1. Bloodlust (5,52 stars, 795 notes)
2. Easy (1,83 stars, 206 notes)
3. Hard (3,55 stars, 581 notes)
4. Insanity (4,83 stars, 708 notes)
5. Normal (2,34 stars, 280 notes)

TheSimilier wrote:

I am just a little bit sorry that i can't bring in some more constructive comments since i don't know much about mapping. Anyway, keep the good work up.

Fantastica wrote:

Hey LIAR! :v Amazing song and storyboard :3

first I want to say, I'm bad on english T.T and I'm not too good on modding T.T
Hi~~ here's for m4m queue

General

1. Unherited timing points (Normal) - (Hard, Insane) These are fine since they don't affect gameplay at all
2. 01:18:757 missing lyrics storyboard what do you mean? I can see them o.o
3. 02:51:512 missing lyrics storyboard same o.o

Normal

1. 00:38:748 (AiMod) Object end isn't snapped fixed
2. 00:43:096 Slider make it unsnapped because of the unherited timing point at 00:43:402 , make it 3 circle notes at 00:43:096 , 00:43:691, 00:44:271fixed
3. 01:06:879 (Aimod) object end isn't snapped deleted return and added note, hope its fine
4. 01:37:035 (Aimod) object end isn't snapped. That make the hitclap late fixed
5. 01:39:339 put hitclap and remove hitwhistle, 01:39:630 put hitwhistle remove hitclap, 01:39:921 put hitclap remove hitwhistle, 01:40:503 put hitclap at start silder and at end slider, then remove hitwhistle at end of slider fixed
6. 01:05:435 (AiMod) kiai isn't snapped

Hard

1. 01:06:739 (Aimod) Object End isn't snapped
2. 01:08:042 IMO... Change to [img]puu.sh/dAtOf/49f385771a.jpg[/img]

done

Insane

1. Check your Aimod =="
   [img]puu.sh/dAuPv/1c62f9820a.jpg[/img] yeah lol i knew there were lots of those but i was so lazy, fixed

I'm really enjoy to mod this mapset because I like the song :3
Hope it's gonna ranked :3

Snepif wrote:

Fantastica wrote:

General

1. 01:18:757 missing lyrics storyboard what do you mean? I can see them o.o
2. 02:51:512 missing lyrics storyboard same o.o

thanks will mod yours

Snepif wrote:

Fantastica wrote:

1. 01:18:757 missing lyrics storyboard what do you mean? I can see them o.o
2. 02:51:512 missing lyrics storyboard same o.o

SPOILER

52,244,14435,6,0,P|171:349|317:304,1,315.000012016297,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,244,16463,1,2,0:0:0:0:
368,160,16753,6,0,B|268:84|192:260|72:156,1,315.000012016297,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,76,18782,1,2,0:0:0:0:
164,48,19072,6,0,L|156:372,1,315.000012016297,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

maybe something like this?

SPOILER

Your Good Self wrote:

M4M from your queue

[General]
Not sure if this difficulty spread is rankable. Hard to Insane is a jump from 3.41 to 5.46 stars, skipping the Insane difficulty range entirely. Insane should be renamed Expert/Extra, then get another Insane that's ~4-5 stars (by GD or otherwise). yeaaah i imagined ppl would point that out. if i get one or two more suggestions on that ill map it T_T

Also getting this problem. I think it could be something to do with non-alphanumeric filenames. could it be an aibat/aimod bug? check the map while on editor and tell me if you see the lyrics at those times. If they are there, I won't change anything, since it'd mean it's an aimod bug. I asked some people and they see 'em.


[Easy]
00:16:753 (1,1) - Overlap doesn't look good. And I think it'll look better if the second slider went through the middle of the arc of the first. It'll involve shifting the earlier notes a little, so I'll just give some screenshots and code as suggestions. yep i did this diff in an hour last night at like 2 AM so idk why I did this overlap. fixed

SPOILER

52,244,14435,6,0,P|171:349|317:304,1,315.000012016297,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,244,16463,1,2,0:0:0:0:
368,160,16753,6,0,B|268:84|192:260|72:156,1,315.000012016297,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,76,18782,1,2,0:0:0:0:
164,48,19072,6,0,L|156:372,1,315.000012016297,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

00:29:217 (3) - Flow can be better here, 180° backwards is a bit sharp. Also you can map the downbeat 00:30:666 changed the slider a beat but I won't map that downbeat. I'm following the vocals here atm

maybe something like this?

01:08:042 (2,2) - Small overlap fixed
01:12:390 (1,1) - Recovery time might be a bit short? t/241019 I know it's not a rule yet but just in case. The thing is this diff is mapped as if it was 103-104 bpm, instead of 206-208 like the others, so that rule errr.. it applies for 160 bpm and this is a bit less, idk, we'll see, not changing yet
02:59:346 (1,1) - Are double spinners considered readable for an Easy? :/ sure why not


[Normal]
It looks like some a lot of stuff is unsnapped, especially the beginning. Also some sliders don't have the right SV, so they go out of snap too. oooh what happened here is that I modified the SV accidentaly in the .osu, fixed lmao.

00:41:069 (2,1) - That's a pretty big jump this is DS'ed tho
01:00:785 (1,2) - ^ fixed

00:43:691 (4,1,2) - the heck?
00:47:749 (4,1,2,3) - ^ ok there's obviously something wrong with the SV multipliers yeah that was embarrasing, accidentaly overwrote the code in the .osu, fixed lmao

01:39:921 (3) - Looks like the SV multiplier should have been 1.00x, idk why it's 0.85x

01:39:921 (3,4) - Flow will be better if you curved (3) the other way i dont like the flow it creates with the previous notes 1 and 2 though

SPOILER

02:33:554 (1,3) - Stack? done
03:06:013 (1) - Could use a different slider shape here. Maybe a loop? i like it :c

Not much to point out because of all the unsnapped stuff D: yeah that was embarrassing as fuck


[Hard]
00:14:579 (2,3) - Blanket can be better. Look from 00:14:924 yes
00:34:713 - Add 1 beat slider? nope
00:50:938 (8) - Curve a bit to the left.why? it plays well like this. I don't mean to follow the previous notes shape
01:42:532 (1) - A simple 3-point slider will look neater that is only true cause i suck at slider shapes... fixed q.q
01:57:886 (7) - Would prefer better flow around here. wanted to make it jumpy. play at and you'll see
02:01:658 (5,6) - Parallel sliders could be more parallel. Make sure it's still parallel with 02:02:528 (7,8,9) after fixing yes
02:15:004 (1) - It looks ugly scrunched up like that. I think a straight slider is good enough. uhh i'll decline this one. wanted to make a slow and stretched slider that felt like a "stop" there
02:54:998 (5,6) - Blanket can be better. Look from 02:55:360 done
03:17:610 (1) - Remove the curve ye

[Insane]
A bit hard to play/mod for a low-rank player like me, but I'll try my best.

02:22:830 - You sure love bookmarks lol did it for the sb xD

00:51:517 (1) - Should bounce on the white tick. And maybe have a better blanket around 00:50:648 (7) while you're at it. no it should not. curved it a bit more for the blanket but remember at 9.2 that blanket is barely noticeable. these are things you only notice at the editor, and the map is for playing.
01:42:532 (1) - ^ nope

01:03:116 (1,2,3,4,5) - You can form a more perfect regular pentagon with this. it is not my intention
01:05:435 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ (only (5) is grossly out of place though) again, it is not my intention to have a perfect star
01:59:049 (2,4) - Blanket can be better. Look from 01:58:868 done
02:43:409 (4,6) - Small overlap at ar 9.2 that is not noticeable nor does it affect gameplay.


Hope my mod helped. Good luck!

Alex Li wrote:

from paper modding team

General

is this for ranked? if it is, change the insane to extra and add a insane diff plz yes I will do that
aimod plz

Easy

1. 01:42:532 (3,2) - its great if u dont overlap here changed
2. 01:05:435 (1,2) - fix blanket done

Normal

1. did u follow the ds rule... because a see alot of ds troble in this diff, fine if u are not going for rank fixed
2. 00:14:435 (1) - unsnap fixed
3. 00:14:531 - u dont change sv like that in normal not sure what you mean but I removed almost all SV changes except for the intro
4. 01:51:818 (1,2) - weird rhythm fixed

Hard

1. OMG TIS HARD IS FREAKING AWESOME. im shooting a star just because this hard lol thaaanks :3

Insane

1. 01:14:700 (1,2,3,4) - its better to do a 1243 to have a better flow fixed
2. 01:59:049 (2,4) - blanket

gj

tutuhaha wrote:

take place first
well, who give you those timing point？
actually I only use one ╮(╯▽╰)╭
http://puu.sh/dEEUB/7f713235ca.rar

-Famous- wrote:

M4M request from my Queue

General

1. Check AiMod.
2. AiMod: Try to remove those errors. You should do that. Yeah it's just that some of them have to wait (the filesize for example til the SB gets fixed so I can check that).
3. AiMod: Fix the uninherited timing points. I'd love to know which are the ones that are a problem, since I checked and still don't know, and AiMod doesn't specify anything.

Easy

1. AR 4 at easy? Could be a little bit hard for beginners. You suggest to decrease it? Lower AR is harder to play, like, nobody on earth would be able to play AR1 for instance
2. 00:24:579 (3) - Improve blanket. Move the last slider point 1 grid right. done
3. 00:36:162 (1) - Move that circle to x:432 - y:72 to keep the flow. done
4. 00:41:938 (3) - Spacing to 00:41:069 (2) is different than to 00:42:243 (1). done
5. 01:03:116 (4) - It looks so unfitting. Sorta changed
6. 01:15:279 (1) - Why not blanket with 01:17:598 (3)? While playing a newbie might don't even realize that, but that looks a bit better imo. They are so separated that this blanket is meaningless outside of the editor. Remember notes don't last that long on the playfield after hitting them, while in the editor they turn grey for a moment.
7. 01:17:598 (3) - You could make a better blanket to 01:16:439 (2).done
8. 01:21:089 (6) - If you look closely, the distance is a little bit different. done
9. 01:39:921 (3,4) - ^done
10. 01:41:367 (1,2) - ^ done
11. 01:47:180 (2,3,4) - Suggestion: blanket? But I guess it's hard to read for a newbie then. Ehhh done anyway
12. 01:52:688 (2) - Move that circle one grid left, that it keeps the spacing.done

Normal

1. 00:14:435 (1,2) - Spacing is different.done
2. 00:19:507 (2) - No stack with 00:18:492 (5,6)? done
3. 00:23:130 (5) - Spacing is different.done
4. 00:56:154 (1,2) - I don't know, that could be confuse some normal player. But I guess it's okay. The whole diff is like this
5. 01:20:510 (4,5,6) - That also could confuse normal player. what o.o
6. 01:37:311 (6) - Better blanket. Move the last slider point one grid left. done
7. 01:41:076 (5) - Spacing is different. done
8. 01:53:557 (4) - Blanket. done
9. 02:08:189 (2) - Blanket? nah
10. 02:26:018 (4) - Move that slider to x:244 - y:240 to keep the flow. Then move 02:26:598 (5) 1 grid up and right (x:60 - y:216). done something simillar
11. 02:32:395 (2,1) - Better stack.done
12. 02:35:583 (6,1) - ^ done
13. 02:40:511 (1) - Move that circle to x:320 - y:120 to keep the flow. done
14. 02:49:177 (5) - Move that circle one grid up. done
15. 02:57:317 (3) - Blanket. done
16. 03:03:694 (1,1) - Stack. They are not unstacked on purpose. Easier to read.
17. 03:04:853 (2,2) - ^ same

Hard

1. 00:14:579 (2) - Blanket. done
2. 00:17:768 (4,5) - ^ done
3. 00:19:652 (3) - ^done
4. 00:43:096 (4) - This slow down is very suddenly. You also can't read the slow down, because it's as long as 00:42:822 (3). Try to find a way to show the slow down. Added new combo
5. 00:47:750 (4) - ^ done
6. 00:50:069 (4) - Improve that blanket. done
7. 01:14:129 (1,2) - I see many combo breaks there. Why
8. 01:20:207 (2) - Improve blanket. done
9. 01:23:686 (5,1,2,3) - A little bit confusing. Changed
10. 01:45:869 (6) - Improve blanket.done
11. 01:57:453 (6) - ^ done
12. 02:05:139 (1,2) - Already said above. I see nothing weird with those sliders
13. 02:27:467 (1,2,3,4) - Blanket. Ehh they are ok
14. 02:34:424 (4) - Improve blanket.done
15. 02:38:482 (1) - ^done
16. 02:38:772 (2) - ^done
17. 02:48:456 (6) - Blanket can be improved. done
18. 02:55:433 (6) - ^ done
19. 02:55:868 (7) - ^ Not intended to be a blanket
20. 03:04:556 (4) - Spacing.done

Insanity

1. 00:26:898 (1) - Improve blanket. done
2. 00:41:933 (1,2,1) - This stream is hard to read. Changed
3. 00:50:069 (4) - Improve blanket. done
4. 01:13:115 (6,7) - Stream spacing is different. I see why you did that, but that doesn't really matter. Also the NC isn't necessary. You didn't do both at that stream 02:03:835 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) too.that was an accident
5. 01:19:192 (1) - Improve blanket.done
6. 01:24:252 (2) - ^done
7. 01:33:692 (3) - ^done
8. 01:39:198 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Really hard to read. I disagree
9. 02:11:229 (6) - Improve blanket. done
10. 02:25:148 (1) - ^

Bloodlust

1. 00:19:507 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Stack? done
2. 00:29:797 (5) - Blanket. done
3. 01:14:129 (1) - ^ nope
4. 01:15:279 (5) - Improve blanket. done
5. 01:36:439 (5) - ^ done
6. 01:37:602 (2) - Move that slider 2 grid down to keep the flow.done
7. 01:59:342 (4) - Improve blanket.done
8. 02:00:502 (1) - ^ it is already fine
9. 02:57:317 (3) - ^ done

Much work. Finally done! I like that song. I really enjoyed modding this map. Good luck!~ :3

tutuhaha wrote:

Kind of weird that you still use SV change in easy and normal. Removed SV changes in Easy. But on Normal they are really smooth and not all-of-a-sudden, so I don't think they are a problem. They don't change the way the player plays the map at all, it just adds some more atmosphere. They are like from 1 to 0.85 at most, and spacing doesn't change, so it is not an issue I believe.
actually we only use one sv in low diff right？Unless it's unrankeable i'll keep it this way. There's no logic to not do so.
for all diff
add clap at 02:15:293 I think a whistle is more suitable though.


[Easy]
00:27:188 (5) - I suggest end at 00:27:768 - okii
00:50:938 (3) - clap okii
00:56:154 (2) - NC should begin here I thinkokii

also remapped this diff to make it easier
[Normal]
01:02:536 (4,5,6) - same space, at least make them looks like same okii fixed
01:14:700 (1) - move to here okii
01:35:579 (1,2) - too hard in Normal Fixed
01:52:977 (3,5) - too close fixed
stop here, well I still think you should use the same sv on normal and easy diff, also I suggest use the CS3 ....at least CS3.5 Okay increased circle size. I will remove SV changes in Easy diff, but not in this one. I think they don't add ANY difficulty while playing, but we will see what the gods BATS say.
also remapped this diff to make it easier

[Hard]
00:25:739 (6,7) - dont overlap err why not? added new combo for readability
00:30:811 (x) - add note ok
01:26:436 (1,2) - 01:27:019 (3,4,5,6) - same space? ahh?
01:49:196 (6) - use whislte instead clap ok
02:01:081 (1) - jump should begin here what jump?
02:06:309 (5,6,7) - same space ok
.....well, I dont really like this hard, it is uncomfortable to play for me .This diff requires listening to the music, feeling the drums, and singletapping OR alternating well. If you fail at any of these you fail at my Hard. Sorry it's not your typical brainless 1/2s Hard, which is no challenge for Hard players and after a week or two they move into insanes even though they fail at the, just because they are fun to play. This diff actually requires some musical sense. I wouldn't use the word uncomfortable here, since the flow is pretty good, but rather, that you can't singletap or alternate, or understeand its rhythm (which is always pretty constant, no real "surprises". Anyway it's your opinion and you can find it uncomfortable though, that's fine :3

[Insane]
01:00:924 (x) - add note？nope :c
01:13:115 (6,7) - well.........good idea but I dont like it at all Not sure if you mean the fact that there is a stream or the fact that I created a not-so-hard stream for this diff o:
02:00:936 (3) - because you following the music at first, so is kind of weird that you change to following vocal here (like miss clap on white line Lol there is no clap there at the big white line. But you are right, changed and added whistle in the big white line
02:04:052 (x) - there should has rhythm Don't wanna make it harder and when playing it doesn't feel like there is a note missing there because it almost sounds like my notes are the real stream in the music. Also consistency with the other kiais
02:50:436 (x) - note same baby
02:50:436 (6) - weird..maybe just add a whistle There is no note there atm. If people complain about it I'll change it. Don't really wanna do it

[Bloodlust]
00:27:188 (2) - ctrl+g yess
00:30:811 (x) - suggest add note here yess
00:32:840 (x) - ^ because there are the same rhythm with 00:37:309 (7,1,2) - I don't think that sounds good
00:43:096 (4) - NC yess
01:05:435 (1,2,3,4,5) - try to make it more like a pentagon it was not my intention to make it star-shaped but ok
01:50:511 (7,1,2,3,4) - ^ That would be confusing because the space from 7 to 1 is 1/1
02:05:429 (2) - ctrl+g yess
02:10:939 (6,7) - ctrl+g Nope
02:14:142 (3,4) - weird if you lose this rhythm Why? added nc just for readability
02:53:404 (7,8,9,1,2) - pentagon? yess
03:13:540 (3,4) - hitsound ..........just weird at all The drummer makes.. sort of a "mistake" there. He makes a snare beat at a blue tick, and it would be really crappy if I map it that way...
03:17:308 (5) - clap yess
03:19:186 (1) - clap Hmmm no :C
no more blanket mod （○｀ 3′○）
I still think one red line enough.
better go find someone (Bat) to check it if you still disagree for me