Thank you <3 ~-Bakari- wrote:
Yo, as requested.
[Normal]
- 00:35:311 - both the 3/2 gap and the ignored vocals feel rather confusing. Consider placing a circle here or turning 00:35:076 (2) - into a slider to map the beat here, please! Nope.
- 01:00:858 (4) - perhaps, you can remove the circle here. First of all, the pattern feels a bit too hard since there're so many 1/2s. Secondly, comparing to the vocals on 01:00:623 - and 01:01:092 - the beat here is way too quite. Done!
Note: you can also ignore 00:59:920 (2) - to be consistent with 01:03:670.- 01:12:342 - the clap here is almost ignored. Try to emphasize the clap by changing the appearanc of this slider? Okie! Example!
- 01:19:373 - it seems qute confusing to have this beat ignored. The sudden change to 2/1 rhythm feels out of place and the drums here are retty loud. Consider mapping it, please. As said before, this normal is a bit "hard" with the 1/2 notes, I don't think every beat needs to be mapped, and particularly don't think this is confusing.
Note: 01:56:404 - one more missed circle. During the previous kiai pretty similar beat was mapped and your rhythm was much more intensive. Please, place a circle here to keep consistency and to follow the vocals better. ^
The diff was quite nice. Though it felt more like a Normal+ and looked a bit messy sometimes, that was a pleasure to play it and your patterns very interesting! Thank you I guess.
[BREK]
The diff name is not really song related and does not look really appropriate. Change it to something more related to the song, please! BREKPretty nice mapset. Some more mods would make it even better, but I do like it even now!
- Let us know where are yours and where are Kuron-Kun's parts. Let the players know your names! inverness pls
Note: same applies for a few similar patterns. I think you already know which ones.- 01:06:248 (1) - minor - the overlap with the DEFAULT- HP-Bar looksrather untidy.It's not a big deal, but avoiding that overlap sounds like a good idea to me! But it's rankable ):
- 01:35:311 (4,5) - please, use two 1/2 sliders there instead. It will help you to follow the repetition ("silly~ silly~") in the vocals and also it sounds better with the drums! But 01:33:436 (3) -
I like what you did therebut it may need a few more mods to make it perfect. Though it's a good diff even as it is now.
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Best of luck!
The changed: http://puu.sh/8MDko.osu
yay!