1. Easy (0.94 stars, 57 notes)
2. Hard (4.81 stars, 274 notes)
3. Insane (5 stars, 351 notes)
4. Normal (2.93 stars, 128 notes)
5. YtRaM's Expert (4.98 stars, 350 notes)

Teara wrote:

[Easy]

Not gonna nazi mod, but a lot of notes/sliders can be aligned here. to make it look nicer.

Also, this map can get a lot more notes on white ticks to make it more fun. The lack of notes and waiting ages to hit the next one kinda makes it boring. Just remember, the key to making easy is to keep it simple.

[Normal]

Not gonna nazi mod, but a few of notes/sliders can be better aligned here, to make it look nicer.

01:44:58 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - I didn't like these 1/3 beats, doesn't fit IMO

[Insane]

A little hit sound mod, feel free to use or not.

01:10:88 - Timing section, Sample Set = Soft.

01:11:05 (1,4,7) - Whistle
01:11:94 (8) - Finish
01:12:11 (1,4,7) - Whistle
01:13:00 (8) - Finish
01:13:17 (1,4,7) - Whistle
01:14:05 (8) - Finish
01:14:23 (1,9) - Whistle
01:15:11 (10) - Finish
01:15:29 (1,9) - Whistle
01:16:17 (10) - Finish
01:16:35 (1,9) - Whistle
01:17:23 (10) - Finish
01:17:41 (1,9) - Whistle
01:18:29 (10) - Finish
01:18:47 (1,9) - Whistle
01:19:52 (13) - Finish

~

01:44:58 (1,7,13,19) - Whistle
01:47:41 (25) - Replace clap with finish?

Overall, Nice beatmap.

Have a star.

blissfulyoshi wrote:

Easy:

SPOILER

The jumps make this difficulty too hard for an easy. Ex: 00:20:23 (1) and 00:24:47 (4) -

Normal mod:
00:07:17 (2) - distance snap this (I would just move 1 until 2 is distance snapped) done
01:35:41 (3) - stack this on the black 6 (I advise moving the entire gray combo to keep the beats aligned) done

Combo mod:
00:12:82 (1) - remove new combo for consistencydone
00:18:47 (5,1) - remove 1's new combo and add a new combo to 5 (swap new combo done
00:20:23 (1) - remove new combo done
00:31:17 (4) - new combodone

Timing section mod:
00:39:98 - what is this timing section for? fixed
01:20:57 - when applying a timing section that changes the hitsound volume or type of hitsound, place it a quarter note before the note instead because if you press the note early, your hitsound type and volume will be that of the previous section not the section on top of the note. fixed.
01:31:86 - since you probably want kiai to start at this location but want to avoid the problem in the previous post, add a timing section a quarter note before this timing section that is exactly the same as this one but without the kiai. done

Normal:

SPOILER

I advise you use bezier sliders (options -> slider curve type) to make sliders such as 01:27:29 (3) look nicer done

Normal mod:
01:44:58 (1) - this combo does not fit the music very well i like it though i like the triplet feel

Combo mod:
00:23:94 (5) - new combo for consistency
01:28:52 (4) - new combo

Timing section mod:
00:39:98 - remove this timing section because it does not serve a purpose
lower the hitsound volume in the last timing section

Insane:

SPOILER

I advise you turn down the hp drain a tick

normal mod:
00:37:17 (3) - stack under the black 1

combo mod:
01:39:64 (1) - remove new combo

timing section mod:
move the timing sections on notes a quarter note backward as I advised on easy
00:39:98, 01:20:57 - remove these timing sections since they don't serve a purpose

done.
Nice map. Star.

RemmyX25 wrote:

Timing Request:
BPM: 170 (although i wouldnt mind halfing that)
Offset: 485

Best of luck!

Mystearica wrote:

^ excuse me sir but wtf r u doin'? ouch

Now that's out of the way, map itself.

[Easy]

Spacing is too large and your hitsounds could use some work, I'll explain this more in Insane. Reduce your spacing, it's too harsh for an easy. changed to 0.5 spacing

[Normal]

Probably the best map in this set, rhythm was more stable. Still could use some work. yay

[Insane]

Alright, this difficulty has some serious issues. Your hitsounds are very random and the rhythm is highly erratic, and your overall difficulty is set to very high. This makes your map VERY hard to play. You should create stable hitsound/notes patterns and try to follow through the map in that way. You've got random stacks and streams everywhere and they often just make no sense at all. You should consider remaking this difficulty. I'm very sorry to say this but this is really difficult to play and you need to rework this a lot. lowered overall difficulty. removed streams except for the piano parts. made stacks less random. I knew there was some work to do, but i didn't realized it was that bad.

I'll give you my star as an encouragement to a new mapper. Don't be discouraged, play more maps and look at some sample maps to get some ideas on how to make your map great. This song is one of my favorites so I hope you will be able to make a great beatmap set. All the best!i will. =)

P.S. If you want to talk about specifics, just hit me up in IRC.

Mafiamaster wrote:

Insane~
00:09:70 - There's a slight delay before the break starts. Redo it.
I had no other problems with this map.

Good job!
Me likey Insane :3

ignorethis wrote:

Offset is a bit early. +20~+40 plz.

<Normal>
01:36:61 (5) - Whistle
01:49:31 (1,2,3) - Soft

<Insane>
00:38:73 (1,2,3) - Unnecessary jump
01:31:14 (1,2,3,4,5) - Make the volume gradually get louder

Star'd

• - Add tags and source

• - The hit sounds are too loud and override the vocals just a little in the beginning. Turn it down a notch.
  
  - Some of your timing sections aren't snapped to the ticks.
  
  - 00:31:49 (x) - Maybe add some beats here?
  - 00:45:61 (1) - Nazi align with (4)
  - 01:02:81 (break) - Delete and re-insert

• - Add a lead in time.
  - Some of your timing sections aren't snapped to the ticks.
  
  - The hit sounds are too loud and override the vocals just a little in the beginning. Turn it down a notch.
  
  -01:14:46 (break) - Delete and re-insert

• - Some of your timing sections aren't snapped to the ticks.
  
  - 00:33:08 (1,2) - Too close
  
  Great work

• - Too noisy turn it down
  - Too many claps kill them
  - Some of your timing sections aren't snapped to the ticks.
  - Looks a little too hard... I don't have a mouse so I dunno. >< Sliders look hidden to me. o_0
  
  - 00:00:96 (1,2,3,4,5) - These should be consistent with 00:02:37 (1,2,3,4,5) or vice-versa.
  - 01:20:55 (1) - The soft ticks don't sound great here.

WyndII wrote:

Hiiii! =3
Mod:
Insane
I suggest putting claps in Kiai part, it makes ur map and song powahfuh~
and the claps (dont like the claps in first chorus D:) should be like this if you're going to apply that o.o^
:Try this : 01:32:20 (3,7,13,2,9) oh and 01:37:14 (10) - clap , 01:33:612 , 01:36:435 , 01:38:553 - add note w/ clap
00:09:700 - remove bureku? (break)lol
01:19:49 (13) - new combo?
01:20:553 - this section doesnt have a single hitsound
01:41:90 (1) - this sound a bit late =/ maybe reduce 1/4 or 1/2?
01:45:25 (7) - combo limit is 15 new combo
01:45:96 (7) - ^
01:46:67 (7) - ^
01:47:37 (7) - ^

Normal
01:03:060 - section doesnt have hitsound D=
:Try putting whistle in the end of every slider?

Ok, im blind now =S
xD
Good job on Insane!!

Senbon wrote:

[Overall]

• - Add tags and source

[Easy]

• - The hit sounds are too loud and override the vocals just a little in the beginning. Turn it down a notch.
  
  - Some of your timing sections aren't snapped to the ticks.
  
  - 00:31:49 (x) - Maybe add some beats here?
  - 00:45:61 (1) - Nazi align with (4)
  - 01:02:81 (break) - Delete and re-insert

[Normal]

• - Add a lead in time.
  - Some of your timing sections aren't snapped to the ticks.
  
  - The hit sounds are too loud and override the vocals just a little in the beginning. Turn it down a notch.
  
  -01:14:46 (break) - Delete and re-insert

[Insane]

• - Some of your timing sections aren't snapped to the ticks.
  
  - 00:33:08 (1,2) - Too close
  
  Great work

[ytRaM's Expert]

• - Too noisy turn it down
  - Too many claps kill them
  - Some of your timing sections aren't snapped to the ticks.
  - Looks a little too hard... I don't have a mouse so I dunno. >< Sliders look hidden to me. o_0 same here
  
  - 00:00:96 (1,2,3,4,5) - These should be consistent with 00:02:37 (1,2,3,4,5) or vice-versa.
  - 01:20:55 (1) - The soft ticks don't sound great here.

Cheery wrote:

SPOILER

[Easy]
00:09:26 (5) - repeat to 00:10:318 ?

[Normal]
00:35:73 (3) - clap to match the one before
00:54:08 (1,3,5) - whistles
01:49:31 (1,2,3) - hard for normal :<

[Insane]
00:45:61 (1) - down a tick


[YtRaM's Expert]
~

starstarstar

WyndII wrote:

Hiiii! =3
Mod:
Insane
I suggest putting claps in Kiai part, it makes ur map and song powahfuh~
and the claps (dont like the claps in first chorus D:) should be like this if you're going to apply that o.o^
:Try this : 01:32:20 (3,7,13,2,9) oh and 01:37:14 (10) - clap , 01:33:612 , 01:36:435 , 01:38:553 - add note w/ clap
00:09:700 - remove bureku? (break)lol
01:19:49 (13) - new combo?
01:20:553 - this section doesnt have a single hitsound
01:41:90 (1) - this sound a bit late =/ maybe reduce 1/4 or 1/2?
01:45:25 (7) - combo limit is 15 new combo
01:45:96 (7) - ^
01:46:67 (7) - ^
01:47:37 (7) - ^

Normal
01:03:060 - section doesnt have hitsound D=
:Try putting whistle in the end of every slider?

Ok, im blind now =S
xD
Good job on Insane!!

Derekku Chan wrote:

[Easy]
Fine.

[Normal]
00:39:96 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 1/2 streams like this one are too hard for Normal IMO :/

[YtRaM's Expert]
Tickrate is kinda high imo
00:29:55 (3,4) - Unrankable (can't tell which is the circle and which is the slider)
00:46:67 (3,4) - Unrankable (can't tell where each one ends)
Making new combos for the above two would work better so you can see what is what.

[Insane]
00:33:26 (2) - (nazi) Can you move this down a grid? It looked ugly overlapping (1).
00:48:43 (4) - ^
I was going to suggest some jumps or something, but then I saw the deathstream

Senbon wrote:

[Overall]

• - Add tags and source

[Easy]

• - The hit sounds are too loud and override the vocals just a little in the beginning. Turn it down a notch.
  
  - Some of your timing sections aren't snapped to the ticks.
  
  - 00:31:49 (x) - Maybe add some beats here?
  - 00:45:61 (1) - Nazi align with (4)
  - 01:02:81 (break) - Delete and re-insert

[Normal]

• - Add a lead in time.
  - Some of your timing sections aren't snapped to the ticks.
  
  - The hit sounds are too loud and override the vocals just a little in the beginning. Turn it down a notch.
  
  -01:14:46 (break) - Delete and re-insert

[Insane]

• - Some of your timing sections aren't snapped to the ticks.
  
  - 00:33:08 (1,2) - Too close
  
  Great work

[ytRaM's Expert]

• - Too noisy turn it down
  - Too many claps kill them
  - Some of your timing sections aren't snapped to the ticks.
  - Looks a little too hard... I don't have a mouse so I dunno. >< Sliders look hidden to me. o_0
  
  - 00:00:96 (1,2,3,4,5) - These should be consistent with 00:02:37 (1,2,3,4,5) or vice-versa.
  - 01:20:55 (1) - The soft ticks don't sound great here.

NachoPiggy wrote:

Well really awesome map set, really fun and intense.

These are pretty much suggestions so it's not really required you change them.

[Easy]

Fine

[Normal]
01:49:49 (2) - Add Finishnah, i put whistle

[YtRaM's Expert]
00:37:67 (5) - 1/2 backadded a note before it
01:49:49 (3) - Add Finish

[Insane]
01:04:49 (3) - One grid upmade all of them in line with each other in this section
01:49:49 (3) - Add Finish nah

Star'd.

Azure_Kyte wrote:

Here's my mod

Blue = Suggestion Red = Check this

[Easy]
No problems found, however that is the hardest looking easy I've seen in a while....

[Normal]
00:11:73 (3) - really nitpicky; can you turn off grid snap in order to align this direcly between (1) and (2)?
01:20:55 (1) - This section here could be hitsounded instead of left with just the standard hit noise; I realise you're going for the quiet effect but if you hitsound it well it would really complement this section.

No major problems found

[YtRaM's Expert]
A slider tick rate of 4 really does not make this map sound very good. Can it be changed to 2?
No other problems found

[Insane]
00:43:84 (4) - Can this be moved from under the slider? Partially hiding notes under sliders doesn't look very neat.
01:11:02 (1) - WATCH ME FAIL!!!

...Epic stream on [Insane], I wonder how long it'll take to fill up the top 40... Starred