I starred it cause the map is kawaii
Thank you <3 ~-Bakari- wrote:
Yo, as requested.
[Normal]
- 00:35:311 - both the 3/2 gap and the ignored vocals feel rather confusing. Consider placing a circle here or turning 00:35:076 (2) - into a slider to map the beat here, please! Nope.
- 01:00:858 (4) - perhaps, you can remove the circle here. First of all, the pattern feels a bit too hard since there're so many 1/2s. Secondly, comparing to the vocals on 01:00:623 - and 01:01:092 - the beat here is way too quite. Done!
Note: you can also ignore 00:59:920 (2) - to be consistent with 01:03:670.- 01:12:342 - the clap here is almost ignored. Try to emphasize the clap by changing the appearanc of this slider? Okie! Example!
- 01:19:373 - it seems qute confusing to have this beat ignored. The sudden change to 2/1 rhythm feels out of place and the drums here are retty loud. Consider mapping it, please. As said before, this normal is a bit "hard" with the 1/2 notes, I don't think every beat needs to be mapped, and particularly don't think this is confusing.
Note: 01:56:404 - one more missed circle. During the previous kiai pretty similar beat was mapped and your rhythm was much more intensive. Please, place a circle here to keep consistency and to follow the vocals better. ^
The diff was quite nice. Though it felt more like a Normal+ and looked a bit messy sometimes, that was a pleasure to play it and your patterns very interesting! Thank you I guess.
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The diff name is not really song related and does not look really appropriate. Change it to something more related to the song, please! BREKPretty nice mapset. Some more mods would make it even better, but I do like it even now!
- Let us know where are yours and where are Kuron-Kun's parts. Let the players know your names! inverness pls
Note: same applies for a few similar patterns. I think you already know which ones.- 01:06:248 (1) - minor - the overlap with the DEFAULT- HP-Bar looksrather untidy.It's not a big deal, but avoiding that overlap sounds like a good idea to me! But it's rankable ):
- 01:35:311 (4,5) - please, use two 1/2 sliders there instead. It will help you to follow the repetition ("silly~ silly~") in the vocals and also it sounds better with the drums! But 01:33:436 (3) -
I like what you did therebut it may need a few more mods to make it perfect. Though it's a good diff even as it is now.
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Best of luck!
Thank you for the mod~Scorpiour wrote:
Hi there~~
red - must be fixed
blue - highly recommend to consider
black - only suggestions
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- JPG format is recommend for the bg due to the size Fixed
that's all, i recommend to find several mods more and then call me back to recheck
- 00:16:326 - i suppose here could be a note due to both the drum and the vocal Added
- 01:11:639 - also heard weird a little here since you chose to follow vocal a blank is not pretty appropriate i think Added
- 01:45:623 (1,2) - the beat here is Fixed
- 02:00:623 (1) - compared with a soft note, a delayed break is better This isn't a soft note, it's a drum sound that has heavy impact, a break start doesn't have as much impact as this.
Thanks for moddingScorpiour wrote:
Hi there~~
red - must be fixed
blue - highly recommend to consider
black - only suggestions
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- JPG format is recommend for the bg due to the size
that's all, i recommend to find several mods more and then call me back to recheck
- 01:28:279 (3) - for this kinda pattern i may choose to a ctrl+g here, also 01:36:717 (2) - ..etc Okie
- 01:34:842 (2,3) - i suppose a slider here may be better Added a slider
Thank you for the mod~Melophobia wrote:
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00:08:123 - A finish would fit nicely with the beginning of new stanza Done
00:16:326 - Add a note here? Can't find a good location for it, unchanged for now.
00:41:404 (3) - Normal finish is kinda loud and soft one fits better imo. The normal one fits the vooshing sound better.
00:45:154 - Feels empty so i'd like you to add a note here. It was done to emphasise the vocals but I added a note
00:48:904 (4) - Maybe soft finish here? Added a normal one because of voosh.
01:09:998 - Add a finish here? Done
01:45:623 - Change the sampleset to normal one? That way it sounds better and is consistent with 00:54:998 - Done
02:22:654 - I don't think this whistle sounds that great. I find it to emphasise the odd electronic sound pretty well, keeping it for now.
[Easy]
01:08:123 (1) - Add a finish here.
02:15:623 (1) - ^ Added both
minna saiko arigato~ atama itai Si senorita, mui banana.
Thanks for modding!Melophobia wrote:
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00:23:123 - ^ Ok
00:26:404 (3,1) - Space them at higher DS for a better blanket? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1618981 Yay
00:36:717 (2,3,4,5) - This clap spam doesn't sound good imo, how about putting claps only on red ticks and use normal hitnormal for the rest (white ticks)? Fixed
00:58:045 (2) - Drum clap? Yes
01:01:795 (6,7) - Spacing is kinda inconsistent. Fixed
01:05:545 - Drum finish. Okie
01:07:654 (5) - This straight slider is kinda unfitting considering all the sliders around here are curved ones. i'd suggest something like this; http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1619770 Ok
01:28:279 - ^ Done
01:32:029 - Finish. Ok
01:35:779 - ^ Ok
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01:23:123 - Spinner here like what you did at 00:36:248 (1) - . What about everything I mapped and the flow
01:11:873 (4) - Halve the length of this slider since such a long slider doesn't fit with the music. What, but what about these 01:46:561 (2) - 01:49:373 (1) - 01:53:123 (1) - orz
01:24:998 - Add a finish here. Okie
01:31:561 (6) - this straight slider doesn't look good imo considering the previous slider is curved, i suggest something like this; http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1619904 :3
01:35:311 (5,6) - (6) is way too inclined imo. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1619907 Fixed
02:00:623 (1) - Normal sampleset fits better with the heavy beat imo, soft addition is okay as it is. Ok, it's better now
minna saiko arigato~ atama itai
Thank you for the bootiful mod~Desperate-kun wrote:
Mod by Request :3General
- The section after the last kiai-time is pretty loud and all that... It's worth kiai-mode in my opinion. You could end the kiai at 02:45:154 and start a new one at 02:45:623, which could end at 03:00:623. Nah, I really like the current kiai design that focuses on the drops.
- Otherwise fine I guess.
Easy
- 00:08:123 (1) - This might work better as an 1/1-reversed slider, since at all 3 white ticks the vocals have the same emphasis. They kind of belong together, ya know Done
- 00:19:373 (1,2) - The transition here doesn't flow good in Easy. It's better if the curve of (1) leads the player into the direction of (2). I suggest moving (2) more upwards, and rearranging it, so it makes up a blanket with the next object. See: It's kinda fine at the moment, unchanged.
I know 00:20:779 (2,4) are not similar anymore then.. But idk- 00:28:748 (3) - Is there a special reason to use this shape here? I dunno, since the angle between the straight parts is pretty high, it looks kinda rebellious... I would not use it without a special sound or smt to emphasize. Do this instead: Done
Looks clean right o:- 00:35:779 (2) - Same again, movement can be improved (for the same reason). Move the slider like that: Fixed it in another way
Still not the best movement, but atleast better, and it's easy to fix.- 00:37:420 (4) - I don't really like this rhythm, since you mapped the "hey hey hey" before and now you are breaking it... But since this is an Easy, you can't do much about it probably. Same for 01:24:295 (5) ofc I kinda mapped on the hey hey hey previously though
- 00:45:623 (1,2,3) - Damn it looks great but the curve you have to move might be a little bit too extreme for newbies... I'd change that since it's easy to do, because there's a spinner afterwards. But, do what you want. I guess you won't change this anyways.. How could I change it? ._.
- 00:48:904 (4) - If you don't change that ^, plz move this so it fits to the curve of the previous slider: Done
- 00:56:873 (3) - Hmm I dunno, kind of the same like at the beginning.. I'd use a 1/1-slider with reverse myself because of the strong vocals- I mean it's "HELLO KITTY" you have to emphasize that Well, you could atleast use a slider with a red dot to emphasize it, the blanket 00:54:998 (1,3) is wrong anyways. Only fixed the blanket.
EDIT: I know, it looks horrible ;w; Whatever- 01:05:779 - Map this. You always mapped the "hello kitty" out, atleast you didn't use a gap like this ;w; It's for consistency and it sounds better It fits the melody better imo
- 01:14:686 (2) - Move more to the left, for a better transition with 01:13:748 (1) - No Irre, I'm not changing that.
- 01:39:998 (6) - NC? Since this combo is covering up a pretty long time currently I'm almost sure I added a combo on 01:38:123 (4) - At one point
- 01:53:123 (1,2) - The transition movement can be improved again. Maybe you could ctrl+h and ctrl+j (1) and then rotate it a bit... to get this:
Fixed- 02:17:498 (3,4) - I dislike some of your gaps o: But this one stands out.. Why does it exist? There's a continues "kakakakakakakakakaka..." vocal sound here and the bass is also pretty excited. The gap feels inconsistent as well, since there are no other gaps like that in this section. Use this rhythm will be better: Changed in a different way.
A red-dot slider would fit here well because of the broken and short vocals.- 02:33:904 - Dat gap again o: Vocals are still pretty emphasized there, so you should probably map this beat. But, the wubz..
- 02:41:404 - Same. Music pls
- 02:58:279 - Same again. Fixed
- I like this Easy. The rhythm was kind of not consistent at some sections and sometimes your gaps feel a bit awkward, but I mentioned the most important ones in my mod. The flow is quite good, it gets better at the end. I'm very picky with Easys, ya know ^^ So you've done a good job. Your hitsounding is nice indeed
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- 00:11:170 (3) - The spacing difference to the previous and following object is quite noticable ingame. Please fix it. Grid snap pls
- 00:18:201 (2,3) - This overlap looks quite sloppy in my opinion, but I know you like these... Still, plz Priti, plz Slider cuts <3
- 00:18:201 (2,3,4,1) - Why do these antijumps look similar, though there's a different gap in the timline between them? I don't see a sense in it, you should probably change it to avoid confusing for less advanced players- Remember this is a Hard! Fiddled aorund with the pattern
EDIT: I can see you are using this all over the map ;w; I highly recommend you to change it. It won't be too complicated, just moving some objects slightly a bit.- 00:37:889 (5) - Same. Also 00:48:201 (2) + 02:17:967 (2) Fixed
- Well, Ok. Basically, I think this diff needs some more polishing. It's really hard to mod it, as these are mostly general things that apply to your whole diff, but I tried to explain it a little bit in my mod.
Your flow is pretty good here, well done. Your histounding is also nice, as always. What bothers me is the rhythm. First of all, your use of 3/4-sliders is really bad sometimes. It basically sounds wrong. If there's a loud vocals or smt at the red tick and the blue tick is not of big importance (or not even hearable in the music), why should someone use a 3/4-slider then? Second thing is, what I didn't mention in my mod, sometimes you are not mapping beats (by using 1/1-sliders) very inconsisently and not really fitting to the music. That's only my opinion though.. For example this one 01:14:217 (2). Then, your spacing looks a little bit sloppy, but I mentioned the most noticable issues in my mod. Were you using grid snap for this? If so, I recommend you to turn it off for future maps. As for the spacing things, it's my fault most of the time. The rhythm ones are on Kuron's parts so blame him o3o
Come, come, Kitty Kitty, you're so Priti, Priti- dat was bad and I can't hear that song anymore
Map is nice tho. Normal is almost perfect, Easy is great, Hard needs some work imo to be perfect but should also be ready for ranking if you want that quickly
Good luck :3
Thanks for modding!Desperate-kun wrote:
Mod by Request :3Kuron's Normal
- 00:17:967 (5,1) - The transition movement between these can be improved. Currently, it feels strange to move down after (5), since the slider points in the upper direction. Something like this would be better: Okie
(I only changed (5) ofc)- 00:35:076 (2,3) - Hmm, it feels strange to have a 3/2-gap here, first of all you didn't use these at an other place, and secondly it might be hard to read for newbies since it doesn't look much different from a 1/1-gap. I suggest using this rhythm instead, which would also be consistent with 00:26:873 (1,2,3) then: Changed
- 01:18:904 - I suggest using a 1/1-slider starting here instead, since this gap feels quite strange. It would fit quite well imo It's fine imo.
- Ok. This Normal is almost perfect, if you fix the issues I listed above :3 I don't recommend to use 1/2-stacks and 1/1-stacks in the same map, since it might confuse the newbies as they look quite similar with this AR o: But oh well, I guess it's fine.
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- 00:25:467 (1) - Ehh, that 3/4-slider doesn't fit at all. Why is it even there? Use 1/2 ;w; BLAME THE MOD WHO FORCED ME TO DO THIS!!!
- 00:32:029 (5) - Again, 3/4 doesn't fit. It's not that bad this time, but since the vocals at the red tick are so strong, you should really consider changing this to 1/2 as well. It's fine imo orz
- 00:34:373 (1,2,3) - Noticable spacing difference, as I said before. It looks bad, especially because these are in a straight line. Move (3) a little bit to fix it. A little bit to where... but I think it's fixed now
- 00:56:873 (6) - Use 1/2, for the same reason as 00:32:029 (5). Also 02:32:498 (1) Ok!
- Well, Ok. Basically, I think this diff needs some more polishing. It's really hard to mod it, as these are mostly general things that apply to your whole diff, but I tried to explain it a little bit in my mod.
Your flow is pretty good here, well done. Your histounding is also nice, as always. What bothers me is the rhythm. First of all, your use of 3/4-sliders is really bad sometimes. It basically sounds wrong. If there's a loud vocals or smt at the red tick and the blue tick is not of big importance (or not even hearable in the music), why should someone use a 3/4-slider then? Second thing is, what I didn't mention in my mod, sometimes you are not mapping beats (by using 1/1-sliders) very inconsisently and not really fitting to the music. That's only my opinion though.. For example this one 01:14:217 (2). Then, your spacing looks a little bit sloppy, but I mentioned the most noticable issues in my mod. Were you using grid snap for this? If so, I recommend you to turn it off for future maps. ok ):
Come, come, Kitty Kitty, you're so Priti, Priti- dat was bad and I can't hear that song anymore
Map is nice tho. Normal is almost perfect, Easy is great, Hard needs some work imo to be perfect but should also be ready for ranking if you want that quickly
Good luck :3
Damnit Kuron ;3Scorpiour wrote:
Recheck, no kds~
[General]
- Missing video in Normal & Hard
this is actually a reason why someone would add a storyboard, LOL.Priti wrote:
Due to our styles being pretty similiar, I don't really think a storyboard will be required.
I'm ready~
Was going to say the sameGabe wrote:
this is actually a reason why someone would add a storyboard, LOL.Priti wrote:
Due to our styles being pretty similiar, I don't really think a storyboard will be required.
I'm ready~
bby, Gabe is a GMT nowKuron-Kun wrote:
Many collabs don't have SB, I don't think we actually need one.
gabe pls rank this
andrea pls rank this