Hi~
[General]
onepiece314 <- Why is this in the tag?
This shouldn't matter but just saying.. Is this KIAI cut really needed? The beginning has very low volume, consider increasing. I can barely hear anything.
[Easy]
OD-1?
00:15:370 (3,4) - Try something like this? I think it flows better 00:39:464 (3) - it seems that you're following the drum here, but you already ignored 00:39:228 this, so why not just make it 1/1 slider?
00:47:496 (1,2) - Try blanket?
00:48:441 (2,3,4,5) - Try placing them differently maybe?I personally don't like straight line circles... 01:02:614 (1) - I think this flows much better 01:04:504 (3) - How about 1/1 slider here?
01:11:118 (2,5) - Flip them? I think it flows better 01:19:149 - add a circle here + clap? feels very empty.
01:25:173 (1) - replace claps with finish, but don't have anything in the reverse Sounds better to me
01:25:173 (1) - Shouldn't the spinner end here? 01:29:779
[Normal]
00:08:992 (6,1,2,3,4) - Too much emptiness here 00:09:937 (2,3) How about this pattern
00:14:897 (3,4,5,6,7) - I thought it was a bad flow, try this? 00:39:937 (1,2) - fill in? I think this part can be really fun if you follow drum beats! 00:57:890 (5) - Try giving it a little curve? 01:24:346 (5) - same as easy, I think finish sounds better to emphasize the end
01:25:173 (1) - same as easy
[249's Hard]
00:04:031 (2,3,4,5) - Try this placement? didn't look like a good flow. 00:21:039 (1,2,3,4,5) -People I usually don't see this pattern in a hard diff
00:29:543 (3,4) - I think this flows much better 00:37:102 (3) - ^ 00:39:464 (5,6,7,1) - I really think you should unstack 5 and the triple. It's a bit hard to play and read fornoob hard players
01:24:346 (4) - this should be 3/4 rhythm. How about this? Oh, also finish on the head, it sounds nice 01:25:173 (1) - How about end the spinner at the same time like the other diffs?
[Insane]
00:13:953 (2,3,4,5,1) - Very hard to read. make a jump on 00:14:897 (4,5)
00:17:142 (4) - Is this a mistake? Shouldn't this be 00:17:023 here?
00:28:126 (5) - stack on 00:29:307 (2)? I think it's more funbecause jump
00:55:055 (1) - considering the stream you have right before this, I think this should be more closer to 00:54:819 (7) 01:07:811 (4,6,7) - Try this? 01:07:811 (4) - this didn't look good, and I thought it should match the shape with this 01:07:338 (3) 01:12:535 (7,8,9) - this doesn't look like a good flow. How about this? 01:20:094 (2,3,4) - can you make the triple more better?
01:23:165 (4) - as i said it earlier, jump here please.
01:24:346 (4) - as other diffs.
Good song & map~
Hope my mod helped and good luck!
[General]
onepiece314 <- Why is this in the tag?
This shouldn't matter but just saying.. Is this KIAI cut really needed? The beginning has very low volume, consider increasing. I can barely hear anything.
[Easy]
OD-1?
00:15:370 (3,4) - Try something like this? I think it flows better 00:39:464 (3) - it seems that you're following the drum here, but you already ignored 00:39:228 this, so why not just make it 1/1 slider?
00:47:496 (1,2) - Try blanket?
00:48:441 (2,3,4,5) - Try placing them differently maybe?
01:11:118 (2,5) - Flip them? I think it flows better 01:19:149 - add a circle here + clap? feels very empty.
01:25:173 (1) - replace claps with finish, but don't have anything in the reverse Sounds better to me
01:25:173 (1) - Shouldn't the spinner end here? 01:29:779
[Normal]
00:08:992 (6,1,2,3,4) - Too much emptiness here 00:09:937 (2,3) How about this pattern
00:14:897 (3,4,5,6,7) - I thought it was a bad flow, try this? 00:39:937 (1,2) - fill in? I think this part can be really fun if you follow drum beats! 00:57:890 (5) - Try giving it a little curve? 01:24:346 (5) - same as easy, I think finish sounds better to emphasize the end
01:25:173 (1) - same as easy
[249's Hard]
00:04:031 (2,3,4,5) - Try this placement? didn't look like a good flow. 00:21:039 (1,2,3,4,5) -
00:29:543 (3,4) - I think this flows much better 00:37:102 (3) - ^ 00:39:464 (5,6,7,1) - I really think you should unstack 5 and the triple. It's a bit hard to play and read for
01:24:346 (4) - this should be 3/4 rhythm. How about this? Oh, also finish on the head, it sounds nice 01:25:173 (1) - How about end the spinner at the same time like the other diffs?
[Insane]
00:13:953 (2,3,4,5,1) - Very hard to read. make a jump on 00:14:897 (4,5)
00:17:142 (4) - Is this a mistake? Shouldn't this be 00:17:023 here?
00:28:126 (5) - stack on 00:29:307 (2)? I think it's more fun
00:55:055 (1) - considering the stream you have right before this, I think this should be more closer to 00:54:819 (7) 01:07:811 (4,6,7) - Try this? 01:07:811 (4) - this didn't look good, and I thought it should match the shape with this 01:07:338 (3) 01:12:535 (7,8,9) - this doesn't look like a good flow. How about this? 01:20:094 (2,3,4) - can you make the triple more better?
01:23:165 (4) - as i said it earlier, jump here please.
01:24:346 (4) - as other diffs.
Good song & map~
Hope my mod helped and good luck!