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Tamura Yukari - MERRY MERRY MERRY MENU... Ne!

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moonlightleaf
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Topic Starter
moonlightleaf
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2016年10月9日 at 10:46:01

Artist: Tamura Yukari
Title: MERRY MERRY MERRY MENU... Ne!
Tags: Minakami Yuki cute japanese jpop christmas song carol ufw star Koiyuki Karia kanor karen Crz Sword Rumia- kencho Lami yf_bmp intoon little kawaiwkyik rizia CloudSplash16
BPM: 180
Filesize: 9687kb
Play Time: 01:16
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.37 stars, 68 notes)
  2. Insane (4.7 stars, 393 notes)
  3. Kanor's Normal (1.99 stars, 136 notes)
  4. Karen's Insane (5.11 stars, 373 notes)
  5. Karia's Extra (5.71 stars, 401 notes)
  6. Kencho's Extra (5.25 stars, 300 notes)
  7. Kencho's Insane (4.3 stars, 250 notes)
  8. Koiyuki's Easy (1.25 stars, 59 notes)
  9. Koiyuki's Extra (5.55 stars, 398 notes)
  10. Lami's Extra (5.84 stars, 396 notes)
  11. Light Insane (4.07 stars, 288 notes)
  12. Little's Extra (5.68 stars, 384 notes)
  13. Merry Merry Love (6 stars, 401 notes)
  14. Sword's Hard (3.23 stars, 238 notes)
  15. wkyik's Insane (4.87 stars, 357 notes)
Download: Tamura Yukari - MERRY MERRY MERRY MENU... Ne!
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Mp3 by Jemmmmy | Aim : Most Played Beatmaps
615's Insane - by 615 rip , Old ver click here , if you want 2014 map
Easy by | Koiyuki √ | me √
Normal - by | kanor √　 | 　Bubbled by sahuang　| Ranked by Pentori
Hard - by | [Crz]Sword √
Insane - by | me √ | Karen √ | Kencho √ | Rizia √
Extra - by | Karia √ | Koiyuki √ | Kencho √ | Lami √ | Little √
Merry Merry Love - by | Rumia- √
Storyboard - by | me x yf_bmp ver 1.1
Last edited by moonlightleaf , edited 233 times in total.
rinsukir
385 posts
Joined March 2012
rinsukir
hi

[General]
不用自定义音效?
顺便kiai应该是从00:44:415开始吧

[Normal]
有些多余绿线 自己检查一下
00:01:915 (4) - 不要折返然后在00:02:415结束好一些?
00:24:249 (3,4) - 可以跟vocal吧.. 顺便ds
01:18:832 (1) - 建议尾巴消音 其他diff也是

[Hard]
00:05:749 (1,2,3,4) - 这样近似直线的排列感觉有点单调
00:15:082 (5) - 可以考虑跟音乐
00:31:915 (6) - 换成note然后滑条从00:32:082开始?
00:33:415 - 这个拍掌声不跟?
00:34:749 - ^
00:35:749 (1) - 缩短到前面的长白线?
00:36:749 (3) - 中间红线的音不跟?
00:37:582 (6,7,1) - 太难了吧 感觉hard最好不要连打前后都是单点o.o
00:41:082 (5) - 中间红线的vocal不跟?
00:42:249 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 太难了吧
00:48:082 (5,6,7) - 节奏下错了吧
01:00:415 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 单点好像太多惹

[Insane]
感觉可以适当放几个三连o.o
00:10:415 (5) - flow怪怪的
00:14:082 (5,5) - youdianchou
00:43:249 (1,2,3,4) - 跟vocal?
00:51:082 (1,2,3,4) - 个人感觉1/2单点就好

goodluck~顺便求个mu;w; :)
moonlightleaf
2,155 posts
Joined September 2011
Topic Starter
moonlightleaf
to rinsukir:

all fix 除了以下:

[Hard]

00:37:582 (6,7,1) - 太难了吧 感觉hard最好不要连打前后都是单点o.o ---没改 hard可以适当点难度的

[Insane]

00:51:082 (1,2,3,4) - 个人感觉1/2单点就好 --没改

已mu

感谢mod ^^/
Coppola
50 posts
Joined February 2010
Coppola
第一次mod他人的图，如有什么过失还请见谅:3

[General]
音效有点单一，再配合曲子自带的一些音效合理添加下吧~

[Normal]
打了几遍，觉得挺好，不知从何下手orz...也许可以再加点note？

[Hard]
00:04:582 (6) - 拉短至前面白线也许会好些？
00:06:082 (3) - 排版上左移一点
00:15:082 (5) - 减少一个折返，原来白线加个note要好些？
00:24:249 - 加个note，然后00:24:415 (1,2) - 改成slider？
00:36:249 (2,1,2,3) - 这里节奏有点怪..
00:37:665 (6) - 删去如何？
00:42:582 (2,3) - 3去掉，2滑条拉长至原3的线，折返数不变
00:44:749 (1,1) - 两个slider的绿线略奇怪
00:48:082 (5,6) - 拉短至红线？
00:59:582 (5) - 拉长至蓝线？这个无所谓，纯粹HD时个人感觉。
01:10:582 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - 略难..

[Insane]
比较有挑战性，有点难于FC，一定是最近作图作的打图手生了orz
00:10:415 (5) -略远，无大碍
00:24:415 (2,3) - 删掉2，将3移至原2的位置改为折返？
00:45:915 (6) - 排版上稍微右移
01:02:082 (6) - NC
很喜欢这样的单点跳:)

啊，mod完他人的图感觉学到了好多，是时候再次大刀阔斧改自己的图了QwQ
祝早日Rank~于是我也求个mu;w;
moonlightleaf
2,155 posts
Joined September 2011
Topic Starter
moonlightleaf
to Dyskie:

[Hard]

00:48:082 (5,6) - 拉短至红线？ ---没改

其他都fix

感谢mod ^^/
YoshinoSakura
472 posts
Joined January 2011
YoshinoSakura
哟~~~~ 蹦！

[General]
bg作死系列
offset试试401

[Insane]
柑橘排版坠毁，和natsu有的一拼
00:02:415 (8) - 改成单点
00:03:082 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这个就不能弄得间距一样？
00:07:749 (3,1) - 隔得太近
00:13:082 (3) - ^
00:51:082 (1,2,3,4) - 这是啥，太违和了
00:52:415 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 简直乱
还需要好好加油一下

[Hard]
00:02:415 (5) - 和i一样改成单点
00:22:915 (4,5,6) - 重音在白线上，我局的白线起slider顺一些
00:33:082 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 个人感觉做anti jump更好
00:53:749 (5) - 改成单点
有进步

[Normal]
00:00:416 (1,2,3) - 低难度这种节奏滑调比较好，后同
00:05:749 (1,2) - 这么大都能包歪
00:07:082 (3) - 没有道理，这里没有3/2的音
00:15:082 (1) - ^
00:30:915 (3) - 不要折返然后再00:31:749 加note

还需要好好加油一下
如果你下定决心要撞死cryo的话我可以做个gd
GL
moonlightleaf
2,155 posts
Joined September 2011
Topic Starter
moonlightleaf
to 615915887

all fix

感谢mod ^^/
zorefire
429 posts
Joined October 2012
zorefire
M4M commence :D
P.S I do love the map How did you know I would like the map? : :o

[Normal]
Map is good no complaints but 1
01:19:067 - end it with just a circle
[Hard]
I dunno about this 00:11:734 (3,4,5,6) - its mostly used in Insane -> 00:12:067 (5,6,8,9) -
00:24:900 (2,3,4) - move in some
01:18:734 (4,1) - make it a slider from here 01:18:734 to 01:19:067
P.S - so terribly sorry for this small mod of mine ;w; map is very good
moonlightleaf
2,155 posts
Joined September 2011
Topic Starter
moonlightleaf
to zorefire:

i know you will love this song , because of the song is so cute~mostly be loved ;p

all fix~

but:

[Normal]

01:19:067 - end it with just a circle ---ok add , but i just think should add spinner as well for get more score~

thanks for modding ^^/
ZZHBOY
1,649 posts
Joined April 2012
ZZHBOY
做的挺不错
[General]
再补一个三星以下的难度啊
00:44:400 - 01:19:067 - KIAI推荐时间段
[Normal]
好像音效还有欠缺
00:08:067 (4) - 类似的可以考虑适当删减 空一空可以提高节奏感
00:29:734 (1,2) - 强迫症总感觉没blanket好 滑条头可以向内一些...
00:57:734 (2,3) - 好像有些overlap...可以稍微移开一点点.-.
[Hard]
00:48:067 (5) - 如果一定要这样弄的话建议滑条尾消音
00:54:234 (1,2) - 可以blanket
[Insane]
00:15:067 (1,2) - 建议ds保持1.3
00:43:317 (2) - 本来I里就很多连打了这里感觉又overmap所以考虑删 这里再连打总感觉不爽.-.
00:54:067 (2) - 没有特殊需求建议保持前后ds一致
01:12:567 (7) - 一下漏了两声vocal啊...
美丽
挺不错 射! :)
moonlightleaf
2,155 posts
Joined September 2011
Topic Starter
moonlightleaf
to ZZHBOY

all fix

感谢mod ^^/
Narcissu
1,744 posts
Joined August 2012
Narcissu
为什么你们都能把图做的这么欢快……我就弄的死气沉沉……

那个“耶”的变速滑条最好额外分配一个颜色比如粉色或者白色红色，其他的时候都跳过那个颜色，还有1.5的变速线用完最好用1.0的线换回去，因为对太鼓有影响【喂！
moonlightleaf
2,155 posts
Joined September 2011
Topic Starter
moonlightleaf
to Narcissu

变速滑条 我之前都换了不同颜色的 绿线方面追加惹

感谢mod ^^/

（这个应该不能给KD,

Edit: 好的我会那样弄了
Koiyuki
2,531 posts
Joined March 2013
Koiyuki
Title Change:
MERRY MERRY MERRY MENU・・・ね!
moonlightleaf
2,155 posts
Joined September 2011
Topic Starter
moonlightleaf
to Minakami Yuki

= =原来歌名都错了么
MutoMagic
28 posts
Joined September 2013
MutoMagic
[General]
感觉easy可以不需要了。
别的难度没看出来问题，打起来很流畅。

[615's Insane]
突然发现这个难度跳跃复读略大，感觉另一个insane打起来正好。
00:21:067 (3,4) - 这个地方感觉打出300比较费劲。
00:26:734 (5) - 这个5被滑条埋了，对于hd来说建议放出来。
01:16:400 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - seems not good,蓝色到红色跑起来感觉很别扭，而且之后一个平行的1-2和3-4，很有可能会断掉。（有可能是错觉吧，至少第一次没读出来，直接挂掉了。。。）
01:16:400 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) -

别的木有什么问题。总之感觉还不错。
这个必须射，祝rank
moonlightleaf
2,155 posts
Joined September 2011
Topic Starter
moonlightleaf
to MutoMagic

感谢mod ^^/

打包615 赶紧修
YoshinoSakura
472 posts
Joined January 2011
YoshinoSakura

MutoMagic wrote:

[General]
感觉easy可以不需要了。
别的难度没看出来问题，打起来很流畅。

[615's Insane]
突然发现这个难度跳跃复读略大，感觉另一个insane打起来正好。
00:21:067 (3,4) - 这个地方感觉打出300比较费劲。改了下
00:26:734 (5) - 这个5被滑条埋了，对于hd来说建议放出来。不要啦
01:16:400 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - seems not good,蓝色到红色跑起来感觉很别扭，而且之后一个平行的1-2和3-4，很有可能会断掉。（有可能是错觉吧，至少第一次没读出来，直接挂掉了。。。） 果然1/4circle jump又失败了么
01:16:400 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) -

别的木有什么问题。总之感觉还不错。
这个必须射，祝rank
谢mod

哟~~~~蹦！
osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: MARRY ME.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 43184
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
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LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 1.3
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.4

[Metadata]
Title:MERRY MERRY MERRY MENU... Ne!
TitleUnicode:MERRY MERRY MERRY MENU... Ne!
Artist:Tamura Yukari
ArtistUnicode:田村ゆかり
Creator:moonlightleaf
Version:615's Insane
Source:
Tags:
BeatmapID:395511
BeatmapSetID:161089

[Difficulty]
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OverallDifficulty:8
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364,336,20734,1,8,0:0:0:0:
332,352,21067,2,0,L|368:380,1,45
284,352,21234,2,0,L|248:324,1,45
168,296,21400,2,0,L|204:324,1,45
160,360,21567,2,0,L|124:332,1,45
72,348,21734,5,4,0:0:0:0:
124,212,21900,1,0,0:0:0:0:
212,348,22067,1,8,0:0:0:0:
240,160,22234,1,0,0:0:0:0:
41,176,22400,2,0,P|36:220|48:264,2,90,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,160,22900,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,320,23067,5,0,0:0:0:0:
452,304,23234,1,0,0:0:0:0:
508,160,23400,1,8,0:0:0:0:
396,28,23567,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,160,23734,2,0,P|228:208|232:256,2,90,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,216,24234,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,204,24400,6,0,P|136:244|132:296,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,116,24734,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,40,24900,2,0,P|276:40|224:48,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,168,25234,2,0,P|352:168|300:176,1,90,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,316,25567,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,316,25734,6,0,P|260:320|212:332,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,136,26067,2,0,P|317:172|351:207,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,232,26400,2,0,P|144:208|148:184,1,45,8|8,0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
152,116,26567,2,0,P|140:140|136:164,1,45,8|8,0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
148,192,26734,1,12,0:3:0:0:
176,216,26817,1,4,0:3:0:0:
212,232,26900,1,4,0:3:0:0:
248,232,26984,1,4,0:3:0:0:
280,223,27067,6,0,P|316:208|349:209,1,72,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,312,27400,1,8,0:0:0:0:
224,128,27567,2,0,P|290:101|361:100,1,144,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,312,28067,1,8,0:0:0:0:
92,264,28234,1,4,0:0:0:0:
92,264,28400,6,0,P|80:228|84:192,1,72,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,76,28734,2,0,P|172:112|168:148,1,72,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,300,29067,2,0,P|116:352|48:344,1,144,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,52,29734,6,0,P|388:88|408:184,1,144,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,124,30234,2,0,P|392:88|332:120,1,144,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,184,30734,1,8,0:0:0:0:
228,344,30900,6,0,P|208:296|192:196,1,144,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,124,31400,2,0,P|108:160|104:204,1,72,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,344,31734,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,184,31900,1,8,0:3:0:0:
116,124,32067,1,8,0:0:0:0:
444,60,32400,6,0,P|460:104|456:152,1,90,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,120,32900,1,0,0:0:0:0:
344,120,33067,2,0,L|344:212,1,90,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,188,33734,6,0,P|120:232|136:276,1,90,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,216,34234,1,0,0:0:0:0:
124,276,34400,2,0,P|108:233|112:189,1,90,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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364,156,35567,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,236,35734,2,0,P|306:280|306:325,1,90,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,192,36400,6,0,P|80:232|80:288,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,260,36734,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,160,36900,2,0,P|128:100|36:120,1,180,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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320,312,37900,1,0,1:0:0:0:
176,260,38234,5,0,1:0:0:0:
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412,152,38900,1,0,1:0:0:0:
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376,64,39400,1,0,1:0:0:0:
176,260,39734,6,0,L|176:312,1,45,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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180,160,41400,1,8,0:0:0:0:
292,196,41567,6,0,P|300:252|304:352,1,144,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,148,42067,1,8,0:0:0:0:
292,196,42234,1,8,0:0:0:0:
292,196,42317,1,8,0:0:0:0:
292,196,42400,1,8,0:0:0:0:
336,32,42567,1,0,0:0:0:0:
460,256,42734,1,8,0:0:0:0:
160,268,42900,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,268,43234,6,0,P|156:316|176:364,1,90,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,96,43734,1,0,0:0:0:0:
212,152,43900,1,0,0:0:0:0:
388,232,44067,1,8,0:0:0:0:
240,80,44234,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,308,44400,6,0,B|304:364|336:300|336:300|396:336|452:288,1,215.999993408203,4|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,196,45067,1,0,0:0:0:0:
32,328,45234,1,0,0:0:0:0:
152,184,45400,1,8,0:0:0:0:
152,348,45567,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,108,45734,6,0,B|256:152|236:208|236:208|244:224|244:224|292:200|332:228,1,215.999993408203,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
329,226,46400,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,308,46567,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,128,46734,1,8,0:0:0:0:
444,260,46900,1,0,0:0:0:0:
212,364,47067,6,0,B|184:320|204:264|204:264|152:232|96:268,1,215.999993408203,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,356,47567,1,0,0:0:0:0:
72,72,47734,2,0,P|88:120|88:180,1,107.999996704102,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,40,48067,1,8,0:0:0:0:
336,64,48234,6,0,P|392:76|376:124,1,107.999996704102,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,264,48567,2,0,P|230:261|229:212,1,107.999996704102,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,176,48900,2,0,P|120:240|216:364,1,215.999993408203,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,360,49400,1,8,0:0:0:0:
416,320,49567,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,320,49650,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,320,49734,6,0,P|404:268|404:212,1,107.999996704102,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,92,50067,1,8,0:0:0:0:
292,40,50234,2,0,B|240:64|265:103|265:103|297:147|223:181|288:228,1,215.999993408203,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,225,50734,1,8,0:0:0:0:
52,248,51067,6,0,B|56:280|56:280|88:304|84:352,1,107.999996704102,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,348,51400,1,8,0:0:0:0:
288,288,51567,2,0,B|232:224|160:244|160:244|144:224|144:224|136:176,1,215.999993408203,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,348,52067,1,8,0:0:0:0:
428,72,52400,5,0,0:0:0:0:
456,244,52567,1,0,0:0:0:0:
392,80,52734,1,8,0:0:0:0:
356,296,52900,1,0,0:0:0:0:
356,80,53067,1,0,0:0:0:0:
236,304,53234,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,72,53400,1,8,0:0:0:0:
112,260,53567,1,0,0:0:0:0:
284,48,53734,6,0,P|236:36|184:60,2,107.999996704102,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,148,54234,2,0,B|216:208|260:248|260:248|304:296|272:356,1,215.999993408203,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,316,54734,1,8,0:0:0:0:
328,184,54900,1,0,0:0:0:0:
84,160,55067,6,0,B|64:116|100:76|100:76|168:128|164:28|248:96,1,215.999993408203,4|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,324,55734,1,0,0:0:0:0:
424,168,55900,1,0,0:0:0:0:
336,336,56067,1,8,0:0:0:0:
504,248,56234,1,0,0:0:0:0:
292,256,56400,6,0,B|248:284|244:336|244:336|216:352|184:332|184:332|152:312|124:328,1,215.999993408203,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
131,324,57067,1,0,0:0:0:0:
188,108,57234,1,0,0:0:0:0:
20,280,57400,1,8,0:0:0:0:
288,148,57567,1,0,0:0:0:0:
24,172,57734,6,0,B|28:120|104:116|104:116|104:52|168:24,1,215.999993408203,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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260,268,58400,1,0,0:0:0:0:
420,108,58567,1,0,0:0:0:0:
188,48,58734,1,8,0:0:0:0:
100,296,58900,6,0,B|112:348|112:348|176:368,1,107.999996704102,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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320,308,60150,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,292,60234,1,0,0:0:0:0:
252,268,60317,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,240,60400,6,0,P|200:200|184:136,1,107.999996704102,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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412,44,61234,2,0,P|424:92|428:156,2,107.999996704102,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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104,320,62400,2,0,P|96:352|96:380,3,53.9999983520508,0|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
56,176,62734,2,0,P|24:192|0:212,3,53.9999983520508,8|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,60,63067,6,0,P|204:56|276:72,1,107.999996704102,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,328,63400,2,0,P|340:332|268:316,1,107.999996704102,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,204,63734,1,0,0:0:0:0:
448,204,63900,2,0,P|395:193|341:197,2,107.999996704102,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,328,64400,6,0,B|344:344|312:312|312:312|280:320|280:320|248:256|188:304,1,215.999993408203,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,372,64900,1,0,0:0:0:0:
100,220,65067,1,0,0:0:0:0:
116,64,65234,1,0,0:0:0:0:
196,204,65400,1,8,0:0:0:0:
272,40,65567,1,0,0:0:0:0:
360,212,65734,6,0,P|384:262|376:328,1,107.999996704102,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,288,66067,1,2,0:0:0:0:
468,236,66234,1,0,1:0:0:0:
240,288,66567,5,2,0:0:0:0:
468,236,66734,1,2,0:0:0:0:
324,24,66900,2,0,B|256:32|232:92|232:92|180:72|140:116,1,215.999993408203,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
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116,324,68067,1,2,0:0:0:0:
116,324,68234,1,2,0:0:0:0:
116,324,68400,6,0,P|116:280|128:228,1,90,4|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
176,124,68734,1,10,0:0:0:0:
128,328,68900,6,0,P|128:284|140:232,1,90,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
188,128,69234,1,2,0:0:0:0:
140,332,69400,6,0,P|140:288|152:236,1,90,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
204,132,69734,1,2,0:0:0:0:
156,336,69900,6,0,P|156:292|168:240,1,90,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
220,136,70234,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,296,70400,1,0,0:0:0:0:
104,168,70567,1,8,0:0:0:0:
104,168,70650,1,8,0:0:0:0:
104,168,70734,1,8,0:0:0:0:
360,68,70900,1,0,0:0:0:0:
156,336,71067,6,0,B|200:336|200:336|248:356,1,90,4|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
176,240,71567,2,0,B|220:240|220:240|268:260,1,90,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
196,144,72067,2,0,B|240:144|240:144|288:164,1,90,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
220,48,72567,2,0,B|264:48|264:48|312:68,1,90,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
156,336,73067,1,0,1:0:0:0:
68,40,73400,1,4,0:0:0:0:
344,296,73734,5,4,0:0:0:0:
328,132,73900,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,292,74067,1,8,0:0:0:0:
412,192,74234,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,136,74400,1,0,0:0:0:0:
292,380,74567,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,92,74734,1,8,0:0:0:0:
108,100,74900,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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412,192,75234,1,0,0:0:0:0:
412,192,75317,1,0,0:0:0:0:
412,192,75400,1,8,0:0:0:0:
224,256,75567,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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72,228,76484,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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384,300,77150,1,0,0:0:0:0:
340,300,77233,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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357,99,78067,1,8,0:0:0:0:
199,251,78234,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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Yumeno Himiko
Elite Storyboarder
1,168 posts
Joined August 2012
Yumeno Himiko
其实我是来要一个M4M的

[General]
hhh uccu
SPOILER
kiai 统一一下
前奏时间太短

[Normal]
00:00:401 (1,2) - 造一个完美的弧形吧
SPOILER
00:48:734 (4) - 拉到2拍听起来比较顺
00:57:734 (2,3) - 歪了;w;
01:11:067 (1,2) - 这两个可以弄下对称

[Hard]
00:05:734 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这个五角星是要逼死强迫症吗(╯°口°)╯(┴—┴
00:06:400 (5,6) - 对称啦 对称
00:11:734 (3,4,5,6) - 也是对称 这样放;w;
SPOILER
00:12:400 (7,8,9) - 间距感觉偏大
00:36:067 - 少了个note吧0.0
00:49:734 (1,2,3) - 一条直线上比较好？
00:52:400 (1,2,3,4) - 中心对称（严肃）
00:59:567 (5) - 其实换成circle感觉更好

阿拉 我不看I的图哟 因为我根本打不动;w;

好听的歌~
Good luck~
moonlightleaf
2,155 posts
Joined September 2011
Topic Starter
moonlightleaf
to examination

all fix

感谢mod ^^/
OblivioN
OblivioN
[Normal]
00:07:067 (3) - 转个方向看着要舒服点【哪里来的强迫症;w;】看起来像这样
SPOILER
00:15:067 (1) - x:320 Y:320
00:20:400 (3,4,5) - 觉得排成三角形可爱一些【咦？会吗？
00:31:734 (4) - 音效用finish吧
00:36:900 (2) - 包好 2的尾巴是x:232 y:128

[Hard]
觉得cs可以大一号……

[Insane]
00:02:400 (8) - 音效用finish
00:05:734 (2) - NC一下吧
00:28:900 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - 以player的视角来说这里没必要stream啊……;w;这样就好了：
00:30:234 & 00:30:567 & 00:30:900 可配合clap
00:58:900 (1,2,3) - ^
01:19:067 finish

[615'sinsane]
00:21:067 (3,4,5,6) - 凶残…………排列顺一点吧……这么治愈的歌
00:26:400 (3,4) - ………………为何这么难orz【无视我
00:31:900 (4) - 这个音效可以去掉……
00:42:900 (8) - finish
01:00:067 (4) - NC吧……

[Other]
田村 很可爱的歌，祝rank .w.
moonlightleaf
2,155 posts
Joined September 2011
Topic Starter
moonlightleaf
to OblivioN

[Insane]

00:28:900 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - 以player的视角来说这里没必要stream啊……;w;这样就好了 ---没改和后面是一样的 跟嘀嘀嘀嘀嘀嘀

其他都 fix

感谢mod ^^/
Ozato Fumika
Beatmap Nominator
3,379 posts
Joined July 2013
Ozato Fumika
Do you need an Easy diff? if so may I try GD?
moonlightleaf
2,155 posts
Joined September 2011
Topic Starter
moonlightleaf

No Dap wrote:

Do you need an Easy diff? if so may I try GD?
oh,,,i am sorry to say Easy GD will be maped by my friend before you post ~

anyway , thanks for your GD request
Koiyuki
2,531 posts
Joined March 2013
Koiyuki
Easy Finished: http://puu.sh/7Ucur.osu

音效从normal复制的，应该没问题
别忘了把我和615的id加到tag里面去
Wafu
1,703 posts
Joined June 2011
Wafu
Red - Unrankable
Blue - Highly recommended
Black - Suggestion

[General]

Main thing I want to recommend here is to make the same kiai as it is in 615's Insane. He had quite good idea about it, he just used kiai only for parts where were all the instruments and removed kiai from part where were only drums and vocal. I think you should inspirate by this.
Use custom combo colors. Currently it uses default ones, meaning it depends on the skin you are using and unfortunatelly some skins might conflict with the background. I still know there is Dim function, but there are still players who prefer to use background on.
Some hitsounds are barely audiable, meaning it is near to be unrankable. Please increase volume of all green lines and take any program which can edit .wav files (for example Audacity) and use amplitude for the hitsound files.

[Insane]

00:41:067 (7) - It is just a detail but you should remake this slider to slider similar to 00:40:734 (6) with another rotation. Reason is that currently it looks quite unpolished and random, when this slider is curved a lot while the previous one is almost flat, additionally the flow was really unnatural. I suggest you to change it like this, but it's all just a detail suggestion.
SPOILER
00:43:484 (2,3,4) - This part is overly overmapped to be honest. There's no sound on 00:43:650, 00:43:984, 00:43:484, what is a lot. You added 3 non-existing notes on just one second. I think this is a lot more sensible.
SPOILER

00:44:400 (4) - I think NC on these notes is more viable than on 00:44:734 (1), mainly because there starts the kiai. Anyway your comboing here is quite weird, I'd suggest you to make it more sensible, sometimes you place NC on downbeat so it follows music, but then you change it so it follows vocal. Either make NCs related to music or related to voice, not both.

[Hard]

Well... first think that bothers me a lot... settings. CS+1, please. Currently it makes the spread just insensible, considering you've got this CS in normal and easy. However other difficulty settings are making very big gap between normal diff. Put -1 on all other settings so it makes the gap a bit lower and there is not so big difference between diffs.
00:43:567 (2,3,4,5,6) - Just a little suggestion here. Consider CTRL+G on 00:43:734 (3,5). It makes the jump progressive and you won't start with a jump so suddenly, because of pregressivity, player will detect better that there's a jump near, like this it is just sudden and he needs to know music or follow the approach circle properly. But that's not much issue.
00:48:067 (5,6) - The same issue as insane had, overmapped for no reason. Just decrease each of these two sliders by 1/4 so there will be 2 1/2 sliders to fit music well. Remember that this is not fantasy, but rhythm game.
00:54:067 - Add a circle. When playing I just feel there's something missing. Considering it is kiai, in my opinion, you shouldn't remove notes on 1/1 tick, when they are in music.
00:59:900 - Similar issue as ^
01:00:234 - Similar issue as ^, but if you put the circle on ^, this doesn't feel much needed.
01:15:900 - ^

[615's Insane]

00:30:234 (2,3) - Consider this pattern, because current flow was not correct and additionally the overlap was just like blah to be honest. Also makes a jump that imo fits more to your style.
SPOILER

00:33:734 (1) - CTRL+G makes a better flow, anyway just a little detail and not important suggestion.
00:50:234 (3) - Make more neat slider like your other sliders are. This is really different from others. They were sensible, but this seems like random shape that reminds me 2007 maps, but might be just presonal feeling.
01:00:067 (4,5,6,7,1) - Flowbreak in kiai is really aggressive thing. I really highly recommend to use regular spacing instead of stacking it. I hope you understand that it is really wrong when you play kiai, and you just see jump, jump, jump, jump, jump, now you have stop moving your mouse so you loose that feel of flow, and again jump, jump jump... Kiai should be lively all the time to make player enjoy that map.

[Normal]

00:03:067 (4) - New combo. There's bigger gap between NC than on Insane, so this should be definitely fixed.
00:15:067 (1) - Remove NC for consistency with other NCs. You always put NC after every 2/1 tick, but now you put it after 1/1 tick.
00:24:400 (4) - NC for consistency. It doesn't matter that it will be just one slider in this. Consistency of hitsounds is really important on easier diffs, because it gives you HP frequently, not randomly, so players are not required to play all parts pretty well, but it is enough to play just same all the time so he won't fail. All I want to say is that newbies might be stressed or confused of variable benefit of HP. Obviously swap NCs on 00:26:734 (1,2) for pretty same reason.
00:35:067 (5,1) - Swap the NCs, still same reason.
00:40:734 (4) - There also should be NC for consistency, especially when there is spinner after it, which doesn't give you HP instantly.
00:46:734 (1,2) - Also should be swapped NCs.
00:52:400 (3) - There should be NC and 00:54:234 (1,2) - Should be swapped.

[Yuki's Easy]

00:21:734 (1) - Just a little issue about symmetry. Attempt to fix the shape like this.
SPOILER
00:23:067 (2) - ^
00:24:400 (1) - Just fix that ugly overlap
00:38:734 (2) - CTRL+G and fix distance snap makes the flow much better, what is especially important on easier diffs.
00:47:067 (1,2) - This is easy diff, right? Try to follow music more than vocals, because the music is more consistent, so it is easier for players. Currently he has to finish the slider on red tick and start next slider on another red tick. This is nightmare for a lot of newbies, so please, increase end of 00:47:067 (1) to 00:48:067 and move 00:48:234 (2) on 00:48:400.
00:57:734 (1,2) - ^
01:11:067 (1) - Use just one point. The shape will be sure symmetric, what means much better than current one, but it's not gameplay issue anyway.

Just a short mod because map is quite good and sure ready for ranking, however I pointed out even some important stuff (NCs, flow, spread), but evne some details. If you need any help with a map or you just don't understand something I said in a mod, feel free to contact me on PM or ingame if I'm online.

Good luck!
Sakaue Nachi
558 posts
Joined September 2012
Sakaue Nachi
好像是M4M_(:з」∠)_
[Yuki's easy]
00:05:734 (1) - 滑条尾whistle
00:07:067 (2) - ^
00:11:067 (1,2) - ^
00:08:400 (1) - 这个头也换成finish怎样，可以这个声音小点，然后2大点有个递进
00:13:734 (1) - ^
00:16:400 (1) - 尾whistle
00:16:400 (1) - 可以微调下包的好点
00:21:734 (1) - 换成finish好点？
00:24:400 (1) - 这样会不会好看点？http://puu.sh/7UrnV.jpg
00:44:400 (1) - 头finish
00:48:234 (2) - 中间whistle
00:58:900 (2) - ^
[normal]
00:12:400 (3) - 这里不知这样如何http://puu.sh/7Us0c.jpg
00:16:400 (1) - （444.180）
00:16:734 (2) - （468,104）
00:23:067 (2) - 这个是不是往下弯好点
00:36:900 (2) - 这样好看点http://puu.sh/7Usvq.jpg
00:41:484 (1) - 00:42:900 在这里结束
00:47:400 (3) - 感觉这个节奏好点http://puu.sh/7UsUP.jpg
[hard]
00:01:900 (4) - 也保持1.36x的间距好点？
00:03:234 (2) - 放在（1）右边大概（245,274）怎样？
00:11:734 (3,4,5,6) - 在hard是不是跳了点，缩小为大概0.85倍差不多感觉
00:13:734 (1,3) - 这两个平行一下
00:16:400 (1) - 这个重叠打起来不太好，建议和下一part00:17:734 (1,2,3,4) - 的排列差不多，然后旋转个角度
00:27:067 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 摆成这样打起来更好读和顺手http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1479926
00:36:234 (2) - 和这个叠00:36:400 (1) -
00:37:734 (1,2) - 和前面两个拉开点距离
00:45:734 (4) - ctrl+g
00:49:400 加个note
00:53:734 (5) - 换成一个折返slider感觉不错，然后把6删掉
01:05:234 (4,5,6,1,2) - 这里略坑，可以删掉这个01:05:567 (6) -
01:08:900 (2) - 弄成和1对称吧
[Insane]
00:10:067 (3,4,5) - 这里建议改下，我打了3次都miss了（4）感觉这样好多了 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1479952
00:07:734 (1) - 这个减速太多打起来有点怪
00:16:734 (3,4) - ctrl+g 好多了
00:24:067 (9) - 换成slider会不会好点
00:36:900 (3) - ctrl+g
00:39:400 (2) - 这个移去下一个有点不顺，这样？http://puu.sh/7VkeH.jpg 或者你想想别的吧
00:49:234 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - 这里我柑橘三连+2单点好点
01:00:400 (1) - 换滑条
01:10:484 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - 这个连打感觉换别的更好，感觉可以这样http://puu.sh/7VkMN.jpg

GL~这是我的图http://osu.ppy.sh/s/141354
Last edited by Sakaue Nachi , edited 2 times in total.
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
4,298 posts
Joined July 2011
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
615's Insane卡在3.49星了, 建议再加几个大跳这样就可以到达3.50星, 升级为X级
moonlightleaf
2,155 posts
Joined September 2011
Topic Starter
moonlightleaf
to Wafu

all fix

to Sakaue Nachi

[normal]

00:12:400 (3) - 这里不知这样如何http://puu.sh/7Us0c.jpg ---没改

其他fix

thanks for modding ^^/
YoshinoSakura
472 posts
Joined January 2011
YoshinoSakura

OblivioN wrote:

[615'sinsane]
00:21:067 (3,4,5,6) - 凶残…………排列顺一点吧……这么治愈的歌 原来的太难了才改成这样的
00:26:400 (3,4) - ………………为何这么难orz【无视我 其实不难
00:31:900 (4) - 这个音效可以去掉…… 鼓点
00:42:900 (8) - finish 猴
01:00:067 (4) - NC吧……柑橘没必要

Wafu wrote:

[615's Insane]

00:30:234 (2,3) - Consider this pattern, because current flow was not correct and additionally the overlap was just like blah to be honest. Also makes a jump that imo fits more to your style. fixed
collapsed text

00:33:734 (1) - CTRL+G makes a better flow, anyway just a little detail and not important suggestion. ctrlg the next slider
00:50:234 (3) - Make more neat slider like your other sliders are. This is really different from others. They were sensible, but this seems like random shape that reminds me 2007 maps, but might be just presonal feeling. I think it seems good in a happy song
01:00:067 (4,5,6,7,1) - Flowbreak in kiai is really aggressive thing. I really highly recommend to use regular spacing instead of stacking it. I hope you understand that it is really wrong when you play kiai, and you just see jump, jump, jump, jump, jump, now you have stop moving your mouse so you loose that feel of flow, and again jump, jump jump... Kiai should be lively all the time to make player enjoy that map.actually i can't understand,but will fix it

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

615's Insane卡在3.49星了, 建议再加几个大跳这样就可以到达3.50星, 升级为X级
本来是3.5啊但是有modder闲难我就降回去惹
thx for your mod

马勒马勒马挖嘞
osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: MARRY ME.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 43184
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 1.3
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.4

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Title:MERRY MERRY MERRY MENU... Ne!
TitleUnicode:MERRY MERRY MERRY MENU...ね!
Artist:Tamura Yukari
ArtistUnicode:田村ゆかり
Creator:moonlightleaf
Version:615's Insane
Source:
Tags:[Minakami Yuki] 615915887
BeatmapID:395511
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[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:8
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448,204,63900,2,0,P|395:193|341:197,2,107.999996704102,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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100,220,65067,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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204,132,69734,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,79067,12,0,81734,0:0:0:0:
Rizia
3,114 posts
Joined January 2012
Rizia
[Insane]
00:13:734 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - 突然就變大了 讓人有點不習慣
00:20:734 - 試試 http://puu.sh/7UvrZ.jpg
00:22:484 (6) - 試試移到00:22:650 -
00:23:817 (7) - ^一樣做法
00:36:734 (2,3) - http://puu.sh/7UvBM.jpg
00:51:400 (3) - x252 y156
00:51:567 (4) - x120 y172
00:54:734 (4,5,6) - 換成5連
00:59:900 - add note
00:51:567 (4) - 這樣NC http://puu.sh/7UvMA.jpg
01:03:984 (7) - 刪掉
01:08:400 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - 有幾個相同的節奏能用這NC梗, 自己參詳
01:10:484 (1) - remove nc
01:18:400 (5) - whistle
01:18:900 - ^

[615]
01:02:400 (3,4) - 換成3連slider http://puu.sh/7Uwd9.jpg
01:16:400 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - 我不會跟你說我恨這個 建議改改 改成00:13:734 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 一樣也好

[Hard]
00:11:734 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - http://puu.sh/7UwlW.jpg 有看不懂的話找我
00:35:734 (1) - 第三錨點 x144 y176
00:38:734 (5,6,7,8) - 可以考慮跟00:37:734 (1,2,3,4) - 對稱
00:44:400 (7,1,1) - http://puu.sh/7UwxE.jpg
00:48:567 - 這vol. 5%有點怪
- TiRaFiouS -
128 posts
Joined November 2012
- TiRaFiouS -
[General]
我愛飛球((喂
又是1kds....

[NM]
像EZ...
00:03:067 (1,2) - 抱歉...強迫症00:00:401 (1,2) -不和這個一樣接受不了_(:3JL)_
00:24:400 (1) - 縮短到00:25:400 - 加circle在00:25:567 - (NM這像EZ...)
00:32:400 (1,2,3,4) -ds 要一樣
00:27:067 (1,2) - (2)取代(1)然後,00:27:900 - 加circle
00:29:734 (1,2,3) - ^
00:36:567 - 加circle
00:40:734 (1) - 縮短到紅線,00:40:734 (1) - 加circle(原本的感覺不對)
00:47:734 (3) - 延長到00:48:734 - 結束(完全不對喔...)
00:54:234 (2) - del reveres,00:54:734 - 滑條結束位+00:55:067 - 加circle
00:58:400 (3) - end at 00:59:400 - add circle
01:11:067 (1,2) - 球繼承傳統((X ---->01:11:067 (1,2) -

[615 baka]
臥感覺太跳?((撒...我就是說說=3=還可以
感覺flow不太好?
感覺不太好

00:10:900 (4) - del
00:12:067 (4) - x:112 y:200
00:13:734 (1,2,3) -美麗的路程曲折!

00:21:067 (3,4,5,6,1) - 太密了而且好難按
00:23:067 (1,2,3,4,5) - 這5角形滑條折點放中間(4)和(5)間距不一樣故意的?
00:26:400 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - 太密,(5)根本看不見2個短滑條又不是早消失能而看的見加上連打順著去停在(3)尾就像停了一樣,你讓我吐糟什麼((我在說什麼
00:28:234 (5) - 移到00:21:567 (6) - , 00:28:400 (1,2) - 移到本來(5)的位置
00:29:067 (4) - Ctrl G
00:39:734 (1) - x:152 y:176
00:40:067 (2) - x:88 y:344
00:43:234 (1,2,3,4,5,1) -美麗好麼hhh
00:46:400 (2) - 不在三角形中間...
00:47:734 (3) - Ctrl G? 都好像flow不好?
00:48:900 (3) - 滑條折點不在中間+不在(2)的正後方....
00:59:567 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - 同樣,滑條(不正常地)擋住連打難讀圖,還有(4)好奇怪...
01:02:400 (3,4) - 各縮小一個返回
01:08:067 (5,6,1) -啦啦啦啦
01:13:734 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 這音樂給我的感覺是越縮越小诶
01:19:067 (1) - end at 01:21:067 -

[HD]
00:00:401 (1,2) - 不是對著的
00:01:900 (4) - 還是順著比較好
00:48:067 (5) - 感覺漏音
00:48:567 (6,7) - (7)取代(6)
00:51:067 (1,2,3) - 跟著前面比較好00:49:734 (1,2,3) -
01:07:234 (6) - NC
01:09:900 (4) - 還是順著比較好

ds像ins 但似乎只是難一點的NM.....((我感覺

[ins]
00:07:734 (5) - 0.5x把畢竟是長音
00:11:067 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - 這是在旋轉?中間沒轉啊!?
00:33:067 (3) - 彎點QAQ
00:37:650 (6) - del
00:37:734 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - 你那個略醜....
00:42:067 (4) - 在三角形中間比較好
00:44:734 (1) - 00:46:067 (1) - 00:55:400 (1) - 00:56:734 (1) - 在變速滑條要凸顯那個"ye"音我認為最好在變速滑條前加個滑條

感覺所又能變難的位置都被來回滑條取代喔.....
感覺你叫我試那張好一點
節奏感覺沒問題,就是簡單了點

就醬

don't forget my kds!~
moonlightleaf
2,155 posts
Joined September 2011
Topic Starter
moonlightleaf
to Kawaiwkyik

[Insane]

00:22:484 (6) - 試試移到00:22:650 - 之前就是这么放的 扔给几个人play 发现那边有几率掉 于是改掉的, fix
00:23:817 (7) - ^一樣做法

其他fix

to Piyoko_9796

[insane]

00:11:067 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - 這是在旋轉?中間沒轉啊!? ---没改额

其他fix

感谢mod ^^/
moonlightleaf
2,155 posts
Joined September 2011
Topic Starter
moonlightleaf

Sakaue Nachi wrote:

好像是M4M_(:з」∠)_
[Yuki's easy]
00:05:734 (1) - 滑条尾whistle
00:07:067 (2) - ^
00:11:067 (1,2) - ^
00:08:400 (1) - 这个头也换成finish怎样，可以这个声音小点，然后2大点有个递进
00:13:734 (1) - ^
00:16:400 (1) - 尾whistle
00:16:400 (1) - 可以微调下包的好点
00:21:734 (1) - 换成finish好点？
00:24:400 (1) - 这样会不会好看点？http://puu.sh/7UrnV.jpg
00:44:400 (1) - 头finish
00:48:234 (2) - 中间whistle
00:58:900 (2) - ^

to Minakami Yuki

[hard]

00:11:734 (3,4,5,6) - 在hard是不是跳了点，缩小为大概0.85倍差不多感觉 ---没改

GL~这是我的图http://osu.ppy.sh/s/141354 --等我闲下来就摸
感谢补充H和I的摸~
Koiyuki
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Joined March 2013
Koiyuki
http://puu.sh/7Vsar.osu
Thanks for modding. Sry no time to reply.
moonlightleaf
2,155 posts
Joined September 2011
Topic Starter
moonlightleaf
to yuki

下次贴代码到这里吧 puush的有乱码诶 arist 什么的不识别 我每次还要改一下

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