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Dj Verstarker - Darkness

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AdRon Zh3Ro
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AdRon Zh3Ro
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on domingo, 6 de junho de 2010 at 00:32:07

Artist: Dj Verstarker
Title: Darkness
Tags: Techno Hard Style
BPM: 150,01
Filesize: 5967kb
Play Time: 02:17
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy Style (2,66 stars, 128 notes)
  2. Insane Style (4,9 stars, 497 notes)
  3. Normal Style (4,52 stars, 290 notes)
Download: Dj Verstarker - Darkness
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Enjoy

If you downloaded before 22 march, please re-download it.
Last edited by AdRon Zh3Ro , edited 96 times in total.
Leorda
4,416 posts
Joined June 2009
Leorda
Oi!

[Normal Style]
There's some spacing that's makes me confusing
00:29:048 (2) - I think this slider is ugly.....
00:35:447 (4) - ^
01:11:642 (3) - This slider is hidden IMO
01:42:038 (6) - ^

[Hard]
01:30:040 (1) - Unrankable slider LOL (Don't let slider overlap themself, that cause everyone is confusing)
01:30:640 (3) - ^
02:06:235 (4) - This circle is hidden IMO
02:09:434 (8) - ^
04:21:017 (1) - Unrankable slider LOL (Don't let slider overlap themself, that cause everyone is confusing)
04:21:417 (2) - ^
04:21:817 (3) - ^
04:22:217 (4) - ^
04:22:617 (5) - ^
04:23:017 (6) - ^
04:23:417 (7) - ^

Nice song
STAR
AdRon Zh3Ro
900 posts
Joined August 2009
Topic Starter
AdRon Zh3Ro
The sliders i liked the most you wanna take away from me :'(

Done.
Niva
Global Moderator
3,187 posts
Joined November 2009
Niva
-General-
I don't think very good song is a decent tag.

-Normal Style-
01:16:641 (7) - Finish at the end?

-Hard Style-
00:58:644 (2) - Make it more symmetrical
01:21:841 (1) - Why here? I think it would be better if placed in the center :)
01:30:040 (combo streak) - Since you've started with 90 degrees slider curve, I think it would be better if all sliders in the streak have a 90 degrees curve.

14 millions score... and 21 millions score with all the mods on... *stars*
iDwarf
1,202 posts
Joined February 2010
iDwarf
~Overall~
  1. "very good song" tags are odd. Delete them
  2. I suggest adding 3rd combo color (Maybe white?)
  3. Delete .osb file and do full submit
  4. I suggest offset: 6657
  5. Your Normal difficulty is too hard to be "Normal" Try to make it easier. (You should have 3,50 Star Rating)
~Normal Style~
  1. 00:40:152 (4) - This is unrankable. | Overlayed slider.
  2. 00:46:551 (4) - ^
  3. 00:54:650 (7) - New Combo
  4. 00:58:250 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Stack them properly.

Star~
xierbaliti
osu! Alumni
1,009 posts
Joined August 2008
xierbaliti
Dj Verstarker - Darkness is the song's artist&title not source I think._.
BTW you need an easier diff.

-Normal-
00:40:146 (4) - 00:46:545 (4) - 01:23:341 (4) - so strange slider. change them please.
01:21:841 (1) - Add finish here.
01:26:640 (8) - ^
01:29:840 (8) - ^
01:33:039 (8) - ^
01:36:239 (9) - ^
01:39:438 (8) - ^
01:42:638 (8) - ^
01:49:237 (1) - ^ Volume 70%~80% here.
AdRon Zh3Ro
900 posts
Joined August 2009
Topic Starter
AdRon Zh3Ro
All done.

About sorce and tag, i changed, need to upload.
James2250
osu! Alumni
4,059 posts
Joined July 2008
James2250
delete osb file in folder and do full submit
need more hitsounds in general

Easy:
not a fan of all the spinners at the beginning..
01:04:249 (7,1) - switch new combo
01:05:049 (2) - stack endpoint on 1?
01:19:847 - add notes or put break
from 01:23:047 (2) to 01:48:643 (8) is very repetitive..even for an easy, try and map it in different ways

Normal:
I would raise hp drain/overall so they are higher than easy
00:25:854 (1,2,3,4) - make these look nicer.. the first 1 is ok but the rest just seem random..try and put some symmetry into them (and don't have them overlap like 2)
00:57:850 (8,1) -switch new combo
01:07:449 (9,1) - ^
01:10:648 (8,1) - ^
^ I think that whole area could be made more interesting as it repeats alot..
01:23:347 (4) - don't have slider like this..its too hard to see if its a slider or not
01:26:646 (8,1) - switch new combo
01:29:846 (8,1) - ^
01:33:045 (8,1) - ^
01:36:245 (9,1) - ^
01:39:444 (8,1) - ^
Ending is way too repetitive.. need some more creativity to make the map more interesting

Hard:
lower audio on hitsounds by 4 or 5 ticks (and do this on all difficulties when you add more to normal/easy)
combo's seem kinda random..
some sliders in this difficulty could look better such as 00:53:051 (5) and 00:55:050 (5)..take a look through and see what you can do
00:29:054 (1) - move 1 tiny grid right to mirror other combo
00:35:453 (1) - move 1 tiny grid down to mirror other combo
00:53:850 (1) - remove new combo
00:54:650 (9) - new combo
00:56:250 (1) - remove new combo
00:57:850 (8) - new combo
00:58:250 (1) - remove new combo
01:01:049 (8) - new combo
01:01:449 (1) - remove new combo
01:04:249 (4,1) - switch new combo
01:07:449 (12,1) - ^
01:13:848 (11,1) - ^
01:17:847 (1,1,1,1,1) - spread these out
01:29:846 (12,1) - switch new combo
01:33:045 (5,1) - ^
01:36:245 (12,1) - ^
01:42:644 (5,1) - ^
02:00:242 (1,2,3,4,5) - spacing
02:08:241 (5) - new combo
02:13:040 (6) - ^
03:04:233 (12,1) - switch new combo
im sure I don't need to keep listing the same combo things as you can continue the pattern to the end of the map
almost this entire map is using the same typing of patterns..basically same comment as other two difficulties
unless you are trying to get this approved Hard is too long (3:30 is about the max) and the score is too big

*star*
AdRon Zh3Ro
900 posts
Joined August 2009
Topic Starter
AdRon Zh3Ro
Hard done. I'll do easy/normal later.
AdRon Zh3Ro
900 posts
Joined August 2009
Topic Starter
AdRon Zh3Ro
* If the next ones that mod my beatmap CAN send the beatmap with the errors fixed, i'll be glad.
(College=No time to play)
Vanmonky
986 posts
Joined June 2009
Vanmonky
As your request.

Read this first for the icon explanation.
- [?] Asking for a second thought.
- [!] Fatal error. You have to fix this for sure.
- [No icon] Only a suggestion.

[General]
1. I doubt the timing.
2. Add source and tags.
3. Crop the useless part of song.

[Easy Style]
-- Turn the volume down some level.
-- The distance is too big for easy diff. Make it smaller then re-map this diff.
-- The slider velocity is too fast. Lower it down.
-- Add some hitsounds.
01:17:447 - Add break here.

[Normal Style]
-- Turn the volume down some level.
-- Add some hitsounds.
00:29:054 (2) - I think this is overlapping, even distracting. Change it for sure. [!]
01:24:846 (4,5,6) - Confusing. Too crowded.
01:28:646 (5,6,7,8) - ^
01:30:446 (2,3,4) - ^
01:32:845 (7,8,1,2) - ^

[Hard Style]
00:25:854 (1) - Honestly, I like this slider and it should end on 00:28:654.
00:29:054 (1) - Is such this slider rankable if it ends on 00:31:853?
00:32:253 (1) - Too long slider but I love it if ends on 00:35:053.
00:35:453 (1) - Yes, should end on 00:38:253.
00:38:452 - Make the next notes to normal hitsound from this point.
Star.

adron zhero wrote:

* If the next ones that mod my beatmap CAN send the beatmap with the errors fixed, i'll be glad.
(College=No time to play)
No need to rush. Finish your busy work first, and then when you have free time, come to osu!.
AdRon Zh3Ro
900 posts
Joined August 2009
Topic Starter
AdRon Zh3Ro
Done
Natteke
6,538 posts
Joined August 2009
Natteke
Irc modded.
GoLiMaR_old
GoLiMaR_old
Don't really like sliders in all diffs

Easy:
Seems fine

Normal:
01:42:636 (9) - new combo starts here?
01:46:235 (6) - new combo?

Also, can suggest using more hitsounds in both diffs.

Hard:
This difficulty looks very messy. Can't say I like it. This is just mine opininon.
Anyway, good luck with it!
Kytoxid
osu! Alumni
1,369 posts
Joined April 2009
Kytoxid
[General]

BPM 150.000, offset 6,619 sounds better imo.
Delete the .osb.
Capitalize DJ in the artist?
Tags?
Why "style"? Why not just "Easy", etc...? :P
Your preview point isn't actually part of Easy/Normal...
Combos felt weird in all diffs.

[Easy Style]

00:38:644 (1) - The song really only starts here; remove the spinners before it, they're not particularly fun to play. In fact, you could start it as late as 00:51:443 (1).
01:09:861 - Lack of a note here is weird.
01:17:839 - Add a break?
01:17:439 - Unused timing section.
01:21:339 - Unused timing section.
01:36:637 (1) - Combos are awfully long in this section.

I dunno, even for an Easy, this feels quite boring. Maybe it's just that I don't like the song too much.

[Normal Style]

OD feels too low.

00:29:046 (2) - This looks terrible.
00:51:443 (1) - Consider just starting here.
01:10:440 (7,1,2) - Very hard to read.
01:21:839 (1,2,3,4) - Unreadable.
01:23:638 (1) - I didn't really like the use of notes and repeats in this section; it feels like they were placed randomly to follow a constant 1/2 pattern rather than follow some aspect of the music. It feels repetitive, just how long it is, too.
01:50:835 - Unused timing section.

[Hard Style]

Those fast sliders felt weird, especially ones that start on red ticks and end on white.

00:51:443 (1) - Once again, just start it here. The kicksliders at the beginning don't really fit, and the high OD + no bass after it is quite hard to play. It would also cut your score to below 10m, which is always good.
01:21:839 (1,1,2,3,4,1) - Err, this placement is weird.
01:26:238 (10,11,12) - Blah.
01:42:236 (10,11,12,13,14) - I know some people don't like zig-zag sliders.
02:00:234 (1,2,3,4,5) - Not readable at all.
03:00:226 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Weird pattern again.
03:07:025 (14,15,16,17,18) - Really don't like this formation, and don't like combos going so high. The twisty formations after this one aren't cool either.

Good luck!
Bittersweet
2,031 posts
Joined February 2010
Bittersweet
Mapa legal :3

Sinceramente, não tenho nenhuma sugestão pra dar, pq a meu ver não tem nada errado, então espero que os outros possam te ajudar melhor ^^ (pq eles sempre acham XD questão de costume, acho)

Enfim, estrelinha procê :*


ps.: música legal, bela escolha ^^
AdRon Zh3Ro
900 posts
Joined August 2009
Topic Starter
AdRon Zh3Ro
Eles sempre acham algo errado...

Mas obrigado :)
Blazer27
7 posts
Joined February 2010
Blazer27
It's an awesome beatmap! Enjoyed playing it so much :)
AdRon Zh3Ro
900 posts
Joined August 2009
Topic Starter
AdRon Zh3Ro

Kytoxid wrote:

[General]

BPM 150.000, offset 6,619 sounds better imo.
Delete the .osb.
Capitalize DJ in the artist?
Tags?
Why "style"? Why not just "Easy", etc...? :P
Your preview point isn't actually part of Easy/Normal...
Combos felt weird in all diffs.

[Easy Style]

00:38:644 (1) - The song really only starts here; remove the spinners before it, they're not particularly fun to play. In fact, you could start it as late as 00:51:443 (1).
01:09:861 - Lack of a note here is weird.
01:17:839 - Add a break?
01:17:439 - Unused timing section.
01:21:339 - Unused timing section.
01:36:637 (1) - Combos are awfully long in this section.

I dunno, even for an Easy, this feels quite boring. Maybe it's just that I don't like the song too much.

[Normal Style]

OD feels too low.

00:29:046 (2) - This looks terrible.
00:51:443 (1) - Consider just starting here.
01:10:440 (7,1,2) - Very hard to read.
01:21:839 (1,2,3,4) - Unreadable.
01:23:638 (1) - I didn't really like the use of notes and repeats in this section; it feels like they were placed randomly to follow a constant 1/2 pattern rather than follow some aspect of the music. It feels repetitive, just how long it is, too.
01:50:835 - Unused timing section.

[Hard Style]

Those fast sliders felt weird, especially ones that start on red ticks and end on white.

00:51:443 (1) - Once again, just start it here. The kicksliders at the beginning don't really fit, and the high OD + no bass after it is quite hard to play. It would also cut your score to below 10m, which is always good.
01:21:839 (1,1,2,3,4,1) - Err, this placement is weird.
01:26:238 (10,11,12) - Blah.
01:42:236 (10,11,12,13,14) - I know some people don't like zig-zag sliders.
02:00:234 (1,2,3,4,5) - Not readable at all.
03:00:226 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Weird pattern again.
03:07:025 (14,15,16,17,18) - Really don't like this formation, and don't like combos going so high. The twisty formations after this one aren't cool either.

Good luck!

This type of music is hardstyle.

Changed BPM Offset and stuff.

Thanks
Diasios
3,966 posts
Joined August 2008
Diasios
[General]

  • • Offset: 6650 (resnap all notes)
    • The mp3 you are using is a lot longer than the part which is mapped. Consider cropping it to reduce filesize
[Normal]

  • • 00:29:019 (2) - This slider is hidden: make it more visible
    • 00:32:219 (3) - ^
    • 00:35:418 (4) - ^
[Hard]

  • • 01:04:218 (8,1) - Spacing
    • 01:21:018 (1,1) - ^
    • 02:05:818 (3) - This slider is hidden: make it more visible
    • 02:09:018 (3) - ^
    • 02:14:218 (4,1) - Spacing
AdRon Zh3Ro
900 posts
Joined August 2009
Topic Starter
AdRon Zh3Ro
Done
orioncomet
osu! Alumni
2,684 posts
Joined May 2009
orioncomet
[General]
- Source: Son Of Darkness is the Album's name, don't mind with the Title
- TAG: Metal
- BG Colour: Black?
- seem like this map have only few hitsound on [Easy] and [Normal], Just for me ^^

[Easy]
seem fine for me.

[Normal]
01:16:618 (7) - sound finish at last silder (01:17:018)
01:49:218 (1) - sound finish

[Hard]
This diff should be [Insane] more then [ Hard]
00:38:618 (1) - replace sound clap with finish?
00:40:218 (4) - ^
00:41:818 (1) - ^
00:43:418 (4) - ^
00:45:018 (1) - ^
00:46:618 (4) - ^
00:48:218 (1) - ^
00:49:818 (4) - ^
01:49:218 (1) - try sound finish
01:52:218 (1) - silent this spinner
01:56:218 (4) - new combo
01:57:818 (4) - ^
01:59:418 (4) - ^
02:02:618 (4) - ^
02:16:218 (1) - replace sound clap with finish
02:17:818 (5) - ^
02:17:918 (1) - add sound finish
02:30:618 (1) - ^
02:32:218 (5) - ^
03:15:817 (7) - new combo
03:19:017 (8) - ^
03:37:917 (1) - sound finish

I have some MY problem about specing of this map when I'm playing Then I won't mod them.. Orz

Starrr ~ ^^
AdRon Zh3Ro
900 posts
Joined August 2009
Topic Starter
AdRon Zh3Ro
Done

Ty :)
kino77
909 posts
Joined March 2009
kino77
Hi~!

The BPM or offset seems not exactly right,check the timing help for sure~
Disable countdown seems better~
This map will be better with SB~

[Easy]
00:38:649 (1) - Use normal hitsound this part?
01:09:849 - Add note?

[Normal]
00:25:850 (1) - The slider is too >_<,try 0.5x so the slider will be short and fit the music~
01:49:249 (1) - Turn down the volume of this spin and move next time section to the end of spin?

[Insane]
01:24:449 (4,5) - What the hell?
02:32:349 (1) - Turn down the volume of this spin and turn up again in the end of spin?

Star~
Real1
968 posts
Joined September 2008
Real1
BPM is set to 150,001. Make it 150,000 Do this in the timing setup panel.
Offset: 6640

[Easy style]
No kiai?
00:46:239 (2) - Start on blue tick, end at white.

[Normal]
No kiai?
Got a good style going here. You maybe should map it longer.

[Insane Style]
01:39:149 (10) - !!! This note is on the same time as (10) This is unrankable and unplayable. Please fix.
01:34:249 (4) -!!! Same as above. TWO NOTES CAN NOT BE PLACED AT THE SAME TIME!
01:34:649 (5) - ^

the map keeps having those. You need to fix them ASAP. There are many more coming after those i mentioned.
Leorda
4,416 posts
Joined June 2009
Leorda
Oi!

[Easy]
00:56:249 (6) - Ugly slider
00:58:649 (2) - ^
01:05:049 (2) - Must symetric
01:07:449 (4) - ^

[Normal Style]
00:32:250 (3) - Ugly slider
00:35:449 (4) - ^

[INSANE STYLE]
00:53:049 (5) - Ugly slider
00:55:049 (1) - ^
01:09:649 (7) - A bit confusing :o
01:21:349 (T) - CHange the BPM Adjustment to 2x, it's waaaaay too crazy if the BPM Adjustment is 1x :o

I think this beatmap need more creative :|
dlguiga
60 posts
Joined November 2009
dlguiga
Insane:
01:41:449 (8,9,10) - Lolwut
01:42:849 (1,2,3) - ^
01:48:049 (8,9) - ^

Arrume essas notas que estão ao mesmo tempo que não dá pra entrar no rank assim. Fora isso, tá muito bom o mapa. Star~
AdRon Zh3Ro
900 posts
Joined August 2009
Topic Starter
AdRon Zh3Ro
Vlw ^^

All done...

Maybe i didn't resnaped them :P
EEeee
1,026 posts
Joined July 2008
EEeee
Irc Modding, INSANE STYLE IS SCARY!!!
AdRon Zh3Ro
900 posts
Joined August 2009
Topic Starter
AdRon Zh3Ro
Ty EEeee :)
Gens
osu! Alumni
3,485 posts
Joined August 2008
Gens
[Easy Style]

01:05:040 (2,3,4) - Doesn't sound quite right. Try using the previous pattern you had before (finish + clap on each beat, if you get what I mean).

[INSANE STYLE]
  1. You should use less hitsounds since they can get pretty annoying...
~ ~ ~

That's all I have... also gave you a new mp3 through IRC. Obviously you'll need a new offset but... I can't time with these speakers, sorry. You can get someone else to do it. x:
aRiskOfRain
osu! Alumni
1,367 posts
Joined June 2009
aRiskOfRain
Fine, if a bit of an eyesore.
Card N'FoRcE
osu! Alumni
4,058 posts
Here since the beginning
Card N'FoRcE
- Easy Style:
  • .Opinions:
    01:21:840 (1,2) - this should be ok, but i think it's weird because the map always has regular spacing. Your choice, btw.
- Normal Style:
  • .Opinions:
    01:51:00 - missing break?
- INSANE STYLE:
  • .Opinions:
    02:00:240 (1,2,3) - i really don't like this.
    lol@trycky parts.
Goos map overall, but you should add a bit more variety, at least about hitsounds: whistles do get really repetitive after a while D:
Is this your first or second beatmap? It's a really good work for a beginner, so you'll improve a lot in short time ^^
AdRon Zh3Ro
900 posts
Joined August 2009
Topic Starter
AdRon Zh3Ro

Card N'FoRcE wrote:

- Easy Style:
  • .Opinions:
    01:21:840 (1,2) - this should be ok, but i think it's weird because the map always has regular spacing. Your choice, btw.
- Normal Style:
  • .Opinions:
    01:51:00 - missing break?
- INSANE STYLE:
  • .Opinions:
    02:00:240 (1,2,3) - i really don't like this.
    lol@trycky parts.
Goos map overall, but you should add a bit more variety, at least about hitsounds: whistles do get really repetitive after a while D:
Is this your first or second beatmap? It's a really good work for a beginner, so you'll improve a lot in short time ^^
I have another beatmaps, but this is my first try to ranked. :D
Breeze
osu! Alumni
4,949 posts
Joined March 2009
Breeze

Real1 wrote:

BPM is set to 150,001
Real1 you're so pro ._.

[General]
  1. If Son of Darkness is the ablum name, you should move it to tags according to this post Album Title doesn't belong in "Source" field, and other tips, if it's a movie name or show name, that's OK
  2. Turn off countdown would better IMO
[Easy Style]
  1. 01:23:040 (3) - You'd better avoid using unusual spacing in Easy diff.
[Normal Style]
  1. 01:04:140 (3) - This slider confusing me, maybe just for me
  2. 01:50:840 (T) - I feel this timing section set a loud sound, lower a bit would better
  3. And I think this difficulty ends at a strange position
[Insane Style]
  1. 01:47:840 (7) - Remove whistle
  2. 01:56:240 (4,5,6) - These would confused players
star
AdRon Zh3Ro
900 posts
Joined August 2009
Topic Starter
AdRon Zh3Ro

Breeze wrote:

[Insane Style]
  1. 01:47:840 (7) - Remove whistle Intended
  2. 01:56:240 (4,5,6) - These would confused players Isn't so confusing
Kecco
908 posts
Joined September 2009
Kecco
Nothing has to be modded here~
Nice map~
Star~
AdRon Zh3Ro
900 posts
Joined August 2009
Topic Starter
AdRon Zh3Ro
Yay

Ty
abalee
osu! Alumni
1,994 posts
Joined June 2008
abalee
Normal:
02:13:040 (1,2) - Spacing?

insane:
01:55:440 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ,01:58:640 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - for these two part I suggest it'd better have the same stack style like 01:57:040 (1,2,3,4,5) - . well keep your own opinion also fine.
AdRon Zh3Ro
900 posts
Joined August 2009
Topic Starter
AdRon Zh3Ro
I'll keep like that because stack 4 parts isn't too nice...
( I changed that part to 2 stacked and 2 not stacked, like mirror)
Ty star :D
Beuchi
osu! Alumni
2,288 posts
Joined February 2009
Beuchi
Hi hi! :)

Here are some suggestions for your map~ You don't have to change them if yoou don't agree with me :P
Let's go!!

~All Diffs~
- As Breeze said, if Son of Darkness is the name of the album, delete it.

~Easy Style~
No problems, good job!!

~Normal Style~
- I'd rename this to Hard... It looks so hard for a Normal imo (4,5 stars is considered Hard I think :/)

02:13:440 (2,3,4,5) - Ugly overlaps. Stack them just on one point.

~INSANE STYLE~
- Why is the name diff on caps? ._.

01:42:240 (10,11,12,13,14) - Evilllllll xDDD
02:00:640 (3) - Fix spacing.
02:04:240 (3) - Stack it under (1)
02:07:440 (3) - ^
03:07:040 (1,2,3,4,5) - So evillllll xDDD
03:10:240 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^
03:13:440 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^

Well, I don't like the song so much but the map is fun xD Good Luck!! *star*
AdRon Zh3Ro
900 posts
Joined August 2009
Topic Starter
AdRon Zh3Ro

Beuchi-chan wrote:

Hi hi! :)

Here are some suggestions for your map~ You don't have to change them if yoou don't agree with me :P
Let's go!!

~All Diffs~
- As Breeze said, if Son of Darkness is the name of the album, delete it.

~Easy Style~
No problems, good job!!

~Normal Style~
- I'd rename this to Hard... It looks so hard for a Normal imo (4,5 stars is considered Hard I think :/)

02:13:440 (2,3,4,5) - Ugly overlaps. Stack them just on one point.

~INSANE STYLE~
- Why is the name diff on caps? ._.

01:42:240 (10,11,12,13,14) - Evilllllll xDDD
02:00:640 (3) - Fix spacing.
02:04:240 (3) - Stack it under (1)
02:07:440 (3) - ^
03:07:040 (1,2,3,4,5) - So evillllll xDDD
03:10:240 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^
03:13:440 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^

Well, I don't like the song so much but the map is fun xD Good Luck!! *star*
Changed almost everything.
(evil parts are nice :))
Shulin
1,189 posts
Joined August 2009
Shulin
General:

Take the "-" out of Darkness Metal.

Easy Style:

01:07:040 (3) - Confusing overlap. (Like 01:12:640 (2,3) - is better)
01:15:440 (4) - New combo
01:23:040 (2) - Maybe reposition this so its below 01:21:840 (1) - instead of all being clustered in the same spot?
01:49:140 (1) - Start on red tick at 01:49:240

Overall you could probably increase the overall distance snap a little because there are many overlaps.

Normal Style:

00:32:240 (3) - New combo

Good.

INSANE STYLE:

-- Capitalise this properly please.

01:26:234 (10,11,12) - Regular stack this imo, too hard to read.
01:42:240 (10,11,12,13,14) - Space this zig zag stream sensibly please (reduce distance imo)
01:56:240 (4) - New combo?
01:59:440 (4) - ^
02:02:240 (3) - Imo put this in a similar pattern to before.
02:02:640 (4) - New combo?
03:03:640 (7,8,9,10) - Spacing here wasn't intuitive, maybe make 8,9,10 a stack?
03:07:040 (1,2,3,4,5) - This pattern isn't very player friendly... I'd recommend changing it.
03:10:040 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^ This one is worse! Its hard to tell the position of 2.

The map looks a bit messy at times, but for the most part it plays well so it's okay.

Nice maps overall.
~ Star.
Ultimate
382 posts
Joined December 2008
Ultimate
Eeh adron, here is your mod ^^

General:

BPM: 150,010
Offset: 6.635
You really need more tags xD
You have changed the bpm, that means you have to resnap all notes to their new timing point.
If you can't do it automaticly, please do it manually and always recheck before you upload ^^.

I'm only going to comment errors, no nazi spacing etc.

Easy:
01:17:040 (3) - new combo
01:17:840 (1) - remove new combo
01:20:240 (4) - new combo
01:21:840 (1) - remove new combo
01:45:840 (6) - new combo
01:46:240 (1) - remove new combo

It's a bit short, i don't know if you're gonna map more. But i highly recommend it.

Normal:
01:07:440 (9) - new combo
01:07:640 (1) - remove new combo

Insane:
00:41:832 (1,1,2,3,4) - hitsounds like 00:38:628 (1,1,2,3,4)
00:48:277 (1) - finish sound

That's it for now ^^, please fix the notes asap.
star!
AdRon Zh3Ro
900 posts
Joined August 2009
Topic Starter
AdRon Zh3Ro
Yay

Ty man!!
Doomsday
Featured Artist
1,961 posts
Joined July 2008
Doomsday
Blue = design/minor issues. you do not have to change these if you don't want to.
Orange = moderate issues. it would be best if you change these.
Red = major issues. you need to change these.

  1. Offset: 6,650 (a little later than yours)
    The MP3 you are using is very low quality, but I can't find a better one from anywhere, or find an MP3 of this at all, so I can't help you here. If you can, you should get a better MP3[
  2. Your tags are not great. You don't really need xxx in there, and I don't think this song is a metal song. Also, if you're having Hard Style in there (shouldn't it be Insane Style?), you should add "Easy Normal" in the tags too.
  3. Also, there is a lot of the MP3 that hasn't been mapped (just over 25% of it). You should cut the MP3 down to save space. (or cut the new MP3 down if you can get one.)
[EASY STYLE]

Seems fine

[NORMAL STYLE]

01:26:640 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7 etc.) - Layouts like these get boring quickly. Is there some other way you can lay these out to make it mroe interesting? (Including the parts after this one that are like this)

[INSANE STYLE]

00:42:932 (1,2,3,4) - This is a mirror of the pattern that came just before it, yeah, but that was mapped to the song, but this one isn't, and doesn't play well. Map something else here instead?
00:49:332 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:23:329 (3,4) - Stack these?
03:13:722 (4,5) - Lay these out in a line like the rest of the stream? Having beats set out like this are just frustrating to play to me.

Some of the sliders are ugly in Insane, but it was pretty fun at times.

Nice. The main issue with this is the MP3 (and the tags), but unless you can find a better MP3, I can't help that much :(

Starred

[EDIT] Good good

Protobubbled
Babble
230 posts
Joined July 2009
Babble
Heya

Easy
Looks good

Normal
00:39:920(4) - The slider sounds a tad awkward, and plays awkward as well. Replace with a hitcircle. Do that with the next mini slider exactly like this one at 00:46:320
01:03:920 (3) - ^
01:23:120 (4) - ^
02:17:520 (3) - ^
You don't have to change these if you're sure that you like it, I'm just saying I personally found those mini sliders to play awkward when actually playing the map. Rest of this map is good though :D

Hard
01:03:516 (5 and 6) - Take away whistle here and add finishes. Sounds cooler :D


Great map & song. Osu DEFINITELY needs maps with a darker tone in them like this. A guy and only take so much happy hardcore and happy jpop :o

Star
AdRon Zh3Ro
900 posts
Joined August 2009
Topic Starter
AdRon Zh3Ro
Hell yeh!!

Ty

Teh mini sliders, i used them because is Normal, and it needs to be easier...
Lissette
osu! Alumni
1,496 posts
Joined July 2008
Lissette
delete .osb file and fullsubmit

Insane Style
BPM 150.00 like in the others diffs ^^
01:56:012 (4) - this is cool but is confusing for the change in spacing, you may put a new combo here to make it easier to read ^^
01:59:212 (4) - same here
02:30:410 - move half beat earlier this inherited timing section

Normal Style
02:17:520 (3) - wrong spacing

Nice map! :)
Star!
RandomJibberish
osu! Alumni
1,833 posts
Joined August 2009
RandomJibberish
Easy Style:
Fine.

Normal Style:
The first four sliders , 00:41:620 (1) and 00:48:020 (1) are reaaaaallly ugly. Make them into an actual shape rather than a random scribble

Insane Style:
Every curved slider looked pretty ugly. Otherwise fine.

Star~
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