead reverse (end here 00:23:224)
01:19:011 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - what about this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/4170466
01:39:235 (1) - m@ke here simple slider instead reverse
00:05:191 (2) - remove this slider
00:07:887 (4) - ^
i still think you should @dd hitsounds for clock ticks imo

Good luck)
Elfin
no kudosu.

[E@sy]
  1. 00:00:809 - 인센도 포함되는 이야기인데요. 초반부분에 힛사가 없으니 뭔가 허전한듯한 느낌이 들어요. 뒤쪽에 들리는 종소리? 같은 거에 맞춰서 기본 소프트 휘슬같은거 추가해주는게 좋을것 같아요.
  2. 01:16:820 (2) - 가사 시작은 01:16:651 부터니 저쪽으로 옮기는게 박자 읽는게 쉬울듯 싶어요.
  3. 01:46:820 (2,3) - 일본어를 약간이나마 알아들을수 있어서 그런지 개인적으로는 01:46:820에 서클을 두고 01:47:157와 01:47:662를 하나의 슬라이더로 표현하는게 좋을듯 싶어요.
  4. 01:48:674 (1,2) - 뭔가 박자가 미묘하네요. 어떻게 해보라고 추천은 못하겠는데 박자 읽기가 좀 불편하다는 느낌이 들어요.
  5. 01:51:539 (4) - 콤보가 좀 길어지는듯한 기분이 들긴 한데 뭔가 걸리네요...
Yuria
01:00:134 (1,2) - http://puu.sh/m3beA/03c72c92a0.jpg
01:03:505 (2,3,4) - http://puu.sh/m3bPC/948b813171.jpg
01:16:314 (1,2) - http://puu.sh/m3bWt/1e6fea6cb3.jpg
01:37:888 (1,2,3) - http://puu.sh/m3c1W/821e3e8fa0.jpg
01:44:123 (2,3) - http://puu.sh/m3c4O/a4dca1f003.jpg
01:46:820 (2,3) - ^
01:48:674 (1,2) - ^

매우 박자충 모딩
01:14:292 (2) - slider end clap
00:43:955 (1,2,3,4) - 슬라속도를 점점 늘려보는건 어떨까용
01:37:213 (5) - 슬라이더 시작점 클랩이요
00:03:505 (1) - ctrl+g?
01:38:224 (3) - clap
01:43:112 (5) - slider end clap
00:43:955 (1,2,3,4) - 인센과 마찬가지로..
Ujimatsu Chiya
아.. 갓갓님이 모딩해서 모딩할거없을거같네...
아 그리고 티비사이즌데 왜 저 안부름 ㅇㄴ 리폿할꺼임 ㅇㄴ

[General]
  1. BG 사이즈 조정 해주세요 1228x767임 지금
  2. 비디오를 내놓지 않으면 유혈사태를 보실꺼임
  3. 로마자 타이틀 필히 고쳐주셔야 됩니다. M@GIC* 이 아니라 M@GIC 이 맞습니다.
    같은 예로 Hoeny Come!!이 있습니다.
  4. 태그에 TV Size 랑 겟난 매퍼 이름들 주루루룩 넣으셔야죠
  5. 커스텀 컬러 1번 개인적으로 배경 밝기랑 너무 비슷한데 조금 진하게 해주시는게 더 괜찮을거같네요. 큰 문제는 없을것같지만
  6. 빨간선 2개 쓸 필요가없는데 왜 2개 쓰셨어요? - 539 오프셋 쓰시면 저는 533이 더 맞다고 봐요 오프셋

[M@gic]
  1. 00:01:820 (3) - 이 서클 차라리 00:01:314 (2) - 여기 슬라 테일에 스텍해두는 편이 보컬이랑 더 어울린다고 봅니다.
  2. 00:08:224 (6,7) - 6번 테일 이랑 7번 서클 드럼 셈플셋하시고 00:08:561 (1) - 여기 헤드에 클렙 넣으면 소리더 풍부함 ( 드럼에디션 클렙도 괜찮을듯?)
  3. 정작 강조되야할 부분은 00:20:528 (4,5) - 이곳은 DS가 짧은데 00:20:191 (2,3,4) - 기타도 드럼도 저기보다 약한 이부분에 점프가 더 큰건 노래랑 별로 어울리지 않네요
  4. 00:21:876 (3) - 위랑 마찬가지로 지금 위치보단 00:20:359 (3) - 여기에 스텍하시는걸 추천드림
  5. 00:23:730 (1) - Aㅏ... ... ... 슬라아트 지못미...
  6. 00:55:247 (3) - 이거 컨트롤g 해주는편이 피니쉬자리라서 어울리다고 봐요 주변 패턴들이랑 비교했을떄 비해 여기만 쉬우니
  7. 01:48:000 (3) - 3/4 슬라 많이 쓰는입장에서 여기는 3/4 보단 1/2쓰고 블루틱에 서클 하나 넣어서 이런식으로 해주는 편이 더 매끄럽다고 봐요. 3/4는 아무래도 다음 노트를 점프가 아닌 순간적으로 히트하는 형식으로 강조 하는 터라 3/4슬라 끝부분에 소리가 명확히 들리는 경우는 꽤나 어색하게 들리네요.
  8. 01:54:741 (1,2,3,1) - 와따.. 사람 죽일라는거임? ㅋㅋㅋ 이거 뭐여 무서워

와 이거만 하는데 20분씀... 좀있다가 나머지함..
Topic Starter
Lami
bg 랭크맵에서 그대로 갖고온건데 안괜차늠??

그리고 동영상은 이거 op ed가 아니라 걍 애니 중간에 들간곡이라 그 중간영상을 넣기엔 이상한거가틈

메타데이터는 잘 모르겠으니 가무 ㄱㄷ해봄
Topic Starter
Lami

WISPG_G wrote:

Hi \o, here not much i w@s very sleepy @nd not good modder) But i did what i c@n

imo this slider should be longer end here 01:05:022 or here 01:05:191 @nd remove this slider 01:05:191 (4) well, no fix
01:16:820 (2) - try this slider st@rt here 01:16:651 @nd end here 01:17:157 fix
01:49:179 (2) - this slider like th@t 01:43:280 (1) - m@ke it form here 01:49:011 to here 01:49:516 fix
00:05:191 (2) - remove this slider feel empty here..
00:07:887 (4) - ^ ^
i still think you should @dd hitsounds for clock ticks imo

Good luck)
@Underflow : all fixed

@Yuria : 클랩이랑 이지에 1:16에 잇는거만 고침

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thanks for modding :)
Momoka
왜 풀버젼 매핑안함 리폿 ㅅㄱ
_todestrieb
란코 이쁘다

@ㅣ지
01:00:134 (1,2) - 저라면 3/2 슬라를 쓸 것 같습니다. 지금 리듬보다는 더욱 자연스럽게 들립니다.
01:05:191 (4) - 악기 소리 맞춰서 3/2 슬라 쓰셔도 될 것 같습니다.
01:10:921 (1,2) - 첫 줄과 같습니다
디스턴스 맞춰주세요. 굉장히 이랬다 저랬다입니다. 그리드 스냅 끄시고 오른쪽 위에 *.**x 떠있는 거로 맞춰주세요.

G@i@'s Norm@l
00:57:438 (1) - M@ke it symmetric@l ple@se.
Mind h@ving @R5.5 here? SV seems @ bit forced comp@red to @R.
Looks good!

Mochi's H@rd
01:00:134 (4,5) - Slightly offscreen at 4:3 r@tio.
01:24:404 (1,2) - 1/1 slider + note seriously, wholehe@rtedly fits better
01:29:797 (1,2,3) - polish this out ple@se!
01:31:820 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Wow th@t's pretty h@rd.
nice m@p @ctu@lly but it's much more of @ Light Ins@ne I would s@y.

@ㅣㄴ세@ㅣㄴ
00:10:415 (2) - 매뉴어블 스택 의도된 건가요?
00:41:258 (2,3) - 모양 너무 별로입니다.
00:51:033 (1,2) - 마지막 쪽에 소리 낮춰주세요

hvick's Ins@ne
00:47:325 (4,1) - I personally don't think this kind of rhythm fits this part.
00:50:022 (4,5) - ^
Really neat. Nice job

매@직
00:23:730 (1) - 첫 번째 빨간 점 없애시고 둥근 거 좀 더 둥글게 해주시면 모양 더 나아질 듯
00:43:955 (1,2,3,4) - 인세인이랑 패턴이 많이 비슷하네요. 엑스트라인데 좀 더 임팩트를 두심이 좋을 것 같아요
00:51:033 (1,2) - 인세인과 같습니다.

SkinnyJommy
Hi! NM from my queue

[M@GIC*]

  1. 00:08:898 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - This clap spam is literally deafening, please find a softer clap for this part or severely lower the hitsound volume ;-; MY EARSSSSSSSSSSSSS
  2. 00:09:573 (1) - move this to 208, 27
  3. 00:09:741 (2) - move this to 314, 158 because if you look at 00:09:235 (3,4) - it makes 2 right in the middle, so it looks nicer
  4. 00:09:910 (3) - move this to 258, 0 for the same reason ^
  5. so if you do all these ^ you will create a really nice looking shape within the pattern! 00:08:898 (1,3,1,3) - instead of notes kinda randomly placed
  6. 00:16:820 (7,3) - ugly slight overlap here
  7. 01:14:292 (3,1) - stack please!
  8. 01:15:471 (3,1) - Should you try to blanket these? I think it would be a good idea
  9. 01:35:696 (2,2,3,4) - stack!

    [hvick225's Ins@ne]
  10. 00:07:382 (1) - move this to 460, 162
  11. 00:08:898 - 00:15:640 - ahh the super loud clap spam is back :C
  12. 01:36:033 (4,1) - fix blanket!
  13. 01:38:224 (3) - misses clap here

    [Ins@ne]
  14. 00:10:247 (1,2) - why are these 2 really close overlaps but 00:10:584 (3,4) - this is a stack??
  15. 00:11:932 (3,6) - fix blanket!
  16. 01:20:022 (6,3) - ^
  17. 01:54:741 (1,2,3,1) - This seems like quite a big ending for a 4.5 star insane, consider lowering this distance a bit!

    [Mochi's H@rd]
  18. 00:27:775 (1,2) - I'm not really sure about this overlap, looks kind of ugly to me ;-; and a bit out of place
  19. 01:10:584 (2,3,4) - This looks really off too... try looking to this pattern here because idk how to explain it, it just looks really off to me idk
  20. 01:13:280 (4,3) - fix blanket!
  21. 01:32:157 (4) - Is this supposed to be a finish?? i think a clap fits better

    [Gaia's Norm@l]
  22. 00:04:516 (3,4) - I don't think stacks are a good idea in Normal/Easy difficulties ;-;

    oh my you have a lot of stacks

    well everything flows pretty well, but im just not sure about the stacks is all... from what ive learned from modding normal and easy its that stacks are a big nono because it will be hard for beginner players to read!

    [E@sy]

    this diff looks good to me!

well thats it for me mod! awesome song, i should watch this anime sometime

gl with this
Hollow Wings
m4m

M@gic

  1. 00:47:831 (7,8) - here are some special brass beats which can be expressed better by setting some notes imo.
  2. 00:58:449 (1) - ds shifting is a bit weird here, try 176,180 or 208,381.
  3. 01:49:011 (2) - try 291,99 to arrange ds.
  4. the map is well mapped imo, star.

hvick225's Ins@ne

  1. 00:23:561 (2,3) - 这边这个大跳没什么必要。
  2. 01:55:247 (1) - 放在0,214吧。
  3. 挺好的。

Ins@ne

  1. 00:10:247 (1,2,3,4) - do same style to those 2 group of notes orzzz
  2. 01:55:247 (1) - just move to 350,370 lol~
  3. for the map's rhythm is really similar to the top diff, some ds patterns' advices are same to those mentioned above as well.
fine with h, n and e.

cinderella project? orzzz

good luck
Topic Starter
Lami
@bbj : 엑라에서 00:43:955 (1,2,3,4) - 는 사실 이거 ds조절해서 인센으로만든거라 비슷한거임..ㅋㅋ
조용한 파트라 여긴 쉬웠으면 하네요..

[M@GIC*]

  1. 00:08:898 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - This clap spam is literally deafening, please find a softer clap for this part or severely lower the hitsound volume ;-; MY EARSSSSSSSSSSSSS
    i want to impact here ;w;
  2. 00:09:741 (2) - move this to 314, 158 because if you look at 00:09:235 (3,4) - it makes 2 right in the middle, so it looks nicer
    adjust something
  3. 00:09:910 (3) - move this to 258, 0 for the same reason ^
    avoid overlapping previous note.
  4. 01:15:471 (3,1) - Should you try to blanket these? I think it would be a good idea
    well, i want to keep this..
m4m

M@gic

  1. 00:47:831 (7,8) - here are some special brass beats which can be expressed better by setting some notes imo.
    i follow other sound instead of brass beat. then, i will keep this.
  2. 00:58:449 (1) - ds shifting is a bit weird here, try 176,180 or 208,381.
    i want to place this note at upside..
  3. 01:49:011 (2) - try 291,99 to arrange ds.
    i'd like jump here like previous partten
  4. the map is well mapped imo, star.


no comment = fix

thanks for your help :3
Reillia
[E@sy]
00:10:247 (3,1) - 모양 완벽히 원으로 잡을수있었을텐데 아쉽네요..
00:37:213 (3,4) - ^
01:03:505 (2,3) - 이런식의 박자로 잡는건 어떠신가요?
01:21:707 - 여기부터 전 부분과다르게 흰틱만 사용하니 박자가 지루함도 느껴지고 어색하다고 생각합니다.

[Gaia's Norm@l]
00:14:966 (3,4,5) - How about this rhythm?

Very nice map :D

[Mochi's H@rd]
00:12:606 (4,1) - Fix Blanket
00:52:044 (1,2) - ^

[Insane]
00:10:078 - 00:11:426 - 00:12:775 - 00:14:123 - 이런부분들이 클릭이 되었으면 좋겠다는 생각이 듭니다.
01:06:876 (4,5) - 블랭킷
01:30:977 - 이부분도 클릭이 됬으면 좋겠다는 생각이듭니다.

[hvick225's Ins@ne]
01:53:561 (6,7) - How about this rhythm?

Very nice map :D

[M@gic]
전 바카입니다 보이는게 없습니다
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