Wew helpful mod! Thanks for modding!frukoyurdakul wrote:
And here I am. Nice song choice, and the highest diff is pretty good too! Enjoyable :3 a map is incoming that I can't play with HD lol[Relentless Oni]
- General idea: Reducing 1/4 streams as 1/3 or 1/3 streams as 1/2 is not a good idea, and you used that method a lot. I mentioned some of them, but I guess you can catch the others. Yeah you're right. Guess I tried too hard not to mix 1/4 + 1/3 too much in Inner Oni and Oni >.<
- 01:29:871 - I don't like this gap here, either follow kick sounds or add a spinner or slider. I prefer the kick sounds so yeah here they are
[Inner Oni]
- 00:27:356 ~ 00:35:136 - Between this section, I assume that you put 00:29:023 - these kinds of notes because of the keyboard, but the rest of the patterns are following guitar mostly. And, the musical structure is not very different from the main beginning, which follows guitar extremely well and the patterns finish on red tick (which you used most of them in this very section too, example: 00:29:996 - ) and they flow way better to me. You don't need to make both of the sections same but I think those kinds of notes break the flow on this map. Or, since you already did the same thing on Inner Oni, 00:30:968 (149) - change those kinds of notes to kat, due to emphasize it properly. If you agree on the first one, apply to other diffs too. I'm not too sure about this one. The musical structure doesn't change though but the keyboard starts playing and spices up that part a little. For the musical structure I continued the patterning from before but when the keyboard starts I want the emphasize it as it distinguishes the current part from before. So yeah, one pattern always ends on the red tick as before and one pattern always ends on the white tick due to the keyboard (which are both alternating).
- 00:42:915 (25,26,27,28) - On these four, instead of kkdk I think kdkk works pretty well due to the guitar pitch, so I suggest reversing 00:43:008 (26,27) - those two. Changed
- 01:26:537 (69,71) - How about changing these two as well? Since you are following the guitar pitch due to the hand-swap patterns, the notes are coming a bit different on that spot and 01:26:537 - starting from here a dkkkd emphasizes better for me. Changed
- 02:09:602 - This note is DON on every other diff and yet it's KAT here. Change to don in order to keep it consistent. Changed
[Oni]
- 00:25:134 - You don't need this triplet here: You don't have it on neither Relentless Oni or Oni. Changed
- 00:36:247 - I think difficulty gap is too much between this and Relentless Oni. While the latter has k ddd k ddd k, this only has 1/2 notes with too many 1/1 breaks. To match it, fill some of the gaps like 00:36:386 - this one, or just do it k-d-d-k-d-d-k-d-d-k-d-d 1/2. Changed
- 00:40:693 - I guess you tried to reduce the 1/3 stream here, but I doubt that it fits well. Maybe you can use 1/3 4-plets, 5-plets (with 2/3 break) or 7-plets with 1/1 break, because I don't think it sounds good now. Same goes for 00:45:416 - this section. You can take 00:46:805 - this one as an example, because that one fits. Changed that part
- 00:52:084 - You should add notes on this spot and 00:52:501 - that one, to make it consistent with 00:49:584 - this. And, 00:51:945 (295) - remove this one as well. Added note. Didn't remove that one note though as that would break the mirroring (?) with the previous pattern.
- 00:53:751 (306,307,308,309,310) - What do these emphasize? Umm, you have 1/2 notes on Oni and Relentless Oni, and I assume you follow the guitar there, so you should do the same thing by removing 00:53:821 (307,309) - these two. Ehh, removed
- 01:08:616 (451,452,453,454) - Those should be 1/3 snapped too. You can put a 2/3 break there, and continue with 1/3 patterns afterwards. Changed
- 01:10:839 - If you really need a break there, put a spinner or slider, but 4/1 break is not acceptable due to the map's intensity. Changed
- 01:22:925 - Unlike other parts, starting from here the guitar is 1/4 and those patterns represent nothing in this case. You can use 1/2 1/4 patterns to emphasize them correctly, until 01:24:221 - this section. Same for 01:25:703 - this one. Changed
- 01:25:703 - These should be changed to 1/4 too. See Relentless Oni for reference. Changed
- 01:49:598 - Starting from here, I don't really see a difficulty change between this and Relentless Oni, you used 3-plets and 5-plets close to equal amount of them, which destroyed the spread. Maybe you should try to reducing this section by deleting some notes. Don't forget to adjust Oni as well. Changed
- 01:59:669 - I don't think this note represents anything as well, I can tell that because you don't have any note on Relentless Oni and Oni. Changed
- 02:05:712 - I think you should add a note here. While the other breaks make sense, this one is not neccessary, since after 2 stanza there is a calmer part. Yes
- 02:07:241 (316,317,318) - How about kkk or kkd here? You also need to follow drums once or twice right? Well, you're right
Applied everything
- 00:17:354 ~ 00:18:465 - Between these, Oni is harder. It should be reduced.
- 00:52:779 - You need a note here in order to match the structure with Muzukashii and Inner Oni.
- 00:54:863 - The difficulty change between Inner Oni and this is not enough, while you removed a lot of notes on Muzukashii. You should remove some notes on this one as well, advice: You can use 1/3 duplets, as in d kd kk dk kd. This goes on until 01:04:587 - this spot, which is huge.
- 00:57:271 - This pattern should be reduced, it's too long for Oni and considering the usage of 1/3 patterns in it, this one breaks consistency.
- 00:59:586 (307,308,309,310) - Emphasizing 1/4 sounds with 1/3 pattern is wrong, just like I mentioned at the beginning of this post.
- 01:10:700 - You should add a spinner on this gap as well.
- 01:18:479 - The sounds are in 1/4, which you mapped 1/4 in Inner Oni and Relentless Oni, and hence this ones should be changed too.
- 01:25:425 - Repetitive kdkdkdkdkd seems a bit boring to me, try adding one or two triplets or change some colors on this.
- 01:49:598 - Starting from here, the patterns are a bit too repetitive, try adding some variation.
- 02:01:753 (785) - You should delete this one, 3 1/4 triplets in a row is a bit too intense for an Oni.
- 02:02:795 - Add a note here, you already have a 1/1 break after the next stanza starts.
I'm going to stop there, as I think the mapset isn't ready yet, try to adjust the difficulty spread more. You can use Modding Assistant, it's a very useful program for mapsets. You can call me back after you get 2-3 mods.