Kibbleru wrote:

k no kds, i just took one glance.

[osu! Insane]

1. 01:51:148 - i don't see why u wouldn't map this beat you could maybe extend the slider to the blue tick or just add a circle here? oh...I didn't notice it. Added a circle.

CSLMVenezuela wrote:

osu! standart mod (m4m?) by me o/

Normal

1. 01:47:769 (3,4) - i'm not sure if this rhythm is apropiated por this part, the rhythm will be a lot better imo if you move (4) to 01:48:428 (4) - , reduce it to 01:48:758 - (for a rhythm 1/1), and add a note in 01:49:087, like this: http://puu.sh/dwEUl/4cd592466a.jpg The rhythm of now is very good, and it would be appropriate.
2. 03:25:350 (3,4) - this slider will had a better flow imo if you change the curvature of both, like this: http://puu.sh/dwFcc/3510dadda8.jpg I prefer the current sliders, and the flow also looks good.

Hard

1. 00:05:901 (3,1) - will be better imo if you change it of this way: http://puu.sh/dxh8v/f04ea6fe30.jpg nope i don't think so.
2. 00:12:164 - add note here for being less confusing plzz i don't want to add it. sorry.
3. 00:35:195 - ^ ^
4. 00:37:219 - ^ ^
5. 00:49:747 (1,2) - this stack is confusing (considering what you didn't make stacks of 1/1 before) It is my style in hard diff.
6. 00:52:054 (4,1) - ^ ^
7. 00:59:307 (2,3) - ^ ^
8. 01:02:109 (3,4) - ^ ^

i'll not going to talk about this stacks...

1. 01:52:384 (3) - why you don't change the curvature of this slider? i feel better the pattern of this way The flow looks good to me.
2. 02:46:119 (2) - move it to: x216 y240 The spacing is a little big in your suggestion.

Insane

1. 00:04:417 (7) - change this microslider to note. I think it is strange.
2. 00:04:499 - not have a note Sound exists.
3. 00:08:373 (7) - ^ ^
4. 00:23:868 (3,5) - bad stacked, try to move (3) or (5) without the Grid Snap eh it is not bad to me.
5. 00:40:516 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1) - i looooooooove this <3 thank you o/
6. 00:48:923 (2,4) - bad stacked, i dunno if this was intentional not bad. it looks good.
7. 02:22:549 (2) - i don't feel this note apropiated there, delete it plz i don't think so >:
8. 02:46:779 (7,4,5,6) - bad stacked what these are great stacked notes.
9. 03:13:152 (7,1) - the same thing of hard about the stack in 1/1 same as hard diff.
10. 03:15:295 (5,6,7,2) - bad stacked i think it is not bad.
11. 03:18:097 (6,1) - ugly overlap imo, why you don't move (1) to: x484 y284 (for make stack with 03:18:427 (7) - ) and adjust it for make blanket with 03:17:603 (2) - ? I prefer this, so keep.
12. 03:21:394 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - sooooo cute <3 thank you o/

i hope what my mod can help you :3
choo choo~

1. 00:02:769 (2) - The red marks don't do anything to this slider because you do not really feel them during CTB gameplay. Rotate it +/- 45 grades and move it back to x: 256 afterwards.
2. 00:11:835 (2) - For a better flow CTRL + G this and then move it to x: 80. This will create a zigzag pattern. It might be that the distance between 00:11:835 (2,3) - is a bit high, so you can also select 00:12:329 (3,4,1,2,3) - completely and move it a 2-3 grids to the left.
3. 00:21:725 (3,1) - You can FC this without any Dash. Give some thought to a small dash in consequence of the cymbal sound at 00:22:054 - .
4. 00:27:329 - Bear in mind the heavy beat. Why should it not give utterance with a note? Same goes with 00:28:648 - . I know you mapped another rhythm but for a Salad you are making the rhythm needlessly complicated.
5. 00:32:439 (5,1) - Dash, same reason as I gave at 00:21:725 (3,1) -
6. 00:40:516 (2,3) - Too less motion required. Slope 'em somewhat more, like...:
   
   SPOILER

   
   Or try something completely new:
   
   Step 1

   
   Step 2

   
7. 00:42:989 (6,1) - Some higher distance cannot hurt, refering to the Cymbal at 00:43:153 - .
8. 00:53:373 (5,1) - ^
9. 01:14:802 - , 01:15:296 - , 01:16:120 - , 01:16:615 - , 01:17:439 - , 01:18:758 - , 01:20:076 - , and so on...., until 01:33:263 - ... Almost throughout this whole section I didn't necessarily need a single Dash to FC that, despite the fact that these powerful drum beats that I mentioned need to be expressed with some dashes at least. Please make this whole section more thrilling.
10. 01:35:571 (4,1) - A dash optimizes the prelude of the Kiai time.
11. 01:46:120 (4,1) - Another appropriate spot for a dash. Could also be used for another Kiai interludium, because you can separate the first Kiai perfectly into two Kiai's by adding green lines : 01:46:450 - , 01:45:131 - , and then do the following in your timing setup:
    
    SPOILER

    
    Same goes with your other difficulties. Too lazy to mention that everywhere.
12. 01:51:230 (6) - CTRL + G for a better flow.
13. 01:58:977 (2,3) - A full stream without skipping ticks is better, it feels like void the way you decided to map it. Just an illustration that is making some more reference to the timeline than the actual pattern.
    
    SPOILER

    
14. 03:05:240 (4,1) - Why is this extraordinary beat no Dash?
15. 03:15:789 (7,1) - ^
16. 03:47:108 (2) - Do something more interesting for a better ending:
    
    SPOILER

    

1. 00:06:560 (2,3,4) - Looks different to your previous and subsequent triplets. I prefer if you keep them in a more linear shape, as for example:
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:11:175 (5) - Move this note to x: 224 for constant distances, I don't like how it destroys the flow as it is now.
3. 00:20:406 (6) - x: 272 and 00:20:571 (7) - x: 464, this will establish another zigzag pattern with gradually increasing distances with each note.
4. 00:24:362 (4,1) - There really has to be some sort of dash on these notes by reason of the crescendo at 00:24:692 - . An attempt, but if you don't like any Hyper do something else with a Dash:
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 00:34:912 (4,1) - Same as above.
6. 00:40:351 (8) - x: 160 to create a Hyper
7. 00:40:846 (2) - x: 352 and 00:41:340 (4) - x: 160, same reason as above.
8. 00:50:736 (3,1) - Hyper (Cymbal sound at 00:51:065 - )
9. 00:52:054 (4,1) - I wouldn't stack these, at least create a slight move because of the strong rhythm again. A possiblity is to CTRL + G 00:52:384 (1) - , optionally moving it a bit to the right afterwards.
10. 00:53:373 (1,2,3,4,1) - Don't expect me to like this stream ~
11. 01:14:637 (3,1) - For a Platter too much imo. You used these many Hypers inside the stream before, but it's really time to calm down a bit again... Do the following:
    
    SPOILER

    
    After that you can use some more Hypers again at 01:16:120 - , 01:16:615 - , 01:18:758 - or similar spots.
12. 01:35:901 (1) - x: 416 or 432 for having a better launch to 01:36:065 (2) - .
13. So you already used a lot of Hypers until the first Kiai. But in the first half of your first Kiai we cannot find a single HDash, but c'mon... this is a Kiai, so it's ought to be trickier than the rest of your difficulty. The following spots can have some Hypers: 01:37:219 - , 01:38:538 - , 01:39:857 - , 01:41:175 - , 01:42:494 - , and so on... You already see what I'm aiming for.
14. 02:30:626 (4,1) - Could really be a Dash.
15. 02:36:395 (7,1) - This, too.
16. 02:56:339 (1) - CTRL + G this and move it to somewhere as x:96 for better flow criterions.
17. 02:58:977 (1) - ^ (x: 416 or something)
18. 03:24:031 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Already very hard for a Platter. You can keep it but do not let it start with a Hyper at 03:23:702 (4,1) - , it's easy to do an unsuspected miss.
19. 03:47:108 (1,2,3) - , 03:47:438 (4,5,6) - Scale up distances between these notes in each triplet sparsely for a better ending. The required movement is very low. Try 2,2 - 2,5 as distance between each note.

1. 00:21:065 (5) - Rotate it more to the left to give a better launch for 00:21:230 (6,7,8,9) - . Previous and subsequent pattern require a lot of movement. You don't need to move at all and with that it makes the next pattern a bit hard to catch. Just do the following, it already does a huge difference:
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:43:318 (2) - Move this 2-3 grids more to the left, please. This plays a bit rough just after the HDash at 00:42:988 (7,1) - .
3. 01:01:532 (11,1) - Potential place for some Dash/HDash, whatever you prefer on account of the "drum" at 01:01:615 - .
4. 01:08:703 (3,4) - Hard to catch (4) after the hyper because it is such a soft pattern compared to the previous Hyper. Try this, plays very smooth:
   
   SPOILER

   
5. Your first Kiai in general is very inconsistent. For example you used HDashes here: 01:41:010 (10,1) - , but then again you started leaving them out there: 01:42:411 (13,1) - , 01:43:730 (14,1) - , and so on... Instead you gave totally new parts hypers which hadn't any hypers before, like 01:43:977 (2,3,4,5) - ... Anyway, I assume this is your style, so I will not touch this. I am just not a huge friend of inconsistency, you know that already. 2nd Kiai is very consistent btw, lol.

Kin wrote:

https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/p/3571402

Taiko mod is here :

[General]

1. for taiko diff, I think it'll be better to rename all diff as Futsuu/Muzukashii/Oni instead of Taiko Futsuu/etc ...

[Oni]

1. 00:27:494 (90,93) - I think both should be a k instead of this one : 00:27:659 (92) - . 00:27:494 - 00:27:824 - both are echo melody of this note 00:27:164 (88) - . Doesnt end the pattern very well imo.
2. 00:54:527 (83,84,85) - I personaly feel weird to have the triplet here, when the melody told me it should be 1/2 earlier : here 00:54:362 - .
3. 01:05:076 (24,25,26) - same thing as this one ^ : 01:04:912 - . (For both) Following the melody rhythm on point. Would be counteractive to move it around.
4. 01:30:625 (182,183) - swap as D K ? since the melody on 183 is higher pitched than 182. Not following pitch. This setup worked better for the upcoming patterns imo.
5. 01:39:939 (255,256) - swap as dk ? I think it plays better. Also this one melody here 01:40:021 (256) - is higher pitched than this one : 01:39:939 (255) - . Messes up the flow pretty bad for me. not chaning something so crucial to the stream.
6. 02:53:537 (178,179,1,2,3) - I personaly think that ddkkd will be better with the melody since this note is strong : 02:53:702 (1) - .
7. 03:14:636 (156,157,1,2,3) - ^ (For both) This 5 notes pattern goes on the heavy drum fill in the background, no need to stray away from it if I'm trying to emphasize it.

[Muzukashii]

1. 01:16:120 (353,354,355) - I'd suggest to change 355 as K since this one have different sound (the cymbal sound is stronger)
2. 01:26:670 (394,395,396) - ^ Both changed.

Standard mod is here :

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Okoratu wrote:

hi

General

1. Are you allowed to mute the sliderslide for the standard set now, because i would mute it
2. look normal-mod for general hitsound suggestionsss

Insane

1. 00:26:835 (1) - this nc looks unnecessary - like it will still be perfectly readable without it
2. would increse stack leniency until 03:06:229 (3,5) - stack properly because having 1/1 notes not stack does not make that much sense to me (stack leniency + 1...?) changed to default (7).

i don't feel like spending another hour on the insane but most of my concerns are regarding the polarity things on hard, this diff is quite nice

Hard

1. I would welcome AR 7.5 or AR 8 for readability purposes (and 7 leaves a whole lot of objects on your screen so that could be confusing for your target audience) ok. choosed AR7.5
2. 00:06:890 (3) - going with the white tick here falsely puts the 00:07:054 - which should be a circle or something - on a sliderend which looks and feels weird to play, this is an repeating issue, and i will just name a few in this box (you should probably consider changing these to properly provide feedback for these sounds):
   
   box

   1. 00:28:153 (4) - this should probably be 2 circles to properly empathise the white tick on its end I prefer the slider than two circles :/
   2. 00:34:087 (1) - should probably be better off as a circle and a 1/2 slider like this, so that you can click the "du du" thing in the background in 00:34:252 - : Uh i don't think so...
      
   3. 01:12:824 (3) - probably better off as 2 circles because its sliderend is such a strong sound It may be so, but i want to keep the slider ;;
   4. 01:17:934 (2,3) - you should just CRTL+G rhythm here
   5. 00:26:835 (4) - 00:26:175 (1,2,3) - have been follwoing the whistle sounds in the music there and 00:27:164 - its end has a whistle thing as well so you shold probably remove the repeat and use just a circle nope. i think the repeat slider looks good
3. 00:11:835 (2) - due to going from 1.42x to 1.16x on a slowdown you will most likely cause people to hit 00:12:329 (3) - early, i would advise to move 00:11:835 (2,3) - a bit further apart so that that doesn't happen
4. 00:34:087 (1,2) - same here, i would increase the distance between these 2 a bit to indicate that this is not a huge jump but a 1/1 rhythm keep the upper and lower symmetry.
5. 00:49:747 (1,2) - this stack feels like it's there just to stop players for no reason, something like 01:49:087 (1,2,3) - is more intuitive
   Same applies for
   - 01:22:054 (3,4) -
   - 01:54:857 (2,3) -
   because the rest is circle stacking on slider things and sliders are free accu in this game anyway so
6. 01:44:637 - why would you skipp this fat bass sound for a 1/1 stack??
7. 01:57:164 - useless green line ?
8. 02:41:175 (4,5) - why not the same rhythm as 02:38:538 (5) - or something like that to be consistent with how you mapped this part Because i want to create a variety of patterns.

i think that would be all my complaints about this diff for now

Normal

1. 01:00:296 (4,5) - i ran into a polarity issue here because this thing is so damn random to notice that one correctly, this is mainly because the beats this thing maps are ignored in 00:54:032 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - this whole thing, you could either think again about some rhythms in the part i just mentioned andd if you want to introduce these things like 01:00:296 (4,5) - there as well to make this one less "awkward" or you could simply do something like this while still being approx on track with the music...? anyway i would like to keep.
2. 01:01:615 (1,2,3,4) - i see why you did these, they work somewhat fine, but just saying that i don't really agree with suddenly going that whistles > your clap pattern Because i think the main sounds are whistle.
3. 01:13:483 (4,5) - aaa i don't really see any reason why you should ignore the finish thing sound in 01:13:977 - , i think something like this would fit a lot better and you do similar stuff like 01:10:846 (4,5) - for less impactful beats just before, so i think this would be a neat change to see (it even breaks your hitsoundingggg ): )
4. 01:36:230 - ignoring this beat will get you - or at least me - another polatity thing, because i at least hit 01:36:395 (1) - early due to that, why not another 2/1 like 01:34:582 (3) - or this rhythm would be more k as well Since the main sounds are whistle, i'm taking the sound.
5. 02:29:966 (4) - 02:35:241 (5) - just sayin that i don't really agree with the sliderend being a finish here and that i would prefer clicking this as a circle or slider start whatsoever Unconsciously, I created such a slider. Maybe this might be my style ><
6. 01:37:219 (3,4) - oh yes i also had somewhat a polarity thing with this one as well but i don't even know what else to do here so muhh :o
7. 02:50:405 (2) - i usually don't mention this but ye lol you could improve that blanket a bitt
8. 00:22:054 - i would probably increase volume of this by like 10% so that this only whistles part with a few finishes doesn't get consumed by backgroundmusic completely
9. 00:41:835 (2) - I would prefer this rhythm because this way you won't miss the finish thing on 00:42:494 - and btw i think the finish in 00:42:329 - makes no sense as it is currently .-. sorry~ i prefer the slider of now :3
10. 01:17:439 (1,3) - adding whistles to these sliderheads could be cool
11. 01:22:714 - 01:24:032 (3) - ^
12. same would apply for other things in that region (they are all the same i won't mention them just to get a lot of text)
13. 02:25:351 - would add a whistle for the bell thing
14. 02:30:626 - ^
15. 02:35:900 - ^
16. btw. why didn't you go for the same normal-hitnormal hitsounding with soft additions 00:52:879 - in both kiai? i mean you could have Sampleset Normal and Additions Soft, and would have your desired effect (and it would fit...? A lot better.) In Kiai time, I added the hitsound pattern different from the other parts because it doesn't use the normal-hitnormal sound.
    

01:56:999 (1) - this normal whistle is great

Gl!

Nwolf wrote:

not complaining (MMzz is a great mapper and this map is too) but


I and several other people were told that even in taiko it needs to be ENH or NHI spread and that the lowest diff has to be lower than 2*.
Also, it was stated in the rules that it has to be ENH or NHI for all modes (except ctb duh).

• 
  Damn, those streams still kick my ass. Will point out some things though, the difficulty is otherwise fine.

1. 01:14:472 (96,97,98) - I'd consider a kkk here, or a kdd. kkd works nicely as well, but kkk D or kdd D plays better, and they all kinda fit. Not sure if it has to be played better though, the part is quite simple as is.
2. 01:18:593 (114,115,116) - I just think it would be more interesting if you used ddd here, and dkd at 01:19:252 (119,120,121). Some legit pattern progression. It's not wrong as it is though.
3. 01:39:527 (250) - k? Can notice you focused on the melody, but you could argue that the drum here is quite important, up to you really, but I think this stream would be better with it, because it wouldn't have a really complicated pattern just yet, it's the first stream of many after all.
4. 01:44:142 (304,305,306) - This dkk inside a stream would be nicer if it was a kkd imo. If you went for pure melody, 01:44:060 (303) - as kat should be considered as well.
5. 01:50:324 (376,377) - I think kd would play better here, sounds pretty cool too.
6. 01:56:835 (453) - k? kdkkd ending is nicer here than kddkd imo.
7. Overall stream section: I couldn't 100% figure out how did you come up with those patterns, most of them were quite intuitive, but some had really mean hand switches. That's all fine though, but I'd probably consider removing some of those offbeat kats because of the difficulty spike. They are otherwise fine, even if they stay, just a personal note.

1. I'd consider this an easier Oni instead. The diff is quite good, but some parts are just too hard for Muzu. A combination of a long 1/2 chain with some 1/4 mixed in on this bpm can be quite a challenge.
2. 00:22:219 (83) - I'd remove this because your "phrase" earlier is quite long. This diff might need slight note reduction so removing notes which don't make core rhythm can work.
3. 00:26:670 (107) - Don't think you need this one, removing is fine. Same goes for other notes in the same structurized places/patterns.
4. 00:40:681 (187,188,189) - I feel this as it's misplaced. I'd probably remove the first two, since the rhythm should be clear here (look here: 00:41:340 (191,192) - )
5. 00:41:670 (193) - Removing this makes the upcoming doubles easier, which is more appropriate.
6. 00:54:857 (244) - I think you dont need this yet. It's still quite early in the song to have such long patterns, which are in the kiai and the same.
7. I don't think I have to point out every single note anymore, but if you think I should, I will. Modding from work with limited timeframe ;_;

1. SV 1.2 recommended due to BPM.
2. Generally fine, but some parts could be more interesting, will list them as I go.
3. 00:10:351 - A perfect spot to make small variety but keeping your original base rhythm. Adding a d here makes stuff different and interesting, yet the same kinda.
4. 00:19:087 - Another spot where adding a kat would make things a bit more interesting.
5. 00:41:835 (103,104,105,106) - Not sure if appropriate for a futsuu. Generally, it would be fine, but these spots where this is mapped is kinda in between the instruments, not all notes fall on something specific so it could be a bit unexpected. Hard to catch for noobies maybe, idk.
6. 02:44:471 - I believe you should make kiai a little more interesting, adding a few notes here and there (example 02:44:965 - adding a don, 02:46:779 - adding a don, 02:49:416 - adding a kat, etc), so it's a little bit harder, because Muzukashii is very hard; spread reasons.

lolcubes wrote:

Taiko mod ╭( ･ㅂ･)و

Hard to catch for noobies

1. Normal/Hard/Insane (Standard) p/3605250
2. Muzukashii (Taiko) p/3590479
3. Normal/Hard/Insane (osu!mania) p/3571725
4. Removing "Taiko" from all Taiko diff names.

those wrote:

02:44:471 - New timing point at 182 bpm required for correct stanza count into the new section.

Kaguya Hourain wrote:

Freemod to get this MBC #7 thing over and done with already.

This will be a standard mode mod.

Normal

1. 00:17:604 (2) - Ctrl + H and replace the slider at the same point would flow better in the next slider I believe.
2. 00:20:736 (4) - Why don't you try something like this here: The main is piano sound, and there is no need to use the drum sound. Also it is good to make a break for players because this is a minimum diff.
   
   hi

   
   
   I do believe that this fits the music much much better and it doesn't take a lot of work to make /o/
3. 00:23:703 - I think you might want to add a circle here because otherwise the empty space feels too bland and boring. It also might make people to click the next slider a bit too early if you do not provide consistent rhythm. Same for 00:27:659 - here, 00:34:252 - and here. ^
4. 00:29:966 (1) - How would you feel about shortening this slider by 1/2 and adding a circle in its end? I want to keep now
5. 00:32:109 (5) - It is general knowledge and common sense that you do not have sliderends on downbeats most of the time. This is such an occasion. You could do what I suggested right above! Same thing applies to 00:40:021 (5) - this, 01:03:758 (4) - this, 01:22:054 (3) - this 01:53:868 (4) - this 01:58:977 (3) - and this. Unconsciously, I created such a slider. Maybe this might be my style...
6. 00:37:384 (5) - Would be nice to see this as a 1/2 reverse slider again!
7. 00:53:373 (6) - This one on the contrary feels okay-ish as a slider that ends on a downbeat.
8. 01:25:351 (1,2,3) - I like this one better than the previous two. It feels right~ this also is good o/
9. 01:30:626 (1,2) - Why not make this like right above ;A; I want to create a variety of patterns.
10. 01:34:582 (3) - This one falls in the category of the downbeat reverse sliders but I feel like you should make this three circles instead of removing reverse to give proper momentum and accentuate the 1/4 beats in the music better. I really prefer this ;;
11. 01:50:406 (3,4) - Blanket is off here.
12. 02:29:966 (4) - Not really sure about this one but you might wanna try something like this: I feel it is strange...
    
    kawaii bokkusu

    
    
    Would compliment the music really nicely imo
    Same for 02:35:241 (6) - this one.
13. 02:41:834 (1) - I really believe this reverse should be removed and that you should start a 1/1 slider on the downbeat because the music changes from half beat light drumhits into quarter beat light drumhits and it should be represented properly. Perhaps adding a circle 02:42:823 - here would enhance this cause further. This slider is better, and it looks good.
14. 02:45:790 (4,5) - I enjoy what you did here, you should repeat it again 02:48:427 (3,4,5) - here. I want to create a variety of patterns.
15. 02:54:691 (5,1) - I believe this rhythm feels nicer since you click the downbeat with the slider which is a very important beat in this section: it looks fine...
16. 02:58:976 (3) - This is where I got my 1x100 and I got slightly pissed off because I was expecting the slider to be a bit shorter. Reduce length by 1/2 and add a circle in the end. uh i really don't prefer it in normal diff..
17. 03:01:614 (3,4) - This sounds really really awkward. No i don't think so.
18. 03:04:910 (3,1) - Here it would feel nice if you removed the reverse and started a slider on the downbeat, same reasons as many other things. I think this repeat slider is goog, and it will fit in the song.
19. 03:10:020 (5,6) - I don't see any need to change into circle + slider here, while the rest of your similar sections are mapped perfectly alerady.
20. 03:16:779 (2) - Suggesting to remove reverse and add a circle since the second sliderhit is less significant than the last one which automatically warrants it to be a circle. ^
21. 03:21:229 - How would you feel about adding a circle here? i didn't add circle in order to emphasize this 03:21:394.
22. 03:26:009 (4) - Finally I would love to see this reverse removed and have a circle added in the end. i want to keep now.

Hard

1. 00:11:505 (1,2) - I mean I get that you're following the drums and stuff but I really liked what you did 00:00:956 (1,2,3) - here and I would love to see it repeated. That pause feels really awkward to be honest. i want to keep now in order to emphasize the sound like a piano in the back.
2. 00:34:582 - Awkward pause here as well. Easily fixable by adding a circle in the middle of the two sliders o/ ^
3. 00:59:307 (2,3) - This anti-jump might feel weird to players and cause them to click the slider early. Feels to me like you just ran out of space and decided to do this. I don't think so, and snare sound is emphasized in the back.
4. 01:09:032 (4,5,6) - The music here is actually in 1/6ths. I would refrain from mapping 1/4ths here since it is overmapping. Remove the blue tick circle and you're fine~
5. 01:13:483 (1,2,3,4) - Okay half of the fourths you have mapped here do not even exist in the music, this is bad overmapping for a Hard difficulty. Try something like this: eh this isn't a overmapping, and i think sound has exists.
   
   Rough representation

   
6. 01:21:395 (1,2,3,4) - This feels and sounds wrong. What you did previously was much much better I don't see why you did this here. I think these rhythms very good ><
7. 02:25:351 (5) - Sliderend on downbeat isn't good. Try adding a circle by removing the reverse. Good, but i prefer this repeat slider.
8. 03:01:614 (1,2,3) - I cannot stress how awkward this feels to play enough. Try this: I don't think so.
   
   Maybe

   
9. Not as many things found here I'm happy *u*

Insane

1. HP 6,5 would be better. HP7 feels a bit too high.
2. 00:26:505 (3) - I believe there's plenty in the music in the white tick you skipped to turn this into a half slider "00: 26: 175 (1,2,3) and 00: 26: 835 (4,5,6)" are ringing the same sound, so i didn't use the slider in order to emphasize them.
3. 00:42:659 (7,8) - How about Ctrl + G? Good, but i prefer the flow of now.
4. 01:09:032 (6,7) - Yes nice
5. 01:13:483 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - The same thing I suggested in Hard should be applied here as well. Same as hard diff.
6. 01:27:164 (7) - I don't get this one. Everywhere else you've done a full beat slider at the white tick and now you END a half slider in it. Makes little to no sense. Map this one according to the others as well music has nothing different here.
7. 02:20:735 (1,2,3) - Feels empty. Try what you do after this one here as well. I think it is enough
8. 02:24:032 (5) - Would love to see this slider shortened in half and a circle where slider currently ends! Same would apply 02:29:307 (5) - here
9. 02:24:691 (1) - Same for here but it would be cool if you made it a reverse 1/4 slider too~
10. 02:30:461 (4,5) - Reversing the order of these two objects so that you have slider > circle would be way cooler to play, gives a better feeling to it, y'know i think the flow of now is better than it.
11. 02:31:285 (1) - How about Ctrl + G and halve this slider into reverse 1/4? I think 1/2 slider is better.
12. 02:31:944 (3) - Would make two 1/4 sliders here the space after the slider feels currently empty. I want to create a variety of patterns. Therefore there is no need to use a 1/4.
13. 03:02:273 (3,4,5,6) - Feels pretty unintuitive to just stack the beats here while you could make some nice jumps don't you think? Since the special sound is ringing in the back [03:02:273 (3,4,5,6)], used a stack without the jump. This also would be enough good.

Well this is my input. I humbly request that you answer my mod with proper answers to every suggestion you decide to deny. This means that I need a good enough explanation as to why you denied my suggestion and why you mapped like you did in parts that I may ask why. I request this so I can give better suggestions next time to see what I have done wrong and if I am missing the point of keeping maps with current mapper style without intruding too much into it.

Thank you for your time.

Sonnyc wrote:

Brief check passing by.

[Normal]
00:19:747 (2) - I feel the whistle at the end doesn't sound nice... You haven't added in other diffs fyi.
02:37:878 (2,3) - Personally I think reversing the rhythm will feel more natural since the strong beat at 02:39:197 can be a note.
02:40:516 (5,1) - Even the bpm gets doubled, this is practically a jump. I think changing 02:40:516 (5) to a note and giving a pause would be much more suitable to face a bpm change than a jump in Normal. This rhythm looks good to me. Also i think it does not lead to confusion.

[Hard]
00:46:780 (3) - Mind making more space between the path and the end of (2)? A random sample http://puu.sh/e3QJ7/6cfcaeb1f6.jpg

[Insane]
00:25:846 (5) - I personally felt that this object would suit better if there was a jump. Yeah but i couldn't create a good jump...;;
01:22:054 (5) - The expect rhythm of 01:21:890 (4) should be a 1/1 slider since that was being used for soft-finish sounds. However since you've changed your pattern and decided to follow the new sound at 01:22:054, consider adding NC to (5). don't have to add a new combo in order to keep the consistency.
01:45:708 (3) - Mind making the triplet straight as 01:44:966 (9,10,1)?
02:30:626 (5,6) - Mind reducing the curve by a little? Nope i think it is getting better flow by this curve :3

Static Noise Bird wrote:

Well, since apparently the standard set is in urgent need for help too, might as well revisit this map. I hope I'll be helpful enough, again.

[Normal]
00:20:736 (4) - I feel like this should be shortened by the repeat. The section start @ 00:22:054 desperately needs a separate circle, or a 1/1 slider. I really think this repeat slider is fit, and prefer~
00:23:703 - Add a circle. I decided to add an object.
00:27:494 - I don't feel these breaks. Either add a 1/1 slider here, or a 1/2 slider 1/2 later. ^ Same as above.
00:34:252 - Add a circle. ^ same
00:56:670 (2) - Feel like this should be blanketing (3)'s start.
01:03:758 (4) - Could end 1/2 earlier and have a circle at the current end position (because new section's first beat, again). I want to use this slider in order to easy the rhythm because there isn't Easy diff in this mapset.
01:36:395 (1) - Blanketing the following object with this wouldn't hurt anyone.
02:59:801 (4) - Could end 1/2 earlier and have a circle at the current end position. ^
03:01:614 (3,4) - See the box. v it is good but i prefer the rhythm of now.

A pattern suggestion.

03:26:009 (4) - I feel like the final note should be clickable, so remove the repeat and add a new circle to the finish.

[Hard]
00:16:780 (1,2,3) - The turn from (2) to (3) should be less steep and more flowy. This feels uncomfortable IMO. changed the placement.
00:41:835 (1) - Fairly sure this section would fit the music better like this. v rhythm of now also would be a good idea :3

A pattern suggestion.

01:11:175 (2,3) - To fit the synth better, the slider should be first, then the circle. If you want to follow the beat more, this works. Judging by the previous sections, you're mapping to the synth, so please consider changing this.
01:52:714 (4,5) - Again, swapping the order would be better. i think rhythm of now is better than it.

[Insane]
01:16:615 (4,5) - The order should be swapped. Following the cymbals would work better, as they are strong enough sounds for suggesting the main rhythm. nope This slider is fit to sound like a piano. Also i think it is better.
01:21:890 (4,5) - ^ ^
01:33:263 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Ooh, this is nice. thank you :3
01:41:423 (2) - Really weird, since it starts and ends on weird 1/4s. Extend it by 1/4 so the end would land on a more common rhythm. i think the sound has ended here (01:41:587).
02:36:560 (1,2) - Use 1/2 repeat sliders like the previous one to match the synth. This will also give possibilities for nice designs. It would not need to be the same as previous.
02:37:549 - If you will agree with the previous suggestion, add a circle here.

Visualization to help with the above suggestions.

03:07:877 (5,1) - The stack makes an unnecessary pause IMO. Move the (1) somewhere else. the pause looks good to me.

Suggestion.

Nice stuff, now rank this~

richardfeder wrote:

Mania mod
All red names...what am I doing here?

0123456

General:
1) Go to AImod and fix all unsnapped ojb.
2) Maybe rename mania diffs to Mania Normal/Mania Hard/Mania Insane? Or NM/HD/MX...just try to distinguish mania diffs from std diffs

Normal

00:23:538 (23538|5,23703|5,23868|5,24032|5) - following that is erally awkward imo. I would follow the instrument that you follow here00:24:197 (24197|2,24362|3,24527|4,24692|4,25021|6,25186|4,25516|2,25846|4,26175|3,26340|4,26505|5) - fixed and remove those note.

btw shouldn't 00:24:692 (24692|4) - be at 00:24:857 - ? ops. fixed

00:27:329 (27329|0,27659|4,28153|0,28318|4,28648|0,28977|4,29142|0) - hmm legit but a little bit weird for me...I won't switch to other lame here - remapped, i guess so

00:30:956 (30956|5) - added
00:31:120 (31120|2) - add - i prefer use single note

00:33:923 (33923|5,34087|5,34252|5,34582|5) - ? remap as well

00:35:241 (35241|4) - same as above. If this note is for heavy beat/piano I would move it to 0 and then add a note at 00:35:406 - fixed lol

00:37:879 (37879|0,38208|4,38703|0,38868|4,39197|0,39527|4,39692|0) - ^ - remap like previously

00:54:197 (54197|1) - delete - maybe you point on this timeline 00:54:207 - removed

01:01:780 (61780|4) - add a note - added

01:05:242 (65242|4) - delete - removed


01:09:033 (69033|6,69198|4) - hmm just do the same as what you did 01:07:055 (67055|5,67137|4,67220|5) - here at this part 1/6, remain use 1/2

01:11:670 (71670|3,71835|4,72000|5,72164|3,72164|6) - PR lolololol - swap to downstair

01:16:780 (76780|3,76780|1,82054|6,82054|0) - hahahaha that piano...tricky - very

01:40:598 (100598|5) - add a note? - no
01:41:010 (101010|1) - add a note - ^
01:45:956 (105956|1,106121|6) - ^ - ^

02:00:955 (120955|2) - add a note ^
02:01:615 (121615|3) - ^ ^

02:04:252 (124252|0) - ^ ^
02:04:582 (124582|1) - ^ ^
ect...^

02:45:954 (165954|3) - ^ added
refer to 02:48:592 (168592|3) - ^


02:51:229 - ^ ^

02:59:471 (179471|4) - http://puu.sh/dF6Ni/37a4b7d0a3.png - dont wan add LN more

03:01:779 (181779|1,182108|3) - ^ ^
skip repeated part

amazing~

HD

00:07:549 (7549|6,8043|5) - no sound I believe, cant find the note, maybe i deleted or something

00:08:868 (8868|5,9362|4,9857|4) - same column according to PR ^

00:18:098 (18098|0,18592|1) - same as above. No sound ^

00:27:988 (27988|5) - delete? - removed
00:38:538 (38538|1) - ^ - removed

00:42:082 (42082|4) - add a note? - added?
00:42:247 (42247|4) - ^ ^

00:49:499 (49499|3) - add a note. there is a sound here ^

01:09:692 (69692|3) - missing a note! ^

01:35:901 - you can make this part much harder...since now the gap between NM and HD is really small compare to the one between HD and MX - add more notes .

02:36:395 (156395|5) - move to 3 moved

Insane

00:02:109 (2109|1) - add a note (hithat + piano) just single piano here, and the next have measure not follow hats sound

00:05:901 - should be triple notes. Add a note at 0 or 3 - nope, just single note for snare and hats, you saw got 3 notes on the next parts it's deep sound you can found on strings

00:16:450 (16450|0,16450|4) - ^

00:20:983 (20983|3,21065|4,21148|5,21230|1,21230|0,21230|6,21313|3,21395|6,21477|5,21560|4,21560|1,21642|3,21725|2,21807|1,21890|0) - looks awkward....I just make this for fun lololol http://puu.sh/dF7Qr/8dc059a0d5.png - wtf such best LN pattern, i used that.

00:23:208 - better add a LN at 6 which stops at 00:23:538 - used

00:28:483 - piano/hithat? cant be empty added
00:31:120 - ^

00:33:758 - same as 00:23:208 - fixed

00:48:428 (48428|3,48428|1) - should be triple - not really

00:53:043 (53043|3) - delete - done

00:56:175 (56175|2) - add a 1/2 LN? changed to LN
00:57:494 (57494|6) - ^ ^

01:03:098 (63098|2,63098|3,63428|2,63428|1,63758|1,63758|0) - @AXION LOL

01:35:901 (95901|1) - add a note! x

sry I just cant really find anything more. I cant really touch any pattern or try to follow any other instrument since if I do so the overall structure will be broke. Although I might ntoechart the song slightly different from yours, I do think current Insane diff is really good. Good luck elite pew~~~~ fixed on serveral parts

Where's your elite tag?????? rip

ExUsagi wrote:

request from PM, gotta flail and mod the Mania mapset

hue

[General]
erm dems AImod lol, well perhaps at the end, it's gonna be fixed, right?

1/2/3/4/5/6/7

[Normal]
00:11:185 (11185|5,11268|3,11350|5) - i suggest to change into 6 5 4, for 'smoother' and easier judgement.. :3 considering this is the easiest diff in mapset -disagree, you should point it out all those pattern i will consider
01:00:801 (60801|5,60883|4,60966|5) - perhaps 5 6 7? looks much better

01:13:740 - 01:14:235 - add something to layer the snare (snare or kick hue) ignoring snare
02:43:162 (163162|2,163327|0,163492|4,163657|2,163822|6,163986|4,164151|2,164151|0) - ctrl + H, reversing pr? fixed

btw no kiai time? will add later.

Normal is 'Normal' indeed, those 1/4 is nice for beginner too =w=)b

[Hard]
lol i opened standard Hard diff.. :v it's a bit confusing since the diff naming in mania spread is same as std spread..
00:08:878 (8878|2) - remove? why triple note?
00:19:427 (19427|4) - ^
00:58:987 (58987|2,59317|6,59647|5) - perhaps use LN instead? both can be used
01:17:449 (77449|6) - add on 4 added
01:18:768 (78768|3) - remove? removed
01:22:724 (82724|6) - add on 4 added

omg dat last stream.. *-*

[Insane]
again, i opened the std Insane diff.. orz

omg.. re-checked many times, i found nothing's wrong
02:43:162 (163162|6,163245|5,163327|4,163409|6,163492|5,163574|6,163657|4,163739|5,163822|6,163904|4,163986|5,164069|6) - ctrl + j? catchier looks.. optional though - wow i like it
03:04:920 add on 7 no need

orz sorry for short mod, this is too perfect, both technically and physically..thanks for mod anyway \:D/

dank chart, this chart is deserved for the highest score indeed.. \o/ congrats expew, lol

-Kamikaze- wrote:

@ExPew, poke me when it's updated, I'll mod this too poke recieved, let's go (for clarification, ExPew told me to use .osu's from p/3683245)

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>My thoughts about mapset
>Some advices
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>Complaining about mapstyle (sometimes even shouting)
>Commenting on 90% of things I mention
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>w33d
>Random images
>All the bad shit you may not expect
Keep in mind that all harsh things I say, not because I hate stuff, but because I care about every single map I mod and want to help you get it ranked. I'm voicing all of my opinions without restraint. Please don't rage at me because of this, I don't mean to offend you in any way. Also do note that I'm still learning, so I might misunderstand some things. and I'm terrible at naming instruments orz

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Rest of shite
Things after // comments about proposed stuff

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[Normal]
You don't have any kiai, add pls?
Maybe it's because it's not ~officially~ updated yet, but I've found a lot of AIMod errors:


00:01:790 (1790|4,2119|2) - Isn't correct pitch 6 into 7 here? (at least first note on 6th, it's a little bit lower than 00:01:460 (1460|4) - ) - i keep stick same column to make little easier to read, pitch just optional

00:11:185 (11185|5,11268|3,11350|5) - 654 stair maybe? - since got 2 times mod 'triangle note' or 'triplet in std' i going to change stair then most of them, im sure really it's readable for beginner since this pattern most famous in o2jam official note and VOS

00:22:064 - I've seen that you aren't using 7th lane too much here (3 notes for 15 seconds) try to spread patterns a little bit to get more finger ballance - it's doesn't affect anything on balancing

00:28:328 (28328|5,28987|3) - Those LNs (applies to all of similar ones, example 00:38:878 (38878|4,39537|3) - ) are looking very random, you can't really sense what are those mapped to. I know that they start at kicks, but LNs for kicks aren't really ~it~. Imho it would be better to start them 1/2 earlier to that synth (?) sound so you can actually feel what you're playing - fixed then LN well, im not sure about this those note synth appropriate or inappropriate

00:40:526 - 00:41:515 - 3 noters for the strong sounds here? More satysfying to smash here since you have time to adjust to them (you can ignore 1st chord if you want because there is a note pretty close before it) - nope, each note has own instrument by self, only focus on kick and cymbal

00:42:504 - Not accenting crash (or plate idk) here? You could add at 5th for reverse spaced stair pattern or at 1st for normal spaced stair pattern

00:55:196 (55196|3,55279|1,55361|3) - You likethat triangle pattern don't you? :^) In all seriousness, maybe make some more diverse patterns around, this one for example is quite awkward to play for beginners with the previous stair going towards left and then sudden space middle finger space 1/4. Also there's always 1 notes space between notes (middle column as an example here)

so try to fiddle with that too explained at 00:11:185 (11185|5,11268|3,11350|5) - 654 stair maybe?

01:00:801 - This pattern is creative, I agree, but isn't it a bit too hard? - haha, any idea

01:04:097 (64097|3,64097|2) - Delete and add 1/4 triplet on 01:03:933 - feels more consistent - ignoring main piano sounds is terrible on that measure line
01:09:537 - Wow, this pattern is good :O - but it's hard little
01:16:790 (76790|3,76790|1) - 1/2 earlier? - fixed . rip piano
01:22:064 (82064|0,82064|6) - ^ ^
01:27:339 (87339|6,87339|5) - ^ ^
01:32:614 (92614|2,92614|4) - ^ ^
01:34:757 (94757|3) - Remove, let me explain why: This will make this more unique because it'll create sense of increasing speed. What I mean is that will make gaps between 01:34:592 (94592|6,94592|5,94922|1,95251|2) - 1/1, gaps between 01:35:251 (95251|2,95416|4,95581|6) - 1/2 and then 1/4, so a little speed up thing. If you don't accept it, add at 01:35:086 - for consistency - agreed and add a note snare to more consistency

01:57:009 (117009|3) - Change into 1/1 LN, fits better for shuffle sound fixed

02:31:954 - Missed note - officially, ignoring on relaxing part is good way in middle parts ( refer from official notecharts )
02:32:943 - ^
02:33:273 - ^
02:34:592 - Add
02:35:251 - ^
02:35:910 - ^ (possibly all three as 765 or 654 stair)
02:42:338 and 02:42:997 - Why the empty spots? Beat is constant 1/2 - re-add back xD

[Hyper]

Consider raising OD to 7,8 since this diff has 3% LN ratio
Same thing as Normal, kiais pls

00:24:867 - Add at 7th (pitch change) - add on 4
00:28:493 - Add at 3rd (maybe?) - added on 5
00:29:317 - Add at 5th no
00:35:416 - Add at 1st (pitch again) on 4
Not going to repeat myself for similar cases, so just see what I mean and look for these lol - repeated part, k fixed
00:52:147 - Add for that weird liquid (wtf) sound - not following the liquid lol sound
00:58:987 - & 00:59:317 - Consider turning one of notes into 1/1 LN at both points - bad point here, sorry
01:09:042 (69042|0) - Move to 4th, awkward with 1/6 stair -move
01:13:493 - Add at 4th? for instrument note?
01:13:987 - ^ ^
01:27:174 - You were adding 3 noters for this earlier if I'm not mistaken 01:26:680 - actually i missing cymbal here
01:30:636 - ^ - nope -------------------
01:31:130 - ^ - ^
01:31:955 - ^ - ^
01:32:449 - ^ (and other similar cases if I missed something) ^
01:46:048 - Stream continues (it's faster here, but that doesn't mean that you should ignore it, in fact I would layer it instead of chords, but it's your map, so you decide) - merged in to 1 Hold
01:46:213 - ^ ^
01:51:735 - Add for crash 01:51:735 (111735|3) - already
01:57:009 - 0,7x SV here and 1,0x at 01:57:339 - makes it very neat for shuffle effect - added SV bumps/gimmicks
01:59:647 - I don't think those 91 bpm timing points are needed, but whatever, make this 1,5x SV, it's too slow for Hyper -remove BPM will get conflict with other mode contest
02:20:745 - 1,75x here - i prefer used 3/4 speed from original BPM = 136.5 BPM speed 01:59:647 - added x1.75 sv here to make overall diff make same speed on final
02:31:130 (151130|2) - I hear that sound but it's very faint and on diffrent pitch. Either delete, move to 7th, or just keep for pattern (I quite like it in terms of playing, but pointing out technical stuff) 02:54:865 - how about this note? well it's same sound anyway
02:42:503 - Missed note for beat? Ignore if intentional - i dont get it. its already has a kick :/
02:54:206 (174206|0) - Make this a 1/1 LN? - both is better.
03:04:261 - Add for crash there's no cymbal sound and incorrect instrument
03:09:701 - Add at 6th oh lol missing note, added
03:12:338 - Add at 4th ^
03:20:580 (200580|4,200909|0) - Turn both into LNs maybe? maybe no
03:21:404 - Personal suggestion: It would feel a lot nicer if you would add 1 note to each 1/2 before 1/4 stream because beat is intense here for duplicate kick looks okay, but when face on the next measure (1/4) not constant sound as double kick

[Another]
HP 8,3? It's quite spammable now -an event map should not drain too high, i guess
Also Gap between this and Hyper is 2 stars, it's unrankable, though I don't really know if this contest focuses on that rule - im not sure about that. but 2.0 star gap i can say it's unrankable. i ask loctav for that
Will edit post with mod tomorrow, I don't have time now
Again, a lot of AIMod stuff (can't screen, puush is hating me)
Same thing as Normal, kiais pls

00:24:042 - Almost no LNs at this section and when you do make an LN (00:28:328 (28328|6) - ) it's on already dying out sounds lol- added some
00:34:922 - ^- ^
00:43:328 - Add at 1st and Ctrl+H 00:43:493 (43493|0,43493|2,43658|6,43658|4,43740|2,43987|6,43987|1,43987|4,44152|0,44152|2) - nope
01:34:592 - Personal suggestion: Make this a double stream, strong beats really deserve it (Unless you're going for nerfs) - will increase the Star may unrankable with gap. yes i gonna nerf some more
01:40:691 - Add at 7th, same sound as 01:40:361 - deleted unknown note there.
01:41:020 & 01:41:185 - Not making 3-chords here? Generally I see that you're not really mapping that sound as 3 noters so either ake them all 3-noters or nerf 01:40:361 - to 2 - fixed removed 1 note every have 2 note with non-hitsound (except before 01:38:383 - )
01:45:801 - Isn't piano 1/6 here? remake 1/6 piano,
01:46:130 - ^ ^
02:22:229 - Missing note? - Hyper focus on synth, but Another focus on drum/clap and piano
02:23:053 - ^ ^
02:23:383 - I expected 1/4 stair for those snare/hithat (?) sounds, 1234 would look nice ^ i ignore synth sound here for Another diff because special reason
Suggestions above apply to the whole slowjam part ^
02:31:295 - You can start speeding up the SV from here, like 1,6x here, 1,7x on next crash (02:33:932 - ), 02:36:570 - 1,8 on next (02:36:570 - ) and so on, so it's less sudden speedup when bpm changes. Will save a lot of breaks on sightread - great idea, ill add x1.75 on middle part of x1.50
02:44:151 - Add at 4th, or just use it for the crash - already?
03:04:673 (184673|5) - Isn't this a ghost note? Imo 03:04:591 (184591|6) - should be 1/4 longer to express that sound, but what I'd do is something diffrent (starting from 03:04:591 - ) : remove ghost note and nerf-ed on this part

03:16:129 - Accent with one more note? agreed
03:45:140 - Raise SV to at least 1,75x , stream at 03:47:118 - is unreadable on that sort of speed - removed several notes on front part, but remain current sv

Congratz on winning Pew! o/ Good luck! - i just lol'd

MMzz wrote:

Star rating for taiko and ctb still isn't as polished as osu! or mania.

1. 00:27:824 (3,4,5) - The momentum moving forward here is kinda halted by the stack pattern here. Maybe try to offset the stack shortly so the play continues moving forward smoothly (something like 0.3x-0.5x)
2. 01:09:032 (6) - The rhythm and play can really benefit from a circle stack instead of a repeat slider imo. There some nice sounds you can make use of. Also players have been accustomed to the 1/4 play you have been building up so far in this section, so a circle stack can feel more natural here
3. 01:21:890 (4,5) - I think it would be best if you follow your general rhythm scheme as before and use something like this rhythm. Fits your hitsounding better
   
4. 01:36:395 (3,4,5,6) - The doubles were a bit awkward here. I think this would better fit as a stream due to the rhythm presented by the song. You can have a cool blanket stream on 01:36:890 (7) - 's slider end!
5. 02:02:274 - There is a sound here at the end of this spinner you can have a hitsound to accent. Maybe try a soft whistle or something. You can do this for the rest of the diffs too
6. 02:56:834 (3,4,5,6) - This forward moving 1/4 circle/slider pattern is a bit jerky and forced in regards to the way you used flow previously I suggest you try something like this, relying on the slider leniency to provide a more interesting and smoother flowing play
   
   rough example

   You can also ctrl+g the second slider in my example
7. 03:12:493 (3,6) - 3's hitburst makes it hard to notice 6 and follow through into 03:13:152 (7) - . Looks very cluttered imo, maybe try a circle pattern instead?

Lust wrote:

Now that this has been updated, here are some final thoughts that I had buzzing around for awhile

[Insane]

1. 00:27:824 (3,4,5) - The momentum moving forward here is kinda halted by the stack pattern here. Maybe try to offset the stack shortly so the play continues moving forward smoothly (something like 0.3x-0.5x)
   Stacked notes are very good to me!
2. 01:09:032 (6) - The rhythm and play can really benefit from a circle stack instead of a repeat slider imo. There some nice sounds you can make use of. Also players have been accustomed to the 1/4 play you have been building up so far in this section, so a circle stack can feel more natural here
   I don't like the 1/6 circles. It comes suddenly, so cause the mistake for a players. Therefore i used the repeat slider.
3. 01:21:890 (4,5) - I think it would be best if you follow your general rhythm scheme as before and use something like this rhythm. Fits your hitsounding better
   I like the rhythm pattern of now, and it will follow this sound (01:22:054).
   
4. 01:36:395 (3,4,5,6) - The doubles were a bit awkward here. I think this would better fit as a stream due to the rhythm presented by the song. You can have a cool blanket stream on 01:36:890 (7) - 's slider end!
   Oh really? I don't feel so... this looks good!
5. 02:02:274 - There is a sound here at the end of this spinner you can have a hitsound to accent. Maybe try a soft whistle or something. You can do this for the rest of the diffs too
   Added whistle, but i think it didn't fit. Therefore removed it.
6. 02:56:834 (3,4,5,6) - This forward moving 1/4 circle/slider pattern is a bit jerky and forced in regards to the way you used flow previously I suggest you try something like this, relying on the slider leniency to provide a more interesting and smoother flowing play
   okay!
   
   rough example

   You can also ctrl+g the second slider in my example
7. 03:12:493 (3,6) - 3's hitburst makes it hard to notice 6 and follow through into 03:13:152 (7) - . Looks very cluttered imo, maybe try a circle pattern instead?
   Changed to circle pattern!

Lets get this moving, finally

Loctav wrote:

Revived and updated.

@ExPew : there are missing hitsounds files you never gave me. Currently only present: D_Clap.wav, D_Snare.wav, Kick.wav - you use some Snare.wav which I do not have. Please recheck everything and hand me your entire set of hitsounds again (not only the missing ones).

Whenever this stuff with ExPew is fixed, I am going to bubble this.