1. Easy (1.44 stars, 229 notes)
2. God of Speed (5.51 stars, 1018 notes)
3. Insane (4.23 stars, 903 notes)
4. Milan-'s Hard (3.34 stars, 588 notes)
5. Veyron's Normal (2.03 stars, 409 notes)

1. Are you making Hard diff? hmm
2. The "THE ORAL CIGARETTES", must be "ジ オーラル シガレッツ" in the Artist. Katakana as always.

1. I suggest you more add circles than sliders, there was less circles...
2. 00:27:427 (1,3) - There was supposed to be a clap in the slider tick, are you agaisnt the slidertick hitsounding? Nothing wrong is slidertick hitsounding, as it's not disturbing.
3. 00:35:032 (2,3) - Somehow it's a bit close...
4. 00:47:708 - This part of kiai, no claps? ._. there were many drums
5. 00:54:469 (1) - This slider is way too diagonal and weird, would prefer the 00:55:314 (2) - ctrl+J version of this.
6. 00:57:849 (1,2,3) - Unique and fun but somehow the (3) is way too curved, and the triangle pattern is not perfect enough. Maybe rotate *120 of the (1) then copy paste? That's my technique.
7. 01:02:075 (2) - Missing whistle on this object.
8. 01:35:455 (2,3) - Those reverse sliders doesn't fit to the music in my oppinion, would better this
   
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9. 02:05:032 (4) - I hear a finish sound on the song, may add some finish hitsound on the end of the slider?
10. 03:28:272 (3) - This one.. way too upside.
11. 03:40:103 (1) - Better make it like this than make the slider way too diagonal.
    
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12. 04:03:765 - 04:05:244 - This is not a perfect thing that you ignored this part. Or make a spinner instead.
13. Fun as always.

1. well this looks like a normal+ diff. Also in my oppinion, the hitsound doesn't fit that much, the Drum sampleset whistle with the drum on the song should be the same, it doesn't look similiar imo
2. 00:03:765 (1) - If this was the new beat and new combo'd, then this 00:02:075 (4) - should be new combo'd too, because its same sound with the song.
3. 00:07:145 (1,2) - This is a bit close blanket, make a space a bit?
4. 00:10:525 (1,2) - Tiny overlap
5. 00:12:215 (1,2,3) - ^
6. 00:18:976 (1,2) - ^
7. 00:46:018 (1) - tiny suggestion
8. 00:59:539 (1) - This not seemly to be nc'd..
9. 01:40:737 (5) - New combo?
10. 01:44:962 (3) - It seems to be no good that those two circles are overlapped.
11. 01:53:624 (1) - Same like before
12. 02:07:145 - imo break here doesn't fit
13. 02:28:906 (4,1) - 1/2 overlap on this one will confuse a bit for candidate normal+ players, 1/1 overlap is okay, but this is not ._.
14. 03:32:498 (3) - http://puu.sh/lscsi/e310bab332.jpg This is inconsistent it will make the slider untidy.
15. Nothing more!

1. Fun. Also the HP is low, maybe 5.5 or 6?
2. 00:02:075 (1,1) - What? Where the hitsound go? I hear the hitsound but... are you a psyhic??
3. 00:48:131 (3,4,5) - The stack effect made it look overlap.. move it a bit?
4. 00:55:314 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Somehow it feels boring to play when all of these are sliders. (just oppinion) 00:55:948 (4) - alone curved slider
5. 00:58:272 (3,4,5) - The stack effect too..
6. 01:02:920 (1,2,3,4,1) - I don't know but i felt hard to hit on these, 1/2 jumps on 284 bpm..
7. 01:28:272 (1,2) - is more better than 01:29:962 (1,2) - and 01:31:652 (1,2) - , because it feels blue-tick-to-white (i don't know how to call it, 3/4 perhaps? ;-;) more better than 1/2ing it
8. 01:46:018 (1) - ctrl+g
9. 01:46:441 (3) - same
10. 03:29:751 (4,1) - Overlap?

FCL wrote:

• [Normal]

1. 00:00:385 (1) - obviously that this and subsequent same sliders end at blue tick. idk I'd like to keep this 1/1 for easier prospect for normal players when they'd used any mods like DT or HD. It'd sound a little awkward if the slider tail lands on the blue tick just to follow the song track. It is not what my taste really asked for.
2. 00:21:300 (2,3) - I do not like what you're doing here. Here's my version http://puu.sh/lsbhe/5f167ce8db.jpg Well, I can't tell by comparing between the current and yours. They're both good to play, even if it is not intend to create a double blanket. I might reconsider this later :/
3. 00:25:314 (3,4) - make a blanket I tried
4. 00:28:694 (3) - yea, uneven blanket. Move on 440 268 I tried here too
5. 00:32:075 (3,5) - same, blanket here will be better Well, it still does seem fine currently. But if for aesthetics, okay then~
6. 01:10:525 (3) - a little fix the blanket
7. 01:29:539 (3) - ^
8. 01:40:737 (5) - NC here? why not? Adding NC here would be too short. So, to avoid overdoing it, I'd not add it.
9. 01:44:962 (3,2) - fix overlap This tiny overlap is barely noticeable in gameplay. So I guess it's not necessary to make a big change for it.
10. 01:56:159 (3) - move tail slightly up, for create polarity with 01:55:314 (1) - I tried here as well.
11. 02:58:272 (5,2) - try to stack I don't think a stack could fit here in terms of distance spacing. Well, I guess that explains all.
12. 03:49:399 - you missed this tick. Probably you can end there slider or just add a circle If you say so.
13. 03:53:624 (1) - fix blanket Okay

Kalibe wrote:

[Veyron's Normal]

OD and HP to 3,5? I don't think it deserves more harsh difficulty on any Normals. I'd like to keep this.

you have one error spacing in Aimod ~~ It was the manual stacking. I guess it doesn't work correctly then, I'll stack anyway.

nothing to say, wow i like it Thanks!

Ameth Rianno wrote:

[Veyron's Normal]

1. well this looks like a normal+ diff. Also in my oppinion, the hitsound doesn't fit that much, the Drum sampleset whistle with the drum on the song should be the same, it doesn't look similiar imo Making the custom hitsounds similar to the music would make the objects will be hardly audible. So I only found the ones that are CLOSE to similar of the song track's instruments. It might lead to unrankability if hitsounds are inaudible, so I'd avoid that as much as possible.
2. 00:03:765 (1) - If this was the new beat and new combo'd, then this 00:02:075 (4) - should be new combo'd too, because its same sound with the song. I know it's a downbeat and pretty much sound good for NC, but it is unnecessary to add one. If the song track sounds fierce, I'd add it for the HP drain's sake. But this part seems as a calm verse, it didn't ask or needed a NC on this. So this remains unchanged.
3. 00:07:145 (1,2) - This is a bit close blanket, make a space a bit? Okay
4. 00:10:525 (1,2) - Tiny overlap Kinda the same as the previous modders' mods. It is barely noticeable in gameplay.
5. 00:12:215 (1,2,3) - ^
6. 00:18:976 (1,2) - ^
7. 00:46:018 (1) - tiny suggestion Okay then
8. 00:59:539 (1) - This not seemly to be nc'd.. In some kiai times, each new track has a combo itself. Doesn't matter removing an NC to be a part of it. So, I'd keep this.
9. 01:40:737 (5) - New combo? Same reason as before.
10. 01:44:962 (3) - It seems to be no good that those two circles are overlapped. With the circle (4)? It seems pretty far in case of the timeline rhythm. So It's barely overlaps, in the audience's view.
11. 01:53:624 (1) - Same like before Same again
12. 02:07:145 - imo break here doesn't fit It's for the players' sake to take a break here. Even though mapping here or furthering up the start of break time won't effect them. As long as humans are smart.
13. 02:28:906 (4,1) - 1/2 overlap on this one will confuse a bit for candidate normal+ players, 1/1 overlap is okay, but this is not ._. I've tried on 02:22:145 (3,1) - , but why mentioning this one is not good? If you seen the one I mentioned, it's similar to this. I assume the immediate stacks are fine here.
14. 03:32:498 (3) - http://puu.sh/lscsi/e310bab332.jpg This is inconsistent it will make the slider untidy. Doesn't sound much of "inconsistent" when it comes to slider points. But I've made a slight change on this.
15. Nothing more!