Kasuga wrote:

M4M Request~~
[General]
Diffnya ditambah lah, antara Easy ato ngga Insane. Keduanya malah bagus < Lagunya udah panjang, 5 menit xD

[Normal]
Uda bagus :3

[Hard]
Ngga ada masalah selain slider yg kyk gini 00:35:158 (5) - sama circle 00:42:275 (4) - < Coba di delete deh, kalo didengerin baik baik ada suara di blue tick jadi ane pikir slider sama circle kayak gitu appropriate.

buat slider yg kyk 00:35:158 (5) - knp ngga dibikin 1/2? ato ngga ditambah slider 1/4 di sebelahnya ngebentuk stream < Nah ^


buat circle yg kyk 00:42:275 (4) - kesannya off ya, w sih prefer antara dihilangin ato ngga dibikin stream ^

Yales wrote:

Hello, M4M from my queue.

Woah, a marathon with 2 STDs diffs, that's a first < Ehh, I always thought it should be more than 6 mins to be marathon xD I guess my standard is pretty high :3

[General]
I don't find the first kiai thaaat much fitting maybe you could remove it if you want to; that might also fix the fact that more than 1/3 is kiai. < Nah, I think it's fine enough. I only use kiai at the choruses tho. Unless I have random kiai burst.

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1. 01:11:508 (3) - It would be nice if you add a note here, there's no big beats but the vocal is pretty strong though. Maybe replace (2) for a 1/2 slider (the tail with a soft sampleset maybe). < Ehh? there's a slider there o-o
2. 01:14:574 - Same here, sounds a bit odd to me to not follow twice the vocal on the same slider. Reduce (1) until the previous white tick and add a note here 01:14:793 - It would sound more natural I think. Also; a slider higher than 1/1 (starting on full beat but finishing on half beat as you did here) isn't really flawless.
3. 01:19:392 (4) - Same remark < I'll keep this one, I want variation, I used that kind of rhythm ^ a lot
4. 01:21:143 - It would be nice if there would be a clicable circle here. It's a pretty strong note.
5. 01:27:275 (5) - The red tick should be clicable circle as well, and it's on a red tick that the clap should be. Reduce (5) by a 1/2 slider, and add reverse, or a note.
6. 02:13:698 (1,2,3) - I like the rythme here < Yeah, thanks ^^ I think (3) fits the vocal very well :3
7. 02:34:720 (1) - Just a suggestion but you could just let Auto sampleset to follow the synthe, also it gives more impact for the last note before the break. 05:26:399 (1) - You did something like this here < Okay a lot of modder have remind me about this, fixed this and below
8. 04:16:326 (1) - ^
9. 00:53:114 (1) - ^
10. 02:45:231 (1) - Same remark as above < Variation and I think the same below
11. 02:52:895 (2) - Replace it in the center of (1) ? I mean around x220y184. It's not really neat like this. < Don't really matter imo .-. I think it flow nicely to (3) this way.
12. 02:55:742 (1) - ^
13. 02:59:246 (1) - ^
14. 03:31:654 (2) - Ctrl+J for better flow (the blanket wasn't that neat anyway :p < Nah, I want symmetry there... It wasn't mean to be blanket tho >.<
15. 03:41:289 (1) - Take the same slider than 03:40:414 (4) - for better looking < Nah, I want kinda blanket (4)'s body.
16. 05:26:618 (1) - Add whistle for the end < I think it's unnecessary...

Didn't always agree with your rythme as you can see; I don't think it's wrong or something the way you did, but I still think it can be done maybe more in a natural way; I don't know, just check if you like or not lol. Anything else is mostly good. < Well, I don't really mind the vocal at this diff xD I mostly follow drum since I think they sound bigger than vocal in this song -w-

[Hard]

1. 01:07:129 (1) - Try to place at the center of 01:07:786 (2) - for better looking (avoid the overlap at the end) < tried... it's hard .-.
2. 01:22:895 (1,2,3) - I'd reduce a bit the spacing for the sake of readbility.. Or I would spam Ncs but not sure this is your style lol < Nah it's big sound and yes, I don't like NC spam xD
   01:34:063 (3) - Avoid the overlap at the top of 01:35:158 (1) - < I kinda want triangle, but I think it's good :3
3. 01:52:676 (1) - Add clap or whistle maybe < Whistle
4. 00:53:114 (1) - ^ even finish sounds cool here < Nah, don't really fit imo .-.
5. 03:34:282 (1) - ^ < Whistle

Pretty chilling set; I like it.
I hope that mod was sort of helpful, especially after the delay.. ._. < No worries :3

Good luck for rank!

[Sc4v4ng3r] wrote:

Oh I have forgotten to mod Hard... So here it is. < Lol, I almost forgot myself xD
No kudos for this < My reflexes give you kudos xD

[Hard]

1. So... When I finally returned to check on Hard... It's so good Here are some suggestions.
2. 00:42:275 (4) - I think this can be removed, for something like a break time to the next note. < Nah, following the drum on blue tick. I don't want to use 1/4 slider for the whole map so I use circle for variation so it won't be boring -w-
3. 00:56:289 (6) - Personally I think this really doesn't fit. ^
4. 01:25:961 (4,1) - Don't you think these are little too far? < Not really imo .-.
5. 02:09:866 (6) - Same reason like the first suggestion. ^
6. 02:16:873 (4) - Same reason like the second suggestion. ^^
7. 02:30:888 (5) - ^^ ^^^
8. 03:04:501 (1,2) - Blanketing with space of 1/4 looks way too confusing... < I can't really think of neat change
9. 03:07:567 (5,1) - Again, I feel this is too far. < Don't underestimate hard players >:D
10. 03:15:012 (1) - Is this slider's shape intended? < Yes, the straight part is to support the straight (3) slider :3
11. 03:51:362 (5) - 04:05:377 (4) - I feel that these 2 doesn't fit into the song... ^^^^
12. 04:33:516 (5) - I don't really hear any sound that fits with this note. ^^^^^
13. 04:47:530 (5) - For this, I think it can be removed to emphasize on the vocals here. ^^^^^^
14. 05:04:939 (4,1) - I feel these are too far yet again. < I want to make triangle there. 2.36 jump is not that big... I have bigger jumps in this map .-.
15. 05:15:450 (4) - Maybe this can be a circle instead? < Nah, there's a sound at blue tick, try listening with 25% playback rate, you'll hear it
16. 05:22:457 (5) - I think this can be extended up till 05:22:786. I don't really know why, but I feel it fits in... ^^^^^^
17. Ok I know that wasn't some suggestions lol. Feel free to reject them though

GL! I still love this song

No_Gu wrote:

after a seeing i found the map is totally ok,just drop some advice on hard

[Hard]
Circle so big lol < Lol, I liked big circles xD
00:27:713 (1,1) - not a good idea to put this spacing here < The sound is small and slow so I think it's pretty appropriate .-.
01:01:873 (1,2) - not good to put a 3/4 here..the long sound lasts a little more < Okay, it don't really affect tho, change it to 1/2 slider
01:16:326 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - better to make sth like a star?< Hmm, pretty hard because of small place ;-; furthermore, I want to "blanket" (2)
01:22:895 (1,2,3) - make the spacing smaller or bigger.the present one doesn't give me a good feeling < Since a lot of modder told me to reduce the spacing, I think I'll make it bigger just a little bit xD
01:49:173 (1) - errr..you know < .-. that slider is cute -w-
01:52:676 (1) - delete this?...this hitnormal doesn't match here < I think it's fine .-.
01:57:713 (5) - spacing < Tried to fix
03:34:282 (1) - ^ < This one is good I think
03:39:976 (2,3,4) - make a straight line? < I tried to make triangle, but, okay
04:25:961 (4) - you can try sth to make the flow better < moved (3)
05:04:939 (4,1) - since you overlapped the 3/4 in the previous part,better to do it here < it'll overlap with 05:06:253 (4) - if I do ;-; furthermore I think the sound is big enough to be emphasized that way :3

[ Shark ] wrote:

Hello \:D/
From your M4M Queue ~
Generally it's looking really good, just a few things I noticed.. (Feel free to ignore some if you don't really like them)

In both Diff's!: 00:27:713 - 00:53:114 I don't think kiai time is required for the intro, Ctrl + Shift + A Opens AiMod it tells you there's more than a 1/3 of map in kiai time.. which isn't too good, try removing it < I still think it's appropriate (A lot of modders has remind me about this; I'm such a stubborn, lol xD) I mean the sound is still as big as the chorus which start here 01:56:180 and other part so I think it's good enough to add kiai (the ranked ver do that too) If it's intro, usually it's only small sound that uses piano or guitar, the "intro" in this song uses all instrument xD Furthermore, that more than 1/3 kiai stuff that AiMod say is not big deal imo; a lot of maps has it.

[Normal] Diff:
Everything looks great tbh. Great flow~~ < Thx~:3

[Hard] Diff:
00:40:851 (1) - Move to X:280 Y:236 Because jump from the previous note is unessecary at that point IMO < It'll overlap with (4) if I do ;-; I don't like overlap
00:41:289 (2) - Move to X:176 Y:336 So it flows with the previous slider ^ < Since I don't change above, I think I don't need to change this one .-.
01:23:771 (4) - Move to X:144 Y:92 Better flow < Overlapping ;-;
01:50:268 (2) - Try it like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3405857 < Nah, flow weirdly that way imo.
03:04:939 (2) - Move it to X:384 Y:48 looks better tbh < Fine, I moved it around there (I DS-ed it so it not as close as you suggest)
04:04:501 (2) - If you move it upwards like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3405875 it'll have a better and different flow < Nah, I want symmetry with (5) and 04:02:311 (1,2) - furthermore, I think it make it even more pointy.
04:29:793 (5) - I don't think you need this note xD It would be fine if you used that throughout the whole map but since it's just once it feels weird, try removing it < fine, a lot of modder has remind me about this... Deleted.

That's pretty much all I found, it looks almost perfect man GL <3

Dronvir wrote:

Hi there!
M4M request from your Q ~

Not much to say against. Really well made :3 < Thanks^^

Normal

You should remove Kiai Time from the beggining of the song. In my opinion it's not good to place it at start. < Same reason as above mod ^
01:56:180 (1) - I don't know why you have placed a new combo there. It feels weird to me that before was combo with just one slider. Well, at the beggining is simillar, but it doesn't feel weird. < Because it's the start of kiai and the sound is very big. It needs to be emphasized with NC
02:02:749 (7) - I would put here a short (1/4) slider. You can hear a beat after this 7 in the song, so a slider should do it. < I don't use 1/4 pattern at Normal (Except song with bpm<100) I do it at Hard tho.
03:37:786 (1) - Well, I know now why you put here (and before) another combo, but still it feels weird to me. :/ ^
03:51:362 (6) - I would put here a 1/4 slider. Again. ^
05:01:873 (1) - You know what I will say Same as two higher. This combo feels weird. ^
05:22:457 (6) - Yeah, a 1/4 slider I would put. (Yoda I am xD) < As above, the same. ^

Theese are not so important, map looks perfect to me. < Thankies :3

Hard

Again, Kiai at the beggining is not a godd idea. Too much Kiai. ^
01:23:771 (4) - You should move this a bit down. Better flow. < I tried to make (4)'s tail being blanketed by (2)... I changed the shape a bit for better flow tho.
01:50:487 (3) - Move it a bit up and rotate to the left. Better spacing.< Hmm, I kinda get the idea but maybe you could use picture next time .-. Anyway, from my assumption, I think it would ruin the flow to (1)
01:56:180 (1) - You know what i thing about theese combos Same to each one forward. ^
02:11:727 (5) - Move it out of stack, at first I thought you got to fast click here :3 < fix


That's actually it! Your map is ready for ranking in my opinion! Great job! ;D

AwisaRawwrrr wrote:

M4M from your Q ~ ^^

Note: Honestly, I prefer modding normal maps but your normal seems fine. ^^ Although, I found some notes in Hard that might confuse players. Especially those parts that have high gap but same position. Also, Check distance snapping ~ So here's my mod:

SPOILER

1. 01:06:034 (2,3) - This is the part what I'm talking about. Try to place it farther so players that newly play your map will hit accurately. < That one was on purpose tho, I put it at the same place so the players could feel the "pound" and there's significant sound that you can clearly hear, the approach circle will also help you to hit accurately (If you are not that good with music) so I think it's not that hard to hit.
2. 01:23:771 (4,5) - This might be farther than next note. Consider on following prev. and next. < Somehow the jump at that part do feel weird .-. Fixed
3. 01:25:523 (3) - Try reversing it for smooth flow. < On purpose, I want jump, the flow is not that bad tho if we try to make it into curvy like since players don't move their cursor very rigidly like auto do so it would be around like this http://puu.sh/jeuS4/aadc942d03.jpg furthermore, if I ctrl+g it, the flow to the next note would be ruined >.<
4. 01:45:231 (5) - ^ < Change it the other way
5. 02:02:968 - Try placing note here.< There's no sound there. I want pause after the second (blue tick) drum
6. 03:44:355 (5) - Reverse it and add note at red line < Nah, basically the same ^

This might be too short but in general, in my view, try fixing distance snapping especially to notes that overlap to each other as they appear on screen. Also, try to follow prev. and next (under x and y).
Goodluck ^^

1. 00:27:713 - 01:55:304 - 03:36:910 - 05:00:997 - Kalo pake S:C1 green line di sana kurang pas kak, kalo diganti sama Soft Default sample set bgmn kak? Soalnya suara soft-hitnormal nya ga masuk kan belum ada suara drum ataupun bass di sana
2. 00:53:114 (1) - Delete whistle?
3. 01:25:304 - Add note? Kaya 01:26:399 (3,4,5) -
4. 01:46:326 - Tambah note di situ? agak kosong menurut aku kak, lagian suara vokalnya lumayan kuat
5. 02:14:355 (2,3,4) - Ritmenya ada yang aneh deh kak, kalo jadi kaya gini aja http://puu.sh/jezYF/fe503d6f21.jpg bgmn?
6. 02:34:720 (1) - Delete whistle?
7. 02:39:976 (4) - Kalo ritmenya dijadiin kaya gini bgmn kak http://puu.sh/jeznf/80cf0d0890.jpg? kayanya kalo slider panjang pake reverse jadinya terlalu panjang jadi ngeskip suara yang di sini 02:41:070 -
8. 02:41:289 - Miss whistle?
9. 03:16:764 (1) - Rotate 20drajat terus x:408 y:212?
10. 03:27:932 - Tambah note di situ? agak kosong menurut aku kak, lagian suara vokalnya lumayan kuat
11. 03:30:778 (1,2) - Spasi
12. 04:16:326 (1) - Delete whistle?
13. 04:44:355 (1,2,3) - Kalo ritmenya jadi kaya gini http://puu.sh/jeAlR/eaa16b779a.jpg bgmn kak?
14. 04:46:545 (5) - Kayanya yang itu bagus dikurangin deh reversenya terus ritmenya dicoba kaya gini http://puu.sh/jeApu/c6160f0a48.jpg, lebih ngepas sama vokalnya
15. 04:47:859 (1) - Delete whistle?
16. 05:07:129 (3,4,5,1) - Sebenernya placingnya agak maksa kak, jadi flownya aneh
17. 05:26:618 (1) - Pake whistle spinnernya?
    
    Sebenernya beberapa slider panjang dengan reverse contoh kaya gini 05:17:640 (4) - dll, bisa diganti atau dipendekin biar ningkatin density diff sama star ratingnya, soalnya aku ngeliat yang hard agak susah kak

1. 00:27:713 - 01:55:304 - 03:36:910 - 05:00:997 - Kalo pake S:C1 green line di sana kurang pas kak, kalo diganti sama Soft Default sample set bgmn kak? Soalnya suara soft-hitnormal nya ga masuk kan belum ada suara drum ataupun bass di sana
2. 00:38:224 (3) - Kalo diflip ctrl+h, ctrl+j terus move ke x:188 y:76 bgmn kak? something like http://puu.sh/jeB3N/a27cdd84f9.jpg flow yang skrg agak dipaksain soalnya
3. 00:41:727 (3) - Kalo dipendekin slidernya jadi 1/2 terus ritmenya jadi kaya gini bgmn kak http://puu.sh/jeBbU/0b04199dff.jpg? Aku ngedenger suara transisinya kurang nyaman soalnya
4. 00:55:523 (4,5) - Diusahain ga punya jump lebih dari 2.0 atau 2.3 kak, soalnya agak lebay berasa ga sesuai sama lagunya yang pelan
5. 00:55:742 (5) - Kalo dipendekin slidernya jadi 1/2 terus ritmenya jadi kaya gini bgmn kak http://puu.sh/jeBps/fb5bcf4811.jpg?
6. 00:59:684 (3) - Kalo dijadiin curve terus ctrl+g bgmn kak http://puu.sh/jeBtO/6afcbebca8.jpg? kayanya jumpnya agak maksa bgt
7. 01:02:311 (2,3) - Those jump too far imo, coba kalo mau jump diusahain ga lebih dari 2.0 atau 2.3 kak, soalnya itu juga udah lumayan jauh jumpnya buat lagu kaya gini
8. 01:11:070 (2) - Kalo ctrl+j terus rotate -5drajat terus pindah ke x:416 y:140 bgmn kak? http://puu.sh/jeBJO/17caaac0b8.jpg
9. 01:33:844 (2,3) - Jump too far
10. 01:38:224 (5) - Rotate 10drajat terus ke x:16 y:160?
11. 01:41:946 (5,1,2,3,1) - Jump too far imo
12. 02:09:319 (5,6) - Kalo ritmenya jadi kay gini http://puu.sh/jeD2U/63a90f9839.jpg bgmn kak?
13. 02:16:326 (3,4) - 02:30:341 (4,5) - Kalo ritmenya jadi kaya gini kak http://puu.sh/jeD4O/2b3790a0e2.jpg?
14. 02:19:392 (2,3) - Jump too far
15. 02:32:749 (5,1,2,3,1) - Jump too far, apalagi yang ini 02:33:625 (2,3) -
16. 02:39:976 (1,2) - 02:53:771 (5,1) - Jump too far
17. 04:09:319 (1,2) - 04:09:976 (2,3) - 04:13:698 (3,4,1) - Jump too far
    
    Coba dikurangin kak jumpnya deh, aku ga sebutin semuanya. Karena berhubung ini cuma Hard, jump jauh kaya gitu jadi terlalu susah apalagi lagunya slow ga cepet cepet bgt, coba dipikirin ulang deh

1. 00:53:333 - I feel like this break is really useless here, and made some awkward feelings while played . They're very worth to be mapped, so please consider this out (There's 3 places that have this break)
2. 00:58:370 (2,3) - The transition between them looks rigid . Maybe, curve this slider 00:58:370 (2) - so it'll makes something smooth to 00:59:027 (3) - imo
3. 01:27:275 (5,1) - The contradicted flow direction between them might be a bit hard to read for easiest diff this in this mapset, because 01:28:151 (1) - appears at the different way with the previous . You could make a nice transition between them 01:27:275 (5,1) - to simply fix this problem, but they may be really hard . Simply, how about make this slider curved like this? Make it parallel with previous slider might be work for better transition a bit
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 02:08:005 (2) - Nazi, blanket
5. 03:22:457 (5,6) - The pattern isn't work perfectly here . At the previous similar rhythm 01:41:070 (5,6) - , It fits the way they are . But, the same pattern isn't show here, and make it looks bad . Better to make it constant with the previous, because it works really well at this rhythm
6. 04:47:859 (1) - Very really nazi here . How about make it fully covered up with that envelope on Gumi's hand?

1. Kualitas suara mp3 yang kamu pakai terbilang buruk dan terasa banget, apalagi kalau dibandingkan dengan mp3 dari map lagu ini yang udah ranked (bisa dilihat di sini). Coba pake mp3 yang ini, dan ganti offset jadi 344 (-216 dari yang sekarang).
2. Dari segi speed, Hard mungkin masih tergolong agak gampang dibanding sebagian Hard yang ada, tapi pattern yang dipakai di sini tergolong sangat bebas dalam hal spacing, layaknya diff Insane. Ujungnya diff ini jadi terkesan sulit dan kesulitannya terasa melompat dari Normal, dan hal ini ga bagus karena ujungnya map ini bakal susah untuk di-rank.
   
   Ada dua jalan yang bisa kamu tempuh untuk menyelesaikan ini: Bikin Hard sekarang sedikit lebih susah lagi (opsional sih) dan tambahkan diff yang lebih susah dari Normal namun lebih gampang dari Hard, dengan spacing yang masih relatif teratur (sesuai dengan Hard yang biasa ada), atau bikin Hard jauh lebih gampang dari yang sekarang dengan mengurangi jump yang ada.

Hinsvar wrote:

Jadi saya baru aja ngelihat sekilas kedua diff dan ada beberapa hal yang perlu saya katakan sebelum bener-bener mulai nge-mod.

1. Kualitas suara mp3 yang kamu pakai terbilang buruk dan terasa banget, apalagi kalau dibandingkan dengan mp3 dari map lagu ini yang udah ranked (bisa dilihat di sini). Coba pake mp3 yang ini, dan ganti offset jadi 344 (-216 dari yang sekarang). < Done
2. Dari segi speed, Hard mungkin masih tergolong agak gampang dibanding sebagian Hard yang ada, tapi pattern yang dipakai di sini tergolong sangat bebas dalam hal spacing, layaknya diff Insane. Ujungnya diff ini jadi terkesan sulit dan kesulitannya terasa melompat dari Normal, dan hal ini ga bagus karena ujungnya map ini bakal susah untuk di-rank.
   
   Ada dua jalan yang bisa kamu tempuh untuk menyelesaikan ini: Bikin Hard sekarang sedikit lebih susah lagi (opsional sih) dan tambahkan diff yang lebih susah dari Normal namun lebih gampang dari Hard, dengan spacing yang masih relatif teratur (sesuai dengan Hard yang biasa ada), atau bikin Hard jauh lebih gampang dari yang sekarang dengan mengurangi jump yang ada. < Did the latter option, star diffnya turun 0.8 jadi 3.12, hope it's good enough. Mungkin kk bisa ngasih suggestion buat ngurangin spacingnya lagi :3

Saya baru akan bisa nge-mod kalau minimal masalah yang kedua sudah ditangani. Maaf ya, tapi menurut saya map ini dari kualitas mapping udah rankable, cuma sayang juga kan kalau entar malah kacau waktu qualification karena diff spread (dan emang Hard sendiri spacing-nya dapat dibilang liar seperti diff Insane pada umumnya sih, jadi saya sendiri juga ga setuju)... < Sebenernya sih ranked version nya juga jumpnya agak jauh jauh, Hardnya Nymph emang jump nya juga agak jauh :/ kayak map ini misalnya https://osu.ppy.sh/b/249257 tapi... ah sudahlah xD

Good luck

Mako Sakata wrote:

As promised
Some small sugestion from me,

[Normal]

1. 00:27:713 - 01:55:304 - 03:36:910 - 05:00:997 - Kalo pake S:C1 green line di sana kurang pas kak, kalo diganti sama Soft Default sample set bgmn kak? Soalnya suara soft-hitnormal nya ga masuk kan belum ada suara drum ataupun bass di sana < Fix, di Hardnya juga :3
2. 00:53:114 (1) - Delete whistle? < .-.? nggak ada whistle disitu .-. kalo tailnya emang sengaja dikasih whistle.
3. 01:25:304 - Add note? Kaya 01:26:399 (3,4,5) - < Disitu nggak ada bunyi vocal .-. bunyi drumnya juga nggak terlalu kenceng jadi not yet lah
4. 01:46:326 - Tambah note di situ? agak kosong menurut aku kak, lagian suara vokalnya lumayan kuat
5. 02:14:355 (2,3,4) - Ritmenya ada yang aneh deh kak, kalo jadi kaya gini aja http://puu.sh/jezYF/fe503d6f21.jpg bgmn? < Keliatannya cocok cocok aja buat ngikutin vocalnya...
6. 02:34:720 (1) - Delete whistle? < Nggak ada whistle .-.
7. 02:39:976 (4) - Kalo ritmenya dijadiin kaya gini bgmn kak http://puu.sh/jeznf/80cf0d0890.jpg? kayanya kalo slider panjang pake reverse jadinya terlalu panjang jadi ngeskip suara yang di sini 02:41:070 -
8. 02:41:289 - Miss whistle?
9. 03:16:764 (1) - Rotate 20drajat terus x:408 y:212? < Nggak deh, kayaknya kayak begitu aja udah bagus, kebentuk from segitiga gitu -w-
10. 03:27:932 - Tambah note di situ? agak kosong menurut aku kak, lagian suara vokalnya lumayan kuat
11. 03:30:778 (1,2) - Spasi < ? .-.
12. 04:16:326 (1) - Delete whistle? < On purpose sih, soalnya biar soundnya nggak terlalu kuat xD
13. 04:44:355 (1,2,3) - Kalo ritmenya jadi kaya gini http://puu.sh/jeAlR/eaa16b779a.jpg bgmn kak? < Bagian itu lagi bukan ngikutin drum sih :/
14. 04:46:545 (5) - Kayanya yang itu bagus dikurangin deh reversenya terus ritmenya dicoba kaya gini http://puu.sh/jeApu/c6160f0a48.jpg, lebih ngepas sama vokalnya
15. 04:47:859 (1) - Delete whistle? < Nggak ada whistle .-.
16. 05:07:129 (3,4,5,1) - Sebenernya placingnya agak maksa kak, jadi flownya aneh < Kalo (1) dinaikin lagi, (2) nya nggak kebagian tempat xD biarkan sajalah, cuman sedikit flow break, ga bakal terlalu terasa di gameplay.
17. 05:26:618 (1) - Pake whistle spinnernya?
    
    Sebenernya beberapa slider panjang dengan reverse contoh kaya gini 05:17:640 (4) - dll, bisa diganti atau dipendekin biar ningkatin density diff sama star ratingnya, soalnya aku ngeliat yang hard agak susah kak < Iya sih, itu buat variasi aja biar gak bosen...., hard juga udah aku gampangin kok -w-

[Hard]

1. 00:27:713 - 01:55:304 - 03:36:910 - 05:00:997 - Kalo pake S:C1 green line di sana kurang pas kak, kalo diganti sama Soft Default sample set bgmn kak? Soalnya suara soft-hitnormal nya ga masuk kan belum ada suara drum ataupun bass di sana
2. 00:38:224 (3) - Kalo diflip ctrl+h, ctrl+j terus move ke x:188 y:76 bgmn kak? something like http://puu.sh/jeB3N/a27cdd84f9.jpg flow yang skrg agak dipaksain soalnya < Udah diubah sih flownya .-.
3. 00:41:727 (3) - Kalo dipendekin slidernya jadi 1/2 terus ritmenya jadi kaya gini bgmn kak http://puu.sh/jeBbU/0b04199dff.jpg? Aku ngedenger suara transisinya kurang nyaman soalnya
4. 00:55:523 (4,5) - Diusahain ga punya jump lebih dari 2.0 atau 2.3 kak, soalnya agak lebay berasa ga sesuai sama lagunya yang pelan < Select-annya agak ngaco ya .-. tapi kayaknya udah ke fix deh.
5. 00:55:742 (5) - Kalo dipendekin slidernya jadi 1/2 terus ritmenya jadi kaya gini bgmn kak http://puu.sh/jeBps/fb5bcf4811.jpg? < Bagian itu aku ngikutin suara "nguung" nya sih xD
6. 00:59:684 (3) - Kalo dijadiin curve terus ctrl+g bgmn kak http://puu.sh/jeBtO/6afcbebca8.jpg? kayanya jumpnya agak maksa bgt < Udah di ctrl+g sih, tpi belom dijadiin curve, fix lah -w-
7. 01:02:311 (2,3) - Those jump too far imo, coba kalo mau jump diusahain ga lebih dari 2.0 atau 2.3 kak, soalnya itu juga udah lumayan jauh jumpnya buat lagu kaya gini < Itu ngebentuk form bintang sih .-. jadi kayaknya nggak masalah deh, itu cuma 1.9 kok, gak sampe 2.0 -w-
8. 01:11:070 (2) - Kalo ctrl+j terus rotate -5drajat terus pindah ke x:416 y:140 bgmn kak? http://puu.sh/jeBJO/17caaac0b8.jpg < Fix the other way. Buat ngurangin jumpnya
9. 01:33:844 (2,3) - Jump too far
10. 01:38:224 (5) - Rotate 10drajat terus ke x:16 y:160? < Keliatan aneh .-.
11. 01:41:946 (5,1,2,3,1) - Jump too far imo < Udah di fix xD nggak ada jump disitu sekarang -w-
12. 02:09:319 (5,6) - Kalo ritmenya jadi kay gini http://puu.sh/jeD2U/63a90f9839.jpg bgmn kak? < select-annya ngaco .-.
13. 02:16:326 (3,4) - 02:30:341 (4,5) - Kalo ritmenya jadi kaya gini kak http://puu.sh/jeD4O/2b3790a0e2.jpg? < Nggak ada suara di blue tick di dua tempat itu tho .-.
14. 02:19:392 (2,3) - Jump too far <Fix fix~
15. 02:32:749 (5,1,2,3,1) - Jump too far, apalagi yang ini 02:33:625 (2,3) -
16. 02:39:976 (1,2) - 02:53:771 (5,1) - Jump too far
17. 04:09:319 (1,2) - 04:09:976 (2,3) - 04:13:698 (3,4,1) - Jump too far
    
    Coba dikurangin kak jumpnya deh, aku ga sebutin semuanya. Karena berhubung ini cuma Hard, jump jauh kaya gitu jadi terlalu susah apalagi lagunya slow ga cepet cepet bgt, coba dipikirin ulang deh < Kebanyakan jump udah dikurangin kok -w-

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Overall udah bagus kak cuma masalah jumpnya itu loh yang di hard ;( sebisa mungkin sih dikurangin
Good luck semoga membantu~

Ipas wrote:

Kenapa saya balik? lol Biarkan saya beri bubble //slapped < Ciye yang udah mau jadi BN jadinya rajin -w-
I love this song very much, I want to mod Normal now
No kudos~ < Kepencet xD

[Normal]

1. 00:53:333 - I feel like this break is really useless here, and made some awkward feelings while played . They're very worth to be mapped, so please consider this out (There's 3 places that have this break) < I add break there because I think if I only put the break here 04:47:862 it would be too far for Normal... Kinda forced I know... But since it's instrumental and no vocal, I think it's good enough tho...
2. 00:58:370 (2,3) - The transition between them looks rigid . Maybe, curve this slider 00:58:370 (2) - so it'll makes something smooth to 00:59:027 (3) - imo < .-. the selection got messed up... I think it's because I change the mp3 and timing... but if you are talking about these sliders 00:58:154 (2,3) - I think it's good enough tho.
3. 01:27:275 (5,1) - The contradicted flow direction between them might be a bit hard to read for easiest diff this in this mapset, because 01:28:151 (1) - appears at the different way with the previous . You could make a nice transition between them 01:27:275 (5,1) - to simply fix this problem, but they may be really hard . Simply, how about make this slider curved like this? Make it parallel with previous slider might be work for better transition a bit < .-. the selection got messed up again .-. I assume you are talking about this slider tho 01:27:935 (1) - kinda agree...., fixed (?)
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 02:08:005 (2) - Nazi, blanket < Lol
5. 03:22:457 (5,6) - The pattern isn't work perfectly here . At the previous similar rhythm 01:41:070 (5,6) - , It fits the way they are . But, the same pattern isn't show here, and make it looks bad . Better to make it constant with the previous, because it works really well at this rhythm < Messed up selection .-. I'm confused @-@ Changed something tho, dunno if that actually what you mean xD
6. 04:47:859 (1) - Very really nazi here . How about make it fully covered up with that envelope on Gumi's hand? < Lol, which one is that again xD I should have applied the mods first before changing the mp3 xD

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Good Luck!

inspectorscout wrote:

I will mod the hard
I hope I can find anything since this has been modded quite a few times.
I have no clue about any more tags, I think these are kinda enough, and I suck at hitsounds so I won't be able to mod those either (but I am trying to learn some more stuff)

so, here we go

Hard

00:46:983 (4) - curve for more flow < I want to make it parallel with (1) tho .-.

01:06:472 (3) - place it a little bit off the previous note so the player knows that it is an antijump for sure < Stacked on purpose tho, furthermore, there's no longer jump to (4)

01:39:976 (4,1) - I think this overlap can be made better or be removed, since now it looks just unfinished < Not really sure what you mean .-. maybe I fixed it after "remapped" it

02:22:238 (5) - I suggest placing this note a bit higher/more to the right so the pattern flows into the slider < Changed because "remapped" .-.

02:51:581 (4) - this one feels out of place, I think it should be either a lot higher or a lot more to the left, or stack it, since it would also feel a lot better ^

02:53:114 (4) - curve please, unless you want symmetry with the previous slider, if that is the case, I'm fine with this < Nah, not really "symmetry" I just want kinda like increasing jump.

02:55:304 (4) - higher anchor point more to the right < Changed I think .-.

03:31:654 (3) - curve or lower anchor point more to the left < Kinda want to make it "parallel" with (1)

03:36:910 (1) - maybe lower sv even more for a more dramatic effect < I'm pretty sure I did .-.

03:51:143 (4) - more to the left < Changed (?)

04:46:326 (2) - lower please ^

Apart from some minor flow and random note placement, this map is really good, and if you get 4-5 more mods I think you are ready to call a BN

Reditum wrote:

Real picture of me at graduation follow me on instagram < Cool photo bruh.

Hard:
00:27:497 (1) - I feel this would work a little better as to notes. Maybe even, dare I say, anti-jumps? Especially since you have previously established a spacing pattern, it's kind of awkward having to wait before the next slider. < The ranked version did that tho, so I think it's fine -w- the sound at that part is slow tho; it's not that hard to read right?
00:38:008 (3) - technically not a perfect stack on the end of (1) so fix that before someone that cares about it more tells you to fix it < Lol'd
00:54:650 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this is frighteningly creative im actually kind of shocked it's like I had no idea this would happen but like wow good job < Wow, is this a sarcasm? xD
01:22:679 (1,2,3) - The spacing change is so slight that I didn't realize this was faster. Overlaps are okay for things like this, don't be scared < They are overlapped a bit now :3
01:48:957 (1) - ehhhh. Just do an S slider or something < -,-
01:51:146 (2) - a little bit weird since the rest of the map is so calm < I ctrl+g'd it.

Normal:
It's cool and I like it but certain BNs may feel that it's too hard for the lowest diff. It may be good to get more opinions about this. < It's Normal tho; not Easy. And I think it's not that hard for Normal :3 There are a lot of harder Normals -w-

I like it a lot. Would bubble if I was in the BN. Spread looks a little big on paper but tbh I think it's fine. But I'm not very good at analyzing spread tho xP

Kuki wrote:

[Normal]
04:44:139 (1) - Copy 04:43:263 (6). < Nope, that was on purpose, I want to blanket (6) body with (1)


[Hard]
00:32:752 (3,5) - Even out spacing here to fix triangle. < Tried
00:57:935 (4) - Even out spacing. ^
01:05:161 (1,4) - Fix stack/overlap. ^
02:00:343 (4,5,1) - Not very nice flow here. Remap and focus more on flow for these notes. < Not really remapping but I think it's better now
03:46:110 (5,2) - Fix stack. < Fix

Hiyori wrote:

Hello there from my Queue! Don't forget to vote on my poll. Thank you!

< Done voting :3

Normal:

1. 01:11:073 (2,3) - i think this fits with the vocals try < Tried to follow drum tho,,, but I think it's fine for some variation -w-
2. 01:14:577 (2,3) - same here ^^ ^
3. 01:34:942 (1) - curve < Seems good without a curve tho
4. 03:26:402 (6) - unify DS < ? what is unify? .-.
5. 05:16:767 (3) - instead of a 1/2 slider why not try this instead I think its more fitting < Following drum
6. 05:17:424 (4) - curve < want to make it parallel with (3)

Hard:

1. 00:37:132 (1,2) - blanket < On purpose, for nicer flow to the next note
2. 01:03:847 (2,3,4,5) - follow DS < Wanted to make star jump tho .-.
3. 01:23:336 (3) - ^^ < As long as they are overlapping I think it's fine
4. 02:25:526 (5,4) - u could stack this < Nah, I don't feel like doing so... it's minor tho
5. 02:24:869 (3,5) - fix overlap < I don't understand your selection but I'm assuming you mean (1)'s tail and (3)'s head... fix
6. 02:43:263 (1) - Ctrl + G < Fine
7. 02:45:015 (1,5) - stack this to make it clean < It won't be visible in the gameplay
8. 03:41:073 (1) - curve < Nah, wanna make it parallel
9. 03:59:906 (4,5) - remove this and replace with a 1/2 slider instead < Don't want it for no reason...
10. 04:18:738 (3) - make a nicer C < It's supposed to be round, not C
11. 04:35:380 (1,2,3,4) - better if you square this < It form a nice triangle pattern imo

Lovely song Goodluck!

• Fine~

1. 00:56:402 I suggest you to use S:C1 because the sound drum-slidertick is weird
2. 01:37:570 (4) - forget drum-clap at return
3. 02:38:008 same as above
4. 03:36:694 reduce sound to 25% like others?
5. 04:46:767 (6) - remove clap head?
6. 05:00:781 reduce sound to 25% like others?
7. 05:17:424 (4) - here is too boring as in kiai time, try this?
   SPOILER

   

1. 00:44:796 (2) - forget clap
2. 00:52:898 (1) - drum-clap head
3. 00:59:468 (3) - forget drum-sampleset
4. 01:09:979 (3) - use drum-whistle like others?
5. 02:26:840 (4) - move to x:272 y:148
6. 03:50:271 (2) - stack to (4)
7. 03:50:708 (3) - remove clap
8. 04:05:599 (1) - suggest to move further away from previous note
9. 04:29:030 (3) - move to x:132 y:276
10. 04:31:438 (4) - remove drum clap tail
11. 05:00:781 reduce sound to 25% like others?
12. 05:04:723 (4) - remove drum-clap tail

Hiyori wrote:

Make it the same DS.

Mikkuri wrote:

[General]

• Fine~

[Normal]

1. 00:56:402 I suggest you to use S:C1 because the sound drum-slidertick is weird < Too lazy (lol xD) I changed the drum slidertick hitsound instead so it sounds the same as soft slider tick. It work that way too right? .-.
2. 01:37:570 (4) - forget drum-clap at return
3. 02:38:008 same as above < same as the first? I think I did it...
4. 03:36:694 reduce sound to 25% like others? < I only use 25% for the very first one tho .-. the sound there is not as silent as the first one.
5. 04:46:767 (6) - remove clap head?
6. 05:00:781 reduce sound to 25% like others? ^
7. 05:17:424 (4) - here is too boring as in kiai time, try this? < I used that kind of rhythm a lot... but I think it's kinda good to increase the difficulty :3
   SPOILER

   

[Hard]

1. 00:44:796 (2) - forget clap
2. 00:52:898 (1) - drum-clap head
3. 00:59:468 (3) - forget drum-sampleset
4. 01:09:979 (3) - use drum-whistle like others? < The sound there is more "clappy" than the others so I used clap there.
5. 02:26:840 (4) - move to x:272 y:148
6. 03:50:271 (2) - stack to (4)
7. 03:50:708 (3) - remove clap
8. 04:05:599 (1) - suggest to move further away from previous note < Ended up moved it kinda too far :/
9. 04:29:030 (3) - move to x:132 y:276
10. 04:31:438 (4) - remove drum clap tail
11. 05:00:781 reduce sound to 25% like others? < I changed everything except the first one to 30%
12. 05:04:723 (4) - remove drum-clap tail

noice mapset and song!!
good luck

buhei wrote:

from my queue

Normal

1. 00:41:292 (5) - why x0.9 here? pay more attention to your distance snapping < you don't have to be very nazi about DS, as long as there's aren't any problem at AiMod, your DS is considered consistent. Furthermore, it's very hard to keep the very same DS since the notes are snapping at the grid. Same below.
2. 00:51:146 (4) - ^
3. 02:08:227 (3) - ^
4. 02:46:767 (3) - ^
5. 03:55:088 (1) - ^
6. 04:46:767 (6) - ^
7. 00:52:679 - missed vocal. use a reversed short slider at 00:52:460 - instead. < I don't really want to end a slider at big white tick... And I don't fully follow vocal as well...
8. 02:29:687 - add clap to slidertick < o-o how do you do that? o-o you mean use clap sound for slider tick? That's pretty hard...
9. 03:02:095 - missed note. change 03:01:438 (5) - into a slider and a note like 03:02:533 (1,2) - < It's alright, it just for some creation, I have been following the whistle there the whole time, it's alright to ignore it once in a while.

Hard

1. 01:37:132 (3,4,5) - the shape is not a equilateral triangle,please use ctrl+c and ctrl+v and rotate 120 < I did that, and that the result.
2. 01:44:796 (4) - put it on the head of 01:44:139 (2) - will be better < Put it on (5)'s head instead.
3. 01:48:957 (1) - the shape is annoying. just use a straight slider or a three-point slider plz < all sliders are beautiful
4. 02:09:103 (5,6) - missed drum at 02:09:322 - . just make it like 00:41:511 (3,4) - < You don't have to map all the sound all the time, and I think it fit the vocal nicely.
5. 02:27:497 (1) - the shape is not good. move the red point a bit left < Tried to blanket better...
6. 03:32:752 - missed drum here. so break 03:32:314 (1) - into two sliders, like 04:15:672 (4,1) - ^
7. 04:08:555 - missed note. just add a note or make it a three-note short stream ^ and the vocal sound there is very faint
8. 04:18:738 (3,4) - prefer to make it like 03:43:701 (4,5) - < It's the same rhythm, just different variation of shape, it'll be boring to use the same rhythm all the time. Furthermore, the slider (3) fit the increasing sound well.
9. 04:46:767 (4,5) - ^. or just remove the stack plz < same reason to keep the rhythm ^ and I stack it so it don't overlap with slider (3)

good luck

Sukii-chan wrote:

It's time for th4at 0n3 m0d.

Normal

00:28:373 (1) x:252 y:181 blanket
00:35:380 (1) x:356 y:138 blanket
00:38:884 (1) x:121 y:342 blanket
Instead of having a circle at 00:52:898 (1) it might be better to have a spinner at 00:52:679 and have it end at 00:53:774 < I don't really like that :/ I think it would ignore the big sound here 00:52:898 I rather to keep the big sound emphasized.
00:59:906 (1) x:20 y:222 blanket
01:01:219 x:367 y:234 blanket
01:13:920 (1) x:379 y:349 blanket
Might wanna add a circle at 01:52:241 since it seems a bit empty without it. Considering that the spinner is following the vocals. < Feels weird imo :/ and the spinner not really following vocal
02:03:847 (3) x:386 y:104 blanket
02:26:621 (6) x:141 y:121 blanket
You might want to move 03:12:168 (6) to 03:12:387 since it follows the background music better than the vocals. < The current following background music nicely enough imo, and yes, it's not supposed to be following vocal
03:31:438 (2) x:320 y:236 blanket < it's already there .-.
Might wanna add a circle at 03:33:847 for the same reason as the other one before the spinner. ^
Instead of a circle at 04:16:110 (1) you might want to have a spinner after 04:15:672 (6) on the next red tick. To follow the vocals. ^ same reason as above
04:30:125 (1) x:332 y:170 blanket
05:01:567 (1) x:319 y:238 blanket
05:00:781 (1) x:386 y:138 blanket
05:13:920 (4) x:190 y:234 blanket

Hard

00:36:256 (3) x:259 y:110 blanket
00:36:694 (4) x:238 y:9 blanket
00:38:884 (1) x:257 y:104 blanket
00:40:416 (5) x:398 y:232 Move to be blanketed < I'd rather keep the triangle, changed (4)'s shape a bit
01:57:497 (4) x:168 y:225 Move to be blanketed < I want to stack it with (1)'s tail :/
03:38:884 (4) x:253 y:11 blanket < muh, kinda ruin the blanket for (1) >.<

I like a lot of the patterns that you had in both difficulties. It's made pretty well, and I'd like to see this get ranked.

1. 00:35:380 - Saya pikir finish di sini ga diperluin karena ga ada bunyi yang cocok dengannya di sini. IMO sih jangan terlalu dipaksain bikin pola yang konsisten kalau dari musik aja ga mendukung. (Berlaku buat 00:42:387 (1), dan semua tempat lain yang kasusnya mirip.)
2. 00:42:387 (1,2,3) - Hmm, apa flow di sini nggak terasa aneh? Dari lurus tiba-tiba turun tajam ke bawah gitu, dan kesannya juga kurang rapi kalau ngelihat 00:41:511 (6)...
3. 01:05:161 (5) - Coba begini deh; lebih ngikutin curve dari objek yang ada di sini, dan lebih nyaman dimainin.
4. 01:41:074 (6) - Dibikin seperti ini? Again, sama dengan di atas: Lebih nyaman diikuti karena flow-nya pas dari lengkungan 01:40:198 (4,5).
5. 02:38:665 (2) - Coba pindahin node pertama dari awal slider ke (180,259) biar cekungan di sini lebih ngikutin lengkungan 02:39:760 (4)?
6. 03:11:292 (4,5) - Uhm, spacing di sini dikit kekecilan.
7. 04:22:460 (5,1) - ^
8. 04:30:125 (1,2) - Ah iya, yang di sini spacing-nya dikit kelebaran.
9. 04:46:767 (6,7) - Dan yang ini kekecilan (lagi)...

1. 02:19:176 (2,3,4) - Flow di sini kelihatan ga jelas banget mau dibawa ke mana... Saat dimainin rasanya nggak nyaman, karena peletakan objek yang kesannya asal taruh aja. Mungkin dibikin seperti ini?
2. 02:45:672 (2,3,4) - Apa spacing di sini gak dikit kegedean?
3. 03:06:037 (1,2) - Dan di sini kembali lagi ga konsisten (kekecilan)...
4. 03:25:964 (2,3) - Oh iya di sini juga dikit nggak konsisten ._. (Tolong hal-hal kecil seperti konsistensi spacing juga diperhatikan di diff mana pun yah; ini untuk menjaga kerapian design dari map.)
5. 04:02:533 (2,3,4) - Ini kurang nyaman dimainkan karena pergerakan di sini harus terkesan lurus dan tajam belokannya, dan yang seperti itu kalau dimainkan biasa kerasa aneh. Kalau mau ya diusahakan agar lebih... nggak kaku aja gerakannya di sini.
6. 04:33:409 - Ini nggak di-map aja? Menurut saya jauh lebih pas 04:33:190 - 04:33:409 menjadi triplet karena ada bunyi instrumen yang terus naik di sana, nggak seperti 04:05:161 (4) misalnya.
7. 05:01:657 (1,2,3) - Cuma mau bilang spacing di sini terkesan... nggak konsisten karena sebelah kiri dikit kegedean, sebelah kanan dikit kekecilan.
8. 05:22:241 (5,1) - Ada alasan kenapa spacing-nya harus sekecil ini di sini? Rasanya aneh aja kalau dibandingin jarak waktu antara keduanya.

UchiganeNiigata wrote:

Late M4M from my queue
Sorry for the late mod! < And sorry for late reply x.x

[Normal]

1. For the claps you might want to change the sampleset to normal < I prefer the soft tho... the normal sampleset seems too... dominating (?)
2. (Suggestion) have the NCs be at the large white ticks < I NC every two big white tick on Normal so the combo wouldn't be too short. (If I NC every big white tick, I think the longest combo would be 3 xD)
3. Since you didn't want blanket mods, I will just say check them again and use the approach circle as a guide, there are some that are off < Honestly, I'm lazy xD
4. 05:02:314 - Missing note? < Hmm, pretty hard to add a note there due to the current position :/
5. 05:29:687 - Pretty sure you can map beyond this point to 05:45:453 (Personal opinion, if you do map the part, do the same for the Hard) < Nah, I make the first piano intro so I want to make it extro. I think it would be too long for two diffs if I map beyond that point as well xD

[Hard]

1. 01:25:745 (4) - Move this closer to 01:26:183 (1) so that they touch (for consistancy, the rest of the map has 1/4's tailing each other) < Hope it looked good x-x
2. 01:50:708 (1,2) - Might not want to stack these just for consistancy < Fix

Not much to mod here, everything looks good.

Hinsvar wrote:

ok

>Normal

1. 00:35:380 - Saya pikir finish di sini ga diperluin karena ga ada bunyi yang cocok dengannya di sini. IMO sih jangan terlalu dipaksain bikin pola yang konsisten kalau dari musik aja ga mendukung. (Berlaku buat 00:42:387 (1), dan semua tempat lain yang kasusnya mirip.) < Fixed, gonna fix the Hard too x-x diubah ke clap drum sampleset kayak pola lainnya.
2. 00:42:387 (1,2,3) - Hmm, apa flow di sini nggak terasa aneh? Dari lurus tiba-tiba turun tajam ke bawah gitu, dan kesannya juga kurang rapi kalau ngelihat 00:41:511 (6)... < Saya justru kurang setujunya flow dari (1) ke (2) x-x abis (6) ke kiri, dari (1) ke (2) tiba - tiba ke kiri... bagus sih kalo (1) sama (2) nya di stack tapi saya mau ngehindari itu buat Normal.... enaknya gimana ya .-.
3. 01:05:161 (5) - Coba begini deh; lebih ngikutin curve dari objek yang ada di sini, dan lebih nyaman dimainin. < Hmm, setuju sih fix lah
4. 01:41:074 (6) - Dibikin seperti ini? Again, sama dengan di atas: Lebih nyaman diikuti karena flow-nya pas dari lengkungan 01:40:198 (4,5). < Okay... (damn DS-ing x-x)
5. 02:38:665 (2) - Coba pindahin node pertama dari awal slider ke (180,259) biar cekungan di sini lebih ngikutin lengkungan 02:39:760 (4)? < Ok
6. 03:11:292 (4,5) - Uhm, spacing di sini dikit kekecilan. < Fix
7. 04:22:460 (5,1) - ^ ^
8. 04:30:125 (1,2) - Ah iya, yang di sini spacing-nya dikit kelebaran. < Fix fix
9. 04:46:767 (6,7) - Dan yang ini kekecilan (lagi)... < Fix fix, sebenernya nge pasin ginian agak susah soalnya notenya nge-snap ke grid >.<

>Hard

1. 02:19:176 (2,3,4) - Flow di sini kelihatan ga jelas banget mau dibawa ke mana... Saat dimainin rasanya nggak nyaman, karena peletakan objek yang kesannya asal taruh aja. Mungkin dibikin seperti ini? < Emang agak sengaja ditaro random sih disitu xD but fixed, changed the other way, spacingnya dikurangin dikit :3
2. 02:45:672 (2,3,4) - Apa spacing di sini gak dikit kegedean? < Keliatannya disitu udah coba di DS :/
3. 03:06:037 (1,2) - Dan di sini kembali lagi ga konsisten (kekecilan)...< tehee xD mau di pas-in sama tailnya (5) soalnya xD
4. 03:25:964 (2,3) - Oh iya di sini juga dikit nggak konsisten ._. (Tolong hal-hal kecil seperti konsistensi spacing juga diperhatikan di diff mana pun yah; ini untuk menjaga kerapian design dari map.) < Okelah diusahakan >.<
5. 04:02:533 (2,3,4) - Ini kurang nyaman dimainkan karena pergerakan di sini harus terkesan lurus dan tajam belokannya, dan yang seperti itu kalau dimainkan biasa kerasa aneh. Kalau mau ya diusahakan agar lebih... nggak kaku aja gerakannya di sini. < Okay, I give up with the repeating pattern >.< http://puu.sh/kl1Dd/606b2fe09c.jpg
6. 04:33:409 - Ini nggak di-map aja? Menurut saya jauh lebih pas 04:33:190 - 04:33:409 menjadi triplet karena ada bunyi instrumen yang terus naik di sana, nggak seperti 04:05:161 (4) misalnya. < Hmm... triplet masih terkesan agak aneh buat saya :/
7. 05:01:657 (1,2,3) - Cuma mau bilang spacing di sini terkesan... nggak konsisten karena sebelah kiri dikit kegedean, sebelah kanan dikit kekecilan. < Ends up DS-ing almost everything >.<
8. 05:22:241 (5,1) - Ada alasan kenapa spacing-nya harus sekecil ini di sini? Rasanya aneh aja kalau dibandingin jarak waktu antara keduanya.< Karena saya bingung harus taro dimana xD fix lah

Maaf telat; banyak banget yang harus dikerjain ._. < wubwub, no prob, saya udah biasa menunggu

Ini mungkin akan saya bubble, tapi urus dulu semua mod yang ada di sini ya < Okelah ^^

Meyrink wrote:

Hi ! from my queue lol
Ay sorry for m4m delay xd

General

1. i think the soft-hitfinish you used which is the default finish is so loud for this song ! would be better with default soft finish imo < Honestly, I don't like the default soft-hitfinish >.<, I like the more "bassy" feeling the custom one give :3
2. would be nice if you use the proper bg size which is 1366x768 ! try this one if you like ! http://puu.sh/knAid/5336fb3cbf.jpg < Better size but I prefer the current tho :/ that one seems darker .-.

Normal

1. 00:52:898 - why this part not mapped ? o^o ! it doesnt look normal ! maybe map it ! or at least put spinner ? < God, I'm confused @-@ I think I should add some short break for Normal since the break here 04:47:643 would be too far and I can't think of any other place to add break... So... Should I add spinner? I need to consult more modders x-x
2. 01:19:176 (4) - umm i think better to shorten this to 1/1 slider and then add circle at end ! like http://puu.sh/knAwj/7225322574.jpg < Hmm, kinda agree since there's a vocal there. It's good to increase difficulty too fixed~
3. 01:28:592 (2) - imo this should be a slider instead of circle ! the vocals feels pretty good there and slider is better to express them in map ! just like you did to next rythm ! do it like this ! http://puu.sh/knAzG/6509b7a001.jpg < Pretty hard to add a slider looking at the current position of the next notes x-x and I think a circle is not that bad, it's good to make some variation :3 keep for now.
4. 01:42:606 (2,4) - ay overlap xd < It's not really visible with "hit animation" on tho... :v
5. 02:34:504 (1) - yeah ! the finish sound is really loud xD ! use soft finish better < I reduced the volume
6. 04:45:015 (2,3,4,5) - make it perfect ? it's slightly off < Fix

Hard

1. 00:27:497 (1,1) - isnt this so close ? it's a 1/1 gap < Yeah, it's on purpose, Hard players should be able to read those.
2. 00:42:387 (1) - nice slider ! but isnt simple curved slider would be better ? just nazi thing < Hmm I think I made it like that since it blanketed something before and the one that it blanketed is gone now o-o fixed
3. 02:02:533 (5) - i think it's better to stack this slider under 02:01:876 (2) - for better flow < Okay
4. 02:29:687 (2,3) - CTRL + G will give much better flow imo < Well, I was avoiding jumps... but I think one small jumps won't affect the whole diff...
5. 04:29:687 (5,1) - ay blanket =w= < ayy -w-

nice song and map ! gl for rank

MikasaSerket wrote:

I am here to mod your map upon request~

Normal

00:49:395 - Instead of that angular positioning you have on your hit circles and sliders, I would suggest to making it something like this
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3774356 or like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3774355 And then once you do that, turn < ? You mean here 00:50:271 ? Well I was avoiding stacking at Normal so I did your second suggestion -w-
00:52:022 (5,6,1) - In to something like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3774361 Or how ever you want it. I personally think that it looks better that way, and you would be able to use more of the grid space < Changed it the other way ~
01:20:271 (6,7,8) - These feel too close to 01:18:519 (3,4) - I would suggest something similar to this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3774371 That way, you use more grid space and it would be more fun to play < Would be hard to DS that way x-x

Hard

00:54:650 (1,2,3,4) - I feel as if these jumps are too close to each other. The pattern of the jumps also seem unusual, I understand that it is a hard difficulty but try to space them out more or make a different jump so that it is easier for the player to read. < I like it the way it is :/ it's like increasing jumps and I don't want to make too much jump for Hard x-x
Nothing much wrong with it. Although I do feel as if you are able to map the ending. But that is just my opinion. You do not have to do it

Overall I really like your map. Hopefully I contributed to the process of your beatmap ^_^

bestza55567 wrote:

Overall
- Your notes are 1/2 beats earlier than the song. < What? o-o
Notice
- move all the notes and see my mod
Hard

SPOILER

01:18:519 (4,5) - Fix Blanket < uhh .-. what do you want me to blanket it with?
03:58:811 (1,3) - Make 3 more parallel to 1 > ? I don't get it... .-.
02:32:095 (3) - Parallel? > I'm pretty sure that's a note...
03:04:285 (4,1) - Why suddenly jump here? IMO jump here didn't make any sense.
03:22:898 (3) - Blanket to 1 ?
04:04:942 (3) - Stack to 04:03:409 (4) - ?

Normal

SPOILER

01:14:796 (2) - 1/1 please
01:34:285 (6) - move to 01:34:504 - would make more sense
01:39:322 (2) - move to 01:39:541 - would make more sense
02:38:884 (2,4) - Fix Blanket
03:05:599 (5) - Copy and paste 03:04:504 (4) - and place at 03:05:380 -
Suggestions : Some 1/2 in this map is hard to read (You can know it if play with DT. Try my suggestions)

DahplA wrote:

M4M. I remember modding this map back a while ago. Let's try another. < Lol, I don't even remember xD

Hard

1. 00:31:000 (3) - The sort of jump here does feel random, considering there's no strong beat on this note. Maybe something like this could work out better. < Hmm I don't really like the shape >.< furthermore it's just a small jump, so I think it should be alright...
2. 00:33:190 (5) - Very strong beat on the downbeat. I don't think it should be ignored with the sliderend. I suggest changing it to either of these two suggestions: 1 or 2. < Fixed to the first one.
3. 01:02:533 (3) - Quite a lot of spacing for a very quiet sound here, don't you think? I suggest reworking this pattern here to either emphasise a beat on 01:02:971 or to keep constant spacing here. Remember that this is a calm part, so you don't want to overwork it. < Supporting the increasing sound with a slider that comes from the bottom looks cool and the sound should be bigger at the 3th beat than the 4th beat.
4. 03:04:285 (1,2,3) - Just a bit of a minor inconsistency here. Similar to 03:32:314 (1) - , you should emphasise the instrument here, as it is quite a unique part on its own. < Doesn't matter for me, it still support the drum nicely
5. 03:38:446 (3) - Slightly off-stacked. Double check this. < Fix

Normal

1. 01:40:854 (5,6) - Flow is a bit choppy here, since it looks like it goes off 4 to the right, but then shifts upwards. I'd suggest positioning 6 more to the right. < Fix

Still great.

Streliteela wrote:

Hi~Mod from my queue~:3
Very nice map and nice song~~:3
So just write some very tiny personal suggestions~

[Hard]

1. 00:32:314 (2) - Move this slider to x450|y80 to make 00:31:000 (3,2) - a blanket. That looks better imo~:3 < Hmm... I don't really want to do that :/ I want to make it somehow "balanced" with (1)
2. 00:48:300 (3,4,5,1) - Maybe you can make this pattern into a square like this: < tried
   
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3. 00:58:811 (2,3) - I think you'd better ‘exchange’ these two sliders. I mean, change 00:58:811 (2) - to a normal slider and 00:59:468 (3) - to a reverse slider is better. Because here's a long vocal from 00:59:249 - to 00:59:687 - , which is a better position to use a reverse slider. Also, it could increase the distance between 00:59:249 (3) - and 00:59:906 (1) - , which is also a nice way to emphasize the stress in 00:59:906 (1) - < I tried to avoid placing slider at red tick, but I think this one is kinda exception But I don't add jump to (1) because I ctrl+g-ed (3) since it would flow better from (2) that way http://puu.sh/kS4y7/dd736bff72.jpg
   
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4. 01:01:657 (1) - Move this slider to x280|y152. That could make a rhombic shape like this: < too lazy to make a nice flow afterwards xD I don't want the jump to be too far tho
   
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   And if you decide to change like that, you may need some little changing for the following objects as well~~
5. 01:16:548 (3,4,5,6) - Make this 4 notes into a smooth arc could be a good choice imo~like this: < Fixed (?)
   
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6. 01:36:256 (4) - Stack this slider tail to the head of 01:34:942 (1) - ~That looks neater imo. So you may change 01:35:599 (2,3,4) - like this: < It's look complicated and hard to read >.< and the stack don't really visible at playfield so I don't really think that's fatal
   
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7. 01:46:329 (3,4,1) - Flow is a bit strange here. You may rotate 01:46:329 (3) - by 15° (anti-clockwise, Selection Centre Origin); Then ctrl+g 01:47:205 (1) - for a better flow & better shape~:D < Uhh I think rotating (3) counter clockwise will make it even more pointy since the current one which kinda point to the right will support the flow from (2) better because it also going to the right. And I don't think ctrl+g (1) would work nicely either because take a look at the current flow http://puu.sh/kS4P5/725a05867d.jpg and the one with reversed (1) http://puu.sh/kS4Qd/f0a68a8225.jpg feel worse for me x-x
8. 01:59:468 (1,2,3,4) - ewww this pattern looks a little weird imo, why not change to a symmetric pattern? For example: < Okay, I move (4)'s reverse to the left a bit for a slightly better flow.
   
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9. 02:01:219 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - Also you could make this part neater by just a little change, like this: < Okay
   
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10. 02:19:176 (2) - Maybe ctrl+j this slider could be better? < Fix
    
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11. 02:25:526 (5,4) - Stack them maybe? That looks neater, so you may need to move 02:25:745 (1,2,3,4,5) - this whole part slightly < Too lazy to move, it's not visible at playfield so it wouldn't be a problem
12. 02:38:008 (1,2,3) - Flow is a bit strange here. Change like this? < Fix
    
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13. 02:51:146 (3,4,5) - Move this part slightly like this could get a better flow~ < It kinda on purpose, let the flow broken there xD
    
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14. 02:57:059 (5) - Move to x57|y219 for better shape? < Okay
15. 03:27:716 (2,3,5) - Blanket? < Sure
16. 03:45:453 (3,4,5,1) - Flow is strange. (I find you prefer using Blanket patterns everywhere XDD) Try something different maybe? < Changed it the other way, yeah, I like blankets, I prefer tidy placement and blanket make it looks tidy.
    
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17. 03:50:708 (3) - Move 03:50:708 (3) - to x70|y316 to make 03:50:708 (3,4,5) - a straight line < That's not really necessary imo, I prefer my current triangle pattern with (2)'s tail
18. 04:11:949 (3) - Stack this slider's tail to 04:10:198 (3) - < Must I? .-.
19. 04:19:614 (1) - Ctrl+g could make a better flow imo~ < Fix
20. 04:25:745 (4,5,1) - Also, flow is strange here。 Move 04:26:183 (5) - to x225|y248 < Okay, kinda make it that way.

Normal diff is fine imo, nothing to point out~:3

And what I really want to say is, you may try to use more kinds of patterns in your map in the future, not just only use blanket XD. Blanket is a good pattern but it is not a good pattern if you use it too many times, especially in Hard/Insane/Extra diff. < lol, I think it's because I was still very rigid when I made this map xD Then I thought that every note should have reason why they are there. But my current map is more free -w-

Anyway~This is still a nice map~Good job~
GL for rank~:D

Moeka wrote:

Love the song. good luck!