1. Easy (1.63 stars, 100 notes)
2. Insane (4.6 stars, 353 notes)
3. Mei's Hard (3.15 stars, 260 notes)
4. spring's Normal (2.11 stars, 156 notes)

1. 吵死了啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊
2. 前面音效30%
3. 00:22:285 (4) - 80%
4. 00:11:881 (1) - 加Timing 音效60%
5. 00:22:806 (6) - 50%
6. 00:39:626 (7,8,9,10) - 我局的这不是读图梗
   是恶心梗，
   像后面这里是滑条还是可以的。
7. 00:47:603 (1) - 60%
8. 00:50:725 (4) - 20%
9. KIAI音效就没事了。
10. 总之也是单纯的抓节奏
    还抓得很单调。
    1/1滑条多用点啊……
    跟人声好了……
    多想点排列构成。
    太散，有点不太美观。
11. 最后再吐槽一下
    这音效好吵啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊
12. 00:52:112 (1,2) - 哎呀突然想起来吧
    这种重音用NOTE啊

1. 音效声音忽响忽轻的应该需要大调整吧
2. 100应该是不太常用的，换成80或70吧。
3. 20实在太轻，note打上去都感觉不到了，调高点45前后吧。
4. 00:47:603 (1) - 这里kiai段前面应该是有段小高潮的，那里为什么突然降音了呢
5. kiai段怎么突然变轻了，70以上吧
6. 最后转盘那里可以加绿线逐渐降音，最后转盘尾巴这里可以用20以下的
7. 音效没怎么加呢，很多地方可以加whistle自己试试吧，跟着音乐加就行，重音的地方可以放clap或者fin

1. 00:06:332 (1) - finish
2. 00:21:072 (4) - finish
3. 00:20:551 (2,3) - 这里滑条和note交换下顺序感觉会比较好
4. 00:31:823 (3,4,5,6) - 45是对称的，为什么36不对称呢
5. 00:47:950 (3,4,5,6) - 这里感觉节奏不对，改成这样试试http://puu.sh/aI4RS/b0f4b7ac19.jpg
6. 00:52:112 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 不好看
7. 00:58:181 (1,2,3) - 全部改成单点试试
8. 01:04:598 (1,2) - 不考虑换成一个串吗
9. 01:08:239 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 这里不适合串，这样放试试
   http://puu.sh/aI56P/8868b0301e.jpg
10. 01:08:933 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这里感觉放串也不太好
    http://puu.sh/aI5zh/da0558d7f1.jpg
11. 01:26:621 (3,4,5) - 这里前面的蓝线漏了个音
12. 感觉kiai段里节奏问题比较大，最好re一下
13. 另外00:53:499 (5) - kiai段开头放这里，01:13:962 (7) - 这里结束吧
14. 排版的话，我也不太会，总体排版就是有点散，然后细节很多要修，一些固定梗摆好看点

[Insane]
(这个SoGa也是太神((meng)))
又见音效美丽系列
00:03:037 (2,3,4) - 这种梗还是得ds
00:10:667 (3,4,5,6) - 这个3 4 6 5 或者3 5 4 6 还是柑橘比较顺flow吧毕竟这种梯形梗的flow也不是非常好像什么五边形五角星跳我都是非常推荐的
00:16:563 (2,4) - 这里也是十分的难看
00:18:124 (7,1) - 包好
00:48:991 (6,7,8,9) - 同2，真的不建议
00:55:580 (7,1) - 复制党浑身难受
00:56:967 (1,3) - ^
01:01:129 (1,2,3) - ^
why sv1.4
总之吧，感觉你做完这图之后没有怎么test，其实自己玩着舒服的图总是最好的

[NzU's Insane]
Sorry, but i really fell that you didn't map with the music,like00:32:517 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - can u hear that? or 00:47:083 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - the rythem is not fitting the music. What u do is called overmap, too much overmap make the map sh*t, so plz change the parts like those(Plz listen to the music and remap plz)

LioVir wrote:

Good map i like it.

01:19:511 (1,2,3) - you can change the linear circles for a triangle patter. it will raise the difficulty a bit

Hakurei Yoru wrote:

[Insane]

1. 吵死了啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊
2. 前面音效30%
3. 00:22:285 (4) - 80%
4. 00:11:881 (1) - 加Timing 音效60%
5. 00:22:806 (6) - 50%
6. 00:39:626 (7,8,9,10) - 我局的这不是读图梗
   是恶心梗，
   像后面这里是滑条还是可以的。
7. 00:47:603 (1) - 60%
8. 00:50:725 (4) - 20%
9. KIAI音效就没事了。
10. 总之也是单纯的抓节奏
    还抓得很单调。
    1/1滑条多用点啊……
    跟人声好了……
    多想点排列构成。
    太散，有点不太美观。
11. 最后再吐槽一下
    这音效好吵啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊
12. 00:52:112 (1,2) - 哎呀突然想起来吧
    这种重音用NOTE啊

Good luck

Hyasalia wrote:

NM MOD from a Rookie Mapper
[General]

1. 音效声音忽响忽轻的应该需要大调整吧
2. 100应该是不太常用的，换成80或70吧。
3. 20实在太轻，note打上去都感觉不到了，调高点45前后吧。
4. 00:47:603 (1) - 这里kiai段前面应该是有段小高潮的，那里为什么突然降音了呢
5. kiai段怎么突然变轻了，70以上吧
6. 最后转盘那里可以加绿线逐渐降音，最后转盘尾巴这里可以用20以下的
7. 音效没怎么加呢，很多地方可以加whistle自己试试吧，跟着音乐加就行，重音的地方可以放clap或者fin

Fixed,谢谢莉莉;w;,对音效还没有认识，谢谢xd
[Insane]

1. 00:06:332 (1) - finish Fixed
2. 00:21:072 (4) - finish Fixed
3. 00:20:551 (2,3) - 这里滑条和note交换下顺序感觉会比较好Fixed
4. 00:31:823 (3,4,5,6) - 45是对称的，为什么36不对称呢 Fixed
5. 00:47:950 (3,4,5,6) - 这里感觉节奏不对，改成这样试试http://puu.sh/aI4RS/b0f4b7ac19.jpg Fixed
6. 00:52:112 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 不好看 Fixed
7. 00:58:181 (1,2,3) - 全部改成单点试试 Fixed
8. 01:04:598 (1,2) - 不考虑换成一个串吗 不了，听不到连打，换成了slider
9. 01:08:239 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 这里不适合串，这样放试试
   http://puu.sh/aI56P/8868b0301e.jpg ^ 这个也舍弃连打放了slider
10. 01:08:933 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这里感觉放串也不太好
    http://puu.sh/aI5zh/da0558d7f1.jpg
11. 01:26:621 (3,4,5) - 这里前面的蓝线漏了个音 Fixed
12. 感觉kiai段里节奏问题比较大，最好re一下 不知道算不算改了 >>
13. 另外00:53:499 (5) - kiai段开头放这里，01:13:962 (7) - 这里结束吧 Fixed
14. 排版的话，我也不太会，总体排版就是有点散，然后细节很多要修，一些固定梗摆好看点

这个，嘛..
GL

unhappymushroom wrote:

soga大大, 这是第一次mod, 随便说说


Insane难度:

00:03:037 (2,3,4) - 这三个是单点但是看起来像连打, 刚一开始不太熟悉bpm很可能就当成连打了, 可以连续用三个1来提醒 没必要
01:10:147 (1) - 这个滑条的样式和前面连打的flow不太搭, 可以改个方向或者样式 还好呀。。就是缺乏美观
01:16:736 (2,3) - 01:17:256 (4,5) - 2,3 和 4,5 应该用不同的combo color, note的间距一样但是3和4中间顿了一拍, 可以用不同的color来提醒一下 Fixed
01:25:059 (1,2,3) - 这三个note也最好用不同的颜色来区分一下, 3那里停顿了一下 Fixed
01:26:534 (3,4,5,6) - 这4个note和前面的一个滑条尾组成一个5连, 但是却没有摆在一起, 觉得有点怪怪的, 会让人误以为中间有停顿. 可以把前一个滑条改成单点, 最后放上一个完整的5连, 或者把最后这个4连放的和滑条近一点 Fixed

Alex Li wrote:

[Insane]
(这个SoGa也是太神((meng)))
又见音效美丽系列
00:03:037 (2,3,4) - 这种梗还是得ds Fixed
00:10:667 (3,4,5,6) - 这个3 4 6 5 或者3 5 4 6 还是柑橘比较顺flow吧毕竟这种梯形梗的flow也不是非常好像什么五边形五角星跳我都是非常推荐的 Fixed
00:16:563 (2,4) - 这里也是十分的难看 Fixed
00:18:124 (7,1) - 包好 Fixed
00:48:991 (6,7,8,9) - 同2，真的不建议 Fixed
00:55:580 (7,1) - 复制党浑身难受 Fixed
00:56:967 (1,3) - ^ Fixed
01:01:129 (1,2,3) - ^ Fixed
why sv1.4 idk.默认的就用了..
总之吧，感觉你做完这图之后没有怎么test，其实自己玩着舒服的图总是最好的

24th_garden wrote:

24th_garden'w modding


normal
01:17:430 (5) - 起点是人声，中间人声完了，结尾是鼓点，听着好奇怪 fixed
另：我f2了几个nor图对比，nor难度遮挡最好止步于原地点。你这个note实在有点密集，适当调整一下吧w fixed

24th_garden wrote:

24th_garden'w modding


爷爷为啥不mod我图

smallboat wrote:

[General]

1.NZU是誰? 最好在每個難度tag 加上GD的人的name，現在都這樣子added。(Creator words 也要寫上ID)补上
2.Easy 和 Insane 的countdown不一致。Fixed
3.建議clap弄個自定義音效，現在clap聲不適合。

[Easy] 1.50的以下難度顏色是綠標(所以你如果降到1.49剛好是綠標可以試試)

00:00:783 (1) - 像這種前奏的音量可以放小一點，比如50%還蠻好。(動了這個音量別忘了Ins diff也要動(發現怎麼音量不一致，你可以把ins的紅線跟綠線 copy過來不就好?(頂多只是調些slider結尾)) Fixed
00:21:418 (1) - Easy最好之間要空一個白線，像這種就很近，有點難轉。 这个感觉这样就好._.
00:23:326 (1) - Clap音效建議放一下，現在這樣聽，感覺鼓聲音效好小聲。Fixed
00:27:141 (3) - 間距 Fixed
00:49:164 (1) - 同00:21:418 Fixed
01:01:129 (3) - 尾端別overlap Fixed
01:03:557 (1) - 取消NC Fixed
01:04:598 (4) - 然後這邊加NC，vocal從這起頭。 Fixed
01:07:719 (1,2) - 尾端能加finish (音量減個15~20%左右，現在這樣音量有點大聲) Fixed
01:09:280 (4) - 前端應該是在後面白線? Fixed
01:15:349 (3) - Blanket沒處理好 Fixed
01:26:447 (4) - 換成一個note就可以了，留點間隔。 Fixed

其實還有些小問題上面沒講，只先講些比較大的問題。

[Insane]

00:00:783 (1) - 不建議前奏放clap這種吵雜的音效，放whistle這種輕聲比較適當。Fixed
00:03:037 (2,3,4) - 有種難度的感覺 (聽音樂是覺得沒必要用anti-jump) 觉得这样就好了
00:03:557 (1) - 開頭應該whistle而不是finish? Fixed
00:09:106 (5) - ^ (這邊輕聲段落不適合放finish) Fixed
00:12:228 (3,4) - 應該是能放遠一些些(加個0.5左右)，怎麼這麼近。 Fixed
00:13:615 (2,3,4) - 也是有點吵，紅線clap去掉。(使聽的有規律點) Fixed
00:18:124 (7,1) - 聽音樂明顯是有個間距，所以應該也是能空一些。 Fixed
00:18:644 (2,3,4,5) - 不太好看的梗 改了，不知道好不好看。。
00:33:557 (6,1) - 應該是放在(216|344)的位置，不覺得這邊之前的位置點的不順? 这个直接就换梗了。
00:38:933 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 這個clap音效有點吵，有點刺耳。 Fixed
00:39:626 (8) - 忘了NC? Fixed
00:43:095 (1) - 滑條聲加到whistle了，remove it. 这个把折返条换了
00:46:736 (5,6,7) - 最好彼此間還是放遠一些 Fixed
00:52:112 (1,2,3) - 這三個能大跳，然後後面的12345再放的間距小一些，這樣就能符合音樂。Fixed
01:04:598 (1,2,3,4,5) - 感覺聽不出來什麼連打 Fixed
01:07:892 (2,1,2) - 像這種重音就可加finish (前面slider尾端別加到了) Fixed
01:24:019 (4,5) - 4要NC，因為大跳 Fixed
01:26:447 (1,2,3,4,5) - 這後面是安靜的段落，卻要加個預設clap，不會太吵? Fixed

總體來看質量還算勉強不用re，只是排列有點墜毀，需要把一些overlap地方修一修(會給人雜亂的感覺)。

尚待加強，加油。

• 
  In NzU's Insane make hitsounds!

• 
  00:08:066 (1) - correct this slider
  00:20:204 (4,5) - clap
  00:22:979 - make circle ( https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1967971 )
  00:27:141 (3) - delete Finish
  00:28:528 (2) - ^
  00:41:361 (1,2) - correct points ( http://puu.sh/b8ism/4a28d69fa3.png )
  00:52:112 (1) - correct slirer,and maybe >
  01:21:245 - 50% volume

1. use Distans snap!!!!!! ( https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1967986 )
   00:19:511 (2) - Put like this ( https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1967989 )
   00:26:100 (2,3) - delete and make slider ( https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1967996 )
   00:46:043 (6,1) - delete(it's Normal and not hard)
   00:45:869 - 00:47:950 ---make how this

• all good

• 
  00:22:285 (4,5,6) - delete and make slider ( https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1968002 )

• 
  00:11:361 (1) - correct this slider ( https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1968017 ) < i don't know

1. open AiMod!!!!!
   01:26:621 (6) - delete ithis slider and make Spiner!!!!

Gordon123 wrote:

Hello m4m!
[General]

• 
  In NzU's Insane make hitsounds!

[Easy]

• 
  00:08:066 (1) - correct this slider Fixed
  00:20:204 (4,5) - clap it already have a Clap and whistle on the head ._.
  00:22:979 - make circle ( https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1967971 ) Fixed
  00:27:141 (3) - delete Finish Fixed
  00:28:528 (2) - ^ Fixed
  00:41:361 (1,2) - correct points ( http://puu.sh/b8ism/4a28d69fa3.png ) Fixed
  00:52:112 (1) - correct slirer,and maybe > Fixed
  01:21:245 - 50% volume dk why but i didnt change this one ._.

[Hard]

• all good

[Insane]

• 
  00:22:285 (4,5,6) - delete and make slider ( https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1968002 ) Fixed

Thank you Gordon for ur excellence Mod !xd

Gordon123 wrote:

[spring's normal]

1. use Distans snap!!!!!! ( https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1967986 ) fixed
   00:19:511 (2) - Put like this ( https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1967989 ) fixed
   00:26:100 (2,3) - delete and make slider ( https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1967996 ) fixed
   00:46:043 (6,1) - delete(it's Normal and not hard) fixed
   00:45:869 - 00:47:950 ---make how this fixed

1. 00:11:361 (1) - Strange Slider
2. 00:22:979 (1,2,3) - Note too close together
3. 00:32:517 - 00:34:077 - Random stream out of nowhere and the stream should end at 00:33:904 (13)
4. 00:32:863 (5) - Maybe should map similar to the background drums

SoGa wrote:

24th_garden wrote:

24th_garden'w modding


爷爷为啥不mod我图

1. Small extra file in foler: Ed2 - (SoGa).osb
2. I checked your overall hitsounds, you use N:C1 like one in your Insane. You should try to make your beatmaps have consistent hitsounds.So the big downbeat, use the same sort of additions / sampleset at 33 seconds something on each difficulty, etc.
3. Unify your metadata. Easy/Normal AudioLeadIn: 0 and Hard/Insane AudioLeadIn: 2000. Easy/Normal WideScreenStoryboard: 1 and Hard/Insane WideScreenStoryboard: 0

1. Go to AIMod, turn on Check Distance Snap. Fix the 4 errors there.
2. 00:00:783 ~ 00:11:881 - Lower the initial volume, and ever measure, increasing the volume gradually.
3. 00:03:557 (1, 2) - Fix blanket.
4. 00:06:678 (4, 1) - New Combo on (4). Remove NC on (1)
5. 00:08:066 (1) - Blanket.
6. 00:09:106 (2) - NC. Keep your combos consistent. Combos are to indicate measures, key changes, time signature changes, major shifts in music. Make sure to change the combo ever measure.
7. 00:09:106 (2, 3) - Blanket.
8. 00:12:228 (2) - Inconsistent blanketing width. Compare your width to that of 00:10:493, one cuts into the circle splash and the other lays on top of it.
9. 00:12:921 (3, 1) - Blanket. Okay. I'm starting to didn't check for blanking throughout the entire song. There are some very helpful guides on how to make blankets neat on here. I suggest you look through them and revamp all of this before moving forward.
10. 00:13:615 (1, 2) - (1) Remove NC. (2) Add NC
11. 00:16:043 (1) - Remove NC.
12. 00:17:430 (3, 1) - Add NC on (3), remove on (1)
13. 00:20:204 (4, 5) - NC on (4). Fix eveness. Its not symmetrical as is.
14. 00:26:100 (2) - Blanket
15. 00:27:488 (1, 2) - (1) Remove NC. (2) Add NC. So....You need to go through the rest of the song and redo your Combos. It's all wrong. I'm not going to the rest and pointing out each one.
16. 00:30:262 (2) - Blanket.
17. 00:39:973 (2) - ^
18. 01:01:129 (3) - ^
19. 01:23:673 (1) - ^
20. 01:29:222 - Fade out the spinner as I mentioned, decreasing the volume in increments. The spinner end is too loud as it is

1. Go to AIMod, turn on Check Distance Snap. Fix the 4 errors there.
2. 00:16:389 (1, 2, 3) - Remove sloppy overlay by rotating counterclockwise 15~25 degrees, then move (1) is under the previous slider in the same direction of the flow.
3. 00:32:343 (4) - Move up for better flow.
4. 00:34:077 - End slider here.
5. 00:47:950 (1, 2, 3) - Not a pretty combo. Try this. @@@@@@
6. 01:15:349 (2) - Ugly overlay.
7. Kiai Time must be consistent between each difficulty. Make this the same as all the other maps.

1. Hard has a star difficulty between 2.25~3.75. I STRONGLY recommend you read through the ranking criterias before blindly mapping. It saves for a lot of unnecessary and tedious remapping. Also, go through the forums for how to beatmap too.
2. Your settings are WAYYYYY too high for Hard. You have two options, rename this to Insane and your current Insane to something like Extra/Another, or do some major overhaul. If you want to keep calling it "Hard", reduce CS
3. 00:15:869 (5) - Blanket.
4. 00:16:736 (2, 3, 4) - DS. This is a good example of where, sloppy DS can hurt the song. These aren't justified by "No DS rule in Hard and up". Look at the width of the blanketing. It indicates differences in spacing.
5. 00:21:245 (5) - Blanket.
6. 00:49:684 (1, 2, 3) - Flows better this way. Try this. (2, 3, they were Ctrl + G-ed) @@@@@@@@
7. 00:52:112 (1, 2, 3, 4) - Either make a diamond, or if keeping the triangle, make it symmetrical. Ctrl + H is your friend.
8. 00:59:569 (1) - Unnecessary overlay.
9. Other than the mentioned, this map is actually well done I think.

ZZHBOY wrote:

irc

2014-09-28 11:28 ZZHBOY: 黑窝 提了
2014-09-28 11:29 SoGa: 提了
2014-09-29 12:49 SoGa: zzh
2014-09-29 12:49 SoGa: r u idle for a testplay
2014-09-29 12:49 ZZHBOY: 发
2014-09-29 12:49 SoGa: ACTION is watching [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/491785 Kurosaki Maon - Memories Last (TV size) [Insane]]
2014-09-29 12:49 ZZHBOY: ACTION is playing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/491785 Kurosaki Maon - Memories Last (TV size) [Insane]]
2014-09-29 12:51 ZZHBOY: 音效是怎么回事啊
2014-09-29 12:51 SoGa: too weird , im sry
2014-09-29 12:51 SoGa: 音效还没弄
2014-09-29 12:51 ZZHBOY: 加24clap就可以了啊
2014-09-29 12:51 SoGa: 打算弄完排版再来
2014-09-29 12:52 SoGa: 具体别扭的地方能指出来么（orz
2014-09-29 12:52 ZZHBOY: 不知道也
2014-09-29 12:52 ZZHBOY: 我看看
2014-09-29 12:52 SoGa: 你是三刀把。
2014-09-29 12:52 SoGa: 不对，你刚三刀了把
2014-09-29 12:53 ZZHBOY: 00:03:037 (6,7,8) - 你这里摆成这样了
2014-09-29 12:53 ZZHBOY: 啊 随便打的...
2014-09-29 12:53 ZZHBOY: 键鼠打不好
2014-09-29 12:54 ZZHBOY: 00:05:118 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这里跟前面听起来差不多我觉得前面还是不要放那种anti jump比较好
2014-09-29 12:54 SoGa: 这个不好吗
2014-09-29 12:54 SoGa: 就是前面也放开点好么
2014-09-29 12:55 ZZHBOY: 不知道 小建议
2014-09-29 12:55 ZZHBOY: 00:08:933 (4) - 
2014-09-29 12:55 ZZHBOY: 这里
2014-09-29 12:55 ZZHBOY: 打起来好奇怪啊
2014-09-29 12:55 ZZHBOY: 你试试这样
2014-09-29 12:55 ZZHBOY: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2083171
2014-09-29 12:56 ZZHBOY: 00:11:534 - 这里可以放1/4.....
2014-09-29 12:57 ZZHBOY: 00:15:176 (4,5,6) - 这一带flow感觉都不太好
2014-09-29 12:57 SoGa: 我不记得1/4是啥了
2014-09-29 12:57 ZZHBOY: 就是连打啊
2014-09-29 12:57 SoGa: hmm，456那个我也被别人说过，不知道怎么改好 ._.
2014-09-29 12:57 ZZHBOY: 1/4单点
2014-09-29 12:58 SoGa: 那个滑条吗
2014-09-29 12:58 SoGa: 4个notes的连打么
2014-09-29 12:59 ZZHBOY: 00:14:655 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 
2014-09-29 12:59 ZZHBOY: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2083176
2014-09-29 13:00 ZZHBOY: 时间轴上的蓝线是1/4拍线
2014-09-29 13:00 ZZHBOY: 每1/4放一个圈就是1/4连打
2014-09-29 13:02 SoGa: (eh
2014-09-29 13:05 ZZHBOY: 00:34:424 (1) - 这种都是乱加nc
2014-09-29 13:06 SoGa: 直觉，，（觉得是时候换了，，，
2014-09-29 13:06 ZZHBOY: 00:49:684 (1,2) - 反正我不喜欢这种 太挤了 
2014-09-29 13:06 ZZHBOY: 00:50:725 (4) - nc
2014-09-29 13:06 SoGa: 这个不好么，，，难得自己想出来的，后期我想想
2014-09-29 13:06 ZZHBOY: 00:55:927 (1,2) - 交换nc
2014-09-29 13:07 SoGa: 交换nv？
2014-09-29 13:08 SoGa: nc？
2014-09-29 13:08 SoGa: 这个没明
2014-09-29 13:08 ZZHBOY: 00:59:742 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 
2014-09-29 13:08 ZZHBOY: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2083185
2014-09-29 13:09 ZZHBOY: 00:56:274 - 这里是重音啊
2014-09-29 13:09 ZZHBOY: 后面一小段从这里开始的
2014-09-29 13:09 SoGa: 这里我跟了vocal
2014-09-29 13:10 ZZHBOY: 唔
2014-09-29 13:10 ZZHBOY: 反正我是这么建议 后面肯定还有人会这么说
2014-09-29 13:10 SoGa: 好吧
2014-09-29 13:10 SoGa: fix
2014-09-29 13:10 ZZHBOY: 你看看那个截图 你前面跳了后面一直顺flow感觉不好 建议把kiai都像这样弄一下
2014-09-29 13:11 SoGa: 就是前后note对换下位置吗
2014-09-29 13:11 ZZHBOY: 是
2014-09-29 13:12 SoGa: 我的kiai被人吐槽过呢，，（怎么感觉你kiai time比前面都容易，，
2014-09-29 13:12 SoGa: orz
2014-09-29 13:12 ZZHBOY: 01:04:944 (2) - 这个也是ctrl+g一下
2014-09-29 13:12 ZZHBOY: 反正你多试试 不要一直像贪吃蛇一样一个接一个
2014-09-29 13:12 ZZHBOY: 大概就这些

IamKwaN wrote:

Hi Miao <3

General

1. 現在的metadata有點錯誤 Reference: http://vgmdb.net/album/23769
   

   Title: Memories Last (TV size) - decapitalize that S in "Size"
   Artist: 黒崎真音
   Source: Toaru Majutsu no Index II
   Tags: A Certain Magical Index とある魔術の禁書目録 J.C.Staff Ending Second Season spring DyingNzU

   Fixed Nzu 君已阵亡（X
2. 所有你自己做的難度的kiai要一致 現在EZ是不同的Fixed
3. 把那個.osb刪除了 因為你的圖沒有Storyboard.Fixed
4. E,H,I都加個2000ms的audio-leadin 現在開始的太快 玩家都沒時間作心理準備
5. 所有難度的Widescreen Support都不勾 因為沒有Storyboard 另外Letterbox during breaks只勾E跟NFixed
6. 可以設置custom combo colors Fixed
7. 前奏也用靜音的sliderslide http://up.ppy.sh/files/blank.wav 然後找個custom clap吧 例如: http://puu.sh/bi0NR/2ae0f1b166.wav 內置的聽著eggpain Fixed

Insane

1. 00:01:303 (2) - 尾巴whistle Added
   
2. 00:01:303 (2,3) - DS誤導 00:00:783 (1,2)是1/2 00:01:303 (2,3)是1/1 但距離是差不多 兩個選擇: 1. 降低00:00:783 (1,2)的DS 2. 增加00:01:303 (2,3)的DS Fixed
   
3. 00:02:343 (4) - Delete clap. 直到00:11:881的全部刪除 背景音樂沒有鼓點 1&3白線放soft whistle Fixed 1&3 白线whistle 我只放在单点上了，其他的滑条我都是放head里，，放尾巴感觉有点奇怪._.
   
4. 00:11:881 - 從這裡開始可以試一下最基本的2,4clap跟1,3whistle whistle可以用這個 http://puu.sh/bi1ea/2e1b37703c.wav Fixed Daze
   
5. 00:06:332 (1) - Finish有點吵 降點音量 觉得50还好._. ，可能之前不是吧>.>打死我
   
6. 00:10:320 (2,3,4) - ^^ 然後這裡的排列處理的不好 00:11:361 (7,8)肯定比00:10:667 (3,4,5,6)強烈啊 現在3456的跳比我感覺只是為了湊個五角形而放 建議採取78跳 3456小DS的做法 Fixed 这个不知道算改还是没改。。
   
7. 00:18:124 (1) - Missing clap on tail. Fixed
   
8. 00:20:204 (1) - Finish.Fixed
   
9. 00:22:806 (6) - Finish on tail.Fixed
   
10. 00:27:141 (7) - Remove finish.Fixed i remove finish but added a Whistle there ._.
    
11. 00:31:650 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 難道不是00:32:690 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 比較強烈? 這段的排列跟jump都不合理Fixed
    
12. 00:32:690 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 嘗試兩個一組 DS漸大的排列Fixed
    
13. 00:33:730 (1,2,3,4) - 弧度不舒服Fixed I Stacked Them .
    
14. 00:46:563 (4) - 就算是大白線也不一定要加finish啊 刪除 Fixed
    
15. 00:53:499 (5) - 出界 http://puu.sh/bi0iM/fff87999d6.jpg Fixed
    
16. 00:53:499 (5,1) - 交換NC Fixed
    
17. 00:58:181 (1) - 不用NC 單一一個NC通常用於變速 Fixed i forgot this part , but i heard 00:58:008 has a downbeat there
    
18. 01:08:586 (2) - Finish on head.Fixed
    
19. 01:08:239 (1,2,1) - 同00:01:303 (2,3)Fixed
    
20. 01:09:540 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 角度也是比較彆扭 轉角太小 http://puu.sh/bi0uk/e5c538c7d0.png 還有音效怎麼那麼像機關槍 Fixed (机关枪才激情！（雾
    
21. 01:11:707 (1) - Remove NC as mentioned above.Fixed
    
22. 01:26:967 (1) - 可以在藍線01:26:881開始Fixed
    
23. 這Insane最主要的問題是對節奏的強度拿捏不夠好 建議關掉音效聽一下哪裡特別強然後在排列上反映出來

耳机都坏了。。

Hard

主要有幾個問題

1. 難度太高了 比如00:05:465 (3,4,5) 只是前奏阿 又或者00:35:638 (1,2,1,2,1,2) 00:54:887 (4,5,6,7) - 跳實在不適合 如果不太熟悉Hard的做法 可以全部按DS來排列 建議全程1.1/1.2x
2. 如果你按照DS來排版的話就應該減少了混亂overlap的地方 好像00:49:164 (4,1,2,3,4) / 01:02:170 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,1,2) / 01:10:493 (2,3,4,5,6,1,1,2) - 你全選了它們會發覺全都擁在同一個地方 嘗試善用整個版面 而不是擠在一起
3. 某些節奏過難 00:33:730 (1,2,3,4) - 用kick slider就好啦 就像00:38:933 (5,6) ; 00:39:280 (6)可以多折返一次 00:39:540有明顯鼓點
4. 00:45:696 (1) - 這是unrankable 因為折返arrow被前面的滑條擋住了
5. 音效跟Insane應該是一樣的 我就不說啦
6. 排版要重排 不然BAT們應該都不會給泡 有不懂的可以問我

Hard已阵亡 (X ，unrankable那个学到了。谢谢！

Easy

1. 00:21:418 (1,1) - 同Normal EZ要有4個空拍 Fixed 这个我把spin下了
2. 節奏還可以 最主要是細節的問題 blanket 00:25:754 (1,2) 有好多 我就不一一提出 還有DS 01:11:881 (2,3,4) - 檢查一次吧 整個難度要一致 Fixed 算是检查了下，，ds问题也比较纠结，不知道算不算改好
3. 音效我也沒看 先搞好細節

音效靠直觉下了，，美丽~

很大的改進空間 1st的話大概多找十多二十個摸吧 加油 不懂可QQ我

Minakami Yuki wrote:

we discussed something about rhythm and placement, fix some weird hitsounds.
Good luck.

irc

2014-10-01 10:49 Minakami Yuki: ok let us come back to your map
2014-10-01 10:49 Minakami Yuki: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/491785 Kurosaki Maon - Memories Last (TV size) [Insane]]
2014-10-01 10:49 SoGa: 没事，你可以帮那3个人先
2014-10-01 10:49 Minakami Yuki: 没事了
2014-10-01 10:50 Minakami Yuki: 都搞定了
2014-10-01 10:50 SoGa: 哦，好
2014-10-01 10:50 Minakami Yuki: 嗯开头没啥好说的
2014-10-01 10:50 SoGa: 这么快。
2014-10-01 10:51 Minakami Yuki: 00:10:320 (2) - 
2014-10-01 10:51 Minakami Yuki: 00:10:667 (1) - 
2014-10-01 10:51 Minakami Yuki:  00:11:361 (5) - 
2014-10-01 10:51 Minakami Yuki: 00:11:014 (3) - 
2014-10-01 10:51 Minakami Yuki: 是没有stack好还是故意人为错开
2014-10-01 10:52 SoGa: 估计是前者。。
2014-10-01 10:52 SoGa: orz
2014-10-01 10:53 Minakami Yuki: 稍等我卡了 重启下恶俗
2014-10-01 10:54 Minakami Yuki: ok那把那里改一下吧
2014-10-01 10:54 SoGa: 嗯，fixed
2014-10-01 10:54 Minakami Yuki: 00:22:806 (6) - 
2014-10-01 10:55 Minakami Yuki: 一般来说很不推荐把finish音（重音）放在slider end
2014-10-01 10:55 Minakami Yuki: 会没有打击感
2014-10-01 10:55 SoGa: 这个。
2014-10-01 10:55 Minakami Yuki: 你这图sv 1.4啊 可能有点低 不过还行
2014-10-01 10:55 SoGa: 骏喵给我摸的时候所以我放了
2014-10-01 10:55 SoGa: 00:22:806 (6) - Finish on tail.
2014-10-01 10:56 Minakami Yuki: 这个地方加finish没啥问题
2014-10-01 10:56 SoGa: 我在弄这图的时候不知道sv，所以。，
2014-10-01 10:56 Minakami Yuki: 主要就是节奏
2014-10-01 10:56 SoGa: 就是，建议对吗~
2014-10-01 10:56 SoGa: 嗯
2014-10-01 10:56 Minakami Yuki: 一般来说finish适合放在让人击打的地方
2014-10-01 10:56 SoGa: 那我现在应该去掉还是留着，orz
2014-10-01 10:56 Minakami Yuki: 有种打下去 咣的一下
2014-10-01 10:57 Minakami Yuki: 我建议是00:22:632 (5) - 改1/2滑条
2014-10-01 10:57 SoGa: 嗯，这个我看过
2014-10-01 10:57 Minakami Yuki: 00:22:979 - 放个note
2014-10-01 10:57 Minakami Yuki: 至于怎么调整看你 不调整也行 改节奏只是我的建议而已
2014-10-01 10:58 SoGa: 就是5 和 6 调换位置吗？
2014-10-01 10:58 Minakami Yuki: 我认为是 毕竟音乐游戏 重音的地方要给player击打的感觉 这是很重要的 
2014-10-01 10:58 Minakami Yuki: 你可能需要重新排列下
2014-10-01 10:59 Minakami Yuki: 反正这个地方这么大 排下没啥问题
2014-10-01 10:59 Minakami Yuki: 可以irc完了再改啊
2014-10-01 10:59 Minakami Yuki: 不急这点时候
2014-10-01 11:00 Minakami Yuki: 00:29:742 (1,2) - blanket
2014-10-01 11:00 Minakami Yuki: 00:32:690 (1) - 你听下音乐 我觉得这里clap比finish更加适合一点
2014-10-01 11:00 SoGa: 移2还是 把1 的画好？
2014-10-01 11:00 Minakami Yuki: 00:33:384 (5) - 这个finish就有点多余
2014-10-01 11:01 Minakami Yuki: 把1画好好了
2014-10-01 11:01 Minakami Yuki: 角度稍微调下就行
2014-10-01 11:01 SoGa: finishi
2014-10-01 11:01 Minakami Yuki: 00:38:933 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 这个连打怎么看怎么别扭
2014-10-01 11:01 SoGa: finish多余那个我去掉吧
2014-10-01 11:02 Minakami Yuki: 为什么一定要弯一下= =00:39:366 (6) - 
2014-10-01 11:02 SoGa: （哭，第一次放连打
2014-10-01 11:02 SoGa: 怎么的弧度好？
2014-10-01 11:02 SoGa: 不知道，，直觉下的（x
2014-10-01 11:02 Minakami Yuki: 。。
2014-10-01 11:04 SoGa: 怎么样的弧度好打？
2014-10-01 11:04 SoGa: 还是全部同一位置233
2014-10-01 11:05 Minakami Yuki: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2088957
2014-10-01 11:08 SoGa: 嗯，好
2014-10-01 11:10 Minakami Yuki: 00:44:655 (3,1,3) - hmm又是stack
2014-10-01 11:10 Minakami Yuki: 00:50:031 (2) - 这个建议是离1远一点 搞一个好点的flow
2014-10-01 11:11 Minakami Yuki: 00:50:725 (4) - 这个也是和3太近了 重音体现不出来
2014-10-01 11:11 Minakami Yuki: 而且建议nc
2014-10-01 11:11 SoGa: 果然么，zzh也说过这个问题
2014-10-01 11:11 SoGa: nc了
2014-10-01 11:11 Minakami Yuki: 你这图主要让人觉得奇怪的原因就是重音的利用
2014-10-01 11:11 SoGa: 那1-2-3 都是重音，我应该3个都分开么
2014-10-01 11:12 SoGa: 没分好距离，对么
2014-10-01 11:12 Minakami Yuki: 嘛 距离的把握多做做图就自然弄得好了
2014-10-01 11:12 SoGa: 多多做图，，每天看到我这屎图都不知道怎么改好了
2014-10-01 11:13 Minakami Yuki: 你那个图主要原因就是不论在那一段 距离都有点缩
2014-10-01 11:14 Minakami Yuki: 跟着音乐有伸有缩就更好啦
2014-10-01 11:15 SoGa: hmm
2014-10-01 11:19 Minakami Yuki: 我本来想找个例子
2014-10-01 11:19 SoGa: 。
2014-10-01 11:20 Minakami Yuki: 发现和你那歌都不太像
2014-10-01 11:20 Minakami Yuki: ACTION is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/488990 nao - Miracle!Portable*Mission]
2014-10-01 11:21 Minakami Yuki: 00:24:221 - ~00:29:164 - 
2014-10-01 11:21 Minakami Yuki: 00:56:607 - 
2014-10-01 11:21 Minakami Yuki: 到01:00:698 - 
2014-10-01 11:21 Minakami Yuki: 两个较为平缓的地方
2014-10-01 11:22 Minakami Yuki: ds就相对偏小
2014-10-01 11:22 Minakami Yuki: 我是说我的图哈
2014-10-01 11:24 SoGa: 不知道为啥，这种我都会叠在4下面。。
2014-10-01 11:24 SoGa: 00:56:607 (1) -
2014-10-01 11:25 Minakami Yuki: 我这个是故意哒
2014-10-01 11:25 Minakami Yuki: 其实是以前忘了改(
2014-10-01 11:25 SoGa: eh
2014-10-01 11:25 Minakami Yuki: 00:54:221 (2,2) - 你看看这两个的位置就知道了
2014-10-01 11:26 Minakami Yuki: 00:57:289 (3,1) - 3的尾巴1的头
2014-10-01 11:27 Minakami Yuki: 好 回到你的图吧=.=
2014-10-01 11:27 Minakami Yuki: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/491785 Kurosaki Maon - Memories Last (TV size) [Insane]]
2014-10-01 11:27 Minakami Yuki: 00:43:962 (1,2,3) - 这三个clap是不是多了啊
2014-10-01 11:28 Minakami Yuki: 00:56:794 (1,3) - 这种对称的两个slider最好是形状一样
2014-10-01 11:28 Minakami Yuki: 有些音效加的很莫名啊
2014-10-01 11:28 Minakami Yuki: 01:00:436 (4) - 这头clap我也没看出个所以然
2014-10-01 11:29 SoGa: 00:43:962 (1,2,3) - 这3个clap下了
2014-10-01 11:30 Minakami Yuki: 00:43:962 (1) - 头感觉whistle更合适
2014-10-01 11:30 Minakami Yuki: 00:43:962 (1) - 尾巴上clap
2014-10-01 11:30 Minakami Yuki: 这个也是尾巴clap 00:44:655 (3) - 
2014-10-01 11:30 Minakami Yuki: 这才是24clap
2014-10-01 11:30 SoGa: ok
2014-10-01 11:31 Minakami Yuki: 你这图kiai应该可以无脑24clap
2014-10-01 11:31 SoGa: 我没那么做么(哭
2014-10-01 11:31 Minakami Yuki: 那你怎么没加在01:00:782 (5) - 反而加在01:00:436 (4) - 头上了?
2014-10-01 11:32 SoGa: 这个。。 >.>
2014-10-01 11:32 SoGa: Fixed ! xD
2014-10-01 11:32 Minakami Yuki: 01:09:799 (7) - 漏了 01:10:493 (2) - why finish
2014-10-01 11:33 Minakami Yuki: 对了另外有一点忘了提 还有一个违和的地方
2014-10-01 11:33 Minakami Yuki: 就是你MP3
2014-10-01 11:33 SoGa: mp3？
2014-10-01 11:33 Minakami Yuki: 音乐不是很响 但是音效太响了
2014-10-01 11:34 SoGa: 怎么回事，，这个mp3我是拿一张unrank
2014-10-01 11:34 SoGa: 的
2014-10-01 11:34 Minakami Yuki: 不是音乐的问题
2014-10-01 11:34 Minakami Yuki: 是音效的音量设置的不太合理
2014-10-01 11:34 SoGa: 01:10:147 (1) -  这个finish 留着吗？
2014-10-01 11:34 SoGa: 啊，volume
2014-10-01 11:34 Minakami Yuki: 这个留着
2014-10-01 11:34 SoGa: ？
2014-10-01 11:35 Minakami Yuki: 对 你这音乐的音量并不大 但是你音效70%就听起来音乐全被啪啪啪占据了
2014-10-01 11:35 Minakami Yuki: 我建议绿线整体下调20%
2014-10-01 11:36 Minakami Yuki: 特别是这一段 基本就感觉音乐太稀薄 01:16:216 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 
2014-10-01 11:36 Minakami Yuki: 全都是你下的clap
2014-10-01 11:37 SoGa: 啪啪啪不好嘛！
2014-10-01 11:37 Minakami Yuki: .-.
2014-10-01 11:37 SoGa: 233
2014-10-01 11:38 Minakami Yuki: 01:09:973 (9,10,1) - 这里间距
2014-10-01 11:39 SoGa: 嗯
2014-10-01 11:39 Minakami Yuki: 别的暂时就这样吧 我得整理东西准备回家丽
2014-10-01 11:39 SoGa: 噢，你们国庆
2014-10-01 11:39 SoGa: 好
2014-10-01 11:40 Minakami Yuki: 那我先把irc post进thread了 你慢慢改~
2014-10-01 11:40 SoGa: 01:10:147 (1) - 这个的间距能分开那么一点吗？
2014-10-01 11:40 SoGa: 嗯，好
2014-10-01 11:40 Minakami Yuki: 嗯？
2014-10-01 11:40 Minakami Yuki: 什么意思
2014-10-01 11:40 SoGa: 间距问题
2014-10-01 11:40 Minakami Yuki: 如果接连打的话 重音分不分开无所谓
2014-10-01 11:40 SoGa: 能不和那一串一致，分开那么一点吗
2014-10-01 11:40 Minakami Yuki: 这可以
2014-10-01 11:41 Minakami Yuki: 不过我建议是不要=.= 当然你现在这样也行啊~
2014-10-01 11:41 SoGa: 噢
2014-10-01 11:41 SoGa: 我后期想想
2014-10-01 11:41 Minakami Yuki: 对了01:10:493 (2) - ctrl+g啊
2014-10-01 11:41 SoGa: 这样3-4会flow么
2014-10-01 11:42 Minakami Yuki: 这样3-4也没啥问题的
2014-10-01 11:42 SoGa: ok
2014-10-01 11:42 Minakami Yuki: flow这东西 打的人才感受的比较直接
2014-10-01 11:42 Minakami Yuki: 有时候看还真不一定看得出来 www

lkx_Shore wrote:

接着ircmod

General

1. Fine.

Easy

1. 00:55:927 (1) - 改成note接3/2折返。像这样.
   
   img

   

Fixed

Insane

• 
  在前奏这种地方，你用默认的soft就好。

1. 00:10:320 (2,1,3,5) - 叠好。Fixed
2. 00:16:216 (1,2,3) - 为什么要在红线下clap？Fixed
3. 00:21:072 (5) - 滑条尾巴下Finish.Fixed
4. 00:45:002 (1,3) - 叠好。

Fixed

Other

关于Easy和Insane.你的节奏和音效下得真是非常的怪异...
所以我挑了些和节奏音效无关的东西来摸。
弄懂怎么下节奏和音效以后我觉得你需要把insane和easy进行一次remap。哭。
节奏
短音下note，长音下滑条。滑条头要打击到重音。下在轻音上打起来会非常的怪。
音效
音效起到的是点缀效果，加强打击感。
clap和finish通常是加在和背景音有一致的地方。
whistle除了和上面一样的用法外还有remix效果，也就是你说的按着感觉加。
在你对音效不熟手的时候你可以用soft-whistle。它在多数情况都能很自然的融合进音乐里。

jinhang_ang wrote:

我的mod来了……

[Easy]
1. 00:03:557 (1,2) - 00:04:251 (2) 的blanket有点怪怪的，没有很漂亮地盖着00:03:557 (1) - 至于我建议怎样请看图。

例子

没问题
2. 00:09:106 (2,3) - 感觉上这两个应该要是一样的才对（复制后Ctrl+H后+J）

然后就会fit到很漂亮了

没复制，不知道为啥，感觉不一样
3. 00:21:418 (1) - 这个有点太短了（Easy的spinner应该要让Auto那8000才算够长）。Fixed，把转盘下了
4. 00:30:262 (2) - 把尾巴的点拉到y： 240 。 这样可以让blanket完美。自己改了
5. 00:38:933 (1,2) - 怪异的blanket。稍微移动00:38:933 (1) 以达到一个比较好看的blanket。自己改了

我弄成这样

6. 01:13:268 (3,4) - 这个……用2. 的方法做出两个一样的滑条，然后重新排列，不要有任何遮盖（不然真的很难看）。Fixed
7. 01:20:551 (2,1) - 检查blanket。没问题
最后一段的kiai应该要移除掉（其他难度都没有的kiai？）在ins加了，所以不删


[Insane]
1. 00:07:892 (1,2) - 这个blanket有必要修复一下。把00:08:239 (2) - 的尾巴移到x：332 y：264 。这个自己改了
2. 01:09:540 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 尽量不要用掌声烦死玩家 == Fixed
（其实觉得这个Insane有点奇怪，因为到Kiai的时候感觉上容易很多？！）hm，这个我也。。

The Girls wrote:

Hi Nana~ from Nana's Mod Queue

Oh no... I just realized you speak Chinese. I mean. If you are confused about something. I can write to you in pinyin.




[General]

1. Small extra file in foler: Ed2 - (SoGa).osbFixed
2. I checked your overall hitsounds, you use N:C1 like one in your Insane. You should try to make your beatmaps have consistent hitsounds.So the big downbeat, use the same sort of additions / sampleset at 33 seconds something on each difficulty, etc.Fixedyee , im suck at it .-.
3. Unify your metadata. Easy/Normal AudioLeadIn: 0 and Hard/Insane AudioLeadIn: 2000. Easy/Normal WideScreenStoryboard: 1 and Hard/Insane WideScreenStoryboard: 0 Fixed

[Easy]

1. Go to AIMod, turn on Check Distance Snap. Fix the 4 errors there.
2. 00:00:783 ~ 00:11:881 - Lower the initial volume, and ever measure, increasing the volume gradually. Yes , i change it to 30%
3. 00:03:557 (1, 2) - Fix blanket. Fixed
4. 00:06:678 (4, 1) - New Combo on (4). Remove NC on (1)Fixed
5. 00:08:066 (1) - Blanket.Fixed
6. 00:09:106 (2) - NC. Keep your combos consistent. Combos are to indicate measures, key changes, time signature changes, major shifts in music. Make sure to change the combo ever measure. Fixed
7. 00:09:106 (2, 3) - Blanket.Fixed
8. 00:12:228 (2) - Inconsistent blanketing width. Compare your width to that of 00:10:493, one cuts into the circle splash and the other lays on top of it.Idk
9. 00:12:921 (3, 1) - Blanket. Okay. I'm starting to didn't check for blanking throughout the entire song. There are some very helpful guides on how to make blankets neat on here. I suggest you look through them and revamp all of this before moving forward.i didnt blanket this one
10. 00:13:615 (1, 2) - (1) Remove NC. (2) Add NCFixed
11. 00:16:043 (1) - Remove NC.Fixed
12. 00:17:430 (3, 1) - Add NC on (3), remove on (1)Fixed
13. 00:20:204 (4, 5) - NC on (4). Fix eveness. Its not symmetrical as is.Fixed
14. 00:26:100 (2) - Blanket Fixed
15. 00:27:488 (1, 2) - (1) Remove NC. (2) Add NC. So....You need to go through the rest of the song and redo your Combos. It's all wrong. I'm not going to the rest and pointing out each one.Fixed
16. 00:30:262 (2) - Blanket.Not blanket
17. 00:39:973 (2) - ^ I Change this part
18. 01:01:129 (3) - ^Not neccesary tho
19. 01:23:673 (1) - ^Fixed
20. 01:29:222 - Fade out the spinner as I mentioned, decreasing the volume in increments. The spinner end is too loud as it isFixed i fixed it like decresing the volume from 70-50.30 etc..

I think there are some fundamental changes needed on these three levels. Once you apply these, I think you will naturally pick up some of the things require of the Insane map.
Thanks

I hope for you the best of luck with your map and all. Nana out.
See U Nana ! Sry For being so late replying u ,,really sry and my hard is dead so ,, sry x3

lkx_Shore wrote:

spring's noraml

• 
  总体音量过小，用60%就行。 厚！
  normal的间距应该要保持在0.8x~1.2x内。过大过小都不行 ^
  去掉Widescreen support,因为这个图没有故事版。 咦？widescreen support没勾上啊
  clap下得很乱，还不如直接用2/4clap。点缀音效用默认的soft-whistle更好。 厚，不过全都是24感觉有些偷懒。总之音效重新下了一遍o.o

1. 00:10:493 (1) - 在00:09:106 - 开始更好。 fixed
2. 00:11:881 (1) - 滑条头加Finish. ^
3. 00:26:100 (2,3) - 太近。fixed（其实re了o.o）
4. 00:26:967 (4,5) - 间距保持在1.2x以下。^
5. 00:31:303 (2) - 头加Finish ^
6. 00:32:517 (1) - 结束在大白线(00:34:077 - ) ^
7. 00:45:176 (2) - 加finish. ^
8. 00:45:869 (4,5) - 太近了。^（想了想把这里re辣，下面两条也解决辣）
9. 00:45:869 (4,5) - ^
10. 00:46:389 (5,6) - ^
11. 00:47:950 (1,2,3) - 看起来很怪，直接头尾相接不好么。 唔，试了试头尾好相接像也不太好看好看T.T，算勒，合成一个折返辣）
12. 00:49:164 (1) - 结束在00:50:725 - . fixed
13. 00:52:112 (1,2,3,4) - Normal叠4个？肯定要被挑的啊... 捂脸and fixed
14. 00:54:713 (4) - 滑条身的whistle去掉.^
15. 00:56:274 (3) - ^ ^(看着好萌....)
16. 00:59:048 (3) - 滑条头的clap换成Finish. ^
17. 01:03:557 (1) - 加Finish. ^
18. 01:07:372 (2) - 滑条头加Finish. ^
19. 01:16:389 (4,1) - 太近。 ^
20. 01:24:019 (5,6) - 间距保持在1.2x以下。 ^

Nitrousdragon wrote:

Normal:
00:00:783 - 00:10:493 (1) - Unnecessary break here. Might wanna add some beats here. done !o.o
00:14:482 (4) - This circle to me seems to be awkward in the fact that it's a normal level. You would more commonly see these circles in 2.5 star levels. okey,I agree .Fixed o.o
00:40:493 (1) - Put these circles closer. Farther apart is abnormal in a Normal level. turn notes to a slider
00:42:748 (2,3) - Slider suggested to replace the circles. Umm,nop
00:43:268 (1) - Also, put these circles closer together. turned to a slider, too
00:52:112 (1) - Just a little suggestion; turn these four circles to one slider with 2 reverses. good idea ,thanks

koreapenguin wrote:

K.Penguin's One Day One Mod

General

1. doesn't need disable them. on easy, normal, hard diff. Fixed
2. i think so you should set combo color get along with BG, go to check them. Ok
3. about first Kiai end, try same as Hard diff. end point 01:15:696 - here :3 it's not really important, fix or not its up to you Ok
4. AudioLeadIn: 2000 is so long, first note's start 783, so then i recommend 1500. Ok

Insane

1. orz http://puu.sh/bXk9p/e48f340334.png you must change timing line's vol. Fixed,orz >.> didnt notice it lol
2. 00:00:783 - ~ 00:11:361 - about intro's hitsound... i think so it's doesn't match with song, just noise D:, i recommend just there change it S:C2 Fixed
3. 00:12:054 (2) - del whistle, 00:12:401 (4) - del whistle on head, 00:12:748 (5) - switch whistle. why i point out them you know Fixed
4. 00:16:216 (1,2,3,4) - missing hitsound :3 Fixed
5. 00:39:019 - i recommend del note here, hear the song there haven't any sound. so how about change this? it very well with song's fit http://puu.sh/bXvMa/c50cf4635c.jpg Fixed
6. 00:43:095 (1) - when do play that, feel so some weird to me. ; ^ ; hard to explain this.. well. first try this http://puu.sh/bXvV9/43911e3e21.jpg have stopping or rest there is when play that it would be fun to play Fixed
7. 00:46:563 (4,5) - doesn't need big distance becuz there not storng beat, and bad flow. if you give jump, place there 00:46:216 (2) - drum's snare or clap.
   so try this, http://puu.sh/bXwh2/f0b9a2736a.jpg or change difference :3 Fixed
8. 00:53:499 (1) - add finish on slider head :3 and 00:54:887 (5) - doesn't need here it just noise Fixed
9. 01:07:719 (1) - you can give more distance here, like this http://puu.sh/bXwmw/5e89730f71.jpg, when do you place jump patterns hear the song. follow place with song's fit then will be exciting to play. 01:07:892 (2,1) - yea right like this Fixed,ye , smallboart tell me to
10. 01:26:881 (1) - spinner's end 01:29:222 - i guess, is here Fixed
11. 00:02:343 (1) - new combo here, same as 00:05:118 (1) - , and it more it would be easier to read Fixed
12. 00:16:043 (6,1) - new combo 00:16:216 (1) - new combo del Fixed
13. 00:22:979 (1) - ^ and you must del new combo here 00:23:152 (1) - Fixed
14. 00:24:366 (6,1) - same as ^ Fixed
15. 00:27:141 (1,2) - why did you mix them i don't understand..
16. 00:28:355 (1,2) - yea you followed, vocal. if you want keep that, don't mix them. make consistency it
17. 01:15:696 (5,1) - .... D;

:D

about new combo, try same as Hard diff Fixed



Easy

1. 00:00:783 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1,2) - in insane diff you give a hitsound them, i'm wonder why you didn't put hitsound to them, add it from insane diff or other diff for consistency Idk but lkx said it is not neccessary , i had it at the begin ,but lkx tell me to del it
2. 00:21:592 - 00:22:632 - i guess you need map there i will think about it
3. 00:24:366 (3) - switch whistle, i think so you has wrong hitsound a lot, feel so to me... maybe you need check them Im suck at HitSound .
   _. so .,,
4. 01:26:621 (1) - yea right, all change spinner's end point like this Fixed

Thank u very much Penguin 233,

koreapenguin wrote:

K.Penguin's One Day One Mod







Normal

1. you missing hitsound D; a lot ... i can't check them all. so you must should be check them recheck
2. 01:02:343 (4,5) - pull 1tick, like this http://puu.sh/bXy9U/5565af7edd.jpg or 01:02:170 - add note here, feel so empty add a note at 01:02:170 -
3. 00:52:112 (1) - i don't recommend this repeat 4 and there 1/2, it hard to beginners little bit, they might be confuse on this D: try this http://puu.sh/bXyu1/91d4ff62a9.jpg Umm, the note will be blanketed under the repeat ,I don't know whether it's OK,stay it
4. 01:23:152 (3,4,5) - some weird... so how about this? http://puu.sh/bXyiI/a86fa4f3d4.jpg Fixed
5. 01:25:927 (1,2) - same ^ http://puu.sh/bXykp/dfa19bf091.jpg ^
6. 01:26:967 (1) - same as insane ^

General

• Easy

1. 00:01:996 (2) - 上来就是红线上的单Note我估计得跪倒一片，不过好在是在开头也无碍。
2. 00:32:517 (1) - Easy难度下，转盘晚至00:32:690 - 为好。
3. 01:26:621 (1) - 同上。

spring's Normal

1. 00:18:644 (3,1,2) - 个人感觉这个排列误导，1号Note很容易戳早。

Mei's Hard

1. Nice.

Insane

1. Nice.

scooderic wrote:

Here is a modding.

General

• Easy

1. 00:01:996 (2) - 上来就是红线上的单Note我估计得跪倒一片，不过好在是在开头也无碍。没必要
2. 00:32:517 (1) - Easy难度下，转盘晚至00:32:690 - 为好。没必要
3. 01:26:621 (1) - 同上。没必要
   

谢谢Mod。

1. Why are there so many soft-hitnormal sounds in the folder? They don't seem to be used anywhere in the maps. Also check if normal-hitclap and sliderslide are used anywhere... because I don't see any parts that use them.
2. Disable letterbox in Normal
3. Why does only Easy have custom combo colours? Add them to all diffs?
4. Why "spring's normal" has uncapitalized "normal"? I think it should be capitalized to "spring's Normal".

1. It seems a bit too hard for Easy. I think you should lower OD to 2.5.
2. 00:00:783 - This section sounds really empty right now. I strongly suggest adding some hitsounds like soft-whistles as you did in Insane.
3. 00:00:783 (1) - This slider doesn't follow the music rhythm well, but I guess it's okay to sacrifice that for the symmetry. It would be nice, though, if you could change it somehow to match the rhythm better: http://puu.sh/cSoSu/eaa3bc146f.jpg
4. 00:06:332 (4) - Add soft-hitwhistle.
5. 00:08:413 (2,1) - Distance is too big. Reduce to 1.2x.
6. 00:11:187 (3) - Add soft-hitclap on end.
7. 00:20:898 (2) - I think you can map the empty part here with this rhythm: http://puu.sh/cSpqo/1a4ee9249d.jpg
8. 00:38:933 (1,2,3,4) - I think you should increase distance to 1.2x for consistency.
9. 00:52:112 (1,1,2,3) - I think you should increase distance to 1.2x for consistency.
10. 01:13:962 (2,1,2,3,1) - Make all the distance here consistent 1.2x.
11. 01:20:204 (2,1) - Increase distance to 1.2x.
12. 00:32:517 (1) - Maybe you can add soft-hitfinish on the spinner. It will go well with the music.
13. 00:32:517 (1) - I think you should start the spinner 1/2 beat later to match the start of the drum. http://puu.sh/cSpwA/ddeb15284c.jpg
14. 00:38:933 (1) - I think end should have whistle instead.
15. 00:41:707 (4) - Whistle on head.
16. 00:42:401 (1) - Whistle on repeat.
17. 00:53:499 (1) - Finish on head.
18. 00:59:048 (1) - Maybe finish on head.
19. 01:04:598 (1) - Maybe finish on head. Whistle on end.
20. 01:07:025 (4) - Whistle on end.
21. 01:08:586 (3) - Clap on end.
22. 01:10:667 (1) - Clap on end.
23. 01:12:228 (3) - Whistle, clap, whistle.
24. 01:13:268 (1) - Whistle on end.
25. 01:15:002 (2) - Whistle.
26. 01:16:736 (2) - Whistle on end.
27. 01:17:777 (3) - Finish on end.
28. 01:25:060 (2,3) - Whistles on heads.
29. 00:06:332 (4,1) - Swap new combo.
30. 00:16:043 - Remove new combo.
31. 00:22:979 - Combos in this section are so short... I suggest making them 4 beats long.
32. 00:24:366 - Remove new combo.
33. 00:27:141 - Remove new combo.
34. 00:29:915 - Remove new combo.
    Needs more attention to technical aspects like distance spacing, hitsounds, and combos.

1. 00:00:783 (1) - The slider shape doesn't look good in my opinion. I think you can make the shape smoother by adding another slider point: http://puu.sh/cSrLV/10ff0f946f.jpg
2. 00:05:985 (6,1) - I really think you shouldn't use stack for 3/2 rhythm like this. It is too hard for Normal, and the player will probably click (1) too early, think it's 1/1.
3. 00:09:626 (3) - Doesn't match song rhythm. Extend or shorten by 1/2.
4. 00:10:493 (1,1) - Not enough time between spinner and next object. Either remove the spinner: http://puu.sh/cSsvK/00fa8d7488.jpg or http://puu.sh/cSsy7/03752f8b5b.jpg or http://puu.sh/cSszh/a0017a04d3.jpg, or move the spinner earlier: http://puu.sh/cSsCo/cf9d4fe46b.jpg (Not ideal because spinner is really short).
5. 00:11:881 - Rhythm in this section is too complex because you are trying to follow guitar and drum at the same time. I think you should just choose one or the other. Drum: http://puu.sh/cSsPU/d10fa92dd1.jpg Guitar: http://puu.sh/cSsRB/44db0ffa73.jpg (This applies to the whole section).
6. 00:15:869 (3,1) - This flows awkward. I suggest moving (1) to lead straight from (3): http://puu.sh/cSsY3/2f9d01ecb4.jpg
7. 00:19:858 (3,1) - Minor spacing error.
8. 00:21:418 (1,1) - Not enough time between spinner and next object. Same suggestions as before.
9. 00:25:407 (2,1) - Minor spacing error.
10. 00:31:823 (3,4) - I think it will play better if you make the movement more straight here.
11. 00:41:707 (2,3) - Distance is too big. Reduce to 1.1x.
12. 00:43:268 (3,4,1,2) - Increase distance to 1.1x for consistency.
13. 00:52:112 (1) - SV is too low to use this kind of multiple repeat slider. The player won't be able to see how many repeats are on it, and will most likely assume it is only one. I suggest breaking this up into two 1/2 sliders: http://puu.sh/cStdT/68d8d8595c.jpg
14. 00:54:713 (4,1) - Increase distance to 1.1x.
15. 01:00:262 (3,1) - Distance is much too big. Please reduce to 1.1x.
16. 01:01:129 (1,2,3,4) - Increase to 1.1x?
17. 01:06:678 (4,1) - Distance is too big. Reduce to 1.1x.
18. 01:22:285 (2,3) - Distance here is too small. It may be confusing.
19. 01:23:152 (3,4,5) - This rhythm is hard to understand. I suggest using a more intuitive rhythm based on the music.
20. Your use of hitsounds is strange, and doesn't fit the music very well in my opinion. My hitsound suggestions are below:
21. 00:05:985 (6) - Whistle on end.
22. 00:09:626 (3) - If you didn't change the rhythm here, then the whistle on the white tick is wrong, and doesn't match your pattern. The whistle should be at 00:10:320
23. 00:11:881 (1) - Clap on end.
24. 00:12:401 (2) - Clap on end.
25. 00:13:615 (1,2,3) - Clap, clap, clap on head.
26. 00:14:655 (1) - Remove clap and add whistle on head. Clap on end.
27. 00:15:176 (2) - Clap on end.
28. 00:16:389 (1,2,3) - Clap, clap, clap.
29. 00:17:430 (1) - Clap on end.
30. 00:17:950 (2) - Clap on end.
31. 00:19:164 (1,2,3) - Clap, clap, clap on head.
32. 00:20:204 (1) - Clap on end.
33. 00:22:979 (1) - Finish on head.
34. 00:24:713 (1) - Whistle on end.
35. 00:25:754 (1) - Whistle.
36. 00:27:488 (1) - Whistle on end.
37. 00:28:528 (1) - Whistle on head.
38. 00:30:262 (5) - Remove whistle.
39. 00:32:517 (1) - Finish?
40. 00:38:933 (1) - Whistle on head and end?
41. 00:40:493 (3) - Whistle on head.
42. 00:40:840 (1) - Clap on end.
43. 00:41:707 (2) - Clap.
44. 00:42:054 (3) - Whistle on end.
45. 00:42:748 (1) - Whistle.
46. 00:44:482 (1) - Clap on head, whistle on end.
47. 00:45:522 (3) - Clap.
48. 00:46:910 (1) - Clap on head.
49. 00:47:603 (2) - Clap.
50. 00:47:950 (1) - Finish on head, clap on repeat.
51. 00:53:499 (1) - Finish on head.
52. 01:01:476 (2,4) - Claps.
53. 01:05:811 (2) - Why slider body has whistle? It doesn't match the song. Remove slidewhistle.
54. 01:11:534 (6) - Same here.
55. 01:14:135 (6) - Clap on end.
56. 01:15:002 (1,2) - Whistle, clap.
57. 01:16:389 (4) - Clap on head, whistle on end or just whistle on head.
58. 01:20:725 (5) - Whistle on head and end.
59. 01:21:245 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - Need some hitsounds. Use either clap or whistle on all of them.
60. 00:05:291 - Add new combo.
61. 00:46:389 (5,1) - Swap new combo.
    Need to use hitsounds to match the music, and use them more consistently.

1. Some unsnapped objects. Check Aimod.
2. 00:16:043 (1,2,3,4) - Make the pattern more regular? (consistent relative distance and change in angle)
3. 00:46:389 (5,6) - Interesting placement of (6). It seems to play okay, so I guess that's fine... I think it may be better if the slider shape gives some hint to guide the player's movement to the circle.
4. 01:26:967 (1) - Extend by 1/4 to match the other diffs. Also, it would be nice if you faded out the volume.
5. 00:21:418 (5) - New combo.
6. 00:35:291 (1,4) - NC or no NC, make it consistent.
   Nice.

1. Considering the difficulty of the other maps in this set, OD8 doesn't fit the spread properly. I recommend lowering it to OD7.
2. 00:11:361 (5,6,7,8) - These claps are too loud. Reduce the volume.
3. 00:12:748 (5,6,1) - The flow here is awkward. (6,1) should really have larger distance spacing to emphasize (1) since it is a strong beat.
4. 00:13:615 (2,3,4) - The placement of these sliders is too close in my opinion, and the directions make the pattern feel "cheap" or "thin". I think you can improve it by either reversing (4) or reversing (3): http://puu.sh/cSyr4/74246350fb.jpg or http://puu.sh/cSyrQ/3a58675ec1.jpg
5. 00:35:465 (6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - This offbeat rhythm feels strange, as it doesn't really fit well with the music. I'd opt for just on-beat jumps.
6. 00:38:933 (5) - Add whistle?
7. 00:45:002 (1,2) - Swap to finish to (2)?
8. 00:47:777 (6,1) - It would be nice to jump in the opposite direction. Something like this: http://puu.sh/cSyGE/640efc1c07.jpg or http://puu.sh/cSyJH/360e79babe.jpg
9. 00:54:540 (5,1,2) - Really feels to close and awkward to play. Keep using large spacing like before.
10. 00:55:407 (3,4) - Should make the distance bigger. It might be cool to Ctrl+G on (4,5): http://puu.sh/cSyRF/d8520bf8ae.jpg
11. 01:01:129 (5,6,7) - Too close, and don't feel comfortable to play. Try reversing (6) and (7): http://puu.sh/cSyXm/7b935c426e.jpg
12. 01:05:465 (4,5) - Too close together. Try to space it out more.
13. 01:06:505 (3,4,5) - This flows better in my opinion: http://puu.sh/cSz3s/2f3da7038e.jpg
14. 01:10:493 (2) - Clap on head.
15. 01:11:707 (7,1) - Small spacing is very awkward. Try reverse (7): http://puu.sh/cSz72/45a5bed4c8.jpg
16. 01:14:309 - Strange place to decrease SV. I think you should keep 1.5x here and wait until 01:15:696 to change to 1.0x.
17. 01:26:794 (1) - NC is not necessary here.
    There are some awkward spacing and flow in this map.