Yo, as requested.
[General]
The diff name is not really song related and does not look really appropriate. Change it to something more related to the song, please!
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Best of luck!
[General]
- I would fade the bright-pink colour a bit. It seems to be a bit too bright and may hurt eyes a bit while playing.
- Consider adding Collab and Collaboration to the tags. Those who like mixed styles may look for your map!
- There're some 1/2 sliders which may feel a bit too hard for beginners. Also, you have some 2/1 gaps which also may trouble somebeginners, so I'd go with OD2.
- 00:10:467 - in oder to point out the clap, I would curve the slider a bit, at this point. Example.
Note: sseems like you can do the same for some more sliders, so, please check the diff and see what can you do. - 00:13:748 (3,4,1) - you don't use a lot of stacks normally, do you? The stack here feels a bit out of your style and looks rather confusing for the beginners. Why don't you change into a simple triangle-shaped pattern, which'd flow better and be more readable? example
- 00:32:498 (3) - minor - looks a little bit offscreen. Moving it up a bit would definetly make it more readable and rankable.
- 00:41:404 - I would place here a circle to emphasize the repetition in vocals. We can clearly hear "priti~ priti~" so, placing two circles would fit with the song perfectly.
Note: same applies for some ore patterns. Since you're pretty experienced it shouldn't be a trouble for you to fix them all. Feeling confused? Just contact me in-game and I'll help you with that! - 00:47:498 (3) - minor - I would recommend you to avoid such patterns since they trouble beginners and look quite messy. How? Do you like blankets?
- 01:29:686 - minor - I think that the red nod on the slider is suppoded to reflect the clap in the music, Please, change the shape, so the slider would fit with the song a bit better.
- 01:39:998 (6) - feels like you've missed a new combo there. The slider sounds different from what you've had earlier in this combo and the comboing feels rather inconsistent, imo.
- 02:48:435 (3) - you didn't use such whistles before and it doesn't sound good with the vocals/music. I would ask you to remove the whistles, please!
- 02:54:998 (3,1) - the flow heree is not really intuitive and beginners may mistakenly hit the slider's tail. Consider moving it somewhere else to make the pattern a bit more suitable for the easiest diff.
I don't really agree with the way how you ignore some vocals. Vocals are really important and a lot of beginners try to stick to them, therefore, ignoring vocals is not a good idea, imo. Also, some of the patterns were quite messy. from my point of view. In general, this is a great diff, but you could make it even better!
- 00:35:311 - both the 3/2 gap and the ignored vocals feel rather confusing. Consider placing a circle here or turning 00:35:076 (2) - into a slider to map the beat here, please!
- 01:00:858 (4) - perhaps, you can remove the circle here. First of all, the pattern feels a bit too hard since there're so many 1/2s. Secondly, comparing to the vocals on 01:00:623 - and 01:01:092 - the beat here is way too quite.
Note: you can also ignore 00:59:920 (2) - to be consistent with 01:03:670. - 01:12:342 - the clap here is almost ignored. Try to emphasize the clap by changing the appearanc of this slider? Example!
- 01:19:373 - it seems qute confusing to have this beat ignored. The sudden change to 2/1 rhythm feels out of place and the drums here are retty loud. Consider mapping it, please.
Note: 01:56:404 - one more missed circle. During the previous kiai pretty similar beat was mapped and your rhythm was much more intensive. Please, place a circle here to keep consistency and to follow the vocals better.
The diff was quite nice. Though it felt more like a Normal+ and looked a bit messy sometimes, that was a pleasure to play it and your patterns very interesting!
The diff name is not really song related and does not look really appropriate. Change it to something more related to the song, please!
- Let us know where are yours and where are Kuron-Kun's parts. Let the players know your names!
- Please, set OD to 6 due to the usage of 3/4 and 1/4 patterns the diff may be a bit tricky sometimes. Also, it'll help you to keep the spread balanced!
- 00:44:217 (2) - divide it into an 1/2 and 1/1 slider. It'll help you to follow "with meeeee" in the vocals. Need an example>
- From 00:49:373 and to 00:51:248 - this part was mapped in the easier diffs, so covering it with a spinner at the hardest diff appears a bit illogical to me. You can make some awesome stuff there, show us more of your creatibvity, guys!
Note: same applies for a few similar patterns. I think you already know which ones. - 01:06:248 (1) - minor - the overlap with the DEFAULT- HP-Bar looksrather untidy.It's not a big deal, but avoiding that overlap sounds like a good idea to me!
- 01:35:311 (4,5) - please, use two 1/2 sliders there instead. It will help you to follow the repetition ("silly~ silly~") in the vocals and also it sounds better with the drums!
- 02:00:623 (1) - not a big deal, but i would just drag the beginning of the break here. Having a note, just one note, after the spinner is rather cruel and some players may get mad
I like what you did therebut it may need a few more mods to make it perfect. Though it's a good diff even as it is now.
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Best of luck!