Kajiura Yuki - Noi! [CatchTheBeat] · forum

Sorceress

Joined September 2012

Sorceress 2015-11-02T04:18:14+00:00

Negri_sk wrote:
[Platter]
00:10:559 (2,3,4) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3901825 - Strongly considered this but ultimately prefer how this plays as it is now with that bit more movement.
00:12:282 (3,4,1) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3901828 - Again almost went ahead with this but didn't want to impact the spacing of 00:11:592 (1,2,3) - and preferred the movement needed at 00:12:282 (3,4,1) - how it is.
00:14:006 (3) - x0 - Would have done this if I went ahead with the above. 00:12:627 (1,2,3) - I did like how these sliders played with (1) being inverted but it impacted the previous part too much.
00:15:730 (4,5,1) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3901830 - It's a similar story here. Don't want to impact on the previous 3 notes and the thing about the movement which I can't word properly because I should be in bed.

Thanks for the mod. Hope my response made sense, I'm stupidly tired and it's 4am but sleeping is difficult.

koliron

791 posts

Joined July 2014

koliron 2015-11-03T23:13:50+00:00

General

the combocolours are almost only 2, with really BIT diference ): try with other colours! maybe red (eyes+ribbon) and white-blue
Wildscreen support are actived in Wizard's Platter

Cup

HP 5.2? wooo nonono D: is hard! reduce to 3, and! the decimal not work in HP (i think riari change this to maintain constancy)
AR 6.2? is too hard ): 5.5 or 5 is good option
00:09:869 (4,5,1) - the sound in 00:11:248 (1) - is more loud than the others but you use almost the same distance, you should add a bit more here (and ye, maybe reduce a bit between 00:09:869 (4,5) - these to not make uncomfortalbe movement to cup players)
00:11:248 (1,2,3,4) - mhh ): 2 same patterns here, ctrl+g in some slider and reposition i think is good option to vary a bit
00:16:075 (1) - really this nc in neccesary? i think no, mhh, but maybe in 00:16:420 (2) -
00:25:729 (2,3,4) - hu! the sound in 00:26:418 - 00:26:763 - 00:27:108 - reduces a bit each one, but you use more distance to 00:27:108 (4) - ): (yes, i love to mention invisible details) , so just placing 00:26:763 (3) - in x 264
00:32:970 (1,2) - humhumhum, okay i think im bad with ncs xD but i think the nc is in 00:33:314 (2) - , I guess if you refuse this is because in 00:32:970 (1) - start again the voice, I appreciate if you tell me what is the correct, becuase, for example, 00:07:111 (1,2) - you use the nc in the loud sound, not in the voice-start, consistency in these cases of nc is not necessary?
00:42:625 (1,2) - 00:45:384 (1,2) - obviously, the same case

no more, good cup jbh!

Salad

HP 5.8? wooo nonono D: is hard! reduce to 4, and! the decimal not work in HP
mh! AR 7.2 is a bit hard to a salad, i think 6 o 6.5 is better
00:02:283 - I think is not neccesary add nc here
00:04:697 (2,3) - the sound is loud enough to add dash here
00:09:179 (1,2) - mh? only 2 of combo? and is unneccesary add nc here, the true nc is 00:08:490 (4) -
00:09:869 (1,2,3,4) - okay, the sounds in 1,2,3 are strong if you listen in 0.25 but 00:10:904 (4) - definitely is not loud, reduce the distance
00:11:248 (5) - nc here! not 00:11:592 (1) - here
00:11:937 (2) - other high sound, add dash to here! feels good
00:12:627 (3,1) - 1 is a bit loud, maybe some distance here, fits good
00:12:972 (1,2,3) - okay again, I know I'm pretty upset about these things and I repeat it many times, but come on! add distance to (3) it is a good choice to highlight that there is a slightly louder sound
00:14:696 (6,1) - other case, the nc is un (6)
00:15:041 (1,2,3,4) - the note density is more than 00:11:592 (1,2) - ! not forget, you need maintain constancy with.. "the combo", in same sounds/parts
00:16:420 (1,2,3,4,5) - mh! i see, you use a bit less distance each a note, but lol you use distance to 00:17:799 (5) - , and definitely is not more strong than que others, so you should reduce a lot the distance
00:17:799 (5,1) - wooh! this dash its very hard for a salad! and that distance may even scare a platter player, reduce the distance! maybe x 128 is good position
00:25:039 (2,1) - too short! and the sound is quite strong, try to add some (easy dash fits good)
00:29:177 (3,4) - is the same case, but ok, the sound is not loud and dash not fit here, but more movement is neccesary, we're in kiai! in kiai you need are more movement as are possible
00:30:556 (2,3) - you should add dash between these to maintain constancy with 00:27:798 (1,2) -
00:31:936 (4,5) - oh lol comparing with 00:29:177 (3,4) you use a lot of distance here, and not fit ): reduce the distance here
00:32:281 (5,1) - and ye, is the same x, try to add more distance! is in kiai yet
00:32:970 (1,2) - the nc is in (2)
00:34:694 (5,1) - same case
00:36:418 (3,4) - the dash is not too strong for sound? reduce a bit
00:38:832 (3,4) - the same case as 00:29:177 (3,4) , add a bit more distance here
00:39:866 (1,1) - 2 nc in row ): remove one
00:37:453 (1,2) - you can add a bit more distance to make more obvious dash
00:41:590 (3,4) - and lol you maintain consistency here xD but again i think is not loud to add dash, reduce the distance!
00:47:108 (4,5) - other case of these distances, reduce

Platter

HP 6.4? wooo nonono D: is hard! reduce to 5, and! the decimal not work in HP
00:02:283 (2,3,4) - you use the same distance, and plays ok, but come on! 00:02:973 (4) - is more loud than the others, add some distance to make easy dash is nice idea
00:03:662 (5,1) - mmh, maybe is not the best sound to make hdash, but i see you add really few hdash in your diff (and ok, ve not much strong sounds), in comparation, the sound in 00:04:352 (1) - is more strong than the others, so i suggest you make easy hdash here
00:05:387 (3,4,5) - listen this, the sound in 00:05:731 (5) - have new sound and the voice is a bit more high, mark this with more distance feels good, try with 00:05:731 (5) - x 152
00:06:421 (6,1) - hu hu! and if you denied the sugg in 00:03:662 (5,1), you're not consistent with this
00:07:455 - has a lower note density than the salad, and i think note 00:07:628 - here fits good! , so maybe you can reduce the slider and add reverse here
00:08:145 (3,4) - huuuu! the distance is too short and the sound in (4) is loud! a good dash fits perfect here
00:08:490 (4,5) - mhmhmh, the distance is practicaly 10 of x, add some distance! and then you use hdash to 00:09:179 (6) - and i think is not the best place, reduce this to normal dash~
00:09:007 (5) - mh, and i think is not neccesary, not fit with the music
00:09:524 (7) - mhmhmh, this case is interesting, there are 2 things to correct, the nc is in 00:09:869 - , not in 00:10:214 (1) - , and ye, is good sound to add hdash (00:09:869 - ) a-a-aaaand, you use long dash to 00:10:214 (1) - , and is not loud sound, so! i suggest you replace 00:09:524 (7) - with 2 circles and add hdash to the second, and nc in this
00:10:904 (4) - is the same case xD, i know that is good time to slider, but the ncs are priority (and equally, is good time to hdash, aaand remove a lot of distance with 00:11:592 (1) - , is normal sound)
00:12:282 (3,4,1) - same distances, but (1) is too low! 00:12:627 (1) - in x 432 i think is good option
00:14:006 (3,1) - mh, again, is other good time to add hdash, fits good
00:15:730 (4,5,1) - the same case as 00:12:282 (3,4,1)
00:18:488 (2,3) - really is good sound to add dash here? i think no, reduce the distances
00:19:178 (3,4) - but here yes!
00:21:937 (3) - again, the nc is in 00:22:281 - , you know what to do (uh, and 00:22:625 (1) - is not loud, reduce the distance to this)
00:22:625 (1,2) - other bad time to dash, 2 is lowww~ (but you can maintain between 00:22:970 (2,3) - )
00:25:039 (6,1) - the nc is 00:25:039 - here, not 00:26:074 - here
00:25:039 (6,1,2) - okay, is other case, 1 is loud sound, not good to dash, and 2 is more loud! but you use less distance to this
00:27:453 (4,1) - i think is good time to hdash! add distance
00:27:798 (1,2,3) - mhmhmhmh~! the hdash is to 00:28:315 (2) - but is not the true loud sound, need fix this, the true loud (hue) is 00:28:487 (3) - , so just change the distance of 00:28:315 (2) - , try near of the other previous slider
00:30:556 (2,3,4) - the same case, just 00:31:074 (3) - x 288 (304 no, is hard hdash to platter!)
00:32:970 (1) - again, the nc is in 00:33:315 - , replace with 2 circles
00:32:970 (1,2) - okay the kiai finish, so this dash is not tolerable, reduce the distance
00:37:108 (3,1) - ooother good time to hdash! to mark the start of the kiai
(00:37:453 (1,2,3) - 00:40:211 (2,3,4) - oh! you use the correct hdash here)
00:39:866 (1,2) - the correct nc is in 00:40:211 (2) -
00:41:590 (2,3) - not the best to dash!

Noi

CS 3 is too low to a rain, try withj 3.5 (and ye, the consistency is normal with that, 2 - 2.5 - 3 - 3.5)
hum, i think AR 8.2 is really low diference with the platter, try with 8.5 or 8.6
HP 7? wooo nonono D: is hard! reduce to 6 (do not worry with the consistency, in other diffs also wrong)
Why not "Yesi" to be more funny
00:02:283 - I think is not neccesary add NC here
00:02:455 (2) - this circle is not necesary, not fit... with nothing
00:03:662 (3,1) - the hdash here is too hard! you need catch (1) with the border, and ye is the best time yo add hdash, but 4 hdash in row is not acceptable in rain, i think, especialy in relax music, so i suggest you remove the hdash between 00:02:973 (1,2) -
00:04:352 (1,2) - JMM! remember, is relax music, not try to add unnecesary hdash, you can add dash here, but is not too strong
00:05:731 (1,2,3) - okay, to maintain constancy with the previous part (and my suggestion, ye, add hdash to 00:06:421 (3) - , is more loud than 00:06:076 (2) - , oh and remove the hdash to this (ye, 2)
00:06:421 (3,4) - you not maintain constancy with 00:03:662 (3) ! (same sounds~) make the same (use the long slider)
00:07:111 (1) - other case, you not maintain constancy with 00:04:352 (1) - !
00:07:455 - has a lower note density than the salad, 00:07:628 - note here fits good
00:08:490 (1,2) - lol, this hdash is soo hard, and the slider not fit, try to make the same pattern as the platter
00:09:869 (1,2,3,4) - lower note density than the platter, note 00:10:731 - here feels good!
00:14:351 (2) - is not loud to add hdash, reduce the distance
00:15:041 (1,2) - good time to add hdash!
00:16:420 (1,2,3) - listen in x0.25, the sound in (3) is a bit more loud than the others, you can add a bit more distance~! maybe x 424
00:17:110 (3,1) - good time to add hdash!
00:17:799 (2,3) - wooooo a lot of distance here xD reduce a lot!
00:18:144 (3,1) - the dash between these are a bit uncomfortable, reduce a bit the distance
00:20:212 (5,1,2,3,1) - 4 hdash in row here! remove to 00:21:247 (2) - , is the best to.. remove xD
00:24:349 (1,2) - other hard hdash! reduce the distance
00:25:729 (1,2,3) - the same case as 00:16:420 (1,2,3)but in reverse, 00:26:418 (3) - is a bit low than the others, reduce a bit the distance, x 200 is good option
00:26:763 (1,2) - ooother hard hdash! you must not make these hdash, because the song is.. really relax, and the bpm too low, and especially because are not comfortable to the players, without exaggeration pls
00:27:108 (2,1) - maybe, one is acceptable because start the dash
00:29:177 (1,2) - nooooo, reduce.. and really short distance between 00:29:522 (2,3) -
00:31:246 (3,1) - same case
00:31:936 (1,2) - same case (and ye 00:32:281 (2,3) - )
00:32:970 (1,2) - ye, lol is the best time to add hdash, the sound is lololooouud!
00:34:694 (1,2) - is not in kiai, so is not acceptable, remove the hdash (and ye, add to 00:36:074 (1) - , fits good)
00:36:074 (1,2) - low distance!try with ctrl+g (2)
00:36:418 (2,3) - other hard hdash, reduce
00:36:763 (3,1) - the best time to hdash!
00:40:901 (3,4,5) - hdash to 4, not to 5, fix this
00:44:349 (1,2) - not good time to hdaashhh ): and is too hard, only dash here
00:45:384 (1,2) - hdash between these fits good (and ye, the nc is in 2)
00:47:108 (1,2) - other haaard hdash!!! reduce a lot

Sorry for not explain much ): im busy these weeks

good luck!

JBHyperion

osu!catch Paragon

3,885 posts

Joined September 2014

JBHyperion 2015-11-05T17:54:20+00:00

koliron wrote:

Cup
HP 5.2? wooo nonono D: is hard! reduce to 3, and! the decimal not work in HP (i think riari change this to maintain constancy) Agreed, especially since it's low BPM. I think 4/5/5/6 would be nice.
AR 6.2? is too hard ): 5.5 or 5 is good option I can accept 5.5
00:09:869 (4,5,1) - the sound in 00:11:248 (1) - is more loud than the others but you use almost the same distance, you should add a bit more here (and ye, maybe reduce a bit between 00:09:869 (4,5) - these to not make uncomfortalbe movement to cup players) The hitsound is the same, but (1) is definitely a weaker beat than, say 00:09:869 (4) - I feel it's currently comfortable enough, even for a beginner, so no change
00:11:248 (1,2,3,4) - mhh ): 2 same patterns here, ctrl+g in some slider and reposition i think is good option to vary a bit Current pattern is fine as in incorporates an antiflow element, I don't want to introduce too many things at once. Also, it's different from 00:14:696 (1,2,1,2) so you can't say there's no variety
00:16:075 (1) - really this nc in neccesary? i think no, mhh, but maybe in 00:16:420 (2) - Fine, removed
00:25:729 (2,3,4) - hu! the sound in 00:26:418 - 00:26:763 - 00:27:108 - reduces a bit each one, but you use more distance to 00:27:108 (4) - ): (yes, i love to mention invisible details) , so just placing 00:26:763 (3) - in x 264 00:27:108 (4) has more spacing because although it's a lower vocal note, it's more "punchy" and short, so the extra spacing emphasises the finality
00:32:970 (1,2) - humhumhum, okay i think im bad with ncs xD but i think the nc is in 00:33:314 (2) - , I guess if you refuse this is because in 00:32:970 (1) - start again the voice, I appreciate if you tell me what is the correct, becuase, for example, 00:07:111 (1,2) - you use the nc in the loud sound, not in the voice-start, consistency in these cases of nc is not necessary? 00:32:970 (1,2) are part of the same vocal phrase, so they belong in the same combo
00:42:625 (1,2) - 00:45:384 (1,2) - obviously, the same case obviously the same answer (:

no more, good cup jbh! <3
good luck!

Thanks for the mod!

Riari, check out suggestions for HP drain spread in first point please

Cupdate (since I know it triggers you hue

osu file format v14

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Creator:Riari
Version:Hyperion's Cup
Source:劇場版 魔法少女まどか☆マギカ[新編]叛逆の物語
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Riari

743 posts

Joined April 2013

Topic Starter

Riari 2015-11-06T16:14:26+00:00

koliron wrote:

General
the combocolours are almost only 2, with really BIT diference ): try with other colours! maybe red (eyes+ribbon) and white-blueI like the current ones.
Wildscreen support are actived in Wizard's Platter

Salad
HP 5.8? wooo nonono D: is hard! reduce to 4, and! the decimal not work in HP Done.
mh! AR 7.2 is a bit hard to a salad, i think 6 o 6.5 is better Changed.
00:02:283 - I think is not neccesary add nc here I think its fine.
00:04:697 (2,3) - the sound is loud enough to add dash here Increased distance slightly.
00:09:179 (1,2) - mh? only 2 of combo? and is unneccesary add nc here, the true nc is 00:08:490 (4) - Done.
00:09:869 (1,2,3,4) - okay, the sounds in 1,2,3 are strong if you listen in 0.25 but 00:10:904 (4) - definitely is not loud, reduce the distance Done.
00:11:248 (5) - nc here! not 00:11:592 (1) - here Worked with.
00:11:937 (2) - other high sound, add dash to here! feels good Not what I was looking to do, high dash density isn't what I want either.
00:12:627 (3,1) - 1 is a bit loud, maybe some distance here, fits good Changed.
00:12:972 (1,2,3) - okay again, I know I'm pretty upset about these things and I repeat it many times, but come on! add distance to (3) it is a good choice to highlight that there is a slightly louder sound Already put focus on beat after.
00:14:696 (6,1) - other case, the nc is un (6)Done.
00:15:041 (1,2,3,4) - the note density is more than 00:11:592 (1,2) - ! not forget, you need maintain constancy with.. "the combo", in same sounds/parts Changed.
00:16:420 (1,2,3,4,5) - mh! i see, you use a bit less distance each a note, but lol you use distance to 00:17:799 (5) - , and definitely is not more strong than que others, so you should reduce a lot the distance Feels stronger to me.
00:17:799 (5,1) - wooh! this dash its very hard for a salad! and that distance may even scare a platter player, reduce the distance! maybe x 128 is good position Done.
00:25:039 (2,1) - too short! and the sound is quite strong, try to add some (easy dash fits good) Done.
00:29:177 (3,4) - is the same case, but ok, the sound is not loud and dash not fit here, but more movement is neccesary, we're in kiai! in kiai you need are more movement as are possible Changed slightly.
00:30:556 (2,3) - you should add dash between these to maintain constancy with 00:27:798 (1,2) - Done.
00:31:936 (4,5) - oh lol comparing with 00:29:177 (3,4) you use a lot of distance here, and not fit ): reduce the distance here Done.
00:32:281 (5,1) - and ye, is the same x, try to add more distance! is in kiai yetPrevious point fixes.
00:32:970 (1,2) - the nc is in (2) NC is fine here.
00:34:694 (5,1) - same case Done.
00:36:418 (3,4) - the dash is not too strong for sound? reduce a bit Done.
00:38:832 (3,4) - the same case as 00:29:177 (3,4) , add a bit more distance here Fine as it is.
00:39:866 (1,1) - 2 nc in row ): remove one Done.
00:37:453 (1,2) - you can add a bit more distance to make more obvious dash Done.
00:41:590 (3,4) - and lol you maintain consistency here xD but again i think is not loud to add dash, reduce the distance! Done.
00:47:108 (4,5) - other case of these distances, reduce Done.

Noi
CS 3 is too low to a rain, try withj 3.5 (and ye, the consistency is normal with that, 2 - 2.5 - 3 - 3.5) I think its fine.
hum, i think AR 8.2 is really low diference with the platter, try with 8.5 or 8.6 This isn't really a Rain.
HP 7? wooo nonono D: is hard! reduce to 6 (do not worry with the consistency, in other diffs also wrong) I think its acceptable, if others complain I'll change it but I don't want it the same as the Platter.
Why not "Yesi" to be more funny I'm not a funny person.
00:02:283 - I think is not neccesary add NC here Changed.
00:02:455 (2) - this circle is not necesary, not fit... with nothing Removed.
00:03:662 (3,1) - the hdash here is too hard! you need catch (1) with the border, and ye is the best time yo add hdash, but 4 hdash in row is not acceptable in rain, i think, especialy in relax music, so i suggest you remove the hdash between 00:02:973 (1,2) - Song is slow and they are snap hypers, I think its fine.
00:04:352 (1,2) - JMM! remember, is relax music, not try to add unnecesary hdash, you can add dash here, but is not too strong Changed.
00:05:731 (1,2,3) - okay, to maintain constancy with the previous part (and my suggestion, ye, add hdash to 00:06:421 (3) - , is more loud than 00:06:076 (2) - , oh and remove the hdash to this (ye, 2) Changed.
00:06:421 (3,4) - you not maintain constancy with 00:03:662 (3) ! (same sounds~) make the same (use the long slider) Changed.
00:07:111 (1) - other case, you not maintain constancy with 00:04:352 (1) - ! Changed.
00:07:455 - has a lower note density than the salad, 00:07:628 - note here fits good Changed.
00:08:490 (1,2) - lol, this hdash is soo hard, and the slider not fit, try to make the same pattern as the platter Changed.
00:09:869 (1,2,3,4) - lower note density than the platter, note 00:10:731 - here feels good! Nothing there.
00:14:351 (2) - is not loud to add hdash, reduce the distance Changed.
00:15:041 (1,2) - good time to add hdash! Done.
00:16:420 (1,2,3) - listen in x0.25, the sound in (3) is a bit more loud than the others, you can add a bit more distance~! maybe x 424 I think its fine as it is.
00:17:110 (3,1) - good time to add hdash! Not possible.
00:17:799 (2,3) - wooooo a lot of distance here xD reduce a lot! Changed.
00:18:144 (3,1) - the dash between these are a bit uncomfortable, reduce a bit the distance Changed.
00:20:212 (5,1,2,3,1) - 4 hdash in row here! remove to 00:21:247 (2) - , is the best to.. remove xD I think its fine.
00:24:349 (1,2) - other hard hdash! reduce the distance I don't think this is hard at all in comparison to the other.
00:25:729 (1,2,3) - the same case as 00:16:420 (1,2,3)but in reverse, 00:26:418 (3) - is a bit low than the others, reduce a bit the distance, x 200 is good option I like them as they are.
00:26:763 (1,2) - ooother hard hdash! you must not make these hdash, because the song is.. really relax, and the bpm too low, and especially because are not comfortable to the players, without exaggeration pls I think its fine.
00:27:108 (2,1) - maybe, one is acceptable because start the dash Emphasis on vocals.
00:29:177 (1,2) - nooooo, reduce.. and really short distance between 00:29:522 (2,3) - Changed this.
00:31:246 (3,1) - same case Same as above.
00:31:936 (1,2) - same case (and ye 00:32:281 (2,3) - ) ^^
00:32:970 (1,2) - ye, lol is the best time to add hdash, the sound is lololooouud! No possible distance.
00:34:694 (1,2) - is not in kiai, so is not acceptable, remove the hdash (and ye, add to 00:36:074 (1) - , fits good) Changed differently.
00:36:074 (1,2) - low distance!try with ctrl+g (2) I like this.
00:36:418 (2,3) - other hard hdash, reduce Done.
00:36:763 (3,1) - the best time to hdash! Not possible.
00:40:901 (3,4,5) - hdash to 4, not to 5, fix this Changed.
00:44:349 (1,2) - not good time to hdaashhh ): and is too hard, only dash here Changed.
00:45:384 (1,2) - hdash between these fits good (and ye, the nc is in 2) Not possible, nc is already correct.
00:47:108 (1,2) - other haaard hdash!!! reduce a lot Changed.

Sorry for not explain much ): im busy these weeks

good luck!

Thanks for the mod!

Last edited by Riari 2015-11-20T18:31:32+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Sorceress

332 posts

Joined September 2012

Sorceress 2015-11-10T15:20:20+00:00

Whoo whee that looks like quite a mod. Haven't got proper internet yet so i'll get this saved locally and try apply it soonish!

Sorceress

332 posts

Joined September 2012

Sorceress 2015-11-20T17:53:17+00:00

koliron wrote:

General
Wildscreen support are actived in Wizard's Platter - Fixeded

Platter
HP 6.4? wooo nonono D: is hard! reduce to 5, and! the decimal not work in HP - Riari's fault, fixed
00:02:283 (2,3,4) - you use the same distance, and plays ok, but come on! 00:02:973 (4) - is more loud than the others, add some distance to make easy dash is nice idea - Played about with this but I just don't like how it plays with a dash. I couldn't find a distance I felt was nice to play and a hyper felt way overkill.
00:03:662 (5,1) - mmh, maybe is not the best sound to make hdash - Aye, I'm not certain about this dash., but i see you add really few hdash in your diff (and ok, ve not much strong sounds - Takes some silly distances to get notes to hyper when they're 1/2), in comparation, the sound in 00:04:352 (1) - is more strong than the others, so i suggest you make easy hdash here - Takes a silly distance to get this to hyper, for the sake of consistency i'll remove the other hyper you mentioned.
00:05:387 (3,4,5) - listen this, the sound in 00:05:731 (5) - have new sound and the voice is a bit more high, mark this with more distance feels good, try with 00:05:731 (5) - x 152 - x:152 feels like it doesn't have enough impact to make a difference. I've tried x:122 but i'm not certain about it.
00:06:421 (6,1) - hu hu! and if you denied the sugg in 00:03:662 (5,1), you're not consistent with this - Not sure what you mean here
00:07:455 - has a lower note density than the salad, and i think note 00:07:628 - here fits good! , so maybe you can reduce the slider and add reverse here - I blame Riari
00:08:145 (3,4) - huuuu! the distance is too short and the sound in (4) is loud! a good dash fits perfect here - Okie dokie
00:08:490 (4,5) - mhmhmh, the distance is practicaly 10 of x, add some distance! - Here? I don't think there's anything in the music calling out for any dashes or such. and then you use hdash to 00:09:179 (6) - and i think is not the best place, reduce this to normal dash~ - ;_; There's a nice little guitar noise on (7) I thought was nice to hyper into, but alas it is kill.
00:09:007 (5) - mh, and i think is not neccesary, not fit with the music -
00:09:524 (7) - mhmhmh, this case is interesting, there are 2 things to correct, the nc is in 00:09:869 - , not in 00:10:214 (1) - , and ye, is good sound to add hdash (00:09:869 - ) a-a-aaaand, you use long dash to 00:10:214 (1) - , and is not loud sound, so! i suggest you replace 00:09:524 (7) - with 2 circles and add hdash to the second, and nc in this
00:10:904 (4) - is the same case xD, i know that is good time to slider, but the ncs are priority (and equally, is good time to hdash, aaand remove a lot of distance with 00:11:592 (1) - , is normal sound) - Lot of points above lol. Ended up redoing this section and losing track a bit of what exactly has and hasn't been applied. The NC combo stuff, theres a hyper in there but im not sure about it. Notes removed. Take a look sometime
00:12:282 (3,4,1) - same distances, but (1) is too low! 00:12:627 (1) - in x 432 i think is good option - I'm not seeing anything wrong here
00:14:006 (3,1) - mh, again, is other good time to add hdash, fits good - Would take too much silly distance to force this
00:15:730 (4,5,1) - the same case as 00:12:282 (3,4,1) - ?
00:18:488 (2,3) - really is good sound to add dash here? i think no, reduce the distances - Roger that
00:19:178 (3,4) - but here yes! - Yep!
00:21:937 (3) - again, the nc is in 00:22:281 - , you know what to do (uh, and 00:22:625 (1) - is not loud, reduce the distance to this) - With the NC I shortened the slider as there was a noise on the blue tick, then have it hyper to the new (1) which is close to (2).
00:22:625 (1,2) - other bad time to dash, 2 is lowww~ (but you can maintain between 00:22:970 (2,3) - ) -
00:25:039 (6,1) - the nc is 00:25:039 - here, not 00:26:074 - here - Done
00:25:039 (6,1,2) - okay, is other case, 1 is loud sound, not good to dash, and 2 is more loud! but you use less distance to this - I think the distances are pretty equal here.
00:27:453 (4,1) - i think is good time to hdash! add distance - Had to flip the section after to make this work but felt fitting for the start of Kaiaiaiaiaiai time.
00:27:798 (1,2,3) - mhmhmhmh~! the hdash is to 00:28:315 (2) - but is not the true loud sound, need fix this, the true loud (hue) is 00:28:487 (3) - , so just change the distance of 00:28:315 (2) - , try near of the other previous slider - Aye aye
00:30:556 (2,3,4) - the same case, just 00:31:074 (3) - x 288 (304 no, is hard hdash to platter!) - Hmm? I've moved (3) closer to (2) and changed the shape of (4) so it should be easier to catch.
00:32:970 (1) - again, the nc is in 00:33:315 - , replace with 2 circles - Aye aye
00:32:970 (1,2) - okay the kiai finish, so this dash is not tolerable, reduce the distance - Messing about with NC has me a bit unsure which notes you're talking about exactly but I don't see any bit here that even needs dash.
00:37:108 (3,1) - ooother good time to hdash! to mark the start of the kiai - To get a hdash here it would take too much reworking of the parts around it
(00:37:453 (1,2,3) - 00:40:211 (2,3,4) - oh! you use the correct hdash here) - xD
00:39:866 (1,2) - the correct nc is in 00:40:211 (2) - - Yep
00:41:590 (2,3) - not the best to dash! - Moved (3) further right.

Whoo! That didn't take too long... xD Thank you very much for the mod, sorry for the late reply and sorry for the lack of Noi! puns

Edit: Whoops double post.

Wizard's Platter

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Riari

743 posts

Joined April 2013

Topic Starter

Riari 2015-11-20T18:33:26+00:00

All updated.

JBHyperion

osu!catch Paragon

3,885 posts

Joined September 2014

JBHyperion 2015-11-28T11:49:21+00:00

Gonna mod the diffs that aren't mine, hopefully we can keep this moving.

General Comments:

Song Folder: No issues
Song Setup: AR spread of 5.5/6.2/8/8.2 is a bit wonky, since my diff uses a lot of 1/1 the note density is really low - I think it'd be fine for me to go to AR5. I feel the other diffs are fine the way they are, but if you wanted to be strictly equal, Salad having AR6.5 would give perfectly equal Cup-Platter spread. Up to you.
Metadata: No issues
Timing: No issues
Hitsounds: A couple of the hitsounds had loads of null audio in the waveform, so I cut that out to save a bit on file space, new versions are here
AImod: No issues

Difficulty-Specific Comments:

Salad

00:15:903 (3) - I'd move this a tiny bit to the right. Whilst it can be caught without dash, new players are likely to read this as a sharp 1/4 dash, and overshooting (and then missing 00:16:420 (1,2) -) is very possible. Try it at x-160. Also, and this is just an observation, why did you use a different pattern here than at 00:11:937 (3,4) which is the same vocal rhythm? Maybe doing what you did there would fit better, especially since along with the next point I mention, these are the only 1/4 beat spacings in the map
00:33:315 (2,3) - Personal opinion, but I don't feel like this needs to be separated at this difficulty. Combining into a 1/1 slider (or at the very least reducing the spacing between these) would be more appropriate here

Wizard's Platter

00:07:455 (2) - Perhaps move this to the left a little? There's a stoppage in flow between this and 00:07:111 (1) which feels a little odd to me. Try moving this to x-240, and optionally moving 00:07:800 (3) a little to the right as well
00:24:349 (6,1) - This little zig-zag play a bit awkwardly to me, I feel like the motion after (6) should be to the right, since you've been using a relatively simple flow throughout. Just an idea, but you could Ctrl+H these two and move to x-224, then move the tail on (1) to somewhere like [432,80] to get back to your following rhythm
00:28:315 (2,3) - 7.84x DS, yikes. I agree a hdash fits here, but this is way too strong and seriously unexpected. Moving to x-352 feels much smoother, and is more consistent with 00:30:556 (2,3,4)
00:37:108 (3,1) - Why no hyper here when you had one at the start of the previous kiai for 00:27:453 (5,1) -? I'd play around with this a little to find something you like, because somewhere a pattern is gonna have to change to accommodate this due to the low BPM
00:45:384 (1) - This return jump after a hdash might be a little tricky for an entry-level Platter player. You could either reduce the hdash strength a little, move (1) slightly to the right, or both t make this more comfortable to play

RaiNoi!

00:04:697 (2) - I feel this could be made more horizontal, it doesn't require that much movement atm and it spoils the flow a bit for me
00:12:282 (3,4,5) - Double hdash feels pretty excessive for such a calm part of the song. However just having one hdash here would feel weird as well, so I recommend doing the same pattern but without the hdashes and just stick to a wiggle-y dash pattern, such as this. (1,2,3) have ~2.0x DS, (4) is unmoved, (5) is stacked with (3)
00:14:696 (3,1) - This return jump after the strong hdash is kinda tricky, I'd move (3) to around x-76
00:36:418 (2,3) - Spacing here is annoyingly close to hdash, consider reducing it by moving 00:36:074 (1,2) to around x-144, since the hdash from 00:35:384 (2) is a little too strong for my liking anyway
00:39:866 (1,2) - Same deal here, though I feel this could warrant a hdash if you liked to be consistent with following patterns. x-52?

All done (:

Riari

743 posts

Joined April 2013

Topic Starter

Riari 2015-11-28T13:44:52+00:00

JBHyperion wrote:
Gonna mod the diffs that aren't mine, hopefully we can keep this moving.

General Comments:
Song Folder: No issues Fixed.
Song Setup: AR spread of 5.5/6.2/8/8.2 is a bit wonky, since my diff uses a lot of 1/1 the note density is really low - I think it'd be fine for me to go to AR5. I feel the other diffs are fine the way they are, but if you wanted to be strictly equal, Salad having AR6.5 would give perfectly equal Cup-Platter spread. Up to you. Salad to 6.5
Metadata: No issuesFixed.
Timing: No issues Fixed.
Hitsounds: A couple of the hitsounds had loads of null audio in the waveform, so I cut that out to save a bit on file space, new versions are here Swapped.
AImod: No issues
Fixed.

Difficulty-Specific Comments:

Salad
00:15:903 (3) - I'd move this a tiny bit to the right. Whilst it can be caught without dash, new players are likely to read this as a sharp 1/4 dash, and overshooting (and then missing 00:16:420 (1,2) -) is very possible. Try it at x-160. Also, and this is just an observation, why did you use a different pattern here than at 00:11:937 (3,4) which is the same vocal rhythm? Maybe doing what you did there would fit better, especially since along with the next point I mention, these are the only 1/4 beat spacings in the map Changed it to be similar to the snap difference at 00:11:937 (3,4)
00:33:315 (2,3) - Personal opinion, but I don't feel like this needs to be separated at this difficulty. Combining into a 1/1 slider (or at the very least reducing the spacing between these) would be more appropriate here Changed.
RaiNoi!
00:04:697 (2) - I feel this could be made more horizontal, it doesn't require that much movement atm and it spoils the flow a bit for me Done.
00:12:282 (3,4,5) - Double hdash feels pretty excessive for such a calm part of the song. However just having one hdash here would feel weird as well, so I recommend doing the same pattern but without the hdashes and just stick to a wiggle-y dash pattern, such as this. (1,2,3) have ~2.0x DS, (4) is unmoved, (5) is stacked with (3) Changed.
00:14:696 (3,1) - This return jump after the strong hdash is kinda tricky, I'd move (3) to around x-76 Done.
00:36:418 (2,3) - Spacing here is annoyingly close to hdash, consider reducing it by moving 00:36:074 (1,2) to around x-144, since the hdash from 00:35:384 (2) is a little too strong for my liking anyway Done.
00:39:866 (1,2) - Same deal here, though I feel this could warrant a hdash if you liked to be consistent with following patterns. x-52? Done.
All done (:

Thanks for the mod.

Sorceress

332 posts

Joined September 2012

Sorceress 2015-11-28T18:09:35+00:00

JBHyperion wrote:
Gonna mod the diffs that aren't mine, hopefully we can keep this moving. #BlameRiari

Difficulty-Specific Comments:

Wizard's Platter
00:07:455 (2) - Perhaps move this to the left a little? There's a stoppage in flow between this and 00:07:111 (1) which feels a little odd to me. Try moving this to x-240, and optionally moving 00:07:800 (3) a little to the right as well - Moved it! I used 1.0x DS for (3) just to keep spacing smooth and consistent here.
00:24:349 (6,1) - This little zig-zag play a bit awkwardly to me, I feel like the motion after (6) should be to the right, since you've been using a relatively simple flow throughout. Just an idea, but you could Ctrl+H these two and move to x-224, then move the tail on (1) to somewhere like [432,80] to get back to your following rhythm - Hmmmmmm ok. I've gone ahead and used Ctrl+H on 00:24:005 (5) - instead in hopes of fixing the slight awkwardness here. I'm hoping to keep 00:25:039 (1) - and the surrounding notes pretty much as they are as I really like how it works. But maybe i've just made things worse instead ;_;
00:28:315 (2,3) - 7.84x DS, yikes. I agree a hdash fits here, but this is way too strong and seriously unexpected. Moving to x-352 feels much smoother, and is more consistent with 00:30:556 (2,3,4) - Lmao yep that's a stupid distance, donesies.
00:37:108 (3,1) - Why no hyper here when you had one at the start of the previous kiai for 00:27:453 (5,1) -? I'd play around with this a little to find something you like, because somewhere a pattern is gonna have to change to accommodate this due to the low BPM - Yep, I was a filthy little slacker and denied this in Koliron's mod but that was completely wrong by me, sorry Koliron! Bloody hell though, the distance to get this to hyper is absurd! Reworked a previous pattern to make this happen, hope it's good enough.
00:45:384 (1) - This return jump after a hdash might be a little tricky for an entry-level Platter player. You could either reduce the hdash strength a little, move (1) slightly to the right, or both t make this more comfortable to play - Don't even know how i've missed something like this! I've got the distance for the hyper as low as it can be and moved (1) more to the right, consider it nerfed.

All done (: - Same tbh

Much thanks for the moddings.

Wizard's Platter

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MBomb

MBomb 2015-11-30T00:11:52+00:00

Requested on my queue, now stop stealing the songs I map :^(

[Cup]

00:08:490 (3) - This feels a little overemphasised with the current distance. Try reducing it slightly to x:184, maybe?
00:37:453 (1) - I think slightly higher distance would be nicer here to emphasise the vocal better. Try x:120.

if you say cupdate i will end you

[Salad]

00:02:973 (2) - A slight decrease on this would be nice, I don't think a dash fits just yet and this may be difficult to do without dashing for an average salad player. Try x:164.
00:07:111 (1) - x:464, to make the dash a bit more obvious, to fit the strong sound here.
00:09:869 (1) - x:160, maybe, to make the dash stronger, as it avoids confusion about whether to dash or not, and gives the left right movement more structure, in my opinion.
00:16:420 (1,2) - These distances seem a bit too big for me, this is bordering on a double dash how it is now, which is too difficult for a salad. I don't feel either of these sounds are really strong enough to suit dashes, so what I would do is move 1 to x:352 and 2 to x:160 (keeps the symmetry you were going for here).
00:27:108 (5) - Dash to this feels really weird, this note doesn't sound very strong to me. However, a dash from this to 1 sounds good, to start the kiai off with a dash to the strong vocal. I would change this by ctrl+g on this slider, and then move it to x:200.
00:34:694 (1) - Dash to this doesn't sound very good to me either, this sound isn't very strong considering the other sounds around here. Ctrl+g works fine.
00:37:453 (1) - A dash to this would fit really nicely, for the strong vocal and emphasis to start the kiai. A nice change could be to make this slider horizontal (going to the left) at x:404.
00:40:211 (2) - I think a dash to here would also fit well for the strong vocal, try moving it to x:80.
00:47:108 (4) - x:184, a dash to this feels really weird.

[Platter]

AR7.5 works better for spread.

00:29:867 (5,1) - I think a dash to 5 doesn't feel right due to the lack of musical emphasis here, however a HDash to 1 would be great, for the strong vocal. Move 5 to x:160, 1 to x:448, and then 2 to x:32, to change this section whilst still keeping the flow nice.
00:32:625 (3) - Not really sure why there's a HDash here, this note isn't very strong... Move it to x:208, sounds a lot better to me.
00:40:211 (1,2,3,1,2) - I think that some rearrangement could work here, as a HDash to the first 1 would work very well, however a HDash to the second 2 feels very strange to me with the music, it doesn't really feel consistent. Move 00:39:866 (4) - to x:432, and then 00:40:211 (1,2) - 1 to x:16, 2 to x:160, and then 00:40:901 (3,1) - 3 to x:400, 1 to x:320, and then ctrl+h 00:41:590 (2) - .
00:42:970 (2,4) - 2 is stronger than 4, why don't you make the hyper to 2 instead?
00:45:728 (2,4) - ^
00:44:866 (2) - HDash to 3 doesn't really feel right, that sound isn't very strong. Move this to x:320 to fix that.
00:48:142 (4) - Very nazi, but x:80 please.

It's alright.

[Noi]

00:03:662 (3) - Curve this a bit for better flow, like this. (Also, try to curve it in a way to make a HDash to 1, as that jump is currently very awkward, but a HDash fixes it, the way I curved the slider does this well.)
00:11:937 (1) - x:72, weakening this hyper feels better for flow, considering the antiflow movement afterwards.
00:16:075 (5) - This note is really weak, I'm really not sure why there's a hyper to this. Try x:360, sounds better with the music.
00:25:039 (2) - This hyper really needs to be weakened, this note isn't strong enough to suggest this strong of a slider or antiflow movement. I also don't feel like the HDash from this really fits, as the vocal is not that strong. Try moving this to x:168, this fixes both of the issues I've mentioned.
00:27:108 (2) - x:104 please, the current distance snap is far too excessive, and the direction of the slider movement really doesn't help.
00:36:763 (3,1) - If you could rearrange this a bit to make a hyper to 1, I think it would be really fitting to emphasise the strong vocal and the start of the second kiai.
00:45:384 (1) - A hyper from this would be very nice for the strong vocal afterwards. Try x:500.

*insert obiligtory noi! pun*

Alright, done.

Sorceress

332 posts

Joined September 2012

Sorceress 2015-11-30T01:05:36+00:00

- Magic Bomb - wrote:
Requested on my queue, now stop stealing the songs I map :^(

[Cup]

00:08:490 (3) - This feels a little overemphasised with the current distance. Try reducing it slightly to x:184, maybe?
00:37:453 (1) - I think slightly higher distance would be nicer here to emphasise the vocal better. Try x:120.

if you say cupdate i will end you - Do it

[Platter]

AR7.5 works better for spread. - I'll leave this to Riari

00:29:867 (5,1) - I think a dash to 5 doesn't feel right due to the lack of musical emphasis here, however a HDash to 1 would be great, for the strong vocal. Move 5 to x:160, 1 to x:448, and then 2 to x:32, to change this section whilst still keeping the flow nice. - I've reduced the distance to (5) and increased the distance to (1) a bit but I've not made the hyper you suggested. I feel with the distance it takes for 1/2 hypers they're a bit jarring so I've not really tried to force them everywhere possible.
Also, you've said "a HDash to 1 would be great" but your suggestion has (1) as a hyper to (2), I assume thats some sort of typo?
00:32:625 (3) - Not really sure why there's a HDash here, this note isn't very strong... Move it to x:208, sounds a lot better to me. - Roger that
00:40:211 (1,2,3,1,2) - I think that some rearrangement could work here, as a HDash to the first 1 would work very well, however a HDash to the second 2 feels very strange to me with the music, it doesn't really feel consistent. Move 00:39:866 (4) - to x:432, and then 00:40:211 (1,2) - 1 to x:16, 2 to x:160, and then 00:40:901 (3,1) - 3 to x:400, 1 to x:320, and then ctrl+h 00:41:590 (2) - . - I do not share your enthusiasm for these 1/2 hypers. Hyper aside the rest is pretty solid and has been applied or near enough. 00:39:866 (4) - Is just a regular dash for the same wishy washy reason stated earlier init.
00:42:970 (2,4) - 2 is stronger than 4, why don't you make the hyper to 2 instead? - If you're suggesting another 1/2 hyper buddy you've got another thing coming :^) However I did move (1) (which is just before (2) believe it or not) 16 grids to the right, so thats something. As for the existing (and beautiful 1/4) hyper to (4) it's following what I've done in the rest of the map going along with the vocals, the "nyaan nyaan" sounding bit, not sure what's actually being said.
00:45:728 (2,4) - ^ Nyaan nyaan (Probably wrong but I dont' speak Anime :/ (To anyone reading this please don't be offended it's just a joke )
00:44:866 (2) - HDash to 3 doesn't really feel right, that sound isn't very strong. Move this to x:320 to fix that. - Oh it feels right alright :^) But yeah it doesn't actually fit so I guess rip or something. Something being moved (3) to x:320 then made slight adjustments to the two following notes to keep some flow.
00:48:142 (4) - Very nazi, but x:80 please. - You're welcome

It's alright. - Magic Bomb 2015

*insert obiligtory noi! pun* - Insert banterous response.

Alright, done.

Thanks for the modzy modzy wow wow Benzy.

Wizard's Platter

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JBHyperion

osu!catch Paragon

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Joined September 2014

JBHyperion 2015-11-30T02:02:16+00:00

- Magic Bomb - wrote:
Requested on my queue, now stop stealing the songs I map :^( rip

[Cup]

00:08:490 (3) - This feels a little overemphasised with the current distance. Try reducing it slightly to x:184, maybe? Fair dos
00:37:453 (1) - I think slightly higher distance would be nicer here to emphasise the vocal better. Try x:120. I feel there's enough spacing for emphasis here, and it's consistent with 00:27:798 (1) - no change

if you say cupdate i will end you You can't tell me what to do

Alright, done.

Cup-date~ lololol get b8ed MB 360Noi!scope

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Riari

743 posts

Joined April 2013

Topic Starter

Riari 2015-11-30T20:50:59+00:00

- Magic Bomb - wrote:
Requested on my queue, now stop stealing the songs I map :^( I feel like this flows better as it is, no change.

[Salad]

00:02:973 (2) - A slight decrease on this would be nice, I don't think a dash fits just yet and this may be difficult to do without dashing for an average salad player. Try x:164. Done.
00:07:111 (1) - x:464, to make the dash a bit more obvious, to fit the strong sound here. Done/
00:09:869 (1) - x:160, maybe, to make the dash stronger, as it avoids confusion about whether to dash or not, and gives the left right movement more structure, in my opinion. Done.
00:16:420 (1,2) - These distances seem a bit too big for me, this is bordering on a double dash how it is now, which is too difficult for a salad. I don't feel either of these sounds are really strong enough to suit dashes, so what I would do is move 1 to x:352 and 2 to x:160 (keeps the symmetry you were going for here).Done.
00:27:108 (5) - Dash to this feels really weird, this note doesn't sound very strong to me. However, a dash from this to 1 sounds good, to start the kiai off with a dash to the strong vocal. I would change this by ctrl+g on this slider, and then move it to x:200. Done.
00:34:694 (1) - Dash to this doesn't sound very good to me either, this sound isn't very strong considering the other sounds around here. Ctrl+g works fine. Done.
00:37:453 (1) - A dash to this would fit really nicely, for the strong vocal and emphasis to start the kiai. A nice change could be to make this slider horizontal (going to the left) at x:404. Done.
00:40:211 (2) - I think a dash to here would also fit well for the strong vocal, try moving it to x:80. Done.
00:47:108 (4) - x:184, a dash to this feels really weird. Done.

[Platter]

AR7.5 works better for spread. I swear somebody is changing ARs without telling me and ruining the spread.

[Noi]

00:03:662 (3) - Curve this a bit for better flow, like this. (Also, try to curve it in a way to make a HDash to 1, as that jump is currently very awkward, but a HDash fixes it, the way I curved the slider does this well.) Done.
00:11:937 (1) - x:72, weakening this hyper feels better for flow, considering the antiflow movement afterwards. Done.
00:16:075 (5) - This note is really weak, I'm really not sure why there's a hyper to this. Try x:360, sounds better with the music. I don't know why you are calling this weak, there is a clear and large change here.
00:25:039 (2) - This hyper really needs to be weakened, this note isn't strong enough to suggest this strong of a slider or antiflow movement. I also don't feel like the HDash from this really fits, as the vocal is not that strong. Try moving this to x:168, this fixes both of the issues I've mentioned. Done.
00:27:108 (2) - x:104 please, the current distance snap is far too excessive, and the direction of the slider movement really doesn't help. Done.
00:36:763 (3,1) - If you could rearrange this a bit to make a hyper to 1, I think it would be really fitting to emphasise the strong vocal and the start of the second kiai. Reworking seems to ruin what I was aiming to go for with the previous sections, I'll leave it as is now.
00:45:384 (1) - A hyper from this would be very nice for the strong vocal afterwards. Try x:500. Done.

*insert obiligtory noi! pun* I noi!ticed that you didn't even try.

Alright, done.

Thanks for the mod.

Updated.

Tyrell

425 posts

Joined July 2014

Tyrell 2015-12-11T23:53:59+00:00

This is a CTB Modding Association mod. If you want your map checked and modded by the CMA, go to this link

General

Spread looks good but I would suggest reducing the HP drain of each difficulty by 1 and also increasing the CS on the rain to 3.5.

Cup
Opening thoughts: It's a cup

00:20:902 (4) - Ctrl+J, Ctrl+ G, and Ctrl+H this then move it to x:416. Basically do this. This looks and plays a bit better.
00:48:142 (4) - NC here

Song Setup Recommendations: none

Closing Thoughts: Standard cup, easy and simple. Nice

Salad
Opening thoughts: It's a salad!

00:33:315 (2) - Maybe make this more curved like a "C" Kinda ruins flow the way it is now.
00:39:866 (1) - Why start this on the same side of the screen? It ruins flow. I would move this to the other side of the screen and change the following patterns accordingly.
00:42:970 (2) - Jump to this is way too large, reduce this to similar spacing used earlier. For example, 00:37:453 (1,2) - spacing similar to those jumps are fine.
00:45:384 (1) - Once again why start this on the same side and ruin flow? Please move this to the other side of the screen and change the following patterns accordingly
00:45:728 (2) - Once again the jump here is too large, reduce it similar to what I stated before.
00:48:142 (1) - Move this further left for more emphasis for it being the last note. Also NC here please

Song Setup Recommendations: none
Closing Thoughts: It's okay, but the spacing on some jumps is way too harsh for a salad, I highly recommend reducing some jumps as they're too hard for a salad difficulty.

Platter
Opening thoughts: Patterns near the ending is repetitive but not bad so complaints.

00:05:559 (4,5) - Is this supposed to be walkable or dashed? If walkable please reduce it a bit here so it's clear. If it's dash, increase the spacing a bit here so it's clear.
00:11:248 (1,2) - Why not make this a 1/2 slider? It would function the same way but make more sense.

Song Setup Recommendations: none
Closing Thoughts: Nothing else to really point out, I really like this platter despite hating how slow the song is. Good job Tom. (:

Rain
Opening thoughts: Still feel weird having a rain on a song this slow but meh, it's whatever.

00:34:694 (1,2) - I feel like these should either be closer together to be easily walkable or increased spacing so a dash is better.

Song Setup Recommendations: none
Closing Thoughts: Not much to say. Most of what I could say is my personal dislike for certain things but it functions fine so I won't bother. Good job on this.

I hope this mod was helpful. If you have questions feel free to message me in-game if you see me on, or message me via forum. Apply this mod as soon as possible so other CMA members can mod this as well. Good luck with this set.

Ascendance

Elite Mapper

4,252 posts

Joined July 2013

Ascendance 2015-12-12T01:56:37+00:00

poke me after you apply this so I can nitpick

Riari

743 posts

Joined April 2013

Topic Starter

Riari 2015-12-12T19:07:03+00:00

Ascendance wrote:
poke me after you apply this so I can nitpick

Fixing computer, problems arisen due to power cuts and stuff.

Will apply within a few hours.

Sorceress

332 posts

Joined September 2012

Sorceress 2015-12-12T19:14:48+00:00

Tyrell wrote:
This is a CTB Modding Association mod. If you want your map checked and modded by the CMA, go to this link

Platter
Opening thoughts: Patterns near the ending is repetitive but not bad so complaints.
00:05:559 (4,5) - Is this supposed to be walkable or dashed? If walkable please reduce it a bit here so it's clear. If it's dash, increase the spacing a bit here so it's clear. - Nerfed the distance on it
00:11:248 (1,2) - Why not make this a 1/2 slider? It would function the same way but make more sense. - Donesies
Song Setup Recommendations: none
Closing Thoughts: Nothing else to really point out, I really like this platter despite hating how slow the song is. Good job Tom. (:

Thanks for the mod babe.

Wizard's Platter

osu file format v14

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 27798
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
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[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 1.8
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 16
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Noi!
TitleUnicode:Noi!
Artist:Kajiura Yuki
ArtistUnicode:梶浦 由記
Creator:Riari
Version:Wizard's Platter
Source:劇場版 魔法少女まどか☆マギカ[新編]叛逆の物語
Tags:gekijouban mahou shoujo madoka*magica [shinpen] hangyaku no monogatari puella magi movie 3 the rebellion story jbhyperion tomthewizard
BeatmapID:814247
BeatmapSetID:352634

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:7.5
ApproachRate:7.5
SliderMultiplier:1.8
SliderTickRate:2

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JBHyperion

osu!catch Paragon

3,885 posts

Joined September 2014

JBHyperion 2015-12-13T08:06:36+00:00

Tyrell wrote:
This is a CTB Modding Association mod. If you want your map checked and modded by the CMA, go to this link

Cup
Opening thoughts: It's a cup
00:20:902 (4) - Ctrl+J, Ctrl+ G, and Ctrl+H this then move it to x:416. Basically do this. This looks and plays a bit better. Intensity of the vocal sound increases as the hold progresses, so it makes more sense for movement to increase towards the end of the note, and not the other way around
00:48:142 (4) - NC here There's already a NC here
Song Setup Recommendations: none

Closing Thoughts: Standard cup, easy and simple. Nice

I hope this mod was helpful. If you have questions feel free to message me in-game if you see me on, or message me via forum. Apply this mod as soon as possible so other CMA members can mod this as well. Good luck with this set.

No changes from me, but thanks for taking a look!

Sey

1,406 posts

Joined October 2010

Sey 2015-12-13T11:53:17+00:00

This is a CTB Modding Association mod. If you want your map checked and modded by the CMA, go to this link

General

Is the background size of this really 1364x767? Make sure that it is 1366x768.

Hyperion's Cup
Opening thoughts: Sometimes this feels a little repetitive pattern-wise, but it's a Cup and has to stay simple. So this shouldn't be a real issue.

00:12:627 (3,4) - This pattern should be a CTRL+H of the previous pattern (00:11:248 (1,2) - ) for symmetrical reasons, for example:
SPOILER
00:20:902 (4) - CTRL+G this slider and move it back to x416 right after to ensure that this pattern won't end on the screen wall. Optionally you need to re-arrange 00:22:281 (1) - slightly to avoid a stacking with the previous note.
00:36:074 (4) - Maybe to at least have a bit of variety from the previous 1/1 sliders add a reverse arrow on this slider at 00:36:418 - , this goes well with the music and gives a great interlude for the second kiai.

Song Setup Recommendations: -

Closing Thoughts: It's a very clean Cup, there is nothing really to complain.

Salad
Opening thoughts: The difficulty is clean, but I point out a very few little spacing issues before.

00:04:007 (5,1) - , 00:06:766 (5,1) - Both of these can still be caught without dashing. Increase the distances slightly and ensure they are only reachable with a dash.
00:10:904 (4,1) - Same as above.
00:21:247 (2,3) - Optionally this could be some dash as well, but this is not so mandatory as the two previous mentioned points.
The whole first Kiai is a little underwhelming, it's easier than the non-kiai section before. You should add some more dashes, for example on the following places (not all of them, just see for yourself which ones you favor the most): 00:28:487 (2,3) - , 00:30:212 (1,2) - , 00:31:246 (3,4) - , 00:32:970 (1,2) -

Song Setup Recommendations: -
Closing Thoughts: Not much to point out. Good work.

Wizard's Platter
Opening thoughts: Nice platter, but I am not a real fan of stacks after Hyperdashes. Personally I prefer rebouncing patterns which lead you back to the center of the screen. Let me sum this up for you: 00:10:904 (4,1,2) - , 00:28:315 (2,3) - (It is like a stack because you don't really feel the curve of the slider), 00:31:074 (3,4) - (same here). The mentioned patterns feel like stacks after the Hyperdashes, just make sure they are curvier and 00:11:248 (1,2) - are no full stucks anymore.

This lacks a bit of movement, feels a little bland. Without destroying the pattern in a whole, try the following instead (or something similar):
SPOILER
00:15:730 (4,5,1) - I prefer a different timeline, there is no real vocal at 00:16:075 - but you actually tried to follow them, now it more is a mixture of rhythm and vocals at the same time. So I suggest to remove this note and do this for example (Only timeline is important, neglect the pattern please):
SPOILER
00:24:005 (5,6,1) - Many will hate me for this suggestion but try this, it's more fun and goes pretty well with the lyrics
SPOILER

Song Setup Recommendations: -
Closing Thoughts: I know the BPM is low, please ask a QAT however before qualify if 1/4 Hypers will be okay in this difficulty. I personally enjoy them but sometimes QATs disqualify due to 1/4 Hypers (mostly in high BPM maps though). Just ask Deif or Kurokami if they are fine with it, please.

Noi
Opening thoughts: Awesome, I loved it. Such a fun difficulty.

00:11:937 (1,2,3,4,5) - Really weird timeline, please try a calmer one. 00:12:110 (2) - isn't really outstanding and should be removed completely. Try this one for instance:
00:25:039 (2,1) - This can be another Hyper as your previous patterns. I think it fits well enough.
00:36:074 (1,2,3) - Distances should be increased drastically between these, it feels too low. There could be a Hyper at 00:36:418 (2,3) - as well. This here plays quite nice:
SPOILER
00:39:521 (3) - For a better flow this note should be to the left from the previous note.

Song Setup Recommendations:

A little questionable to use AR/OD 8,2 here, but welp. I'd go 8,5 just to make it spread-wise more logical. CS3,5 probably fits this better as well, the spread of that would be 2>2,5>3>3,5 then. Makes just more sense.

Closing Thoughts: -

I hope this mod was helpful. If you have questions feel free to message me in-game if you see me on, or message me via forum. Good luck with this set.

Really nice map, go go. For rank! ♥

Last edited by Sey 2015-12-13T21:42:35+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Riari

743 posts

Joined April 2013

Topic Starter

Riari 2015-12-13T21:38:10+00:00

Tyrell wrote:
This is a CTB Modding Association mod. If you want your map checked and modded by the CMA, go to this link

General
Spread looks good but I would suggest reducing the HP drain of each difficulty by 1 and also increasing the CS on the rain to 3.5.
HP is fine, I prefer CS3 in this case.

Salad
Opening thoughts: It's a salad!
00:33:315 (2) - Maybe make this more curved like a "C" Kinda ruins flow the way it is now. I like this how it is, I think it flows fine.
00:39:866 (1) - Why start this on the same side of the screen? It ruins flow. I would move this to the other side of the screen and change the following patterns accordingly. I like the small break it creates, there is no real need for movement here in a Salad and I want to capitalise on that.
00:42:970 (2) - Jump to this is way too large, reduce this to similar spacing used earlier. For example, 00:37:453 (1,2) - spacing similar to those jumps are fine. Changed slightly.
00:45:384 (1) - Once again why start this on the same side and ruin flow? Please move this to the other side of the screen and change the following patterns accordingly Same reason.
00:45:728 (2) - Once again the jump here is too large, reduce it similar to what I stated before. Changed.
00:48:142 (1) - Move this further left for more emphasis for it being the last note. Also NC here please No need for emphasis, it is much less intense than the previous sections. It already has a NC on it.
Song Setup Recommendations: none
Closing Thoughts: It's okay, but the spacing on some jumps is way too harsh for a salad, I highly recommend reducing some jumps as they're too hard for a salad difficulty.

Rain It's not a Rain.
Opening thoughts: Still feel weird having a rain on a song this slow but meh, it's whatever.
00:34:694 (1,2) - I feel like these should either be closer together to be easily walkable or increased spacing so a dash is better. I think it functions fine as a form of mini-snap.
Song Setup Recommendations: none
Closing Thoughts: Not much to say. Most of what I could say is my personal dislike for certain things but it functions fine so I won't bother. Good job on this.

I hope this mod was helpful. If you have questions feel free to message me in-game if you see me on, or message me via forum. Apply this mod as soon as possible so other CMA members can mod this as well. Good luck with this set.

Thanks for the mod.

Sey wrote:
This is a CTB Modding Association mod. If you want your map checked and modded by the CMA, go to this link

Salad
Opening thoughts: The difficulty is clean, but I point out a very few little spacing issues before.
00:04:007 (5,1) - , 00:06:766 (5,1) - Both of these can still be caught without dashing. Increase the distances slightly and ensure they are only reachable with a dash. Done.
00:10:904 (4,1) - Same as above. Done.
00:21:247 (2,3) - Optionally this could be some dash as well, but this is not so mandatory as the two previous mentioned points. I like this how it is. It isn't intense enough for a dash in my opinion.
The whole first Kiai is a little underwhelming, it's easier than the non-kiai section before. You should add some more dashes, for example on the following places (not all of them, just see for yourself which ones you favor the most): 00:28:487 (2,3) - , 00:30:212 (1,2) - , 00:31:246 (3,4) - , 00:32:970 (1,2) - Changed some.
Song Setup Recommendations: -
Closing Thoughts: Not much to point out. Good work.

Song Setup Recommendations: -
Closing Thoughts: I know the BPM is low, please ask a QAT however before qualify if 1/4 Hypers will be okay in this difficulty. I personally enjoy them but sometimes QATs disqualify due to 1/4 Hypers (mostly in high BPM maps though). Just ask Deif or Kurokami if they are fine with it, please.[/notice]

Noi
Opening thoughts: Awesome, I loved it. Such a fun difficulty.
00:11:937 (1,2,3,4,5) - Really weird timeline, please try a calmer one. 00:12:110 (2) - isn't really outstanding and should be removed completely. Changed.Try this one for instance:
00:25:039 (2,1) - This can be another Hyper as your previous patterns. I think it fits well enough. Done.
00:36:074 (1,2,3) - Distances should be increased drastically between these, it feels too low. There could be a Hyper at 00:36:418 (2,3) - as well. Done. This here plays quite nice:
SPOILER
00:39:521 (3) - For a better flow this note should be to the left from the previous note. Done.
Song Setup Recommendations:
A little questionable to use AR/OD 8,2 here, but welp. I'd go 8,5 just to make it spread-wise more logical. CS3,5 probably fits this better as well, the spread of that would be 2>2,5>3>3,5 then. Makes just more sense. I like 8.2 for this, 8.5 seems a bit high for what I'm going for. I'm an avid cs3 fan so I'd like to keep it for this.-
Closing Thoughts: -

I hope this mod was helpful. If you have questions feel free to message me in-game if you see me on, or message me via forum. Good luck with this set.

Really nice map, go go. For rank! ♥

Thanks for the mod.

Updated!

Ascendance

Elite Mapper

4,252 posts

Joined July 2013

Ascendance 2015-12-13T23:42:00+00:00

I have been summoned.

This is a CTB Modding Association mod. If you want your map checked and modded by the CMA, go to this link

General

why is this map not named poi

Note Spread

Currently, Wizard's Platter has more notes than the highest diff, Noi. Although the Maximum Combo is less, and it's not generally a bad thing, it's just something to point out.

Hyperion's Cup
Opening thoughts: e

00:14:006 (5) - Does this really call for the clap hitsound on it? ;w; It sounded a bit weird to me but you're the expert here.
00:25:729 (2,3,4) - If you find a way to flip this around, I feel like it would flow (lol cup + flow) much better into 00:27:798 (1) -
00:48:142 (1,1) - Not a problem to me but this has been brought up recently \:D/

Song Setup Recommendations: nonE

Closing Thoughts: map spook

Salad
Opening thoughts: xd

00:07:455 (2,3) - I feel like some more dynamic could be added to this. Move 3 to x:220?
00:33:315 (2) - This plays pretty much like a vertical slider
Starting at this section here 00:27:798 (1,2) - I feel like these could be dashed to. It is the kiai time and these can all be caught without dash currently. It happens throughout the kiai time, but not all of them need to be dashes I guess. I think adding some dashes would really add to this though.

Song Setup Recommendations: nonE
Closing Thoughts: moar dash but not too much =w=

Wizard's Platter
Opening thoughts:e

Modding after update by Riari.

Song Setup Recommendations:
Closing Thoughts:

~~Noi~~ Poi
Opening thoughts: poi

00:22:625 (2) - I think this distance is a bit far. Either move it a bit closer to the previous note or turn it into a hyperdash will make it play a bit better.
00:36:418 (2) - ctrl+g'ing this might help this pattern a bit more, the way it plays as of now is a bit tricky.

Song Setup Recommendations: I know you really want to keep AR8.2, but I really consider bumping it just a little, I felt 8.4 played a little nicer to play.
Closing Thoughts: Wasn't really much to say about this diff, really nice!

After everything is applied (and after my mod of the platter) we'll see if we can call in a BN/QAT for you c:

Last edited by Ascendance 2015-12-14T03:12:20+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

JBHyperion

osu!catch Paragon

3,885 posts

Joined September 2014

JBHyperion 2015-12-14T00:26:34+00:00

Sey wrote:
This is a CTB Modding Association mod. If you want your map checked and modded by the CMA, go to this link

Hyperion's Cup
Opening thoughts: Sometimes this feels a little repetitive pattern-wise, but it's a Cup and has to stay simple. So this shouldn't be a real issue. Not too much I can do about the rhythm at this difficulty, but I did change the flow a little in the kiai sections to provide more variety
00:12:627 (3,4) - This pattern should be a CTRL+H of the previous pattern (00:11:248 (1,2) - ) for symmetrical reasons, for example:
SPOILER
This wasn't quite similar enough to really justify the repetition, so sure, symmetry it is. Also Ctrl+H'ed 00:14:006 (5) to maintain spacings
00:20:902 (4) - CTRL+G this slider and move it back to x416 right after to ensure that this pattern won't end on the screen wall. Optionally you need to re-arrange 00:22:281 (1) - slightly to avoid a stacking with the previous note. Declined the Ctrl+G for reasons explained in the previous mod response, but did move all of 00:19:178 (2,3,4,1,2) to the left slightly to keep movement away from the wall
00:36:074 (4) - Maybe to at least have a bit of variety from the previous 1/1 sliders add a reverse arrow on this slider at 00:36:418 - , this goes well with the music and gives a great interlude for the second kiai. Nice suggestion, consider it done
Song Setup Recommendations: -

Closing Thoughts: It's a very clean Cup, there is nothing really to complain.

I hope this mod was helpful. If you have questions feel free to message me in-game if you see me on, or message me via forum. Good luck with this set.

Really nice map, go go. For rank! <span class="EmojiInput mj230" title="Black Heart Suit ♥"></span>

Ascendance wrote:
I have been summoned.

This is a CTB Modding Association mod. If you want your map checked and modded by the CMA, go to this link

General

Hyperion's Cup
Opening thoughts: e

00:14:006 (5) - Does this really call for the clap hitsound on it? ;w; It sounded a bit weird to me but you're the expert here. I think it fits with the sharp, punchier vocal sound here, but I noticed it broke consistency with 00:17:454 (5) - a whistle doesn't sound bad here at all, so I'll change this
00:25:729 (2,3,4) - If you find a way to flip this around, I feel like it would flow (lol cup + flow) much better into 00:27:798 (1) - Antiflow (or something approaching it in a Cup diff lol) is used onto the slider 00:27:798 (1) to emphasize the start of the kiai more
00:48:142 (1,1) - Not a problem to me but this has been brought up recently \:D/ Fun fact - the wording in that rule change proposal was worded by yours truly, so I'm breaking my own rule proposal here. I'm going to be even more hypocritical and claim that in this instance, I feel the 1/2 spacing is acceptable, both due to the low BPM, and the 1/1 pause from 00:47:108 (3) - which should give even complete beginners ample time to read and make the note/spinner distinction Perhaps that fits better as a guideline anyway? /me runs
Song Setup Recommendations: nonE

Closing Thoughts: map spook

Thanks for the helpful mods, both of you!

Cup-date

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rip my perfect 1.00* SR ;w;

Sorceress

332 posts

Joined September 2012

Sorceress 2015-12-14T00:35:07+00:00

Sey wrote:
Wizard's Platter
Opening thoughts: Nice platter, but I am not a real fan of stacks after Hyperdashes. Personally I prefer rebouncing patterns which lead you back to the center of the screen. Let me sum this up for you: 00:10:904 (4,1,2) - , 00:28:315 (2,3) - (It is like a stack because you don't really feel the curve of the slider), 00:31:074 (3,4) - (same here). The mentioned patterns feel like stacks after the Hyperdashes, just make sure they are curvier and 00:11:248 (1,2) - are no full stucks anymore. Alright, I've done some funky (ugly) little slider shapes to try get these to curve a bit more, not so certain it's had much of an impact though.
This lacks a bit of movement, feels a little bland. Without destroying the pattern in a whole, try the following instead (or something similar): - Ooh I like this, though I moved (1) and (3) a grid to the right as I felt the spacing was a little high.
SPOILER
00:15:730 (4,5,1) - I prefer a different timeline, there is no real vocal at 00:16:075 - but you actually tried to follow them, now it more is a mixture of rhythm and vocals at the same time. So I suggest to remove this note and do this for example (Only timeline is important, neglect the pattern please): - I blame the singer ;_; Did as you suggested with the timeline and changed the pattern so it still worked.
SPOILER
00:24:005 (5,6,1) - Many will hate me for this suggestion but try this, it's more fun and goes pretty well with the lyrics - I'm a bit torn on this one. I do like how your suggestion plays and it does fit nicely but I feel it's at odds with the rest of the difficulty. I've avoided using 1/2 hypers for most of it so I'm gonna leave it alone in the name of consistency or atleast in the name of my own stupidity.
SPOILER
Song Setup Recommendations: -
Closing Thoughts: I know the BPM is low, please ask a QAT however before qualify if 1/4 Hypers will be okay in this difficulty. I personally enjoy them but sometimes QATs disqualify due to 1/4 Hypers (mostly in high BPM maps though). Just ask Deif or Kurokami if they are fine with it, please. - I'll get Riari on this, can't imagine it'd be a no at this bpm... if it is then say hello to Wizard's Salad.

Thanks for the mod!

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Riari

743 posts

Joined April 2013

Topic Starter

Riari 2015-12-14T07:44:54+00:00

Ascendance wrote:
I have been summoned.

This is a CTB Modding Association mod. If you want your map checked and modded by the CMA, go to this link

General

why is this map not named poi That would be incorrect metadata.

Note Spread
Currently, Wizard's Platter has more notes than the highest diff, Noi. Although the Maximum Combo is less, and it's not generally a bad thing, it's just something to point out. I generally focus more on specific slider usage, the max combo is higher so this shouldn't be a problem.

Salad
Opening thoughts: xd

00:07:455 (2,3) - I feel like some more dynamic could be added to this. Move 3 to x:220? Changed.
00:33:315 (2) - This plays pretty much like a vertical slider Looks cooler though.
Starting at this section here 00:27:798 (1,2) - I feel like these could be dashed to. It is the kiai time and these can all be caught without dash currently. It happens throughout the kiai time, but not all of them need to be dashes I guess. I think adding some dashes would really add to this though. Added some.
Song Setup Recommendations: nonE
Closing Thoughts: moar dash but not too much =w=

~~Noi~~ Poi
Opening thoughts: poi

00:22:625 (2) - I think this distance is a bit far. Either move it a bit closer to the previous note or turn it into a hyperdash will make it play a bit better. Changed.
00:36:418 (2) - ctrl+g'ing this might help this pattern a bit more, the way it plays as of now is a bit tricky. I like this how it is, it's pretty fun to play.
Song Setup Recommendations: I know you really want to keep AR8.2, but I really consider bumping it just a little, I felt 8.4 played a little nicer to play. Sold.
Closing Thoughts: Wasn't really much to say about this diff, really nice!

After everything is applied (and after my mod of the platter) we'll see if we can call in a BN/QAT for you c:

~~Placeholder for mod, must go learn first.~~

Learning complete and so is mod application.

Thanks for the mod.

Updated.

Ascendance

Elite Mapper

4,252 posts

Joined July 2013

Ascendance 2015-12-14T21:13:58+00:00

No kds, modding logs for Wizard's Platter

poi

2015-12-14 15:47 Ascendance: I am summoned once again
2015-12-14 15:48 Ascendance: To mod your Salatter
2015-12-14 15:48 TomTheWizard: Bathe in the glory of it's mighty 2 and a bit stars
2015-12-14 15:49 Ascendance: It was a heavenly experience
2015-12-14 15:49 Ascendance: I had some stuff but your map was updated and then I realized I'm an idiot
2015-12-14 15:49 Ascendance: so we'll start from scratch
2015-12-14 15:49 TomTheWizard: :D
2015-12-14 15:50 Ascendance: 00:09:869 (1) - provides little movement from 00:09:524 (7) -, I think moving it to the left would be beneficial
2015-12-14 15:51 Ascendance: maybe moving it directly on top of where 00:10:559 (3) -  is
2015-12-14 15:52 TomTheWizard: yeah that looks good to me
2015-12-14 15:53 Ascendance: You wanna keep the 1/3 Hdash here right? 
2015-12-14 15:53 Ascendance: 00:17:972 (5,1) - 
2015-12-14 15:54 Ascendance: err not 1/3 but you get my point
2015-12-14 15:54 TomTheWizard: lol
2015-12-14 15:55 TomTheWizard: yeah I'd like to keep it
2015-12-14 15:55 Ascendance: Ok, I'd suggest moving 00:17:972 (5,1) - to x:176 then, so that way (1) falls at the end of the playing field so there is less room for error
2015-12-14 15:56 TomTheWizard: is that distance ok so close to the "wall" though?
2015-12-14 15:57 Ascendance: It should be okay, but I'll get some confirmation real quick
2015-12-14 15:57 Ascendance: While I ask about it, I suggest creating some movement here 00:32:970 (4,1) - 
2015-12-14 16:03 TomTheWizard: sorry for the silence, I havent died just trying a bunch of stuff
2015-12-14 16:03 Ascendance: Okay, 00:18:144 (1) - at x:496 should be acceptable
2015-12-14 16:03 Ascendance: Np lol, weird we sent at the same time
2015-12-14 16:04 TomTheWizard: alright, got 00:18:144 (1) - at x:496
2015-12-14 16:04 Ascendance: Alright
2015-12-14 16:04 Ascendance: 00:17:972 (5) - at x:192 will compliment it well
2015-12-14 16:04 Ascendance: and after we fix that part earlier where the catcher stays still on a transition note, that's all I have
2015-12-14 16:08 TomTheWizard: 00:17:972 (5) - i've put that at x:176 instead
2015-12-14 16:08 TomTheWizard: x:192 feels just a bit too far from (4) to me
2015-12-14 16:08 Ascendance: Hmm alright
2015-12-14 16:09 TomTheWizard: http://puu.sh/lVCkM/1e21f2524a.jpg
2015-12-14 16:09 TomTheWizard: and that's what I've done for 00:32:970 (4,1) -
2015-12-14 16:10 Ascendance: looks good to me :D
2015-12-14 16:10 Ascendance: Riari says to poke him on Discord because osu! eats up his fps or something
2015-12-14 16:10 Ascendance: I'll post the logs in thread for references
2015-12-14 16:10 TomTheWizard: What a baddie
2015-12-14 16:11 TomTheWizard: Yeah thanks for you help :D
2015-12-14 16:11 TomTheWizard: your help*
2015-12-14 16:11 Ascendance: Np! If you guys need anything more or if you need a last quick check before we send in a BN, let me know so we can send in another person to nitpick
2015-12-14 16:11 TomTheWizard: I can england :)
2015-12-14 16:12 TomTheWizard: alright thanks again

Sorceress

332 posts

Joined September 2012

Sorceress 2015-12-14T21:17:40+00:00

And here's the updated platter in all it's glory : )

Wizard's Platter

osu file format v14

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 27798
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 2
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

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DistanceSpacing: 2.4
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 16
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Noi!
TitleUnicode:Noi!
Artist:Kajiura Yuki
ArtistUnicode:梶浦 由記
Creator:Riari
Version:Wizard's Platter
Source:劇場版 魔法少女まどか☆マギカ[新編]叛逆の物語
Tags:gekijouban mahou shoujo madoka*magica [shinpen] hangyaku no monogatari puella magi movie 3 the rebellion story jbhyperion tomthewizard
BeatmapID:814247
BeatmapSetID:352634

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:7.5
ApproachRate:7.5
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Riari

743 posts

Joined April 2013

Topic Starter

Riari 2015-12-14T21:26:54+00:00

Updated.

Kurokami

osu! Alumni

4,024 posts

Joined February 2010

Kurokami 2015-12-22T10:15:44+00:00

Hey

[Salad]

00:04:697 (2,3) - Why no jump here? It has the same sound as 00:02:973 (2) - yet there is a jump but not here. Plus, it would be nice to jump here. /o/
00:30:212 (1,2) - The distance here is quite high which could still be acceptable but nowhere else used again. The higher distance was ~3.70 at the sounds with same power as this. I suggest you to lower this to that level as well to avoid the sudden left dash which might cause miss.

[Platter]

00:02:800 (3,4) - Can you add here a small jump? It would be nice to follow the sound but feel free to disagree if you want to keep the pattern.

The NCs are really inconsistent, its like they are trying to follow both the vocal and music but this looks really bad. I'm not going to point out where they are instead tell you to where they should be. You have two possible choice to NC the difficulty, either using one at every main (1st) beat and nowhere else or using at both 1st and 3rd tick (which is the best if you want to follow the melody). Its up to you. /o/

[Platter]

00:24:349 (1,2) - Actually, its possible to stop the movement of the catcher a bit before reaching (2) which can cause miss easily. I suggest to move (2) a bit back to right to avoid this and solve the case.
00:36:763 (3,1) - The distance here might be a little bit high and sudden. It would be nice to lower it a little bit.
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Riari

743 posts

Joined April 2013

Topic Starter

Riari 2015-12-22T14:11:44+00:00

Kurokami wrote:
Hey

[Salad]

00:04:697 (2,3) - Why no jump here? It has the same sound as 00:02:973 (2) - yet there is a jump but not here. Plus, it would be nice to jump here. /o/ Done.
00:30:212 (1,2) - The distance here is quite high which could still be acceptable but nowhere else used again. The higher distance was ~3.70 at the sounds with same power as this. I suggest you to lower this to that level as well to avoid the sudden left dash which might cause miss. Done.

[Platter]

00:24:349 (1,2) - Actually, its possible to stop the movement of the catcher a bit before reaching (2) which can cause miss easily. I suggest to move (2) a bit back to right to avoid this and solve the case. Done.
00:36:763 (3,1) - The distance here might be a little bit high and sudden. It would be nice to lower it a little bit. Done.
[]

Thanks for the mod.

SUBSTAC9

288 posts

Joined May 2009

SUBSTAC9 2015-12-22T15:51:59+00:00

Nice song Good Luck!

Sorceress

332 posts

Joined September 2012

Sorceress 2015-12-22T21:26:54+00:00

Kurokami wrote:
Hey Hi ^_^

[Platter]

00:02:800 (3,4) - Can you add here a small jump? It would be nice to follow the sound but feel free to disagree if you want to keep the pattern. - Mehhhhh, I refused this in a previous mod before as I felt it played a bit too funky just adding a jump in... however! I changed the pattern up so I feel it plays better and there's a little jump for the folks back home to enjoy.

The NCs are really inconsistent , its like they are trying to follow both the vocal and music but this looks really bad. I'm not going to point out where they are instead tell you to where they should be. You have two possible choice to NC the difficulty, either using one at every main (1st) beat and nowhere else or using at both 1st and 3rd tick (which is the best if you want to follow the melody). Its up to you. /o/ - Got some help with this, should be sorted.

[]

Thanks for the mod

Riari

743 posts

Joined April 2013

Topic Starter

Riari 2015-12-22T21:27:12+00:00

SUBSTAC9 wrote:
Nice song Good Luck!

Thanks!

Updated.

Bunnrei

1,044 posts

Joined May 2011

Bunnrei 2015-12-23T06:23:46+00:00

[Platter]

00:07:455 (2,3) - Increase spacing.
00:27:798 (1,2) - ^
00:30:556 (1,2) - ^
00:32:453 (5,6) - ^
00:39:349 (5,6) - ^
00:40:211 (1,2) - ^
00:44:866 (5,6) - ^

[Salad]

00:32:970 (1,2) - Probably a little bit too big of a jump, reduce.

all that I found :3

Sorceress

332 posts

Joined September 2012

Sorceress 2015-12-23T19:24:18+00:00

Ster wrote:
[Platter]
00:07:455 (2,3) - Increase spacing. - Made (2) into two circles instead of a slider then increased the spacing of 00:07:455 (2,3,4) -
00:27:798 (1,2) - ^ - Moved a grid space to the left
00:30:556 (1,2) - ^ - Moved a grid space to the right! What a plot-twist
00:32:453 (5,6) - ^ - Moved 00:32:453 (5) - a grid to the right
00:39:349 (5,6) - ^ - Spacing and such should be consistent with above now
00:40:211 (1,2) - ^ - Moved a teeny bit to the right
00:44:866 (5,6) - ^ - And made a tiny increase here

all that I found :3

Thanks for the mod!

EDIT: Riari is bad, pls remove kds from this post.

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Riari

743 posts

Joined April 2013

Topic Starter

Riari 2015-12-23T19:29:41+00:00

Ster wrote:
[Salad]
00:32:970 (1,2) - Probably a little bit too big of a jump, reduce. Done.

all that I found :3

Thanks for the mod.

Updated.

JBHyperion

osu!catch Paragon

3,885 posts

Joined September 2014

JBHyperion 2015-12-23T20:33:47+00:00

TomTheWizard wrote:
EDIT: Riari is bad, pls remove kds from this post.

Done o/

Kurokami

osu! Alumni

4,024 posts

Joined February 2010

Kurokami 2015-12-24T14:52:37+00:00

Looks fine to me. Good luck. o/

Xinely

5,014 posts

Joined April 2012

Xinely 2015-12-26T08:23:01+00:00

as request

General

any metadata proof? since im not familiar with this kind stuff lol

Cup

00:45:728 (2) - i'd like to give a bit more movement (actually just my personal taste) like http://puu.sh/m9aCi/f6937c25d5.jpg so from "nya" "nya" lyric you need to move a bit your ryuuta to catch them all

Salad

00:02:283 (1) - nazi but can remove nc here since 1 combo only in previous looks like too short
00:07:455 (2) - just my suggestion, how about move to x:344 so those 1/2 spacing on 00:07:455 (2,3) - would look more consistent
00:30:556 (2) - i feel the jump is a bit far so i think we still can make it easier, how about x:148?
00:42:970 (2) - reason same as above, x:416
00:38:142 (2) - i dont know you want to make this as dash or not? if you want to make dash then this slider still can caught w/o dash, if not then i'd suggest to reduce the spacing a bit since kinda hard to catch this w/o dash

Platter

since the bpm is low and your cs is big so i'd like suggest to use AR OD 7
00:09:869 (3,4) - i cant get why you do jump on (4) which has low music and normal spacing on (3) which has strong music (until you add hitsound), i'd like suggest (3) x:472 and (4) x:336
00:12:627 (5) - clap on head as you can hear the drum sound
00:12:972 - remove whistle and add whistle in 00:13:316 - as you can hear the snare sound
00:16:075 - gonna skip big drum music? ;________________________;
00:18:144 (1) - i'd say x:432 so you can make 1/4 hdash easier here. if u agree then happy remake 00:18:488 (2) - and etc :p
00:22:625 (2) - x:144 so you can give movement to emphasize vocal ;w; , if you agree then 00:22:970 (3) - x:248 to keep consistent spacing
00:40:901 (3) - i'd say x:352 to make easier hdash here. if you agree then 00:41:418 (4) - x:272 to make at least better spacing

Rain

00:48:142 (1) - i'd say x:380 here. at least give a mini jump for last note
00:37:797 - 00:38:487 - 00:40:556 - 00:41:246 - 00:43:315 - 00:44:004 - 00:46:073 - 00:46:763 - 00:28:143 - 00:28:832 - 00:30:901 - 00:31:591 - 00:33:659 - i think better to not skip map all of them because they have much important beats like drums or guitar snares

Riari

743 posts

Joined April 2013

Topic Starter

Riari 2015-12-26T17:21:50+00:00

Xinely wrote:
as request

General
any metadata proof? since im not familiar with this kind stuff lol Copied from the ranked set.

Salad
00:02:283 (1) - nazi but can remove nc here since 1 combo only in previous looks like too short I think it's very fitting and I'd like to keep it.
00:07:455 (2) - just my suggestion, how about move to x:344 so those 1/2 spacing on 00:07:455 (2,3) - would look more consistent Done.
00:30:556 (2) - i feel the jump is a bit far so i think we still can make it easier, how about x:148? Done.
00:42:970 (2) - reason same as above, x:416 Done.
00:38:142 (2) - i dont know you want to make this as dash or not? if you want to make dash then this slider still can caught w/o dash, if not then i'd suggest to reduce the spacing a bit since kinda hard to catch this w/o dash Done.

Rain
00:48:142 (1) - i'd say x:380 here. at least give a mini jump for last note Done.
00:37:797 - 00:38:487 - 00:40:556 - 00:41:246 - 00:43:315 - 00:44:004 - 00:46:073 - 00:46:763 - 00:28:143 - 00:28:832 - 00:30:901 - 00:31:591 - 00:33:659 - i think better to not skip map all of them because they have much important beats like drums or guitar snaresIt's consistently like this throughout the map, focusing more on the vocals than the drums or snares, no changes.

Thanks for the mod.

Updated with my changes.

Sorceress

332 posts

Joined September 2012

Sorceress 2015-12-26T18:09:40+00:00

Xinely wrote:

Platter
since the bpm is low and your cs is big so i'd like suggest to use AR OD 7 - I'll leave this to Riari to decide, though I do think 7.5 works quite well.
00:09:869 (3,4) - i cant get why you do jump on (4) which has low music and normal spacing on (3) which has strong music (until you add hitsound), i'd like suggest (3) x:472 and (4) x:336 - Ok I've changed up this bit so there's a dash to (3) and not to (4) and I think I've got it to work, though honestly I do feel it played well before. I didn't go for your suggestion as I felt it was lacking in movement, something pointed out in a previous mod in this section which led to how it is now.
00:12:627 (5) - clap on head as you can hear the drum sound - This sounds out of place to me, though I know next to nothing when it comes to hitsounding ;_; I checked the other diffs and none have a clap sound here so I'll ask Riari to check it.
00:12:972 - remove whistle and add whistle in 00:13:316 - as you can hear the snare sound - Again, I'm not certain on this but checking other difficulties this would be inconsistent? #Riariwillfixit
00:16:075 - gonna skip big drum music? ;________________________; - ;_; Added a happy little note right here 00:16:075 (6) -
00:18:144 (1) - i'd say x:432 so you can make 1/4 hdash easier here. if u agree then happy remake 00:18:488 (2) - and etc :p - Slapped (1) to x:432 and adjusted the parts afterwards.
00:22:625 (2) - x:144 so you can give movement to emphasize vocal ;w; , if you agree then 00:22:970 (3) - x:248 to keep consistent spacing - So I moved 00:22:625 (2) - to x:208 to avoid a jump after a hyper, then adjusted the notes after for some consistent spacing. It's near enough what you suggested
00:40:901 (3) - i'd say x:352 to make easier hdash here. if you agree then 00:41:418 (4) - x:272 to make at least better spacing
- More blue text hype! Moved (3) to x:352 but gave it more of a curve so the slider end is to the right of (4) as I didn't want to lose that little hop to (5).

Thanks for the mod!

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JBHyperion

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JBHyperion 2015-12-26T18:17:26+00:00

Thanks for the check Xinely! (:

@Riari, I'm away visiting family for a few days and won't be able to respond to this - since it's only one small point on my diff, feel free to accept or deny as you see fit. No sense in holding things up for a relatively minor change.

Good luck!

Riari

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Riari 2015-12-26T21:28:59+00:00

JBHyperion wrote:
Thanks for the check Xinely! (:

@Riari, I'm away visiting family for a few days and won't be able to respond to this - since it's only one small point on my diff, feel free to accept or deny as you see fit. No sense in holding things up for a relatively minor change.

Good luck!

On it.

Xinely wrote:

Cup
00:45:728 (2) - i'd like to give a bit more movement (actually just my personal taste) like http://puu.sh/m9aCi/f6937c25d5.jpg so from "nya" "nya" lyric you need to move a bit your ryuuta to catch them all
I find it fine to play, the movement is nice for a cup and seems to be like that throughout the difficulty.

Not changing the AR in Tom's diff, it's consistent and I'd rather keep the spread how it is.

Updated.

Xinely

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Xinely 2015-12-27T14:53:50+00:00

let's see what will happen ~

Riari

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Riari 2015-12-27T14:55:12+00:00

Eagerly awaiting the Deif scarepost.

JBHyperion

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JBHyperion 2015-12-27T15:19:22+00:00

Nice

Riari wrote:
Eagerly awaiting the Deif scarepost.

Deif usually DQs maps that I qualify; since I didn't qualify this it should be fine xD
/me runs

Riari

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Riari 2015-12-27T15:56:30+00:00

JBHyperion wrote:
Nice

Riari wrote:
Eagerly awaiting the Deif scarepost.
Deif usually DQs maps that I qualify; since I didn't qualify this it should be fine xD
/me runs

No, the scarepost is where you see the red name post but it's just him saying grats.

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-Sh1n1- 2015-12-28T21:31:41+00:00

Best of lucks Riari, the set looks fine, don't worry, Gratz *-*/

ZiRoX

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ZiRoX 2016-01-01T17:05:53+00:00

Riari wrote:
Pending I guess.

Qualified I guess.

Riari

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Riari 2016-01-02T17:36:59+00:00

ZiRoX wrote:
Riari wrote:
Pending I guess.
Qualified I guess.

I can't be bothered changing it.

Kurokami

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Kurokami 2016-01-03T03:50:06+00:00

Congrats. o/

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