Hi!
I think this is it.. That's not a lot I'm sorry, it's already a good mapset though!
Good luck!
PS: Wow, I was hoping for a M4M but someone was faster it seems, nvm
[Easy]
- 00:08:123 (3) - I find the shape of this slider a bit.. random, try to copy paste 00:08:123 (1) - and ctrl+h ctrl+j (http://puu.sh/8Dh4l.jpg)
- 00:41:404 - Adding a note might be nice here since you added one here 00:40:936 (4) - while she's saying twice "pretty" so it would make sense to click twice..you know what I mean? (and it would be more constant with the following part).
- 00:56:873 (3) - It may be on a strong white tick, it doesn't sound catchy to me (as if it was on a red tick) try something like this maybe http://puu.sh/8DhAA.jpg (and add a clap on the big slider maybe)
- 01:35:779 - I would maybe add a note..
[Kuron's Normal]
- 01:09:998 (1) - I would copy paste 01:10:701 (2) - and ctrl+h ; ctrl+j the cursor would make a clearer up and down..
- 01:33:436 (3) - ^ but it fits better probably because of the lyrics x).
[Collab]
- 00:09:529 (5,1) - try to ctrl+h those sliders. It looks a bit weird because of the triple before the first one which encourages to go in the opposite direction. . The BPM is slow, so it doesn't really matter anyway, but I think it would still play better and it wouldnt change the idea..
- 00:23:123 (1,2,3,4) - The pattern looks a bit odd to me as well. Try something like this. http://puu.sh/8Dj56.jpg (I reduced the AR for the screen)
- 00:30:154 (4) - Ctrl+H ?
- 00:38:944 (2) - Try to move at x:356:y:188 for the same reason as my first point. You did it pretty nicely almost everywhere else so I guess you care about it.
- 01:20:311 (6) - Ctrl+J to create a better flow with this slider 01:21:248 (1) -
- 02:29:920 - Han http://puu.sh/8DjQF.jpg (with a really slow volume (if you like though xD) it's just moe.
- 02:39:529 (4) - the blanket isn't perfect and I can see it!
I think this is it.. That's not a lot I'm sorry, it's already a good mapset though!
Good luck!
PS: Wow, I was hoping for a M4M but someone was faster it seems, nvm