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LiSA - Kawaranai Ao

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Inahime
34 posts
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Topic Starter
Inahime
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on domingo, 24 de maio de 2015 at 12:53:32

Artist: LiSA
Title: Kawaranai Ao
Tags: Lisa Crossing Field Oath Sign SAO Sword Art Online Fate Zero einess
BPM: 152
Filesize: 3196kb
Play Time: 01:31
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1,45 stars, 114 notes)
  2. eINess' Insane (3,93 stars, 249 notes)
  3. Hard (3,16 stars, 238 notes)
  4. Insane (3,97 stars, 345 notes)
  5. Normal (2,04 stars, 164 notes)
Download: LiSA - Kawaranai Ao
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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My first Beatmap :D , This is a short version of the song (Made by me)
Thanks XMasterWizardX for all support. Thanks eINess for your diff :)
All images are related to animes that has any song of LiSA
Last edited by Inahime , edited 102 times in total.
Gexigamma
155 posts
Joined August 2013
Gexigamma
Hi! Random mod from #modreqs
I hope this helps.

Easy
  1. 00:20:205 (2,3) - 00:20:995 (4,5) - 00:21:784 (6,7) Replace these with sliders to make it easier.
  2. 00:41:126 (3) I feel this slider wrong. Maybe spacing it more with the last slider would solve it.
  3. 00:50:205 (3,4) Too close! Space them a bit. (I suggest to move 00:49:416 (1,2,3) to the right so there's more space for 00:51:192 (5) )
  4. 00:57:518 Kiai snapping is wrong. It should be 00:57:508 .
Normal
  1. 00:52:376 (7,1,2) Stack these and move them to a lower position (x=192 y=32 maybe)
  2. 01:12:705 (5,1) Maybe adding a jump between these wouldn't be a bad idea.
Hard
  1. 00:00:666 (1,2,3) Try to make this forms symmetric. Same for 00:02:244 (1,2,3) - 00:03:626 (1,2,3) .
  2. 00:50:995 (2) I love this part :D Good work!
  3. 00:54:350 (1,2,3) Same as first, try to make it symmetric.
  4. 00:57:113 (2,1) Delete this and replace with a slider here 00:57:113 - 00:57:508
  5. 01:08:760 Kiai snapping is wrong. It should be 01:08:758 .
  6. 01:10:141 Same as above. It should be 01:10:139 .
  7. 01:22:378 Same. It should be 01:22:376
  8. 01:15:468 (11) Space this a bit more (it's a slider with lower speed, but it should seem like an ordinary one). Same with this 01:20:995 (3)

Just a few thing before I finish.
There's a typo in the BG, in the HP bar it says "Asna" instead of "Asuna" :( Change it plz.
Also the tags are wrong, you shouldn't add things that has nothing to do with the song. Quit "Fate Zero" and "Oath sign". Not sure. Let's wait for another mod :3
Last thing, the audio bitrate is 320kbps, which is unrankeable. Unfortunately I don't know how to change it :cry: but you can search in the forums!
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Inahime
34 posts
Joined November 2013
Topic Starter
Inahime
Gracias!
Tuxxy_old
204 posts
Joined May 2013
Tuxxy_old
From #modreqs!
This sound could probably use the Soft sampleset instead of normal.

Easy
00:29:212 New combo
00:36:302 NC
00:42:417 NC
00:52:293 NC
00:52:674 Remove NC
00:54:449 NC
01:19:697 NC
01:29:165 Final Spinner could extend to 01:31:927

The difficulty does not have many sounds, so I would consider re-thinking the music and add hitsounds so they fit in.
Inahime
34 posts
Joined November 2013
Topic Starter
Inahime
Thanks Man! ^^
dlwlrma_old
38 posts
Joined November 2013
dlwlrma_old
Hi , from #modreqs

Hard

00:16:577 (1,2,3) - a bit stange, should change the pattern
00:24:073 (7,8) - the part with these 2 notes can be changed to other pattern
00:26:637 (4) - this note should move to 256,88 ?
00:30:779 - parts like this should be filled in
00:51:096 (2,3,4,5) - the end of the sliders should be covered perfectly
00:51:096 (2,3,4,5,1,2,1,2,3,4) - this Part is too " centralise " idk how to say, but u should spread them out.
01:04:312 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - it looks like no good
01:07:665 (5) - too close with the previous note
01:09:243 (10) - nc?
01:15:555 (11) - nc to notice slider speed change

Nomral

00:07:899 (1,2) - it looks like not good
00:24:072 (4,5,6) - so hard to read for new players
00:30:385 (7,8) - like these should be place them to other place away from the previous slider
00:36:895 (5) - maybe the end of this slider should close at 00:37:485
00:52:675 (1) - why nc?
00:54:450 (1,2,3) - heavy beat patterns like this should be place them more far away from each other
also, open AImod to check your DS :D

my first modding, hope it helps you :D :D
Inahime
34 posts
Joined November 2013
Topic Starter
Inahime
Thanks - MiiChan - ^^
Gabitrevas
1 post
Joined August 2013
Gabitrevas
As you requested.

Hard
00:00:599 (1,2,3) - The song is quieter here. Remove the triplet and leave only the slider?

00:02:177 (1,2,3) - Same.

00:04:446 (4) - If you do this, remove this circle.

00:17:169 (3) - Move this slider up a little for symmetry and stuff.

00:26:045 (1,2,3,4,5) - This doesn't look so good... Make it symmetrical.

00:46:362 (7) - NC, perhaps?

01:13:386 (1) - ^

01:15:555 (5) - Remove NC

01:21:078 (3) - Remove NC

01:23:051 (3) - Remove NC. Now a suggestion. You can do something other than this if you want. Move this to the white tick, move 01:23:445 (1) to 01:23:642 and remove the reverse arrow. Also, remove 01:24:629 (3). Of course, make it look nice. Huehue (that took time to write)

01:27:587 (3) - NC, maybe

01:26:799 (2) and 01:28:377 (4) - Change sound to soft and add whistles.

PS: dat random spinner file.

BG - Adjust size, but don't forget to get the original picture first (fixing it with this quality wouldn't be so useful, hue)

That's it. Good luck.
Inahime
34 posts
Joined November 2013
Topic Starter
Inahime
Obrigado XmasterWizardX!
Ringating
717 posts
Joined August 2013
Ringating
from #modreqs (indirectly)

bg mod

your image was of pretty bad quality, so I found a much better version online and then made it 16:9 in order to achieve the best resolution. Here is the new bg:
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Inahime
34 posts
Joined November 2013
Topic Starter
Inahime
Thanks Ringating ^^
Magnolia
Magnolia
why hello there :3

Easy

Approach Rate 4 feels fast for an easy, switch to 3?
00:33:540 (3) - feels out of place for the rest of the map
00:41:036 (3) - a bit confusing for an easy

Normal

01:18:515 (1,2,3) - again maybe a bit confusing for a normal
didn't notice much on this, good job

Hard

00:45:178 (2,3,4) - add a curve to these to add some more flow?
00:32:949 (3) - use something other then a clap here

overall not a bad map at all
Inahime
34 posts
Joined November 2013
Topic Starter
Inahime
Thanks HandHeldPillow, if have something wrong yet, post, please!! ^^
wuzzat
78 posts
Joined September 2013
wuzzat
Hey Inahime ~
Just want to tell about replying mods..
just simply click quote at the corner of the post :


Then tell them what you've just change.
like,green if you agree
and red if you disagree
I was used like this back then :3

you should use this for future modding replies ;)

No Kudos Pls~

maybe i'll mod this tomorrow
Inahime
34 posts
Joined November 2013
Topic Starter
Inahime
Ok
Ujimatsu Chiya
2,480 posts
Joined December 2013
Ujimatsu Chiya
May I make Insane diff this ? o3o
Inahime
34 posts
Joined November 2013
Topic Starter
Inahime

eINess wrote:

May I make Insane diff this ? o3o
Yes, yes. Thanks!
Ujimatsu Chiya
2,480 posts
Joined December 2013
Ujimatsu Chiya
Done

http://puu.sh/9EOAB/5b7020b75c.osu

and add tag " einess " please. all diffs
sLaiNi
34 posts
Joined May 2013
sLaiNi
Hard
01:26:009 to 01:28:376 - Feels a bit undermapped in comparison to the rest of the map, maybe add some triple taps
01:08:848 - I don't really get the NC here, maybe one hitcircle later
01:20:683 - Same here, maybe in the same combo as the slider?

Extra
00:01:783 - Totally misstimed, should be here: 00:01:586
00:59:380 - Too much of nothing at the funniest part, maybe add more multi taps here

Extra is very fun, though. Very well mapped

Maybe i Mod Insane later, too

Edit:

Insane
01:15:160 - These 3 Single hits should be farther away from each other IMO
Inahime
34 posts
Joined November 2013
Topic Starter
Inahime

sLaiNi wrote:

Hard
01:26:009 to 01:28:376 - Feels a bit undermapped in comparison to the rest of the map, maybe add some triple taps
01:08:848 - I don't really get the NC here, maybe one hitcircle later
01:20:683 - Same here, maybe in the same combo as the slider?

Extra
00:01:783 - Totally misstimed, should be here: 00:01:586
00:59:380 - Too much of nothing at the funniest part, maybe add more multi taps here

Extra is very fun, though. Very well mapped

Maybe i Mod Insane later, too

Edit: I edited everything, except insane because it was not me who made.
Vielen Dank!!!!!!!! Thanks Man. If anything worsened, you can talk ^^

Insane
01:15:160 - These 3 Single hits should be farther away from each other IMO
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