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Ignored all, sorry ;-;Kasuga wrote:
M4M Request~~
[General]
Diffnya ditambah lah, antara Easy ato ngga Insane. Keduanya malah bagus < Lagunya udah panjang, 5 menit xD
[Normal]
Uda bagus :3
[Hard]
Ngga ada masalah selain slider yg kyk gini 00:35:158 (5) - sama circle 00:42:275 (4) - < Coba di delete deh, kalo didengerin baik baik ada suara di blue tick jadi ane pikir slider sama circle kayak gitu appropriate.
buat slider yg kyk 00:35:158 (5) - knp ngga dibikin 1/2? ato ngga ditambah slider 1/4 di sebelahnya ngebentuk stream < Nah ^
buat circle yg kyk 00:42:275 (4) - kesannya off ya, w sih prefer antara dihilangin ato ngga dibikin stream ^
Thank you for mod ^^Yales wrote:
Hello, M4M from my queue.
Woah, a marathon with 2 STDs diffs, that's a first < Ehh, I always thought it should be more than 6 mins to be marathon xD I guess my standard is pretty high :3
[General]
I don't find the first kiai thaaat much fitting maybe you could remove it if you want to; that might also fix the fact that more than 1/3 is kiai. < Nah, I think it's fine enough. I only use kiai at the choruses tho. Unless I have random kiai burst.
[Normal]Didn't always agree with your rythme as you can see; I don't think it's wrong or something the way you did, but I still think it can be done maybe more in a natural way; I don't know, just check if you like or not lol. Anything else is mostly good. < Well, I don't really mind the vocal at this diff xD I mostly follow drum since I think they sound bigger than vocal in this song -w-
- 01:11:508 (3) - It would be nice if you add a note here, there's no big beats but the vocal is pretty strong though. Maybe replace (2) for a 1/2 slider (the tail with a soft sampleset maybe). < Ehh? there's a slider there o-o
- 01:14:574 - Same here, sounds a bit odd to me to not follow twice the vocal on the same slider. Reduce (1) until the previous white tick and add a note here 01:14:793 - It would sound more natural I think. Also; a slider higher than 1/1 (starting on full beat but finishing on half beat as you did here) isn't really flawless.
- 01:19:392 (4) - Same remark < I'll keep this one, I want variation, I used that kind of rhythm ^ a lot
- 01:21:143 - It would be nice if there would be a clicable circle here. It's a pretty strong note.
- 01:27:275 (5) - The red tick should be clicable circle as well, and it's on a red tick that the clap should be. Reduce (5) by a 1/2 slider, and add reverse, or a note.
- 02:13:698 (1,2,3) - I like the rythme here < Yeah, thanks ^^ I think (3) fits the vocal very well :3
- 02:34:720 (1) - Just a suggestion but you could just let Auto sampleset to follow the synthe, also it gives more impact for the last note before the break. 05:26:399 (1) - You did something like this here < Okay a lot of modder have remind me about this, fixed this and below
- 04:16:326 (1) - ^
- 00:53:114 (1) - ^
- 02:45:231 (1) - Same remark as above < Variation and I think the same below
- 02:52:895 (2) - Replace it in the center of (1) ? I mean around x220y184. It's not really neat like this. < Don't really matter imo .-. I think it flow nicely to (3) this way.
- 02:55:742 (1) - ^
- 02:59:246 (1) - ^
- 03:31:654 (2) - Ctrl+J for better flow (the blanket wasn't that neat anyway :p < Nah, I want symmetry there... It wasn't mean to be blanket tho >.<
- 03:41:289 (1) - Take the same slider than 03:40:414 (4) - for better looking < Nah, I want kinda blanket (4)'s body.
- 05:26:618 (1) - Add whistle for the end < I think it's unnecessary...
[Hard]Pretty chilling set; I like it.
- 01:07:129 (1) - Try to place at the center of 01:07:786 (2) - for better looking (avoid the overlap at the end) < tried... it's hard .-.
- 01:22:895 (1,2,3) - I'd reduce a bit the spacing for the sake of readbility.. Or I would spam Ncs but not sure this is your style lol < Nah it's big sound and yes, I don't like NC spam xD
01:34:063 (3) - Avoid the overlap at the top of 01:35:158 (1) - < I kinda want triangle, but I think it's good :3- 01:52:676 (1) - Add clap or whistle maybe < Whistle
- 00:53:114 (1) - ^ even finish sounds cool here < Nah, don't really fit imo .-.
- 03:34:282 (1) - ^ < Whistle
I hope that mod was sort of helpful, especially after the delay.. ._. < No worries :3
Good luck for rank!
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Thank you for mod ^^[Sc4v4ng3r] wrote:
Oh I have forgotten to mod Hard... So here it is. < Lol, I almost forgot myself xD
No kudos for this < My reflexes give you kudos xD
[Hard]GL! I still love this song
- So... When I finally returned to check on Hard... It's so good Here are some suggestions.
- 00:42:275 (4) - I think this can be removed, for something like a break time to the next note. < Nah, following the drum on blue tick. I don't want to use 1/4 slider for the whole map so I use circle for variation so it won't be boring -w-
- 00:56:289 (6) - Personally I think this really doesn't fit. ^
- 01:25:961 (4,1) - Don't you think these are little too far? < Not really imo .-.
- 02:09:866 (6) - Same reason like the first suggestion. ^
- 02:16:873 (4) - Same reason like the second suggestion. ^^
- 02:30:888 (5) - ^^ ^^^
- 03:04:501 (1,2) - Blanketing with space of 1/4 looks way too confusing... < I can't really think of neat change
- 03:07:567 (5,1) - Again, I feel this is too far. < Don't underestimate hard players >:D
- 03:15:012 (1) - Is this slider's shape intended? < Yes, the straight part is to support the straight (3) slider :3
- 03:51:362 (5) - 04:05:377 (4) - I feel that these 2 doesn't fit into the song... ^^^^
- 04:33:516 (5) - I don't really hear any sound that fits with this note. ^^^^^
- 04:47:530 (5) - For this, I think it can be removed to emphasize on the vocals here. ^^^^^^
- 05:04:939 (4,1) - I feel these are too far yet again. < I want to make triangle there. 2.36 jump is not that big... I have bigger jumps in this map .-.
- 05:15:450 (4) - Maybe this can be a circle instead? < Nah, there's a sound at blue tick, try listening with 25% playback rate, you'll hear it
- 05:22:457 (5) - I think this can be extended up till 05:22:786. I don't really know why, but I feel it fits in... ^^^^^^
- Ok I know that wasn't some suggestions lol. Feel free to reject them though
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Thank you for mod all -w-No_Gu wrote:
after a seeing i found the map is totally ok,just drop some advice on hard
[Hard]
Circle so big lol < Lol, I liked big circles xD
00:27:713 (1,1) - not a good idea to put this spacing here < The sound is small and slow so I think it's pretty appropriate .-.
01:01:873 (1,2) - not good to put a 3/4 here..the long sound lasts a little more < Okay, it don't really affect tho, change it to 1/2 slider
01:16:326 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - better to make sth like a star?< Hmm, pretty hard because of small place ;-; furthermore, I want to "blanket" (2)
01:22:895 (1,2,3) - make the spacing smaller or bigger.the present one doesn't give me a good feeling < Since a lot of modder told me to reduce the spacing, I think I'll make it bigger just a little bit xD
01:49:173 (1) - errr..you know < .-. that slider is cute -w-
01:52:676 (1) - delete this?...this hitnormal doesn't match here < I think it's fine .-.
01:57:713 (5) - spacing < Tried to fix
03:34:282 (1) - ^ < This one is good I think
03:39:976 (2,3,4) - make a straight line? < I tried to make triangle, but, okay
04:25:961 (4) - you can try sth to make the flow better < moved (3)
05:04:939 (4,1) - since you overlapped the 3/4 in the previous part,better to do it here < it'll overlap with 05:06:253 (4) - if I do ;-; furthermore I think the sound is big enough to be emphasized that way :3