1. Easy (1.15 stars, 122 notes)
2. Extra (5.47 stars, 763 notes)
3. Hard (3.02 stars, 429 notes)
4. Hyper (3.77 stars, 481 notes)
5. lightr's Insane (4.84 stars, 669 notes)
6. Normal (2.11 stars, 251 notes)

zwsr wrote:

fight~~

[Twinkle] wrote:

support

yu1sT wrote:

[easy]
00:23:375 (1) - 尾部方向朝着2？ ok
01:00:832 (2) - 再弯一点ok
02:26:843 - 添加一个折返滑条？是好一点

[Normal]
00:15:051 (1) - 包好一点ok
00:41:410 (4) - ^ok
01:51:121 (2) - ^ok
00:40:022 (1,2) - 间距。。没发现
01:02:219 (1,2) - ^ok

[Hard]
00:18:173 (2,3) - 用一样的滑条ok
02:37:595 (4,1) - 距离远一点，跟后面的距离有点相似ok

太喜欢这歌，祝顺利rank~~

zinsser wrote:

哎，接受中文是么

第一次mod还不太会用论坛的功能，鉴于是新手我说的你就参考参考就好

[easy]
00:28:924 (1,2,1,2) - 之间的空隙太长，而且有些单调副歌之前没有升华的预感。建议在三个空当中间分别加个圈，然后 00:37:248 (2) ·长度减半，然后往返两次（左，右，左）后面改了些
00:40:022 (1,2,3,4) - 单调+1 建议把第三个改成往返，删掉第四个，在第四个开始的位置结束的时间加一个圈看了看，easy就不变了
00:51:121 (1,2,3,4) - 上边+1，可以保留上边那个然后改掉这个
01:20:254 (1,2,1,2) - 上边+1，既然有 01:30:658 (3) ·的存在，那可以吧最后一个滑条长度减半，往返一次
02:15:745 (4) - 个人会把这个加长到下一个白色tick （到 02:17:132 ·结束）ok
02:28:231 (1,2,3,4) - 上边+1

[normal]
02:03:259 (1) - 我觉得可以吧这个和前面的距离伸长到1.2x 。。。这个得保持DS
02:16:785 (6) - 这个滑条反复一次ok

[hard]
00:49:213 (4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - 感觉怪怪的，我反正第一次打的时候是反应不过来4是多次往返，但是不知道怎么给更改建议，毕竟这一块也算原创的图案。（至少可以尝试拉近 00:49:213 (4,1) ·之间的距离，1.5x的距离很容易让第一次打的人预判为4只有一次往返）ok
01:06:381 - 请务必删掉这个spinner……只有3秒的break特别短不说，紧接着就是一个长度只有1秒的转盘，而且还不在重音上，好不容易打完一段休息了突然这么一个转盘肯定反应不过来ok
01:29:271 (2,4) - 这两个滑条的重叠有些莫名其妙，不在中点，也不是distance snap，关键是还挡住了第二个滑条的结束圈……感觉还好
01:52:421 (3) - 把它放在两个滑条中间的位置吧，表和第二个起始圈重合不喜欢放中间。。。。。



[extra]
建议od+1
01:00:572 (5,2) - 放在在4和6（1和3）的中间吧，现在这样很破坏移动。。。
01:06:381 - 转盘删掉+1ok
01:07:768 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 反正我是打不了xD 跳的好多1.9 slider velocity + 4.8 distance snap
01:59:098 - 删掉+1
02:17:132 - 加一个圈，可以放在78的中间跟着鼓点走
02:26:150 - 好吧这一串我也打不了……收回前言od不用+1了。。这个不是滑条吗
02:47:913 (2) - 13中间


第一次mod就献给你了xD 不知道楼上这些图是怎么截出来的求讲解？
背景很喜欢，哪里搞来的？pixiv上搜索的。。
m4m: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/141353
lol 祝楼主成功rank

zinsser wrote:

建议ar -1 no,这种排列和BPM你觉得AR8玩着舒服吗？
00:20:080 (4) - 摆在这里很容易看丢 （虽然我没看丢） 算是比较常见的遮挡把
00:37:248 (3,1) - 这中间为什么要空一拍，小鼓在空的这一排已经开始有比较弱的声音了，要么再加个圈，要么把3改成短滑条。个人会再加一个圈然后从00:37:248 (3) ·开始标新combo no,停顿一下转折
01:06:381 - 转盘删掉+1 好
01:07:768 (1,2) - 两个离得太远，短滑条往返接3.45x短滑条往返没人能反应过来（第一次打的时候）缩到2x差不多 Insane不是面向新手玩家做的，这种跳对已经入门的玩家来说完全谈不上难度
01:23:028 (3) - 嚯这一大串连打…… 建议把 01:24:415 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) ·改成短滑条往返，后边两个短滑条往返改成连打 sorry,no change
02:49:300 (2) - +1 sorry,no change

1. why you add tag 'Vo' 'Gt' 'Dr' 'Ba'. i don't understand. please remove these.

1. 00:15:051 (2) - add finish slider end. and sampleset is soft. because symbals part. really fit.
2. 00:17:826 (1) - ^ but, slider head.
3. 00:21:988 (5) - drum sampleset slider head.
4. 00:28:924 (1) - finish sampleset slider head.
5. 00:34:473 (1) - ^
6. 00:37:248 (3) - add finish slider head.
7. 00:38:635 (5) - add finish slider end. and sampleset is drum.
8. 01:03:259 (3) - remove clap. and instead add finish and sampleset drum. more fit.
9. 01:09:155 (1) - soft sampleset slider head.
10. 01:20:254 (1) - ^
11. 01:25:803 (1) - ^
12. 02:26:843 (1) - add clap slider head and reverse and end.

1. 00:16:092 (3) - change soft and add finish.
2. 00:37:248 (1) - add finish.
3. 01:03:606 (4) - add finish.
4. 01:09:155 (1) - add finish slider head.
5. 01:20:254 (1) - add finish slider head.
6. 01:25:803 (1) - add finish slider head.

1. 00:17:826 (1) - remove clap slider head and add finish slider head and sampleset soft.
2. 00:28:924 (1) - ^
3. 00:29:618 (1,1) - nothing mean NC. remove these.
4. 00:34:473 (1) - remove clap slider head and add finish slider head and sampleset soft.
5. 00:39:155 (1) - remove finish. instead add clap.
6. 01:03:606 (3) - sampleset soft.
7. 01:09:155 (1) - remove clap slider head and add finish slider head and sampleset soft.
8. 01:20:254 (1) - ^
9. 01:20:947 (1,1,1)- nothing mean NC. remove these.
10. 01:26:496 (1,1,1) - ^
11. 01:54:762 (6) - bit long stream part for hard diff. try change 1/4 reverse slider.
12. 02:10:889 (3) - add clap slider head. and add finish slider end.
13. 02:11:236 (4) - add finish slider head.
14. 02:26:843 (1) - add clap slider head and all reverse.
15. 02:38:115 (3,1,3,1) - don't make harder. both (3) remove reverse once. http://puu.sh/7Eu4d.jpg
16. 02:49:387 (2,3,4,9) - remove reverse once. or more close distance spacing better.

1. 01:01:872 (1) - remove NC.
2. 01:09:155 (1) - add finish slider head.
3. 01:25:456 (2) - if this pateern NC, add NC.
4. 01:52:161 (6) - add NC.
5. 01:54:936 (5) - add finish.
6. 02:11:063 (4,5) - add finish.
7. 02:39:329 (5) - add NC.

1. stream hitsound weird imo..

P o M u T a wrote:

from my queue. nice song

[General]

1. why you add tag 'Vo' 'Gt' 'Dr' 'Ba'. i don't understand. please remove these.OK

[Easy]

1. 00:15:051 (2) - add finish slider end. and sampleset is soft. because symbals part. really fit.
2. 00:17:826 (1) - ^ but, slider head.
3. 00:21:988 (5) - drum sampleset slider head.
4. 00:28:924 (1) - finish sampleset slider head.
5. 00:34:473 (1) - ^
6. 00:37:248 (3) - add finish slider head.
7. 00:38:635 (5) - add finish slider end. and sampleset is drum.
8. 01:03:259 (3) - remove clap. and instead add finish and sampleset drum. more fit.
9. 01:09:155 (1) - soft sampleset slider head.
10. 01:20:254 (1) - ^
11. 01:25:803 (1) - ^
12. 02:26:843 (1) - add clap slider head and reverse and end.
    change all

[Normal]

1. 00:16:092 (3) - change soft and add finish.
2. 00:37:248 (1) - add finish.
3. 01:03:606 (4) - add finish.
4. 01:09:155 (1) - add finish slider head.
5. 01:20:254 (1) - add finish slider head.
6. 01:25:803 (1) - add finish slider head.
   change all

[Hard]

1. 00:17:826 (1) - remove clap slider head and add finish slider head and sampleset soft.
2. 00:28:924 (1) - ^
3. 00:29:618 (1,1) - nothing mean NC. remove these.
4. 00:34:473 (1) - remove clap slider head and add finish slider head and sampleset soft.
5. 00:39:155 (1) - remove finish. instead add clap.
6. 01:03:606 (3) - sampleset soft.
7. 01:09:155 (1) - remove clap slider head and add finish slider head and sampleset soft.
8. 01:20:254 (1) - ^
9. 01:20:947 (1,1,1)- nothing mean NC. remove these.
10. 01:26:496 (1,1,1) - ^
11. 01:54:762 (6) - bit long stream part for hard diff. try change 1/4 reverse slider. nop
12. 02:10:889 (3) - add clap slider head. and add finish slider end.
13. 02:11:236 (4) - add finish slider head.
14. 02:26:843 (1) - add clap slider head and all reverse.
15. 02:38:115 (3,1,3,1) - don't make harder. both (3) remove reverse once. http://puu.sh/7Eu4d.jpg
16. 02:49:387 (2,3,4,9) - remove reverse once. or more close distance spacing better.
    and change all

[extra]

1. stream hitsound weird imo..yeah,,need develop

almost hitsound suggest.
good luck

P o M u T a wrote:

from my queue. nice song

[lightr's Insane]

1. 01:01:872 (1) - remove NC.
2. 01:09:155 (1) - add finish slider head.
3. 01:25:456 (2) - if this pateern NC, add NC.
4. 01:52:161 (6) - add NC.
5. 01:54:936 (5) - add finish.
6. 02:11:063 (4,5) - add finish.
7. 02:39:329 (5) - add NC.

All fixed , Thank you

1. 00:12:970 (3,3) - stack?
2. 00:20:254 (5,6) - you get some better flow if you ctrl g these two
3. 00:34:473 (1,1) - bad overlap.
4. 00:40:369 (2,3) - stack these better. (ctrl g them both, so you can stack the heads. then ctrl g back)
5. 00:42:103 (3,4) - why stack? the pause in flow here is really awkward
6. 00:58:057 (1,2) - again, why does the flow stop here?
7. 01:12:797 (5,6,7) - hmm how do i explain this, from 01:12:624 (4,5) - the ds gets a slight decrease so you can angle the triangle, but i think it feels awkward when the DS decreases rather than increase. so just basically instead of offsetting the triangle by spinning it clockwise, spin it counter clockwise, following the flow
8. 01:30:832 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - i think you should take copy 01:29:965 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - and ctrl hj, or vice versa
9. 01:34:126 (1,2) - blanket could be better
10. 02:03:953 (1,2,3,4) - the reverse in the direction of flow just feels awkward
11. 02:41:757 (3,1) - stack?
12. 02:43:144 (5,3) - not a good overlap
13. 02:45:225 (2,4) - ^
14. 02:52:161 (2) - ctrl g?
15. 02:52:855 (4) - ^
16. 02:53:548 (2,4) - same with these two?
17. 02:56:236 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - i just thought you could make a better design here, maybe like a wave or something

1. 00:14:705 (5) - copy 00:15:051 (1) - ctrl hj
2. 01:31:352 (1,2) - ^ same with this pair maybe
3. 02:05:340 (1,2) - don't overlap
4. 02:13:317 (2) - ctrl g
5. 02:14:011 (4) - ^
6. 02:16:959 (1) - consider turning this into a 1/2 slider
7. 02:15:745 - not sure if all these nc are necessary
8. 02:22:681 (1) - this isn't a very good place for spinner lol
9. 02:49:213 - the stream starts here?

1. 00:02:566 (1,2,3,4) - i don't get it. why ds change?
2. 00:22:855 (2,1) - blanket
3. 00:38:115 (5,6,7) - make the DS change more even lol
4. 00:41:063 (5,6) - DS change here a bit random and this set of jumps look messy
5. 00:50:254 (1,2,3,4,5) - these streams look kinda hard.
6. 01:01:352 - this one here especially lol
7. 01:12:624 (4,1) - random change in flow direction why?
8. 01:13:664 (2) - ctrl g?
9. 01:16:092 (1) - slider kinda ugly lol. curve less or something
10. 01:41:410 (5) - the way how it overlaps both (4) and (5) makes it look bad and confusing
11. 02:16:959 (8) - move this one down a bit
    
    SPOILER

    
12. 02:56:236 (2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - this stream seems so impossible to play lol..

1. 00:04:300 (2,3) - music doesn't pause, no reason to stack
2. 00:40:716 (2,3) - ^
3. 00:10:196 (2) - istead just copy (1) and rotate by a bit
4. 00:19:213 (3,4) - blanket 4 better for better overlap
5. 01:09:155 (1) - how bout this lol?
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 02:11:583 (1,2) - reversing more than once can be confusing in normals
7. 02:40:022 (2) - rotate this clockwise a bit more
8. 02:44:184 (4) - this might be better
   
   SPOILER

   

• 
  You have a 1 star easy going to a 3.5 star normal... the difficulty spread is kinda yah...
  thats all i got to say lels

Tagre wrote:

M4M

ALL OF MODS ARE SUGGESTIONS

[Easy]
CS:2 ?nope
00:19:213 (2,3) - blanket it (and if you think it is necessary blanket 00:17:826 (1) - too)ok
00:21:988 (5,1) - move they closer to the right (you will be have more space for 00:24:762 (2) - and it would be prettier)
00:48:346 (1,2) - blanket itok
01:09:155 (1,2) - curve they somehow (they are really ugly as straight)
01:34:820 (4,5) - blanket it
01:42:450 (1) - ctrl+h, ctrl+j, ctrl+g (lol) then place as previous (better flow)ok
01:49:387 (3,4) - bad blanket. fix it ok
01:52:161 (1,2,3) - use this pattern 01:00:832 (2,3,4) - ok
02:37:942 (5,1) - blanket itok
02:55:976 (4) - it should ends at 02:57:363 -

nothing else

[Normal]
00:04:647 (3) - maybe something like this http://puu.sh/7KDpL.jpg ?ok
00:11:583 (5,1) - try this rhythm http://puu.sh/7KDBl.jpg (i know it would be harder but it fits better to song for me)
00:21:988 - i suggest this rhythm http://puu.sh/7KDTD.jpgok
00:28:231 (4) - delete it and place 1beat slider at 00:27:884 - ok
00:41:410 (4,1) - blanket itok
01:13:317 (3,4) - almost good but fix blanket ;_;ok
01:19:560 (4) - same as 00:28:231 (4) -ok
01:33:086 (4,1) - blanket itok
01:36:901 (1) - i suggest to do something like this http://puu.sh/7KEjO.jpg but more beauty please
01:44:531 (5,1) - blanket itok
02:02:566 (4,1) - ^
02:16:612 - place a note here (there is a word from song and you leaved empty space. it sounds better)
02:26:843 (1,2) - blanket itok
02:35:167 (1,3) - ^
02:47:652 (3,1) - this is quite ugly. i suggest to change shape and placement of 3 to this http://puu.sh/7KENY.jpg. looks much better
ok
nothing else

[Hard]
00:07:074 (2) - ctrl+gnope
00:07:768 (4) - ^
00:08:115 (1) - delete repeat and place a note 00:08:462 - for a little jump ( better flow in my opinion
00:22:681 (6) - move to 00:22:508 - (sounds much better) and fix ds
00:25:976 - here is important sound. maybe place a note here?nope
00:32:913 - ^
00:33:433 (2,3) - use ds for this
00:40:716 (3,4) - blanket itok
00:42:103 (3,4) - ^
00:43:837 (5,1) - try this rhythm http://puu.sh/7KFKv.jpg (sounds better)
00:51:121 (1,2) - blanket itok
00:49:213 (4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - very nice part but probably i will be too hard. new people dont stream that well when they reach hard level (only opinion)
00:53:722 (1) - place it over 2
00:59:965 (4,5) - this flow drop is too confused. try to change placement somehow
01:12:624 (3,1) - place under each other properly
01:14:531 (5,1) - blanket it
01:41:583 (3) - ctrl+g
01:42:103 (5,1) - use ds
02:04:647 (1,2) - blanket it ok
02:05:340 (1,2) - ^
02:06:728 (3,4,5,6) - make it more various. try to rotate 5,6 somehow (02:09:502 (3,4,5,6) - this is nice )ok
02:08:115 (3,4,5,6) - ^
02:15:745 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - make nc after 4th note (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4)nope
02:37:421 (2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - same as 00:49:213 (4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - nope
02:46:265 (1) - ctrl+g (better flow)

nothing else

Sorry but i'm too tired for further modding (11 p.m. )
if you want i can look on insane and extra later. just pm me
and i'm giving you star because i was searching for map of this song for standard mode heh
GL

Kibbleru wrote:

[Insane]

1. 00:12:970 (3,3) - stack? OK
2. 00:20:254 (5,6) - you get some better flow if you ctrl g these two OK
3. 00:34:473 (1,1) - bad overlap. i don't think so
4. 00:40:369 (2,3) - stack these better. (ctrl g them both, so you can stack the heads. then ctrl g back OK
5. 00:42:103 (3,4) - why stack? the pause in flow here is really awkward i don't think so
6. 00:58:057 (1,2) - again, why does the flow stop here? stack here is very good becuase of a big jupm before
7. 01:12:797 (5,6,7) - hmm how do i explain this, from 01:12:624 (4,5) - the ds gets a slight decrease so you can angle the triangle, but i think it feels awkward when the DS decreases rather than increase. so just basically instead of offsetting the triangle by spinning it clockwise, spin it counter clockwise, following the flow OK，remap this part a little
8. 01:30:832 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - i think you should take copy 01:29:965 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - and ctrl hj, or vice versa nope
9. 01:34:126 (1,2) - blanket could be better OK
10. 02:03:953 (1,2,3,4) - the reverse in the direction of flow just feels awkward i don't know how to change it
11. 02:41:757 (3,1) - stack? OK
12. 02:43:144 (5,3) - not a good overlap OK
13. 02:45:225 (2,4) - ^
14. 02:52:161 (2) - ctrl g?
15. 02:52:855 (4) - ^
16. 02:53:548 (2,4) - same with these two? OK^
17. 02:56:236 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - i just thought you could make a better design here, maybe like a wave or somethingthis is good enough,so i don't change this stream

Thank you !

Kibbleru wrote:

[Hard]

1. 00:14:705 (5) - copy 00:15:051 (1) - ctrl hjok
2. 01:31:352 (1,2) - ^ same with this pair maybe
3. 02:05:340 (1,2) - don't overlapok
4. 02:13:317 (2) - ctrl gok
5. 02:14:011 (4) - ^ok
6. 02:16:959 (1) - consider turning this into a 1/2 slidernope
7. 02:15:745 - not sure if all these nc are necessarync can express the strong beats
8. 02:22:681 (1) - this isn't a very good place for spinner lolok
9. 02:49:213 - the stream starts here?nop, start at red line would be so confuse

[ExtrA]

1. 00:02:566 (1,2,3,4) - i don't get it. why ds change?follow the music
2. 00:22:855 (2,1) - blanketok
3. 00:38:115 (5,6,7) - make the DS change more even lolok
4. 00:41:063 (5,6) - DS change here a bit random and this set of jumps look messy
5. 00:50:254 (1,2,3,4,5) - these streams look kinda hard.it's fine
6. 01:01:352 - this one here especially lol
7. 01:12:624 (4,1) - random change in flow direction why?more fun
8. 01:13:664 (2) - ctrl g?ok
9. 01:16:092 (1) - slider kinda ugly lol. curve less or somethingnope
10. 01:41:410 (5) - the way how it overlaps both (4) and (5) makes it look bad and confusing
11. 02:16:959 (8) - move this one down a bit ok
    
    SPOILER

    
12. 02:56:236 (2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - this stream seems so impossible to play lol....it's not hard, basic on the low bpm

[Normal]

1. 00:04:300 (2,3) - music doesn't pause, no reason to stack
2. 00:40:716 (2,3) - ^
3. 00:10:196 (2) - istead just copy (1) and rotate by a bitok
4. 00:19:213 (3,4) - blanket 4 better for better overlapok
5. 01:09:155 (1) - how bout this lol?ok
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 02:11:583 (1,2) - reversing more than once can be confusing in normalsok
7. 02:40:022 (2) - rotate this clockwise a bit more.no, it's fine
8. 02:44:184 (4) - this might be betterok
   
   SPOILER

   

[Easy]

• 
  You have a 1 star easy going to a 3.5 star normal... the difficulty spread is kinda yah...it's how easy work
  thats all i got to say lels

----um kinda late right now but i WILL finish this mod up so don't give me kudos for now----

10crystalmask01 wrote:

Hey mod from queue

2~ 3 minutes = 4 Diffs


[Hard]
01:27:884 (4) - Not snapped.OK

01:35:514 (7,1) - These objects is appearing too close to each other, it makes the DS look really screwed up here. Please stack or move them more apart.I think it's not a big problem in hard dif
01:49:387 (1,2) - Same issue as above.

[Normal]
00:17:132 (2,1) - DS is not snapped properly here. Be sure to keep an eye out for the spacing in Easy/Normal diffs.ok

02:28:231 (2) - NC, because it's the first object to appear in Kai time.ok

[Easy]
AR +1, 3 is more fitting for this diff, because of the fast pace the music has.ok

Wow I have to say, you've used some pretty neat mapping techniques in your map
Good luck!

10crystalmask01 wrote:

Hey mod from queue
[notice]2~ 3 minutes = 4 Diffs
[lightr's Insane]
00:07:768 (4) - It's look more appealing if this was just a simple straight slider instead, since it's sitting in between the two symmetrical sliders 00:07:074 (2,3) - .

01:03:259 (2) - Interesting. Use a drum clap on this note, to match that unique hit sound heard in the music.

02:04:126 (2,4) - Swap their positions please. I don't think it looks nice for them to form a sort of 're-wind' flow after 02:03:259 (1,2,3,4) - (otherwise, you should've done it with 02:00:485 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - as well).

Your suggestions is very good ! I accept all of them ! Thank you~
Wow I have to say, you've used some pretty neat mapping techniques in your map
Good luck!

[Minakami Yuki] wrote:

From my queue of Normal Mod

1. Grey——Just some complaints.
2. Black——My personal suggestions.
3. Bold——Highly recommended.
4. Red——(Maybe) Unrankable, you'd better fix it.

[General]

1. 其实我觉得系统自带的clap根本不合曲，建议自己找一个自定义音效吧。

这是呀

[Easy]

1. 00:17:129 (4) - finish？ok
2. 01:03:256 (3,4) - 换成个滑条算了？ok
3. 01:42:447 (1,2) - 距离动一下，blanket没啥必要ok
4. 02:22:678 (1) - sample soft的clap听着有点weird，用normal？ok
5. 02:57:187 - end at here.ok

[Normal]

1. 01:45:915 (2,3) - blankethou
   没啥好挑的

[Hard]

1. HP+1/HP+2 for the thread那就不妨+1，没想明白为何是4
2. 00:22:505 - 听了两遍这个空还是比较奇怪，建议加上noteok
3. 00:49:210 (4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - clap spam太吵可以适当调下音量，后面也是60%应该还好。
4. 01:10:540 (6,7,8,10) - 滑条尾和note+whistleok
5. 01:11:927 (1,3) - 这一段24上的鼓音应该是比较明显的吧，加点音效？ok
6. 01:54:412 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - .-.0.0
7. 02:15:742 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - soft clap完全不合曲嗯

[ExtrA]

1. 上来就跳成狗了，这游戏还能玩？[/color]
2. 00:32:563 (2) - 00:33:256 (4) - 这两个clap多余了吧？非得说就是根本不合曲嘛这个clap音效。
3. 00:38:806 (2,3,4,5) - 往上拐然后掉下来？弧度变一下吧？我觉得这样下来的note比较爽
4. 01:01:349 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Art! but wtf this can play?
5. 01:25:193 - 01:25:366 - 01:25:540 - overmap了，可以改成短滑条鼓声挺大的，
6. 恶劣啊最后还尾杀围杀,想给1分，没门

最后祝您身体健康
哇2kd
哇1000post
哇哇哇

[Twinkle] wrote:

[ExtrA]
00:38:806 (2,3,4) - 这个三连往右边一点？让00:37:765 (3,5,7,2,3,4) - 在一条曲线上这难度加大太多了呀
01:42:967 (3,4) - 交换位置 01:43:487 (2,3) - 交换位置 可能需要移一下01:43:834 (1) - 还是不换了
02:10:540 (2,3) - 交换位置ok
02:48:517 (5,6) - 这也试试看换一下？ 02:48:863 (7,8,1) - 把这个连打右边移一点这里大改了下

Vertify wrote:

Love it =)

mikeymartin wrote:

Why isnt this ranked?!! This map is so much fun!

mikeymartin wrote:

Why isnt this ranked?!! This map is so much fun!

Jere-Chan wrote:

This should be ranked already >_>

1. fireflies.jpg is 1365x768 > fireflies.jpg is 1366x768
2. your normal-hitclap have a delay of 10 ms, try this instead, you will need to change normal-hitclap5 , soft-hitclap , soft-hitclap5, soft-sliderslide3.
3. add some AudioLeadIn to have 2 secs before the first object
4. Inconsistency in widescreen support
5. preview time is unsnapped, should be in 00:39:499 -

1. your HP is really low o.o, since you can fail a lot and still pass, try HP 7 or 6.5
2. 00:22:332 (1) - and 00:22:678 (1) - are really unnecessary, since I don't see a valid reason to spam combos like that, your pattern can be read perfectly without them
3. 00:24:239 (1) - ^
4. 00:27:534 add NC and remove it from 00:27:881 (1) - , fit better your combo pattern
5. 00:17:476 (3) - add NC? like you did in 00:28:574 (1) -
6. 00:49:210 (4) - a bit nazi, but this slider will be look better with a curve shape, like this
7. 01:00:829 (1) - move this one a bit to the left, like this , to avoid the overlap with 01:01:089 (2,3) -
8. 01:03:603 this need finish
9. 01:07:765 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - I preer circles streams like you did before in 00:49:730 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1) - if not atleast can you reduce the spacing a bit? is kinda hard to get in the first play
10. 01:09:846 (1) - 01:10:193 - remove NCs, since they are not necessary
11. 01:15:222 - 01:15:569 - same as above
12. 01:47:649 remove NC is not necessary.
13. 01:47:996 you are missing a NC here
14. 01:54:933 (6) - I prefer a finish here
15. 02:37:939 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - can you use another stream shape? the current one looks like you did it manually, plus is kinda weird to play to me
16. 02:44:528 remove NC is not necessary

1. 00:06:725 (7,1) - swap NC
2. 00:25:019 there is nothing in the music, consider to remove this circle.
3. 00:27:794 (2) - ^
4. 00:39:152 remove NC is not necessary at all
5. 00:51:985 remove NC and add NC in 00:52:505 - following you combo pattern
6. 00:56:667 (5) - missing NC
7. 01:20:251 add NC?
8. 01:23:025 (3) - same as above, to keep your every 4 beats in the stream
9. 01:40:540 (3,4,5) - a circle stream will be a lot better, for consistency with all the other ones
10. 01:53:545 (6) - missing NC
11. 02:24:066 (1,1) - I prefer the rhythm in extra, do you mind changing to something similar?
12. 02:39:326 add finish
13. 02:40:713 your spinner should end here, make more sense with the music, as finish as well
14. 02:51:811 (1,2) - this spacing is so confused to play, I highly suggest you to avoid this

1. 00:39:152 unnecesary NC
2. 00:39:152 CTRL G is a lot better
3. 00:40:019 this is not supposed to be NC5 ? there are a few more place where this happen
4. 02:15:742 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - pls no combo spam, is totally unnecesary
5. 02:26:147 (1,2,1,1,1) - ^
6. Hitsound suggestion in Extra diff may apply here as well

1. AR5 OD4 HP4
2. 00:09:152 (4,1) - blanket?
3. 00:11:580 (5,1) - this rhythm feel really weird when playing, try this
4. 00:40:019 - I'm wonder why you are not using custom hitsounds T-T
5. 01:18:863 (3) - this is touching the HP bar, try to avoid this
6. 02:26:840 (1) - too soon after a spinner for a normal diff
7. Hitsound suggestion in Extra diff may apply here as well

1. easy seems fine, but use your custom hitsounds as well.

Natsu wrote:

Hello

General:

1. fireflies.jpg is 1365x768 > fireflies.jpg is 1366x768ok
2. your normal-hitclap have a delay of 10 ms, try this instead, you will need to change normal-hitclap5 , soft-hitclap , soft-hitclap5, soft-sliderslide3.done
3. add some AudioLeadIn to have 2 secs before the first objectdone
4. Inconsistency in widescreen supportdone
5. preview time is unsnapped, should be in 00:39:499 -done

Extra:

1. your HP is really low o.o, since you can fail a lot and still pass, try HP 7 or 6.56.5
2. 00:22:332 (1) - and 00:22:678 (1) - are really unnecessary, since I don't see a valid reason to spam combos like that, your pattern can be read perfectly without themsure
3. 00:24:239 (1) - ^^
4. 00:27:534 add NC and remove it from 00:27:881 (1) - , fit better your combo patterndone
5. 00:17:476 (3) - add NC? like you did in 00:28:574 (1) - done
6. 00:49:210 (4) - a bit nazi, but this slider will be look better with a curve shape, like thisdone
7. 01:00:829 (1) - move this one a bit to the left, like this , to avoid the overlap with 01:01:089 (2,3) - done
8. 01:03:603 this need finishdone
9. 01:07:765 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - I preer circles streams like you did before in 00:49:730 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1) - if not atleast can you reduce the spacing a bit? is kinda hard to get in the first playdone
10. 01:09:846 (1) - 01:10:193 - remove NCs, since they are not necessarydone
11. 01:15:222 - 01:15:569 - same as abovedone
12. 01:47:649 remove NC is not necessary.done
13. 01:47:996 you are missing a NC heredone
14. 01:54:933 (6) - I prefer a finish heredone
15. 02:37:939 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - can you use another stream shape? the current one looks like you did it manually, plus is kinda weird to play to medidn't change shape but decrease the distance
16. 02:44:528 remove NC is not necessarydone

lightr's Insane:

1. 00:06:725 (7,1) - swap NCdone
2. 00:25:019 there is nothing in the music, consider to remove this circle.done
3. 00:27:794 (2) - ^done
4. 00:39:152 remove NC is not necessary at alldone
5. 00:51:985 remove NC and add NC in 00:52:505 - following you combo patterndone
6. 00:56:667 (5) - missing NCdone
7. 01:20:251 add NC?done
8. 01:23:025 (3) - same as above, to keep your every 4 beats in the streamdone
9. 01:40:540 (3,4,5) - a circle stream will be a lot better, for consistency with all the other onesdone
10. 01:53:545 (6) - missing NCdone
11. 02:24:066 (1,1) - I prefer the rhythm in extra, do you mind changing to something similar?done
12. 02:39:326 add finishdone
13. 02:40:713 your spinner should end here, make more sense with the music, as finish as welldone
14. 02:51:811 (1,2) - this spacing is so confused to play, I highly suggest you to avoid thisdone

Hard:

1. 00:39:152 unnecesary NCdone
2. 00:39:152 CTRL G is a lot betterdone
3. 00:40:019 this is not supposed to be NC5 ? there are a few more place where this happendone
4. 02:15:742 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - pls no combo spam, is totally unnecesarydone
5. 02:26:147 (1,2,1,1,1) - ^done
6. Hitsound suggestion in Extra diff may apply here as welldone

Normal:

1. AR5 OD4 HP4done
2. 00:09:152 (4,1) - blanket?done
3. 00:11:580 (5,1) - this rhythm feel really weird when playing, try thisdone
4. 00:40:019 - I'm wonder why you are not using custom hitsounds T-Tdone
5. 01:18:863 (3) - this is touching the HP bar, try to avoid thisdone
6. 02:26:840 (1) - too soon after a spinner for a normal diffdone
7. Hitsound suggestion in Extra diff may apply here as welldone

Easy:

1. easy seems fine, but use your custom hitsounds as well.well, ok

I really like this mapset! sadly I found an Issue with the diff spread... your normal is too easy compared to your hard, also the SV difference 1.0 to 1.60 make this more obviously, my suggestion is to map another Hard diff with 1,30 SV and without too much streams. if you do this get some mods in the new diff and call me back, dam spreads XD

Zweib wrote:

hi~ kudos request

[hard]
00:15:742 (3,4) - ok
00:17:129 (1) - no ncok
00:35:164 (2,3) - distance is different with 00:35:164 (2,3) - opps, changed
00:39:499 - map?ok
00:56:667 (1,2,3,4) - use rhythm you used laterok

osama7 wrote:

i dont know if i should post this here, but can you put the word 'dance' in the tags?
thanks

1. from here 00:01:176- to here 00:15:395 -, will be nice if you add claps every 2º and 4º downbeat, since them fit really nice the song IMO, if you have some reason to don't explain me pls
2. from here 02:00:829 to here 02:04:297 -, apply the same as above
3. 02:06:378 to 02:16:782 ^
4. Use tick rate 2 in every diff pls

1. 00:16:262 (6) - add whistle? since that beat is kinda inaudible atm, also the whistle follow the vocal really nice here, if you agree this apply to every diff.
2. 00:17:129 (1,2) - this should be drum sampleset right? like you did in 00:16:436 (1,2) - (this apply to every diff as well)
3. 00:22:678 (5) - this is missplaced I think, is better if you follow the line with 00:21:985 (1,3) - , this is what I mean
4. 00:27:707 (2) - missing whistle I think
5. 00:28:921 (1) - add clap in the tail and yeah this apply to every diff and every next slider 00:29:615 (1,1,1,1) -
6. 00:39:499 (1) - remove whistle from slider body and tail, just keep it in the head
7. 00:43:141 (3,4) - this is not stacked perfectly
8. 00:44:181 (1) - add whistle in the tail, since the vocal is really prominent there
9. 01:00:829 (1,2,3) - I was thinking about this rhythm and I feel it really weird.. my suggestion is that you should start the circle stream from 01:00:829 (1) - like this
10. 01:14:181 (3) - this slider should end 1/4 back in 01:14:355 - , if you do this add clap in 01:14:355 -, since is in the music
11. 01:23:025 (1) - remove this NC and add one in 01:23:372 - will fit better the music and your stream comboing!
12. 01:28:574 (3) - should be a NC here, but not in 01:29:268 -
13. 01:31:349 (1) - missing whistle.
14. 01:34:037 - there is nothing in the music right? same goes to 01:35:424 (6) -
15. 01:47:649 remove NC seems totally not necessary
16. 01:54:586 (3,4) - this 1/4 jump is so evil lol, try this
17. 02:26:667 (4) - a single circle will fit the music better and also will be consistent with your next patterns
18. 02:35:164 (1) - I prefer what you did in first and second kiai, this slider is not fun to play :c, this is better

1. Hitsound suggestions in Extra may apply here as well, so check them pls
2. OD 8 is better here try to don't have OD-2 respect to AR
3. 00:16:436 (1,2) - finish with drum sampleset fit a lot better than claps
4. 00:17:129 (1,2) - ^
5. 00:32:736 (4,1) - this rhythm is really weird and doesn't fit the music and vocals nicely, try this instead
6. 00:33:777 remove NC is not necessary
7. 00:39:499 (1) - add whistle in the head
8. 00:48:690 (1,2) - swap NC
9. 01:02:910 (3) - add finish
10. 01:36:898 in every kiai you are missing a finish hitsound here (in all the similar places)
11. 01:52:158 (6) - missing NC
12. 02:04:644 (1) - finish will be nice here as well
13. 02:39:326 add finish here as well
14. 02:46:609 (2,3,4) - this blanket can be improved a lot

1. OD 7 is better for this diff
2. Hitsound suggestions in Extra may apply here as well, so check them pls
3. 00:16:436 (1,2) - finish with drum sampleset fit better here, just like you did in Extra
4. 00:17:129 (1,2) - same as above
5. 00:17:303 (2) - btw this rhythm is not nice , try this instead
6. 00:19:210 (5) - missing NC
7. 00:33:430 (2) - try this rhythm instead
8. 00:39:499 add a slider here, since even the hard diff has one here
9. 00:53:719 (1,2) - swap NC
10. 00:57:360 (3) - this is touching the hp bar
11. 01:02:910 (1) - add finish
12. 02:15:742 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this play really weird use normal spacing instead
13. 02:36:898 (6,1) - swap NC
14. 02:37:418 (2) - add nc for consistency with your pattern
15. 02:50:424 add NC

1. AR7 and OD6 is better here
2. use your soft custom hitsounds instead of the default ones
3. Hitsound suggestions in Extra may apply here as well, so check them pls
4. 00:06:725 (1) - use a 1/2 repeat slider instead, to fit the vocal in 00:06:898
5. 00:06:725 (1,2,3) - also add more spacing the overlaps look bad
6. 00:09:499 (1,2,3) - ^
7. 00:12:274 (1,2,3) - ^
8. 00:15:048 (1,2,3) - ^ and all the similar ones
9. 00:16:436 (1) - finish with drum sampleset sound a lot better (head and tail)
10. 00:17:129 (2) - same as above
11. 00:18:517 (3,4) - this tiny jump doesn't place nice, make more sense to me to have the tiny jump in 00:19:037 (5,1) -
12. 00:21:985 (5) - missing NC
13. 00:28:921 (1) - finish + whistle sound better than the clap
14. 00:32:389 (2,3) - use more spacing here to avoid the overlap
15. 00:33:083 (4,5,1) - the spacing look the same, but the gaps are differents, add more spacing between 4 and 5
16. 00:33:777 (1,2,1) -use more spacing between them to avoid the overlaps
17. 01:09:152 (1) - add finish as well?
18. 01:24:412 (5) - missing NC, also use more spacing between 01:24:412 (5,6,7) - to avoid overlaps
19. 02:16:436 (3,4) - instead of this, will be more interesting to change the rhythm to this

1. Hitsound suggestions in Extra may apply here as well, so check them pls
2. 00:16:436 (1) - finish with drum samplesetwrok better here (head and tail)
3. 00:17:129 (2) - same as above
4. 00:30:308 (2) - this is touching the hp bar
5. 00:41:060 (3,4) - spacing
6. 02:37:592 (4) - move this a bit up, is almost offscreen xD
7. 02:57:014 (6) - last slider should end in 02:57:274
8. Use your custom hitsounds instead of the defaults >: like you did in extra
   

1. Hitsound suggestions in Extra may apply here as well, so check them pls
2. 01:34:817 (4,5) - this blanket can be better
3. 01:54:239 (2,3) - will be a nice idea to use a repeat slider instead
4. 02:26:840 (1) - too soon after a spinner, just remove this slider
5. 02:55:973 (4) - same as normal diff (about the last slider)
6. Use your custom hitsounds instead of the defaults >: like you did in extra

Natsu wrote:

Recheck no kds

General:

1. from here 00:01:176- to here 00:15:395 -, will be nice if you add claps every 2º and 4º downbeat, since them fit really nice the song IMO, if you have some reason to don't explain me plsdidn't apply
2. from here 02:00:829 to here 02:04:297 -, apply the same as abovesure
3. 02:06:378 to 02:16:782 ^sure
4. Use tick rate 2 in every diff plsdone

Extra:

1. 00:16:262 (6) - add whistle? since that beat is kinda inaudible atm, also the whistle follow the vocal really nice here, if you agree this apply to every diff.fixed
2. 00:17:129 (1,2) - this should be drum sampleset right? like you did in 00:16:436 (1,2) - (this apply to every diff as well)fixed
3. 00:22:678 (5) - this is missplaced I think, is better if you follow the line with 00:21:985 (1,3) - , this is what I meanfixed
4. 00:27:707 (2) - missing whistle I thinkfixed
5. 00:28:921 (1) - add clap in the tail and yeah this apply to every diff and every next slider 00:29:615 (1,1,1,1) - fixed
6. 00:39:499 (1) - remove whistle from slider body and tail, just keep it in the headfixed
7. 00:43:141 (3,4) - this is not stacked perfectlyfixed,nice
8. 00:44:181 (1) - add whistle in the tail, since the vocal is really prominent there
9. 01:00:829 (1,2,3) - I was thinking about this rhythm and I feel it really weird.. my suggestion is that you should start the circle stream from 01:00:829 (1) - like thisfixed,but use other rhythm since no sound on blue line
10. 01:14:181 (3) - this slider should end 1/4 back in 01:14:355 - , if you do this add clap in 01:14:355 -, since is in the musicfixed
11. 01:23:025 (1) - remove this NC and add one in 01:23:372 - will fit better the music and your stream comboing!fixed
12. 01:28:574 (3) - should be a NC here, but not in 01:29:268 -fixed
13. 01:31:349 (1) - missing whistle.fixed
14. 01:34:037 - there is nothing in the music right? same goes to 01:35:424 (6) - fixed
15. 01:47:649 remove NC seems totally not necessaryfixed
16. 01:54:586 (3,4) - this 1/4 jump is so evil lol, try thisfixed
17. 02:26:667 (4) - a single circle will fit the music better and also will be consistent with your next patternsfixed
18. 02:35:164 (1) - I prefer what you did in first and second kiai, this slider is not fun to play :c, this is betterfixed

lightr's Insane:

1. Hitsound suggestions in Extra may apply here as well, so check them pls
2. OD 8 is better here try to don't have OD-2 respect to AR[/color]
3. 00:16:436 (1,2) - finish with drum sampleset fit a lot better than clapsfixed
4. 00:17:129 (1,2) - ^fixed
5. 00:32:736 (4,1) - this rhythm is really weird and doesn't fit the music and vocals nicely, try this insteadfixed
6. 00:33:777 remove NC is not necessaryfixed
7. 00:39:499 (1) - add whistle in the headfixed
8. 00:48:690 (1,2) - swap NCfixed
9. 01:02:910 (3) - add finishfixed
10. 01:36:898 in every kiai you are missing a finish hitsound here (in all the similar places)fixed
11. 01:52:158 (6) - missing NCfixed
12. 02:04:644 (1) - finish will be nice here as wellfixed
13. 02:39:326 add finish here as wellfixed
14. 02:46:609 (2,3,4) - this blanket can be improved a lotfixed..really a lot?

Hyper:

1. OD 7 is better for this difffixed
2. Hitsound suggestions in Extra may apply here as well, so check them pls
3. 00:16:436 (1,2) - finish with drum sampleset fit better here, just like you did in Extrafixed
4. 00:17:129 (1,2) - same as abovefixed
5. 00:17:303 (2) - btw this rhythm is not nice , try this insteadfixed
6. 00:19:210 (5) - missing NCfixed
7. 00:33:430 (2) - try this rhythm instead fixed
8. 00:39:499 add a slider here, since even the hard diff has one here fixed
9. 00:53:719 (1,2) - swap NCfixed
10. 00:57:360 (3) - this is touching the hp barfixed
11. 01:02:910 (1) - add finishfixed
12. 02:15:742 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this play really weird use normal spacing insteadfixed
13. 02:36:898 (6,1) - swap NCfixed
14. 02:37:418 (2) - add nc for consistency with your patternfixed
15. 02:50:424 add NCfixed

Hard:

1. AR7 and OD6 is better herechange ar to 6.5
2. use your soft custom hitsounds instead of the default onesfixed
3. Hitsound suggestions in Extra may apply here as well, so check them pls
4. 00:06:725 (1) - use a 1/2 repeat slider instead, to fit the vocal in 00:06:898 err.no
5. 00:06:725 (1,2,3) - also add more spacing the overlaps look badfixed
6. 00:09:499 (1,2,3) - ^fixed
7. 00:12:274 (1,2,3) - ^fixed
8. 00:15:048 (1,2,3) - ^ and all the similar onesfixed
9. 00:16:436 (1) - finish with drum sampleset sound a lot better (head and tail)fixed
10. 00:17:129 (2) - same as abovefixed
11. 00:18:517 (3,4) - this tiny jump doesn't place nice, make more sense to me to have the tiny jump in 00:19:037 (5,1) - fixed
12. 00:21:985 (5) - missing NCfixed
13. 00:28:921 (1) - finish + whistle sound better than the clapfixed
14. 00:32:389 (2,3) - use more spacing here to avoid the overlapfixed
15. 00:33:083 (4,5,1) - the spacing look the same, but the gaps are differents, add more spacing between 4 and 5fixed
16. 00:33:777 (1,2,1) -use more spacing between them to avoid the overlapsfixed
17. 01:09:152 (1) - add finish as well?fixed
18. 01:24:412 (5) - missing NC, also use more spacing between 01:24:412 (5,6,7) - to avoid overlapsfixed
19. 02:16:436 (3,4) - instead of this, will be more interesting to change the rhythm to thisfixed

Normal:

1. Hitsound suggestions in Extra may apply here as well, so check them plsfixed
2. 00:16:436 (1) - finish with drum samplesetwrok better here (head and tail)fixed
3. 00:17:129 (2) - same as abovefixed
4. 00:30:308 (2) - this is touching the hp barfixed a little
5. 00:41:060 (3,4) - spacing? spacing is all right
6. 02:37:592 (4) - move this a bit up, is almost offscreen xDfixed
7. 02:57:014 (6) - last slider should end in 02:57:274fixed
8. Use your custom hitsounds instead of the defaults >: like you did in extrafixed
   

Easy:

1. Hitsound suggestions in Extra may apply here as well, so check them plsfixed
2. 01:34:817 (4,5) - this blanket can be betterfixed
3. 01:54:239 (2,3) - will be a nice idea to use a repeat slider insteadfixed
4. 02:26:840 (1) - too soon after a spinner, just remove this sliderfixed
5. 02:55:973 (4) - same as normal diff (about the last slider)fixed
6. Use your custom hitsounds instead of the defaults >: like you did in extra

Let me know when you reply to this, since are mainly hitsounds and NCs

1. 00:31:695 (1) - unsnapped slider tail >:

1. 00:01:176 (1) - this slider is wrongly snapped it should end in 00:01:869
2. 00:03:950 (3) - ^
3. 00:05:337 (4) - ^
4. 00:06:725 (1) - ^
5. 00:17:823 (1,2) - ^
6. 00:19:210 (2) - ^
7. 00:21:985 (5) - ^
8. 00:23:372 (1) - ^
9. 00:28:921 (1) - ^
10. 00:31:696 (2) - ^
    dunno how that happen, anyways be careful with the spacing there as well

Natsu wrote:

Extra:

1. 00:31:695 (1) - unsnapped slider tail >:

Easy:

1. 00:01:176 (1) - this slider is wrongly snapped it should end in 00:01:869
2. 00:03:950 (3) - ^
3. 00:05:337 (4) - ^
4. 00:06:725 (1) - ^
5. 00:17:823 (1,2) - ^
6. 00:19:210 (2) - ^
7. 00:21:985 (5) - ^
8. 00:23:372 (1) - ^
9. 00:28:921 (1) - ^
10. 00:31:696 (2) - ^
    dunno how that happen, anyways be careful with the spacing there as well

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