JAM Project - THE HERO!!~Ikareru Kobushi ni Hi o Tsukero~ (T · forum

Sonnyc

Joined June 2008

Topic Starter

Sonnyc 2015-11-08T14:23:42+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2016년 6월 26일 일요일 at 오전 3:23:14

Artist: JAM Project
Title: THE HERO!!~Ikareru Kobushi ni Hi o Tsukero~ (TV Size)
Source: ワンパンマン
Tags: 오늘부터 수능이다 아싸 one punch man wanpanman 원펀맨 opening eINess halloween [_HalLoWeeN_] Reol Set Fire to the Furious Fist
BPM: 260
Filesize: 27607kb
Play Time: 01:27
Difficulties Available:

Collab Insane (4.51 stars, 303 notes)
Easy (1.33 stars, 63 notes)
Expert (5.36 stars, 367 notes)
Hard (2.51 stars, 148 notes)
HLW's ONE PUNCH (6.43 stars, 390 notes)
Hyper (3.56 stars, 276 notes)
Normal (1.7 stars, 103 notes)

Download: JAM Project - THE HERO!!~Ikareru Kobushi ni Hi o Tsukero~ (TV Size)
Download: JAM Project - THE HERO!!~Ikareru Kobushi ni Hi o Tsukero~ (TV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Easy

Normal

Hard

Insane

Expert by me

Collab Insane by me & eINess

HLW's ONE PUNCH by Reol

Last edited by Sonnyc 2023-09-30T14:46:06+00:00, edited 41 times in total.

Rokhar

2 posts

Joined April 2014

Rokhar 2015-11-11T12:11:17+00:00

great that finally someone decided that this had to be playable.
I'm eagerly awaiting a version for us plebs that still play on hard tho :>

Akiyama Mizuki

2,710 posts

Joined March 2009

Akiyama Mizuki 2015-11-11T13:08:00+00:00

브픔 260이에요

Beomsan

1,878 posts

Joined November 2013

Beomsan 2015-11-15T04:07:32+00:00

오늘부터 수능이다 ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ

Sonnyc

7,753 posts

Joined June 2008

Topic Starter

Sonnyc 2015-11-18T08:21:51+00:00

Mapset Finished!

Guess what? The spread is good.

P o M u T a

2,284 posts

Joined December 2010

P o M u T a 2015-11-18T09:08:30+00:00

nice mop

Enon

2,690 posts

Joined November 2012

Enon 2015-11-18T15:20:49+00:00

This mapset looks awesome

Go!

Bearizm

1,213 posts

Joined October 2013

Bearizm 2015-11-19T16:43:55+00:00

Mod's not going to be very long, because I'm not too experienced in this kind of map, aka high BPM jumps.

General

BPM Resets seems questionable; such as the ones in 00:52:742 - . Have you confirmed the timing with anyone? Like Charles? Guy? A QAT?

HLW's ONE PUNCH

01:15:818 (5) - make this to 2 circles because this slider ends with a clap hitsound. I would click that rhythm if I was playing.
01:09:357 (1,2,3) - this could be more organized/neater
SPOILER

Expert

In general, there are way too many linear paterns such as 00:52:165 (2,3,4) - 00:20:435 (1,2,3,4) - 01:07:972 (4,5,6,1) - and based on my experience in playing a lot of jumpy high BPM maps, linear jumps don't play too well because you're going to similar directions but you change the speed of your cursor which is very hard and uncomfortable to maintain. try making jumps with sharp angles, maybe abour 30-60 degrees or so..
00:49:049 (1) - should give this more emphasis by making this a jump.

Insane

00:30:012 (2) - this starts here because of the vocals but the previous part 00:29:089 (2) - you followed the instrument. Be more consistent. Make sure you change this in the Expert as well because it seems to have the same issue.

Hard

00:11:897 (4) - make this a circle because 00:12:128 (1) - is a new stanza so it should be separated with the previous pattern. and I think it suits the song better for this difficulty.
00:38:435 - i don't think you should skip this.
00:41:895 - there should be something here imo
00:55:511 (3) - in this difficulty, this is a questionable overlap.
01:11:203 (1,2,3) - this should follow the previous rhythm just to stay consistent 01:09:357 (1,2,3) -
01:24:126 (1) - you could make more objects here instead of 1 long slider lol. the rhythm can be so much better than this. try this:
SPOILER

Normal

00:12:820 (2) - could end the slider at 00:13:512 - so that 00:13:974 - is clickable.

Good luck!

Sonnyc

7,753 posts

Joined June 2008

Topic Starter

Sonnyc 2015-11-20T03:53:03+00:00

Bearizm

Bearizm wrote:
Mod's not going to be very long, because I'm not too experienced in this kind of map, aka high BPM jumps.

General
BPM Resets seems questionable; such as the ones in 00:52:742 - . Have you confirmed the timing with anyone? Like Charles? Guy? A QAT? // Haven't actually got a check, but I don't think it is as necessary to get a check since it's pretty minor, and I believe resets fit the song properly.

Expert
In general, there are way too many linear paterns such as 00:52:165 (2,3,4) - 00:20:435 (1,2,3,4) - 01:07:972 (4,5,6,1) - and based on my experience in playing a lot of jumpy high BPM maps, linear jumps don't play too well because you're going to similar directions but you change the speed of your cursor which is very hard and uncomfortable to maintain. try making jumps with sharp angles, maybe abour 30-60 degrees or so.. // Will make a consideration for now and eventually make a change if there are more complains regarding this. I agree the current flows are pretty sharp due to the geometric patterns and is kinda constructing an uncomfortable flow, but I think it is also a part of the difficulty.
00:49:049 (1) - should give this more emphasis by making this a jump. // I was actually pretty not confident with the current pattern. The idea of a jump gave me an idea to change. Thx

Insane
00:30:012 (2) - this starts here because of the vocals but the previous part 00:29:089 (2) - you followed the instrument. Be more consistent. Make sure you change this in the Expert as well because it seems to have the same issue. // I think the vocals are expressed enough with the rhythms. If you wanted consistency for the slider usages, using a same rhythm in a row won't be what I prefer. I'd done a variation for this part while following the vocals.

Hard
00:11:897 (4) - make this a circle because 00:12:128 (1) - is a new stanza so it should be separated with the previous pattern. and I think it suits the song better for this difficulty. // 1/2 slider usages was quite questionable in this overall difficulty, but I think this part was appropriate enough to insert. I also don't think the current pattern fails to make it seperated each other.
00:38:435 - i don't think you should skip this. // Considering the lower difficulties, I decided to express it as a note. Thx
00:41:895 - there should be something here imo // This has also bugged me while mapping too. Managed to think of a better rhythm filling out here.
00:55:511 (3) - in this difficulty, this is a questionable overlap. // This difficulty is Hard. I'm confident with this overlap.
01:11:203 (1,2,3) - this should follow the previous rhythm just to stay consistent 01:09:357 (1,2,3) - I feel there is a noticable sound better in 01:11:664 than 01:11:549. That's why this rhythm had two 1/1.

01:24:126 (1) - you could make more objects here instead of 1 long slider lol. the rhythm can be so much better than this. try this:
SPOILER
// Using it is possible. But I'd wanted to get organized with the lower difficulties here as making an S shaped slider.

Normal
00:12:820 (2) - could end the slider at 00:13:512 - so that 00:13:974 - is clickable. // I prefer the current blanket shape. Keeping this for now.

Good luck!

Thank you~

Reol

998 posts

Joined September 2012

Reol 2015-11-20T10:47:07+00:00

Bearizm wrote:
Mod's not going to be very long, because I'm not too experienced in this kind of map, aka high BPM jumps.

General
BPM Resets seems questionable; such as the ones in 00:52:742 - . Have you confirmed the timing with anyone? Like Charles? Guy? A QAT?

HLW's ONE PUNCH
01:15:818 (5) - make this to 2 circles because this slider ends with a clap hitsound. I would click that rhythm if I was playing.
01:09:357 (1,2,3) - this could be more organized/neater
SPOILER

Good luck!

Yep, Fix all.
Thanks for your modding!

HLW

osu file format v14

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Title:THE HERO !! ~Ikareru Ken ni Hono o Tsukeru~
TitleUnicode:THE HERO !! ～怒れる拳に火をつけろ～
Artist:JAM Project
ArtistUnicode:JAM Project
Creator:Sonnyc
Version:HLW's ONE PUNCH
Source:ワンパンマン
Tags:오늘부터 수능이다 아싸 one punch man wanpanman 원펀맨 opening tv size halloween [_HalLoWeeN_]
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Mafumafu

Beatmap Nominator

3,367 posts

Joined August 2013

Mafumafu 2015-11-20T15:37:40+00:00

I remember having read R-18 Yaoi Doujins of one punch man so here's the slot of my m4m.
Actually I am not approving the BPM shift. It's better to adjust stuffs via green lines imo, whatever....

[Easy]
00:25:050 (1,2) - Flow here seems quite bad.

[Normal]
Actually your Kiai time is easier than other parts, which feels quite not..eh..nice.
00:01:052 (1,2) - Blanket. Also the position of 2 is almost out of screen and could overlap with score meter in gameplay, pls change the position.
00:19:512 (4) - NC
00:21:128 (1) - Remove NC
00:21:359 (2) - NC
00:26:896 (1) - NC

[Hard]
00:55:511 (3) - Not recommend this hidden slider head. It is too hard as to Hard diff.
01:15:357 (2,3) - overlap more.

[Insane]
The gap between Hard and Insane is toooooooooo huge, really.
00:01:052 (1) - Actually the intro part sounds not well. The non-silenced slider-tails sounds really like overmap rhythms.
00:48:126 (4,5,6) - This rhythm is quite weird. It could fit well at parts like 00:49:972 (3,4) - bcoz there's vocal which matches with the slider rhythms.

the top two diffs are so crazy ;w;;w;;w;;w;
Good Luck!

Ringating

717 posts

Joined August 2013

Ringating 2015-11-21T02:24:38+00:00

video, no kds

ErunamoJAZZ

osu! Alumni

2,693 posts

Joined August 2012

ErunamoJAZZ 2015-11-21T03:09:08+00:00

[easy]

00:35:665 (2,1) - this flow will be more smooth imo: http://puu.sh/lsW7s/17de32eaab.jpg Will be confusing like is now.
nice easy!

[normal]

01:03:126 (2,3) - are you sure??? :/

[hard]

00:11:666 (3,4,1) - this felt a bit random for me. I want to suggest this:
01:25:856 (2) - this was difficult to read :S

[insane]
Feels fine.

[extra]

00:22:973 (3,3,4,5) - I want to suggest this change:
00:46:742 (1,2,3) - lol, very extreme!, i thinks it is bad idea
01:21:472 (4,5) - this is very in bottom

Another extra looks fine in editor, in dont have tablet now to try play.

Good luck!

Rizia

3,114 posts

Joined January 2012

Rizia 2015-11-21T08:20:53+00:00

[Gerenal]

feel timing a bit off on some part...
check countdown, widescreen support and letterbox during breaks on all diff

[Expert]

00:04:744 (1,2,3) - missing soft sampleset at the tail?

[Insane]

00:15:012 (4,5,6,7) - missing some clap? you have add on expert
01:16:395 (5) - imo stack under 01:16:280 (4) - will better for playing

[Hard]

00:15:128 (3) - move to 00:15:012 - ?
01:04:049 (2) - clap

good luck

Sonnyc

7,753 posts

Joined June 2008

Topic Starter

Sonnyc 2015-11-21T11:16:14+00:00

Regraz

Regraz wrote:
I remember having read R-18 Yaoi Doujins of one punch man so here's the slot of my m4m.
Actually I am not approving the BPM shift. It's better to adjust stuffs via green lines imo, whatever....

[Easy]
00:25:050 (1,2) - Flow here seems quite bad. // Since this is a parallel pattern, I'd like to remain as it is.

[Normal]
Actually your Kiai time is easier than other parts, which feels quite not..eh..nice. // Well perhaps because the rhythm in the kiai part was actually more simple than other parts. Some may not feel cool about this, but I think I'm expressing the song enough.
00:01:052 (1,2) - Blanket. Also the position of 2 is almost out of screen and could overlap with score meter in gameplay, pls change the position. // Yeah was pretty uncomfortable about the object touching stuffs. Fixed by rotating all patterns.
00:19:512 (4) - NC // The comboes you've mentioned were setted to fit along the finish sounds. Guess you've failed to catch my intention.
00:21:128 (1) - Remove NC
00:21:359 (2) - NC
00:26:896 (1) - NC

[Hard]
00:55:511 (3) - Not recommend this hidden slider head. It is too hard as to Hard diff. // This hard isn't just simple. I'm pretty sure players won't have much problem with this.
01:15:357 (2,3) - overlap more. // Done.

[Insane]
The gap between Hard and Insane is toooooooooo huge, really. // I partially agree. Hard mostly consists of 1/1 objects, while Insane contains mostly 1/2 objects and some slider jumps. However considering the gap between Insane and Expert was also big too, the current status is just the appropriate balance for me.
00:01:052 (1) - Actually the intro part sounds not well. The non-silenced slider-tails sounds really like overmap rhythms. // Made a fix for this. Thanks!
00:48:126 (4,5,6) - This rhythm is quite weird. It could fit well at parts like 00:49:972 (3,4) - bcoz there's vocal which matches with the slider rhythms. // It might be due to two 1/1 sliders repeating. Made it less weird. Thanks!

the top two diffs are so crazy ;w;;w;;w;;w;
Good Luck!

Ringating

Ringating wrote:
video, no kds // wow that was unexpected! Thank you very much for the help!

ErunamoJAZZ

ErunamoJAZZ wrote:

[easy]
00:35:665 (2,1) - this flow will be more smooth imo: http://puu.sh/lsW7s/17de32eaab.jpg Will be confusing like is now. // Originally it was meant to be a triangle placement, but a smooth flow feels better. Changed!
nice easy!
[normal]
01:03:126 (2,3) - are you sure??? :/ // Yes I'm sure with this.
[hard]
00:11:666 (3,4,1) - this felt a bit random for me. I want to suggest this: // Will put this in consideration, but since there is another 1/4 sliders at 00:15:359 (4,5), I don't feel this as random.
01:25:856 (2) - this was difficult to read :S // I have to agree with this, but I don't to remove this note unlike easy and normal. Hope people know how to read approach circle.
[insane]
Feels fine.

[extra]
00:22:973 (3,3,4,5) - I want to suggest this change: // Keeping the circulating flow will be natural here.
SPOILER
00:46:742 (1,2,3) - lol, very extreme!, i thinks it is bad idea // Still I feel this extension of jumps follow the progress of the music.
01:21:472 (4,5) - this is very in bottom // Yes it is, but it isn't offscreen. For a balanced pattern, I had to place this slider there.
Another extra looks fine in editor, in dont have tablet now to try play.

Good luck!

Rizia

Rizia wrote:
[Gerenal]
feel timing a bit off on some part... // Will make a check ;w;
check countdown, widescreen support and letterbox during breaks on all diff // Did it. Tho it isn't really needed...
[Expert]
00:04:744 (1,2,3) - missing soft sampleset at the tail? // Originally was on emphasis purpose, but seems getting consistent is better. Still remained normal samplesets for 00:04:975 - 00:05:667 to follow the song.
[Insane]
00:15:012 (4,5,6,7) - missing some clap? you have add on expert // Added some.
01:16:395 (5) - imo stack under 01:16:280 (4) - will better for playing // This stack was purposed to set the difficulty lower than a certain point. Two strong jumps appear at 01:15:818 (2,3) and 01:16:511 (6,1). To lessen the burden of those, I had to place a stack here.
[Hard]
00:15:128 (3) - move to 00:15:012 - ? // Both follows the music nicely, but to make players catch the rhythm more easier, I'd prefer the current 1/1 term.
01:04:049 (2) - clap // Added. Thanks!

good luck

Thanks for the mods!

Karen

2,860 posts

Joined August 2013

Karen 2015-11-26T08:25:31+00:00

Your M4M request with this map(Xinely has no much time recently so i'm here to finish it for her.)

[Easy]

00:01:052 - decrease the volume here to 40% - 50% (all diffs)
00:32:435 (1) - it's a bit hard for new player to read, the reverse time should be more than once.
00:36:127 (1,2,3) - try this flow? would be better i think
SPOILER
00:54:588 (1,2) - this blanket is forced and unnecessary, also it has a bad flow with 00:56:434 (3) - , try something like this
SPOILER

[Normal]

00:37:973 (3) - A repeat slider may fit here much better because of the vocal 00:38:435 - here.
00:41:203 (2,3) - this somehow looks weird, try making 00:41:665 (3) - a straight slider?

[Hard]

00:04:744 (1,2,3) - I personally dont like straight flow like this o.o, try something like this:
SPOILER
00:42:588 (5) - ctrl+g this for better flow with 00:42:126 (3,4) - O.O

[Insane]

00:04:513 - Add a note here for consistency with 00:02:667 (5) - , although it sounds like overmap, but it's necessary in my opinion.
01:07:049 (5) - remove the whistle on the slider body.

[Expert]

00:15:705 (4,1) - please don't decrease the spacing suddenly here, try stack 00:15:820 (1) - with 00:14:666 (3) - this slider's head
00:20:781 (4) - this stack looks so forced and has a really bad flow, you can have more choices here, such as
00:20:666 (3,2) - stack, 00:20:781 (4,3) - stack
00:24:589 (1,2,3,4) - this straight flow plays bad, especially having a sudden jump (00:24:935 (4,1) -) after this, i suggest to use this
SPOILER
00:25:858 (5,1) - jump please, like 00:24:935 (4,1) - 00:26:781 (6,1) - ......, try this
SPOILER
00:48:819 (3,4,1) - this plays bad, 00:48:934 (4) - stack this on 00:48:126 (1) - this slider's head.
00:52:165 (2,3,4) - umm obtuse angle doesnt fit here, try move 00:52:395 (4) - to (185,316)
01:07:741 (2,3,4,5) - my personal taste, try a five-pointed star here, pic:
SPOILER
clean diff

[HLW's ONE PUNCH]

00:24:935 (2) - try (511,41), better flow with 00:25:050 (1) - i think.
01:08:664 (2,1,2) - this jump is supposed to be much bigger imo, try move 01:08:780 (1) - to (284,85)
nice diff overall. no much thing to say.

good mapset, good luck

Reol

998 posts

Joined September 2012

Reol 2015-11-29T12:44:00+00:00

Karen wrote:
[HLW's ONE PUNCH]
00:24:935 (2) - try (511,41), better flow with 00:25:050 (1) - i think. nice suggest fixed
01:08:664 (2,1,2) - this jump is supposed to be much bigger imo, try move 01:08:780 (1) - to (284,85) ok
nice diff overall. no much thing to say. XD

good mapset, good luck

Thanks for your modding :3

HLW

osu file format v14

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 28628
Countdown: 1
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.5
Mode: 0
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DistanceSpacing: 2.5
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 16
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Title:THE HERO !! ~Ikareru Ken ni Hono o Tsukeru~
TitleUnicode:THE HERO !! ～怒れる拳に火をつけろ～
Artist:JAM Project
ArtistUnicode:JAM Project
Creator:Sonnyc
Version:HLW's ONE PUNCH
Source:ワンパンマン
Tags:오늘부터 수능이다 아싸 one punch man wanpanman 원펀맨 opening tv size halloween [_HalLoWeeN_]
BeatmapID:822553
BeatmapSetID:374827

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:8.5
ApproachRate:9.7
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SliderTickRate:1

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Iceskulls

1,612 posts

Joined February 2012

Iceskulls 2015-12-03T06:54:00+00:00

as requested

[easy]

00:37:050 (2) - how about move this to about x160 y320 ? it would make the flow here 00:36:127 (1,2) - a bit better imo , you might need to move (3) a bit tho
00:47:203 (1) - how about curve this the another way so it would make flow here 00:47:203 (1,2) - a bit nice for beginner
SPOILER

[normal]

looks fine

[hard]

00:27:819 (3) - the rhythm here sound weird somehow , try this rhythm instead ? I think it would be better to make the cymbal sound here 00:28:050 - clickable
SPOILER
00:31:973 (4) - somehow it sound weird here lol , maybe use 1/1 slider here instead here ? it sound a bit better imo

[insane]

00:41:895 (2) - curve this the another so maybe the flow here 00:41:665 (1,2,3) - will be better imo
SPOILER
01:10:972 (5) - a bit similiar to what I said above

[expert]

00:49:049 (1,2,3) - flow is a bit weird here maybe if you curve (2) the another way it would make this flow better imo
SPOILER

hlw looks fine

good luck

[yadong]

1 post

Joined October 2011

[yadong] 2015-12-05T05:29:33+00:00

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memyarn

4 posts

Joined April 2015

memyarn 2015-12-06T17:40:40+00:00

If you're still looking for that re-encode (I understand that Bancho was just not working at the time), I have 3 options for you.
(Apologies if this is not proper procedure, I'm a noob at this)

They're all previewable on Dropbox before you download, of course.

Highest quality, largest filesize (Still puts you under 24MB but just barely)

https://www.dropbox.com/s/ef1icr3sq7170co/OPMOPreenc-higherQ.avi?dl=0

Okay quality (in my opinion) and some wiggle room)

https://www.dropbox.com/s/1u6sf3ziqusr68d/OPMOPreenc-decentQ.avi?dl=0

The worst quality I think is acceptable, but smallest filesize

https://www.dropbox.com/s/q0m2h5akb6oanim/OPMOPreenc-trashQ.avi?dl=0