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Deep Spirit - No Cover Song (Manox Club Mix)

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Topic Starter
Andrea
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on martedì 24 novembre 2009 at 01:05:19

Artist: Deep Spirit
Title: No Cover Song (Manox Club Mix)
BPM: 143
Filesize: 6049kb
Play Time: 02:12
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (2,59 stars, 78 notes)
  2. Hard (4,79 stars, 538 notes)
  3. Insane (4,98 stars, 675 notes)
  4. Jak64's Taiko (4,61 stars, 280 notes)
  5. Normal (4,24 stars, 118 notes)
Download: Deep Spirit - No Cover Song (Manox Club Mix)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Finally all difficulties are ready to go! ^^

-Added Taiko Difficulty By Jak64.
Diasios
oh god i love the song, and i love the difficulties too *w*

starred
Topic Starter
Andrea
Thanks :D
H1ko
Starrrrr <3
fuffolo
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xGuido92
Well done :)
TecnoBoy_old
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lthefuryl
starred ;)
Jak64
Star.

+Taiko diff <3
EEeee
kk, let's get some modding done on this map shall we

Easy
pretty much perfect

Normal
hmm, well pretty much okay

Hard
02:07:82 (1) - remove new combo
02:09:29 (7) - probably new combo
03:55:23 (1) - remove new combo

Insane
01:11:60 (5) - New combo
01:30:90 (6) - ^
02:07:82 (1) - remove new combo
02:21:87 (3) - kk, not so sure about this, but add new combo?
02:48:30 (4) - ^
04:42:21 (1) - wow, remove new combo here, and add new combo to next note, next note needs it rather than this one, due to crazy kind of jump :/
jericho2442
[Easy]
02:01:53 (2,3) - the spacing between these notes is a lil tricky for new ppl because its a change within the same combo, i think spacing this better would be good
02:07:82 (1) - this would look better lined up with the start of the slider

[Normal]

01:30:90 (5) - i think this suit more as a new combo then take the new combo off 01:32:58 (1) -
01:45:17 (3,4,1) - i think the volume on these are a lil too low

[Hard]
02:26:07 (9) - new combo would be nice here
02:59:32 (7,1) - all the rest of the parts with this pattern dont new combo here so its wierd how this one does
04:35:92 (2) - its nazi >_> but this really could do with lining up with 1

[Insane]
<333333 this map :D

all id say is go through and check your combo's and make sure then line up
i saw a few what didnt and might look better fixed,
too petty to post up them though for a epic song like this :P

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epic song, epic map, just greatness, star
Topic Starter
Andrea
Thanks EEeee, jericho2442. Updated!
Lokamp
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Armin
Scusa se non l'ho vista, sono stato occupatissimo.
La mappa ha 6 difficoltà e se hai letto il topic della mia coda, le mappe con più di 4 difficoltà sono vietate.

Comunque D:

[Easy]

Overall: Usi il 0,6x Distance Snap qui? Non ti sembra un pò troppo poco? D:

01:09:720 Rifai alla perfezione questo slider, come nella figura http://up.ppy.sh/files/screenshot009-18.jpg (usando tre waypoints è più facile e più simmetrico, con quattro waypoints è più difficle ottenere la simmetria)
01:20:418 Finish alla fine
01:22:306 Finish alla fine
01:23:355 Finish
Usa i finish in modo da esaltare il ritmo della canzone, come ad esempio:
01:24:194 (1,2,3,4,5) Finish, nei primi due solo il finish all'inizio dello slider.
01:27:550 Stranissimo slider, ed è anche bruttino. Forse volevi fare uno slider a forma di S, prova guardando qui:
http://up.ppy.sh/files/screenshot011-18.jpg
01:30:906 Fallo dritto, in linea con la griglia
01:40:555 Meglio se fai una riflessione in orizzonale dello slider

[Normal]

01:09:720 Whistle all'inizio, rimuovi il whistle alla fine ( per seguire il ritmo degli hitsounds come qui 01:16:433)
01:18:740 Whistle
01:27:550 Fai uno slider più simmetrico.
01:45:170 Implilalo perfettamente con la fine dello slider precedente

[Jak64's Taiko]
Uhh il taiko D:

01:27:946 Whistle

[Hard]

01:09:720 whistel anche all'inizio; rimuovilo alla fine se non ti sembra idoneo (come qui 03:37:391)
01:27:550 Slider bruttissimo, correggilo D:
01:51:043 Come sopra, rifallo evitando i waypoints nel mezzo (sì, si notano)
02:00:273 Seguendo il ritmo (1 clap sul tick bianco e sul prossimo no) dovresti metere il clap anche alla fine dello slider
03:47:670 Muovi il secondo waypoint due quadrettini sopra

[Insane]

01:09:720 Come nella [Hard]
01:19:160 Nuova combo
01:20:418 Rimuovi la combo
01:21:257 Nuova combo
01:27:550 Rifai lo slider correggendo la simmetria
01:46:009 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) Disponili in modo migliore, come una S ruotata, ad esempio
01:47:792 Spacing errato
02:00:273 Clap anche alla fine
02:07:404 Clap
02:33:834 (3,4,5) Fai una linea diritta, così è molto brutto D:
04:36:974 Spacing errato, se lo posizioni li significa che il beat (4) l'ha posizionato qui: 04:36:764 (perchè i primi tre li hai posizionati sui tick bianchi, poi questo rosso sulla stessa posizione dei bianchi anche se si trovano prima di quelli dei rossi D:)
04:40:960 (8-19) Mi spieghi cos'è o_o riaggiusta gli ultimi hitcircles facendogli seguire il verso dei primi

Alcune cose possono essere sbagliate, ma prendi le mie segnalazioni solo come impressioni.
Stella D:
Topic Starter
Andrea
Thanks Armin, Lokamp, some things fixed.
Card N'FoRcE
- Easy:
  • .Errors/Mistakes:
    01:52:30 (3) - 1/4 più lungo
- Normal:
  • .Opinions:
    Troppo difficile come Normal
- Hard:
  • .Opinions:
    Bene ^^
- Insane:
  • .Opinions:
    OMGWTF weird spacing o.o
    04:42:42 (1) - di tutti gli spacing strani, questo è l'unico che davvero mi ha disorientato. Forse per le nuove combo, boh...
    .Suggestions:
    01:19:16 (9) - new combo?
Io avrei sfruttato il custom hitsound molto diversamente, ma cmq è una faccenda di gusti ^^
Bella mappa, Star'd
Topic Starter
Andrea
Fixed thanks ^^
Derekku
[General]
<3 this song
*[Taiko] is fine~

[Easy]
01:44:33 (1) - Could possibly end earlier so the next note is easier to hit, but it doesn't matter that much :S
Otherwise fine~

[Normal]
Fine :)

[Hard]
Fine :P

[Insane]
02:09:29 (5,6,7,8) - This is really hard to read. I had no ****ing idea what it was when it popped up @_@
Other than that, very nice :D
Topic Starter
Andrea

Derekku Chan wrote:

[General]
<3 this song
*[Taiko] is fine~

[Easy]
01:44:33 (1) - Could possibly end earlier so the next note is easier to hit, but it doesn't matter that much :S
Otherwise fine~

[Normal]
Fine :)

[Hard]
Fine :P

[Insane]
02:09:29 (5,6,7,8) - This is really hard to read. I had no ****ing idea what it was when it popped up @_@
Other than that, very nice :D
Thanks for modding, fixed insane suggestion!
DJPop
- I recommend to use a picture of singer or idol as a BG.
- Claps on ticks are sometimes louder than the general.

~Easy~
01:30:90 (1) - not align

~Normal~
Fine.

~Hard~
Fine.

~Insane~
Fine.


+Star
kino77
Fabulous~
[Easy]
01:52:30(3)-Id like it to be a reverse slider~

[Normal]
Fine~

[Hard]
Fine~

[Insane]
Fine~

Star~star~
Topic Starter
Andrea
Thanks guys :3
Hanyuu
almost 5 minutes song. i think it is too long
Topic Starter
Andrea
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Diasios
Mod Info's:

Green: Suggestions.
Orange: I think you should fix this.
Red: You must fix this.

Starts Suggestions:

All seems ok.

[Easy]

It's ok

[Normal]

It's ok

[Jak64 taiko]

02:28:078 (6) - finish
02:29:062 (1) - finish + clap
02:30:045 (5) - ^
02:31:029 (1) - finish
02:32:013 (1) - finish + clap
02:32:097 (1) - finish
02:33:039 (3) - ^
02:33:081 (1) - finish + clap
02:34:023 (3) - ^
02:35:049 (1,2,3,4) - ^
02:36:054 (2) - ^
02:36:096 (4) - ^
02:37:038 (6) - ^


[Hard]

It's ok

[insane]

it's ok
Topic Starter
Andrea
Thanks ;)
Mafiamaster
All difficulties~
Change BPM to 143.00 and remove 10ms to the offset. (280) Resnap all notes just in case. You probably won't have to move any inherited timing sections so that's good~

Jak64's Taiko~

Add "Jak64" to the tags for this difficulty.

Insane~
02:56:488 (11) - New combo.
Topic Starter
Andrea
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Mafiamaster
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Topic Starter
Andrea
Thanks Bro <3
minyeob
Congratulations.
Topic Starter
Andrea
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Topic Starter
Andrea
Added Jak64 into the tags. ^_^
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