Suzuki Konomi - Absolute Soul

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Konei
Should be cool?

Poke me if you want a bubble.


Wait, just saw the Extra, better poke me if you need help with that.
Ciyus Miapah
i look at this map

where the hell byfar's extra?
pkk

Fort wrote:

where the hell byfar's extra?
byfar

pkk wrote:

Fort wrote:

where the hell byfar's extra?
where the hell irre's extra?
BeatofIke
Why am I even re-checking this? >.<
Modding soon. Stay Tuned.
Irreversible
gimme 30 mins it will be finished!!!

http://puu.sh/izKF5/af99f2a9f1.txt

[Absolute Duo]

00:02:147 (4,5) - What about increasing this spacing, so it gets a better effect with the background? These two should especially be emphasized due to the song.
00:02:626 (1) - Weird antijump, would place a bit further away to match the spacing.
00:03:743 (8) - It's something small, but will let your map look way more polished; 00:03:424 (6,7,8) - let those build a triangle? While you're at it, 00:03:105 (3) - try to blanket that one too. It's all about adjusting here.
00:05:498 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - I see what you try here, but it's executed rather poorly, your spacing ranges from 1.73 to 1.8, shouldn't they be all the same? Again, something minor but something you should take care about.
00:08:530 (4,5,6,7,1) - Again, looks randomly placed, try putting few more thoughts behind your maps, how about some triangles? They don't have to be the same spacing, you can go for progressive one instead.
00:12:201 (3) - Hm, it could somehow blanket 1 (moving closer, or anything like that), to look nicer.
00:20:977 (5,6,7,8) - You "overmapped" at many points, it surprises me much that I can't find a stream here.
00:19:222 (5,7) - Small overlap, looks sloppy, and I can find tons of them. It's not big of a deal, but fixing all this kind of stuff takes 5 minutes and lets the quality of your map improve like 100%.
00:21:775 (1) - If you dont wanna put a stream, make sure you increase the spacing here, as it's a beat to emphasize again.
00:23:371 (1) - Spacing in this part got quite low, how comes? It seems stronger to me than the one before. (especially from 00:23:371 (1) - to 00:25:924 (1) - , rest of the part is ok)
00:34:142 (2) - These 1/4 (in all parts) bother me a lot, as there is nothing really outstanding on these beats 00:34:222 - , which confuses me quite a lot. It is kind of justified to map it that way, but I would recommend otherwise (like, following the given stuff excessively).
00:43:637 (1) - Looks really sloppy, also it's almost impossible to blanket the next slider properly. Would go for a simple curve.
00:50:818 - Confusing, because you left out strong beats, also the antijump lets people think otherwise.
00:52:573 (1,2,3,4,1) - Star pattern? It's okay if you increase spacing from 4 to 1, but the red 1-4 already look a tad off.
01:16:669 (1,3) - cute
01:19:222 (1,3) - Uhm, that's somehow okay but you tried the same 01:20:498 (1,1) - , where it doesnt' work as the sliders are too long as they'd match the rhythm. Go for http://puu.sh/izLoz/9dd1856f02.jpg as well? Screen starting 01:20:498 - . Like that you can also use the same slider twice. It's also weird because the first long slider is in another part of the song, which should be distinguished completely with the 2nd wave.
01:25:285 (6) - Weird antijump, try rotating the first triangle by 60°, and scale them higher to get a funny pattern? http://puu.sh/izLsH/7ade214d12.jpg like that, just better.

Hm, I hope I was able to help your diff a bit. Again, it's all about cleaning up, rest is technically fine.
Asphyxia
Just a really quick check on Irre's Extra, was interested.

17:24 Asphyxia: 00:00:552 (3,2) - blanket off
17:24 Asphyxia: it's so close to being perfect
17:24 Asphyxia: so mentioned it anyway
17:24 Irreversible: XD
17:25 Irreversible: done
17:25 Asphyxia: 00:02:147 (4,5) - feels kinda weird that this isn't emphasized
17:25 Asphyxia: yet the more lower beats are more
17:26 Irreversible: hm
17:26 Irreversible: indeed
17:27 Asphyxia: 00:20:179 (4) - not a fan of the rhythm as the first part of the slider has nothing to do with the second
17:27 Asphyxia: vocal-wise
17:27 Asphyxia: but it's fine mostly
17:27 Irreversible: done
17:27 Asphyxia: well
17:27 Asphyxia: hmm
17:27 Asphyxia: it's kinda
17:27 Asphyxia: related
17:27 Asphyxia: but idk
17:27 Irreversible: oh
17:27 Irreversible: haha yeah i get that feel too
17:27 Asphyxia: 00:21:775 (1,2,3,4) - could prob silence OR try to silence some slider ends?
17:27 Irreversible: kinda related but kinda not
17:27 Asphyxia: try it
17:27 Asphyxia: the slider ends are somewhat
17:27 Asphyxia: SOMEWHAT
17:27 Asphyxia: noisy
17:28 Irreversible: oki doki
17:28 Irreversible: fixed
17:28 Irreversible: but the "somewhat related" one ill leave that
17:28 Asphyxia: 00:23:850 (5,7) - not a fan of how this looks, it could have more of a symmetrical look could be better
17:28 Asphyxia: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3292371
17:28 Irreversible: 00:23:530 (3) -
17:28 Irreversible: omg i need to silence all these motherfuckers
17:28 Asphyxia: as you can see there
17:29 Asphyxia: the 5 transitions kinda weirdly to 7
17:29 Asphyxia: not sure how you wanetd that
17:29 Irreversible: wheres the difference to mine?
17:29 Irreversible: o.o
17:29 Irreversible: ah yeah i wanted it like that actually because
17:29 Irreversible: uhm
17:29 Irreversible: its basically a 30° (not sure)
17:29 Asphyxia: I meant like
17:29 Asphyxia: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3292371
17:29 Asphyxia: symmetrical
17:29 Irreversible: rotate
17:29 Irreversible: and i use that often in my maps, imagine it as such.. wait
17:29 Asphyxia: like that
17:29 Asphyxia: but jusy better
17:29 Irreversible: iusnt that the same
17:29 Irreversible: o,o
17:29 Asphyxia: ?
17:30 Asphyxia: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3292371
17:30 Asphyxia: vs*
17:30 Asphyxia: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3292374
17:30 Irreversible: yknow like this http://puu.sh/izJMc/8d43edc30a.jpg
17:30 Irreversible: but just with circle
17:30 Irreversible: lets see ur screens
17:30 Irreversible: ah no, that was not the intention
17:30 Irreversible: the intention was this wavy movement
17:31 Asphyxia: 00:25:445 (4,3) - not symmetrical
17:31 Irreversible: because as you can hear,
17:31 Irreversible: the vocal first is high
17:31 Irreversible: high wave
17:31 Irreversible: second isn't
17:31 Irreversible: low wave
17:31 Asphyxia: 00:32:786 (2) - could have NC because the speed change ;DD
17:32 Irreversible: ok sure
17:32 Asphyxia: 00:34:062 (1,2) - the stack looks a bit off in editor
17:32 Irreversible: fixd
17:33 Asphyxia: 00:42:998 (4,5,6) - add more spacing plz, the sudden rhythm change will confuse players
17:33 Asphyxia: and this spacing would imply 1/2
17:33 Irreversible: done
17:33 Irreversible: that irked me too
17:34 Asphyxia: 00:51:296 (1,2) - stack off
17:35 Asphyxia: 00:52:254 (3) - the start and end could blanket the note just a taaaad better
17:35 Asphyxia: but not sure if thats possible
17:35 Asphyxia: 01:01:350 (3) - NC? feels weird because the following section doesn't feel like it'd belong to 01:00:711 (1) -
17:36 Irreversible: tried it
17:36 Irreversible: done
17:36 Asphyxia: 01:09:009 (5) - Why not NC here? it'd follow your patterning better, seeing you NC'd 01:07:733 (1) - 01:11:562 (1) -
17:36 Asphyxia: the strong beat is on the 6
17:36 Asphyxia: 5*
17:36 Asphyxia: so thats why the nc would make sense imo
17:37 Irreversible: omg
17:37 Irreversible: NC Queen striked again
17:37 Asphyxia: 01:13:956 (1,2) - would NC the 2 instead but your call
17:37 Asphyxia: 01:16:669 (1) - maybe raise the end point juuuust a grid or two
17:37 Asphyxia: so it blankets the slider
17:37 Asphyxia: like
17:37 Asphyxia: so little better
17:37 Asphyxia: not sure
17:38 Asphyxia: 01:17:307 (3,5,6) - this not being a straight line is triggering me
17:38 Asphyxia: 01:17:627 (5,1) - blanket didn't seem to be your intention but ehh.... the slider itself could look more blanketish
17:39 Irreversible: done all
17:39 Asphyxia: 01:18:424 (2,2,1) - the stacks are so off
17:40 Irreversible: fixed already
17:40 Irreversible: haha
17:40 Asphyxia: 01:21:775 (2) - NC according to 01:20:498 (1) - ?
17:40 Irreversible: oky
17:40 Asphyxia: that's all
17:40 Asphyxia: nice map
17:42 Irreversible: thx
BeatofIke
There's a huge spread between Insane and handsome's Insane. Huge difficulty increase imo. Jumps everywhere >.<
Even if this mapset were to be high quality, that (alone) might become an issue. Just saying o3o

Example if such case: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/65491
Irreversible
rank
pls
Momoka
How is this still not ranked? what are you doing
Setsurei
sorry for late M4M reply
[Absolute Duo]
00:19:222 (5,1) - stack head
00:34:062 (1,2) - change to 1/2 slider, since you skipped 00:34:381 - the drum here, so this drum 00:34:142 - doesn't need to be emphasized with 1/4 slider of yours
00:35:339 (3,4) - ^
00:36:615 (2,3) - ^
00:46:190 (1) - prefer to change to 2 hicircles, since the melodies of the piano is there
00:48:424 - add note
00:48:584 - ^
00:50:818 - ^
00:58:477 (1,2,3) - prefer to jump these rather than stacking like what you did here 00:59:913 (2,3) -
01:25:286 (6,7,8) - move these triangular a bit down, since 01:24:966 (4,6) - overlaps

good luck
Topic Starter
Owntrolf

Setsurei wrote:

sorry for late M4M reply
[Absolute Duo]
00:19:222 (5,1) - stack head
00:34:062 (1,2) - change to 1/2 slider, since you skipped 00:34:381 - the drum here, so this drum 00:34:142 - doesn't need to be emphasized with 1/4 slider of yours Done
00:35:339 (3,4) - ^ Done
00:36:615 (2,3) - ^ Done
00:46:190 (1) - prefer to change to 2 hicircles, since the melodies of the piano is there Done
00:48:424 - add note Done
00:48:584 - ^ Done
00:50:818 - ^ Done
00:58:477 (1,2,3) - prefer to jump these rather than stacking like what you did here 00:59:913 (2,3) - Done
01:25:286 (6,7,8) - move these triangular a bit down, since 01:24:966 (4,6) - overlaps [color=#08000]Done[/color]

good luck[/color]
Bearizm
131 kudosu
DahplA
M4M

Irreversible's Extra
  1. 00:05:977 (1) - I don't hear anything significant about this note which requires an NC. You should place in onto 00:05:179 (4) - where there is a finish.
  2. 00:09:169 (5) - NC to keep consistent with 00:04:062 (1) -
  3. 00:33:424 (1,1,2,3) - Sorry for only point out NC problems...but this should be one combo, as the vocals are in the same verse. You also did it with other combos like 00:34:701 (1,2,3,4) - so for consistency as well.
  4. 00:50:658 (1,2,3,4) - Just a suggestion (even though it looks like you won't move these notes due to aesthetics) but I believe gradually decreasing spacing would work better, as the piano here is going lower with each note.


Absolute Duo
  1. 00:12:201 (3) - I just don't believe this type of slider velocity here works. I mean, the sound literally "holds" out in a sense, so you want to players to hold a slider down in a spot to mimic this. Increasing the slider velocity would do the opposite here.
  2. 00:32:786 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - The flow of this stream can be improved. I'd go for a curved approach, as to continue the flow of 00:32:147 (1) -
  3. 00:34:860 (1) - Not sure if this part is right, as it uses 1.3x SV, while 00:34:062 (1) - uses a different. I think you forgot to add a green line here. Double check this. It also creates conflict with 00:35:179 (2) - as it is way too close and will most likely be misread for a 1/4 gap.
  4. 01:02:706 (1) - I recommend stopping this spinner at 01:03:584 instead, as the last part of that vocal line ends here as well. It makes sense to have it end at the same spots.


Insane+
  1. At the start, you seem to use much more circles than compared to Absolute Duo. Just thought I'd point that out. Try and condense that down by adding a few sliders.
  2. 00:16:190 (4) - and 00:17:626 (5) - are two strong vocals in which you haven't added much spacing on. I recommend spacing them out more. Interestingly enough, you seem to add the spacing before the strong notes, which is very strange.
  3. 00:33:424 Same with this part, the doubles are more dense than in Absolute Duo. You use a lot of circles here and almost few sliders to represent the doubles. I suggest going over this part and changing it.


Insane
  1. 00:31:828 (3,4) - This spacing will be really confusing to read, as players will think of it as 1/4 gap. I suggest remapping here.
  2. 01:02:626 (1) - It makes much more sense to have this as a circle rather than a slider. There is no note being held out here. The vocal just stops on that note, so it's logical.


theramdans' Hard
  1. 01:02:626 (1) - Read above in "Insane" (also it applies less, as the sliderend represents another vocal so it makes a bit more sense)


Normal
  1. 00:00:871 (2,5) - Due to low approach rate, you can see these two objects at the same time. Just move 5 upwards more, or better yet, make 5 face upwards so the flow doesn't go back onto itself.

The rest of it is fine. Good luck.
Topic Starter
Owntrolf

DahplA wrote:

M4M

Absolute Duo
  1. 00:12:201 (3) - I just don't believe this type of slider velocity here works. I mean, the sound literally "holds" out in a sense, so you want to players to hold a slider down in a spot to mimic this. Increasing the slider velocity would do the opposite here.
  2. 00:32:786 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - The flow of this stream can be improved. I'd go for a curved approach, as to continue the flow of 00:32:147 (1) - Curved streams just dont feel right to me in this map
  3. 00:34:860 (1) - Not sure if this part is right, as it uses 1.3x SV, while 00:34:062 (1) - uses a different. I think you forgot to add a green line here. Double check this. It also creates conflict with 00:35:179 (2) - as it is way too close and will most likely be misread for a 1/4 gap. Added a x1.15 inbetween
  4. 01:02:706 (1) - I recommend stopping this spinner at 01:03:584 instead, as the last part of that vocal line ends here as well. It makes sense to have it end at the same spots. The sound "ki" is stronger than the "mi"


Insane+
  1. At the start, you seem to use much more circles than compared to Absolute Duo. Just thought I'd point that out. Try and condense that down by adding a few sliders. Its actually handsome's map but they pulled out of the set and I asked them if I could keep the difficulty
  2. 00:16:190 (4) - and 00:17:626 (5) - are two strong vocals in which you haven't added much spacing on. I recommend spacing them out more. Interestingly enough, you seem to add the spacing before the strong notes, which is very strange.
  3. 00:33:424 Same with this part, the doubles are more dense than in Absolute Duo. You use a lot of circles here and almost few sliders to represent the doubles. I suggest going over this part and changing it.


Insane
  1. 00:31:828 (3,4) - This spacing will be really confusing to read, as players will think of it as 1/4 gap. I suggest remapping here.
  2. 01:02:626 (1) - It makes much more sense to have this as a circle rather than a slider. There is no note being held out here. The vocal just stops on that note, so it's logical. But the held out sound in the background


Normal
  1. 00:00:871 (2,5) - Due to low approach rate, you can see these two objects at the same time. Just move 5 upwards more, or better yet, make 5 face upwards so the flow doesn't go back onto itself. Its probably fine since its less than a second
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The rest of it is fine. Good luck.
Momochikun
hi

[Irre]
00:23:530 (3,4) - this stream is kind of forced when they're no prominent 1/4 sound on the music, same as 00:28:318 (1,2,3,4,5) -
00:30:711 (1) - 00:38:530 (1) - add finish ?
00:53:211 (1,2,1,2) - they're some snare drum which can be emphasized with claps, also this part 00:53:850 - is quite lack of hitsound if you used drum sampleset, imo
01:26:881 (1,2,3) - well, those spacing might be hard to recognize at the first play

[Absolute Duo]
00:00:552 (3,5) - hmm,, i could hear a cymbal on the music. how about soft finishes ? a little bit low volume
00:09:488 (3) - i think the flow would be more natural if this being stacked to (7)
00:33:264 (1) - hmm end the stream at the downbeat ?
00:42:998 (2,3) - they need finishes too to keep the consistency
00:47:467 (6) - add whistle at the end to cover the piano
00:51:775 (4) - how'bout ctrl g ?
01:19:860 (3) - this slider and hitsound doesn't fit the part imo, at least delete the finish

[Insane+]
00:07:573 (5) - missing clap , 00:51:615 (2,4) - ye
00:39:169 (4,5) - lol tbh i think this was spaced 1/4 due to the vocals xD
01:23:371 (2,1) - weird gapp, why dont make them 01:23:211 (1,2) - a single note ?

[Insane]
the SV gap is quite high though they're both insanes -_-
00:07:573 (5) - missing clap ?
00:16:988 (4) - stack this with (6) for proper transition ?
00:31:190 (2,3,4,5) - they might be missread as 1/4
Topic Starter
Owntrolf

Momochikun wrote:

hi

[Absolute Duo]
00:00:552 (3,5) - hmm,, i could hear a cymbal on the music. how about soft finishes ? a little bit low volume Done
00:09:488 (3) - i think the flow would be more natural if this being stacked to (7)Changed to slight off stack
00:33:264 (1) - hmm end the stream at the downbeat ? Lengthened stream
00:42:998 (2,3) - they need finishes too to keep the consistency Done
00:47:467 (6) - add whistle at the end to cover the piano Added whistles to 6,7,8,9
00:51:775 (4) - how'bout ctrl g ? I tried playing it and it doesnt feel right to me :\
01:19:860 (3) - this slider and hitsound doesn't fit the part imo, at least delete the finish Removed finishes from 01:19:222 (1,3) - and replaced with claps

[Insane+]
00:07:573 (5) - missing clap , 00:51:615 (2,4) - ye Reapplied hitsounds
00:39:169 (4,5) - lol tbh i think this was spaced 1/4 due to the vocals xD
01:23:371 (2,1) - weird gapp, why dont make them 01:23:211 (1,2) - a single note ?

[Insane]
the SV gap is quite high though they're both insanes -_- Cant do much about it after all the Insane+ is originally handsome's
00:07:573 (5) - missing clap ?Reapplied hitsounds
00:16:988 (4) - stack this with (6) for proper transition ? Changed to an off-stack
00:31:190 (2,3,4,5) - they might be missread as 1/4Fixed Included more spacing
Irreversible
Fixed almost all, thanks!

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292,320,70924,2,0,L|32:296,1,230.39999296875,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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164,192,71562,2,0,L|424:168,1,230.39999296875,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
472,72,72041,5,8,0:0:0:0:
512,272,72201,2,0,P|476:344|404:356,1,115.199996484375,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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340,308,72839,2,0,B|240:308|240:308|208:340|152:324,1,172.799994726563,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,288,73158,5,0,0:3:0:0:
256,56,73318,1,4,0:3:0:0:
432,356,73477,1,4,0:3:0:0:
12,192,73956,5,8,0:0:0:0:
104,288,74115,2,0,P|180:308|332:228,1,230.39999296875,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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372,332,74913,2,0,P|412:260|392:208,1,115.199996484375,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
488,56,75233,1,8,0:0:0:0:
312,128,75392,6,0,L|76:112,1,230.39999296875,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,16,75871,1,8,0:0:0:0:
400,200,76030,2,0,P|388:284|304:216,1,230.39999296875,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,92,76509,1,8,0:0:0:0:
480,288,76669,6,0,P|416:357|268:336,1,230.39999296875,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,256,77147,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,96,77307,1,2,0:0:0:0:
340,292,77467,1,0,0:0:0:0:
138,109,77627,1,0,0:0:0:0:
372,76,77786,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,340,77945,6,0,B|96:328|96:328|168:312,1,230.39999296875,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,204,78424,1,8,0:0:0:0:
196,51,78584,2,0,P|90:39|59:141,1,230.39999296875,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,204,79062,1,8,0:0:0:0:
452,141,79222,6,0,P|421:39|315:51,1,230.39999296875,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,204,79701,1,8,0:0:0:0:
396,256,79860,1,0,0:0:0:0:
172,216,80020,5,0,0:0:0:0:
256,352,80179,1,2,0:0:0:0:
52,260,80339,1,8,0:0:0:0:
204,68,80498,6,0,P|264:40|336:160,1,230.39999296875,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,192,80977,5,8,0:0:0:0:
12,256,81137,1,2,0:0:0:0:
176,292,81296,1,2,0:0:0:0:
0,156,81456,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,368,81615,1,8,0:0:0:0:
500,256,81775,6,0,P|524:184|424:68,1,230.39999296875,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,40,82254,1,8,0:0:0:0:
216,176,82413,1,6,0:0:0:0:
163,198,82492,1,0,0:0:0:0:
106,193,82572,1,0,0:0:0:0:
58,162,82652,1,0,0:0:0:0:
30,113,82732,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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400,248,83052,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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164,332,84647,5,2,0:0:0:0:
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92,372,85126,5,2,0:0:0:0:
33,215,85285,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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204,368,86562,5,0,3:0:0:0:
68,268,86722,5,0,3:0:0:0:
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Pereira006
[General]

  1. Insane+, I don't like name diff with symbol but I don't know this is fine as rule, Insane i feel is Light insane and Insane+ just remove "+" could be better IMO
  2. The bg almost whole part is white, the color White, play reach kiai with this bg whole white, is hurt to eye. White is fine if video and bg don't have white but change little dark white or change something

[Easy]

Gameplay:

  1. 00:38:530 (1) - Missing Remove NC

[Normal]

Gameplay:

  1. 00:09:169 (4,1,2,3) - I feel could remove NC in (1) and put nc in (3) because this rhythm is similiar as in 00:02:626 (1,2,3,4,5), is just make sure you style be consistency
  2. 00:39:967 (1) - missing remove NC, as you style this part 00:33:584 at 00:43:637 you put NC every 2/1, so this is missing NC
  3. 01:20:498 (1) - remove NC
  4. 01:23:052 (1) - ^ same

[Insane]

Gameplay

  1. 00:16:030 (4,1,2,3,4) - remove NC in 00:16:190 (1) and put NC in 00:16:988 (4) this could fit to follow song
  2. 00:20:020 (1) - could clean border with 00:19:222 (1) ?
  3. 00:32:147 (5) - missing NC the song is change
  4. 00:33:264 (7) - could change placement like this http://puu.sh/lvk7g/b8471804c6.jpg or you own, because the 00:32:147 (5) - is almost hidden that is just hard read IMO
  5. 00:57:839 (5,6,7,1,2,3) - NC in (5) and (3) and remove NC in 00:58:477 (1) - http://puu.sh/lvkmV/59c280b347.jpg because in 00:57:839 (5) - and 00:58:796 (3) - the vocal is hig and change
  6. 00:59:435 (5,1,2,3) - ^ same
  7. 01:00:711 (5,1,2,3,4) - ^ same

look nice but NC is weird

[Absolute Duo]

Gameplay:

  1. 00:08:530 (5,6,7) - weird triangule, why don't use symentric triangule like you did in 00:09:169 (1,2,3) -
  2. 00:11:881 (2,3) - no NC ? the sv is change
  3. 00:24:328 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,1) - I don't know why you reduce spacing this part because I don't feel this song has quiet, low, or something, the rhythm just like "normal" could be fix spacing normal like 1.20x that you did, just this spacing low is weird to follow song
  4. 00:26:243 (3,4) - I don't know why this reduce is low but vocal is high, like 00:27:201 (3,4), the vocal is similiar
  5. 00:34:062 (1,2,3) - NC cuz SV
  6. 00:37:892 (2) - missing NC
  7. 00:43:637 (1) - lol why.. don't use just 3 point ? http://puu.sh/lvl7u/2e0a696e9d.jpg
  8. 00:47:467 (6) - missing NC
  9. 01:05:658 (5,6) - no blanket ?
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Didn't mod extra'Irre and hard becuase look good, I feel Absolute Duo need more work because there weird spacing, some spacing low like 00:24:328 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,1) is doesn't fit well with song Normal.
Any question or you don't understand my english because i m bad, ask me in-game I can explain better
I could back this again if Absolute Duo could be better IMO anyway good luck
strickluke


Hopefully this gets ranked
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