totally-not-delayed-mod incoming (´・◡・`)
[Oni]
[Oni]
00:47:091 (253) - I think the pitch of the guitar suggests k here
00:52:785 (294) - Delete this? 4 dons in a row here sound somewhat awkward to me
00:56:165 (320,321,322,323,324) - Why is this all dons? You've been following the guitar pretty much everywhere else, so I think this should be either dkddk or ddddk
00:56:813 (326) - k?
01:05:424 (399,400) - Ctrl+G?
01:10:702 (436) - Slider here?
02:07:368 - Shouldn't this outro be a little more dense? You mapped in very similarly to the intro on every other difficulty, so why not here?
02:15:319 - 02:15:471 - 02:17:830 - All of these timing points are unused
[Inner Oni]00:52:785 (294) - Delete this? 4 dons in a row here sound somewhat awkward to me
00:56:165 (320,321,322,323,324) - Why is this all dons? You've been following the guitar pretty much everywhere else, so I think this should be either dkddk or ddddk
00:56:813 (326) - k?
01:05:424 (399,400) - Ctrl+G?
01:10:702 (436) - Slider here?
02:07:368 - Shouldn't this outro be a little more dense? You mapped in very similarly to the intro on every other difficulty, so why not here?
02:15:319 - 02:15:471 - 02:17:830 - All of these timing points are unused
00:38:271 (232) - Delete?
00:40:007 (249) - The change in pitch makes me think that k sounds better here
00:53:757 (353,354,355,356,357) - Might just be me, but I don't understand why you chose this pattern, kkddd seems more fitting in my opinion
00:54:730 (361) - Change to k to follow the guitar more closely
00:59:961 (408) - Delete, I dont think you should have a mixed stream like this on this difficulty (at least not without a break after the 1/4 I mean), especially seeing how this is the only one in the entire map
01:10:702 (516) - Definitely suggesting a slider here
01:19:938 (598,603) - You could delete these 2, I think this section is dense enough as it is
01:30:702 (688,689,690,691,692,693,694,695,696,697) - Seems very k-heavy to me, maybe change these to kkddd as well?
[Relentless Oni]00:40:007 (249) - The change in pitch makes me think that k sounds better here
00:53:757 (353,354,355,356,357) - Might just be me, but I don't understand why you chose this pattern, kkddd seems more fitting in my opinion
00:54:730 (361) - Change to k to follow the guitar more closely
00:59:961 (408) - Delete, I dont think you should have a mixed stream like this on this difficulty (at least not without a break after the 1/4 I mean), especially seeing how this is the only one in the entire map
01:10:702 (516) - Definitely suggesting a slider here
01:19:938 (598,603) - You could delete these 2, I think this section is dense enough as it is
01:30:702 (688,689,690,691,692,693,694,695,696,697) - Seems very k-heavy to me, maybe change these to kkddd as well?
Every suggestion for this diff is optional and based off of opinion as I really struggle to find any flaws in this awesome map
00:05:146 (25) - Change to k? This is for the sake of consistency, since there's a k on every other strong 1/1 sound in the intro
01:10:702 (10) - How about changing this to a spinner or even a slider? Having a long break like this while the keyboard note is still playing feels off to me
01:31:049 (109,111) - This stream seems a little overmapped compared to what the song is providing. I think deleting these 2 would make it sound more accurate to the song while also making for a nice transition that feels more natural while playing
01:36:257 - 01:37:229 - I think you should stick with the pattern that you establish at 01:37:368 for the sake of consistency here; meaning finisher, quintuplet, triplet, 3 singles. So my suggestion would be: change 01:36:396 (48,49,50,51) - to ddkdk & delete 01:37:160 (56) -
01:46:257 (153) - I get why you didn't make this into a finisher, however I feel it simply breaks the flow of the section a bit. To me, the high pitched keyboard sound is strong enough to warrant a finisher here as well, but it's up to you~
02:11:674 - Adding a don here would sound nice
Nothing else to say, the song is epic and the maps are really well made, can't wait to play this when it's ranked 00:05:146 (25) - Change to k? This is for the sake of consistency, since there's a k on every other strong 1/1 sound in the intro
01:10:702 (10) - How about changing this to a spinner or even a slider? Having a long break like this while the keyboard note is still playing feels off to me
01:31:049 (109,111) - This stream seems a little overmapped compared to what the song is providing. I think deleting these 2 would make it sound more accurate to the song while also making for a nice transition that feels more natural while playing
01:36:257 - 01:37:229 - I think you should stick with the pattern that you establish at 01:37:368 for the sake of consistency here; meaning finisher, quintuplet, triplet, 3 singles. So my suggestion would be: change 01:36:396 (48,49,50,51) - to ddkdk & delete 01:37:160 (56) -
01:46:257 (153) - I get why you didn't make this into a finisher, however I feel it simply breaks the flow of the section a bit. To me, the high pitched keyboard sound is strong enough to warrant a finisher here as well, but it's up to you~
02:11:674 - Adding a don here would sound nice