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Satellite
fight !! wating reply!
Topic Starter
4anke

Satellite wrote:

hitsound suggestion
23:39 *Satellite is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/415884 Chata - Kokkei to Iu Nakare [Normal]]
23:40 Satellite: 00:13:873 (4) - slider head add whistle
23:40 Satellite: 00:16:765 (4) - ^
23:40 4anke: ok
23:41 4anke: fixed
23:41 Satellite: 00:24:717 (4) - ^
23:41 Satellite: 00:31:946 (1) - ^
23:41 Satellite: 00:34:114 (5) - ^
23:41 Satellite: (slider head)
23:41 Satellite: 00:37:006 (5) - ^
23:41 Satellite: 00:42:788 (4) - ^
23:42 Satellite: 00:48:211 (5) - slider end
23:42 4anke: fixed
23:42 Satellite: 00:48:933 (6) - remove whistle
23:42 Satellite: 00:54:355 (4) - slider head
23:43 Satellite: 00:56:525 (3) - make more beautiful please. try this (please wait)
23:43 Satellite: [http://puu.sh/e3KLJ/15dc85bd82.jpg try this ?]
23:44 Satellite: 00:59:416 (3) - same as above.
23:44 Satellite: 00:56:525 (3) - add whistle on slider reverse
23:44 Satellite: 00:59:416 (3) - same as above.
23:46 Satellite: 01:01:223 (1) - slider end add whistle
23:46 Satellite: 01:03:753 (1) - ^
23:46 Satellite: 01:05:199 (3) - ^
23:46 Satellite: 01:07:367 (3) - add whistle on slider head
23:46 Satellite: 01:08:451 (5) - slider end
23:47 Satellite: 01:10:259 (2) - add whistle
23:47 Satellite: 01:10:982 (4) - slider end
23:47 Satellite: 01:13:151 (2) - head
23:47 Satellite: 01:14:596 (4) - head too
23:47 Satellite: 01:17:488 (5) - slider head
23:48 Satellite: 01:18:934 (2) - ^
23:48 Satellite: 01:20:379 (4) - ^
23:48 Satellite: 01:21:825 (2) - ^
23:48 Satellite: 01:23:271 (5) - ^
23:48 Satellite: 01:24:717 (2,4) - ^
23:48 Satellite: 01:27:247 (2) - make more beautiful :3
23:50 Satellite: [http://puu.sh/e3LwT/42337397fe.jpg try this ?]
23:50 Satellite: 01:31:946 (5) - slider head add whistle because you are pattern ~
23:51 Satellite: 01:33:030 (2) - add whistle on slider reverse
23:51 Satellite: 01:34:837 (4) - slider head
23:51 Satellite: http://puu.sh/e3LIb/49137e1eff.jpg
23:52 Satellite: why use this break ?
23:52 Satellite: I think add note better http://puu.sh/e3LL5/aec3c7dc16.jpg
23:52 Satellite: What do you think :3 ?
23:55 Satellite: fight ww
00:01 Satellite: 01:50:018 - ~ same as whislte suggestion :3
00:01 Satellite: fight !!
00:02 Satellite: and same as Hard diff ! If you are sure please use hitsound copy ?
00:02 Satellite: https://osu.ppy.sh/u/tari
00:02 Satellite: http://puu.sh/e3MX1/73f9de7dab.jpg
00:02 Satellite: hitsound copier :3 please dl w
00:03 4anke: ok,thank you :3 fixed nomal diff now
00:06 Satellite: fight ! I'm not modding placement now =3=
00:19 4anke: 01:50:018 - use finish and whistle?
00:19 Satellite: finish is okay
00:20 4anke: only finish?
00:20 Satellite: yes :3
00:21 4anke: 01:38:452 - add a note in all diff?
00:23 4anke: 0.0
00:29 4anke: all fixed now

Sorry late ~

[Normal]
  1. 00:48:211 (5) - Missing rhythm.
  2. 01:07:007 (2) - This note hide under Slider it is Overlap. please changed another pattern.
  3. 01:15:138 - Inherited Points unsnapped. please move 01:15:138 - (you are setting 01:15:139 - )
  4. 01:35:922 (2) - add whistle on slider end.
  5. 01:51:102 (2,3) - More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this.
    http://puu.sh/enrVv/a3f553c80b.jpg
  6. 01:59:416 (3) - add whistle here? maybe forgot whistle.
  7. 02:05:198 (2) - Same as above.
  8. 02:10:259 (1) - Mmm.. I think not fit this spinner. please put some circle , slider ?
  9. 02:24:716 (1) - This spacing is really awkward. Please don't use stack here.
  10. 02:34:476 - add note. Why not add note here ? This rhythm is kind of questionable for me =w= About before 1st kiai section. 00:50:017 (2,3,4,5,6) -
  11. 03:01:584 (4,5) - You must be changed distance 0.9
[Hard]
  1. Please changed AR7 ? AR7.5 is too fast. and for mapset diffspread.
  2. 00:34:837 (1) - Move X:120 Y:184 better. for distance and Triangle.
  3. 00:59:416 (1) - I kinda want a regular clap on slider reverse.
  4. 01:00:500 (2) - Same as above. You have forgotten the clap ?
  5. 01:03:392 (6,7,8) - Overmapped ? This rhythm is kind of questionable for me. Try this rhythm ?
  6. 01:05:560 (2) - add clap on slider head.
  7. 01:38:632 - Not need break time here.

    changed here
  8. 01:50:199 (2) - I kinda want a regular clap on slider reverse.
  9. 01:52:187 (3,4) - Why used distance *1.5 jump ? I think not fit this part. please used distance snap *1.2
  10. 01:55:079 (3,4) - Same as above.
  11. 01:57:247 (4,5) - There is much overlap and is hard to look. Changed rhythm and placement here ?
  12. 02:02:669 (4) - You forgot clap here. add clap please.
  13. 02:03:753 (3,4) - More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this. and you forgot clap here 02:04:114 -
  14. 02:06:645 (5,6) - Same as above. more better rhythm. try this.
  15. 02:07:729 (3) - add clap on slider head. you are pattern.
  16. 02:09:175 (2) - Same as above.
  17. 02:10:620 (2) - add clap. why not add clap here ?
  18. 02:11:343 (5) - and this. add clap. why... ? mistake ? Dx
  19. 02:11:705 (1) - I think not fit this spinner. Changed some circle , slider ? Try this.
  20. 02:21:825 (1) - Mmm... This rhythm is kind of questionable for me. changed this ?
  21. 02:27:247 (5) - Why distance *1.00 ? I think *1.2 better.
  22. 02:27:970 (2) - add clap on slider head.
  23. 02:29:054 (1,2,3) - Mmmm... More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this.
  24. 02:31:584 (3) - add clap on slider head. why not clap here ?
  25. 02:33:392 (1) - Overlap is not preferable in Hard diff.
  26. 02:33:753 (3,6) - add clap ? for you are pattern.
  27. 02:34:837 (1,2,3) - Why *1.00 ? 1st kiai section used 1.8 00:50:741 (1,2,3) -
  28. 02:36:283 (1) - add clap on slider end.
  29. 02:38:271 (2,3,4) - More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this.
  30. 02:40:259 (3) - add clap on slider head.
  31. 02:40:982 (2) - Same as above.
  32. 02:41:705 (4) - Overlap is not preferable in Hard diff.
  33. 02:43:512 (1) - add clap on slider end. mistake ?
  34. 02:44:054 (2,3) - More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this.
  35. 02:48:572 (3) - Don't used this pattern. please changed another pattern. this overlap is not preferable in Hard diff.
  36. 02:49:657 (3) - add clap ?
  37. 03:02:669 (3) - add clap on slider head.
  38. 03:03:753 (1) - add clap on slder end.
  39. 03:09:898 (2) - add clap on slider head.
  40. 03:10:259 (3,4,5,6,7) - Hard to look this pattern. please don't stack another pattern.
Hard diff needs more work orz
Call me again. I'll rerecheck next week. and full mod again.
There are a lot of mistakes of hitsound. Please check all yourself.
Sorry,so late.I can't notice your reply in time.All fixed,except normal diff:00:48:211 (5) - Missing rhythm.I can't understand your means,so I don't know how to fix.
pkhg
hi random modding cuz chata <3

[General]
Found unused .wav files:
- normal-sliderslide.wav
- normal-hitclap.wav
- soft-slidertick2.wav
- soft-sliderslide2.wav
- normal-hitnormal.wav
You must delete them.

[Collab Insane]

00:40:620 (1,3) - fix overlap
00:53:994 (3,4) - ctrl+g maybe? better rhythm (you must adjust placement after doing this :P)
00:55:620 (3) - remove whistle
01:15:139 - unsnapped greenline
01:54:717 (2,3,4,5,1) - too many stacks. maybe you can unstack some :P
02:24:537 - unsnapped greenline
02:26:524 (3,4) - ctrl+g maybe? for rhythm i mean :3
02:39:536 - why you skipped this? feels weird imo

[Hard]

00:28:331 (4) - change it into a 1/2 slider with 1 reverse
00:48:572 (3,4,5,6) - isn't this too hard?
00:52:187 (1) - you forgot a clap on tail
02:50:199 (5) - looks a bit ugly :3
02:56:524 (1,2) - tweaked them a bit:
234,292,176524,6,0,B|164:292|164:292|128:328|72:304,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
234,292,177247,2,0,B|302:292|302:292|338:328|394:304,1,150,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
03:10:259 (3,4,5,6,7) - too hard :P

[Normal]

Fine~

Idk exactly but maybe you'll need a diff between normal and hard. 1,96 to 3,46 is a big jump imo

Anyway good luck ^^
Topic Starter
4anke

pkhg wrote:

hi random modding cuz chata <3

[General]
Found unused .wav files:
- normal-sliderslide.wav
- normal-hitclap.wav
- soft-slidertick2.wav
- soft-sliderslide2.wav
- normal-hitnormal.wav
You must delete them.fixed

[Collab Insane]

00:40:620 (1,3) - fix overlapfixed
00:53:994 (3,4) - ctrl+g maybe? better rhythm (you must adjust placement after doing this :P)fixed
00:55:620 (3) - remove whistlefixed
01:15:139 - unsnapped greenlinefixed
01:54:717 (2,3,4,5,1) - too many stacks. maybe you can unstack some :P
02:24:537 - unsnapped greenlinefixed
02:26:524 (3,4) - ctrl+g maybe? for rhythm i mean :3unnecessary IMO
02:39:536 - why you skipped this? feels weird imoprefer mine

[Hard]

00:28:331 (4) - change it into a 1/2 slider with 1 reverseprefer mine
00:48:572 (3,4,5,6) - isn't this too hard?no
00:52:187 (1) - you forgot a clap on tailfinish is proper on there
02:50:199 (5) - looks a bit ugly :3I don't think so.
02:56:524 (1,2) - tweaked them a bit:fixed
234,292,176524,6,0,B|164:292|164:292|128:328|72:304,1,150,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
234,292,177247,2,0,B|302:292|302:292|338:328|394:304,1,150,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
03:10:259 (3,4,5,6,7) - too hard :Plet me think...

[Normal]

Fine~

Idk exactly but maybe you'll need a diff between normal and hard. 1,96 to 3,46 is a big jump imoI am so lazy to map a new diff,if necessary,I will map a new different between the normal and hard

Anyway good luck ^^
think you to mod my map :)
Satellite
[Normal]
  1. 00:51:102 (4) - Hitsound changed clap better. please try.
  2. 00:58:331 (1,2) - This rhythm is kind of questionable for me. Try changed this rhythm.
  3. 01:06:645 (1) - overlaps to 01:05:199 (3) - this slider end. changed this pattern. and Try use this code.
    Code is 01:06:645 (1,2,3) - this part. please check this.
    492,96,66645,6,0,P|464:148|408:176,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    308,140,67367,2,0,P|254:120|188:136,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    120,208,68090,1,2,0:0:0:0:
  4. 01:16:042 (2) - Forgot soft-whistle on slider head ?
  5. 01:28:331 (3) - and this slider end add whistle ?
  6. 02:11:705 (3) - hitsound is finish better and 02:12:428 (5) - add clap
  7. 03:07:729 (1) - Missing New combo. remove Nc and 03:08:090 (2) - add Nc.
[Hard]
  1. 00:52:187 (1) - Forgot clap on slider end.
  2. 00:57:608 (6,1,2,3,1) - Try this code. for more clean object :D
    334,320,57608,2,0,P|370:271|348:189,1,150,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    291,249,58151,6,0,B|347:191|347:191|416:172,1,150
    487,209,58693,2,0,L|504:280,1,75,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    480,129,59054,2,0,L|462:56,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    414,173,59416,6,0,B|341:173|341:173|282:99,2,150,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
  3. 01:04:115 (3,4,5) - Nazi. missing distance snap. and 01:05:922 (3,4,5) - this. please use 1.1 ds
  4. 01:13:873 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - This rhythm is kind of questionable for me. and This spacing is really awkward to me. Try an arrange like this.
    code (01:13:873 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - )
    426,72,73873,5,2,0:0:0:0:
    491,122,74054,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    485,204,74235,2,0,L|480:281,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    403,310,74596,1,2,0:0:0:0:
    338,260,74777,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    344,178,74958,2,0,L|349:101,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    350,61,75229,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    350,61,75319,5,4,0:0:0:0:
    266,213,75681,1,8,0:0:0:0:
    430,140,76042,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    266,213,76404,1,8,0:0:0:0:
  5. 01:20:379 (4,5) - This rhythm is kind of questionable for me. More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this.
  6. 01:26:163 (4,5) - Same as above.
  7. 01:27:247 (4,5) - Same as above. Try this rhythm.
  8. 01:30:138 (2,3,4) - Why used jump this part ? not much imo.
  9. 02:49:837 (4,5) - This rhythm is kind of questionable for me. More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this.
  10. 02:52:729 (2,3) - Same as above.
  11. 03:04:476 (3,4,5) - please changed this part. not much jump pattern.
  12. 03:10:259 (3,4,5,6,7) - This rhythm in Hard diff is too difficult imo. Please changed this pattern.
[Collab Insane]
  1. 00:11:795 (2) - Remove note. It's overmapped.
  2. 00:12:247 (5,6) - This rhythm is kind of questionable for me. More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this.
  3. 00:37:910 - add note. why not add circle here? and this 00:39:355 -
  4. 00:41:163 - add note better.
  5. 00:42:247 (2) - This rhythm is kind of questionable for me. More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this.
  6. 00:46:946 - Same as 00:41:163 -
  7. 00:54:355 (4,5) - Too large jump. not much imo.
  8. 01:00:861 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Ramdom jump... ? This pattern is kind of questionable for me. Try this placement code.
    395,108,60861,5,2,0:0:0:0:
    297,121,61042,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    172,53,61223,5,8,0:0:0:0:
    185,151,61404,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    117,276,61584,5,2,0:0:0:0:
    215,263,61765,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    340,331,61946,5,8,0:0:0:0:
    327,233,62127,1,0,0:0:0:0:
  9. 01:24:536 - You forgot note. please check you are pattern. 01:15:861 (2) -
  10. 01:31:946 (3) - Try to " Ctrl + G " ? I think more better flow.
  11. 01:38:452 (1) - This circle should more jump better. I think more fit :D For example move X : 386 Y : 271
  12. 02:14:596 (1) - Missing rhythm ? I'm not sure this rhythm. but I think this rhythm more better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this.
  13. 02:25:259 - Same as before suggestion.
  14. 02:32:126 (2,3) - This rhythm is kind of questionable for me. More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this.
  15. 02:55:078 (1,2,3,4,5) - This pattern is kind of questionable for me. Please changed another pattern.
  16. 02:59:144 (7) - Remove note. It's overmapped.
Ohhh. sorry late recheck >_>
If you are question. Please send me " Forum - PM " Good luck 4anke san :D
Topic Starter
4anke
reply for Satellite:all fixed now
Satellite
Collab Insane missing update ;w;

please reupload ~
Satellite
sorry! I can't login osu! ...

T^T
Topic Starter
4anke

Satellite wrote:

sorry! I can't login osu! ...

T^T
0.0why?T^T
Satellite
Work is busy, there is no time T^T

If you are find new BN. please find new BN...
or Please wait T^T
Topic Starter
4anke

Satellite wrote:

Work is busy, there is no time T^T

If you are find new BN. please find new BN...
or Please wait T^T
ok.I also busy too.T^T
IamKwaN
hi there, metadata check as requested.
Reference: http://chata.moo.jp/uk7/music.html
Unicode Title: 滑稽というなかれ
Romanised Title: Kokkei to Iu Nakare
Unicode Artist: 茶太
Romanised Artist: Chata
Tags: '落日', 'Rakujitsu', 'ウサギキノコ', 'Usagikinoko', 'bassy', 'Regraz'.

Basically everything is correct, just need confirmation on the romanisation of both title and ウサギキノコ in tag. I guess Satellite can do it! X)
Good luck on qualification!
Topic Starter
4anke

IamKwaN wrote:

hi there, metadata check as requested.
Reference: http://chata.moo.jp/uk7/music.html
Unicode Title: 滑稽というなかれ
Romanised Title: Kokkei to Iu Nakare
Unicode Artist: 茶太
Romanised Artist: Chata
Tags: '落日', 'Rakujitsu', 'ウサギキノコ', 'Usagikinoko', 'bassy', 'Regraz'.

Basically everything is correct, just need confirmation on the romanisation of both title and ウサギキノコ in tag. I guess Satellite can do it! X)
Good luck on qualification!
fixed :)
smallboat
Sorry delay few days to check this map cuz so busy housework in irl.

  1. Red words: Should be fixed.
  2. Blue words : Highly recommended suggestion.
  3. Black words : In my opinion.

[General]
  1. Nothing.
[Normal]
  1. 00:11:705 (1,2) - From the QAT viewpoint, avoid the stack entirely in easy diff, suggest follow the distance place better (所以從頭到尾都照間距擺別stack了,因為是最低的難度,後面以此類推)
  2. 00:58:331 (1) - DS consistent
  3. 01:34:837 (4,2) - Don't stack entirely at beginner diff,it makes confused playing by their viewpoint. (後面依此類推也要改)
  4. 02:32:669 (4,5) - 合併1/1,這個跟hard一樣節奏,用簡單點
[Hard]
  1. 00:34:476 (4,5,1) - 這個00:34:657 (5) - 移動一下有好的flow :
  2. 00:39:898 (3) - Follow the distance to place,it seems cover to the number,not a good thing to these ppl I think. (建議紅線尾端)
  3. 00:43:512 (1) - 藍線沒音,擺紅線比較好
  4. 00:46:223 (4,1) - Avoid overlap better.
  5. 00:50:379 (2) - 藍線沒音,擺紅線比較好
  6. 00:52:910 (3,4) - Same as 00:39:898
  7. 02:27:608 (1) - ^ (其實像這種尾端藍線沒音的我不太喜歡放,很容易有dq的危險,把尾端藍的統一改成到紅線,Insane 也一樣)
[Insane] (同Hard建議藍線尾聽起來沒音的也改紅線)
  1. 00:36:554 (2,4,6) - 藍線Tick沒音,建議去掉,follow vocal will be better.
  2. 00:42:247 (2,3) - Seems too close,also make (3) use ctrl+g I think.
  3. 01:20:560 (1) - 這個兩個都是重音,所以不要壓在尾端會玩得不cool,你可以放這樣(注意間距和音效):
  4. 02:17:488 (1,2,3) - Just imo :
Topic Starter
4anke
reply for smallboat:fixed everything
Satellite
sorry for late. no kds pls!

[General]
  1. Easy and Normal AR+1 better imo. because AR 3/5/7/9 is best spread.
[Easy]
  1. 01:37:006 (2) - The contact with the Hp bar. It should be lowered a little more.
  2. nice easy :D
[Normal]
  1. looks fine
[Hard]
  1. 00:38:632 (2) - Not stack this circle. because Shape is changed by Stack leniency.
  2. 00:51:825 (4) - Ctrl+G better.
  3. 02:35:922 (4) - Same as above.
[Insane]
  1. 00:36:102 - add note better. (my suggestion x:20 y:256)
  2. 01:09:536 (1,2,3,4) - Why interval is falling apart?
  3. 01:14:054 (2,3) - Try ctrl+g I think more better flow!
  4. 01:15:138 (8,9) - add clap
  5. 01:18:573 (4,8) - Try changed rhythm ? about 1/2 slider :3
  6. 01:21:463 (4,8) - Same as above.
  7. 01:25:259 - add note
  8. 01:26:885 (8) - add Nc. 01:27:428 (1) - remove Nc
  9. 01:38:090 (6,7,1) - Jump placement suggestion.
  10. 02:11:705 (1) - add finish
  11. 02:12:428 (5) - same as above.
  12. 02:18:934 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Overmapped. please do this rhythm.
  13. 02:21:825 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Same as above.
  14. 02:30:229 (7) - Remove note. it is overmapped imo.
  15. 02:35:560 (5) - add clap ?
  16. 02:39:355 (2) - not much this rhythm. try this
    .
  17. 03:01:946 (1) - Remove Nc
  18. 03:04:837 (1) - same as above.
  19. 03:09:536 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Mmmm... too big jump orz Please be a little more small ;_;
Easy Normal and Hard is Cool. Insane still needs more work imo ;_; but call me back <3
I'll recheck insane diff. Really sorry for late mod QAQ
Topic Starter
4anke
reply for Satellite:fixed everything,except for insane diff,'01:21:463 (4,8) - Same as above'I don't know how to fix,this place looks nice IMO.Can I unfix?.
Satellite
no kds

red = unrankable

[General]
  1. Easy diff remove widescreen support check.
  2. normal-hitnormal.wav is not use this map. remove this wav file.
  3. soft-sliderslide and soft-sliderslide3 is must be use 44byte file. try used this wav. http://puu.sh/hJgLP/842271a41e.zip
before irc log
2015-05-10 22:14 Satellite: hi
2015-05-10 22:14 Satellite: keep is ok
2015-05-10 22:14 4anke: hi
2015-05-10 22:18 Satellite: insane
2015-05-10 22:18 Satellite: 02:22:186 (3) -
2015-05-10 22:18 Satellite: clap
2015-05-10 22:18 Satellite: 02:22:908 (11) - clap
2015-05-10 22:18 Satellite: 02:23:090 (12) - remo clap
2015-05-10 22:19 Satellite: 02:24:536 (5) - overmapped. remove note
2015-05-10 22:19 4anke: fixed
2015-05-10 22:20 Satellite: 02:24:626 (5) - add whistle
2015-05-10 22:21 4anke: fixed
2015-05-10 22:21 Satellite: 02:24:355 (4) - m0ve x256 y352 ? because
2015-05-10 22:21 Satellite: 02:24:355 (4,5) - this spacing hard to read
2015-05-10 22:22 4anke: fixed
2015-05-10 22:22 Satellite: 02:33:211 (7) - move x164 y292
2015-05-10 22:22 Satellite: ?
2015-05-10 22:23 Satellite: 02:35:018 (2,3) - Ctrl+G better
2015-05-10 22:23 4anke: fixed
2015-05-10 22:25 Satellite: 02:56:343 (6) - stack is not fit this melody
2015-05-10 22:25 Satellite: move x:108 y:340 better
2015-05-10 22:25 02:58:693 (3,4,5) - please use distance *1.0
2015-05-10 22:26 Satellite: 03:10:801 (10) - not fit this slider. i think circle + circle better (jump
2015-05-10 22:27 Satellite: http://puu.sh/hIbxJ/376a745480.jpg
2015-05-10 22:27 Satellite: jump suggestion
2015-05-10 22:29 Satellite: that's all update pls
2015-05-10 22:30 4anke: I can watch the photo from punsh now ;w;
2015-05-10 22:30 Satellite: other puush http://puu.sh/hIbHs/52e8927570.jpg
2015-05-10 22:30 4anke: cann't
2015-05-10 22:30 4anke: can't
2015-05-10 22:32 4anke: ;w;my computer have some problem that can't watch the photo from punsh ;w;
2015-05-10 22:33 4anke: can you say the (x,y) for me?
2015-05-10 22:34 Satellite: k
2015-05-10 22:34 Satellite: 03:10:259 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11) -
2015-05-10 22:35 Satellite: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3112262
2015-05-10 22:35 4anke: thank

call me back
Topic Starter
4anke
reply for Satellite:fixed :)
Satellite
no kds

insane
02:22:547 (7) - whistle
02:22:908 (11) - unsnap

poke me
Topic Starter
4anke

Satellite wrote:

no kds

insane
02:22:547 (7) - whistle
02:22:908 (11) - unsnap

poke me
fixed.thank you very much :)
Satellite
wheeee

good luck on 1st ranked o/
Topic Starter
4anke

Satellite wrote:

wheeee

good luck on 1st ranked o/
thank you :)
smallboat
Confirm mapset fine and my suggestion almost fixed.

Qualified ~ !
Satellite
wow! omg congrats 1st ranked!
Topic Starter
4anke

smallboat wrote:

Confirm mapset fine and my suggestion almost fixed.

Qualified ~ !
thank you! :)
Fycho
Hello, your map has to be taken away from the Qualified section by the QAT due to the following justifications:

  1. The gap between Normal and Hard is large which can’t be accepted. Hard has quite a number of jumps and a few 1/4 rhythms, while Normal is almost 1/1, with a few 1/2 rhythm. The best way to fix the issue is increasing 1/2 rhythm in normal difficulty.

Additionally, we hope you fix the following things(it’s not a must, depending on you). Please take below as a modding, take them into consideration ranther than ignoring them, to make your map better.

下面的部分你最后好考虑一下,尽管它们不是作为DQ的理由。

[Insane]
  1. 00:17:307 (6,7,1) –The triplet doesn’t fit the music well. It's overmapped and un-stack of the triplet doesn't fit the "calm" part of the song.
  2. why do the beginning is harder than KIAI? You’d better use larger space in KIAI instead of in the calm part like 00:14:596 (1,2,3,4) -00:16:765 (3,4,5,6,7,1) –
  3. 00:44:958 (1,3) –avoid slight overlapping
  4. 00:49:295 (1,2,3) –can you please make the slider shape same? It’s supposed to be same.
  5. 01:12:428 (1,2,3,4,5,6) –Why do you use so small space at the climax?
[Hard]
  1. The way you uses space is inconsistent: 00:25:440 (4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2) -01:31:223 (1,2) - 01:57:066 (4,1) - 01:57:608 (2,3) - 01:58:693 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3) - 02:09:536 (3,4,1) - 02:47:849 (1,2,3,4,5) - 03:02:308 (1,2,3) – why all of these are 1.0 spaces? The sudden changing from 1.1x space makes it more random, which cause slight overlapping which looks bad.
  2. These slight overlapping can be avoided: 00:35:560 (3,1) –
    01:31:223 (1,2,3) –
    01:50:018 (1,2,3) - Unpolished spacing usage.
    01:57:066 (4,1,2) -
    02:09:536 (3,4) -
    02:21:825 (1,2,3) - unbalanced spacing.
    02:39:175 (1,2,3) -
    02:47:849 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - too crowd?
    02:51:464 (3,4,1) - Something same as 02:21:825 (1,2,3) - .
    03:02:307 (1,2,3,4) -
    03:05:199 (1,2,3,4) -
[Easy]
  1. I personally hope you can use 1/2x space in the difficulty to avoid 1/1 objects’ overlapping.
  2. 01:29:054 (3) –why is this curved so much? it looks a bit weird comparing with your former slider.
For further assistance, please contact with BNG members. Good luck.
you really need to thank to Satellite, this map is MUCH better than what I saw last time.
###D
Topic Starter
4anke

Fycho wrote:

Hello, your map has to be taken away from the Qualified section by the QAT due to the following justifications:

  1. The gap between Normal and Hard is large which can’t be accepted. Hard has quite a number of jumps and a few 1/4 rhythms, while Normal is almost 1/1, with a few 1/2 rhythm. The best way to fix the issue is increasing 1/2 rhythm in normal difficulty.

Additionally, we hope you fix the following things(it’s not a must, depending on you). Please take below as a modding, take them into consideration ranther than ignoring them, to make your map better.

下面的部分你最后好考虑一下,尽管它们不是作为DQ的理由。

[Insane]
  1. 00:17:307 (6,7,1) –The triplet doesn’t fit the music well. It's overmapped and un-stack of the triplet doesn't fit the "calm" part of the song.
  2. why do the beginning is harder than KIAI? You’d better use larger space in KIAI instead of in the calm part like 00:14:596 (1,2,3,4) -00:16:765 (3,4,5,6,7,1) –
  3. 00:44:958 (1,3) –avoid slight overlapping
  4. 00:49:295 (1,2,3) –can you please make the slider shape same? It’s supposed to be same.
  5. 01:12:428 (1,2,3,4,5,6) –Why do you use so small space at the climax?
[Hard]
  1. The way you uses space is inconsistent: 00:25:440 (4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2) -01:31:223 (1,2) - 01:57:066 (4,1) - 01:57:608 (2,3) - 01:58:693 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3) - 02:09:536 (3,4,1) - 02:47:849 (1,2,3,4,5) - 03:02:308 (1,2,3) – why all of these are 1.0 spaces? The sudden changing from 1.1x space makes it more random, which cause slight overlapping which looks bad.
  2. These slight overlapping can be avoided: 00:35:560 (3,1) –
    01:31:223 (1,2,3) –
    01:50:018 (1,2,3) - Unpolished spacing usage.
    01:57:066 (4,1,2) -
    02:09:536 (3,4) -
    02:21:825 (1,2,3) - unbalanced spacing.
    02:39:175 (1,2,3) -
    02:47:849 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - too crowd?
    02:51:464 (3,4,1) - Something same as 02:21:825 (1,2,3) - .
    03:02:307 (1,2,3,4) -
    03:05:199 (1,2,3,4) -
[Easy]
  1. I personally hope you can use 1/2x space in the difficulty to avoid 1/1 objects’ overlapping.
  2. 01:29:054 (3) –why is this curved so much? it looks a bit weird comparing with your former slider.
For further assistance, please contact with BNG members. Good luck.
you really need to thank to Satellite, this map is MUCH better than what I saw last time.
###0
almost fixed your suggestion,and a few suggestion is diffcult to fix.Normal is difficult than before.
Satellite
Repair Bubbled.

log
17:35 Satellite: normal
17:35 Satellite: 01:05:199 (3) -
17:35 Satellite: overlap
17:36 4anke: how can i fix?
17:37 Satellite: http://puu.sh/iaFcQ/9d804ddba0.jpg
17:37 Satellite: try this?
17:38 4anke: sorry,i can't watch the photo on punsh
17:38 Satellite: ehhh
17:38 Satellite: http://puu.sh/iaFgE/b1c4ee2a34.jpg.
17:38 Satellite: http://puu.sh/iaFgE/b1c4ee2a34.jpg
17:40 4anke: can you updata the photo to https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/?
17:40 Satellite: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3205746
17:41 4anke: ok
17:42 Satellite: 02:11:705 (3) - add finish on slider head
17:43 4anke: fixed
17:44 Satellite: 02:47:849 (1) - overlap
17:45 Satellite: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3205749
17:45 Satellite: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3205751.
17:45 Satellite: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3205751
17:46 Satellite: that's all
17:48 4anke: 02:48:934 (2,4) - overlap?
17:48 Satellite: no
17:51 4anke: upload
17:52 4anke: thx~
smallboat
Hold this ,looks fine,will requa this later (seems full now )

Looks good.

ReQualified ~ !
Satellite
good job :3
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