Hello there! First part: General, Kantan and Relentless
[General]
[General]
- Shouldn't the title be Daedalus? From https://www.musicme.com/Daedalus/videos ... 44A67.html and some others link that i found by searching in google; if you have any official link about metadata would be nice
- What about finishing spinner on 00:09:019 - instead 00:08:880 - ? Looks and plays better (also follows drum)
- 00:16:243 - 00:26:245 - this turns boring, some variations and adding some notes would be nice
- The redline note (00:35:553 (29) - ) could be a little hard to catch for beginners at this bpm, but it's still a good challenge, anyways i suggest to delete 00:35:969 (30) - to make this more 'challenging but easy' (i hope you got my point xD)
- 00:36:247 (31) - i would suggest making it normal note, doesn't feel strong at all
- 00:52:084 (54) - also suggest deleting this to make this more simple :p so you have 00:52:640 (55,56,57,58) - as transition. Fits good aswell
- 01:02:920 - 01:10:700 - this could be somehow a little hard imo, the rhythm follow seems good, but i feel like it could be a little hard for beginners
- 01:12:367 (92) - 01:16:812 (100) - kat to set a difference with 01:14:589 - that starts from lower pitch melody?
- 01:31:816 - overall Kiai could be improved imo, it just consists on 2/1 singletaps, im sure you can make something more interesting and balanced : D
That's all here
- 00:20:827 (76) - what about making this kat to set a difference with 00:23:050 - ?
- 00:51:737 (66) - I suggest deleting this note, 00:51:251 (60,61,62,63,64,65) - this double triple should be enough to point the transition
- 01:28:482 - this feels strange; i suggest something like:
Other than that this is ready imo