Hello, M4M from my queue.
Woah, a marathon with 2 STDs diffs, that's a first
[General]
I don't find the first kiai thaaat much fitting maybe you could remove it if you want to; that might also fix the fact that more than 1/3 is kiai.
[Normal]
[Hard]
I hope that mod was sort of helpful, especially after the delay.. ._.
Good luck for rank!
Woah, a marathon with 2 STDs diffs, that's a first
[General]
I don't find the first kiai thaaat much fitting maybe you could remove it if you want to; that might also fix the fact that more than 1/3 is kiai.
[Normal]
- 01:11:508 (3) - It would be nice if you add a note here, there's no big beats but the vocal is pretty strong though. Maybe replace (2) for a 1/2 slider (the tail with a soft sampleset maybe).
- 01:14:574 - Same here, sounds a bit odd to me to not follow twice the vocal on the same slider. Reduce (1) until the previous white tick and add a note here 01:14:793 - It would sound more natural I think. Also; a slider higher than 1/1 (starting on full beat but finishing on half beat as you did here) isn't really flawless.
- 01:19:392 (4) - Same remark
- 01:21:143 - It would be nice if there would be a clicable circle here. It's a pretty strong note.
- 01:27:275 (5) - The red tick should be clicable circle as well, and it's on a red tick that the clap should be. Reduce (5) by a 1/2 slider, and add reverse, or a note.
- 02:13:698 (1,2,3) - I like the rythme here
- 02:34:720 (1) - Just a suggestion but you could just let Auto sampleset to follow the synthe, also it gives more impact for the last note before the break. 05:26:399 (1) - You did something like this here
- 04:16:326 (1) - ^
- 00:53:114 (1) - ^
- 02:45:231 (1) - Same remark as above
- 02:52:895 (2) - Replace it in the center of (1) ? I mean around x220y184. It's not really neat like this.
- 02:55:742 (1) - ^
- 02:59:246 (1) - ^
- 03:31:654 (2) - Ctrl+J for better flow (the blanket wasn't that neat anyway :p
- 03:41:289 (1) - Take the same slider than 03:40:414 (4) - for better looking
- 05:26:618 (1) - Add whistle for the end
[Hard]
- 01:07:129 (1) - Try to place at the center of 01:07:786 (2) - for better looking (avoid the overlap at the end)
- 01:22:895 (1,2,3) - I'd reduce a bit the spacing for the sake of readbility.. Or I would spam Ncs but not sure this is your style lol
01:34:063 (3) - Avoid the overlap at the top of 01:35:158 (1) - - 01:52:676 (1) - Add clap or whistle maybe
- 00:53:114 (1) - ^ even finish sounds cool here
- 03:34:282 (1) - ^
I hope that mod was sort of helpful, especially after the delay.. ._.
Good luck for rank!