Thanks for the mod.- Magic Bomb - wrote:
Requested on my queue, now stop stealing the songs I map :^( I feel like this flows better as it is, no change.
[Salad]
00:02:973 (2) - A slight decrease on this would be nice, I don't think a dash fits just yet and this may be difficult to do without dashing for an average salad player. Try x:164. Done.
00:07:111 (1) - x:464, to make the dash a bit more obvious, to fit the strong sound here. Done/
00:09:869 (1) - x:160, maybe, to make the dash stronger, as it avoids confusion about whether to dash or not, and gives the left right movement more structure, in my opinion. Done.
00:16:420 (1,2) - These distances seem a bit too big for me, this is bordering on a double dash how it is now, which is too difficult for a salad. I don't feel either of these sounds are really strong enough to suit dashes, so what I would do is move 1 to x:352 and 2 to x:160 (keeps the symmetry you were going for here).Done.
00:27:108 (5) - Dash to this feels really weird, this note doesn't sound very strong to me. However, a dash from this to 1 sounds good, to start the kiai off with a dash to the strong vocal. I would change this by ctrl+g on this slider, and then move it to x:200. Done.
00:34:694 (1) - Dash to this doesn't sound very good to me either, this sound isn't very strong considering the other sounds around here. Ctrl+g works fine. Done.
00:37:453 (1) - A dash to this would fit really nicely, for the strong vocal and emphasis to start the kiai. A nice change could be to make this slider horizontal (going to the left) at x:404. Done.
00:40:211 (2) - I think a dash to here would also fit well for the strong vocal, try moving it to x:80. Done.
00:47:108 (4) - x:184, a dash to this feels really weird. Done.
[Platter]
AR7.5 works better for spread. I swear somebody is changing ARs without telling me and ruining the spread.
[Noi]
00:03:662 (3) - Curve this a bit for better flow, like this. (Also, try to curve it in a way to make a HDash to 1, as that jump is currently very awkward, but a HDash fixes it, the way I curved the slider does this well.) Done.
00:11:937 (1) - x:72, weakening this hyper feels better for flow, considering the antiflow movement afterwards. Done.
00:16:075 (5) - This note is really weak, I'm really not sure why there's a hyper to this. Try x:360, sounds better with the music. I don't know why you are calling this weak, there is a clear and large change here.
00:25:039 (2) - This hyper really needs to be weakened, this note isn't strong enough to suggest this strong of a slider or antiflow movement. I also don't feel like the HDash from this really fits, as the vocal is not that strong. Try moving this to x:168, this fixes both of the issues I've mentioned. Done.
00:27:108 (2) - x:104 please, the current distance snap is far too excessive, and the direction of the slider movement really doesn't help. Done.
00:36:763 (3,1) - If you could rearrange this a bit to make a hyper to 1, I think it would be really fitting to emphasise the strong vocal and the start of the second kiai. Reworking seems to ruin what I was aiming to go for with the previous sections, I'll leave it as is now.
00:45:384 (1) - A hyper from this would be very nice for the strong vocal afterwards. Try x:500. Done.
*insert obiligtory noi! pun* I noi!ticed that you didn't even try.
Alright, done.
Updated.