From my queue of M4M
- Grey——Just some complaints.
- Black——My personal suggestions.
- Bold——Highly recommended.
- Red——(Maybe) Unrankable, you have to fix it.
[General]
- Inconsistency in uninherited (red) timing sections in Saku's Insane. Other diffs are with 19ms and Saku's Insane with 16ms.
- Tags conflicts, please check AImod. Also you should add GDmapper's username into tags.
- The mp3 is 320kbps in your mapset. The bitrate of a beatmap's audio file must be no lower than 128kbps and no higher than 192kbps.
- Your BG is 1920x1080 which is larger than 1366x768. Background images must be at a maximum of 1024x768 pixels for 4:3, 1366x768 pixels for 16:9.
- 自定义的咚咚声感觉不太合曲。
- Please fix the all unsnap kiai times.
[Easy]
- CS2 with Easy and CS4 with Normal is quite a big gap. I recommond rearrange the easy with cs3 ar3 hp2 od2, and normal to cs3.
- SV 1.0 maybe too high for an Easy diff, I recommend to reset SV to 0.8.
- You have to keep the same DS in an Easy diff. The distance between 00:02:685 (3,4) - , 00:13:352 (1,2,3,4) - , 00:18:685 (1,2,3,4) - and so on are all unrankable.
- 00:00:019 (1,2) - 尾巴碰在一起了不好看
- 00:16:018 (4,1,2) - 尽量不要在Easy里面放遮挡,对新手不友好
- 00:21:352 (1,2) - 现在这种滑条貌似是unrankable的,不能通过红点使滑条变速
嘛基本就是要remap的节奏了
[Normal]
- Change cs4 to cs3.
- 00:14:352 (2,3) - Normal也是要距离相同的
- 00:01:018 (2,3,4,5,6) - 连续单点对新手不太好打,可以将其中3,4变成一个1/1滑条,后面的00:04:018 (3,4,5,6) - 等等也是一样的建议
- 01:14:018 (1,1) - NC比较多余
[Cookiesi's Hard]
- Why the hard is still with SV 1.0?
- 00:00:019 (1,2,3,4) - I feel really confused why you snap this to 1/3? The rhythm is on the 1/4 actually.
- 00:02:685 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
- 00:05:352 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - quite overmapped.
- 00:07:352 (8) - should begin at 00:07:185 - .
———— - The rhythm of the Hard diff is quite in a mess and doesn't follow the music. It needs to be improved more. Maybe remap please.
[Cookiesi's Duel]
- Maybe you should rename the custom diff name since it's not the highest star rating diff in the mapset.
- 00:02:018 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 00:07:352 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - so many overmapped streams that doesn't fit the song. Remove these.
- 00:14:685 (9) - Unrankable sliders, maybe you should make a safe one instead.
———— - Same suggestion in the hard. From my view, this map is not mapped according to the song.
[Insane]
- 00:10:185 (1,2,3) - 头上的whistle太响了,有种喧宾夺主的感觉。
- 00:26:352 (1,2,3) - 00:29:018 (3,4,5) - 00:54:352 (2,3,4) - 不要白线起三连,不符合节奏
- 00:29:935 (2) - 00:31:268 (5) - 不要为了故意加难而overmap,这里的去掉,留着的话听起来也很不舒服,后面有的也是一样
———— - 节奏可以,排列还是新手水平,太乱了,建议多看看rank图。另外其实我觉得这首歌不适合做的这么跳,毕竟还是比较舒缓的音乐曲,不过既然都做成这样了就算了。
[Saku's Insane]
- 00:25:182 (6) - the reverse should be at 00:25:515 -
- 00:37:265 (2) - why begin at 1/4?
- 01:14:015 - add a note.
—— - Rhythm is not good and the placement is ... So many random jumps, it doesn't make any sense and make the map looks in a mess. You should improve more on the placement.
That's all.
In a word, this mapset is quite far away from being ranked. Both mapper and GD mappers should learn more skills from mapping and ranked maps. The rhythm and placement is quite weird now.
Good luck.