1. 249's Hard (4.75 stars, 210 notes)
2. Easy (2.38 stars, 88 notes)
3. Insane (4.98 stars, 243 notes)
4. Normal (3.99 stars, 114 notes)

UnderminE wrote:

from my queue, hello!

Easy

00:05:921 (1) - whistle
00:07:811 (3) - whistle
00:09:701 (1) - whistle
00:15:370 (3) - whistle
00:17:260 - kiai during spinner? it doesn't make much sense in this diff. Its following her voice o~o
00:19:149 - i think this is normal-whistle. Change it to Soft-whistle
00:24:819 - remove those sounds and add finish here
00:27:653 (5) - NC here because having more than 4-5 combos in Easy is not preferred Its there to to keep consistency o~o
00:30:488 - and NC here ^^
00:40:882 - whistle
00:42:771 - whistle
00:45:606 (4) - whistle
00:46:551 - whistle
00:48:441 - where is the note here ;_; Opps Missed it xD
00:49:386 - whistle
00:54:110 - remove whistle, finish only
00:55:055 - oh my god so loud, %90 is no-no. Make it %75 Done
01:09:228 - remove whistle
01:07:338 - 3 claps sound weird, so whistle here
01:10:173 - so loud again, 75 or 80 Done
01:17:693 - this is useless, remove it and better end kiai here. because almost half of the song is kiai.
01:17:732 - end kiai here as well so it wont be kiai until the ending
01:18:677 - whistle
01:19:622 - finish
01:21:984 - remove whistle
01:22:929 - remove whistle (please don't use two at the same time, it ruins gameplay in other modes like taiko)
01:23:401 - finish
01:24:346 - remove clap, finish
01:24:701 - ^
I cant remember which I did and which I didn't x.x
Kiais I did stuff different;y
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00:28:598 (3) - x:468 y:284 so it flows better. if you apply this, then:
00:29:543 (4) - x:376 y:112
00:30:016 (5) - x:280 y:80
00:49:858 (4) - use same shape with this 00:47:496 (1) -
01:24:346 (4) - x:216 y:300
Fixed these by myself
and OD -1
No this is the keep balance with HP

Normal

00:02:142 - green timing section is unnecessary here Done
00:03:795 (3,4) - stack these. Select two of them and ctrl+shift+R. Turn it by -21 and click OK. Did something different since the repeat pointing up ruins the transition between the slide that is flowing down
And you can try this pattern: http://puu.sh/6M7Jj.jpg
00:08:992 - NC here and remove NC on this 00:09:701 - No I need to keep Consistency
00:09:937 (2) - remove the arrow and copy this slider and paste it here 00:10:882 -
So you can make symmetrical pattern there http://puu.sh/6M85A.jpg
00:11:827 (5) - and you can also copy this slider, paste it here 00:12:771 - then Ctrl+H it. Then place it to x:232 y:272
Then: 00:13:480 (1) - x:352 y:336
00:13:953 (2) - x:440 y:256
00:14:897 (3) - x:248 y:144
00:15:134 (4) - x:188 y:128
00:15:370 (5) - x:136 y:156
00:16:079 (6,7) - x:128 y:324
00:32:378 (1,2) - stack this on 1's place
00:49:149 (3,4) - stack these
00:56:708 (3,4) - stack these (you can check my diff on this map for examples https://osu.ppy.sh/s/118869 it really plays better and funner)
same hitsound and kiai suggestions for Easy
Cant remember half of what I changed x.x
I don't stack in my Normal since I think they are to hard to read

Hard

you can check hitsound and kiai suggestions i did for easy
01:08:165 - whistle
00:13:244 (4,1) - stack?
00:16:315 (1) - x:424 y:92
00:33:323 (4,1) - stack better?
00:39:228 - these claps are really loud
00:48:795 - whistle
00:51:630 - whistle
01:01:551 - whistle
01:15:842 - whistle
01:19:622 - whistle
01:23:638 (2) - finish
01:24:346 - finish
01:23:165 - whistle

insane

you can check hitsound/kiai sugesstions i did before
00:10:173 (3) - change slider shape like this 00:10:882 (5) - I made a smiley
00:26:945 (2,4) - stack better Done
00:42:299 (3,4) - this is not a good flow pattern, try something like http://puu.sh/6MeIx.jpg and http://puu.sh/6MeJh.jpg Sorry that would ruin the flow more did something different owo
00:48:441 (3,4) - stack these two A stack doesn't fit it well since those 2 note don't sound the same owo I also hate doubles that are stacked ;~;
00:48:795 (5,6) - stack these two ^^
and more

Pretty good but needs some flow-suggestions (i am not that good at it ;_; )
good luck!

UnderminE wrote:

from my queue, hello!

Hard

you can check hitsound and kiai suggestions i did for easy
01:08:165 - whistle no this doesn't have the piano like the next combo.
00:13:244 (4,1) - stack? it's already stacked.
00:16:315 (1) - x:424 y:92 no that would actually ruin the emphasis in the vocals in this part of the song.
00:33:323 (4,1) - stack better? fixed it myself.
00:39:228 - these claps are really loud reduced the general volume to 50%.
00:48:795 - whistle no that sounds uncomfortable to play. even though it follows the vocals, my main focus is claps on this part.
00:51:630 - whistle ^
01:01:551 - whistle ^
01:15:842 - whistle ahh fixed.
01:19:622 - whistle ^
01:23:638 (2) - finish same reply as 00:48:795.
01:24:346 - finish ^
01:23:165 - whistle nope there's no piano on this.

Pretty good but needs some flow-suggestions (i am not that good at it ;_; )
good luck!

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1. 00:04:740 (3,4,5,6) - Better flow? http://puu.sh/7gz9V.jpg
2. 00:39:464 (5,6,7,1) - Hard to read. Should move (5) somewhere else.
3. 00:49:149 (6) - Move a little to the left
4. 00:58:362(5) -try this? http://puu.sh/7gA1W.jpg

1. 00:26:000 (3,4,1,2) - This might be better for flow http://puu.sh/7gxPk.jpg. The picture might so if you need more info PM me or something.
2. 00:48:441 (3,4,5,6) - Reduce the DS if you're not going to stack.
3. 01:05:212 (8) - Ctrl + G this, Ctrl + G at 01:05:921 (11) and stack
4. 01:07:102 (2,3) - Maybe something like this http://puu.sh/7gxpE.jpg.
5. 01:09:228 (9) - You could replace this with a circle bc it doesn't match the vocals you map after it.
6. 01:12:535 (7,8,9) - Consider this? http://puu.sh/7gyN0.jpg
7. 01:20:449 (3,4) - Possibly stack these on the end of (2)?
8. 01:21:157 (6) - Remove clap?

Knotts wrote:

Hello, here from my modding queue.

[249's Hard]

1. 00:04:740 (3,4,5,6) - Better flow? http://puu.sh/7gz9V.jpg no that would ruin the transition from the previous combo.
2. 00:39:464 (5,6,7,1) - Hard to read. Should move (5) somewhere else. this is easy to follow regardless of the stack. i don't see how this could be a problem for players.
3. 00:49:149 (6) - Move a little to the left nope i don't see the differnce during gameplay. yes it aligns, but it's barely noticeable when you play.
4. 00:58:362(5) -try this? http://puu.sh/7gA1W.jpg no i don't like how that flows to the slider during gameplay.

Knotts wrote:

Hello, here from my modding queue.

[249's Hard]

1. 00:04:740 (3,4,5,6) - Better flow? http://puu.sh/7gz9V.jpg
2. 00:39:464 (5,6,7,1) - Hard to read. Should move (5) somewhere else.
3. 00:49:149 (6) - Move a little to the left
4. 00:58:362(5) -try this? http://puu.sh/7gA1W.jpg

[Insane]

1. 00:26:000 (3,4,1,2) - This might be better for flow http://puu.sh/7gxPk.jpg. The picture might so if you need more info PM me or something. That would make the pattern too easy
2. 00:48:441 (3,4,5,6) - Reduce the DS if you're not going to stack.i dont see why.reduce the ds will only confuse people and make my streams inconsistent spacing.
3. 01:05:212 (8) - Ctrl + G this, Ctrl + G at 01:05:921 (11) and stack i dont really like that it doesnt really fit for the part
4. 01:07:102 (2,3) - Maybe something like this http://puu.sh/7gxpE.jpg. Maybe ill try that out
5. 01:09:228 (9) - You could replace this with a circle bc it doesn't match the vocals you map after it. no cause that part is hitting the bgm
6. 01:12:535 (7,8,9) - Consider this? http://puu.sh/7gyN0.jpg I like it owo
7. 01:20:449 (3,4) - Possibly stack these on the end of (2)? i dont like to stack so often
8. 01:21:157 (6) - Remove clap?no it follows a clap

No Dap wrote:

Hi~

[General]
onepiece314 <- Why is this in the tag? Its my previous name
This shouldn't matter but just saying.. Is this KIAI cut really needed? I wanted to make that part a bit more exciting ><

SPOILER

The beginning has very low volume, consider increasing. I can barely hear anything.
Its 40% its fine owo
[Easy]
OD-1? No ill keep it the same as AR owo
00:15:370 (3,4) - Try something like this? I think it flows better

SPOILER

No that would require a lot of arrangement I just made 4 circle flow woth 3
00:39:464 (3) - it seems that you're following the drum here, but you already ignored 00:39:228 this, so why not just make it 1/1 slider? Idk I wanted there to be some type of rhythm variations in the map and giving it a 1/2 repeat makes the part sound a bit more exciting and fitting for the upcoming change in verse
00:47:496 (1,2) - Try blanket? Done
00:48:441 (2,3,4,5) - Try placing them differently maybe? I personally don't like straight line circles...

SPOILER

did something different owo
01:02:614 (1) - I think this flows much better

SPOILER

Done
01:04:504 (3) - How about 1/1 slider here? I don't see the point again I want to keep the part sounding a bit more exciting ><
01:11:118 (2,5) - Flip them? I think it flows better

SPOILER

Done. much better Thank you owo
01:19:149 - add a circle here + clap? feels very empty. I agree it did feel rather empty
01:25:173 (1) - replace claps with finish, but don't have anything in the reverse Sounds better to me Unsure about this it seems a bit random but ill try for now and see how it goes
01:25:173 (1) - Shouldn't the spinner end here? 01:29:779 No then I would be forcing the spinner x.x I rather end when it dies off

[Normal]
00:08:992 (6,1,2,3,4) - Too much emptiness here 00:09:937 (2,3) How about this pattern Done owo

SPOILER

00:14:897 (3,4,5,6,7) - I thought it was a bad flow, try this?

SPOILER

Thank done owo
00:39:937 (1,2) - fill in? I think this part can be really fun if you follow drum beats!

SPOILER

To
http://puu.sh/7lzFS.jpg

I agree that's is better owo
00:57:890 (5) - Try giving it a little curve?

SPOILER

Okay
01:24:346 (5) - same as easy, I think finish sounds better to emphasize the end
01:25:173 (1) - same as easy
[Insane]
00:13:953 (2,3,4,5,1) - Very hard to read. make a jump on 00:14:897 (4,5) Done
00:17:142 (4) - Is this a mistake? Shouldn't this be 00:17:023 here? Done
00:28:126 (5) - stack on 00:29:307 (2)? I think it's more fun because jump Done owo
00:55:055 (1) - considering the stream you have right before this, I think this should be more closer to 00:54:819 (7)

SPOILER

Done owo
01:07:811 (4,6,7) - Try this? 01:07:811 (4) - this didn't look good, and I thought it should match the shape with this 01:07:338 (3)

SPOILER

Done owo nice pattern
01:12:535 (7,8,9) - this doesn't look like a good flow. How about this?

SPOILER

Done owo
01:20:094 (2,3,4) - can you make the triple more better?Done owo
01:23:165 (4) - as i said it earlier, jump here please.Done owo
01:24:346 (4) - as other diffs. Done

Good song & map~
Hope my mod helped and good luck!

Mao wrote:

M4M req~

General

• 
  01:25:173 (1) - NAZI: Place this spinner where it really does make sense. In other modes the start of a spinner makes a sound!

Easy

• 
  00:02:142 (1,2) - Blanket Its fine
  00:07:338 (2,3) - ^ ^^
  00:13:480 (1,2) - ^ ^^
  00:17:142 (1) - Let it start on 00:17:260 since start of spinner makes a sound in different game modes. Done
  00:39:464 (3) - Try http://puu.sh/7msbZ.jpg No
  00:45:606 (4) - Why isn't this perfectly symmertical? O_o wasn't supposed to be o.o
  01:01:669 (5) - Slider looks kinda "squeezed". Consider moving the red anchor point a little bit down and left. I think itr is fine owo
  01:24:346 (4) - Move a bit down like http://puu.sh/7mskJ.jpg okay owo
  
  Well, I saw some messed up blankets and distances. There was something with DS 1,06 which isn't good since your normal DS is 1,00. Consider to fix messed up blankets and distances ^-^

Normal

• 
  00:13:480 (1,2) - Fix Blanket its fine
  00:17:142 (1) - Let it start on 00:17:260 since start of spinner makes a sound in different game modes. Done
  00:26:708 (5,6) - Blanket Its fine
  00:45:606 (4,5,6) - Distance problems! Don't vary DS in normals. Keep the DS constant :c idk what your talking about :>
  00:46:731 - http://puu.sh/7mrHE.jpg Would be better to emphasize 00:46:551 No that would sound empty ><
  01:21:512 (1,2) - Blanket Its fine
  01:21:984 (2) - http://puu.sh/7mrS2.jpg Would be better since the white tick should be emphasized :c No that would so empty ><
  
  Consider fixing some distances here and there since it varys by 0.04 from the normal DS (1,00) which shouldn't really be the case in a Normal difficulty imo. Some blankets also need to be fixed.

Insane

• 
  00:03:086 (3) - Whistle on head Done owo
  00:07:338 (5) - ^Done owo
  00:11:590 (1) - ^Done owo
  00:12:299 (3) - ^Done owo
  00:14:897 (4,5,1) - Consitent distances would fit better in here. I made it a jump look at No Dap reply
  Add Cirle at 00:16:787 Nothing hits there o.o
  00:18:204 (3) - http://puu.sh/7mqA3.jpg sounds better to me Same for me keeping owo
  00:19:858 (2) - Inconsisten DS here. Consider to fix that In insane spacing doesn't have to be consistent
  00:21:039 (1,2,3,4) - If you take a close look at these, you can see that the space between these sliders isn't constant (http://puu.sh/7mqEP.jpg)^^
  00:25:291 (2,3) - Please fix this blanket ;w; Done
  00:26:945 (2,3) - Suggestion: Sounds better with two 1/2 sliders imo I want to keep this a repeat
  00:36:866 (3) - Consider adding more anchor points for a better curve Done
  00:38:992 (1,2,3) - Big jumps. Didn't see that coming while playtesting it The Music gives off the jump this parts fits very well with the jumps o.o
  00:45:606 (1,2,3,4,5) - Why this is no perfect pentagon? I honest wasn't trying to make a pentagon and it was supposed to be a random pattern that follows ds
  00:52:220 (9) - Replace with a x-flipped version Done owo I like the jump
  01:24:346 (4) - Move this a little bit up. Did something different
  
  Consider fixing some blankets and add more whistles. Otherwise nice diff~

I hope my mod helps. You improved a lot!!
Good luck

No Dap wrote:

Hi~

[249's Hard]
00:04:031 (2,3,4,5) - Try this placement? didn't look like a good flow.

SPOILER

actually the flow is fine. i don't wanna follow DS all the time.
00:21:039 (1,2,3,4,5) - People I usually don't see this pattern in a hard diff i've done this before and it's not a problem for players during gameplay.
00:29:543 (3,4) - I think this flows much better

SPOILER

it'll ruin the purpose of the triangular shape.
00:37:102 (3) - ^

SPOILER

no for this one, i wanna do something different for a change and it turned out well.
00:39:464 (5,6,7,1) - I really think you should unstack 5 and the triple. It's a bit hard to play and read for noob hard players this is readable for players. i can't see how spacing it out would make it smoother tbh.
01:24:346 (4) - this should be 3/4 rhythm. How about this? Oh, also finish on the head, it sounds nice

SPOILER

no i'd rather follow the beat and vocals equally.
01:25:173 (1) - How about end the spinner at the same time like the other diffs? no i'd rather end mine at the vocals. if i extend it, it'll feel like it's forcing players to spin.

Good song & map~
Hope my mod helped and good luck!

Mao wrote:

M4M req~

Hard

• 
  00:35:921 (4,1) - Perfectly stack with 00:34:267 (1) - 's head no it's barely noticeable during gameplay.
  01:02:614 (1,2,3) - NAZI: Triangle could be better here. 3 is 1,04 away from 1. it won't make a difference during gameplay, so no.
  
  Almost perfect *^* Great job

Good luck

1. 00:11:590 (2,3) - Try adding a whistle sound to the start of (2) instead of the end, then also add a whistle to (3). The whistle usage will be increased gradually that way, since 00:13:953 (2) consists just from these hitsounds.
2. 00:13:953 (2) - Make the blanket look more like this:
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:17:260 (1) - Maybe a soft finish for the spinner?
4. 00:24:819 (1,2,3,4) - Remove (2), copy (4), then Ctrl+H it and put where (2) was at 00:25:291. That way you will have a better looking symmetrical pattern. Don't forget to adjust the distance between (1) and (2) after doing this.
5. 00:28:598 (1) - Move to x:480, y:312, perhaps? You might have to adjust the anchor points for the sake of this blanket if you do so.
6. 00:32:378 (1,2) - Move (1) to x:192, y:356, then move (2) to x:292, y:336, so that (2) and (3) are in the same place on the x axis. If you do this as well, then, once again, remember to make the blanket better looking - in this case you would have to move the third anchor point to x:384, y:272.
   
   SPOILER

   
7. 00:35:212 (4) - Nazi: second anchor point at x:268, y:52, third anchor point at x:208, y:60.
8. 00:36:157 (5) - New combo here?
9. 00:39:464 (3) - Maybe remove the curve in the middle?
10. 00:51:275 (1) - I don't know about having this spinner here, this part just feels ''empty'' when it shouldn't be.
11. 01:04:504 (3) - Same about the curve.
12. 01:08:283 (4) - Use a whistle hitsound instead of clap for the end of this slider? Also, consider rotating, so that the end of the slider is in the same line as (2) and (3), but it's nothing that big.
13. 01:21:512 (5) - New combo here as well?

1. 00:08:992 (6) - New combo here (remove NC for the next object if you do that, obviously), and maybe an NC for 00:10:882 (3) as well.
2. 00:14:897 (3) - Stack this with (1) or vice versa (I think stacking (1) with (3) would be a better idea in this case).
3. 00:17:260 (1) - Same as on Easy.
4. 00:43:480 (8) - Whistle?
5. 00:47:260 (7) - ^
6. 00:51:275 (1) - Again, same as on Easy.
7. 01:04:504 (3) - Move this in the middle. The distances between the following objects wouldn't be greatly affected, so I guess it's okay.
8. 01:07:102 - Consider adding a note here.
9. 01:17:023 (6) - Similar thing with combos as I pointed out for 00:08:992 (6).
10. 01:19:622 (4) - Finish hitsound instead of a whistle?

1. 00:03:795 (1) - New combo here?
2. 01:19:149 (4) - Unstack this and maybe put somewhere like x:280, y:8 (unless that's too close to the HP bar), since you were using just one stacked circle on the head of the longer sliders throughout the map instead of two?

1. 00:06:393 (3) - Maybe make it like this:
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:15:134 (5) - Might be just me, but I think this isn't stacked perfectly with the following objects.
3. 00:26:708 (1,2,3,4,5) - Thoughts on this:
   
   SPOILER

   
   Might be a slightly sudden little jump, but might work out. Note that (5) is under (1) and (6) is under the head of (2).
4. 00:39:701 (4) - Try making it same as (3):
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 00:52:929 - I'd suggest you put a note here.
6. 00:54:110 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Maybe a rhythm like this:
   
   SPOILER

   
7. 01:09:464 (2,3,4) - Move (2) and (4) little bit lower so they're in the same place on the y axis as (5) from the previous combo was.
8. 01:21:984 (1,2,3) - Make these as close to each other as 00:13:953 (2,3,4) were?
9. 01:25:291 (1) - Shouldn't the spinner start at 01:25:173 like on the other difficulties?

Forseen wrote:

Alright, that mod thingy!

249's Hard:

1. 00:03:795 (1) - New combo here? it's already a NC.
2. 01:19:149 (4) - Unstack this and maybe put somewhere like x:280, y:8 (unless that's too close to the HP bar), since you were using just one stacked circle on the head of the longer sliders throughout the map instead of two? i unstacked (5,1) instead. moving it there feels uncomfortable for me to follow.

Well, that's enough from me. Have a star, and good luck!

Aka wrote:

h! ・ω・
as requested, sry for delay

249's

・actually would be cool if you use a drum sampleset here 00:58:362 (5,6,1) - as well, like you did on these sounds there 00:23:401 (2,3,4,5) - , 00:39:701 (6,7,1) - it would, but there's no drums that sound like the drum clap here.
・and i didn't really understand why did you finish the last spinner on that red 01:27:423 - tick since the vocal started becoming quieter closer to a big white tick there imo 01:27:181 - . aaaa i'd finish it either on that big white or 1/8's yellow there 01:27:004 - kk yes that is true, but it feels more comfortable for me if i end it at the 1/2 tick. it'll give me an uneasy feeling and i feel that ending it there would "drag it out" if i extend it, even for a bit.
~~~

and im done for now
good mapset you did there, guys. good luck :3/~

Dariano wrote:

Hi Lexia, hope this helps o3o

[249's Hard]

Nice difficult
00:38:756 (2,3) - Maybe you wanted them in the same x axis? nope that would ruin the setup for the triangular jump if i do this.

Nice map, it reminds me your first one dunno why
Star ~
Good luck!

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Dariano wrote:

Hi Lexia, hope this helps o3o

[Timing]

After lots of testing I think you should change your offset to 2,132 (Current one -10) because the offset was fluctuating from 0-15 specially in the first part of the song. No its fine ><

I can barely hear the hitsounds at the first part, perhaps you could step up the volumen a little bit. The beginning part is supposed to sound calm and drowned out thus the reason i made the hitsounds low it would sound off putting if i raise it ><


[Normal]

00:13:480 (1,3) - Overlapping would be nice. Done
01:15:842 (4) - Add clap sound maybe. Already there


[Easy]

Easy is awesome as always~ Thanks owo
01:08:283 (4) - I think you can improve this blanket.
Its Fine owo

Nice map, it reminds me your first one dunno why
Star ~
Good luck!

Aka wrote:

h! ・ω・
as requested, sry for delay


general

・to be honest i damn cant hear hitsounds in the beginning part [easy, normal, insane] where you have 40% of sound. i'd suggest to increase to ~+10% because it is really quiet as for me The beginning part is supposed to sound calm and drowned out thus the reason i made the hitsounds low it would sound off putting if i raise it ><
・the quality of the audio file is pretty bad tho т_т ..i found a 321kbs version and can make it 192kbs for you and try to find a new offset if it will go off. let me know if you need it! The Audio is fine


easy

・try to make whistle usage a bit more consistent in the beginning part by placing them on 00:05:921 - , 00:04:031 - , etc piano sound like you did there 00:07:811 (3) - . this whould be more logical cause this sound is mainly emphasized from the whole calm melody part I redid Hitsounds
・00:36:157 (5,1,2) - i'd suggest either put a new combo on (5) due to new phrase in lyrics or put a new combo AND try this rhythm below to make a 'kenkaaaaaaaaaashite' emphasised with a long slider in-time

SPOILER

00:35:212 (4) -

This sounds very off putting not only will i miss a finish i will also not emphasis kenkashite properly as it ends on the red tick
・01:08:283 (4) - put a finisher on the end instead of clap? i suppose this clap goes off your clap rhythm you were folowing before this slider The correct Hitsound would be a soft whistle owo
~~~


normal

・00:04:031 (4) - add a whistle on the beginning to emphasize that emphasized piano sound
・00:16:315 (7) - add a whistle at least on a reverse, so empty here
・00:38:047 (1) - i suppose clap is missing at the ending? oops
・01:05:449 (4) - a whistle on the beginning would suit there as well :о
・00:43:244 (7,8) - what about to replace these notes as a 1 slider? you have a lot of note-note-note-slider patterns in this part, diversify it ;р Done
・01:15:842 (4) - sounds bad without a clap on the end :c oops
~~~



and im done for now
good mapset you did there, guys. good luck :3/~

Forseen wrote:

Alright, that mod thingy!

Easy:

1. 00:11:590 (2,3) - Try adding a whistle sound to the start of (2) instead of the end, then also add a whistle to (3). The whistle usage will be increased gradually that way, since 00:13:953 (2) consists just from these hitsounds. I did New Hitsounds Completely
2. 00:13:953 (2) - Make the blanket look more like this: A bit nazi but fine owo
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:17:260 (1) - Maybe a soft finish for the spinner? Done
4. 00:24:819 (1,2,3,4) - Remove (2), copy (4), then Ctrl+H it and put where (2) was at 00:25:291. That way you will have a better looking symmetrical pattern. Don't forget to adjust the distance between (1) and (2) after doing this. No its already symmetrical it just that i will NEVER go off DS for symmetry in easy so 4 is adjusted in a different place to make it stay with DS.
5. 00:28:598 (1) - Move to x:480, y:312, perhaps? You might have to adjust the anchor points for the sake of this blanket if you do so. No that placement will cause an awkward transition btw 1 and 2
6. 00:32:378 (1,2) - Move (1) to x:192, y:356, then move (2) to x:292, y:336, so that (2) and (3) are in the same place on the x axis. If you do this as well, then, once again, remember to make the blanket better looking - in this case you would have to move the third anchor point to x:384, y:272. What will putting them in the same x axis do xD
   
   SPOILER

   
7. 00:35:212 (4) - Nazi: second anchor point at x:268, y:52, third anchor point at x:208, y:60. The blanket is fine
8. 00:36:157 (5) - New combo here? Its was already done XD
9. 00:39:464 (3) - Maybe remove the curve in the middle? No thats there to make sure it flows towards the next note
10. 00:51:275 (1) - I don't know about having this spinner here, this part just feels ''empty'' when it shouldn't be. Made a new rhythm inside of it
11. 01:04:504 (3) - Same about the curve. Same reason as before
12. 01:08:283 (4) - Use a whistle hitsound instead of clap for the end of this slider? Also, consider rotating, so that the end of the slider is in the same line as (2) and (3), but it's nothing that big. Done the hitsound
13. 01:21:512 (5) - New combo here as well? Already was done xD

Normal:

1. 00:08:992 (6) - New combo here (remove NC for the next object if you do that, obviously), and maybe an NC for 00:10:882 (3) as well. No im not following the Vocals as a NC guide im using the downbeat and since on the Stanza is a prominent note i put an NC their
2. 00:14:897 (3) - Stack this with (1) or vice versa (I think stacking (1) with (3) would be a better idea in this case). Done
3. 00:17:260 (1) - Same as on Easy. Done
4. 00:43:480 (8) - Whistle? No
5. 00:47:260 (7) - ^ ^
6. 00:51:275 (1) - Again, same as on Easy. Done
7. 01:04:504 (3) - Move this in the middle. The distances between the following objects wouldn't be greatly affected, so I guess it's okay. I guess
8. 01:07:102 - Consider adding a note here. Okay
9. 01:17:023 (6) - Similar thing with combos as I pointed out for 00:08:992 (6). No
10. 01:19:622 (4) - Finish hitsound instead of a whistle? Done

Well, that's enough from me. Have a star, and good luck!

10crystalmask01 wrote:

Hey, mod from queue

249's Hard

00:03:795 (1,2) - Try swapping their timing spots. With the slider starting at 00:03:795 now, it will run smoothly with the vocals long hold on the "rai" in morai. no the idea here is to follow the BGM 1st, and then follow it up with the vocals. it'll play awkwardly for me during gameplay.

00:34:976 (2,3) - ^ Same suggestion as above. Slider on 00:34:976 can follow smoothly with the "ra" in arashi. ^

01:11:827 (5,1) - ^ Same suggestion as above. With the slider on 01:11:827, it can follow with the vocals "ki" in nakikuzuresouna. ^

01:14:189 (2,3,4) - Kinda can tell that your following vocals because of the triplets here, each hitting the "Ki-mi no"yup exactly.

01:17:260 (3,1) - Swap objects timing points. With the slider on 01:17:496, it will follow more smoothly with the vocals long hold on the "bu" in Daijoubu. same reply as 00:03:795.

01:19:622 (1) - Sounds awkward here, because it completely runs over the strong words "ii" in iinda. One way to fix this is to swap 01:19:386 (6,1) - 's timing points. With the slider starting at 01:19:386 now, not only does its tail hit the strong word "ii", but the sldier itself will run through matching the vocals long hold on the "te" in naitete. that's not what i'm aiming for. the idea here is for (4) to act as a setup to the piano, and (1) to basically follow it up. following the vocals would ruin that purpose, and it'll flow awkwardly during gameplay like i said before.

Good luck!

osu file format v12

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 1000
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Countdown: 0
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[Editor]
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BeatDivisor: 4
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[Metadata]
Title:Nanairo*Namida (TV size)
TitleUnicode:Nanairo*Namida (TV size)
Artist:Tomato n' Pine
ArtistUnicode:Tomato n' Pine
Creator:LexiaLovesU
Version:249's Hard
Source:Beelzebub
Tags:ed tui hina wada hiruda azusa onepiece314 byakugan249
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10crystalmask01 wrote:

Hey, mod from queue

Insane

00:03:086 (1) - Nazi suggestion (sorry!) move the middle anchor point to 316:172 to ensure a perfect blanket.
Done owo
00:08:519 (2,3,4) - Looks like a confusing stack,because each note is spaced out differently with the other one. 00:08:519 (2,3) - is a full 1 beat apart, but 00:08:992 (3,4) - is spaced out only 1/2 a beat apart. This could trick players (especially if they're using HD) into thinking that 00:08:992 (3,4) - is also 1 beat apart.

One way to fix is is to unstack 00:08:519 (2) - . Why not place it under 00:07:811 (1) - 's tail instead?
I made it an anti jump instead i feel like it is a Anti since of the lack of music inbetween the notes ;w;

00:13:480 (4,1) - This sort of pattern doesn't quite fit here, because 00:13:480 (4) - 's tail is hitting an empty beat. Might as well extend 00:13:953's tail to 00:13:953.
Done

00:20:094 (3) - Hmm interesting. Try adding a drum clap on the head to match that funny beat heard here.
Done owo.

Normal

Circle size -1 looks better imo, but that's up to you.
Did it. it does look better >w<

00:15:370 (5) - NC because it starts in a new rhythm cycle (on the big white tick mark).
Done owo
00:51:275 (1) - Forgot to add a finish on the head here.
Done
01:23:401 (1,2,3) - unstack, it's funny how this is the only spot you decided to stack the notes, rather then have them lined up based on their DS.
Done owo

Easy

00:51:275 (1) - Forgot to add a finish on the head here.

opps XD
Good luck!

Tari wrote:

I really enjoy this song, will mod when i can

1. 00:15:370 (1) - Really should delete the notes, hopefully you put anti-jumps because you wanted to skip the instrumental beats and use anti-jumps to emphasize the vocals, and right now a anti-jump for this part is best, so please try to remove it. feels really awkward to play D: it should be the same as 00:04:267 (5) - because after playing that I thought there wasn't a note here D:
2. 00:07:811 (1) - Maybe no need for finish here? it sounds really noisy and unfitting with the music. the sound really stands out!
3. 00:31:197 (3) - Move this note somewhere else? while playing I notice that the movement is not smooth and very hard to reach at its current position, but if you move it like this : http://puu.sh/8eADz.jpg
4. 00:30:016 (3) - Move it slightly to the left, its a little bit too much pushed to the right and yet again harder tor reach. http://puu.sh/8eACH.jpg
5. 00:24:346 (4,5,6) - Tbh, this feels better as a 5 circle stream. http://puu.sh/8eALc.jpg
6. 00:39:937 - A SV change works great here, i don't understand why you didn't do it XD
7. 00:48:441 (5,6,7) - I don't think this rhythm is a good idea, it's so tricky to follow and doesn't really follow anything.
8. 00:50:094 (4) - This note is a bit curved up, move it down so it can be straight?
9. 00:56:000 (4,5) - Why can't remove 5 and extend 4 to white tick? this song isn't fast enough to allow the usage of 3/4 which is usually only used for AR9 mapping.
10. 01:02:142 (6,7) - Noiiiiisy claps orz, remove some T_T
11. 01:04:031 (5) - The end of the slider, check the stacking because it's not stacked perfectly.
12. 01:04:504 (1) - The note is too close! spread it apart and change the next note too, like this : http://puu.sh/8eBbr.jpg
13. 01:09:464 (5) - New combo here?
14. 01:19:504 - Add a note here? be consistent with 01:17:614 (7) -

1. 00:31:197 (2) - Put at the same place as 00:29:307 (2) - I can clearly see that overlap.
2. 00:39:937 (1,2,3,4) - This is not the best transition to the easy part, all a sudden there is a sudden surge of circles for it, which doesn't make sense because of the calm part of the song, that being said I think you should change both to sliders. two 1/4
3. 00:56:000 (3) - The blanket can be better here, right now it's a bit messy, are you using bezier slider?
4. 01:14:189 (2,3,4) - Put it in a center and make sure 2 and 4 are in the same y-axis for some symmetry here.
5. 01:17:496 (4) - Add a whistle?
6. 01:24:346 (4,5) - Do a reverse slider rhythm here? http://puu.sh/8eBMp.jpg

1. 00:35:212 (4) - The slider here is a bit too curvy, just move the middle point down a little and I think that should fix it.
2. 00:53:165 (3) - Add a whistle to the start of the slider.
3. 01:19:622 (3) - Not alligned well, need to move this whole slider to the left a little bit and move the next note to the left more also to fix the spacing.
4. 01:24:346 (5) - New combo and add a whistle to the start?
5. Awesome diff!

1. 00:04:031 (4) - Add a whistle to the start?
2. 00:14:897 (3,4) - I think using a slider is better here, since you have choice to follow instruments or vocals.
3. 00:35:685 (4,5,1) - Make the two circles lead to the next note, by placing it in a straight direction : http://puu.sh/8eC79.jpg
4. 01:02:142 (5,6,1) - ^ http://puu.sh/8eCdH.jpg
5. 00:52:220 (2,3) - Whistle to the start of either slider should be added. but start of 2 is better
6. 01:16:551 (5) - Add a whistle?
7. 01:23:401 (1,2,3,4) - A little overmapped, how about try this rhythm? http://puu.sh/8eCiO.jpg

Tari wrote:

[Insane]

1. 00:15:370 (1) - Really should delete the notes, hopefully you put anti-jumps because you wanted to skip the instrumental beats and use anti-jumps to emphasize the vocals, and right now a anti-jump for this part is best, so please try to remove it. feels really awkward to play D: it should be the same as 00:04:267 (5) - because after playing that I thought there wasn't a note here D: yeah i agree right there i put that note their because of the very promient Instrument that made a new phase of music. but i guess it probably better to keep consistency in my anti jumps and give less confusion owo
2. 00:07:811 (1) - Maybe no need for finish here? it sounds really noisy and unfitting with the music. the sound really stands out! agreed
3. 00:31:197 (3) - Move this note somewhere else? while playing I notice that the movement is not smooth and very hard to reach at its current position, but if you move it like this : http://puu.sh/8eADz.jpg Done i understand changed owo sorry i have some weird preferences since im a TabletPC player xD
4. 00:30:016 (3) - Move it slightly to the left, its a little bit too much pushed to the right and yet again harder tor reach. http://puu.sh/8eACH.jpg Okie owo
5. 00:24:346 (4,5,6) - Tbh, this feels better as a 5 circle stream. http://puu.sh/8eALc.jpg Done owo
6. 00:39:937 - A SV change works great here, i don't understand why you didn't do it XD I really wanted to ephmsasis 00:51:275 (1) since this is much more of a slower part so i really wanted to make this more stood out owo xD
7. 00:48:441 (5,6,7) - I don't think this rhythm is a good idea, it's so tricky to follow and doesn't really follow anything. Its follows her vocals but if i get more suggestions about this ill change ><
8. 00:50:094 (4) - This note is a bit curved up, move it down so it can be straight? I think i did it >~<
9. 00:56:000 (4,5) - Why can't remove 5 and extend 4 to white tick? this song isn't fast enough to allow the usage of 3/4 which is usually only used for AR9 mapping. Donesies owo
10. 01:02:142 (6,7) - Noiiiiisy claps orz, remove some T_T i removed the 1/4 claps owo
11. 01:04:031 (5) - The end of the slider, check the stacking because it's not stacked perfectly. Done owo
12. 01:04:504 (1) - The note is too close! spread it apart and change the next note too, like this : http://puu.sh/8eBbr.jpg Done owo
13. 01:09:464 (5) - New combo here? Okie oops
14. 01:19:504 - Add a note here? be consistent with 01:17:614 (7) - Done owo

[Easy]

1. 00:35:212 (4) - The slider here is a bit too curvy, just move the middle point down a little and I think that should fix it.
2. 00:53:165 (3) - Add a whistle to the start of the slider.
3. 01:19:622 (3) - Not alligned well, need to move this whole slider to the left a little bit and move the next note to the left more also to fix the spacing.
4. 01:24:346 (5) - New combo and add a whistle to the start?
5. Awesome diff! Thanks Lots of people think my easys are the best out of my mapsets XD

Done all owo
[Normal]

1. 00:04:031 (4) - Add a whistle to the start?
2. 00:14:897 (3,4) - I think using a slider is better here, since you have choice to follow instruments or vocals.
3. 00:35:685 (4,5,1) - Make the two circles lead to the next note, by placing it in a straight direction : http://puu.sh/8eC79.jpg
4. 01:02:142 (5,6,1) - ^ http://puu.sh/8eCdH.jpg
5. 00:52:220 (2,3) - Whistle to the start of either slider should be added. but start of 2 is better
6. 01:16:551 (5) - Add a whistle?
7. 01:23:401 (1,2,3,4) - A little overmapped, how about try this rhythm? http://puu.sh/8eCiO.jpg

Done all owo
Easier diffs (Easy and Normal) are very nice! great job and insane is good enough, and should be fine after some more mods :3

Yuzu- wrote:

Hey~ From modding queue.

Insane

1- 00:07:811 (1) - Flow is a bit off on the end of this one. Just a slight bit, so easily fixeable.
2- 00:35:449 (4) - Rotate this counter clockwise just a little bit, and it's perfect c:
3- 00:40:409 (2) - I'd prefer if you rotated this just a little bit, to go into 00:40:882 (3).

Pretty poor mod, but the map is really good. Star~ :3

LexiaLovesU wrote:

Dariano wrote:

[Timing]
After lots of testing I think you should change your offset to 2,132 (Current one -10) because the offset was fluctuating from 0-15 specially in the first part of the song. No its fine ><

Sephibro wrote:

This one seems fine:




Just select all the timing sections and move them by -26 ms:




And then timing > move all notes in time... > -26 ms




Good luck!

waxman wrote:

QQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQ

NO KUDASU PLS




[Insane]
00:05:423 (8,1) - There is no isuue because you added NC here. but this spacing would be changed like this spacing 00:05:895 (1,2,3). i made 1's spacing differently to emphasis the finish
00:21:013 (1,2,3,4) - I prefer my idea tho... Done owo nice jump

bad image

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1592732

00:38:021 (1,2,3) - spacing miss. Those spacing are different a bit. LOL didnt notice fixed
00:49:950 (3) - move this circle up a bit. 00:49:596 (2,3,4) - this shape isn't cool for me. moving the circle up would make the patterns flow awkward so i just made the triple more straight so that it follows the flow owo
00:53:139 (1,2,3,4,5) - It makes me bored.. If you like this idea... idk i wanted the pattern to be like that so it matches with the music

bad image

http://osu.ppy.s/ss/1592653

00:59:753 (5,6) - worst idea ↓ Done idk why my pattern was done like that

bad image

01:07:549 (5,6,1) - Objects are close. According to 01:05:895 (5,6,1), those closely spacing are not necessary. its fine owo
01:13:927 (1,2) - this is unreadable a bit. so I guess 01:14:163 (2) would be added NC. add nc
01:18:178 (2,3,4,5) - idea done owo

bad image

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1592692

01:22:903 (4,1,2,3) - Those spacing are not necessary and intentional for me. So you can follow regular spacing. move to x:180 y:164. its fine owo
01:25:029 - add Whistle instead of Finish. There is no sound at 01:25:029. so it's not necessary. listen to this section carefully on playback Rate 25%.
there is a finish sound and very very prominent sound so no change

I wanted you to fix about offset before LexiaLovesU write. In recently, my idea in regard to offset is trash. So there have been no point that I mod.... (´・ω・｀)



GOOD LUCK.

1. Title Unicode: なないろ☆ナミダ -TV EDIT- (Need to fix the romanized one as well.)
   
   ”source”

   
   http://www.play-asia.com/nanairo-namida ... -49vw.html
2. Add the original anime title “べるぜバブ” into Tags.

1. Reduce the overall difficulty to 2 for the better difficulty spread.
2. 40% in the calm part kinda sounds low to me. I’d highly recommend increasing to at least 50%. Same goes for Normal and Insane.
3. This difficulty includes some unnecessary green lines. Check by yourself and remove them. e.g. 00:02:116 -
4. 01:02:549 - This is not unrankable stuff, but this should be snapped in 1/4 (to 01:02:470 - ) imo since it seems like 1/12 snap doesn’t make any sense. Same goes for 01:17:667 - if you apply this. (Normal and Insane as well.)
5. 00:39:675 - How about adding a drum clap instead of a soft one by changing the Additions to Drum? Since a similar sound goes here. It should be more fitting.
6. 01:08:257 - Swap a hitsound with 01:09:202 - since a finish sound goes at 01:09:202 - . + If I were you, I’d add an extra green line to make the volume lower (-10%) at 01:09:202 - because I’d like to make difference with 01:10:147 - .

1. 00:09:675 (1,2) - Swap rhythms. The guitar goes from 00:09:675 - to around 00:10:147 - . + there is a vocal stresses at 00:10:383 - . So the rhythm will be more natural if you follow it with a note.
   
2. 00:39:438 (4) - It’s a bit too hard for beginners to play 00:38:966 (3,4,1) - since this short repeat slider makes the rhythm harder to play. It’d be better to simplify it like this image imo.
   
3. 00:51:249 - An unnecessary green line
4. 01:08:257 (1) - Adding a whistle to the head, a finish to the end should be more fitting.

1. 00:15:344 (1) - Add a whistle since the synthesizer (or the piano?) goes around here.
2. 00:54:320 (1) - It’d be nicer if you make difference with the previous clap at 00:54:084 (5) - by reducing the volume by 10% or so.
3. 01:09:911 (3) - Remove this drum clap. Only (2) should be enough.

1. 00:05:423 (4) - This slider will look neat if you make it curved like this. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1608685
   

   212,148,5423,2,0,P|168:176|132:228,1,101.250003862381

2. 00:21:958 (3,4) - This flow doesn’t look good. + It’s kinda hard to play because of that. It’d be better to make this pattern flowier and more friendly.
3. 00:24:793 (5,1) - I think you should let players move the cursor more by making the spacing larger since that way it’s more fun to play than the current idea.
4. 00:38:966 (1,2,3,4) - Inaudible objects. (Especially 00:39:438 (3,4) - .) Increase the volume like you did at 01:01:643 (5,6,7) - . I’d say (3,4) are unrankable because of that.
5. 00:39:911 (1) - This one is not unrankable, but I’d highly recommend increasing the volume to around 50%.
6. 00:44:635 (4,5) - The current rhythm kinda sounds strange since there is not any sounds such as the drum, the vocal, the guitar to follow with an object at 00:44:753 - . I’d rearrange 00:44:635 (4,5,6) - like this if I were you.
   
   + It will be more nicer if you make a jump with (7,1) since it can emphasize the stress at 00:46:053 - .
7. 00:48:415 (5,6) - This kinda sound strange as well for the same reason as above (no sound at 00:48:533 - ). Remove (1,2) and then make a 3/4 slider at 00:48:415 - instead.
   
8. 00:52:194 (2,1,2,3,4) - Inaudible objects. Increase the volume to at least 50% or so. + 00:53:139 (1) - remove a clap from this note, and add a normal-hit by changing the sampleset to Normal at 40% instead. It sounds like a default clap here doesn’t fit with the song to me.
9. 00:54:084 (5,6,7) - ^
10. 00:57:627 (3) - I’d move this note to upper rightward to make more comfortable to play if I were you. e.g. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1609016
12. 01:13:927 (1,1) - What did you make a stack here for? The current idea probably will give players an uncomfortable feeling. Therefore it’d be better to unstack like you did at 00:58:808 (1,2) - .

KSHR wrote:

[Insane]

1. 00:38:966 (1,2,3,4) - Inaudible objects. (Especially 00:39:438 (3,4) - .) Increase the volume like you did at 01:01:643 (5,6,7) - . I’d say (3,4) are unrankable because of that. I raised to 35 I wanted to keep that part calm and not loud

Take your time~

KSHR wrote:

1. 01:17:667 - You must snap kiai section to here 01:17:588 - in Easy and Normal diffs.
2. Please unify combo colors in all diffs. I recommend you to use byakugan's color because his color fits this video/song.
3. Don't forget to add "ending" to Tags. As you know this is ending song.
4. About Normal and Hard diffs, HP Drain rate +1. " Easy 2 -> Normal 4 -> Hard 6 -> Insane 7 " This spread is best for TV Size map :3 Please consider about it.

1. 00:04:005 - ,00:04:950 - ,00:06:840 - ,00:12:509 - add a whistle here ? It's better to use hitsounds with constant rhythm for beginners.
2. 00:16:289 (4) - In my opinion, you don't need to follow this sound 00:16:643 - for this difficulty. It's enough to follow the vocal by one slider. well, add a whistle to the tail of this slider. it would fit well with this vocal.
   
3. 00:38:021 (3) - I feel that these consecutive claps do not match here 00:38:021 (3,4) - . How about using a whistle to the tail of this slider instead a clap sound ?
4. 00:53:139 (3) - Design and flow suggestion : Consider using ctrl + j to this slider. It would be natural flow!
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 01:06:367 - ,01:07:312 - ,01:08:257 - finish sound pls! more exciting for #2 kiai time. then, How about increasing the volume gradually in this part? It is a minor adjustment to increase the tension leading into the chorus.
6. 01:01:643 - Same as above about consecutive claps.
7. 01:19:123 (2) - a bit nazi mod, Try to move this note left for flow. like this
   
   SPOILER

   
8. 01:19:596 - finish
9. 01:19:596 (3,4,1,2) - I prefer to make like the angle of slant like this :
   
   SPOILER

   
   SPOILER

   
   It's better than straight flow.
10. 01:23:848 - missing a clap
11. 01:24:320 (2) - Same as above about rhythm.

1. 00:06:367 - ,00:07:312 - ,00:15:816 - whistle.
2. 00:10:383 (2) - Please remove a finish since it follows nothing. A whistle sound fits this part.
3. 00:52:667 - clap
4. 00:58:572 (6) - I feel this note is unnecessary for this difficulty same as your next part 01:13:690 - . Consider removing it from here.
5. 01:06:367 (1,2,3) - a bit nazi mod, Please check these spacings.
6. 01:07:312 - ,01:08:257 - Same as Easy diff.
7. 01:19:596 (1) - add a finish instead of a whistle.
8. 01:23:848 - clap

1. Nothing~

1. 00:04:950 - ,00:05:423 - ,00:07:312 - whistle
2. 00:08:966 (3) - As you can see your next patterns 00:10:856 (1) - ,00:12:745 (1) - , you used x0.24 spacing same rhythm. So please use same spacing here.
3. 00:13:927 - add a whistle to follow the piano sound.
4. 00:24:556 (3) - clap
5. 00:25:265 - This green section is unnecessary.
6. 00:51:604 - ,00:51:958 - How about using a clap here ? I think it would fit the vocal.
7. 00:59:281 (4,5,6) - try to make the equal spacing of these notes consistent since the combo is still going. ~ x1.00
8. 01:03:533 (3,4,5) - ^ Again
9. 01:07:312 (4) - ,01:09:202 (4) - Same as Easy diff.
10. 01:12:509 (3) - please move to y:246 lol

alacat wrote:

hi
hello owo
[General]

1. About Normal and Hard diffs, HP Drain rate +1. " Easy 2 -> Normal 4 -> Hard 6 -> Insane 7 " This spread is best for TV Size map :3 Please consider about it.
   Byakugan said it would ruin the calm

[Easy]

1. 00:16:289 (4) - In my opinion, you don't need to follow this sound 00:16:643 - for this difficulty. It's enough to follow the vocal by one slider. well, add a whistle to the tail of this slider. it would fit well with this vocal. i wanted to follow this since its very prominent and stands out also it spices up the rhythm owo
   
2. 01:24:320 (2) - Same as above about rhythm.^

[Insane]

1. 01:12:509 (3) - please move to y:246 lol i put it somewhere else owol

That's all ~ Let me know whenever you're ready :3

1. You must to add "ending" to tags in Insane diff.

1. 00:53:139 (3,1) - If you changed this part, Please change it about distance by yourself too.

1. 01:17:667 - Why did not you change here ?