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Topic Starter
AdRon Zh3Ro
Ty EEeee :)
Gens
[Easy Style]

01:05:040 (2,3,4) - Doesn't sound quite right. Try using the previous pattern you had before (finish + clap on each beat, if you get what I mean).

[INSANE STYLE]
  1. You should use less hitsounds since they can get pretty annoying...
~ ~ ~

That's all I have... also gave you a new mp3 through IRC. Obviously you'll need a new offset but... I can't time with these speakers, sorry. You can get someone else to do it. x:
aRiskOfRain
Fine, if a bit of an eyesore.
Card N'FoRcE
- Easy Style:
  • .Opinions:
    01:21:840 (1,2) - this should be ok, but i think it's weird because the map always has regular spacing. Your choice, btw.
- Normal Style:
  • .Opinions:
    01:51:00 - missing break?
- INSANE STYLE:
  • .Opinions:
    02:00:240 (1,2,3) - i really don't like this.
    lol@trycky parts.
Goos map overall, but you should add a bit more variety, at least about hitsounds: whistles do get really repetitive after a while D:
Is this your first or second beatmap? It's a really good work for a beginner, so you'll improve a lot in short time ^^
Topic Starter
AdRon Zh3Ro

Card N'FoRcE wrote:

- Easy Style:
  • .Opinions:
    01:21:840 (1,2) - this should be ok, but i think it's weird because the map always has regular spacing. Your choice, btw.
- Normal Style:
  • .Opinions:
    01:51:00 - missing break?
- INSANE STYLE:
  • .Opinions:
    02:00:240 (1,2,3) - i really don't like this.
    lol@trycky parts.
Goos map overall, but you should add a bit more variety, at least about hitsounds: whistles do get really repetitive after a while D:
Is this your first or second beatmap? It's a really good work for a beginner, so you'll improve a lot in short time ^^
I have another beatmaps, but this is my first try to ranked. :D
Breeze

Real1 wrote:

BPM is set to 150,001
Real1 you're so pro ._.

[General]
  1. If Son of Darkness is the ablum name, you should move it to tags according to this post Album Title doesn't belong in "Source" field, and other tips, if it's a movie name or show name, that's OK
  2. Turn off countdown would better IMO
[Easy Style]
  1. 01:23:040 (3) - You'd better avoid using unusual spacing in Easy diff.
[Normal Style]
  1. 01:04:140 (3) - This slider confusing me, maybe just for me
  2. 01:50:840 (T) - I feel this timing section set a loud sound, lower a bit would better
  3. And I think this difficulty ends at a strange position
[Insane Style]
  1. 01:47:840 (7) - Remove whistle
  2. 01:56:240 (4,5,6) - These would confused players
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Topic Starter
AdRon Zh3Ro

Breeze wrote:

[Insane Style]
  1. 01:47:840 (7) - Remove whistle Intended
  2. 01:56:240 (4,5,6) - These would confused players Isn't so confusing
Kecco
Nothing has to be modded here~
Nice map~
Star~
Topic Starter
AdRon Zh3Ro
Yay

Ty
abalee
Normal:
02:13:040 (1,2) - Spacing?

insane:
01:55:440 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ,01:58:640 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - for these two part I suggest it'd better have the same stack style like 01:57:040 (1,2,3,4,5) - . well keep your own opinion also fine.
Topic Starter
AdRon Zh3Ro
I'll keep like that because stack 4 parts isn't too nice...
( I changed that part to 2 stacked and 2 not stacked, like mirror)
Ty star :D
Beuchi
Hi hi! :)

Here are some suggestions for your map~ You don't have to change them if yoou don't agree with me :P
Let's go!!

~All Diffs~
- As Breeze said, if Son of Darkness is the name of the album, delete it.

~Easy Style~
No problems, good job!!

~Normal Style~
- I'd rename this to Hard... It looks so hard for a Normal imo (4,5 stars is considered Hard I think :/)

02:13:440 (2,3,4,5) - Ugly overlaps. Stack them just on one point.

~INSANE STYLE~
- Why is the name diff on caps? ._.

01:42:240 (10,11,12,13,14) - Evilllllll xDDD
02:00:640 (3) - Fix spacing.
02:04:240 (3) - Stack it under (1)
02:07:440 (3) - ^
03:07:040 (1,2,3,4,5) - So evillllll xDDD
03:10:240 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^
03:13:440 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^

Well, I don't like the song so much but the map is fun xD Good Luck!! *star*
Topic Starter
AdRon Zh3Ro

Beuchi-chan wrote:

Hi hi! :)

Here are some suggestions for your map~ You don't have to change them if yoou don't agree with me :P
Let's go!!

~All Diffs~
- As Breeze said, if Son of Darkness is the name of the album, delete it.

~Easy Style~
No problems, good job!!

~Normal Style~
- I'd rename this to Hard... It looks so hard for a Normal imo (4,5 stars is considered Hard I think :/)

02:13:440 (2,3,4,5) - Ugly overlaps. Stack them just on one point.

~INSANE STYLE~
- Why is the name diff on caps? ._.

01:42:240 (10,11,12,13,14) - Evilllllll xDDD
02:00:640 (3) - Fix spacing.
02:04:240 (3) - Stack it under (1)
02:07:440 (3) - ^
03:07:040 (1,2,3,4,5) - So evillllll xDDD
03:10:240 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^
03:13:440 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^

Well, I don't like the song so much but the map is fun xD Good Luck!! *star*
Changed almost everything.
(evil parts are nice :))
Shulin
General:

Take the "-" out of Darkness Metal.

Easy Style:

01:07:040 (3) - Confusing overlap. (Like 01:12:640 (2,3) - is better)
01:15:440 (4) - New combo
01:23:040 (2) - Maybe reposition this so its below 01:21:840 (1) - instead of all being clustered in the same spot?
01:49:140 (1) - Start on red tick at 01:49:240

Overall you could probably increase the overall distance snap a little because there are many overlaps.

Normal Style:

00:32:240 (3) - New combo

Good.

INSANE STYLE:

-- Capitalise this properly please.

01:26:234 (10,11,12) - Regular stack this imo, too hard to read.
01:42:240 (10,11,12,13,14) - Space this zig zag stream sensibly please (reduce distance imo)
01:56:240 (4) - New combo?
01:59:440 (4) - ^
02:02:240 (3) - Imo put this in a similar pattern to before.
02:02:640 (4) - New combo?
03:03:640 (7,8,9,10) - Spacing here wasn't intuitive, maybe make 8,9,10 a stack?
03:07:040 (1,2,3,4,5) - This pattern isn't very player friendly... I'd recommend changing it.
03:10:040 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^ This one is worse! Its hard to tell the position of 2.

The map looks a bit messy at times, but for the most part it plays well so it's okay.

Nice maps overall.
~ Star.
Ultimate
Eeh adron, here is your mod ^^

General:

BPM: 150,010
Offset: 6.635
You really need more tags xD
You have changed the bpm, that means you have to resnap all notes to their new timing point.
If you can't do it automaticly, please do it manually and always recheck before you upload ^^.

I'm only going to comment errors, no nazi spacing etc.

Easy:
01:17:040 (3) - new combo
01:17:840 (1) - remove new combo
01:20:240 (4) - new combo
01:21:840 (1) - remove new combo
01:45:840 (6) - new combo
01:46:240 (1) - remove new combo

It's a bit short, i don't know if you're gonna map more. But i highly recommend it.

Normal:
01:07:440 (9) - new combo
01:07:640 (1) - remove new combo

Insane:
00:41:832 (1,1,2,3,4) - hitsounds like 00:38:628 (1,1,2,3,4)
00:48:277 (1) - finish sound

That's it for now ^^, please fix the notes asap.
star!
Topic Starter
AdRon Zh3Ro
Yay

Ty man!!
Doomsday
Blue = design/minor issues. you do not have to change these if you don't want to.
Orange = moderate issues. it would be best if you change these.
Red = major issues. you need to change these.

  1. Offset: 6,650 (a little later than yours)
    The MP3 you are using is very low quality, but I can't find a better one from anywhere, or find an MP3 of this at all, so I can't help you here. If you can, you should get a better MP3[
  2. Your tags are not great. You don't really need xxx in there, and I don't think this song is a metal song. Also, if you're having Hard Style in there (shouldn't it be Insane Style?), you should add "Easy Normal" in the tags too.
  3. Also, there is a lot of the MP3 that hasn't been mapped (just over 25% of it). You should cut the MP3 down to save space. (or cut the new MP3 down if you can get one.)
[EASY STYLE]

Seems fine

[NORMAL STYLE]

01:26:640 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7 etc.) - Layouts like these get boring quickly. Is there some other way you can lay these out to make it mroe interesting? (Including the parts after this one that are like this)

[INSANE STYLE]

00:42:932 (1,2,3,4) - This is a mirror of the pattern that came just before it, yeah, but that was mapped to the song, but this one isn't, and doesn't play well. Map something else here instead?
00:49:332 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:23:329 (3,4) - Stack these?
03:13:722 (4,5) - Lay these out in a line like the rest of the stream? Having beats set out like this are just frustrating to play to me.

Some of the sliders are ugly in Insane, but it was pretty fun at times.

Nice. The main issue with this is the MP3 (and the tags), but unless you can find a better MP3, I can't help that much :(

Starred

[EDIT] Good good

Protobubbled
Babble
Heya

Easy
Looks good

Normal
00:39:920(4) - The slider sounds a tad awkward, and plays awkward as well. Replace with a hitcircle. Do that with the next mini slider exactly like this one at 00:46:320
01:03:920 (3) - ^
01:23:120 (4) - ^
02:17:520 (3) - ^
You don't have to change these if you're sure that you like it, I'm just saying I personally found those mini sliders to play awkward when actually playing the map. Rest of this map is good though :D

Hard
01:03:516 (5 and 6) - Take away whistle here and add finishes. Sounds cooler :D


Great map & song. Osu DEFINITELY needs maps with a darker tone in them like this. A guy and only take so much happy hardcore and happy jpop :o

Star
Topic Starter
AdRon Zh3Ro
Hell yeh!!

Ty

Teh mini sliders, i used them because is Normal, and it needs to be easier...
Lissette
delete .osb file and fullsubmit

Insane Style
BPM 150.00 like in the others diffs ^^
01:56:012 (4) - this is cool but is confusing for the change in spacing, you may put a new combo here to make it easier to read ^^
01:59:212 (4) - same here
02:30:410 - move half beat earlier this inherited timing section

Normal Style
02:17:520 (3) - wrong spacing

Nice map! :)
Star!
RandomJibberish
Easy Style:
Fine.

Normal Style:
The first four sliders , 00:41:620 (1) and 00:48:020 (1) are reaaaaallly ugly. Make them into an actual shape rather than a random scribble

Insane Style:
Every curved slider looked pretty ugly. Otherwise fine.

Star~
DeadAlready
hmmm hi :D
Easy and normal are good for me :)
so I only give some advices in [Insane Style].

[Insane Sytle]
01:55:192 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - and 01:58:392 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -
hmm that's a little hard to know (4) is 1 beat with (3) in first try. XD
so maybe (4) new combo will better :P?

03:06:787 (1,2,3,4,5) - and 03:09:987 (2,3,4,5,6) -
lol just say this is a little evil...but that's ok...XD


hmm that's all. XD

stared <3
Cyril Scarlet
I'm try to see from your request but I can't find

I'm not good about spacing with slider style >w<"
and I'm suck with crazy map XD

anyway Star ~ sorry for can't help >x<"
Topic Starter
AdRon Zh3Ro
Ty anyway!

Kudosu for you time.

:)
AngelHoney
Insane

01:15:995 (8,9) - exchange ?
01:16:695 (12) - remove ?
01:16:795 (13) - new combo ?
01:32:694 (12) - remove ?
01:32:794 (13,1) - switch new combo ?
01:35:994 (11,1) - ^
01:42:293 (13) - remove ?
01:42:393 (14,1) - switch new combo ?
01:47:593 (7) - remove whistle ?
03:07:087 (4) - remove ?
03:10:387 (6,1) - switch new combo ?
03:13:187 (1) - remove new combo ?
03:13:487 (4) - remove ?

Easy

STR 0.5?

:) :)
Dusty
Uh, yeah...

[Easy]
Yeesh, so much overlapping

[Insane]
01:26:094 (11) - closer to 10?...
Topic Starter
AdRon Zh3Ro
waiting...
Sallad4ever
Halo
a polish techno cool

[General]
- Might as well cut the mp3 size to the mapped part only, it'll help you reduce the overall file size
- The j in Dj should be capitalized just like this http://osu.ppy.sh/s/13879

I can't find anything major, so treat all of this as a suggestion
[Easy Style]
01:09:610 (x) - add a note?
Combo mod
SPOILER
01:22:810 (4) - NC (new combo)

[Normal Style]

Decrease OD and HP drain by 1 tick
01:53:610 (1) ~ 02:14:810 (4) - these section lack hitsound, add some to spice them, soft whistle is probably good
02:17:710 (1) - add finish
Combo mod
SPOILER
01:22:710 (2) - NC

[Insane Style]
wow some hidden notes are hard for me to read :o (yes I'm a noob)
This diff hitsound is the best, cool

Nothing much to find, the bell sound in the song make me shiver :o
Star~
Kiddo-Kun
First time giving suggestions like this.
Feel free to take them or not.

[ Easy Style]

There is a lot of overlapping beats in this diff, fix them to make your map look neater.
00:55:210 : New Combo
01:00:810 : ^
01:22:810 - 01:49:010 : I hear no Hit Sound, I recommend adding some.

Normal Style

00:41:610 : Maybe extend to 00:44:410 , I'm not sure :|
00:48:010 : Maybe extend to 00:50:810 , Again, I'm not to sure
00:25:610 - 01:48:810: Again, I hear no Hit Sound, I recommend adding some.

Insane Style
Cool.

I like the map +Star

Sorry it took so long, I never modded anything before.
Nakagawa-Kanon
[Easy Style]
fine

[Normal Style]
01:00:410 (6) - add new combo
01:01:210 (1) - remove newcombo

[Insane Style]
fine.... but
don't use many hitclap
fartownik
The difficulties' lengths are totally different. I prefer you to map Normal until the end (03:39:210).

Cut the unmapped part of the mp3~

[Insane]

01:03:910 (7,8) - Has made me confused a few times while testplaying. It's just unintuitive. Could you make here a Reverse Selection? (Edit -> Reverse Selection).
01:22:910 (2,3) - I'm surprised that no one noticed this before. SPACING.
01:42:210 (12,13) - Feels weird. Unstack it?
03:10:010 (2,3,4,5,6) - The streams are already HARD CONFUSING, don't make it worse. 03:10:210 (4,5) Reverse Selection?

Let's star this.
vivicat
my suggestion:

[easy]
so many overlapping,maybe the distance spacing is a little low
[normal]
01:42:400 (9) turn right a grid
[insane]
01:26:000 (10,11,12) the spacing is a little confused
03:03:700 (8,9,10) ^
01:03:900 (7,8) ^


nice map^_^ star
Shulin
General:

-- Why is "Polish" in tags?

Easy Style:

-- Not a fan of the 1/1 overlaps in an Easy as I said before.

Insane Style:

-- Overall, as I said last time I looked at this, the way you've structured this is slightly messy. It sometimes makes it more confusing than it has to be.

01:23:100 (3,4,1) - This is confusing, the stack is hard to read. I think it might be better to stack 3 and 4 instead, then move 1 away from that combo.
01:55:200 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This is still confusing, there hard to tell which side 4 is going to start on. (Looking in editor helps but that's hardly intuitive)
01:58:400 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
03:03:700 (8,9) - The way these are positioned after the slider is reeeaally messy, I'd consider repositioning this imo.
Arusha Shuna
Request Accepted

General
MP3 is too long?
Remove "polish" from the tags
Easy Style
00:39:500 (2) - move this to the previous blue tick (1/4 beat snapping)?
00:46:000 (2) - ^?
01:50:600 - 01:53:400 - insert break time?
02:17:100 (2) - move this to the previous blue tick (1/4 beat snapping)
Normal Style
nice :)
Insane Style
02:45:200 (3) - 1 grid left
Awesome :)

Great mapset!
STAR!
Eirene
[General] :
you should cut the mp3

[Insane] :
03:03:800 (9,10) - voluntary I guess, but such a spacing is a big mistake !! That looks like spacing of the first maps packs >.<

nothing to say about normal and easy diff ( though the normal sounds more like a hard diff )
sorry for the delay.
TheVileOne
Normal

02:07:600 (3) -- Move 1 unit left.

Insane

2:57:200 (8) Line this up with 7 and distance snap it like the rest of the song.


Starred
Kurai
Star~
_llkey_18
really nice map/song get this ranked ^_^
minyeob
Stop making faults <_<
ENOUGH.
Topic Starter
AdRon Zh3Ro
Ty man!!!
Gens
BPM: 150.01
Offset: 30

Yes, I can time now. It was my frame limiter causing trouble. :)

[Easy]

00:58:400 (2) - Hmm, to be honest I'm still not happy with this slider... if anything, there should be a beat at 00:59:200 and so on.

Yeah, sorry, reduced to a star for now...
Mafiamaster
[Normal Style]
Your inherited timing sections seem unnecessary in this difficulty.
Timing Section: 01:49:122 - Was this suppose to silence the spinner?
If not, delete the inherited timing sections since they don't really change anything.

[Insane]
Timing Section: 01:53:122 - Move this on top of the spinner's end.
01:53:622 (1) - 02:15:620 (5): Add some hit sounds between these notes.
Gens
Bubbled.
Topic Starter
AdRon Zh3Ro
Waiting rank...
abalee
Ranked
sebastiangl
Congratulations for getting this son ranked :D
Andrea
I'm late :(

Grats for your first ranked map!
yeahyeahyeahhh
no way this timing is right. And although this is a first map, whats up with the terrible map design? Why are people passing this off... quality is lacking...

*sigh*
Topic Starter
AdRon Zh3Ro
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Kecco
O_o Nice!
JamesLeao
i have nothing to say for this map :o
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