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Tamura Yukari - MERRY MERRY MERRY MENU... Ne!

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moonlightleaf
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Topic Starter
moonlightleaf
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2016年10月9日 at 10:46:01

Artist: Tamura Yukari
Title: MERRY MERRY MERRY MENU... Ne!
Tags: Minakami Yuki cute japanese jpop christmas song carol ufw star Koiyuki Karia kanor karen Crz Sword Rumia- kencho Lami yf_bmp intoon little kawaiwkyik rizia CloudSplash16
BPM: 180
Filesize: 9687kb
Play Time: 01:16
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.37 stars, 68 notes)
  2. Insane (4.7 stars, 393 notes)
  3. Kanor's Normal (1.99 stars, 136 notes)
  4. Karen's Insane (5.11 stars, 373 notes)
  5. Karia's Extra (5.71 stars, 401 notes)
  6. Kencho's Extra (5.25 stars, 300 notes)
  7. Kencho's Insane (4.3 stars, 250 notes)
  8. Koiyuki's Easy (1.25 stars, 59 notes)
  9. Koiyuki's Extra (5.55 stars, 398 notes)
  10. Lami's Extra (5.84 stars, 396 notes)
  11. Light Insane (4.07 stars, 288 notes)
  12. Little's Extra (5.68 stars, 384 notes)
  13. Merry Merry Love (6 stars, 401 notes)
  14. Sword's Hard (3.23 stars, 238 notes)
  15. wkyik's Insane (4.87 stars, 357 notes)
Download: Tamura Yukari - MERRY MERRY MERRY MENU... Ne!
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Mp3 by Jemmmmy | Aim : Most Played Beatmaps
615's Insane - by 615 rip , Old ver click here , if you want 2014 map
Easy by | Koiyuki √ | me √
Normal - by | kanor √　 | 　Bubbled by sahuang　| Ranked by Pentori
Hard - by | [Crz]Sword √
Insane - by | me √ | Karen √ | Kencho √ | Rizia √
Extra - by | Karia √ | Koiyuki √ | Kencho √ | Lami √ | Little √
Merry Merry Love - by | Rumia- √
Storyboard - by | me x yf_bmp ver 1.1
Last edited by moonlightleaf , edited 233 times in total.
rinsukir
385 posts
Joined March 2012
rinsukir
hi

[General]
不用自定义音效?
顺便kiai应该是从00:44:415开始吧

[Normal]
有些多余绿线 自己检查一下
00:01:915 (4) - 不要折返然后在00:02:415结束好一些?
00:24:249 (3,4) - 可以跟vocal吧.. 顺便ds
01:18:832 (1) - 建议尾巴消音 其他diff也是

[Hard]
00:05:749 (1,2,3,4) - 这样近似直线的排列感觉有点单调
00:15:082 (5) - 可以考虑跟音乐
00:31:915 (6) - 换成note然后滑条从00:32:082开始?
00:33:415 - 这个拍掌声不跟?
00:34:749 - ^
00:35:749 (1) - 缩短到前面的长白线?
00:36:749 (3) - 中间红线的音不跟?
00:37:582 (6,7,1) - 太难了吧 感觉hard最好不要连打前后都是单点o.o
00:41:082 (5) - 中间红线的vocal不跟?
00:42:249 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 太难了吧
00:48:082 (5,6,7) - 节奏下错了吧
01:00:415 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 单点好像太多惹

[Insane]
感觉可以适当放几个三连o.o
00:10:415 (5) - flow怪怪的
00:14:082 (5,5) - youdianchou
00:43:249 (1,2,3,4) - 跟vocal?
00:51:082 (1,2,3,4) - 个人感觉1/2单点就好

goodluck~顺便求个mu;w; :)
moonlightleaf
2,157 posts
Joined September 2011
Topic Starter
moonlightleaf
to rinsukir:

all fix 除了以下:

[Hard]

00:37:582 (6,7,1) - 太难了吧 感觉hard最好不要连打前后都是单点o.o ---没改 hard可以适当点难度的

[Insane]

00:51:082 (1,2,3,4) - 个人感觉1/2单点就好 --没改

已mu

感谢mod ^^/
Coppola
65 posts
Joined February 2010
Coppola
第一次mod他人的图，如有什么过失还请见谅:3

[General]
音效有点单一，再配合曲子自带的一些音效合理添加下吧~

[Normal]
打了几遍，觉得挺好，不知从何下手orz...也许可以再加点note？

[Hard]
00:04:582 (6) - 拉短至前面白线也许会好些？
00:06:082 (3) - 排版上左移一点
00:15:082 (5) - 减少一个折返，原来白线加个note要好些？
00:24:249 - 加个note，然后00:24:415 (1,2) - 改成slider？
00:36:249 (2,1,2,3) - 这里节奏有点怪..
00:37:665 (6) - 删去如何？
00:42:582 (2,3) - 3去掉，2滑条拉长至原3的线，折返数不变
00:44:749 (1,1) - 两个slider的绿线略奇怪
00:48:082 (5,6) - 拉短至红线？
00:59:582 (5) - 拉长至蓝线？这个无所谓，纯粹HD时个人感觉。
01:10:582 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - 略难..

[Insane]
比较有挑战性，有点难于FC，一定是最近作图作的打图手生了orz
00:10:415 (5) -略远，无大碍
00:24:415 (2,3) - 删掉2，将3移至原2的位置改为折返？
00:45:915 (6) - 排版上稍微右移
01:02:082 (6) - NC
很喜欢这样的单点跳:)

啊，mod完他人的图感觉学到了好多，是时候再次大刀阔斧改自己的图了QwQ
祝早日Rank~于是我也求个mu;w;
moonlightleaf
2,157 posts
Joined September 2011
Topic Starter
moonlightleaf
to Dyskie:

[Hard]

00:48:082 (5,6) - 拉短至红线？ ---没改

其他都fix

感谢mod ^^/
YoshinoSakura
472 posts
Joined January 2011
YoshinoSakura
哟~~~~ 蹦！

[General]
bg作死系列
offset试试401

[Insane]
柑橘排版坠毁，和natsu有的一拼
00:02:415 (8) - 改成单点
00:03:082 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这个就不能弄得间距一样？
00:07:749 (3,1) - 隔得太近
00:13:082 (3) - ^
00:51:082 (1,2,3,4) - 这是啥，太违和了
00:52:415 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 简直乱
还需要好好加油一下

[Hard]
00:02:415 (5) - 和i一样改成单点
00:22:915 (4,5,6) - 重音在白线上，我局的白线起slider顺一些
00:33:082 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 个人感觉做anti jump更好
00:53:749 (5) - 改成单点
有进步

[Normal]
00:00:416 (1,2,3) - 低难度这种节奏滑调比较好，后同
00:05:749 (1,2) - 这么大都能包歪
00:07:082 (3) - 没有道理，这里没有3/2的音
00:15:082 (1) - ^
00:30:915 (3) - 不要折返然后再00:31:749 加note

还需要好好加油一下
如果你下定决心要撞死cryo的话我可以做个gd
GL
moonlightleaf
2,157 posts
Joined September 2011
Topic Starter
moonlightleaf
to 615915887

all fix

感谢mod ^^/
zorefire
429 posts
Joined October 2012
zorefire
M4M commence :D
P.S I do love the map How did you know I would like the map? : :o

[Normal]
Map is good no complaints but 1
01:19:067 - end it with just a circle
[Hard]
I dunno about this 00:11:734 (3,4,5,6) - its mostly used in Insane -> 00:12:067 (5,6,8,9) -
00:24:900 (2,3,4) - move in some
01:18:734 (4,1) - make it a slider from here 01:18:734 to 01:19:067
P.S - so terribly sorry for this small mod of mine ;w; map is very good
moonlightleaf
2,157 posts
Joined September 2011
Topic Starter
moonlightleaf
to zorefire:

i know you will love this song , because of the song is so cute~mostly be loved ;p

all fix~

but:

[Normal]

01:19:067 - end it with just a circle ---ok add , but i just think should add spinner as well for get more score~

thanks for modding ^^/
ZZHBOY
1,649 posts
Joined April 2012
ZZHBOY
做的挺不错
[General]
再补一个三星以下的难度啊
00:44:400 - 01:19:067 - KIAI推荐时间段
[Normal]
好像音效还有欠缺
00:08:067 (4) - 类似的可以考虑适当删减 空一空可以提高节奏感
00:29:734 (1,2) - 强迫症总感觉没blanket好 滑条头可以向内一些...
00:57:734 (2,3) - 好像有些overlap...可以稍微移开一点点.-.
[Hard]
00:48:067 (5) - 如果一定要这样弄的话建议滑条尾消音
00:54:234 (1,2) - 可以blanket
[Insane]
00:15:067 (1,2) - 建议ds保持1.3
00:43:317 (2) - 本来I里就很多连打了这里感觉又overmap所以考虑删 这里再连打总感觉不爽.-.
00:54:067 (2) - 没有特殊需求建议保持前后ds一致
01:12:567 (7) - 一下漏了两声vocal啊...
美丽
挺不错 射! :)
moonlightleaf
2,157 posts
Joined September 2011
Topic Starter
moonlightleaf
to ZZHBOY

all fix

感谢mod ^^/
Narcissu
1,744 posts
Joined August 2012
Narcissu
为什么你们都能把图做的这么欢快……我就弄的死气沉沉……

那个“耶”的变速滑条最好额外分配一个颜色比如粉色或者白色红色，其他的时候都跳过那个颜色，还有1.5的变速线用完最好用1.0的线换回去，因为对太鼓有影响【喂！
moonlightleaf
2,157 posts
Joined September 2011
Topic Starter
moonlightleaf
to Narcissu

变速滑条 我之前都换了不同颜色的 绿线方面追加惹

感谢mod ^^/

（这个应该不能给KD,

Edit: 好的我会那样弄了
Koiyuki
Beatmap Nominator
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Joined March 2013
Koiyuki
Title Change:
MERRY MERRY MERRY MENU・・・ね!
moonlightleaf
2,157 posts
Joined September 2011
Topic Starter
moonlightleaf
to Minakami Yuki

= =原来歌名都错了么
MutoMagic
28 posts
Joined September 2013
MutoMagic
[General]
感觉easy可以不需要了。
别的难度没看出来问题，打起来很流畅。

[615's Insane]
突然发现这个难度跳跃复读略大，感觉另一个insane打起来正好。
00:21:067 (3,4) - 这个地方感觉打出300比较费劲。
00:26:734 (5) - 这个5被滑条埋了，对于hd来说建议放出来。
01:16:400 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - seems not good,蓝色到红色跑起来感觉很别扭，而且之后一个平行的1-2和3-4，很有可能会断掉。（有可能是错觉吧，至少第一次没读出来，直接挂掉了。。。）
01:16:400 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) -

别的木有什么问题。总之感觉还不错。
这个必须射，祝rank
moonlightleaf
2,157 posts
Joined September 2011
Topic Starter
moonlightleaf
to MutoMagic

感谢mod ^^/

打包615 赶紧修
YoshinoSakura
472 posts
Joined January 2011
YoshinoSakura

MutoMagic wrote:

[General]
感觉easy可以不需要了。
别的难度没看出来问题，打起来很流畅。

[615's Insane]
突然发现这个难度跳跃复读略大，感觉另一个insane打起来正好。
00:21:067 (3,4) - 这个地方感觉打出300比较费劲。改了下
00:26:734 (5) - 这个5被滑条埋了，对于hd来说建议放出来。不要啦
01:16:400 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - seems not good,蓝色到红色跑起来感觉很别扭，而且之后一个平行的1-2和3-4，很有可能会断掉。（有可能是错觉吧，至少第一次没读出来，直接挂掉了。。。） 果然1/4circle jump又失败了么
01:16:400 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) -

别的木有什么问题。总之感觉还不错。
这个必须射，祝rank
谢mod

哟~~~~蹦！
osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: MARRY ME.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 43184
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
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LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 1.3
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.4

[Metadata]
Title:MERRY MERRY MERRY MENU... Ne!
TitleUnicode:MERRY MERRY MERRY MENU... Ne!
Artist:Tamura Yukari
ArtistUnicode:田村ゆかり
Creator:moonlightleaf
Version:615's Insane
Source:
Tags:
BeatmapID:395511
BeatmapSetID:161089

[Difficulty]
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OverallDifficulty:8
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396,318,20400,5,0,0:0:0:0:
364,336,20734,1,8,0:0:0:0:
332,352,21067,2,0,L|368:380,1,45
284,352,21234,2,0,L|248:324,1,45
168,296,21400,2,0,L|204:324,1,45
160,360,21567,2,0,L|124:332,1,45
72,348,21734,5,4,0:0:0:0:
124,212,21900,1,0,0:0:0:0:
212,348,22067,1,8,0:0:0:0:
240,160,22234,1,0,0:0:0:0:
41,176,22400,2,0,P|36:220|48:264,2,90,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,160,22900,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,320,23067,5,0,0:0:0:0:
452,304,23234,1,0,0:0:0:0:
508,160,23400,1,8,0:0:0:0:
396,28,23567,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,160,23734,2,0,P|228:208|232:256,2,90,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,216,24234,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,204,24400,6,0,P|136:244|132:296,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,116,24734,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,40,24900,2,0,P|276:40|224:48,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,168,25234,2,0,P|352:168|300:176,1,90,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,316,25567,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,316,25734,6,0,P|260:320|212:332,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,136,26067,2,0,P|317:172|351:207,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,232,26400,2,0,P|144:208|148:184,1,45,8|8,0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
152,116,26567,2,0,P|140:140|136:164,1,45,8|8,0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
148,192,26734,1,12,0:3:0:0:
176,216,26817,1,4,0:3:0:0:
212,232,26900,1,4,0:3:0:0:
248,232,26984,1,4,0:3:0:0:
280,223,27067,6,0,P|316:208|349:209,1,72,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,312,27400,1,8,0:0:0:0:
224,128,27567,2,0,P|290:101|361:100,1,144,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,312,28067,1,8,0:0:0:0:
92,264,28234,1,4,0:0:0:0:
92,264,28400,6,0,P|80:228|84:192,1,72,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,76,28734,2,0,P|172:112|168:148,1,72,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,300,29067,2,0,P|116:352|48:344,1,144,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,52,29734,6,0,P|388:88|408:184,1,144,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,124,30234,2,0,P|392:88|332:120,1,144,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,184,30734,1,8,0:0:0:0:
228,344,30900,6,0,P|208:296|192:196,1,144,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,124,31400,2,0,P|108:160|104:204,1,72,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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280,184,31900,1,8,0:3:0:0:
116,124,32067,1,8,0:0:0:0:
444,60,32400,6,0,P|460:104|456:152,1,90,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,120,32900,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,120,33067,2,0,L|344:212,1,90,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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216,216,34234,1,0,0:0:0:0:
124,276,34400,2,0,P|108:233|112:189,1,90,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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364,156,35567,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,236,35734,2,0,P|306:280|306:325,1,90,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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192,160,36900,2,0,P|128:100|36:120,1,180,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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320,312,37900,1,0,1:0:0:0:
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412,152,38900,1,0,1:0:0:0:
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376,64,39400,1,0,1:0:0:0:
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180,160,41400,1,8,0:0:0:0:
292,196,41567,6,0,P|300:252|304:352,1,144,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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292,196,42234,1,8,0:0:0:0:
292,196,42317,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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336,32,42567,1,0,0:0:0:0:
460,256,42734,1,8,0:0:0:0:
160,268,42900,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,268,43234,6,0,P|156:316|176:364,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,96,43734,1,0,0:0:0:0:
212,152,43900,1,0,0:0:0:0:
388,232,44067,1,8,0:0:0:0:
240,80,44234,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,308,44400,6,0,B|304:364|336:300|336:300|396:336|452:288,1,215.999993408203,4|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,196,45067,1,0,0:0:0:0:
32,328,45234,1,0,0:0:0:0:
152,184,45400,1,8,0:0:0:0:
152,348,45567,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,108,45734,6,0,B|256:152|236:208|236:208|244:224|244:224|292:200|332:228,1,215.999993408203,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
329,226,46400,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,308,46567,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,128,46734,1,8,0:0:0:0:
444,260,46900,1,0,0:0:0:0:
212,364,47067,6,0,B|184:320|204:264|204:264|152:232|96:268,1,215.999993408203,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,356,47567,1,0,0:0:0:0:
72,72,47734,2,0,P|88:120|88:180,1,107.999996704102,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,40,48067,1,8,0:0:0:0:
336,64,48234,6,0,P|392:76|376:124,1,107.999996704102,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,264,48567,2,0,P|230:261|229:212,1,107.999996704102,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,176,48900,2,0,P|120:240|216:364,1,215.999993408203,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,360,49400,1,8,0:0:0:0:
416,320,49567,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,320,49650,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,320,49734,6,0,P|404:268|404:212,1,107.999996704102,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,92,50067,1,8,0:0:0:0:
292,40,50234,2,0,B|240:64|265:103|265:103|297:147|223:181|288:228,1,215.999993408203,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,225,50734,1,8,0:0:0:0:
52,248,51067,6,0,B|56:280|56:280|88:304|84:352,1,107.999996704102,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,348,51400,1,8,0:0:0:0:
288,288,51567,2,0,B|232:224|160:244|160:244|144:224|144:224|136:176,1,215.999993408203,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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428,72,52400,5,0,0:0:0:0:
456,244,52567,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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356,296,52900,1,0,0:0:0:0:
356,80,53067,1,0,0:0:0:0:
236,304,53234,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,72,53400,1,8,0:0:0:0:
112,260,53567,1,0,0:0:0:0:
284,48,53734,6,0,P|236:36|184:60,2,107.999996704102,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,148,54234,2,0,B|216:208|260:248|260:248|304:296|272:356,1,215.999993408203,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,316,54734,1,8,0:0:0:0:
328,184,54900,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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424,168,55900,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,336,56067,1,8,0:0:0:0:
504,248,56234,1,0,0:0:0:0:
292,256,56400,6,0,B|248:284|244:336|244:336|216:352|184:332|184:332|152:312|124:328,1,215.999993408203,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
131,324,57067,1,0,0:0:0:0:
188,108,57234,1,0,0:0:0:0:
20,280,57400,1,8,0:0:0:0:
288,148,57567,1,0,0:0:0:0:
24,172,57734,6,0,B|28:120|104:116|104:116|104:52|168:24,1,215.999993408203,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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260,268,58400,1,0,0:0:0:0:
420,108,58567,1,0,0:0:0:0:
188,48,58734,1,8,0:0:0:0:
100,296,58900,6,0,B|112:348|112:348|176:368,1,107.999996704102,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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320,308,60150,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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252,268,60317,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,240,60400,6,0,P|200:200|184:136,1,107.999996704102,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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412,44,61234,2,0,P|424:92|428:156,2,107.999996704102,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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104,320,62400,2,0,P|96:352|96:380,3,53.9999983520508,0|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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196,204,63734,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,204,63900,2,0,P|395:193|341:197,2,107.999996704102,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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88,372,64900,1,0,0:0:0:0:
100,220,65067,1,0,0:0:0:0:
116,64,65234,1,0,0:0:0:0:
196,204,65400,1,8,0:0:0:0:
272,40,65567,1,0,0:0:0:0:
360,212,65734,6,0,P|384:262|376:328,1,107.999996704102,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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468,236,66234,1,0,1:0:0:0:
240,288,66567,5,2,0:0:0:0:
468,236,66734,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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116,324,68234,1,2,0:0:0:0:
116,324,68400,6,0,P|116:280|128:228,1,90,4|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
176,124,68734,1,10,0:0:0:0:
128,328,68900,6,0,P|128:284|140:232,1,90,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
188,128,69234,1,2,0:0:0:0:
140,332,69400,6,0,P|140:288|152:236,1,90,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
204,132,69734,1,2,0:0:0:0:
156,336,69900,6,0,P|156:292|168:240,1,90,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
220,136,70234,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,296,70400,1,0,0:0:0:0:
104,168,70567,1,8,0:0:0:0:
104,168,70650,1,8,0:0:0:0:
104,168,70734,1,8,0:0:0:0:
360,68,70900,1,0,0:0:0:0:
156,336,71067,6,0,B|200:336|200:336|248:356,1,90,4|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
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200,136,74400,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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108,100,74900,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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224,256,75567,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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199,251,78234,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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Yumeno Himiko
Elite Storyboarder
1,168 posts
Joined August 2012
Yumeno Himiko
其实我是来要一个M4M的

[General]
hhh uccu
SPOILER
kiai 统一一下
前奏时间太短

[Normal]
00:00:401 (1,2) - 造一个完美的弧形吧
SPOILER
00:48:734 (4) - 拉到2拍听起来比较顺
00:57:734 (2,3) - 歪了;w;
01:11:067 (1,2) - 这两个可以弄下对称

[Hard]
00:05:734 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这个五角星是要逼死强迫症吗(╯°口°)╯(┴—┴
00:06:400 (5,6) - 对称啦 对称
00:11:734 (3,4,5,6) - 也是对称 这样放;w;
SPOILER
00:12:400 (7,8,9) - 间距感觉偏大
00:36:067 - 少了个note吧0.0
00:49:734 (1,2,3) - 一条直线上比较好？
00:52:400 (1,2,3,4) - 中心对称（严肃）
00:59:567 (5) - 其实换成circle感觉更好

阿拉 我不看I的图哟 因为我根本打不动;w;

好听的歌~
Good luck~
moonlightleaf
2,157 posts
Joined September 2011
Topic Starter
moonlightleaf
to examination

all fix

感谢mod ^^/
OblivioN
OblivioN
[Normal]
00:07:067 (3) - 转个方向看着要舒服点【哪里来的强迫症;w;】看起来像这样
SPOILER
00:15:067 (1) - x:320 Y:320
00:20:400 (3,4,5) - 觉得排成三角形可爱一些【咦？会吗？
00:31:734 (4) - 音效用finish吧
00:36:900 (2) - 包好 2的尾巴是x:232 y:128

[Hard]
觉得cs可以大一号……

[Insane]
00:02:400 (8) - 音效用finish
00:05:734 (2) - NC一下吧
00:28:900 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - 以player的视角来说这里没必要stream啊……;w;这样就好了：
00:30:234 & 00:30:567 & 00:30:900 可配合clap
00:58:900 (1,2,3) - ^
01:19:067 finish

[615'sinsane]
00:21:067 (3,4,5,6) - 凶残…………排列顺一点吧……这么治愈的歌
00:26:400 (3,4) - ………………为何这么难orz【无视我
00:31:900 (4) - 这个音效可以去掉……
00:42:900 (8) - finish
01:00:067 (4) - NC吧……

[Other]
田村 很可爱的歌，祝rank .w.
moonlightleaf
2,157 posts
Joined September 2011
Topic Starter
moonlightleaf
to OblivioN

[Insane]

00:28:900 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - 以player的视角来说这里没必要stream啊……;w;这样就好了 ---没改和后面是一样的 跟嘀嘀嘀嘀嘀嘀

其他都 fix

感谢mod ^^/
DeletedUser_3044645
DeletedUser_3044645
Do you need an Easy diff? if so may I try GD?
moonlightleaf
2,157 posts
Joined September 2011
Topic Starter
moonlightleaf

No Dap wrote:

Do you need an Easy diff? if so may I try GD?
oh,,,i am sorry to say Easy GD will be maped by my friend before you post ~

anyway , thanks for your GD request
Koiyuki
Beatmap Nominator
2,539 posts
Joined March 2013
Koiyuki
Easy Finished: http://puu.sh/7Ucur.osu

音效从normal复制的，应该没问题
别忘了把我和615的id加到tag里面去
Wafu
1,703 posts
Joined June 2011
Wafu
Red - Unrankable
Blue - Highly recommended
Black - Suggestion

[General]

Main thing I want to recommend here is to make the same kiai as it is in 615's Insane. He had quite good idea about it, he just used kiai only for parts where were all the instruments and removed kiai from part where were only drums and vocal. I think you should inspirate by this.
Use custom combo colors. Currently it uses default ones, meaning it depends on the skin you are using and unfortunatelly some skins might conflict with the background. I still know there is Dim function, but there are still players who prefer to use background on.
Some hitsounds are barely audiable, meaning it is near to be unrankable. Please increase volume of all green lines and take any program which can edit .wav files (for example Audacity) and use amplitude for the hitsound files.

[Insane]

00:41:067 (7) - It is just a detail but you should remake this slider to slider similar to 00:40:734 (6) with another rotation. Reason is that currently it looks quite unpolished and random, when this slider is curved a lot while the previous one is almost flat, additionally the flow was really unnatural. I suggest you to change it like this, but it's all just a detail suggestion.
SPOILER
00:43:484 (2,3,4) - This part is overly overmapped to be honest. There's no sound on 00:43:650, 00:43:984, 00:43:484, what is a lot. You added 3 non-existing notes on just one second. I think this is a lot more sensible.
SPOILER

00:44:400 (4) - I think NC on these notes is more viable than on 00:44:734 (1), mainly because there starts the kiai. Anyway your comboing here is quite weird, I'd suggest you to make it more sensible, sometimes you place NC on downbeat so it follows music, but then you change it so it follows vocal. Either make NCs related to music or related to voice, not both.

[Hard]

Well... first think that bothers me a lot... settings. CS+1, please. Currently it makes the spread just insensible, considering you've got this CS in normal and easy. However other difficulty settings are making very big gap between normal diff. Put -1 on all other settings so it makes the gap a bit lower and there is not so big difference between diffs.
00:43:567 (2,3,4,5,6) - Just a little suggestion here. Consider CTRL+G on 00:43:734 (3,5). It makes the jump progressive and you won't start with a jump so suddenly, because of pregressivity, player will detect better that there's a jump near, like this it is just sudden and he needs to know music or follow the approach circle properly. But that's not much issue.
00:48:067 (5,6) - The same issue as insane had, overmapped for no reason. Just decrease each of these two sliders by 1/4 so there will be 2 1/2 sliders to fit music well. Remember that this is not fantasy, but rhythm game.
00:54:067 - Add a circle. When playing I just feel there's something missing. Considering it is kiai, in my opinion, you shouldn't remove notes on 1/1 tick, when they are in music.
00:59:900 - Similar issue as ^
01:00:234 - Similar issue as ^, but if you put the circle on ^, this doesn't feel much needed.
01:15:900 - ^

[615's Insane]

00:30:234 (2,3) - Consider this pattern, because current flow was not correct and additionally the overlap was just like blah to be honest. Also makes a jump that imo fits more to your style.
SPOILER

00:33:734 (1) - CTRL+G makes a better flow, anyway just a little detail and not important suggestion.
00:50:234 (3) - Make more neat slider like your other sliders are. This is really different from others. They were sensible, but this seems like random shape that reminds me 2007 maps, but might be just presonal feeling.
01:00:067 (4,5,6,7,1) - Flowbreak in kiai is really aggressive thing. I really highly recommend to use regular spacing instead of stacking it. I hope you understand that it is really wrong when you play kiai, and you just see jump, jump, jump, jump, jump, now you have stop moving your mouse so you loose that feel of flow, and again jump, jump jump... Kiai should be lively all the time to make player enjoy that map.

[Normal]

00:03:067 (4) - New combo. There's bigger gap between NC than on Insane, so this should be definitely fixed.
00:15:067 (1) - Remove NC for consistency with other NCs. You always put NC after every 2/1 tick, but now you put it after 1/1 tick.
00:24:400 (4) - NC for consistency. It doesn't matter that it will be just one slider in this. Consistency of hitsounds is really important on easier diffs, because it gives you HP frequently, not randomly, so players are not required to play all parts pretty well, but it is enough to play just same all the time so he won't fail. All I want to say is that newbies might be stressed or confused of variable benefit of HP. Obviously swap NCs on 00:26:734 (1,2) for pretty same reason.
00:35:067 (5,1) - Swap the NCs, still same reason.
00:40:734 (4) - There also should be NC for consistency, especially when there is spinner after it, which doesn't give you HP instantly.
00:46:734 (1,2) - Also should be swapped NCs.
00:52:400 (3) - There should be NC and 00:54:234 (1,2) - Should be swapped.

[Yuki's Easy]

00:21:734 (1) - Just a little issue about symmetry. Attempt to fix the shape like this.
SPOILER
00:23:067 (2) - ^
00:24:400 (1) - Just fix that ugly overlap
00:38:734 (2) - CTRL+G and fix distance snap makes the flow much better, what is especially important on easier diffs.
00:47:067 (1,2) - This is easy diff, right? Try to follow music more than vocals, because the music is more consistent, so it is easier for players. Currently he has to finish the slider on red tick and start next slider on another red tick. This is nightmare for a lot of newbies, so please, increase end of 00:47:067 (1) to 00:48:067 and move 00:48:234 (2) on 00:48:400.
00:57:734 (1,2) - ^
01:11:067 (1) - Use just one point. The shape will be sure symmetric, what means much better than current one, but it's not gameplay issue anyway.

Just a short mod because map is quite good and sure ready for ranking, however I pointed out even some important stuff (NCs, flow, spread), but evne some details. If you need any help with a map or you just don't understand something I said in a mod, feel free to contact me on PM or ingame if I'm online.

Good luck!
Sakaue Nachi
558 posts
Joined September 2012
Sakaue Nachi
好像是M4M_(:з」∠)_
[Yuki's easy]
00:05:734 (1) - 滑条尾whistle
00:07:067 (2) - ^
00:11:067 (1,2) - ^
00:08:400 (1) - 这个头也换成finish怎样，可以这个声音小点，然后2大点有个递进
00:13:734 (1) - ^
00:16:400 (1) - 尾whistle
00:16:400 (1) - 可以微调下包的好点
00:21:734 (1) - 换成finish好点？
00:24:400 (1) - 这样会不会好看点？http://puu.sh/7UrnV.jpg
00:44:400 (1) - 头finish
00:48:234 (2) - 中间whistle
00:58:900 (2) - ^
[normal]
00:12:400 (3) - 这里不知这样如何http://puu.sh/7Us0c.jpg
00:16:400 (1) - （444.180）
00:16:734 (2) - （468,104）
00:23:067 (2) - 这个是不是往下弯好点
00:36:900 (2) - 这样好看点http://puu.sh/7Usvq.jpg
00:41:484 (1) - 00:42:900 在这里结束
00:47:400 (3) - 感觉这个节奏好点http://puu.sh/7UsUP.jpg
[hard]
00:01:900 (4) - 也保持1.36x的间距好点？
00:03:234 (2) - 放在（1）右边大概（245,274）怎样？
00:11:734 (3,4,5,6) - 在hard是不是跳了点，缩小为大概0.85倍差不多感觉
00:13:734 (1,3) - 这两个平行一下
00:16:400 (1) - 这个重叠打起来不太好，建议和下一part00:17:734 (1,2,3,4) - 的排列差不多，然后旋转个角度
00:27:067 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 摆成这样打起来更好读和顺手http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1479926
00:36:234 (2) - 和这个叠00:36:400 (1) -
00:37:734 (1,2) - 和前面两个拉开点距离
00:45:734 (4) - ctrl+g
00:49:400 加个note
00:53:734 (5) - 换成一个折返slider感觉不错，然后把6删掉
01:05:234 (4,5,6,1,2) - 这里略坑，可以删掉这个01:05:567 (6) -
01:08:900 (2) - 弄成和1对称吧
[Insane]
00:10:067 (3,4,5) - 这里建议改下，我打了3次都miss了（4）感觉这样好多了 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1479952
00:07:734 (1) - 这个减速太多打起来有点怪
00:16:734 (3,4) - ctrl+g 好多了
00:24:067 (9) - 换成slider会不会好点
00:36:900 (3) - ctrl+g
00:39:400 (2) - 这个移去下一个有点不顺，这样？http://puu.sh/7VkeH.jpg 或者你想想别的吧
00:49:234 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - 这里我柑橘三连+2单点好点
01:00:400 (1) - 换滑条
01:10:484 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - 这个连打感觉换别的更好，感觉可以这样http://puu.sh/7VkMN.jpg

GL~这是我的图http://osu.ppy.sh/s/141354
Last edited by Sakaue Nachi , edited 2 times in total.
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
4,298 posts
Joined July 2011
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
615's Insane卡在3.49星了, 建议再加几个大跳这样就可以到达3.50星, 升级为X级
moonlightleaf
2,157 posts
Joined September 2011
Topic Starter
moonlightleaf
to Wafu

all fix

to Sakaue Nachi

[normal]

00:12:400 (3) - 这里不知这样如何http://puu.sh/7Us0c.jpg ---没改

其他fix

thanks for modding ^^/
YoshinoSakura
472 posts
Joined January 2011
YoshinoSakura

OblivioN wrote:

[615'sinsane]
00:21:067 (3,4,5,6) - 凶残…………排列顺一点吧……这么治愈的歌 原来的太难了才改成这样的
00:26:400 (3,4) - ………………为何这么难orz【无视我 其实不难
00:31:900 (4) - 这个音效可以去掉…… 鼓点
00:42:900 (8) - finish 猴
01:00:067 (4) - NC吧……柑橘没必要

Wafu wrote:

[615's Insane]

00:30:234 (2,3) - Consider this pattern, because current flow was not correct and additionally the overlap was just like blah to be honest. Also makes a jump that imo fits more to your style. fixed
collapsed text

00:33:734 (1) - CTRL+G makes a better flow, anyway just a little detail and not important suggestion. ctrlg the next slider
00:50:234 (3) - Make more neat slider like your other sliders are. This is really different from others. They were sensible, but this seems like random shape that reminds me 2007 maps, but might be just presonal feeling. I think it seems good in a happy song
01:00:067 (4,5,6,7,1) - Flowbreak in kiai is really aggressive thing. I really highly recommend to use regular spacing instead of stacking it. I hope you understand that it is really wrong when you play kiai, and you just see jump, jump, jump, jump, jump, now you have stop moving your mouse so you loose that feel of flow, and again jump, jump jump... Kiai should be lively all the time to make player enjoy that map.actually i can't understand,but will fix it

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

615's Insane卡在3.49星了, 建议再加几个大跳这样就可以到达3.50星, 升级为X级
本来是3.5啊但是有modder闲难我就降回去惹
thx for your mod

马勒马勒马挖嘞
osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: MARRY ME.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 43184
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 63900,71734
DistanceSpacing: 1.3
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.4

[Metadata]
Title:MERRY MERRY MERRY MENU... Ne!
TitleUnicode:MERRY MERRY MERRY MENU...ね!
Artist:Tamura Yukari
ArtistUnicode:田村ゆかり
Creator:moonlightleaf
Version:615's Insane
Source:
Tags:[Minakami Yuki] 615915887
BeatmapID:395511
BeatmapSetID:161089

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:7
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:8
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:1.8
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
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//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
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448,204,63900,2,0,P|395:193|341:197,2,107.999996704102,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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100,220,65067,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,79067,12,0,81734,0:0:0:0:
Rizia
3,114 posts
Joined January 2012
Rizia
[Insane]
00:13:734 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - 突然就變大了 讓人有點不習慣
00:20:734 - 試試 http://puu.sh/7UvrZ.jpg
00:22:484 (6) - 試試移到00:22:650 -
00:23:817 (7) - ^一樣做法
00:36:734 (2,3) - http://puu.sh/7UvBM.jpg
00:51:400 (3) - x252 y156
00:51:567 (4) - x120 y172
00:54:734 (4,5,6) - 換成5連
00:59:900 - add note
00:51:567 (4) - 這樣NC http://puu.sh/7UvMA.jpg
01:03:984 (7) - 刪掉
01:08:400 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - 有幾個相同的節奏能用這NC梗, 自己參詳
01:10:484 (1) - remove nc
01:18:400 (5) - whistle
01:18:900 - ^

[615]
01:02:400 (3,4) - 換成3連slider http://puu.sh/7Uwd9.jpg
01:16:400 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - 我不會跟你說我恨這個 建議改改 改成00:13:734 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 一樣也好

[Hard]
00:11:734 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - http://puu.sh/7UwlW.jpg 有看不懂的話找我
00:35:734 (1) - 第三錨點 x144 y176
00:38:734 (5,6,7,8) - 可以考慮跟00:37:734 (1,2,3,4) - 對稱
00:44:400 (7,1,1) - http://puu.sh/7UwxE.jpg
00:48:567 - 這vol. 5%有點怪
- TiRaFiouS -
128 posts
Joined November 2012
- TiRaFiouS -
[General]
我愛飛球((喂
又是1kds....

[NM]
像EZ...
00:03:067 (1,2) - 抱歉...強迫症00:00:401 (1,2) -不和這個一樣接受不了_(:3JL)_
00:24:400 (1) - 縮短到00:25:400 - 加circle在00:25:567 - (NM這像EZ...)
00:32:400 (1,2,3,4) -ds 要一樣
00:27:067 (1,2) - (2)取代(1)然後,00:27:900 - 加circle
00:29:734 (1,2,3) - ^
00:36:567 - 加circle
00:40:734 (1) - 縮短到紅線,00:40:734 (1) - 加circle(原本的感覺不對)
00:47:734 (3) - 延長到00:48:734 - 結束(完全不對喔...)
00:54:234 (2) - del reveres,00:54:734 - 滑條結束位+00:55:067 - 加circle
00:58:400 (3) - end at 00:59:400 - add circle
01:11:067 (1,2) - 球繼承傳統((X ---->01:11:067 (1,2) -

[615 baka]
臥感覺太跳?((撒...我就是說說=3=還可以
感覺flow不太好?
感覺不太好

00:10:900 (4) - del
00:12:067 (4) - x:112 y:200
00:13:734 (1,2,3) -美麗的路程曲折!

00:21:067 (3,4,5,6,1) - 太密了而且好難按
00:23:067 (1,2,3,4,5) - 這5角形滑條折點放中間(4)和(5)間距不一樣故意的?
00:26:400 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - 太密,(5)根本看不見2個短滑條又不是早消失能而看的見加上連打順著去停在(3)尾就像停了一樣,你讓我吐糟什麼((我在說什麼
00:28:234 (5) - 移到00:21:567 (6) - , 00:28:400 (1,2) - 移到本來(5)的位置
00:29:067 (4) - Ctrl G
00:39:734 (1) - x:152 y:176
00:40:067 (2) - x:88 y:344
00:43:234 (1,2,3,4,5,1) -美麗好麼hhh
00:46:400 (2) - 不在三角形中間...
00:47:734 (3) - Ctrl G? 都好像flow不好?
00:48:900 (3) - 滑條折點不在中間+不在(2)的正後方....
00:59:567 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - 同樣,滑條(不正常地)擋住連打難讀圖,還有(4)好奇怪...
01:02:400 (3,4) - 各縮小一個返回
01:08:067 (5,6,1) -啦啦啦啦
01:13:734 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 這音樂給我的感覺是越縮越小诶
01:19:067 (1) - end at 01:21:067 -

[HD]
00:00:401 (1,2) - 不是對著的
00:01:900 (4) - 還是順著比較好
00:48:067 (5) - 感覺漏音
00:48:567 (6,7) - (7)取代(6)
00:51:067 (1,2,3) - 跟著前面比較好00:49:734 (1,2,3) -
01:07:234 (6) - NC
01:09:900 (4) - 還是順著比較好

ds像ins 但似乎只是難一點的NM.....((我感覺

[ins]
00:07:734 (5) - 0.5x把畢竟是長音
00:11:067 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - 這是在旋轉?中間沒轉啊!?
00:33:067 (3) - 彎點QAQ
00:37:650 (6) - del
00:37:734 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - 你那個略醜....
00:42:067 (4) - 在三角形中間比較好
00:44:734 (1) - 00:46:067 (1) - 00:55:400 (1) - 00:56:734 (1) - 在變速滑條要凸顯那個"ye"音我認為最好在變速滑條前加個滑條

感覺所又能變難的位置都被來回滑條取代喔.....
感覺你叫我試那張好一點
節奏感覺沒問題,就是簡單了點

就醬

don't forget my kds!~
moonlightleaf
2,157 posts
Joined September 2011
Topic Starter
moonlightleaf
to Kawaiwkyik

[Insane]

00:22:484 (6) - 試試移到00:22:650 - 之前就是这么放的 扔给几个人play 发现那边有几率掉 于是改掉的, fix
00:23:817 (7) - ^一樣做法

其他fix

to Piyoko_9796

[insane]

00:11:067 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - 這是在旋轉?中間沒轉啊!? ---没改额

其他fix

感谢mod ^^/
moonlightleaf
2,157 posts
Joined September 2011
Topic Starter
moonlightleaf

Sakaue Nachi wrote:

好像是M4M_(:з」∠)_
[Yuki's easy]
00:05:734 (1) - 滑条尾whistle
00:07:067 (2) - ^
00:11:067 (1,2) - ^
00:08:400 (1) - 这个头也换成finish怎样，可以这个声音小点，然后2大点有个递进
00:13:734 (1) - ^
00:16:400 (1) - 尾whistle
00:16:400 (1) - 可以微调下包的好点
00:21:734 (1) - 换成finish好点？
00:24:400 (1) - 这样会不会好看点？http://puu.sh/7UrnV.jpg
00:44:400 (1) - 头finish
00:48:234 (2) - 中间whistle
00:58:900 (2) - ^

to Minakami Yuki

[hard]

00:11:734 (3,4,5,6) - 在hard是不是跳了点，缩小为大概0.85倍差不多感觉 ---没改

GL~这是我的图http://osu.ppy.sh/s/141354 --等我闲下来就摸
感谢补充H和I的摸~
Koiyuki
Beatmap Nominator
2,539 posts
Joined March 2013
Koiyuki
http://puu.sh/7Vsar.osu
Thanks for modding. Sry no time to reply.
moonlightleaf
2,157 posts
Joined September 2011
Topic Starter
moonlightleaf
to yuki

下次贴代码到这里吧 puush的有乱码诶 arist 什么的不识别 我每次还要改一下

:?
DreaM117er
1,596 posts
Joined September 2012
DreaM117er
For NM from PM

這首歌是屬於很俏皮的歌，最適合頓點然後再接拍子，我會依照這個原則幫你Mod

Insane
點我打開
00:18:900 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - 這裡單點太多了，顯得很沒特色，反而沒有最一開始的開頭好(00:16:067 之前 )
00:20:400 (5,6) - 擺成平行
00:21:067 (1,2,3,4) - 變形的風車!!?? 把它擺正
00:21:734 (1,2,3,4,5) - 單點太多了，大大你要知道前面的風車已經很難了，後面又接連跳，不人道啊= " =
00:22:900 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
00:25:734 (2) - 這個刪掉再做跳點
00:29:067 (1,3) - 平行，有點歪了
00:29:734 (1,3,4,5) - 這四個都是直Slider，弄彎一點比較好看
00:37:234 (1,2,3,4,5) - 太彎了太彎了，圓滑一點(把DS調一下再做調整)
00:40:484 (3,4,5) - 這裡只有一個聲音，接連打好怪
00:47:067 (5,6,1) - 組成一個大Slider，不要全跳
00:50:900 (6) - 這裡沒有任何聲音，刪掉這個
00:52:234 (2) - ^
00:57:734 (5,6,1) - 組成一個大Slider
01:00:734 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 還有 01:03:400 (3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5) - 統一一起說比較好，跟著歌詞還有鼓，多運用點1/2 Slider，和前面一樣，不要全跳
01:07:400 (7) - 換成circle
01:18:567 (6) - 刪掉，01:18:400 (5) - 換成3/4 Slider


Hard
點我打開
00:07:067 (7) - 換成1/2 Slider + 1/1 Slider
00:12:400 (7) - ^
00:15:067 (5) - 四個鼓聲，分開來吧
00:16:567 - 漏掉一個音，建議放Slider
00:17:900 (2) - ^
00:16:734 (3) - 這裡有很多分音，像00:23:067 (4,5,6) 一樣分開
00:18:067 (3) - ^
00:22:067 (2) - ^
00:28:567 (6,7) - 組成Slider
00:37:567 (5) - 刪掉
00:43:900 (4,5) - Hard照著順序來就好了，Reverse Selection
00:48:067 (5) - 中間還有一個音，不要漏掉了
00:53:734 (5) - 換成circle
00:54:234 (1,2) - 換成這樣??


※Hard記得DS從頭到尾全開，除非要跳點按著Alt在去做調整，你有些地方跳得很兇，提醒一下


Normal
點我打開
00:40:734 (4,1) - 換成這樣↓

00:49:734 (1) - 換成下面這樣??

00:51:067 (2) - ^


615's Insane
點我打開
00:06:900 (6) - 三角形沒有排好
00:15:734 (5) - 太遠了，Reverse Selection
00:18:900 (6) - 疊在00:19:067 (1) 頭上
00:22:900 (6,1,2,3,4) - 正五角形擺好
00:26:567 (4) - 移到x144 y68
00:37:400 (4) - 減少一次折返
00:42:567 (6,7,8) - 重新做這三個點，跳太遠了
00:43:234 (1,2) - ^
00:45:567 (5,1) - ^
00:47:567 (2,3) - ^
00:52:567 (2,4,6,8) - 網內拉近距離，同上
00:57:067 (2,3,4,5) - 太遠了
00:58:234 (2,3,4,5,1,2) - ^
01:00:734 (2,3) - ^
01:02:400 (3,4) - 這種滑條不是給你這樣擺的，你打的到就當我沒Mod過
01:10:567 (4,5,6,7,1) - 太遠了
01:13:734 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^，要求重製
01:16:400 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - 重製，這裡你打的到??

歌開始前10秒我還以為是神圖，不合格 :(
BPM180跳這麼遠，除非你打的過，否則我不會要求重製

抱歉。

Easy沒有問題，有一些怪怪的地方，請別的大大幫你吧 :D
moonlightleaf
2,157 posts
Joined September 2011
Topic Starter
moonlightleaf
to m1223961117

都fix

感谢mod ^^/
DeletedUser_3044645
DeletedUser_3044645
Hi

[Yuki's Easy]
The way you mapped, I think HP OD AR should be reduced by 1 tick.
00:48:400 (2) - I couldn't figure out why you placed it here. It should be moved to 00:48:234 - to follow vocal or guitar or the music itself.
But the way you mapped, I don't know if you should make this part 1/2 beat or not.
00:59:067 (2) - This again. same opinion as above. I don't think it follows the music at all. I really don't know your intention.. Maybe you are following the drum, that that isn't the dominant beat here imo.
01:21:734 (1) - How about adding timing sections to add fade out effect like the music does.

[Normal]
Your NC needs a lot of work
00:02:400 (3,1) - this can be really confusing for inexperienced players sometimes, I strongly recommend that you unstack these.
00:27:900 (2,3) - I think this would flow better. And also, this stack might be a little too hard
SPOILER
00:37:734 (1,2) - shouldn't these 2 be 2/1 slider? or have circle after them
01:12:067 (2,1) - they overlap, but I guess you can keep it. I wouldn't recommend, though.

[Hard]
Same as normal. Your NC needs a lot of work
00:36:234 (2) - this stack really doesn't fit at all imo. There really isn't much of a thing going on here, so you can delete this and 00:35:734 (1,1) - spread this out.
00:38:234 (3,4) - Try crtl + g. Fits very well and flows better imo
00:43:234 (1,2) - I think you should merge these to a 1/1 slider. this vocal is holding, and 2 circles don't fit imo.
00:48:400 (6) - you can delete this note. I can't think of a reason why you would want to add a circle here. Unless you were trying to make this diff harder
01:00:400 (2,3) - How about merge thee to a 1/2 slider? according to 01:03:067 (2) -
01:01:234 (4,1,2) - you should either stack these 3 or unstack 01:01:401 (1,2) - to fit vocal more. having.
01:03:400 (3) - crtl + g please. extremely boring flow
01:04:067 (1) - ^
01:10:900 (1) - this part feels very awkward. you're starting the slider which i part of 01:10:567 (2) - this melody, which makes the vocal start from the reverse. Try this
SPOILER
mine
yours

01:13:734 (1,2,3,4) - to be honest, this part seems really boring. you could probably remap this section and come up with better pattern!

[Insane]
NC....
00:07:734 (1) - I don't think this SV change makes any sense at all.
00:17:067 (5) - crtl + g?
00:17:400 (6) - ^ (only if you did above)
00:25:567 (1,2,3,4) - I think you can do a better job with this distance problem here. kind of confusing imo.
00:26:067 (3,4,1) - awkward flow imo. try to bring 00:26:234 (4) - down left a little?
SPOILER
00:33:067 (3) - move it a bit up for smooth transition 00:32:400 (1,2,3) -
00:35:067 (8) - this 1/2 reverse doesn't fit, and is ruining the calmness of these part imo. replace it with 1/1 slider?
00:40:567 (3) - I really don't see a point with this circle. delete? if you do, don't forget distance here 00:40:067 (2,4) -
00:40:734 (4,5) - not the best flow imo.
00:55:067 (6) - I'd call this bad flow. it's completely breaking the flow from this stream 00:54:734 (2,3,4,5) -
01:10:400 (3,4,5,6) - spacing disaster, also shape
01:10:901 (6,1,2) - I think this might be a bit hard to play. but it's ok
01:18:234 (4,5) - not the best flow, but it's acceptable

Good luck!!
CrazyErrorMan
110 posts
Joined February 2013
CrazyErrorMan
Hello, Mod from my que.
Normal Diff
These circles are a little hard compared to other maps I have seen.
00:25:567
00:36:567
00:59:567
00:59:567

These circles are too quick I think for a normal diff.
That's all I've got to say.
If you don't find this mod helpful, don't worry.
moonlightleaf
2,157 posts
Joined September 2011
Topic Starter
moonlightleaf
to No Dap

all fix

to CrazyErrorMan

yep, a llttle hard , i changed~


thanks for modding ^^/
10crystalmask01
10crystalmask01
Hey, mod from queue 8-)
[General]
01:13:734 - Kai time should end here, since this is officially where the chorus is done.
[Insane]
00:00:900 (3) - , 00:01:400 (5) - and 00:02:400 (8) - NC for a more vibrant color effect for the objects? (Similar to what you did for 01:11:067 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - )
00:03:567 (3) - ,00:04:067 (5) - and 00:04:567 (7) - - ^ Same suggestion.

00:44:400 (4) - NC Because it's the first object to appear in Kai.

00:55:067 (8) - Add finish for the cymbal crash heard in the music.
01:00:400 (1) - ^ On the head.

[615's Insane]
00:00:900 (2,3,4) - NC for those consecutive overlaps. I hate them
00:03:567 (2,3,4) - ^

00:22:900 (6,1,2,3,4) - Fix the star formation with these notes ,they're just really messy atm;

SPOILER

00:33:734 (1,3) - Random overlap, don't use this type of flow on this part of the music, it doesn't fit in the same rhythm with where 00:00:401 (1,1,1,1) - was.

01:11:567 (2,3,4) - NC?

[Hard]
00:00:900 (2,3,4) - Add finish on the head.
00:02:400 (5) - ^
00:03:567 (3) - ^
00:04:234 (5) - ^

00:44:400 (6) - NC because it's the first object to appear in Kai time.

00:45:734 (4,2,3) - Please move more apart to avoid that unnecessary overlap.

01:06:234 (2) - Add finish
01:06:900 (5) - ^
01:07:234 (1,2) - ^

[Normal]
00:21:734 (1) - Kinda forms an awkward flow. This is because it's reverse end is closer to the previous object, then it's actual head itself.
Here's an idea - Replace with 00:23:067 (2) - flipped horizontally (CTRL + H) and re-position it a bit. T Hat way, not only does it solve the issue, but it forms a pretty neat symmetry with 00:23:067 (2) - too!
SPOILER


*NOTE: You're going to hafta move the next objects just a bit for this to work

00:25:234 (1) - Remove NC, not necessary here.

00:27:900 (2,3) - This stack is very random, considering that none of your previous objects were stacked. Consider unstacking.

00:30:567 (2,3) - Stack, only if you disagree to my suggestion above. You want to keep the flow consistent.

00:40:734 (6) - NC instead of 00:41:234 (1) - .

00:41:650 (1) - Add whistle?

00:44:400 (1) - Add finish on the head.

01:00:400 (5) - NC instead of 01:01:067 (1) - , since it appears no the new rhythm cycle (on the long white tick mark).

01:19:067 (4) - Add finish.

[Yuki's Easy]
Okay.

Good luck!
moonlightleaf
2,157 posts
Joined September 2011
Topic Starter
moonlightleaf
to 10crystalmask01

all fix

but here

[Normal]

00:40:734 (6) - NC instead of 00:41:234 (1) - . (6)fix , but (1) i think should NC also for next（ appear spinner

thanks for modding ^^/

add Teller's Insane , map by tellertheworld
Last edited by moonlightleaf , edited 1 time in total.
Koiyuki
Beatmap Nominator
2,539 posts
Joined March 2013
Koiyuki
No Dap:
about following the vocal, I put the slider on 00:48:234 - before, but I finally accept Wafu's suggestion to make it on 1/2 beats.
I will condiser to change it or not if some others give me suggestions.

I think it's not necessary to add timing sections.

Currently, no change
Rizia
3,114 posts
Joined January 2012
Rizia
no kds

[Teller's Insane]
01:13:734 - 完在這裡
YoshinoSakura
472 posts
Joined January 2011
YoshinoSakura

Kawaiwkyik wrote:

[615]
01:02:400 (3,4) - 換成3連slider http://puu.sh/7Uwd9.jpg 猴
01:16:400 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - 我不會跟你說我恨這個 建議改改 改成00:13:734 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 一樣也好 稍稍改了下

Piyoko_9796 wrote:

[615 baka]
臥感覺太跳?((撒...我就是說說=3=還可以
感覺flow不太好?
感覺不太好 只是稍微跳一点吧

00:10:900 (4) - del 有音的
00:12:067 (4) - x:112 y:200 那也太近
00:13:734 (1,2,3) -美麗的路程曲折! 美丽！

00:21:067 (3,4,5,6,1) - 太密了而且好難按 改了下
00:23:067 (1,2,3,4,5) - 這5角形滑條折點放中間(4)和(5)間距不一樣故意的? 你输得对，这里是渐开
00:26:400 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - 太密,(5)根本看不見2個短滑條又不是早消失能而看的見加上連打順著去停在(3)尾就像停了一樣,你讓我吐糟什麼((我在說什麼 这是我改变的米桶的梗。。
00:28:234 (5) - 移到00:21:567 (6) - , 00:28:400 (1,2) - 移到本來(5)的位置 没看懂。。
00:29:067 (4) - Ctrl G 感觉不错
00:39:734 (1) - x:152 y:176 更不好看了。。
00:40:067 (2) - x:88 y:344 叠到1上了更不好看惹，，
00:43:234 (1,2,3,4,5,1) -美麗好麼hhh 。。

00:46:400 (2) - 不在三角形中間... 本来就没设计在中间。。
00:47:734 (3) - Ctrl G? 都好像flow不好? 555怎么修都修不好。。
00:48:900 (3) - 滑條折點不在中間+不在(2)的正後方.... 两次ctrl+g即可解决
00:59:567 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - 同樣,滑條(不正常地)擋住連打難讀圖,還有(4)好奇怪... 改了
01:02:400 (3,4) - 各縮小一個返回 猴
01:08:067 (5,6,1) -啦啦啦啦 港妹baka

01:13:734 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 這音樂給我的感覺是越縮越小诶 渐开跳而已
01:19:067 (1) - end at 01:21:067 - 猴

m1223961117 wrote:

00:06:900 (6) - 三角形沒有排好 不是三角。。
00:15:734 (5) - 太遠了，Reverse Selection 不远
00:18:900 (6) - 疊在00:19:067 (1) 頭上 no
00:22:900 (6,1,2,3,4) - 正五角形擺好 不是五角形
00:26:567 (4) - 移到x144 y68 那也太远
00:37:400 (4) - 減少一次折返 感觉没必要，这里有音的
00:42:567 (6,7,8) - 重新做這三個點，跳太遠了
00:43:234 (1,2) - ^
00:45:567 (5,1) - ^
00:47:567 (2,3) - ^ sorry no change
00:52:567 (2,4,6,8) - 網內拉近距離，同上
00:57:067 (2,3,4,5) - 太遠了
00:58:234 (2,3,4,5,1,2) - ^
01:00:734 (2,3) - ^
01:02:400 (3,4) - 這種滑條不是給你這樣擺的，你打的到就當我沒Mod過 改了
01:10:567 (4,5,6,7,1) - 太遠了
01:13:734 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^，要求重製
01:16:400 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - 重製，這裡你打的到?? 改了

歌開始前10秒我還以為是神圖，不合格
BPM180跳這麼遠，除非你打的過，否則我不會要求重製
不是你打不到的地方就不能打，不是我打不了的图我就不能做
抱歉。抱歉了没改多少

10crystalmask01 wrote:

[615's Insane]
00:00:900 (2,3,4) - NC for those consecutive overlaps. I hate them sorry for these patterns.I'm just copying them from others map.But I think NC is not needed here.
00:03:567 (2,3,4) - ^

00:22:900 (6,1,2,3,4) - Fix the star formation with these notes ,they're just really messy atm; it's not a star pattern


00:33:734 (1,3) - Random overlap, don't use this type of flow on this part of the music, it doesn't fit in the same rhythm with where 00:00:401 (1,1,1,1) - was. fixed

01:11:567 (2,3,4) - NC?^
thx for mod
to all the coming modder
I'll probably not reduce the difficulty of my diff.Sorry for that.If you can't play,just skip my diff.

哟~~~~蹦！
osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: MARRY ME.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 43184
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 63900,71734
DistanceSpacing: 1.3
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.4

[Metadata]
Title:MERRY MERRY MERRY MENU... Ne!
TitleUnicode:MERRY MERRY MERRY MENU...ね!
Artist:Tamura Yukari
ArtistUnicode:田村ゆかり
Creator:moonlightleaf
Version:615's Insane
Source:
Tags:[Minakami Yuki] 615915887
BeatmapID:395511
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ApproachRate:9
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//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
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smallboat
1,687 posts
Joined January 2010
smallboat
嗨二妹，好多post，懷疑要sprank 直覺。 干 作了一周BAT美麗check就這樣塔馬的放兩周還等不到check真SAD

[General]

1.我之前拿的是舊檔案up過了後，現在tag還是不一致，試著再重新貼上一次GDer使一致。
2.Widescreen support 不一致，ins忘了勾。

[Yuki's Easy]

00:29:067 (2) - 這個人聲加whistle似乎有不錯的效果。
00:31:734 (2) - 我覺得應該能跟上面對應是加whistle，而不是finish。
00:47:067 (1) - 或許應該尾端要空一格白線比較好掌握下一個節奏，個人意見。
00:59:067 (2) - 感覺尾端忘了加whistle強調vocal
01:19:067 (1) - 為何不讓中間描點對準Y軸成一個對稱圖形? 然後左邊尖端高了點.

Nazi,後面那一根草歪了。

[Normal]

SPOILER
00:09:067 (2) - 前端+whistle可突出音樂
00:11:067 (1,2) - 兩個硬包不太好看
00:14:400 (2) - 同00:09:067
00:24:067 (3) - 故意沒疊好?
00:30:567 (2) - 覺得這也是重音能加finish突顯效果。
00:38:234 (2,4) - 不如都換成1/2跟人聲
00:47:734 (3) - 尾端去掉finish，沒重音，無理由加。
00:58:400 (3,4) - 1都有加whistle，這邊全加whistle強調人聲。
01:17:067 (2) - 前端whistle

後面也是一根草歪。

[Hard] 00:48:734 timing線可刪去

SPOILER
00:03:234 (2) - 加whistle與4對應
00:06:734 (6) - 前端whistle
00:11:900 (4) - 加whistle節奏聽的會舒服點。
00:23:067 (1) - 尾端沒重音為何finish，無理。
00:30:067 (1,2,3) - 1尾端，2和3加finish試試? 重音。
00:33:067 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 或許間距能再放小一點作anti-jump.
00:50:567 (5) - 為何不ctrl+g?
00:52:400 (1,2,3,4) - 沒互相對稱呢
00:59:234 (4) - Ctrl+G比較好點5。

後面也是一根草歪。

[615's Insane]

就只有615的轉盤結束跟大家不一樣。

SPOILER
00:10:984 (5) - (388|332)做個弧度?
00:13:067 (5) - Ctrl+g不就順flow了?
00:27:567 (3) - 重音怎不加finish?
00:28:400 (1) - (28|128)比較順暢flow。
00:30:234 (2) - 重音怎不加finish?
00:41:567 (1) - 可以加個finish或whistle強調人聲。
00:58:900 (1,2,3) - 這邊都唱出來的vocal所以我覺得可以加finish在這裡。
01:15:234 (2) - 不完全重疊嗎?
01:18:400 (5) - 或許開頭能加whistle。

[Teller's Insane]

有些重音加得很奇怪，聽得有些吵雜。

SPOILER
00:02:067 (8) - 紅線不需要加finish，這邊無重音，無理。連續3個finish有點noisy。
00:04:234 (6,8) - 藍線whistle聽的不是很舒服，remove it?
00:05:067 (9) - 少一個note跟vocal。
00:06:567 (3) - 不是重音，搬去finsh。(搬去這個會聽得比較流暢)
00:10:900 (7) - 這個1/4note間距有點小，放大到0.80x比較好讀。(個人意見，可能我喜歡作圖連打間距比較大一點。)
00:11:734 (2) - 加finish也是可以，不過建議還是remove。
00:12:400 (3) - 中間和尾端去掉finish，連續3個也是太吵雜。
00:15:734 (5) - 全去finish，頭尾whistle。
00:21:900 (2,3,4) - 23那麼遠，34又那麼近，不如放在(228|152)來平均間距，順便5包3。00:22:400 (5) 可以移到(152|68)試試。
00:26:817 (3,4,5,6) - 不好看的slider，而且又容易miss，還是用1/4比較適當。
00:37:900 (2,2,2,2) - finish的音效都把音樂蓋住了，建議可以remove藍線的finish。
00:43:234 (1,2) - 2個之間怎這麼近，明明之間還有一個白線的距離。
00:43:567 (2,3) - 這2跟3之間跟vocal的這段怎沒做? (會讓玩家沒辦法掌握何時click)
00:44:734 (1) - 尾端沒重音remove finish。
00:45:234 (2) - 沒疊好
00:59:234 (2) - 疊00:58:400 (2) 會很flow。
01:01:067 (6) - 紅線不需要finish。
01:02:400 (4) - ^
01:04:067 (6) - 疊01:02:400 (4) 。
01:08:567 (2,4,6,8) - 一樣remove藍線finish，不然很吵。
01:11:400 (2,4,6) - overmap，沒節奏在這裡。(參考615 ins diff 和 二妹 diff )
01:16:400 (1,2,3,4) - 節奏是可以，但這個pattern似乎不太好看。

[Insane]

SPOILER
00:07:567 (4) - 為何不移到(252|220)左右位置成個圓形? 這樣看起來覺得好像放歪。
00:08:734 (5) - 尾端去掉whistle，與後面的whistle相對應這樣音效比較好聽。
00:11:400 (3) - 有點突出的感覺。
00:14:067 (5) - 尾端疊好?
00:18:067 (3,4) - 2個ctrl+g不就flow?
00:23:400 (4) - 我覺得ctrl+g比較順。
00:23:734 (5) - 如果上面那個用了這個疊 00:22:234 (2) 頭。
00:30:567 (4,5) - 尾端whistle感覺有點違和。
00:35:067 (1) - 尾端whistle去掉?
00:36:900 (6) - 再跳一點，移到(68|96)包3?
00:40:067 (2) - 覺得疊00:38:734 (1) 比較有感覺。
00:45:067 (1) - 再稍微調一下就變五角了
00:48:234 (1,2) - 也是覺得尾端whistle有點違和
00:50:234 (4) - 開頭忘了finish?
00:51:567 (4) - ^
00:58:900 (1,2) - 也是覺得尾端whistle有點違和
01:08:900 (1,1) - 加finish
01:09:900 (1) - ^
01:11:734 (2,2) - ^

後面草歪。


二妹Good Luck ~ !

草歪=綠線(草)歪了
Last edited by smallboat , edited 3 times in total.
moonlightleaf
2,157 posts
Joined September 2011
Topic Starter
moonlightleaf
to smallboat

都修惹 我把提到的音效 其他diff没的也加惹

草歪惹 这个没看懂

感谢mod

太难rank惹 我还是不收GD惹= =对Teller感到非常抱歉

615你的已经mod很多了啊 再这么懒也不收你的GD惹

Teller's Insane dl here
-Teina-
529 posts
Joined October 2013
-Teina-

moonlightleaf wrote:

to smallboat

都修惹 我把提到的音效 其他diff没的也加惹

草歪惹 这个没看懂

感谢mod

太难rank惹 我还是不收GD惹= =对Teller感到非常抱歉

615你的已经mod很多了啊 再这么懒也不收你的GD惹

Teller's Insane dl here
好吧~
那你繼續努力吧
-Teina-
529 posts
Joined October 2013
-Teina-

smallboat wrote:

嗨二妹，好多post，懷疑要sprank 直覺。 干 作了一周BAT美麗check就這樣塔馬的放兩周還等不到check真SAD
SPOILER
[General]

1.我之前拿的是舊檔案up過了後，現在tag還是不一致，試著再重新貼上一次GDer使一致。
2.Widescreen support 不一致，ins忘了勾。

[Yuki's Easy]

00:29:067 (2) - 這個人聲加whistle似乎有不錯的效果。
00:31:734 (2) - 我覺得應該能跟上面對應是加whistle，而不是finish。
00:47:067 (1) - 或許應該尾端要空一格白線比較好掌握下一個節奏，個人意見。
00:59:067 (2) - 感覺尾端忘了加whistle強調vocal
01:19:067 (1) - 為何不讓中間描點對準Y軸成一個對稱圖形? 然後左邊尖端高了點.

Nazi,後面那一根草歪了。

[Normal]

00:09:067 (2) - 前端+whistle可突出音樂
00:11:067 (1,2) - 兩個硬包不太好看
00:14:400 (2) - 同00:09:067
00:24:067 (3) - 故意沒疊好?
00:30:567 (2) - 覺得這也是重音能加finish突顯效果。
00:38:234 (2,4) - 不如都換成1/2跟人聲
00:47:734 (3) - 尾端去掉finish，沒重音，無理由加。
00:58:400 (3,4) - 1都有加whistle，這邊全加whistle強調人聲。
01:17:067 (2) - 前端whistle

後面也是一根草歪。

[Hard] 00:48:734 timing線可刪去

00:03:234 (2) - 加whistle與4對應
00:06:734 (6) - 前端whistle
00:11:900 (4) - 加whistle節奏聽的會舒服點。
00:23:067 (1) - 尾端沒重音為何finish，無理。
00:30:067 (1,2,3) - 1尾端，2和3加finish試試? 重音。
00:33:067 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 或許間距能再放小一點作anti-jump.
00:50:567 (5) - 為何不ctrl+g?
00:52:400 (1,2,3,4) - 沒互相對稱呢
00:59:234 (4) - Ctrl+G比較好點5。

後面也是一根草歪。

[615's Insane]

就只有615的轉盤結束跟大家不一樣。

00:10:984 (5) - (388|332)做個弧度?
00:13:067 (5) - Ctrl+g不就順flow了?
00:27:567 (3) - 重音怎不加finish?
00:28:400 (1) - (28|128)比較順暢flow。
00:30:234 (2) - 重音怎不加finish?
00:41:567 (1) - 可以加個finish或whistle強調人聲。
00:58:900 (1,2,3) - 這邊都唱出來的vocal所以我覺得可以加finish在這裡。
01:15:234 (2) - 不完全重疊嗎?
01:18:400 (5) - 或許開頭能加whistle。

[Teller's Insane]

有些重音加得很奇怪，聽得有些吵雜。

00:02:067 (8) - 紅線不需要加finish，這邊無重音，無理。連續3個finish有點noisy。 :arrow: 紅線一直沒FINISH喔
00:04:234 (6,8) - 藍線whistle聽的不是很舒服，remove it? :arrow: 這個都一直沒whistle
00:05:067 (9) - 少一個note跟vocal。 :arrow: 00:05:067 - 加了圈
00:06:567 (3) - 不是重音，搬去finsh。(搬去這個會聽得比較流暢) :arrow: 搬了去00:06:400 (2) -
00:10:900 (7) - 這個1/4note間距有點小，放大到0.80x比較好讀。(個人意見，可能我喜歡作圖連打間距比較大一點。) :arrow: fixed
00:11:734 (2) - 加finish也是可以，不過建議還是remove。 :arrow: 改小聲一點吧
00:12:400 (3) - 中間和尾端去掉finish，連續3個也是太吵雜。 :arrow: 一直都是中間和尾端去finish喔
00:15:734 (5) - 全去finish，頭尾whistle。 :arrow: 抱歉 因為不會再改 不把新的hitsound pattern加入了 所以試不到這個效果
00:21:900 (2,3,4) - 23那麼遠，34又那麼近，不如放在(228|152)來平均間距，順便5包3。00:22:400 (5) 可以移到(152|68)試試。
:arrow: 00:22:400 (5,2) - 是blanket的 / 00:21:734 (1,2) - 和 00:22:067 (3,4) - 是平均的 這個排版出現了多次了喔
00:26:817 (3,4,5,6) - 不好看的slider，而且又容易miss，還是用1/4比較適當。 :arrow: fixed
00:37:900 (2,2,2,2) - finish的音效都把音樂蓋住了，建議可以remove藍線的finish。 :arrow: 藍線的finish 一直都是沒有喔
00:43:234 (1,2) - 2個之間怎這麼近，明明之間還有一個白線的距離。 :arrow: fixed
00:43:567 (2,3) - 這2跟3之間跟vocal的這段怎沒做? (會讓玩家沒辦法掌握何時click) :arrow: 個人節奏 覺得這樣比較好 抱歉 不能給你原因T_T
00:44:734 (1) - 尾端沒重音remove finish。 :arrow: 尾端一直沒finish喔
00:45:234 (2) - 沒疊好 :arrow: 疊好的話 stack leniency會發揮作用 令00:46:151 (2) - 會移位
00:59:234 (2) - 疊00:58:400 (2) 會很flow。 :arrow: thank~ fixed
01:01:067 (6) - 紅線不需要finish。 :arrow: 一直都是沒finish呀 尾端
01:02:400 (4) - ^:arrow: 一直都是沒finish呀 尾端
01:04:067 (6) - 疊01:02:400 (4) 。 :arrow: 節奏沒變 突然做個jump會很奇怪
01:08:567 (2,4,6,8) - 一樣remove藍線finish，不然很吵。:arrow: 一直都是沒finish的說 slider的尾端
01:11:400 (2,4,6) - overmap，沒節奏在這裡。(參考615 ins diff 和 二妹 diff ) :arrow: fixed
01:16:400 (1,2,3,4) - 節奏是可以，但這個pattern似乎不太好看。 :arrow: fixed

感覺大大耐心幫我mod
這是最後的修改吧....

音效方面 你可能需要redwonload喔~

祝小moon你rank圖成功~

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[Editor]
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Title:MERRY MERRY MERRY MENU... Ne!
TitleUnicode:MERRY MERRY MERRY MENU...ね!
Artist:Tamura Yukari
ArtistUnicode:田村ゆかり
Creator:moonlightleaf
Version:Teller's Insane
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288,176,52900,5,0,0:0:0:0:
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288,176,53400,5,0,0:0:0:0:
168,48,53567,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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276,256,55567,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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112,116,55900,1,0,0:0:0:0:
0,220,56067,1,0,0:0:0:0:
88,228,56234,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,308,56400,2,2,P|248:280|292:240,1,95,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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336,96,56817,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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396,176,57234,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,200,57400,1,0,0:0:0:0:
444,236,57567,1,0,0:0:0:0:
372,304,57734,2,2,P|336:352|260:360,2,95
296,144,58234,5,0,0:0:0:0:
204,256,58400,1,2,0:0:0:0:
336,232,58567,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,176,58734,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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376,140,59900,1,0,0:0:0:0:
440,24,60067,5,2,0:0:0:0:
328,48,60234,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,48,60317,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,48,60400,2,4,P|284:36|236:48,1,95,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,212,60734,2,0,P|296:168|280:116,1,95
240,284,61067,2,4,P|284:296|332:284,1,95
204,168,61400,21,2,0:0:0:0:
284,212,61567,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,248,61734,2,4,P|116:264|64:244,1,95
164,152,62067,5,0,0:0:0:0:
128,152,62150,1,0,0:0:0:0:
88,152,62234,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,64,62400,2,4,P|240:56|308:72,1,95
403,222,62734,6,0,L|312:196,1,95,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
193,335,63067,2,4,L|280:296,1,95,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,364,63400,2,0,L|328:308,1,95
296,196,63734,1,4,0:0:0:0:
168,248,63900,1,2,0:0:0:0:
232,112,64067,2,0,L|320:56,1,95
424,176,64400,5,4,0:0:0:0:
404,208,64484,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,240,64567,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,196,64734,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,196,64817,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,196,64900,1,0,0:0:0:0:
196,344,65067,2,8,L|128:344,2,47.5
136,276,65317,2,8,L|76:276,2,47.5
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184,136,65734,5,4,0:0:0:0:
352,168,66234,1,4,0:0:0:0:
196,272,66900,1,4,0:0:0:0:
104,160,67234,1,2,0:0:0:0:
104,88,67400,1,4,0:0:0:0:
360,44,68400,5,0,0:0:0:0:
453,138,68567,2,4,L|408:124,1,47.5
216,112,68900,1,0,0:0:0:0:
90,155,69067,2,4,L|136:168,1,47.5
316,216,69400,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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184,284,69900,1,0,0:0:0:0:
58,327,70067,2,4,L|104:340,1,47.5
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172,356,70317,1,0,0:0:0:0:
172,356,70400,1,2,0:0:0:0:
236,224,70567,1,2,0:0:0:0:
236,224,70650,1,0,0:0:0:0:
236,224,70734,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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492,208,71234,5,4,0:0:0:0:
236,224,71567,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,280,71734,1,4,0:0:0:0:
328,124,72067,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,8,72234,1,4,0:0:0:0:
144,280,72567,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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140,96,72984,1,0,0:0:0:0:
140,96,73067,2,0,L|139:156,1,47.5
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288,300,73734,5,2,0:0:0:0:
380,264,73900,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,208,74067,1,0,0:0:0:0:
148,248,74234,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,128,74400,5,2,0:0:0:0:
312,80,74567,1,0,0:0:0:0:
380,264,74734,1,2,0:0:0:0:
224,312,74900,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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152,292,76484,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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84,48,77150,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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212,256,78234,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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SPOILER
[Insane]

00:07:567 (4) - 為何不移到(252|220)左右位置成個圓形? 這樣看起來覺得好像放歪。
00:08:734 (5) - 尾端去掉whistle，與後面的whistle相對應這樣音效比較好聽。
00:11:400 (3) - 有點突出的感覺。
00:14:067 (5) - 尾端疊好?
00:18:067 (3,4) - 2個ctrl+g不就flow?
00:23:400 (4) - 我覺得ctrl+g比較順。
00:23:734 (5) - 如果上面那個用了這個疊 00:22:234 (2) 頭。
00:30:567 (4,5) - 尾端whistle感覺有點違和。
00:35:067 (1) - 尾端whistle去掉?
00:36:900 (6) - 再跳一點，移到(68|96)包3?
00:40:067 (2) - 覺得疊00:38:734 (1) 比較有感覺。
00:45:067 (1) - 再稍微調一下就變五角了
00:48:234 (1,2) - 也是覺得尾端whistle有點違和
00:50:234 (4) - 開頭忘了finish?
00:51:567 (4) - ^
00:58:900 (1,2) - 也是覺得尾端whistle有點違和
01:08:900 (1,1) - 加finish
01:09:900 (1) - ^
01:11:734 (2,2) - ^

後面草歪。


二妹Good Luck ~ !

草歪=綠線(草)歪了
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